Comments received on poems by anabasova
July
L. B. Mek said:
there is promise in our disquiet
allows us to ponder, chaos\' whisper
and there is, chance
in our dispirited, frame of mind
for in lethargy\'s stillness
we may be granted, some awareness
we need only, separate
our two burdens, keep one
to grow stronger beneath
and allow ourselves to heal from the other
as soon, as we can:
\'The blood of my pain on your hands
The weight of my fate on my back\'..
(forgive me
I couldn\'t help but try and poetically
respond, to your somewhat abstract
yet, immeasurably relatable poem..
what a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
April 22nd, 2022 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
there is promise in our disquiet
allows us to ponder, chaos\' whisper
and there is, chance
in our dispirited, frame of mind
for in lethargy\'s stillness
we may be granted, some awareness
we need only, separate
our two burdens, keep one
to grow stronger beneath
and allow ourselves to heal from the other
as soon, as we can:
\'The blood of my pain on your hands
The weight of my fate on my back\'..
(forgive me
I couldn\'t help but try and poetically
respond, to your somewhat abstract
yet, immeasurably relatable poem..
what a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
April 22nd, 2022 03:53
Different ways of heart beating
Dahlia said:
Very nice piece love the message 👍
April 11th, 2022 18:10
Dahlia said:
Very nice piece love the message 👍
April 11th, 2022 18:10
Hypocrite
L. B. Mek said:
I too, wish
people, came with warning labels...
(a relatable read, thanks for sharing)
stay strong! and know
you don\'t have to traverse
these choppy waters, alone
March 22nd, 2022 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
I too, wish
people, came with warning labels...
(a relatable read, thanks for sharing)
stay strong! and know
you don\'t have to traverse
these choppy waters, alone
March 22nd, 2022 04:27
Where did the good go?
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow a very pertinent message dear poet! \"It\'s really hard to explain how I feel\" is so relatable. This reminds me of a Lorde song called Mood Ring in which she pokes fun and satirizes the whole idea of us being unable to detect our emotions and finding hope in all the trendy things like astrology and yoga so on and on. I\'ll leave a little excerpt: \"Ladies, begin your sun salutations. Transcendental in your meditations (love and light) You can burn sage, and I\'ll cleanse the crystals We can get high, but only if the wind blows (blows just right) I can\'t feel a thing I keep looking at my mood ring … Tell me how I\'m feeling (floating away, floating away)\" Anyways, great poem! 💖
March 7th, 2022 14:16
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow a very pertinent message dear poet! \"It\'s really hard to explain how I feel\" is so relatable. This reminds me of a Lorde song called Mood Ring in which she pokes fun and satirizes the whole idea of us being unable to detect our emotions and finding hope in all the trendy things like astrology and yoga so on and on. I\'ll leave a little excerpt: \"Ladies, begin your sun salutations. Transcendental in your meditations (love and light) You can burn sage, and I\'ll cleanse the crystals We can get high, but only if the wind blows (blows just right) I can\'t feel a thing I keep looking at my mood ring … Tell me how I\'m feeling (floating away, floating away)\" Anyways, great poem! 💖
March 7th, 2022 14:16
Where did the good go?
anabasova said:
That\'s beautiful.
I am grateful that you see it as relatable, it\'s always my aim.
March 7th, 2022 09:43
anabasova said:
That\'s beautiful.
I am grateful that you see it as relatable, it\'s always my aim.
March 7th, 2022 09:43
Where did the good go?
L. B. Mek said:
change can arrive, far too sudden
at times
while we\'re recovering
from whiplash of one unexpected development
another one, lines itself up and takes aim...
still, that\'s what our anchors in life
are for
for when we need to reach-out
and hold on
to something, anything
that can helps us, withstand
those hurricanes of change, in life..
(a good write, and relatable to most I feel
thanks for sharing)
March 7th, 2022 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
change can arrive, far too sudden
at times
while we\'re recovering
from whiplash of one unexpected development
another one, lines itself up and takes aim...
still, that\'s what our anchors in life
are for
for when we need to reach-out
and hold on
to something, anything
that can helps us, withstand
those hurricanes of change, in life..
(a good write, and relatable to most I feel
thanks for sharing)
March 7th, 2022 05:15
Love me to get
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay say it! I love the snazziness of this poem. Good job!
February 14th, 2022 14:19
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay say it! I love the snazziness of this poem. Good job!
February 14th, 2022 14:19
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