Comments received on poems by Florin Dragoș Minculescu
Sun bird
Florin Dragoș Minculescu said:
These days only God wants to be Man, Adam (with a sense of humanity) proudly wants to be God and is disgusted by his vulnerability. The solution to rising above the present condition is humility and without accepting shame one cannot be humble.
This being the mystery hidden in shame - accepting the vulnerability of the human condition and transcending (the term means coming out of and above ) it.
August 19th, 2023 01:27
Florin Dragoș Minculescu said:
These days only God wants to be Man, Adam (with a sense of humanity) proudly wants to be God and is disgusted by his vulnerability. The solution to rising above the present condition is humility and without accepting shame one cannot be humble.
This being the mystery hidden in shame - accepting the vulnerability of the human condition and transcending (the term means coming out of and above ) it.
August 19th, 2023 01:27
Sun bird
Bobby O said:
May whisper love. I like this viewpoint and this icon stands w angular strength and who else could break the clouds. I’m still pondering the request to refill et shame but I’m entertaining and verbose when confused.
August 19th, 2023 01:22
Bobby O said:
May whisper love. I like this viewpoint and this icon stands w angular strength and who else could break the clouds. I’m still pondering the request to refill et shame but I’m entertaining and verbose when confused.
August 19th, 2023 01:22
Sea of children
jarcher54 said:
Refugee children are the crime of humanity... thanks for sharing your thoughts and well-tempered verse from Romania... this site needed your insight!
August 19th, 2023 01:05
jarcher54 said:
Refugee children are the crime of humanity... thanks for sharing your thoughts and well-tempered verse from Romania... this site needed your insight!
August 19th, 2023 01:05
Time travel
jarcher54 said:
My time travel is pretty mundane... I go from morn to night...but truly I time travel every day in a more transcendent way, reading Homer, Cervantes, Chaucer, and Kafka. There I am before the gates of Troy, in a Spanish barn, or bouncing on my donkey on my pilgrimage.
Thanks for the little ponder!
August 19th, 2023 00:59
jarcher54 said:
My time travel is pretty mundane... I go from morn to night...but truly I time travel every day in a more transcendent way, reading Homer, Cervantes, Chaucer, and Kafka. There I am before the gates of Troy, in a Spanish barn, or bouncing on my donkey on my pilgrimage.
Thanks for the little ponder!
August 19th, 2023 00:59
The Child and Wonder
Bobby O said:
I really tried. It piqued my interest initially and about halfway through I started to feel it should have ended by now so I scrolled down to see when I saw the great distance of phrase left I just quit reading To each his own but this offer has forbidding length and maybe I’m wrong but my comment is who the fuck would read this ?
August 19th, 2023 00:19
Bobby O said:
I really tried. It piqued my interest initially and about halfway through I started to feel it should have ended by now so I scrolled down to see when I saw the great distance of phrase left I just quit reading To each his own but this offer has forbidding length and maybe I’m wrong but my comment is who the fuck would read this ?
August 19th, 2023 00:19
Phoenix\'s coma
L. B. Mek said:
what a profound write, dear Poet
and I humbly thank you
for inspiring these words as reply, below:
(rear-view mirror, warped imagery
regret, greying out
our mementos of life\'s, once cherished moments;
instead, we seek shelter
in the shadows of our muddy thought\'s
all-grim, as our appeal
for without hope, we stay immune
to disappointment
and Time\'s, thieving plague
so labouring, to keep its all decayed and grey
in our past
we wage a path forward, one
shaky step
at a time
allowing no merit to Spring\'s horizons, of life
we tape our visions, so only Autumn and Winter
appear as tangible, future\'s..
then we lament, this nihilistic surrender
of placebo: living!)
February 8th, 2022 07:09
L. B. Mek said:
what a profound write, dear Poet
and I humbly thank you
for inspiring these words as reply, below:
(rear-view mirror, warped imagery
regret, greying out
our mementos of life\'s, once cherished moments;
instead, we seek shelter
in the shadows of our muddy thought\'s
all-grim, as our appeal
for without hope, we stay immune
to disappointment
and Time\'s, thieving plague
so labouring, to keep its all decayed and grey
in our past
we wage a path forward, one
shaky step
at a time
allowing no merit to Spring\'s horizons, of life
we tape our visions, so only Autumn and Winter
appear as tangible, future\'s..
then we lament, this nihilistic surrender
of placebo: living!)
February 8th, 2022 07:09
Can\'t imagine you
Solar Impulse_1912 said:
Dear Florin
That poem is very beautiful. A love letter beyond kitsch. And a beautiful gift to receive. How often do we meet someone who is not fazed by all that facade and wants to get to know the human behind it all?
Keep writing...
Solar Impulse
February 6th, 2022 05:17
Solar Impulse_1912 said:
Dear Florin
That poem is very beautiful. A love letter beyond kitsch. And a beautiful gift to receive. How often do we meet someone who is not fazed by all that facade and wants to get to know the human behind it all?
Keep writing...
Solar Impulse
February 6th, 2022 05:17
Gardens of lead
Rocky Lagou said:
Nicely put. A lot of people really are just \"watchers.\" Also \"scrutinizing meanings of meanings\" was a clever line. Props to you!
February 4th, 2022 13:32
Rocky Lagou said:
Nicely put. A lot of people really are just \"watchers.\" Also \"scrutinizing meanings of meanings\" was a clever line. Props to you!
February 4th, 2022 13:32
Thoughts temple
dusk arising said:
There you go, we are all spiritual beings and have a god within us. Your piece reads as if you have now discovered this - your higher self. I hope so.
I really like the way your piece is composed and leads us to its conclusion. Nice one.
February 3rd, 2022 08:21
dusk arising said:
There you go, we are all spiritual beings and have a god within us. Your piece reads as if you have now discovered this - your higher self. I hope so.
I really like the way your piece is composed and leads us to its conclusion. Nice one.
February 3rd, 2022 08:21
Thoughts temple
dusk arising said:
There you go, we are all spiritual beings and have a god within us. Your piece reads as if you have now discovered this - your higher self. I hope so.
I really like the way your piece is composed and leads us to its conclusion. Nice one.
February 3rd, 2022 08:20
dusk arising said:
There you go, we are all spiritual beings and have a god within us. Your piece reads as if you have now discovered this - your higher self. I hope so.
I really like the way your piece is composed and leads us to its conclusion. Nice one.
February 3rd, 2022 08:20
Metanoia
L. B. Mek said:
depends what pages of archaic myth, you read
some pages, speak
of Prometheus Bound
and his Fire of emancipation...
that cured us
from having to endure life, with that mind warping
\'Job\' caricature idealism, mentality
of acceptance to the endless strife of life...
so aren\'t we blessed
so many millions, shed blood
so we can continue to ignore
our capacity, to think freely
devoid of any
finger\'s, manipulating our very opportunity: for thought...
(a challenging, and thought provoking write,
thanks for sharing!)
January 25th, 2022 07:01
L. B. Mek said:
depends what pages of archaic myth, you read
some pages, speak
of Prometheus Bound
and his Fire of emancipation...
that cured us
from having to endure life, with that mind warping
\'Job\' caricature idealism, mentality
of acceptance to the endless strife of life...
so aren\'t we blessed
so many millions, shed blood
so we can continue to ignore
our capacity, to think freely
devoid of any
finger\'s, manipulating our very opportunity: for thought...
(a challenging, and thought provoking write,
thanks for sharing!)
January 25th, 2022 07:01
Ezer kenegdo
L. B. Mek said:
damn wish I had the time to unpack this poetic worded tapestry, portrait
of all-things theorised: sans
referencing everything
from Logos, to Nothingness
with Philosophical
Atom\'s, tango Dancing
on the whims, of guessing mind\'s
and there electric fields
of yearning, vehemence
to unfurl life\'s metaphysic, meaning
in but a blink, of a life
where some 3000 years
of greater mind\'s, of laboured
defragmentation
of toiled-over wisdom
has yet to even amount
to us finding, the right
Questions!
(simply Brilliant!)
humbly, I read and learn
dear, thinker Supreme
January 24th, 2022 08:45
L. B. Mek said:
damn wish I had the time to unpack this poetic worded tapestry, portrait
of all-things theorised: sans
referencing everything
from Logos, to Nothingness
with Philosophical
Atom\'s, tango Dancing
on the whims, of guessing mind\'s
and there electric fields
of yearning, vehemence
to unfurl life\'s metaphysic, meaning
in but a blink, of a life
where some 3000 years
of greater mind\'s, of laboured
defragmentation
of toiled-over wisdom
has yet to even amount
to us finding, the right
Questions!
(simply Brilliant!)
humbly, I read and learn
dear, thinker Supreme
January 24th, 2022 08:45
Hi
L. B. Mek said:
Hi
sorry to disappoint,
I\'m still trying to perfect the art
of spreading me butter on toast
while the bread, is still
warm enough, and all that melted goodness can be soaked-up..
later
I plan to challenge myself
a little more, like musing
on those subconscious choices I make in life
maybe, I\'ll read of Jung\'s shadow a little
dream, whilst hoping my nightmares don\'t invade
for a while..
(lol
thank you, for sharing
a fun read and creative exercise to join in;
might be nice to try and share this with our MPS community, as a poem
you invite others to add a stanza to)
January 21st, 2022 07:12
L. B. Mek said:
Hi
sorry to disappoint,
I\'m still trying to perfect the art
of spreading me butter on toast
while the bread, is still
warm enough, and all that melted goodness can be soaked-up..
later
I plan to challenge myself
a little more, like musing
on those subconscious choices I make in life
maybe, I\'ll read of Jung\'s shadow a little
dream, whilst hoping my nightmares don\'t invade
for a while..
(lol
thank you, for sharing
a fun read and creative exercise to join in;
might be nice to try and share this with our MPS community, as a poem
you invite others to add a stanza to)
January 21st, 2022 07:12
Elon\'s Ark
L. B. Mek said:
deep, no cheap read here
gotta unpack and consider
dense layers
before
we even get: to your poetic voice
and all achieved, in such a succinct write..
(personally
you had me invested with that first line)
thanks for sharing
January 20th, 2022 07:30
L. B. Mek said:
deep, no cheap read here
gotta unpack and consider
dense layers
before
we even get: to your poetic voice
and all achieved, in such a succinct write..
(personally
you had me invested with that first line)
thanks for sharing
January 20th, 2022 07:30
Elon\'s Ark
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve got this image of you heading for the hills, followed by millions of others.
January 20th, 2022 06:44
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve got this image of you heading for the hills, followed by millions of others.
January 20th, 2022 06:44
