Comments received on poems by zhangyuyouyu
Wild Jungle
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery, a lovely Poem
thanks for sharing
March 24th, 2022 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery, a lovely Poem
thanks for sharing
March 24th, 2022 06:08
Finding Purpose
Paul Bell said:
I suppose a sarcastic god may tell you your purpose in life was actually life itself. It\'s a question we\'ll never know, but still free to search for.
March 3rd, 2022 09:20
Paul Bell said:
I suppose a sarcastic god may tell you your purpose in life was actually life itself. It\'s a question we\'ll never know, but still free to search for.
March 3rd, 2022 09:20
Finding Purpose
L. B. Mek said:
so empowering
I wish you the very best!
thanks for sharing
March 3rd, 2022 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
so empowering
I wish you the very best!
thanks for sharing
March 3rd, 2022 05:22
Wine
Doggerel Dave said:
Your profile states you are 16..... I was much older when I made that discovery.....
March 2nd, 2022 18:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Your profile states you are 16..... I was much older when I made that discovery.....
March 2nd, 2022 18:22
When Can We Have Peace?
Doggerel Dave said:
I will post today a sliver of an answer to that question.
You look like you are staying here for a while - that\'s great.
March 2nd, 2022 18:18
Doggerel Dave said:
I will post today a sliver of an answer to that question.
You look like you are staying here for a while - that\'s great.
March 2nd, 2022 18:18
The Great War
dusk arising said:
That first verse made me go ouch! The largest conflict we know of World War 2 was not all hearts full of greed or ambition. One nation guilty of those traits recruited two other nations of similar ambition but the rest of the world stood firm where they could to resist the onslaught. Since then the \'west\' has not been to war for greed or ambition but rather to defend or pacify.... though with questionable outcomes i\'ll grant you LOL.
March 2nd, 2022 02:40
dusk arising said:
That first verse made me go ouch! The largest conflict we know of World War 2 was not all hearts full of greed or ambition. One nation guilty of those traits recruited two other nations of similar ambition but the rest of the world stood firm where they could to resist the onslaught. Since then the \'west\' has not been to war for greed or ambition but rather to defend or pacify.... though with questionable outcomes i\'ll grant you LOL.
March 2nd, 2022 02:40
Not Love
Cedrick said:
Its painful to see someone you loved leaving you. I love the way you expressed the emotions of a broken heart. lovely poem
March 2nd, 2022 01:45
Cedrick said:
Its painful to see someone you loved leaving you. I love the way you expressed the emotions of a broken heart. lovely poem
March 2nd, 2022 01:45
Heal
L. B. Mek said:
empowering! love the gentleness
in your wording, thanks for sharing
March 1st, 2022 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
empowering! love the gentleness
in your wording, thanks for sharing
March 1st, 2022 05:51
The World After I Die
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
I believe death to be sleeping, whether it scares you in life it\'s peaceful in death. And what the world doesn\'t do you have to, if you wished to be mourned be someone worth mourning about. Memory is all people will have with you after passing so make them good ones.
February 25th, 2022 12:27
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
I believe death to be sleeping, whether it scares you in life it\'s peaceful in death. And what the world doesn\'t do you have to, if you wished to be mourned be someone worth mourning about. Memory is all people will have with you after passing so make them good ones.
February 25th, 2022 12:27
Deja Vu
Nia Nour said:
Very beautiful and I like expression of feelings - collide and intertwine deeply like before\"
February 24th, 2022 09:09
Nia Nour said:
Very beautiful and I like expression of feelings - collide and intertwine deeply like before\"
February 24th, 2022 09:09
Deja Vu
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
We will meet many of these people, odd how similar some may be.
February 24th, 2022 05:59
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
We will meet many of these people, odd how similar some may be.
February 24th, 2022 05:59
Trapped
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted dear poet
That feel got a voice
And a beautiful poetry got penned
February 22nd, 2022 12:37
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted dear poet
That feel got a voice
And a beautiful poetry got penned
February 22nd, 2022 12:37
Trapped
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what a spectacle of imagery and emotions. I totally get this one. Also the last stanza was worded so freaking well, I mean hats off to you! 💖✨
February 22nd, 2022 11:22
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what a spectacle of imagery and emotions. I totally get this one. Also the last stanza was worded so freaking well, I mean hats off to you! 💖✨
February 22nd, 2022 11:22
Trapped
L. B. Mek said:
good timing, restrictions are being loosened
well, until
they reverse their narrative again in a few months...
a relatable write, thanks for sharing
February 22nd, 2022 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
good timing, restrictions are being loosened
well, until
they reverse their narrative again in a few months...
a relatable write, thanks for sharing
February 22nd, 2022 05:40
War
rrodriguez said:
War is Ugly. Your poem is intriguing. It depicts the battle of the mind. I enjoyed reading it and thinking about the message it has for all of us. I invite you to read my poem, Ugly War!
February 21st, 2022 12:19
rrodriguez said:
War is Ugly. Your poem is intriguing. It depicts the battle of the mind. I enjoyed reading it and thinking about the message it has for all of us. I invite you to read my poem, Ugly War!
February 21st, 2022 12:19
Wine
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, indeed! Alcohol is a vicious habit to break! But please drop the bottle when it gets out of hand! I need more of your poetry! 😭😉
February 18th, 2022 13:18
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, indeed! Alcohol is a vicious habit to break! But please drop the bottle when it gets out of hand! I need more of your poetry! 😭😉
February 18th, 2022 13:18
Run
Rocky Lagou said:
Love the analogy, life is like a marathon. It\'s one great sprint that we have to push through. Great poem! 👍
February 9th, 2022 13:09
Rocky Lagou said:
Love the analogy, life is like a marathon. It\'s one great sprint that we have to push through. Great poem! 👍
February 9th, 2022 13:09
Help
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, what a desperate piece. This encompassed what it means to be hopeless so well. Good job! 👍
February 8th, 2022 09:12
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, what a desperate piece. This encompassed what it means to be hopeless so well. Good job! 👍
February 8th, 2022 09:12
War
Rocky Lagou said:
Nice work! War is a destructive force and the last line ties the whole message up. 👏👍
February 4th, 2022 10:59
Rocky Lagou said:
Nice work! War is a destructive force and the last line ties the whole message up. 👏👍
February 4th, 2022 10:59
Wistful Thinking
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
You say you\'re new to poetry,but this is so well written,..I have my suspicions😀 A poet/poetess writes from the heart,..always from the heart,and I can easily feel this came from your heart. A great poet once said, \"Pen all,And never fear your audience,...I learned that from a beautiful poetess we have here at MPS,..it\'s a great piece of advice I like to pass on to others🌞 Thanks for sharing🌹😀✌️🕊
January 27th, 2022 14:02
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
You say you\'re new to poetry,but this is so well written,..I have my suspicions😀 A poet/poetess writes from the heart,..always from the heart,and I can easily feel this came from your heart. A great poet once said, \"Pen all,And never fear your audience,...I learned that from a beautiful poetess we have here at MPS,..it\'s a great piece of advice I like to pass on to others🌞 Thanks for sharing🌹😀✌️🕊
January 27th, 2022 14:02
Darkness
rrodriguez said:
If you find yourself in this state, she\'s not going to free you. You must free yourself. Your writing reflects your state of mind. You\'re young enjoy your youth. Write more and more and enjoy the moment.
January 22nd, 2022 16:16
rrodriguez said:
If you find yourself in this state, she\'s not going to free you. You must free yourself. Your writing reflects your state of mind. You\'re young enjoy your youth. Write more and more and enjoy the moment.
January 22nd, 2022 16:16
A Fateful Accident
jarcher54 said:
It sounds to me as if you are making the best of the situation. By sharing it with us, you are fearless and not hiding your sense of vulnerability. I think you are becoming more independent, more resilient, and more wise as a result. If it keeps nagging at you, talk to a trusted adult outside of your family or friends. They can give you some perspective. In the meantime, believe me, you seem pretty fierce and unique!
January 22nd, 2022 01:04
jarcher54 said:
It sounds to me as if you are making the best of the situation. By sharing it with us, you are fearless and not hiding your sense of vulnerability. I think you are becoming more independent, more resilient, and more wise as a result. If it keeps nagging at you, talk to a trusted adult outside of your family or friends. They can give you some perspective. In the meantime, believe me, you seem pretty fierce and unique!
January 22nd, 2022 01:04
A Fateful Accident
sophin said:
i am sorry to here you\'ve gone through this, dear poet. all i can say that it is not the place of others to judge who you are; it is okay to break down. please do not feel burdened by the reactions of others. i wish you the best.
January 21st, 2022 14:56
sophin said:
i am sorry to here you\'ve gone through this, dear poet. all i can say that it is not the place of others to judge who you are; it is okay to break down. please do not feel burdened by the reactions of others. i wish you the best.
January 21st, 2022 14:56
Bleeding Love
Paul Bell said:
In a way, this is two poems, two messages, which is pretty hard to do in a short poem. Kudos to you.
January 19th, 2022 15:35
Paul Bell said:
In a way, this is two poems, two messages, which is pretty hard to do in a short poem. Kudos to you.
January 19th, 2022 15:35
Bleeding Love
Fae said:
this is most definitely a poem. it brings out your thoughts in the moment and that\'s the best kind of poetry
January 19th, 2022 13:58
Fae said:
this is most definitely a poem. it brings out your thoughts in the moment and that\'s the best kind of poetry
January 19th, 2022 13:58
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