Comments received on poems by zhangyuyouyu
Ain\'t It A Funhouse!
Fränz Müller said:
We can either let society’s ropes bind us or use them to climb down and escape from their expectations. Great poem!
September 30th, 2026 07:49
Fränz Müller said:
We can either let society’s ropes bind us or use them to climb down and escape from their expectations. Great poem!
September 30th, 2026 07:49
Ain\'t It A Funhouse!
sorenbarrett said:
Judgement whether by others or self is rather severe and with glasses to distort it further things look rather dire. Well written.
September 30th, 2026 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Judgement whether by others or self is rather severe and with glasses to distort it further things look rather dire. Well written.
September 30th, 2026 05:23
Ain\'t It A Funhouse!
Paul Bell said:
Women sure have it tough out there.
It doesn\'t matter what part of your body the rope binds.
It still strangles you.
I bet we\'ve all felt that pain in life.
September 30th, 2026 04:54
Paul Bell said:
Women sure have it tough out there.
It doesn\'t matter what part of your body the rope binds.
It still strangles you.
I bet we\'ve all felt that pain in life.
September 30th, 2026 04:54
Small
Fränz Müller said:
I prefer to be small, the happy cog in the big machine.
September 24th, 2026 21:27
Fränz Müller said:
I prefer to be small, the happy cog in the big machine.
September 24th, 2026 21:27
Small
sorenbarrett said:
There is a questioning in this write where small is seen as a defect and it is extended to one\'s mental ability. Everything is relative and there are always smaller and bigger. This poem focuses on one\'s perspective of this and there is a sense of dissatisfaction. Changing one\'s point of view seems the answer. Nicely written.
September 24th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
There is a questioning in this write where small is seen as a defect and it is extended to one\'s mental ability. Everything is relative and there are always smaller and bigger. This poem focuses on one\'s perspective of this and there is a sense of dissatisfaction. Changing one\'s point of view seems the answer. Nicely written.
September 24th, 2026 04:00
A Different Display Of Love
peto said:
Perhaps you will write that song
A painfully honest write
August 4th, 2026 11:42
peto said:
Perhaps you will write that song
A painfully honest write
August 4th, 2026 11:42
My Bread Rolls
Demar Desu said:
I won’t be taking any dessert LOL. Masterpiece of a poem
August 3rd, 2026 20:31
Demar Desu said:
I won’t be taking any dessert LOL. Masterpiece of a poem
August 3rd, 2026 20:31
My Bread Rolls
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds delicious I would not hesitate. Nicely done in a day that too much effort is placed on avoiding the natural
August 3rd, 2026 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds delicious I would not hesitate. Nicely done in a day that too much effort is placed on avoiding the natural
August 3rd, 2026 11:38
...oooo...ahhhh!!!......
sorenbarrett said:
Recognition of a worsening in the relationship and nothing getting better is a sad situation
April 10th, 2026 15:58
sorenbarrett said:
Recognition of a worsening in the relationship and nothing getting better is a sad situation
April 10th, 2026 15:58
Dissociating Anxiety
sorenbarrett said:
At the beginning I thought that this represented Janis Joplin her last night on a heroin overdose dying on her bed but then it became more universal and more abstract. Nicely done
March 19th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
At the beginning I thought that this represented Janis Joplin her last night on a heroin overdose dying on her bed but then it became more universal and more abstract. Nicely done
March 19th, 2026 04:51
Dissociating Anxiety
Katie B. said:
Great read. Well written. Thanks for sharing.
March 19th, 2026 01:58
Katie B. said:
Great read. Well written. Thanks for sharing.
March 19th, 2026 01:58
Drunk Drug
Poetic Licence said:
Highlighting the potentially dangerous path you can so easily fall into when consuming drugs of any sort, short term relief but potentially life ending pain, nicely penned.
March 1st, 2026 07:57
Poetic Licence said:
Highlighting the potentially dangerous path you can so easily fall into when consuming drugs of any sort, short term relief but potentially life ending pain, nicely penned.
March 1st, 2026 07:57
Drunk Drug
sorenbarrett said:
We rely on drugs to quiet the pains of physical and emotional life. Although they seem to help in the short run their cost may be more than we are willing to pay but too late we find that we have already signed the contract without reading the fine print.
March 1st, 2026 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
We rely on drugs to quiet the pains of physical and emotional life. Although they seem to help in the short run their cost may be more than we are willing to pay but too late we find that we have already signed the contract without reading the fine print.
March 1st, 2026 07:33
The World Keeps Spinning...
sorenbarrett said:
Looking from the outside and far away the distance both helps and hurts the vision. Well done
January 22nd, 2026 13:20
sorenbarrett said:
Looking from the outside and far away the distance both helps and hurts the vision. Well done
January 22nd, 2026 13:20
Hope
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of vision and its impairment by the dark. Then comes the light of hope dime and cast on a moonbeam. Well done
December 20th, 2025 12:19
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of vision and its impairment by the dark. Then comes the light of hope dime and cast on a moonbeam. Well done
December 20th, 2025 12:19
Familiarity
sorenbarrett said:
Here I hear the needed reassurance of company to feel calm and able to relax. A nicely written piece
December 19th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Here I hear the needed reassurance of company to feel calm and able to relax. A nicely written piece
December 19th, 2025 04:45
Embracing
sorenbarrett said:
We can no more return to what we were than we can crawl back in the womb. Life moves forward not backward. A lovely write
November 15th, 2025 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
We can no more return to what we were than we can crawl back in the womb. Life moves forward not backward. A lovely write
November 15th, 2025 10:56
Invisible Existence
Soman Ragavan said:
You do exist and you are part of this world. Happy birthday to you on 20 September ! Best wishes for success in life.
September 20th, 2025 20:53
Soman Ragavan said:
You do exist and you are part of this world. Happy birthday to you on 20 September ! Best wishes for success in life.
September 20th, 2025 20:53
Invisible Existence
NinjaGirl said:
I often enjoy my life in invisibility, though it does sometimes get lonely. This is a nicely-written poem, well done.
September 5th, 2025 14:22
NinjaGirl said:
I often enjoy my life in invisibility, though it does sometimes get lonely. This is a nicely-written poem, well done.
September 5th, 2025 14:22
Invisible Existence
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of personal isolation and alienation that feels so alone. Nicely written
September 5th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of personal isolation and alienation that feels so alone. Nicely written
September 5th, 2025 04:17
Breathing Music
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
its message is clear and many can associate with, enjoyed
June 15th, 2025 04:13
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
its message is clear and many can associate with, enjoyed
June 15th, 2025 04:13
Breathing Music
Poetic Licence said:
We attach many memories to music not all being good ones, which makes it very difficult when a relationship for example breaks down, you still love the music but can\'t listen to it because of the attached memories , nicely expressed and written
June 14th, 2025 12:41
Poetic Licence said:
We attach many memories to music not all being good ones, which makes it very difficult when a relationship for example breaks down, you still love the music but can\'t listen to it because of the attached memories , nicely expressed and written
June 14th, 2025 12:41
Breathing Music
sorenbarrett said:
Associations are so powerful. A poem that makes the point of bad associations with music and a relationship that needs healing.
June 14th, 2025 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
Associations are so powerful. A poem that makes the point of bad associations with music and a relationship that needs healing.
June 14th, 2025 11:42
What\'s Wrong?
xqw said:
I get you. this poem is very relatable for me I liked how honest it was, I don\'t have an answer to your question but it\'s not you that\'s wrong. Some things just happen.
December 26th, 2024 01:32
xqw said:
I get you. this poem is very relatable for me I liked how honest it was, I don\'t have an answer to your question but it\'s not you that\'s wrong. Some things just happen.
December 26th, 2024 01:32
Lost Journey
Doggerel Dave said:
I have known that feeling: Where am I going? And why? But the truth is that I am living, and hopefully took advantage of every opportunity which came my way. It has been fun and interesting. I don’t think I could have asked for more….
August 26th, 2024 17:05
Doggerel Dave said:
I have known that feeling: Where am I going? And why? But the truth is that I am living, and hopefully took advantage of every opportunity which came my way. It has been fun and interesting. I don’t think I could have asked for more….
August 26th, 2024 17:05
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