Continuation
peto said:

It\'s never too late to learn
And i doubt you need any advice on writing
You just about poured your heart out here
Very emotional read
Keep em coming


March 10th, 2024 12:01

Remember Me
John Lee said:

The tears or frowns help shape what you want remembered.. great write!

December 21st, 2023 18:44

Remember Me
Lorenz said:

a cold skin touch..I like a lot ,its very inspiring !

December 21st, 2023 14:37

A Part Of Me - Self Harm
Cedrick said:

My hope for you is that you find someone who wholeheartedly cares and loves you. Great poem fellow poet

July 28th, 2023 22:29

My Best Friend
Bobby O said:

Cool that you wrote this. We got to feel and you got to emote. That’s a great thing this hobby provides. Props

May 16th, 2023 02:25

Party Outcasts
2781 said:

Sounds like the start of a beautiful friendship.

May 14th, 2023 10:03

My Death
Abby1234 said:

This poem is so understandable. I relate to it. I can find anything sharp around the house or school. The last words were probably what my cousin said before he killed himself.

May 2nd, 2023 09:14

Grandma
jarcher54 said:

I felt that way more about my mom but I miss my grandmothers after decades of their departures from my world. I was never separated by harsh borders, just long distance. Thanks for putting your feelings into verse for us, and that joy and those tears. Yow brought me sweet--and bittersweet--memories.


March 14th, 2023 10:05

Mental Health
Andi said:

Very well written!! I love this poem a lot, mental health matters!

February 26th, 2023 12:45

Not Dead Yet
Gurpreet Singh said:

Death is the biggest boon.
But I don\'t want \" Only death\".
I want to die in a way that
Nothing will be left after it,
I want to die to completely forget myself.
I think ordinary death will not meet the requirements.
I think love is the perfect choice for it.
Rumi once said I would die in the love of Thou.
Best of luck with your journey. And I know the end is not there for you.
My dear zhang

February 2nd, 2023 21:03

Released and Relieved
L. B. Mek said:

thanks for sharing, a good read
(empowering
message, as in our resurgence
blossom
gleanings to that all illusive
meaning..
we must find a way
to survive our life\'s
bleak nights, so as to claim
our life\'s
promised, shards of light)

January 23rd, 2023 07:08

Goodbyes
mvvenkataraman said:

The poet has left it to our imagination
As to why that was the final goodbye,
Has she reached her end at last
Or has she stopped the train journey
Due to personal changes in life,?
I also journeyed for eleven long years
And after retirement stopped going,
A nice brief poem ending with grief!

January 12th, 2023 02:57

Full
L. B. Mek said:

I read, related
a little of the suppressed rage
I keep hidden, deep within
peaked out and shared with you these feeble words, in reply
forgive me, dear Poet
(filled-up
tired of all the debris
that they squeeze in
whenever, we go to take a bite
of life
stuffed, without giving consent
not even afforded the respect
of a murdered, turkey
yet they shirk their shoulders
telling us
that\'s how it\'s always been, we just
need to accept
but
a few, in every generation
ask why
why, must we accept
who the fck gave you the right
to force feed me, those bitter
pills of life
how about, we all just spit it back
out
and smile, through the poison
they\'ve warped our minds with
choose, to cherish our lives
despite it all!
then what? what new way
will they design to mess with us
...)

December 23rd, 2022 08:03

Alone
L. B. Mek said:

yeah, i too know these words intimately
I just lacked the eloquence to word them like you..
thanks for sharing, a great read

December 12th, 2022 02:15

Alone
jarcher54 said:

Very fine little soliloquy. Loneliness has been described a million times. This one is tender and playful and subtly effective. Thanks!

December 11th, 2022 22:58