Comments received on poems by zhangyuyouyu
Lost Journey
Doggerel Dave said:
I have known that feeling: Where am I going? And why? But the truth is that I am living, and hopefully took advantage of every opportunity which came my way. It has been fun and interesting. I don’t think I could have asked for more….
August 26th, 2024 17:05
Doggerel Dave said:
I have known that feeling: Where am I going? And why? But the truth is that I am living, and hopefully took advantage of every opportunity which came my way. It has been fun and interesting. I don’t think I could have asked for more….
August 26th, 2024 17:05
Me
sorenbarrett said:
If you don\'t feel real help yourself to heal. Take the help that others give and free yourself to live. A wonderful write of an open heart that needs healing.
August 21st, 2024 15:08
sorenbarrett said:
If you don\'t feel real help yourself to heal. Take the help that others give and free yourself to live. A wonderful write of an open heart that needs healing.
August 21st, 2024 15:08
Goner
Doggerel Dave said:
You say on your Public Profile that you are new to poetry and need some advice.I am not slow in giving advice, but you don\'t need any. You know precisely what you are doing, and do it very well . A rich write.
August 18th, 2024 07:35
Doggerel Dave said:
You say on your Public Profile that you are new to poetry and need some advice.I am not slow in giving advice, but you don\'t need any. You know precisely what you are doing, and do it very well . A rich write.
August 18th, 2024 07:35
Goner
sorenbarrett said:
Like anyone that receives not reward for what they have done the response becomes extinguished or one gives up. A normal response. Nicely written
August 17th, 2024 12:49
sorenbarrett said:
Like anyone that receives not reward for what they have done the response becomes extinguished or one gives up. A normal response. Nicely written
August 17th, 2024 12:49
Last Minuteness
sorenbarrett said:
One minute at a time things come and go. So all things must pass and so will you. I can feel the anxiety in this piece.
July 21st, 2024 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
One minute at a time things come and go. So all things must pass and so will you. I can feel the anxiety in this piece.
July 21st, 2024 07:35
I am.
Qurrathul Ain said:
Nobody is perfect and 100% agreeable. I believe flaws and imperfections are what makes us humans. With a complex heart and mind, we can\'t be always optimistic. But we should try looking for the light in the darkness, even within ourselves. Because if we keep believing in the darkness, we will lose sight of the tiny speck of light around us. A poem so relatable, thank you for sharing!
June 26th, 2024 08:39
Qurrathul Ain said:
Nobody is perfect and 100% agreeable. I believe flaws and imperfections are what makes us humans. With a complex heart and mind, we can\'t be always optimistic. But we should try looking for the light in the darkness, even within ourselves. Because if we keep believing in the darkness, we will lose sight of the tiny speck of light around us. A poem so relatable, thank you for sharing!
June 26th, 2024 08:39
The Things You\'ve Said
peto said:
I\'ve always enjoyed how you write
Extremely talented
Full of emotions the reader can feel
Stunning writing
June 11th, 2024 05:00
peto said:
I\'ve always enjoyed how you write
Extremely talented
Full of emotions the reader can feel
Stunning writing
June 11th, 2024 05:00
The Things You\'ve Said
Doggerel Dave said:
The other side of passion and Luurve..... Thanks for that....
June 10th, 2024 06:47
Doggerel Dave said:
The other side of passion and Luurve..... Thanks for that....
June 10th, 2024 06:47
Continuation
peto said:
It\'s never too late to learn
And i doubt you need any advice on writing
You just about poured your heart out here
Very emotional read
Keep em coming
March 10th, 2024 12:01
peto said:
It\'s never too late to learn
And i doubt you need any advice on writing
You just about poured your heart out here
Very emotional read
Keep em coming
March 10th, 2024 12:01
My Scars
Parisab said:
Great concept of how the scars are sometimes hidden behind adornment …
February 4th, 2024 12:41
Parisab said:
Great concept of how the scars are sometimes hidden behind adornment …
February 4th, 2024 12:41
Remember Me
John Lee said:
The tears or frowns help shape what you want remembered.. great write!
December 21st, 2023 18:44
John Lee said:
The tears or frowns help shape what you want remembered.. great write!
December 21st, 2023 18:44
Remember Me
Lorenz said:
a cold skin touch..I like a lot ,its very inspiring !
December 21st, 2023 14:37
Lorenz said:
a cold skin touch..I like a lot ,its very inspiring !
December 21st, 2023 14:37
Lost
peto said:
When I read this I imagined it written by someone much older
Clever and interesting
Got a feeling you will write something very special
Keep it up
Pleasure to read
August 12th, 2023 13:04
peto said:
When I read this I imagined it written by someone much older
Clever and interesting
Got a feeling you will write something very special
Keep it up
Pleasure to read
August 12th, 2023 13:04
A Part Of Me - Self Harm
Cedrick said:
My hope for you is that you find someone who wholeheartedly cares and loves you. Great poem fellow poet
July 28th, 2023 22:29
Cedrick said:
My hope for you is that you find someone who wholeheartedly cares and loves you. Great poem fellow poet
July 28th, 2023 22:29
Empty Heart, Full Stomach
peto said:
So
What is it your heart is missing?
Hopefully figure that out soon
You are now facing it by writing
Lose the guilt lift the pen
July 1st, 2023 15:26
peto said:
So
What is it your heart is missing?
Hopefully figure that out soon
You are now facing it by writing
Lose the guilt lift the pen
July 1st, 2023 15:26
My Best Friend
Bobby O said:
Cool that you wrote this. We got to feel and you got to emote. That’s a great thing this hobby provides. Props
May 16th, 2023 02:25
Bobby O said:
Cool that you wrote this. We got to feel and you got to emote. That’s a great thing this hobby provides. Props
May 16th, 2023 02:25
Growing Struggles
L. B. Mek said:
keep it sincere and real
and watch your essence
eventually, move mountains
and reward smiles to your readers..
stay strong!
May 15th, 2023 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
keep it sincere and real
and watch your essence
eventually, move mountains
and reward smiles to your readers..
stay strong!
May 15th, 2023 05:50
Cut and Love
Abby1234 said:
Cool poem. I loved it so much. Seeing blood seep out of yourself is so cool. This poem is relatable.
May 2nd, 2023 09:16
Abby1234 said:
Cool poem. I loved it so much. Seeing blood seep out of yourself is so cool. This poem is relatable.
May 2nd, 2023 09:16
My Death
Abby1234 said:
This poem is so understandable. I relate to it. I can find anything sharp around the house or school. The last words were probably what my cousin said before he killed himself.
May 2nd, 2023 09:14
Abby1234 said:
This poem is so understandable. I relate to it. I can find anything sharp around the house or school. The last words were probably what my cousin said before he killed himself.
May 2nd, 2023 09:14
Grandma
jarcher54 said:
I felt that way more about my mom but I miss my grandmothers after decades of their departures from my world. I was never separated by harsh borders, just long distance. Thanks for putting your feelings into verse for us, and that joy and those tears. Yow brought me sweet--and bittersweet--memories.
March 14th, 2023 10:05
jarcher54 said:
I felt that way more about my mom but I miss my grandmothers after decades of their departures from my world. I was never separated by harsh borders, just long distance. Thanks for putting your feelings into verse for us, and that joy and those tears. Yow brought me sweet--and bittersweet--memories.
March 14th, 2023 10:05
You\'re My Password
yourejustaconstellation said:
this is actually amazing omg
February 28th, 2023 15:39
yourejustaconstellation said:
this is actually amazing omg
February 28th, 2023 15:39
Mental Health
Andi said:
Very well written!! I love this poem a lot, mental health matters!
February 26th, 2023 12:45
Andi said:
Very well written!! I love this poem a lot, mental health matters!
February 26th, 2023 12:45
Not Dead Yet
Gurpreet Singh said:
Death is the biggest boon.
But I don\'t want \" Only death\".
I want to die in a way that
Nothing will be left after it,
I want to die to completely forget myself.
I think ordinary death will not meet the requirements.
I think love is the perfect choice for it.
Rumi once said I would die in the love of Thou.
Best of luck with your journey. And I know the end is not there for you.
My dear zhang
February 2nd, 2023 21:03
Gurpreet Singh said:
Death is the biggest boon.
But I don\'t want \" Only death\".
I want to die in a way that
Nothing will be left after it,
I want to die to completely forget myself.
I think ordinary death will not meet the requirements.
I think love is the perfect choice for it.
Rumi once said I would die in the love of Thou.
Best of luck with your journey. And I know the end is not there for you.
My dear zhang
February 2nd, 2023 21:03
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