Comments received on poems by zhangyuyouyu

peto said:

When I read this I imagined it written by someone much older
Clever and interesting
Got a feeling you will write something very special
Keep it up
Pleasure to read

August 12th, 2023 13:04

A Part Of Me - Self Harm
Cedrick said:

My hope for you is that you find someone who wholeheartedly cares and loves you. Great poem fellow poet

July 28th, 2023 22:29

Empty Heart, Full Stomach
peto said:

What is it your heart is missing?
Hopefully figure that out soon
You are now facing it by writing
Lose the guilt lift the pen

July 1st, 2023 15:26

My Best Friend
Bobby O said:

Cool that you wrote this. We got to feel and you got to emote. That’s a great thing this hobby provides. Props

May 16th, 2023 02:25

Growing Struggles
L. B. Mek said:

keep it sincere and real
and watch your essence
eventually, move mountains
and reward smiles to your readers..
stay strong!

May 15th, 2023 05:50

Party Outcasts
2781 said:

Sounds like the start of a beautiful friendship.

May 14th, 2023 10:03

Cut and Love
Abby1234 said:

Cool poem. I loved it so much. Seeing blood seep out of yourself is so cool. This poem is relatable.

May 2nd, 2023 09:16

My Death
Abby1234 said:

This poem is so understandable. I relate to it. I can find anything sharp around the house or school. The last words were probably what my cousin said before he killed himself.

May 2nd, 2023 09:14

Cut and Love
Addy said:

Soulfull and impactful. I loveeeee the last line

March 18th, 2023 01:15

jarcher54 said:

I felt that way more about my mom but I miss my grandmothers after decades of their departures from my world. I was never separated by harsh borders, just long distance. Thanks for putting your feelings into verse for us, and that joy and those tears. Yow brought me sweet--and bittersweet--memories.

March 14th, 2023 10:05

You\'re My Password
yourejustaconstellation said:

this is actually amazing omg

February 28th, 2023 15:39

Mental Health
Andi said:

Very well written!! I love this poem a lot, mental health matters!

February 26th, 2023 12:45

Mental Health
Addy said:

Well written! Mental health is important

February 26th, 2023 08:41

Not Dead Yet
Gurpreet Singh said:

Death is the biggest boon.
But I don\'t want \" Only death\".
I want to die in a way that
Nothing will be left after it,
I want to die to completely forget myself.
I think ordinary death will not meet the requirements.
I think love is the perfect choice for it.
Rumi once said I would die in the love of Thou.
Best of luck with your journey. And I know the end is not there for you.
My dear zhang

February 2nd, 2023 21:03

Not Dead Yet
jennie said:

As long as there is light there is hope for plants as well as long as we breathe their truly are endless possibilities.

And yes dad always knows it all.

January 31st, 2023 10:53

Released and Relieved
L. B. Mek said:

thanks for sharing, a good read
message, as in our resurgence
gleanings to that all illusive
we must find a way
to survive our life\'s
bleak nights, so as to claim
our life\'s
promised, shards of light)

January 23rd, 2023 07:08

Shock or Surprise?
Ok Waleed said:

Happy birthday

January 21st, 2023 16:25

mvvenkataraman said:

The poet has left it to our imagination
As to why that was the final goodbye,
Has she reached her end at last
Or has she stopped the train journey
Due to personal changes in life,?
I also journeyed for eleven long years
And after retirement stopped going,
A nice brief poem ending with grief!

January 12th, 2023 02:57

Too sad to cry, how to relieve?
amepiesces said:

lots of love and support dear..remember us humans are not capable of helping each can a beggar feed another one ..silly isnt..?find the happiness the smiles in small details ..look below you will find the reason of your smile ..

January 9th, 2023 12:42

L. B. Mek said:

I read, related
a little of the suppressed rage
I keep hidden, deep within
peaked out and shared with you these feeble words, in reply
forgive me, dear Poet
tired of all the debris
that they squeeze in
whenever, we go to take a bite
of life
stuffed, without giving consent
not even afforded the respect
of a murdered, turkey
yet they shirk their shoulders
telling us
that\'s how it\'s always been, we just
need to accept
a few, in every generation
ask why
why, must we accept
who the fck gave you the right
to force feed me, those bitter
pills of life
how about, we all just spit it back
and smile, through the poison
they\'ve warped our minds with
choose, to cherish our lives
despite it all!
then what? what new way
will they design to mess with us

December 23rd, 2022 08:03

L. B. Mek said:

resist, path your way back to those sands of sanity
and prevail
Fight that good fight, live
Swimming free of regret in every breath
and write a relatable poem or two
when you have the time..
thanks for sharing, stay Strong!

December 16th, 2022 06:14

L. B. Mek said:

yeah, i too know these words intimately
I just lacked the eloquence to word them like you..
thanks for sharing, a great read

December 12th, 2022 02:15

jarcher54 said:

I love the final three lines... the connection is all that matters at that moment.

December 11th, 2022 22:59

jarcher54 said:

Very fine little soliloquy. Loneliness has been described a million times. This one is tender and playful and subtly effective. Thanks!

December 11th, 2022 22:58

Kinsey Peterson said:

I get it. I relapsed again last night. All this proves is that you aren\'t the only one going through it. I\'m here if you need someone. I promise. We don\'t know eachother but trust me when I say that your words mean something. They do.

November 28th, 2022 10:40

L. B. Mek said:

loved this, great imagery!
thanks for sharing

November 28th, 2022 05:31

Regrets in Love
Xoes Library said:

Love it

November 21st, 2022 16:43

No Blames
L. B. Mek said:

the kindest person in your life
is right there
looking back in that eager mirror
befriend that reflection, trust in it
and let it gift you the love
you deserve!
stay strong, kind Poet

November 11th, 2022 07:20

beautifully broken said:

We all deserve to go to heaven it\'s just up to us on how we live our life and the choices we make but this is a nice poem

November 9th, 2022 11:09

Self Discovery
Doggerel Dave said:

Sounds like the \'long and hard process\' has been worthwhile if I take this beyond the neat simple little portrayal of a moment in your personal development. I liked that very much despite not being very fond of introspective poetry.

October 18th, 2022 18:50

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