Comments received on poems by zhangyuyouyu
Not Dead Yet
jennie said:
As long as there is light there is hope for plants as well as us....as long as we breathe their truly are endless possibilities.
And yes dad always knows it all.
January 31st, 2023 10:53
jennie said:
As long as there is light there is hope for plants as well as us....as long as we breathe their truly are endless possibilities.
And yes dad always knows it all.
January 31st, 2023 10:53
Released and Relieved
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing, a good read
(empowering
message, as in our resurgence
blossom
gleanings to that all illusive
meaning..
we must find a way
to survive our life\'s
bleak nights, so as to claim
our life\'s
promised, shards of light)
January 23rd, 2023 07:08
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing, a good read
(empowering
message, as in our resurgence
blossom
gleanings to that all illusive
meaning..
we must find a way
to survive our life\'s
bleak nights, so as to claim
our life\'s
promised, shards of light)
January 23rd, 2023 07:08
Goodbyes
mvvenkataraman said:
The poet has left it to our imagination
As to why that was the final goodbye,
Has she reached her end at last
Or has she stopped the train journey
Due to personal changes in life,?
I also journeyed for eleven long years
And after retirement stopped going,
A nice brief poem ending with grief!
January 12th, 2023 02:57
mvvenkataraman said:
The poet has left it to our imagination
As to why that was the final goodbye,
Has she reached her end at last
Or has she stopped the train journey
Due to personal changes in life,?
I also journeyed for eleven long years
And after retirement stopped going,
A nice brief poem ending with grief!
January 12th, 2023 02:57
Too sad to cry, how to relieve?
amepiesces said:
lots of love and support dear..remember us humans are not capable of helping each other..how can a beggar feed another one ..silly isnt..?find the happiness the smiles in small details ..look below you will find the reason of your smile ..
January 9th, 2023 12:42
amepiesces said:
lots of love and support dear..remember us humans are not capable of helping each other..how can a beggar feed another one ..silly isnt..?find the happiness the smiles in small details ..look below you will find the reason of your smile ..
January 9th, 2023 12:42
Full
L. B. Mek said:
I read, related
a little of the suppressed rage
I keep hidden, deep within
peaked out and shared with you these feeble words, in reply
forgive me, dear Poet
(filled-up
tired of all the debris
that they squeeze in
whenever, we go to take a bite
of life
stuffed, without giving consent
not even afforded the respect
of a murdered, turkey
yet they shirk their shoulders
telling us
that\'s how it\'s always been, we just
need to accept
but
a few, in every generation
ask why
why, must we accept
who the fck gave you the right
to force feed me, those bitter
pills of life
how about, we all just spit it back
out
and smile, through the poison
they\'ve warped our minds with
choose, to cherish our lives
despite it all!
then what? what new way
will they design to mess with us
...)
December 23rd, 2022 08:03
L. B. Mek said:
I read, related
a little of the suppressed rage
I keep hidden, deep within
peaked out and shared with you these feeble words, in reply
forgive me, dear Poet
(filled-up
tired of all the debris
that they squeeze in
whenever, we go to take a bite
of life
stuffed, without giving consent
not even afforded the respect
of a murdered, turkey
yet they shirk their shoulders
telling us
that\'s how it\'s always been, we just
need to accept
but
a few, in every generation
ask why
why, must we accept
who the fck gave you the right
to force feed me, those bitter
pills of life
how about, we all just spit it back
out
and smile, through the poison
they\'ve warped our minds with
choose, to cherish our lives
despite it all!
then what? what new way
will they design to mess with us
...)
December 23rd, 2022 08:03
Siren
L. B. Mek said:
resist, path your way back to those sands of sanity
and prevail
Fight that good fight, live
Swimming free of regret in every breath
Live!
and write a relatable poem or two
when you have the time..
thanks for sharing, stay Strong!
December 16th, 2022 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
resist, path your way back to those sands of sanity
and prevail
Fight that good fight, live
Swimming free of regret in every breath
Live!
and write a relatable poem or two
when you have the time..
thanks for sharing, stay Strong!
December 16th, 2022 06:14
Alone
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, i too know these words intimately
I just lacked the eloquence to word them like you..
thanks for sharing, a great read
December 12th, 2022 02:15
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, i too know these words intimately
I just lacked the eloquence to word them like you..
thanks for sharing, a great read
December 12th, 2022 02:15
Crush
jarcher54 said:
I love the final three lines... the connection is all that matters at that moment.
December 11th, 2022 22:59
jarcher54 said:
I love the final three lines... the connection is all that matters at that moment.
December 11th, 2022 22:59
Alone
jarcher54 said:
Very fine little soliloquy. Loneliness has been described a million times. This one is tender and playful and subtly effective. Thanks!
December 11th, 2022 22:58
jarcher54 said:
Very fine little soliloquy. Loneliness has been described a million times. This one is tender and playful and subtly effective. Thanks!
December 11th, 2022 22:58
Suicide
Kinsey Peterson said:
I get it. I relapsed again last night. All this proves is that you aren\'t the only one going through it. I\'m here if you need someone. I promise. We don\'t know eachother but trust me when I say that your words mean something. They do.
November 28th, 2022 10:40
Kinsey Peterson said:
I get it. I relapsed again last night. All this proves is that you aren\'t the only one going through it. I\'m here if you need someone. I promise. We don\'t know eachother but trust me when I say that your words mean something. They do.
November 28th, 2022 10:40
No Blames
L. B. Mek said:
the kindest person in your life
is right there
looking back in that eager mirror
befriend that reflection, trust in it
and let it gift you the love
you deserve!
stay strong, kind Poet
November 11th, 2022 07:20
L. B. Mek said:
the kindest person in your life
is right there
looking back in that eager mirror
befriend that reflection, trust in it
and let it gift you the love
you deserve!
stay strong, kind Poet
November 11th, 2022 07:20
Heaven
beautifully broken said:
We all deserve to go to heaven it\'s just up to us on how we live our life and the choices we make but this is a nice poem
November 9th, 2022 11:09
beautifully broken said:
We all deserve to go to heaven it\'s just up to us on how we live our life and the choices we make but this is a nice poem
November 9th, 2022 11:09
Self Discovery
Doggerel Dave said:
Sounds like the \'long and hard process\' has been worthwhile if I take this beyond the neat simple little portrayal of a moment in your personal development. I liked that very much despite not being very fond of introspective poetry.
October 18th, 2022 18:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Sounds like the \'long and hard process\' has been worthwhile if I take this beyond the neat simple little portrayal of a moment in your personal development. I liked that very much despite not being very fond of introspective poetry.
October 18th, 2022 18:50
Greed
Mr. Not said:
i think greed and being selfish are two sperate things, selfish is when you take what you need to survive(can be used differently) and greed is taking what you want because you want it. this poem sums it up well
September 24th, 2022 09:04
Mr. Not said:
i think greed and being selfish are two sperate things, selfish is when you take what you need to survive(can be used differently) and greed is taking what you want because you want it. this poem sums it up well
September 24th, 2022 09:04
The Tree Trunk and I
Jayasree said:
Beautiful. You get peace and happiness while hugging a tree. :)
August 6th, 2022 07:32
Jayasree said:
Beautiful. You get peace and happiness while hugging a tree. :)
August 6th, 2022 07:32
The Tree Trunk and I
Saxon Crow said:
You\'ve got to love a tree. Ever dependent and reliable.
August 6th, 2022 02:15
Saxon Crow said:
You\'ve got to love a tree. Ever dependent and reliable.
August 6th, 2022 02:15
Instagram
L. B. Mek said:
so timely..!
once we were trapped
by societal or cultural
parameter limitations
of unsaid, do\'s and dont\'s
imbued in our choices, tapestry..
now, we click an app
and subject ourselves
to tyrannical opinions of our worth, willingly..
that ever-present, regression
in our strive for progression..
(a great message and write
thanks for sharing)
May 12th, 2022 05:08
L. B. Mek said:
so timely..!
once we were trapped
by societal or cultural
parameter limitations
of unsaid, do\'s and dont\'s
imbued in our choices, tapestry..
now, we click an app
and subject ourselves
to tyrannical opinions of our worth, willingly..
that ever-present, regression
in our strive for progression..
(a great message and write
thanks for sharing)
May 12th, 2022 05:08
Heels
Paul Bell said:
You portray the lady of the night in stark detail. No glass slipper, just the harsh reality of life.
May 10th, 2022 12:29
Paul Bell said:
You portray the lady of the night in stark detail. No glass slipper, just the harsh reality of life.
May 10th, 2022 12:29
Anger
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this is such a vivid way to describe that rage that ignites in us from time to time. I love that “volcano” and “boil” you present and it really goes to show that anger in ways so real. This is wonderful.
April 5th, 2022 08:51
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this is such a vivid way to describe that rage that ignites in us from time to time. I love that “volcano” and “boil” you present and it really goes to show that anger in ways so real. This is wonderful.
April 5th, 2022 08:51
Good Night
Bella Shepard said:
Your words powerfully evoke the struggle that the mind often goes through when sleep is elusive. May your breaths slow and find the rhythm of peace. Very well written.
April 2nd, 2022 13:12
Bella Shepard said:
Your words powerfully evoke the struggle that the mind often goes through when sleep is elusive. May your breaths slow and find the rhythm of peace. Very well written.
April 2nd, 2022 13:12
A Child\'s Dream
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this is quite sad. Hope the light will spark again.
March 29th, 2022 13:22
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this is quite sad. Hope the light will spark again.
March 29th, 2022 13:22
Path
Paul Bell said:
Fly, fly away.
Though I like the idea of popping back for the free meal now and again. Just to check, mind you.
March 28th, 2022 06:31
Paul Bell said:
Fly, fly away.
Though I like the idea of popping back for the free meal now and again. Just to check, mind you.
March 28th, 2022 06:31
Final Goodbye
Dahlia said:
so well expressed, my personal interpretation of it reminds me of the prayers I do for victims of crime in my community...happy Sunday
Dahlia
March 27th, 2022 11:35
Dahlia said:
so well expressed, my personal interpretation of it reminds me of the prayers I do for victims of crime in my community...happy Sunday
Dahlia
March 27th, 2022 11:35
Late Night Thoughts
Dahlia said:
very nice, keep poeming on...
Happy weekend,
Dahlia Vitalia
March 26th, 2022 09:50
Dahlia said:
very nice, keep poeming on...
Happy weekend,
Dahlia Vitalia
March 26th, 2022 09:50
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