Comments received on poems by zhangyuyouyu
A Fateful Accident
jarcher54 said:
It sounds to me as if you are making the best of the situation. By sharing it with us, you are fearless and not hiding your sense of vulnerability. I think you are becoming more independent, more resilient, and more wise as a result. If it keeps nagging at you, talk to a trusted adult outside of your family or friends. They can give you some perspective. In the meantime, believe me, you seem pretty fierce and unique!
January 22nd, 2022 01:04
jarcher54 said:
It sounds to me as if you are making the best of the situation. By sharing it with us, you are fearless and not hiding your sense of vulnerability. I think you are becoming more independent, more resilient, and more wise as a result. If it keeps nagging at you, talk to a trusted adult outside of your family or friends. They can give you some perspective. In the meantime, believe me, you seem pretty fierce and unique!
January 22nd, 2022 01:04
A Fateful Accident
sophin said:
i am sorry to here you\'ve gone through this, dear poet. all i can say that it is not the place of others to judge who you are; it is okay to break down. please do not feel burdened by the reactions of others. i wish you the best.
January 21st, 2022 14:56
sophin said:
i am sorry to here you\'ve gone through this, dear poet. all i can say that it is not the place of others to judge who you are; it is okay to break down. please do not feel burdened by the reactions of others. i wish you the best.
January 21st, 2022 14:56
Bleeding Love
Paul Bell said:
In a way, this is two poems, two messages, which is pretty hard to do in a short poem. Kudos to you.
January 19th, 2022 15:35
Paul Bell said:
In a way, this is two poems, two messages, which is pretty hard to do in a short poem. Kudos to you.
January 19th, 2022 15:35
Bleeding Love
WhispersFromTheAbyss said:
this is most definitely a poem. it brings out your thoughts in the moment and that\'s the best kind of poetry
January 19th, 2022 13:58
WhispersFromTheAbyss said:
this is most definitely a poem. it brings out your thoughts in the moment and that\'s the best kind of poetry
January 19th, 2022 13:58
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