Comments received on poems by zhangyuyouyu



A Fateful Accident
jarcher54 said:

It sounds to me as if you are making the best of the situation. By sharing it with us, you are fearless and not hiding your sense of vulnerability. I think you are becoming more independent, more resilient, and more wise as a result. If it keeps nagging at you, talk to a trusted adult outside of your family or friends. They can give you some perspective. In the meantime, believe me, you seem pretty fierce and unique!

January 22nd, 2022 01:04

A Fateful Accident
sophin said:

i am sorry to here you\'ve gone through this, dear poet. all i can say that it is not the place of others to judge who you are; it is okay to break down. please do not feel burdened by the reactions of others. i wish you the best.

January 21st, 2022 14:56

Bleeding Love
Paul Bell said:

In a way, this is two poems, two messages, which is pretty hard to do in a short poem. Kudos to you.

January 19th, 2022 15:35

Bleeding Love
WhispersFromTheAbyss said:

this is most definitely a poem. it brings out your thoughts in the moment and that\'s the best kind of poetry

January 19th, 2022 13:58

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