Comments received on poems by zhangyuyouyu
Darkness
rrodriguez said:
If you find yourself in this state, she\'s not going to free you. You must free yourself. Your writing reflects your state of mind. You\'re young enjoy your youth. Write more and more and enjoy the moment.
January 22nd, 2022 16:16
rrodriguez said:
If you find yourself in this state, she\'s not going to free you. You must free yourself. Your writing reflects your state of mind. You\'re young enjoy your youth. Write more and more and enjoy the moment.
January 22nd, 2022 16:16
A Fateful Accident
jarcher54 said:
It sounds to me as if you are making the best of the situation. By sharing it with us, you are fearless and not hiding your sense of vulnerability. I think you are becoming more independent, more resilient, and more wise as a result. If it keeps nagging at you, talk to a trusted adult outside of your family or friends. They can give you some perspective. In the meantime, believe me, you seem pretty fierce and unique!
January 22nd, 2022 01:04
jarcher54 said:
It sounds to me as if you are making the best of the situation. By sharing it with us, you are fearless and not hiding your sense of vulnerability. I think you are becoming more independent, more resilient, and more wise as a result. If it keeps nagging at you, talk to a trusted adult outside of your family or friends. They can give you some perspective. In the meantime, believe me, you seem pretty fierce and unique!
January 22nd, 2022 01:04
A Fateful Accident
sophin said:
i am sorry to here you\'ve gone through this, dear poet. all i can say that it is not the place of others to judge who you are; it is okay to break down. please do not feel burdened by the reactions of others. i wish you the best.
January 21st, 2022 14:56
sophin said:
i am sorry to here you\'ve gone through this, dear poet. all i can say that it is not the place of others to judge who you are; it is okay to break down. please do not feel burdened by the reactions of others. i wish you the best.
January 21st, 2022 14:56
Bleeding Love
Paul Bell said:
In a way, this is two poems, two messages, which is pretty hard to do in a short poem. Kudos to you.
January 19th, 2022 15:35
Paul Bell said:
In a way, this is two poems, two messages, which is pretty hard to do in a short poem. Kudos to you.
January 19th, 2022 15:35
Bleeding Love
WhispersFromTheAbyss said:
this is most definitely a poem. it brings out your thoughts in the moment and that\'s the best kind of poetry
January 19th, 2022 13:58
WhispersFromTheAbyss said:
this is most definitely a poem. it brings out your thoughts in the moment and that\'s the best kind of poetry
January 19th, 2022 13:58
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