Comments received on poems by kayewaye
Who am i
L. B. Mek said:
and so do I...
again, I so relate
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 19th, 2022 03:52
L. B. Mek said:
and so do I...
again, I so relate
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 19th, 2022 03:52
Dam
L. B. Mek said:
finding an avenue for release
is an essential necessity of life
and I think Poesy
is a great tool for doing just that
let it all out
in words, instead of fists and bullets
cos that crimson, spill of consequence
comes with a bill
few of us can fathom
and even fewer, can survive...
sometimes we just can\'t curse enough
to undo the active volcano in our souls;
this FUBAR life
can truly, be too fck\'n hard to bare at times..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
stay Strong! the road may be long
and tiresome, but remember to look out
for those rare but oh so precious
highlight moments
August 18th, 2022 01:07
L. B. Mek said:
finding an avenue for release
is an essential necessity of life
and I think Poesy
is a great tool for doing just that
let it all out
in words, instead of fists and bullets
cos that crimson, spill of consequence
comes with a bill
few of us can fathom
and even fewer, can survive...
sometimes we just can\'t curse enough
to undo the active volcano in our souls;
this FUBAR life
can truly, be too fck\'n hard to bare at times..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
stay Strong! the road may be long
and tiresome, but remember to look out
for those rare but oh so precious
highlight moments
August 18th, 2022 01:07
Higher
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully romantic, a lovely read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 6th, 2022 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully romantic, a lovely read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 6th, 2022 05:06
BREATH
Saxon Crow said:
A very strong feeling poem K. Don\'t let the b*stards grind you down. My rule 4 in life!
April 27th, 2022 00:48
Saxon Crow said:
A very strong feeling poem K. Don\'t let the b*stards grind you down. My rule 4 in life!
April 27th, 2022 00:48
Who the f*ck do you think I am
L. B. Mek said:
\'woosah\'
find you, a cooling stone
and grip it tight..
utilise, your art!
stay strong, dear poet
our anger, is usually a reactionary
symptom, of someone
making us feel powerless or threatened,
frustration fuelled anger
dissipates, easily
when we, Choose
to let go
of that which frustrates, us
(I know it\'s easy to say
hard to do
but reality, demands
we find a way
or remain, a pawn to other\'s
whimsy)
April 11th, 2022 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'woosah\'
find you, a cooling stone
and grip it tight..
utilise, your art!
stay strong, dear poet
our anger, is usually a reactionary
symptom, of someone
making us feel powerless or threatened,
frustration fuelled anger
dissipates, easily
when we, Choose
to let go
of that which frustrates, us
(I know it\'s easy to say
hard to do
but reality, demands
we find a way
or remain, a pawn to other\'s
whimsy)
April 11th, 2022 05:59
Fed up
L. B. Mek said:
let it all out! lol
\'these words
read like something
we all feel, to some degree
on boxing day\'s, after all those
socks, have been unboxed
and busting belly\'s, have our
belly buttons, becoming outie\'s
overnight\'..
let it all out, dear poet
then think
what bout your own, traits
or your life, Choices
give others, so much power
over you..
think - break free
live the life you want!
stay strong
April 11th, 2022 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
let it all out! lol
\'these words
read like something
we all feel, to some degree
on boxing day\'s, after all those
socks, have been unboxed
and busting belly\'s, have our
belly buttons, becoming outie\'s
overnight\'..
let it all out, dear poet
then think
what bout your own, traits
or your life, Choices
give others, so much power
over you..
think - break free
live the life you want!
stay strong
April 11th, 2022 05:12
Let me vent
L. B. Mek said:
you can always, choose Poesy..
for me, its
that one anchor of solace
which never judges..
it allows me to ink - out
all my worries
before they fester
into something, uglier
and then, I read
a few poems and heed
a few ounces of wisdom
and between the two
I find, Poesy
has inked a path for me
to grasp on - to...
(stay strong, dear Poet
utilise your art and empower yourself
lean on those skilful, tools
you have, at your fingertips...)
April 5th, 2022 03:52
L. B. Mek said:
you can always, choose Poesy..
for me, its
that one anchor of solace
which never judges..
it allows me to ink - out
all my worries
before they fester
into something, uglier
and then, I read
a few poems and heed
a few ounces of wisdom
and between the two
I find, Poesy
has inked a path for me
to grasp on - to...
(stay strong, dear Poet
utilise your art and empower yourself
lean on those skilful, tools
you have, at your fingertips...)
April 5th, 2022 03:52
Lost and alone
Christina8 said:
A well written deep poem. I think life is what you make it, you just have to get out of that hole. And I\'m not implying it\'s easy at all, cuz it\'s not. But great job on this, thanks for sharing!
March 31st, 2022 11:53
Christina8 said:
A well written deep poem. I think life is what you make it, you just have to get out of that hole. And I\'m not implying it\'s easy at all, cuz it\'s not. But great job on this, thanks for sharing!
March 31st, 2022 11:53
Lost and alone
Dahlia said:
Well penned, wholehearted & loved the closing lines! Dahlia
March 31st, 2022 11:20
Dahlia said:
Well penned, wholehearted & loved the closing lines! Dahlia
March 31st, 2022 11:20
Lost and alone
dusk arising said:
LIfe won\'t change much unless you give it something of yourself.
Join a class learning anything, it will put you in a diffent thought space. You\'ll be surprised by the subtle influences it will introduce to you and encourage you. Just so long as you don\'t have bad habits or lazyness dragging you down.
March 31st, 2022 11:02
dusk arising said:
LIfe won\'t change much unless you give it something of yourself.
Join a class learning anything, it will put you in a diffent thought space. You\'ll be surprised by the subtle influences it will introduce to you and encourage you. Just so long as you don\'t have bad habits or lazyness dragging you down.
March 31st, 2022 11:02
Lost and alone
Rocky Lagou said:
You have the ability to overcome those daunting thoughts and emotions. We all struggle in life but always fix your gaze on the light. An amazing and vulnerable poem.
March 31st, 2022 09:53
Rocky Lagou said:
You have the ability to overcome those daunting thoughts and emotions. We all struggle in life but always fix your gaze on the light. An amazing and vulnerable poem.
March 31st, 2022 09:53
Lost and alone
L. B. Mek said:
those meditative, truism\'s
that eek out of us, under moonlight\'s
incessant gaze
in that tiger hour of introspective, questing
to find
that, best of us
we can excavate, only
from within, us..
a great read, dear poet
stay questing, under humility\'s guide
stay strong!
March 31st, 2022 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
those meditative, truism\'s
that eek out of us, under moonlight\'s
incessant gaze
in that tiger hour of introspective, questing
to find
that, best of us
we can excavate, only
from within, us..
a great read, dear poet
stay questing, under humility\'s guide
stay strong!
March 31st, 2022 05:22
LIFE RIGHT NOW
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, reason it out
as you
write it out, utilise
your Art..
thanks for sharing
a great showcasing of poetry\'s
real life, utility
for us all, to heed..
stay strong dear poet
March 25th, 2022 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, reason it out
as you
write it out, utilise
your Art..
thanks for sharing
a great showcasing of poetry\'s
real life, utility
for us all, to heed..
stay strong dear poet
March 25th, 2022 05:41
Can I talk to you
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just know *you\'re my Beauty
And I’m your beast
Let me give you the world
And prove to the world
I can be the man I’m meant to be\'..
wonderfully expressive and sincere
thanks for sharing
March 8th, 2022 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just know *you\'re my Beauty
And I’m your beast
Let me give you the world
And prove to the world
I can be the man I’m meant to be\'..
wonderfully expressive and sincere
thanks for sharing
March 8th, 2022 05:04
The Voice
L. B. Mek said:
well written, like the way
you used the time stamps, to anchor
the spine of your write, really clever
thanks for sharing
February 4th, 2022 06:40
L. B. Mek said:
well written, like the way
you used the time stamps, to anchor
the spine of your write, really clever
thanks for sharing
February 4th, 2022 06:40
