Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
To be Brave
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is strong, GenXer...bravery defined as gospel truth, repentance, forgiveness, courage to let go. The luggage metaphor says it all. True strength rests in grace. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 30th, 2025 18:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is strong, GenXer...bravery defined as gospel truth, repentance, forgiveness, courage to let go. The luggage metaphor says it all. True strength rests in grace. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 30th, 2025 18:05
To be Brave
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, easier to go downhill, I suppose, than uphill. And yep, I knows what being brave is - well, I married KP! heehee.
September 30th, 2025 11:27
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, easier to go downhill, I suppose, than uphill. And yep, I knows what being brave is - well, I married KP! heehee.
September 30th, 2025 11:27
To be Brave
sorenbarrett said:
You have a natural way of using rhyme and near rhyme to hold the interest of the reader in your message. Poetry to me is promoting feeling by the use of words that can be in rhyme or sublime metaphoric or unthought of connections to thought that inspire new ways of looking at something. A write that is powerful and well done.
September 30th, 2025 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
You have a natural way of using rhyme and near rhyme to hold the interest of the reader in your message. Poetry to me is promoting feeling by the use of words that can be in rhyme or sublime metaphoric or unthought of connections to thought that inspire new ways of looking at something. A write that is powerful and well done.
September 30th, 2025 06:39
We Know
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You write with such conviction, my dear friend.…naming the doubts, lifting the questions, but always circling back to faith and persistence. It’s honest, grounding, and deeply human. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 29th, 2025 15:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You write with such conviction, my dear friend.…naming the doubts, lifting the questions, but always circling back to faith and persistence. It’s honest, grounding, and deeply human. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 29th, 2025 15:18
We Know
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice poem written in your style as only you can. I have to say that I see wonderful progress in your writing and this one is a good example of fine craftmanship in weaving those internal rhymes as it seems only you can. Very nice and a fave
September 29th, 2025 12:48
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice poem written in your style as only you can. I have to say that I see wonderful progress in your writing and this one is a good example of fine craftmanship in weaving those internal rhymes as it seems only you can. Very nice and a fave
September 29th, 2025 12:48
For All who Are Lost
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like testimony turned into poetry. Worn roads, missteps, but all pointing back to the open arms of the Savior. A beacon for the weary. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2025 20:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like testimony turned into poetry. Worn roads, missteps, but all pointing back to the open arms of the Savior. A beacon for the weary. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2025 20:48
For All who Are Lost
sorenbarrett said:
You continue to intersperse rhyme in your poetry even in free verse and I love this it holds the readers attention. Very nicely done this work
September 22nd, 2025 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
You continue to intersperse rhyme in your poetry even in free verse and I love this it holds the readers attention. Very nicely done this work
September 22nd, 2025 08:20
Jesus Christ is Lord
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is strong and heartfelt, my friend…faith spoken with clarity, the weight of testimony turned into hope for others. Thank you for sharing this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛✝️
September 16th, 2025 15:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is strong and heartfelt, my friend…faith spoken with clarity, the weight of testimony turned into hope for others. Thank you for sharing this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛✝️
September 16th, 2025 15:27
Jesus Christ is Lord
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Erm, KP\'s changed my life too - for the worse! heehee.
September 16th, 2025 05:57
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Erm, KP\'s changed my life too - for the worse! heehee.
September 16th, 2025 05:57
Jesus Christ is Lord
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about a pillar of strength in life that is the solid foundation upon which a life is built. Nicely done
September 16th, 2025 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about a pillar of strength in life that is the solid foundation upon which a life is built. Nicely done
September 16th, 2025 05:39
I Believe In God
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
Who (or in this case, what) else do I believe in? I believe in being horrible to KP every day! heehee. It\'s not at all difficult for me to believe in that. lol. Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido to me.
September 14th, 2025 02:07
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
Who (or in this case, what) else do I believe in? I believe in being horrible to KP every day! heehee. It\'s not at all difficult for me to believe in that. lol. Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido to me.
September 14th, 2025 02:07
I Believe In God
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Your faith exudes as a beacon, a light, for the dark world to see. What a wonderful, powerful witness you are, my dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 14th, 2025 01:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Your faith exudes as a beacon, a light, for the dark world to see. What a wonderful, powerful witness you are, my dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 14th, 2025 01:18
I Believe In God
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of belief and faith and a proclamation to others. Nicely written
September 13th, 2025 11:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of belief and faith and a proclamation to others. Nicely written
September 13th, 2025 11:56
Truth
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Meanwhile - of course, I always speak the truth to KP. I say to her every day \'You\'re looking more trout-like today, my dear!\' Heehee. Then me ears burn in the unrepeatable words she replies to me! lol.
September 12th, 2025 05:52
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Meanwhile - of course, I always speak the truth to KP. I say to her every day \'You\'re looking more trout-like today, my dear!\' Heehee. Then me ears burn in the unrepeatable words she replies to me! lol.
September 12th, 2025 05:52
Truth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is powerful…truth as love, as risk, as faith in action. Every line carries urgency, grace, and conviction. Beautifully written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2025 21:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is powerful…truth as love, as risk, as faith in action. Every line carries urgency, grace, and conviction. Beautifully written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2025 21:08
Truth
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written Shamrocker in good poetic style. Lacing rhyme into a message is not always easy and you do it well. A poem of conviction about a nonsecular topic of truth that many equate with religion but is far broader and anyone should have the courage and conviction to speak despite times of falsehood and not knowing what to believe. Well done
September 11th, 2025 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written Shamrocker in good poetic style. Lacing rhyme into a message is not always easy and you do it well. A poem of conviction about a nonsecular topic of truth that many equate with religion but is far broader and anyone should have the courage and conviction to speak despite times of falsehood and not knowing what to believe. Well done
September 11th, 2025 18:36
God Was There
orchidee said:
Good write GS. He was gonna be there for KP too, but He didn\'t recognise her trout-like appearance! lol. He looks on the heart anyway; oh why do I only look on KP\'s outward appearance? Heehee.
September 8th, 2025 02:30
orchidee said:
Good write GS. He was gonna be there for KP too, but He didn\'t recognise her trout-like appearance! lol. He looks on the heart anyway; oh why do I only look on KP\'s outward appearance? Heehee.
September 8th, 2025 02:30
God Was There
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is heartfelt. You trace the hard places with such honesty, yet keep pointing back to God’s presence and patient love. A beautiful testimony of faith and gratitude. 🌹✝️🙏🐦⬛ A fave. Well done!
September 7th, 2025 18:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is heartfelt. You trace the hard places with such honesty, yet keep pointing back to God’s presence and patient love. A beautiful testimony of faith and gratitude. 🌹✝️🙏🐦⬛ A fave. Well done!
September 7th, 2025 18:42
Scarred but Not Broken
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is heartfelt. The way you turn scars from marks of pain into signs of survival and even healing...that’s powerful truth. And rooting it in God’s promise makes it all the more hopeful. Beautifully done. 🌹✝️🙏🐦⬛
September 7th, 2025 18:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is heartfelt. The way you turn scars from marks of pain into signs of survival and even healing...that’s powerful truth. And rooting it in God’s promise makes it all the more hopeful. Beautifully done. 🌹✝️🙏🐦⬛
September 7th, 2025 18:13
God Was There
NinjaGirl said:
I hope to get better at seeing it. Lovely poem!
September 7th, 2025 16:38
NinjaGirl said:
I hope to get better at seeing it. Lovely poem!
September 7th, 2025 16:38
God Was There
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of faith and devotion to God. Strong and nicely said.
September 7th, 2025 14:10
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of faith and devotion to God. Strong and nicely said.
September 7th, 2025 14:10
Scarred but Not Broken
orchidee said:
Good write GS. KP\'s been \'scarred\' for years, looking trout-like! Heehee.
September 6th, 2025 14:41
orchidee said:
Good write GS. KP\'s been \'scarred\' for years, looking trout-like! Heehee.
September 6th, 2025 14:41
Scarred but Not Broken
sorenbarrett said:
Adversity can create toughness and move us on. Nicely done
September 6th, 2025 14:02
sorenbarrett said:
Adversity can create toughness and move us on. Nicely done
September 6th, 2025 14:02
Our Story
orchidee said:
A better story than the horror story entitled \'KP and my marriage\' Heehee.
September 2nd, 2025 11:22
orchidee said:
A better story than the horror story entitled \'KP and my marriage\' Heehee.
September 2nd, 2025 11:22
Our Story
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is tender. The love of God woven into shared story and faith feels steady and real…it lifts right off the page. And that moment where the journey is framed as “our story” really struck me...it’s lived, breathed, and written together with the Spirit. Beautifully done, a blessing to read. 🌹✝️🙏🐦⬛
September 2nd, 2025 10:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is tender. The love of God woven into shared story and faith feels steady and real…it lifts right off the page. And that moment where the journey is framed as “our story” really struck me...it’s lived, breathed, and written together with the Spirit. Beautifully done, a blessing to read. 🌹✝️🙏🐦⬛
September 2nd, 2025 10:07
Our Story
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message sent in this poem of support and help to others through relating our own story. Nicely written with periodic rhyme and good flow. Well done
September 2nd, 2025 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message sent in this poem of support and help to others through relating our own story. Nicely written with periodic rhyme and good flow. Well done
September 2nd, 2025 07:35
My Heavenly Father
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done. The reminder that God wipes every tear and makes us new…it’s simple but profound. Your faith shines through clearly here, my friend and others will be blessed for it. I know I am. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2025 13:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done. The reminder that God wipes every tear and makes us new…it’s simple but profound. Your faith shines through clearly here, my friend and others will be blessed for it. I know I am. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2025 13:48
My Heavenly Father
sorenbarrett said:
Nice flow and rhyme in this poem of faith and belief Shamrocker. Very well said
September 1st, 2025 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
Nice flow and rhyme in this poem of faith and belief Shamrocker. Very well said
September 1st, 2025 08:49
The Heart of A Caregiver 2
sorenbarrett said:
There are those that do this for a living and then there are those that make it a life style. A lovely poem with a lovely message well written as well noting your continued use of working internal rhyme and good organization. Nicely done
August 28th, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
There are those that do this for a living and then there are those that make it a life style. A lovely poem with a lovely message well written as well noting your continued use of working internal rhyme and good organization. Nicely done
August 28th, 2025 08:21
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