Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
Getting to know each other
orchidee said:
In your comment, I\'m nervous of KP then, but I still feed her goodies - sewage three times a day. \'Behave, you\'re becoming grosser,\' Fido says to me. lol.
November 6th, 2025 10:47
orchidee said:
In your comment, I\'m nervous of KP then, but I still feed her goodies - sewage three times a day. \'Behave, you\'re becoming grosser,\' Fido says to me. lol.
November 6th, 2025 10:47
Getting to know each other
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Taliah\'s back! My friend, this reads wonderfully—warm, genuine, and easy to picture. You can feel the chemistry between Taliah and Henry right away. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 6th, 2025 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Taliah\'s back! My friend, this reads wonderfully—warm, genuine, and easy to picture. You can feel the chemistry between Taliah and Henry right away. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 6th, 2025 09:51
Getting to know each other
sorenbarrett said:
A short story that wends its way toward a message. Nicely done
November 6th, 2025 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
A short story that wends its way toward a message. Nicely done
November 6th, 2025 08:20
Taliah
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, as someone who’s witnessed the beauty and exhaustion of caregiving, this hits home. You capture the sacred, everyday miracle of simply showing up. Beautiful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 3rd, 2025 18:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, as someone who’s witnessed the beauty and exhaustion of caregiving, this hits home. You capture the sacred, everyday miracle of simply showing up. Beautiful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 3rd, 2025 18:28
Taliah
orchidee said:
And now my version - Tucker meets KP. Will you shut up, Fido says to me?! lol.
November 3rd, 2025 12:43
orchidee said:
And now my version - Tucker meets KP. Will you shut up, Fido says to me?! lol.
November 3rd, 2025 12:43
Taliah
sorenbarrett said:
And now the second chapter is in place and we are ready for plot development as the characters have been introduced. Well done
November 3rd, 2025 09:50
sorenbarrett said:
And now the second chapter is in place and we are ready for plot development as the characters have been introduced. Well done
November 3rd, 2025 09:50
Elsie Arrives!
orchidee said:
Does Elsie know KP? Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
November 3rd, 2025 03:39
orchidee said:
Does Elsie know KP? Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
November 3rd, 2025 03:39
Elsie Arrives!
sorenbarrett said:
And we have another saga ahead. Well done Shamrocker
November 2nd, 2025 15:48
sorenbarrett said:
And we have another saga ahead. Well done Shamrocker
November 2nd, 2025 15:48
Tucker’s Meeting
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this feels heartfelt and grounded…a snapshot of care, faith, and quiet perseverance. It moves with the rhythm of real lives intersecting. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2025 09:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this feels heartfelt and grounded…a snapshot of care, faith, and quiet perseverance. It moves with the rhythm of real lives intersecting. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2025 09:15
Tucker’s Meeting
orchidee said:
Good write GS. Does KP know Tucker? And how did she get in here?! lol.
October 27th, 2025 09:15
orchidee said:
Good write GS. Does KP know Tucker? And how did she get in here?! lol.
October 27th, 2025 09:15
Tucker’s Meeting
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter in the life and write of this story. Nicely written a footstep closer to its unraveling.
October 27th, 2025 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter in the life and write of this story. Nicely written a footstep closer to its unraveling.
October 27th, 2025 05:25
Meet Tucker!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That line about Henry teaching Tucker to grow food and build a home stands out…it says so much about legacy and love without ever needing to preach it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
October 20th, 2025 10:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That line about Henry teaching Tucker to grow food and build a home stands out…it says so much about legacy and love without ever needing to preach it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
October 20th, 2025 10:54
Meet Tucker!
sorenbarrett said:
Shamrocker you have returned to your old style and that is nice. Love the way you weave rhyme into the story in such a natural way. Well done will stay tuned
October 20th, 2025 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
Shamrocker you have returned to your old style and that is nice. Love the way you weave rhyme into the story in such a natural way. Well done will stay tuned
October 20th, 2025 05:32
This Road is Not Easy
orchidee said:
Good write GS. Meanwhile, it\'s an easy path for me, being \'orrible to KP! Do I realise it\'s a downward slope for me? heehee.
October 19th, 2025 12:57
orchidee said:
Good write GS. Meanwhile, it\'s an easy path for me, being \'orrible to KP! Do I realise it\'s a downward slope for me? heehee.
October 19th, 2025 12:57
This Road is Not Easy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’ve walked roads like this...ones that twist and test you until faith is all that’s left. It would be a lie to say I\'m not walking that road now, as a matter of fac. Your words hit that realization, and they bring comfort too. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Thank you, my friend! God bless you! ✝️
October 19th, 2025 11:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’ve walked roads like this...ones that twist and test you until faith is all that’s left. It would be a lie to say I\'m not walking that road now, as a matter of fac. Your words hit that realization, and they bring comfort too. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Thank you, my friend! God bless you! ✝️
October 19th, 2025 11:20
This Road is Not Easy
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and belief built on past experience. Nicely crafted with rhyme an your own style of meter. Well done
October 19th, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and belief built on past experience. Nicely crafted with rhyme an your own style of meter. Well done
October 19th, 2025 04:47
No Matter What
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
I bet you know I\'m gonna say this - No matter what, I will still be \'orrible to KP! lol. When will this stop? heehee.
October 15th, 2025 01:57
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
I bet you know I\'m gonna say this - No matter what, I will still be \'orrible to KP! lol. When will this stop? heehee.
October 15th, 2025 01:57
No Matter What
sorenbarrett said:
Judgmental is what people are, some more than others. Not the right cloths, not attractive enough, too fat, too short, not the right religion, wrong skin color, too old, too young, too dumb the fault is not with the one being judged but with the judge. A lovely write Shamrocker
October 14th, 2025 16:56
sorenbarrett said:
Judgmental is what people are, some more than others. Not the right cloths, not attractive enough, too fat, too short, not the right religion, wrong skin color, too old, too young, too dumb the fault is not with the one being judged but with the judge. A lovely write Shamrocker
October 14th, 2025 16:56
Lessons learned in Grief
orchidee said:
A fine write GS. All KP grieves over is if my piggy-bank is empty and I can\'t give here more money for botox! lol.
October 13th, 2025 10:23
orchidee said:
A fine write GS. All KP grieves over is if my piggy-bank is empty and I can\'t give here more money for botox! lol.
October 13th, 2025 10:23
Lessons learned in Grief
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this piece carries grief’s weight with tenderness and light. The lessons are hard-won but full of hope…you turn mourning into ministry here. Deeply moving, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 13th, 2025 09:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this piece carries grief’s weight with tenderness and light. The lessons are hard-won but full of hope…you turn mourning into ministry here. Deeply moving, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 13th, 2025 09:43
Lessons learned in Grief
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting set of lessons shared in this poetic write. Well done
October 13th, 2025 08:06
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting set of lessons shared in this poetic write. Well done
October 13th, 2025 08:06
Never Forgotten
Neville said:
Although I follow a different path without any spiritual figurehead I respect all faiths and you have penned a splendid bit o poetry here and which many shall undoubtedly enjoy .. Neville 😎👍
October 13th, 2025 02:18
Neville said:
Although I follow a different path without any spiritual figurehead I respect all faiths and you have penned a splendid bit o poetry here and which many shall undoubtedly enjoy .. Neville 😎👍
October 13th, 2025 02:18
Never Forgotten
Poetic Licence said:
An well written expression of faith inviting others to follow their belief
October 11th, 2025 15:01
Poetic Licence said:
An well written expression of faith inviting others to follow their belief
October 11th, 2025 15:01
Never Forgotten
orchidee said:
Yep, we\'re not forgotten, but I\'m the one that forgets..... forgets KP regularly, that is! lol.
October 11th, 2025 13:01
orchidee said:
Yep, we\'re not forgotten, but I\'m the one that forgets..... forgets KP regularly, that is! lol.
October 11th, 2025 13:01
Never Forgotten
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of faith and belief that assures and encourages others to join in this belief. Very nicely crafted
October 11th, 2025 10:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of faith and belief that assures and encourages others to join in this belief. Very nicely crafted
October 11th, 2025 10:58
To be Brave
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is strong, GenXer...bravery defined as gospel truth, repentance, forgiveness, courage to let go. The luggage metaphor says it all. True strength rests in grace. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 30th, 2025 18:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is strong, GenXer...bravery defined as gospel truth, repentance, forgiveness, courage to let go. The luggage metaphor says it all. True strength rests in grace. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 30th, 2025 18:05
To be Brave
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, easier to go downhill, I suppose, than uphill. And yep, I knows what being brave is - well, I married KP! heehee.
September 30th, 2025 11:27
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, easier to go downhill, I suppose, than uphill. And yep, I knows what being brave is - well, I married KP! heehee.
September 30th, 2025 11:27
To be Brave
sorenbarrett said:
You have a natural way of using rhyme and near rhyme to hold the interest of the reader in your message. Poetry to me is promoting feeling by the use of words that can be in rhyme or sublime metaphoric or unthought of connections to thought that inspire new ways of looking at something. A write that is powerful and well done.
September 30th, 2025 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
You have a natural way of using rhyme and near rhyme to hold the interest of the reader in your message. Poetry to me is promoting feeling by the use of words that can be in rhyme or sublime metaphoric or unthought of connections to thought that inspire new ways of looking at something. A write that is powerful and well done.
September 30th, 2025 06:39
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