Comments received on poems by GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀
Life’s Journey
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon… this reads like a map drawn from experience. Grief, pruning, forgiveness, trust… each one shaping the road. And you closing with “we need only His guidance and an open, but pure heart…” amen. Beautiful reflection. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 19th, 2026 14:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon… this reads like a map drawn from experience. Grief, pruning, forgiveness, trust… each one shaping the road. And you closing with “we need only His guidance and an open, but pure heart…” amen. Beautiful reflection. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 19th, 2026 14:49
Life’s Journey
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with internal rhyme and good flow it speaks of being positive and looking at even adversity as a teacher and opportunity to grow stronger. Lovely
February 18th, 2026 15:02
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with internal rhyme and good flow it speaks of being positive and looking at even adversity as a teacher and opportunity to grow stronger. Lovely
February 18th, 2026 15:02
His love is Real
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, I recognize that rhythm of leaning into something larger when life feels heavy. The way you speak about trust growing deeper through the Word feels experiential, not borrowed. There’s vulnerability in admitting it’s not easy at first. That honesty matters and modeling it matters, which you do through your poetry, my friend. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, I recognize that rhythm of leaning into something larger when life feels heavy. The way you speak about trust growing deeper through the Word feels experiential, not borrowed. There’s vulnerability in admitting it’s not easy at first. That honesty matters and modeling it matters, which you do through your poetry, my friend. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:26
His love is Real
orchidee said:
Good write GS. Yes, He says to come to Him, all who are weary and heavy laden. It surely includes \'burdens\' of sins, though does nor say so particularly. So it could be any sort of burden, anything weighing us down. KP weighs me down, but that\'s another matter! lol.
February 17th, 2026 03:31
orchidee said:
Good write GS. Yes, He says to come to Him, all who are weary and heavy laden. It surely includes \'burdens\' of sins, though does nor say so particularly. So it could be any sort of burden, anything weighing us down. KP weighs me down, but that\'s another matter! lol.
February 17th, 2026 03:31
No Parent is Perfect
sorenbarrett said:
Parenting a difficult job have done it with four kids. You do it the best you can and hope that it is good enough. Well written it reports the difficulties and notes that no one is perfect. Well written
February 15th, 2026 20:37
sorenbarrett said:
Parenting a difficult job have done it with four kids. You do it the best you can and hope that it is good enough. Well written it reports the difficulties and notes that no one is perfect. Well written
February 15th, 2026 20:37
Alone with God
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, my dear friend, this is heartfelt and steady from beginning to end. The repetition of “In my time alone with God” gives it a grounding rhythm…like a refrain you return to when life feels heavy. It reads as testimony, not theory. That sincerity carries it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, my dear friend, this is heartfelt and steady from beginning to end. The repetition of “In my time alone with God” gives it a grounding rhythm…like a refrain you return to when life feels heavy. It reads as testimony, not theory. That sincerity carries it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:20
Alone with God
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Sometimes I miss the rhymes in prose layouts. But my skills don\'t extend as far as writing hymn-poems that rhyme mid-line AND end of line.
February 13th, 2026 15:06
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Sometimes I miss the rhymes in prose layouts. But my skills don\'t extend as far as writing hymn-poems that rhyme mid-line AND end of line.
February 13th, 2026 15:06
Alone with God
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with internal rhyme and very good flow. Very nicely done
February 13th, 2026 15:02
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with internal rhyme and very good flow. Very nicely done
February 13th, 2026 15:02
What Makes a Person Old?
sorenbarrett said:
A person is only as old as they feel. The mind stay young in most of us and there is much to impart in the way of wisdom. The world values youth because they can be exploited for purchases that run the economy and cheap labor. They too will grow old one day and be discarded. There is jealousy in that the old hold most of the wealth but do not part with it easily. A lovely poem of value in the old.
February 12th, 2026 08:23
sorenbarrett said:
A person is only as old as they feel. The mind stay young in most of us and there is much to impart in the way of wisdom. The world values youth because they can be exploited for purchases that run the economy and cheap labor. They too will grow old one day and be discarded. There is jealousy in that the old hold most of the wealth but do not part with it easily. A lovely poem of value in the old.
February 12th, 2026 08:23
He Lifts Her Up
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this speaks with calm certainty. The acknowledgment that people “see what they choose to believe” gives the faith here texture…not blind, but tested. And that final image of being called beloved and lifted up closes it with comfort. Strong and sincere work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 11th, 2026 13:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this speaks with calm certainty. The acknowledgment that people “see what they choose to believe” gives the faith here texture…not blind, but tested. And that final image of being called beloved and lifted up closes it with comfort. Strong and sincere work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 11th, 2026 13:16
He Lifts Her Up
sorenbarrett said:
Most people need someone to back them up lift them up and hold them up some times. Very nicely written
February 11th, 2026 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
Most people need someone to back them up lift them up and hold them up some times. Very nicely written
February 11th, 2026 08:45
He Lifts Her Up
2781 said:
I am sure of this, that he who started a good work in you will carry it on until completion
February 11th, 2026 07:48
2781 said:
I am sure of this, that he who started a good work in you will carry it on until completion
February 11th, 2026 07:48
Just A While Longer
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This resonates with seasons I know well…the slow reshaping, the misunderstandings, the waiting without guarantees. You give language to that quiet middle space where faith is tested but not abandoned. I feel like we are writing from a similar place today. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 10th, 2026 13:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This resonates with seasons I know well…the slow reshaping, the misunderstandings, the waiting without guarantees. You give language to that quiet middle space where faith is tested but not abandoned. I feel like we are writing from a similar place today. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 10th, 2026 13:03
Just A While Longer
orchidee said:
Your messages - often prophetic - are often relevant to me, in my sensible times, thank you.
But not when I blunder on \'meanwhile\', being horrible to KP. it has to be done in my nutty moments. lol.
February 10th, 2026 09:34
orchidee said:
Your messages - often prophetic - are often relevant to me, in my sensible times, thank you.
But not when I blunder on \'meanwhile\', being horrible to KP. it has to be done in my nutty moments. lol.
February 10th, 2026 09:34
Just A While Longer
sorenbarrett said:
A most upbeat poem of faith and belief that gives strength to many peoples days. Nicely written with internal rhyme and good flow. Nicely done Shamrocker.
February 10th, 2026 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most upbeat poem of faith and belief that gives strength to many peoples days. Nicely written with internal rhyme and good flow. Nicely done Shamrocker.
February 10th, 2026 07:26
The Sun Always Shines Again
orchidee said:
Good write GS. I\'m sure we\'ve all experienced at least some of the situations you write about.
It would be awful if the KP and I situation were real!
February 9th, 2026 03:51
orchidee said:
Good write GS. I\'m sure we\'ve all experienced at least some of the situations you write about.
It would be awful if the KP and I situation were real!
February 9th, 2026 03:51
The Sun Always Shines Again
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this is a gentle and faithful reflection, my friend. The way you move from storm to sunlight, pain to rest, carries both honesty and hope. It never rushes the healing…it simply stays with it. Grateful for your work! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 9th, 2026 01:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this is a gentle and faithful reflection, my friend. The way you move from storm to sunlight, pain to rest, carries both honesty and hope. It never rushes the healing…it simply stays with it. Grateful for your work! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 9th, 2026 01:21
The Sun Always Shines Again
sorenbarrett said:
Shamrocker your writing has evolved and in this piece it shows such nice work in the wording that contains near rhyme internally placed and in good placing of meter that carries the reader onward. Very nicely done and a fave keep up the good work
February 8th, 2026 15:51
sorenbarrett said:
Shamrocker your writing has evolved and in this piece it shows such nice work in the wording that contains near rhyme internally placed and in good placing of meter that carries the reader onward. Very nicely done and a fave keep up the good work
February 8th, 2026 15:51
They Lied
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this is compassionate and steady. You name the lies plainly, then answer them with belonging, formation, and time. The image of pruning toward peace is very effective, and the tone invites trust rather than fear. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 5th, 2026 18:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this is compassionate and steady. You name the lies plainly, then answer them with belonging, formation, and time. The image of pruning toward peace is very effective, and the tone invites trust rather than fear. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 5th, 2026 18:18
They Lied
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Nope, I never lied when I said \'Never a day goes by when I\'m not horrible to KP!\' heehee.
February 4th, 2026 14:59
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Nope, I never lied when I said \'Never a day goes by when I\'m not horrible to KP!\' heehee.
February 4th, 2026 14:59
They Lied
sorenbarrett said:
I love to see your perseverance to your theme of belief and faith. It shows courage to put it out in front of all and a steadfast direction in your writing. Nicely done
February 4th, 2026 13:36
sorenbarrett said:
I love to see your perseverance to your theme of belief and faith. It shows courage to put it out in front of all and a steadfast direction in your writing. Nicely done
February 4th, 2026 13:36
Only God Can
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this poem reads like a statement of trust. Pain is not denied, but gathered and turned toward meaning through unconditional love. The voice is confident, grounded, and offered without apology. Thoughtful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 2nd, 2026 14:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this poem reads like a statement of trust. Pain is not denied, but gathered and turned toward meaning through unconditional love. The voice is confident, grounded, and offered without apology. Thoughtful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 2nd, 2026 14:05
Only God Can
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
In a steady progression, I make KP\'s life more miserable every day. Woof! Repent! Fidos says to me. lol.
February 2nd, 2026 14:01
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
In a steady progression, I make KP\'s life more miserable every day. Woof! Repent! Fidos says to me. lol.
February 2nd, 2026 14:01
Only God Can
sorenbarrett said:
A strong statement of forgiveness and acceptance. A lovely poem and the closest that I think of this act of love is a mother. Well done
February 2nd, 2026 08:51
sorenbarrett said:
A strong statement of forgiveness and acceptance. A lovely poem and the closest that I think of this act of love is a mother. Well done
February 2nd, 2026 08:51
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