Comments received on poems by GenXer Sharon ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ€



Our Children
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Sharon, this carries a real ache for the younger generation and the contradictions they inherit. The tension between being told to shine while simultaneously being taught to disappear comes through painfully clearly here. Thereโ€™s genuine compassion and concern at the center of this piece. Strong work, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

May 27th, 2026 21:57

Experiences of the Heart
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Sharon, this carries a great deal of compassion and lived honesty. The sense of people quietly carrying wounds while still trying to move toward healing comes through clearly all the way through. Thereโ€™s real hope here, but it feels earned rather than forced. Beautiful piece, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

May 27th, 2026 10:24

Our Children
sorenbarrett said:

It seems so for each generation and whether it is true or not history will tell. A wonderful write that has good internal rhyme as well. I have my own ideas on this but no proof to validate them.

May 27th, 2026 08:59

Experiences of the Heart
orchidee said:

Good write GS.

May 26th, 2026 14:12

Experiences of the Heart
sorenbarrett said:

A plea to put things in god\'s hands. Nicely written

May 26th, 2026 13:05

Our Country
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Sharon, this comes from a deeply sincere place...and that sincerity is what carries the piece. Beneath all the frustration and division youโ€™re describing, thereโ€™s still hope here for people to actually listen to one another again instead of tearing each other apart. โ€œBe the difference you want to seeโ€ feels like the heartbeat running through the whole write. Powerful piece, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

May 23rd, 2026 10:31

Our Country
orchidee said:

Good write GS.

May 23rd, 2026 02:02

Our Country
Doggerel Dave said:

I wish you (and the rest of the world) luck...

May 23rd, 2026 01:43

Our Country
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful wish and hope. It usually takes a tragedy to put our differences aside. Well written.

May 22nd, 2026 15:03

His gentle Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Sharon, this carries such a calming and reassuring spirit through it. The poem feels less like performance and more like someone sincerely reaching out a hand to another weary soul. Thereโ€™s real comfort in that gentleness. Beautiful write, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

May 21st, 2026 10:38

His gentle Love
orchidee said:

Good write GS. I been \'carrying\' KP for ages - not literally though! lol. Well, she hangs on, like a bad smell. I\'m horrible to her. lol.

May 21st, 2026 01:51

His gentle Love
Friendship said:

lovely said

May 20th, 2026 18:46

His gentle Love
sorenbarrett said:

A feeling that God knows and feels for us. A most lovely write

May 20th, 2026 16:25

The Journey to Healing
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Sharon, this really touched me. Thereโ€™s such a sincere heart behind these wordsโ€ฆthe kind that comes from someone who has actually walked through pain instead of just speaking about it from a distance. The encouragement here feels genuine and deeply compassionate. Beautiful write, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

May 18th, 2026 09:35

The Journey to Healing
David Wakeling said:

This is an amazing and wise view of the human condition with all its joys and failings.Turn to the Lord for healing.A lovely sentiment.Well done

May 17th, 2026 18:26

The Journey to Healing
Friendship said:

nicely done

May 17th, 2026 18:09

The Journey to Healing
sorenbarrett said:

Another good write of putting one\'s faith in God and he will take care of you. Nicely written

May 17th, 2026 17:25

Nothing Gained
NafisaSB said:

agree with your view - i share it too

May 17th, 2026 00:04

When the World Feels Heavy
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Sharon, this reads like a heartfelt reminder not to let despair settle permanently inside the soul. Faith, gratitude, nature, purpose, and simple daily beauty all work together here to gently push back against the heaviness of the world. Beautifully uplifting piece, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

May 16th, 2026 08:46

When the World Feels Heavy
DLewis88 said:

It\'s wonderful. I have my share of bad days. Day\'s where I feel like giving up on life.

May 15th, 2026 16:04

When the World Feels Heavy
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely written this poem of support and hope when the times are difficult and the day is dark, when the world is heavy and a burden on your shoulders it encourages faith and perseverance. Nicely done Sharon

May 15th, 2026 13:38

When the World Feels Heavy
orchidee said:

Good write GS.
What\'s heavy for me, meanwhile, is this ball and chain KP has put on my ankle, and thrown away the key for me to get free! lol. That\'ll teach me.
Can these escapades be true? lol.

May 15th, 2026 13:35

Itโ€™s All in How You Rise
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Sharon, this feels like someone speaking from lived hardship rather than abstract advice. The repeated call to rise again, even through betrayal and pain, gives the piece warmth and conviction. Wonderful write, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

May 14th, 2026 11:17

Itโ€™s All in How You Rise
sorenbarrett said:

Well written Sharon a most encouraging and positive write

May 13th, 2026 16:31

Godโ€™s Love Is
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Sharon, thereโ€™s such sincerity and warmth in this. It reads like a heartfelt testimony spoken from lived trust rather than abstraction. The repeated return to love, grace, and shelter gives the whole piece a calming steadiness. Beautiful write, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

May 12th, 2026 13:54

Godโ€™s Love Is
orchidee said:

Good write GS.

May 12th, 2026 10:13

Godโ€™s Love Is
2781 said:

Amen.

May 12th, 2026 08:41

Godโ€™s Love Is
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely write with good rhyme and flow it speaks to the heart. Nicely done and a fave

May 12th, 2026 07:02

Nothing Gained
2781 said:

Amen.

May 10th, 2026 10:31

Nothing Gained
sorenbarrett said:

A strong message gets the fave. Yes I say never judge because you never have all the sides of the story

May 9th, 2026 19:30

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