Comments received on poems by GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀
Old Fashioned Delights! 🥨🍩🍦🎂
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this pulled me right in…there’s a warm, small-town feel to it that makes the whole scene easy to step into. It feels like coming back to something unfinished, with people who still know you. That stays with me. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 15:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this pulled me right in…there’s a warm, small-town feel to it that makes the whole scene easy to step into. It feels like coming back to something unfinished, with people who still know you. That stays with me. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 15:42
Old Fashioned Delights! 🥨🍩🍦🎂
sorenbarrett said:
Another piece of the story falls in place and the next pieces will come one by one. Nicely written Sharon
April 19th, 2026 15:18
sorenbarrett said:
Another piece of the story falls in place and the next pieces will come one by one. Nicely written Sharon
April 19th, 2026 15:18
Bessy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and it took a bit out of me. That aside, your poem has a lived-in feel here…Bessy comes across as someone shaped by her choices, steady but not untouched. The quiet hint of Blake returning adds just enough tension to carry it forward without forcing anything. It feels natural, grounded, and worth following. Strong start. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and it took a bit out of me. That aside, your poem has a lived-in feel here…Bessy comes across as someone shaped by her choices, steady but not untouched. The quiet hint of Blake returning adds just enough tension to carry it forward without forcing anything. It feels natural, grounded, and worth following. Strong start. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:51
Bessy
Friendship said:
Great story,I will be for more. Your story is about Bessy\'s emotional journey as she navigates the complexities of her past relationships, particularly with Blake, while also striving to maintain her independence and optimism in her life and business.
April 15th, 2026 14:56
Friendship said:
Great story,I will be for more. Your story is about Bessy\'s emotional journey as she navigates the complexities of her past relationships, particularly with Blake, while also striving to maintain her independence and optimism in her life and business.
April 15th, 2026 14:56
Meet Blake!
James Michael said:
I can relate to this one. My hometown and young love is close at heart. May we all continue.
April 14th, 2026 19:04
James Michael said:
I can relate to this one. My hometown and young love is close at heart. May we all continue.
April 14th, 2026 19:04
Meet Blake!
Friendship said:
Great write. Your poem revolves around nostalgia and the complexities of returning to one’s roots. It explores themes of memory, regret, and the passage of time, as Blake reflects on his past and the choices he made.
April 14th, 2026 18:42
Friendship said:
Great write. Your poem revolves around nostalgia and the complexities of returning to one’s roots. It explores themes of memory, regret, and the passage of time, as Blake reflects on his past and the choices he made.
April 14th, 2026 18:42
Meet Blake!
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like old times and I await the continuation
April 14th, 2026 14:40
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like old times and I await the continuation
April 14th, 2026 14:40
Do Your Best
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about seeking what is right. Nicely worded. Well done
April 13th, 2026 14:15
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about seeking what is right. Nicely worded. Well done
April 13th, 2026 14:15
Do Your Best
orchidee said:
Good write GS. Yes, we may read \'principalities, power,s dominions, etc\' and just pass over them, as it were, as though they were some nebulous things \'out there\' - or say \'Hmm\' and pass on to the next chapter. They are surely unseen spiritual forces, and not all of them are good.
April 13th, 2026 09:33
orchidee said:
Good write GS. Yes, we may read \'principalities, power,s dominions, etc\' and just pass over them, as it were, as though they were some nebulous things \'out there\' - or say \'Hmm\' and pass on to the next chapter. They are surely unseen spiritual forces, and not all of them are good.
April 13th, 2026 09:33
Do Your Best
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon… this carries a real weight of care…reaching toward people who are in the middle of that inner battle. That tension between wanting to help and not being able to force it feels very real, and you stayed with it honestly. Strong, heartfelt piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 09:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon… this carries a real weight of care…reaching toward people who are in the middle of that inner battle. That tension between wanting to help and not being able to force it feels very real, and you stayed with it honestly. Strong, heartfelt piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 09:10
We Have A Choice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, I know that turning…that place where things fall apart and something deeper begins to speak. This speaks to me. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 6th, 2026 09:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, I know that turning…that place where things fall apart and something deeper begins to speak. This speaks to me. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 6th, 2026 09:53
We Have A Choice
sorenbarrett said:
There is good internal rhyme in this free verse plea for following God. Nicely done
April 6th, 2026 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
There is good internal rhyme in this free verse plea for following God. Nicely done
April 6th, 2026 08:59
I Choose to Believe
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, I know that kind of turning…when you look at who you were and who you’re becoming, and realize grace met you there. It doesn’t erase the roadblocks, but it changes how you walk them. This speaks to me. Strong piece. May you have a profoundly meaningful Good Friday, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, I know that kind of turning…when you look at who you were and who you’re becoming, and realize grace met you there. It doesn’t erase the roadblocks, but it changes how you walk them. This speaks to me. Strong piece. May you have a profoundly meaningful Good Friday, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:06
I Choose to Believe
sorenbarrett said:
A strong statement of faith and conviction. Well written Sharon
April 3rd, 2026 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
A strong statement of faith and conviction. Well written Sharon
April 3rd, 2026 06:55
His Love will Pull You Through
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. God\'s love will! Sharon, there’s a clear strength in this… especially in how you return again and again to the idea that God\'s love carries through every trial. It speaks into a difficult world without losing its footing. It’s steady, direct, and meant to lift others up. Well written, my dear friend. I pray you are having a blessed Holy Week. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2026 08:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. God\'s love will! Sharon, there’s a clear strength in this… especially in how you return again and again to the idea that God\'s love carries through every trial. It speaks into a difficult world without losing its footing. It’s steady, direct, and meant to lift others up. Well written, my dear friend. I pray you are having a blessed Holy Week. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2026 08:56
His Love will Pull You Through
sorenbarrett said:
Another call to faith and trust in God. It is motivating and well written with good flow. Very nicely done Sharon
April 2nd, 2026 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
Another call to faith and trust in God. It is motivating and well written with good flow. Very nicely done Sharon
April 2nd, 2026 06:26
Together
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, that question “are you sure?” after “we’re in this together”…that’s the moment that really lands. It stops everything and makes the reader sit with it. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 10:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, that question “are you sure?” after “we’re in this together”…that’s the moment that really lands. It stops everything and makes the reader sit with it. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 10:09
Life Is Full of Challenges
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, there’s a grounded honesty in this that really lands. The way you speak to struggle, growth, and supporting one another carries a steady encouragement throughout. It feels personal, but also open to others walking their own path. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 09:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, there’s a grounded honesty in this that really lands. The way you speak to struggle, growth, and supporting one another carries a steady encouragement throughout. It feels personal, but also open to others walking their own path. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 09:43
Together
sorenbarrett said:
Understanding the key to avoiding conflict. A wonderful poem that sends its message well. Very nicely done
March 30th, 2026 07:46
sorenbarrett said:
Understanding the key to avoiding conflict. A wonderful poem that sends its message well. Very nicely done
March 30th, 2026 07:46
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