Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker โ๏ธ
Through All of It
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of unconditional acceptance in this poem that leave a sense of safety and security. Very nicely said
January 17th, 2026 10:22
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of unconditional acceptance in this poem that leave a sense of safety and security. Very nicely said
January 17th, 2026 10:22
Through All of It
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a steady declaration of trust shaped by time. The movement from childhood through failure, return, and resolve feels grounded and sincere. Ending with dependence rather than certainty makes it feel true. Well shared. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 17th, 2026 09:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a steady declaration of trust shaped by time. The movement from childhood through failure, return, and resolve feels grounded and sincere. Ending with dependence rather than certainty makes it feel true. Well shared. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 17th, 2026 09:30
We Try
orchidee said:
Good write GS. I try....... to be nice to KP. Why do I always fail?! lol. (cos I fail on purpose. heehee). I am horrible to her. When will this stop, Fido asks me.
January 17th, 2026 03:15
orchidee said:
Good write GS. I try....... to be nice to KP. Why do I always fail?! lol. (cos I fail on purpose. heehee). I am horrible to her. When will this stop, Fido asks me.
January 17th, 2026 03:15
We Try
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this resonates. Learning when to act and when to release someone into their own process is hard-won wisdom. Your words reflect that balance with humility, dear friend. Well done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 16th, 2026 23:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this resonates. Learning when to act and when to release someone into their own process is hard-won wisdom. Your words reflect that balance with humility, dear friend. Well done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 16th, 2026 23:18
We Try
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reliance with internal rhyme as well. Nicely written it make the author\'s position clear. Well done
January 16th, 2026 07:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reliance with internal rhyme as well. Nicely written it make the author\'s position clear. Well done
January 16th, 2026 07:56
Your Past Belongs in the Trash
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is thoughtful and grounded. The everyday images make grace feel livable, not abstractโฆa choice repeated until it finally sticks. You offer encouragement without pressure...which matters. Well done, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 13th, 2026 11:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is thoughtful and grounded. The everyday images make grace feel livable, not abstractโฆa choice repeated until it finally sticks. You offer encouragement without pressure...which matters. Well done, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 13th, 2026 11:20
Your Past Belongs in the Trash
orchidee said:
Good write GS. I\'m sorting the trash cans, for something for KP\'s dinner. I am terrible. lol. But then she put me in a trash can and threw me out. Doh!
January 13th, 2026 02:59
orchidee said:
Good write GS. I\'m sorting the trash cans, for something for KP\'s dinner. I am terrible. lol. But then she put me in a trash can and threw me out. Doh!
January 13th, 2026 02:59
Your Past Belongs in the Trash
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of forgiveness. I believe that before one can ask forgiveness of another one must forgive themselves. Not forget or one would not learn but forgive knowing that you have made good on what you did and that it won\'t happen again. Nice write
January 12th, 2026 09:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of forgiveness. I believe that before one can ask forgiveness of another one must forgive themselves. Not forget or one would not learn but forgive knowing that you have made good on what you did and that it won\'t happen again. Nice write
January 12th, 2026 09:54
He Lights the Way
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Ohh, why do I go from light and plunge into deepest darkness? Cos I married KP! heehee.
January 10th, 2026 11:11
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Ohh, why do I go from light and plunge into deepest darkness? Cos I married KP! heehee.
January 10th, 2026 11:11
He Lights the Way
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is faith offered as companionship, not correction. You acknowledge struggle, invite trust, and leave space for each personโs own path to unfold. Grounded, caring, and sincere. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 10th, 2026 10:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is faith offered as companionship, not correction. You acknowledge struggle, invite trust, and leave space for each personโs own path to unfold. Grounded, caring, and sincere. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 10th, 2026 10:55
He Lights the Way
sorenbarrett said:
Faith and belief are powerful tools that give many the extra energy needed to accomplish a task. Well written
January 10th, 2026 09:47
sorenbarrett said:
Faith and belief are powerful tools that give many the extra energy needed to accomplish a task. Well written
January 10th, 2026 09:47
It Doesnโt Work
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I connect with the recognition that doing everything alone only takes us so far. The way you frame acceptance as something received, not earned, feels grounded and sincere. Well done, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 9th, 2026 10:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I connect with the recognition that doing everything alone only takes us so far. The way you frame acceptance as something received, not earned, feels grounded and sincere. Well done, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 9th, 2026 10:52
It Doesnโt Work
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Yes, I told KP about her botox: \'It doesn\'t work!\' heehee.
January 9th, 2026 09:59
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Yes, I told KP about her botox: \'It doesn\'t work!\' heehee.
January 9th, 2026 09:59
It Doesnโt Work
sorenbarrett said:
Another good poem of faith and belief. Relying on a God to carry one through. Nicely composed
January 9th, 2026 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
Another good poem of faith and belief. Relying on a God to carry one through. Nicely composed
January 9th, 2026 07:22
It will be Ok
orchidee said:
A fine Ok write GS.
Meanwhile though - boo hoo, it will never be OK with KP! heehee. Do shut up Orchi, Fids says to me. lol.
January 7th, 2026 11:35
orchidee said:
A fine Ok write GS.
Meanwhile though - boo hoo, it will never be OK with KP! heehee. Do shut up Orchi, Fids says to me. lol.
January 7th, 2026 11:35
Thereโs Purpose in Everything
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Iโve had seasons where being still was harder than doing anything else, and this meets that tension honestly. The reminder to release what canโt be controlled feels grounded and real. Fantastic write, my friend.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 7th, 2026 09:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Iโve had seasons where being still was harder than doing anything else, and this meets that tension honestly. The reminder to release what canโt be controlled feels grounded and real. Fantastic write, my friend.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 7th, 2026 09:20
It will be Ok
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a steady hand on the shoulder. It speaks calm into the middle of the storm and refuses panic. Thereโs reassurance here without pressure, and that matters. Thank you for offering that kind of presence. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 7th, 2026 09:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a steady hand on the shoulder. It speaks calm into the middle of the storm and refuses panic. Thereโs reassurance here without pressure, and that matters. Thank you for offering that kind of presence. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 7th, 2026 09:13
It will be Ok
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful and reassuring thought to carry with one. A lovely write
January 7th, 2026 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful and reassuring thought to carry with one. A lovely write
January 7th, 2026 08:24
Thereโs Purpose in Everything
orchidee said:
Good write GS. What IS the purpose of me being married to KP? I\'ve not got the foggiest idea! lol.
January 6th, 2026 09:45
orchidee said:
Good write GS. What IS the purpose of me being married to KP? I\'ve not got the foggiest idea! lol.
January 6th, 2026 09:45
Thereโs Purpose in Everything
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with good rhyme and near rhyme in a message that is worth listening too. A lovely work my friend
January 6th, 2026 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with good rhyme and near rhyme in a message that is worth listening too. A lovely work my friend
January 6th, 2026 07:35
The Treasure of Grace
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a devotional reflection grounded in encouragement. You frame grace as relationship rather than reward (amen to that), and by the end it feels personal and steady. Thank you for sharing this light. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ
January 4th, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a devotional reflection grounded in encouragement. You frame grace as relationship rather than reward (amen to that), and by the end it feels personal and steady. Thank you for sharing this light. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ
January 4th, 2026 09:19
The Treasure of Grace
orchidee said:
Good write GS. I have no earthly treasure - cos I married KP. She\'s nicked it all to pay for botox! lol.
January 3rd, 2026 12:05
orchidee said:
Good write GS. I have no earthly treasure - cos I married KP. She\'s nicked it all to pay for botox! lol.
January 3rd, 2026 12:05
The Treasure of Grace
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of faith and looking to a higher power for guidance and acceptance. Nicely written in such an upbeat manner
January 3rd, 2026 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of faith and looking to a higher power for guidance and acceptance. Nicely written in such an upbeat manner
January 3rd, 2026 08:45
A Beautiful Ending!
sorenbarrett said:
And the story continues. As for small coffee shops and diners they are my favorite unfortunately they are going away and I refuse to eat at a franchise. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
And the story continues. As for small coffee shops and diners they are my favorite unfortunately they are going away and I refuse to eat at a franchise. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 11:46
A Beautiful Ending!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! First comment! My friend, this is a gentle and satisfying conclusion. You let relationships unfold naturally and end on hope without tying everything in a bow. The coffee shop remains a living place, not just a setting, and that feels right. Excellent job! Happy New Year to you as well. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 1st, 2026 10:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! First comment! My friend, this is a gentle and satisfying conclusion. You let relationships unfold naturally and end on hope without tying everything in a bow. The coffee shop remains a living place, not just a setting, and that feels right. Excellent job! Happy New Year to you as well. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 1st, 2026 10:44
Finishing Touches and the Secrets Out!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this chapter holds community, continuity, and earned trust. The shop becomes a living thing again through shared work and unspoken history, and that final question invites us to stay a little longer. Itโs gentle storytelling with heart. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 28th, 2025 08:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this chapter holds community, continuity, and earned trust. The shop becomes a living thing again through shared work and unspoken history, and that final question invites us to stay a little longer. Itโs gentle storytelling with heart. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 28th, 2025 08:09
Finishing Touches and the Secrets Out!
sorenbarrett said:
Piece by piece the story is revealed and the puzzle comes together. Nicely done
December 28th, 2025 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
Piece by piece the story is revealed and the puzzle comes together. Nicely done
December 28th, 2025 07:13
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