Comments received on poems by GenXer Sharon ๐๐
Our Children
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this carries a real ache for the younger generation and the contradictions they inherit. The tension between being told to shine while simultaneously being taught to disappear comes through painfully clearly here. Thereโs genuine compassion and concern at the center of this piece. Strong work, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
May 27th, 2026 21:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this carries a real ache for the younger generation and the contradictions they inherit. The tension between being told to shine while simultaneously being taught to disappear comes through painfully clearly here. Thereโs genuine compassion and concern at the center of this piece. Strong work, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
May 27th, 2026 21:57
Experiences of the Heart
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this carries a great deal of compassion and lived honesty. The sense of people quietly carrying wounds while still trying to move toward healing comes through clearly all the way through. Thereโs real hope here, but it feels earned rather than forced. Beautiful piece, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
May 27th, 2026 10:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this carries a great deal of compassion and lived honesty. The sense of people quietly carrying wounds while still trying to move toward healing comes through clearly all the way through. Thereโs real hope here, but it feels earned rather than forced. Beautiful piece, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
May 27th, 2026 10:24
Our Children
sorenbarrett said:
It seems so for each generation and whether it is true or not history will tell. A wonderful write that has good internal rhyme as well. I have my own ideas on this but no proof to validate them.
May 27th, 2026 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
It seems so for each generation and whether it is true or not history will tell. A wonderful write that has good internal rhyme as well. I have my own ideas on this but no proof to validate them.
May 27th, 2026 08:59
Experiences of the Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to put things in god\'s hands. Nicely written
May 26th, 2026 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to put things in god\'s hands. Nicely written
May 26th, 2026 13:05
Our Country
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this comes from a deeply sincere place...and that sincerity is what carries the piece. Beneath all the frustration and division youโre describing, thereโs still hope here for people to actually listen to one another again instead of tearing each other apart. โBe the difference you want to seeโ feels like the heartbeat running through the whole write. Powerful piece, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
May 23rd, 2026 10:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this comes from a deeply sincere place...and that sincerity is what carries the piece. Beneath all the frustration and division youโre describing, thereโs still hope here for people to actually listen to one another again instead of tearing each other apart. โBe the difference you want to seeโ feels like the heartbeat running through the whole write. Powerful piece, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
May 23rd, 2026 10:31
Our Country
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful wish and hope. It usually takes a tragedy to put our differences aside. Well written.
May 22nd, 2026 15:03
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful wish and hope. It usually takes a tragedy to put our differences aside. Well written.
May 22nd, 2026 15:03
His gentle Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this carries such a calming and reassuring spirit through it. The poem feels less like performance and more like someone sincerely reaching out a hand to another weary soul. Thereโs real comfort in that gentleness. Beautiful write, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
May 21st, 2026 10:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this carries such a calming and reassuring spirit through it. The poem feels less like performance and more like someone sincerely reaching out a hand to another weary soul. Thereโs real comfort in that gentleness. Beautiful write, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
May 21st, 2026 10:38
His gentle Love
orchidee said:
Good write GS. I been \'carrying\' KP for ages - not literally though! lol. Well, she hangs on, like a bad smell. I\'m horrible to her. lol.
May 21st, 2026 01:51
orchidee said:
Good write GS. I been \'carrying\' KP for ages - not literally though! lol. Well, she hangs on, like a bad smell. I\'m horrible to her. lol.
May 21st, 2026 01:51
His gentle Love
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling that God knows and feels for us. A most lovely write
May 20th, 2026 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling that God knows and feels for us. A most lovely write
May 20th, 2026 16:25
The Journey to Healing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this really touched me. Thereโs such a sincere heart behind these wordsโฆthe kind that comes from someone who has actually walked through pain instead of just speaking about it from a distance. The encouragement here feels genuine and deeply compassionate. Beautiful write, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
May 18th, 2026 09:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this really touched me. Thereโs such a sincere heart behind these wordsโฆthe kind that comes from someone who has actually walked through pain instead of just speaking about it from a distance. The encouragement here feels genuine and deeply compassionate. Beautiful write, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
May 18th, 2026 09:35
The Journey to Healing
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing and wise view of the human condition with all its joys and failings.Turn to the Lord for healing.A lovely sentiment.Well done
May 17th, 2026 18:26
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing and wise view of the human condition with all its joys and failings.Turn to the Lord for healing.A lovely sentiment.Well done
May 17th, 2026 18:26
The Journey to Healing
sorenbarrett said:
Another good write of putting one\'s faith in God and he will take care of you. Nicely written
May 17th, 2026 17:25
sorenbarrett said:
Another good write of putting one\'s faith in God and he will take care of you. Nicely written
May 17th, 2026 17:25
When the World Feels Heavy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this reads like a heartfelt reminder not to let despair settle permanently inside the soul. Faith, gratitude, nature, purpose, and simple daily beauty all work together here to gently push back against the heaviness of the world. Beautifully uplifting piece, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
May 16th, 2026 08:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this reads like a heartfelt reminder not to let despair settle permanently inside the soul. Faith, gratitude, nature, purpose, and simple daily beauty all work together here to gently push back against the heaviness of the world. Beautifully uplifting piece, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
May 16th, 2026 08:46
When the World Feels Heavy
DLewis88 said:
It\'s wonderful. I have my share of bad days. Day\'s where I feel like giving up on life.
May 15th, 2026 16:04
DLewis88 said:
It\'s wonderful. I have my share of bad days. Day\'s where I feel like giving up on life.
May 15th, 2026 16:04
When the World Feels Heavy
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this poem of support and hope when the times are difficult and the day is dark, when the world is heavy and a burden on your shoulders it encourages faith and perseverance. Nicely done Sharon
May 15th, 2026 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this poem of support and hope when the times are difficult and the day is dark, when the world is heavy and a burden on your shoulders it encourages faith and perseverance. Nicely done Sharon
May 15th, 2026 13:38
When the World Feels Heavy
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
What\'s heavy for me, meanwhile, is this ball and chain KP has put on my ankle, and thrown away the key for me to get free! lol. That\'ll teach me.
Can these escapades be true? lol.
May 15th, 2026 13:35
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
What\'s heavy for me, meanwhile, is this ball and chain KP has put on my ankle, and thrown away the key for me to get free! lol. That\'ll teach me.
Can these escapades be true? lol.
May 15th, 2026 13:35
Itโs All in How You Rise
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this feels like someone speaking from lived hardship rather than abstract advice. The repeated call to rise again, even through betrayal and pain, gives the piece warmth and conviction. Wonderful write, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
May 14th, 2026 11:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this feels like someone speaking from lived hardship rather than abstract advice. The repeated call to rise again, even through betrayal and pain, gives the piece warmth and conviction. Wonderful write, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
May 14th, 2026 11:17
Itโs All in How You Rise
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Sharon a most encouraging and positive write
May 13th, 2026 16:31
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Sharon a most encouraging and positive write
May 13th, 2026 16:31
Godโs Love Is
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, thereโs such sincerity and warmth in this. It reads like a heartfelt testimony spoken from lived trust rather than abstraction. The repeated return to love, grace, and shelter gives the whole piece a calming steadiness. Beautiful write, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
May 12th, 2026 13:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, thereโs such sincerity and warmth in this. It reads like a heartfelt testimony spoken from lived trust rather than abstraction. The repeated return to love, grace, and shelter gives the whole piece a calming steadiness. Beautiful write, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
May 12th, 2026 13:54
Godโs Love Is
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write with good rhyme and flow it speaks to the heart. Nicely done and a fave
May 12th, 2026 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write with good rhyme and flow it speaks to the heart. Nicely done and a fave
May 12th, 2026 07:02
Nothing Gained
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message gets the fave. Yes I say never judge because you never have all the sides of the story
May 9th, 2026 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message gets the fave. Yes I say never judge because you never have all the sides of the story
May 9th, 2026 19:30
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