Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
A Common Ground
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this chapter carries heart, timing, and a bit of destiny woven through the small details…the photo, the memory, the cabin, the recognition. It moves with real gentleness. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 15th, 2025 07:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this chapter carries heart, timing, and a bit of destiny woven through the small details…the photo, the memory, the cabin, the recognition. It moves with real gentleness. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 15th, 2025 07:44
A Common Ground
orchidee said:
Good write GS. Alas, KP and I have no common ground. I only said \'I do\' and married her cos she hid the water that I add to my tipple to dilute it, and it made me tipsy! lol.
November 15th, 2025 03:19
orchidee said:
Good write GS. Alas, KP and I have no common ground. I only said \'I do\' and married her cos she hid the water that I add to my tipple to dilute it, and it made me tipsy! lol.
November 15th, 2025 03:19
A Common Ground
sorenbarrett said:
You have woven a most interesting tale here with great build up well planned in the writing. Nicely done Shamrocker
November 14th, 2025 15:48
sorenbarrett said:
You have woven a most interesting tale here with great build up well planned in the writing. Nicely done Shamrocker
November 14th, 2025 15:48
Companionship
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one blends humor, memory, and heartbreak so naturally…the Vermont reveal lands like a soft echo in the room. Loved this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 13th, 2025 15:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one blends humor, memory, and heartbreak so naturally…the Vermont reveal lands like a soft echo in the room. Loved this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 13th, 2025 15:17
Companionship
orchidee said:
Good write GS. I could do a story about KP and me, but it would be \'orrible! lol.
November 13th, 2025 14:42
orchidee said:
Good write GS. I could do a story about KP and me, but it would be \'orrible! lol.
November 13th, 2025 14:42
Companionship
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter done and the next with curiosity will have to wait. Nicely written Shamrocker prose suits your style nicely. Well done
November 13th, 2025 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter done and the next with curiosity will have to wait. Nicely written Shamrocker prose suits your style nicely. Well done
November 13th, 2025 06:29
End of Day One
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this piece shines with simple humanity. You gave us burnt pancakes, maple syrup, and the kind of love that shows up anyway. A wonderful continuation. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 10th, 2025 21:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this piece shines with simple humanity. You gave us burnt pancakes, maple syrup, and the kind of love that shows up anyway. A wonderful continuation. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 10th, 2025 21:14
End of Day One
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter completed in the caregiving saga. Nicely done it feels very human Shamrocker
November 10th, 2025 10:09
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter completed in the caregiving saga. Nicely done it feels very human Shamrocker
November 10th, 2025 10:09
Getting to know each other
orchidee said:
In your comment, I\'m nervous of KP then, but I still feed her goodies - sewage three times a day. \'Behave, you\'re becoming grosser,\' Fido says to me. lol.
November 6th, 2025 10:47
orchidee said:
In your comment, I\'m nervous of KP then, but I still feed her goodies - sewage three times a day. \'Behave, you\'re becoming grosser,\' Fido says to me. lol.
November 6th, 2025 10:47
Getting to know each other
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Taliah\'s back! My friend, this reads wonderfully—warm, genuine, and easy to picture. You can feel the chemistry between Taliah and Henry right away. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 6th, 2025 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Taliah\'s back! My friend, this reads wonderfully—warm, genuine, and easy to picture. You can feel the chemistry between Taliah and Henry right away. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 6th, 2025 09:51
Getting to know each other
sorenbarrett said:
A short story that wends its way toward a message. Nicely done
November 6th, 2025 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
A short story that wends its way toward a message. Nicely done
November 6th, 2025 08:20
Taliah
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, as someone who’s witnessed the beauty and exhaustion of caregiving, this hits home. You capture the sacred, everyday miracle of simply showing up. Beautiful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 3rd, 2025 18:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, as someone who’s witnessed the beauty and exhaustion of caregiving, this hits home. You capture the sacred, everyday miracle of simply showing up. Beautiful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 3rd, 2025 18:28
Taliah
orchidee said:
And now my version - Tucker meets KP. Will you shut up, Fido says to me?! lol.
November 3rd, 2025 12:43
orchidee said:
And now my version - Tucker meets KP. Will you shut up, Fido says to me?! lol.
November 3rd, 2025 12:43
Taliah
sorenbarrett said:
And now the second chapter is in place and we are ready for plot development as the characters have been introduced. Well done
November 3rd, 2025 09:50
sorenbarrett said:
And now the second chapter is in place and we are ready for plot development as the characters have been introduced. Well done
November 3rd, 2025 09:50
Elsie Arrives!
orchidee said:
Does Elsie know KP? Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
November 3rd, 2025 03:39
orchidee said:
Does Elsie know KP? Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
November 3rd, 2025 03:39
Elsie Arrives!
sorenbarrett said:
And we have another saga ahead. Well done Shamrocker
November 2nd, 2025 15:48
sorenbarrett said:
And we have another saga ahead. Well done Shamrocker
November 2nd, 2025 15:48
Tucker’s Meeting
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this feels heartfelt and grounded…a snapshot of care, faith, and quiet perseverance. It moves with the rhythm of real lives intersecting. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2025 09:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this feels heartfelt and grounded…a snapshot of care, faith, and quiet perseverance. It moves with the rhythm of real lives intersecting. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2025 09:15
Tucker’s Meeting
orchidee said:
Good write GS. Does KP know Tucker? And how did she get in here?! lol.
October 27th, 2025 09:15
orchidee said:
Good write GS. Does KP know Tucker? And how did she get in here?! lol.
October 27th, 2025 09:15
Tucker’s Meeting
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter in the life and write of this story. Nicely written a footstep closer to its unraveling.
October 27th, 2025 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter in the life and write of this story. Nicely written a footstep closer to its unraveling.
October 27th, 2025 05:25
Meet Tucker!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That line about Henry teaching Tucker to grow food and build a home stands out…it says so much about legacy and love without ever needing to preach it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
October 20th, 2025 10:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That line about Henry teaching Tucker to grow food and build a home stands out…it says so much about legacy and love without ever needing to preach it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
October 20th, 2025 10:54
Meet Tucker!
sorenbarrett said:
Shamrocker you have returned to your old style and that is nice. Love the way you weave rhyme into the story in such a natural way. Well done will stay tuned
October 20th, 2025 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
Shamrocker you have returned to your old style and that is nice. Love the way you weave rhyme into the story in such a natural way. Well done will stay tuned
October 20th, 2025 05:32
This Road is Not Easy
orchidee said:
Good write GS. Meanwhile, it\'s an easy path for me, being \'orrible to KP! Do I realise it\'s a downward slope for me? heehee.
October 19th, 2025 12:57
orchidee said:
Good write GS. Meanwhile, it\'s an easy path for me, being \'orrible to KP! Do I realise it\'s a downward slope for me? heehee.
October 19th, 2025 12:57
This Road is Not Easy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’ve walked roads like this...ones that twist and test you until faith is all that’s left. It would be a lie to say I\'m not walking that road now, as a matter of fac. Your words hit that realization, and they bring comfort too. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Thank you, my friend! God bless you! ✝️
October 19th, 2025 11:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’ve walked roads like this...ones that twist and test you until faith is all that’s left. It would be a lie to say I\'m not walking that road now, as a matter of fac. Your words hit that realization, and they bring comfort too. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Thank you, my friend! God bless you! ✝️
October 19th, 2025 11:20
This Road is Not Easy
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and belief built on past experience. Nicely crafted with rhyme an your own style of meter. Well done
October 19th, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and belief built on past experience. Nicely crafted with rhyme an your own style of meter. Well done
October 19th, 2025 04:47
No Matter What
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
I bet you know I\'m gonna say this - No matter what, I will still be \'orrible to KP! lol. When will this stop? heehee.
October 15th, 2025 01:57
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
I bet you know I\'m gonna say this - No matter what, I will still be \'orrible to KP! lol. When will this stop? heehee.
October 15th, 2025 01:57
No Matter What
sorenbarrett said:
Judgmental is what people are, some more than others. Not the right cloths, not attractive enough, too fat, too short, not the right religion, wrong skin color, too old, too young, too dumb the fault is not with the one being judged but with the judge. A lovely write Shamrocker
October 14th, 2025 16:56
sorenbarrett said:
Judgmental is what people are, some more than others. Not the right cloths, not attractive enough, too fat, too short, not the right religion, wrong skin color, too old, too young, too dumb the fault is not with the one being judged but with the judge. A lovely write Shamrocker
October 14th, 2025 16:56
Lessons learned in Grief
orchidee said:
A fine write GS. All KP grieves over is if my piggy-bank is empty and I can\'t give here more money for botox! lol.
October 13th, 2025 10:23
orchidee said:
A fine write GS. All KP grieves over is if my piggy-bank is empty and I can\'t give here more money for botox! lol.
October 13th, 2025 10:23
Lessons learned in Grief
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this piece carries grief’s weight with tenderness and light. The lessons are hard-won but full of hope…you turn mourning into ministry here. Deeply moving, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 13th, 2025 09:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this piece carries grief’s weight with tenderness and light. The lessons are hard-won but full of hope…you turn mourning into ministry here. Deeply moving, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 13th, 2025 09:43
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