Comments received on poems by GenXer Sharon ππ
A Last Time for Everything
sorenbarrett said:
Take the time and opportunity to speak to someone while the chance is available for one never knows when that chance may no longer be available. Well written Sharon
June 7th, 2026 10:58
sorenbarrett said:
Take the time and opportunity to speak to someone while the chance is available for one never knows when that chance may no longer be available. Well written Sharon
June 7th, 2026 10:58
A Last Time for Everything
orchidee said:
Yes, good write GS. But - Boo hoo! Me last time with KP never comes. She\'s always there. Well, when not out having publicity on TV, radio, magazines, newspapers, anywhere.... So - she\'s hardly home anyway. lol.
June 7th, 2026 09:56
orchidee said:
Yes, good write GS. But - Boo hoo! Me last time with KP never comes. She\'s always there. Well, when not out having publicity on TV, radio, magazines, newspapers, anywhere.... So - she\'s hardly home anyway. lol.
June 7th, 2026 09:56
A Change of Heart
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this really touched me. There is a quiet assurance running through the poem that I found comforting. The focus is not on dramatic transformation, but on the slow and steady work of faith shaping a life over time. Beautiful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 4th, 2026 18:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this really touched me. There is a quiet assurance running through the poem that I found comforting. The focus is not on dramatic transformation, but on the slow and steady work of faith shaping a life over time. Beautiful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 4th, 2026 18:10
A Change of Heart
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
Yes - a change of heart for me - I was nice to KP - for 60 seconds! lol.
June 4th, 2026 10:44
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
Yes - a change of heart for me - I was nice to KP - for 60 seconds! lol.
June 4th, 2026 10:44
A Change of Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Sharon with some rhyme internally as well as a positive message. Nicely done
June 4th, 2026 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Sharon with some rhyme internally as well as a positive message. Nicely done
June 4th, 2026 07:02
Our Children
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this carries a real ache for the younger generation and the contradictions they inherit. The tension between being told to shine while simultaneously being taught to disappear comes through painfully clearly here. Thereβs genuine compassion and concern at the center of this piece. Strong work, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
May 27th, 2026 21:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this carries a real ache for the younger generation and the contradictions they inherit. The tension between being told to shine while simultaneously being taught to disappear comes through painfully clearly here. Thereβs genuine compassion and concern at the center of this piece. Strong work, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
May 27th, 2026 21:57
Experiences of the Heart
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this carries a great deal of compassion and lived honesty. The sense of people quietly carrying wounds while still trying to move toward healing comes through clearly all the way through. Thereβs real hope here, but it feels earned rather than forced. Beautiful piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
May 27th, 2026 10:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this carries a great deal of compassion and lived honesty. The sense of people quietly carrying wounds while still trying to move toward healing comes through clearly all the way through. Thereβs real hope here, but it feels earned rather than forced. Beautiful piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
May 27th, 2026 10:24
Our Children
sorenbarrett said:
It seems so for each generation and whether it is true or not history will tell. A wonderful write that has good internal rhyme as well. I have my own ideas on this but no proof to validate them.
May 27th, 2026 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
It seems so for each generation and whether it is true or not history will tell. A wonderful write that has good internal rhyme as well. I have my own ideas on this but no proof to validate them.
May 27th, 2026 08:59
Experiences of the Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to put things in god\'s hands. Nicely written
May 26th, 2026 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to put things in god\'s hands. Nicely written
May 26th, 2026 13:05
Our Country
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this comes from a deeply sincere place...and that sincerity is what carries the piece. Beneath all the frustration and division youβre describing, thereβs still hope here for people to actually listen to one another again instead of tearing each other apart. βBe the difference you want to seeβ feels like the heartbeat running through the whole write. Powerful piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
May 23rd, 2026 10:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this comes from a deeply sincere place...and that sincerity is what carries the piece. Beneath all the frustration and division youβre describing, thereβs still hope here for people to actually listen to one another again instead of tearing each other apart. βBe the difference you want to seeβ feels like the heartbeat running through the whole write. Powerful piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
May 23rd, 2026 10:31
Our Country
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful wish and hope. It usually takes a tragedy to put our differences aside. Well written.
May 22nd, 2026 15:03
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful wish and hope. It usually takes a tragedy to put our differences aside. Well written.
May 22nd, 2026 15:03
His gentle Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this carries such a calming and reassuring spirit through it. The poem feels less like performance and more like someone sincerely reaching out a hand to another weary soul. Thereβs real comfort in that gentleness. Beautiful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
May 21st, 2026 10:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this carries such a calming and reassuring spirit through it. The poem feels less like performance and more like someone sincerely reaching out a hand to another weary soul. Thereβs real comfort in that gentleness. Beautiful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
May 21st, 2026 10:38
His gentle Love
orchidee said:
Good write GS. I been \'carrying\' KP for ages - not literally though! lol. Well, she hangs on, like a bad smell. I\'m horrible to her. lol.
May 21st, 2026 01:51
orchidee said:
Good write GS. I been \'carrying\' KP for ages - not literally though! lol. Well, she hangs on, like a bad smell. I\'m horrible to her. lol.
May 21st, 2026 01:51
His gentle Love
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling that God knows and feels for us. A most lovely write
May 20th, 2026 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling that God knows and feels for us. A most lovely write
May 20th, 2026 16:25
The Journey to Healing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this really touched me. Thereβs such a sincere heart behind these wordsβ¦the kind that comes from someone who has actually walked through pain instead of just speaking about it from a distance. The encouragement here feels genuine and deeply compassionate. Beautiful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
May 18th, 2026 09:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this really touched me. Thereβs such a sincere heart behind these wordsβ¦the kind that comes from someone who has actually walked through pain instead of just speaking about it from a distance. The encouragement here feels genuine and deeply compassionate. Beautiful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
May 18th, 2026 09:35
The Journey to Healing
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing and wise view of the human condition with all its joys and failings.Turn to the Lord for healing.A lovely sentiment.Well done
May 17th, 2026 18:26
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing and wise view of the human condition with all its joys and failings.Turn to the Lord for healing.A lovely sentiment.Well done
May 17th, 2026 18:26
The Journey to Healing
sorenbarrett said:
Another good write of putting one\'s faith in God and he will take care of you. Nicely written
May 17th, 2026 17:25
sorenbarrett said:
Another good write of putting one\'s faith in God and he will take care of you. Nicely written
May 17th, 2026 17:25
When the World Feels Heavy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this reads like a heartfelt reminder not to let despair settle permanently inside the soul. Faith, gratitude, nature, purpose, and simple daily beauty all work together here to gently push back against the heaviness of the world. Beautifully uplifting piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
May 16th, 2026 08:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this reads like a heartfelt reminder not to let despair settle permanently inside the soul. Faith, gratitude, nature, purpose, and simple daily beauty all work together here to gently push back against the heaviness of the world. Beautifully uplifting piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
May 16th, 2026 08:46
When the World Feels Heavy
DLewis88 said:
It\'s wonderful. I have my share of bad days. Day\'s where I feel like giving up on life.
May 15th, 2026 16:04
DLewis88 said:
It\'s wonderful. I have my share of bad days. Day\'s where I feel like giving up on life.
May 15th, 2026 16:04
When the World Feels Heavy
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this poem of support and hope when the times are difficult and the day is dark, when the world is heavy and a burden on your shoulders it encourages faith and perseverance. Nicely done Sharon
May 15th, 2026 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this poem of support and hope when the times are difficult and the day is dark, when the world is heavy and a burden on your shoulders it encourages faith and perseverance. Nicely done Sharon
May 15th, 2026 13:38
When the World Feels Heavy
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
What\'s heavy for me, meanwhile, is this ball and chain KP has put on my ankle, and thrown away the key for me to get free! lol. That\'ll teach me.
Can these escapades be true? lol.
May 15th, 2026 13:35
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
What\'s heavy for me, meanwhile, is this ball and chain KP has put on my ankle, and thrown away the key for me to get free! lol. That\'ll teach me.
Can these escapades be true? lol.
May 15th, 2026 13:35
Itβs All in How You Rise
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this feels like someone speaking from lived hardship rather than abstract advice. The repeated call to rise again, even through betrayal and pain, gives the piece warmth and conviction. Wonderful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
May 14th, 2026 11:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, this feels like someone speaking from lived hardship rather than abstract advice. The repeated call to rise again, even through betrayal and pain, gives the piece warmth and conviction. Wonderful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
May 14th, 2026 11:17
Itβs All in How You Rise
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Sharon a most encouraging and positive write
May 13th, 2026 16:31
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Sharon a most encouraging and positive write
May 13th, 2026 16:31
Godβs Love Is
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, thereβs such sincerity and warmth in this. It reads like a heartfelt testimony spoken from lived trust rather than abstraction. The repeated return to love, grace, and shelter gives the whole piece a calming steadiness. Beautiful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
May 12th, 2026 13:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sharon, thereβs such sincerity and warmth in this. It reads like a heartfelt testimony spoken from lived trust rather than abstraction. The repeated return to love, grace, and shelter gives the whole piece a calming steadiness. Beautiful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
May 12th, 2026 13:54
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