Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
Faith
sorenbarrett said:
A marvelous poem with great rhyme and cadence as well as a most wonderful message. Well done
December 27th, 2024 14:25
sorenbarrett said:
A marvelous poem with great rhyme and cadence as well as a most wonderful message. Well done
December 27th, 2024 14:25
Time
Cheeky Missy said:
Time is the single commodity one of my brothers insists is NOT to be wasted. Very, very timely. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and an aptly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 26th, 2024 17:22
Cheeky Missy said:
Time is the single commodity one of my brothers insists is NOT to be wasted. Very, very timely. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and an aptly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 26th, 2024 17:22
Time
TobaniNataiella said:
A reminder how time is so precious, it is the only thing we get less off as each day passes, so do not until tomorrow what you could today and value the time you have. Enjoyed the read
December 26th, 2024 17:06
TobaniNataiella said:
A reminder how time is so precious, it is the only thing we get less off as each day passes, so do not until tomorrow what you could today and value the time you have. Enjoyed the read
December 26th, 2024 17:06
Time
Teddy.15 said:
Just this afternoon I was thinking exactly this theme, it\'s probably a Christmas thing for me as I live abroad, we have so many friends home at the moment from all around the world, some of their parents are now old and as I already lost my own mother I always think, take that extra minute to hug someone you love, time we have it until we don\'t. A beautiful theme 💚
December 26th, 2024 16:14
Teddy.15 said:
Just this afternoon I was thinking exactly this theme, it\'s probably a Christmas thing for me as I live abroad, we have so many friends home at the moment from all around the world, some of their parents are now old and as I already lost my own mother I always think, take that extra minute to hug someone you love, time we have it until we don\'t. A beautiful theme 💚
December 26th, 2024 16:14
Time
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom in a poem nicely written and well composed. It bleeds with advice to all. A great message.
December 26th, 2024 14:35
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom in a poem nicely written and well composed. It bleeds with advice to all. A great message.
December 26th, 2024 14:35
What do you do?
sorenbarrett said:
A noble write about a subject that needs addressing. Be kind and your conscience will pay you back. A Merry Christmas to you
December 24th, 2024 12:25
sorenbarrett said:
A noble write about a subject that needs addressing. Be kind and your conscience will pay you back. A Merry Christmas to you
December 24th, 2024 12:25
What do you do?
TobaniNataiella said:
Great message in this piece of work, if someone is brave enough to tell you how they really feel, the least we can do is respect and support that. Enjoyed the read.
December 24th, 2024 11:52
TobaniNataiella said:
Great message in this piece of work, if someone is brave enough to tell you how they really feel, the least we can do is respect and support that. Enjoyed the read.
December 24th, 2024 11:52
What do you do?
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Meanwhile - when KP has a problem, I yawn and clear off to bed! I\'m horrible to her. heehee.
December 24th, 2024 11:21
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Meanwhile - when KP has a problem, I yawn and clear off to bed! I\'m horrible to her. heehee.
December 24th, 2024 11:21
New/Old Friends
Cassie58 said:
A story with an uplifting end. Forgiveness can be so rewarding and powerful too. I enjoyed reading you. Merry Christmas to you and yours 🎄
December 23rd, 2024 00:09
Cassie58 said:
A story with an uplifting end. Forgiveness can be so rewarding and powerful too. I enjoyed reading you. Merry Christmas to you and yours 🎄
December 23rd, 2024 00:09
New/Old Friends
sorenbarrett said:
A happy ending to the story, nicely written. Glad to hear that all worked out for the two and happy holidays to you as well.
December 22nd, 2024 20:23
sorenbarrett said:
A happy ending to the story, nicely written. Glad to hear that all worked out for the two and happy holidays to you as well.
December 22nd, 2024 20:23
New/Old Friends
TobaniNataiella said:
A very sincere message in the conclusion to this tale, Merry Christmas to you as well, it has been enjoyable reading
December 22nd, 2024 17:29
TobaniNataiella said:
A very sincere message in the conclusion to this tale, Merry Christmas to you as well, it has been enjoyable reading
December 22nd, 2024 17:29
Second Chances
TobaniNataiella said:
Back into the fire possibly, enjoyed the read.
December 20th, 2024 12:38
TobaniNataiella said:
Back into the fire possibly, enjoyed the read.
December 20th, 2024 12:38
Second Chances
sorenbarrett said:
Another episode and on we go toward what we hope will be romance or maybe just freindship we\'ll see
December 20th, 2024 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
Another episode and on we go toward what we hope will be romance or maybe just freindship we\'ll see
December 20th, 2024 11:30
Forgiveness??
Melancholic~Onion said:
Wow, just wow. This was nicely written. Looking forward to the next!👀
December 19th, 2024 14:48
Melancholic~Onion said:
Wow, just wow. This was nicely written. Looking forward to the next!👀
December 19th, 2024 14:48
Forgiveness??
TobaniNataiella said:
After 15 years it probably is not the right decision, but we wait to see, Another enjoyable read.
December 19th, 2024 14:43
TobaniNataiella said:
After 15 years it probably is not the right decision, but we wait to see, Another enjoyable read.
December 19th, 2024 14:43
Forgiveness??
sorenbarrett said:
As life goes on so does everyone\'s story. A good read. I\'ll be back.
December 19th, 2024 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
As life goes on so does everyone\'s story. A good read. I\'ll be back.
December 19th, 2024 14:38
Settling In
orchidee said:
You started me off on a - maybe occasional - short story format, as you\'ve posted here!
December 18th, 2024 09:47
orchidee said:
You started me off on a - maybe occasional - short story format, as you\'ve posted here!
December 18th, 2024 09:47
Settling In
sorenbarrett said:
I have to beg your utmost pardon Shamrocker. I have read your work before but it never struck me like today where your talent lies. Like music there are the notes with pitch and rhythm. I\'ve heard your pitch before and in the rhyme and story of its melody commented but just today became aware of the beat and rhythm in your flow and it with the internal rhyme is a different music for the ear. Sorry I have missed it all this time, not your loss mine. You can bet I\'ll be looking for it in the future all music and poems need a beat. Your\'s is remarkable
December 18th, 2024 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
I have to beg your utmost pardon Shamrocker. I have read your work before but it never struck me like today where your talent lies. Like music there are the notes with pitch and rhythm. I\'ve heard your pitch before and in the rhyme and story of its melody commented but just today became aware of the beat and rhythm in your flow and it with the internal rhyme is a different music for the ear. Sorry I have missed it all this time, not your loss mine. You can bet I\'ll be looking for it in the future all music and poems need a beat. Your\'s is remarkable
December 18th, 2024 09:20
Settling In
TobaniNataiella said:
She probably will, this series is an enjoyable read, thank you
December 18th, 2024 08:36
TobaniNataiella said:
She probably will, this series is an enjoyable read, thank you
December 18th, 2024 08:36
The Promise
sorenbarrett said:
Enticing work with internal rhyme as well. We\'ll have to see what happens as the saga like the road unwinds
December 17th, 2024 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
Enticing work with internal rhyme as well. We\'ll have to see what happens as the saga like the road unwinds
December 17th, 2024 06:59
The Promise
TobaniNataiella said:
To be forgiven, they have to want to forgive you, another enjoyable read
December 17th, 2024 06:40
TobaniNataiella said:
To be forgiven, they have to want to forgive you, another enjoyable read
December 17th, 2024 06:40
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