Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
That’s Beautiful!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Being understood. Wow. That would be absolutely beautiful. Well done on this, my friend. Well done! Absolutely beautiful! 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 18:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Being understood. Wow. That would be absolutely beautiful. Well done on this, my friend. Well done! Absolutely beautiful! 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 18:37
That’s Beautiful!
sorenbarrett said:
Beyond being a most beautiful message well sent this poem reflects your unique poetic ability to place rhyme in what would otherwise be a free form piece. The piece on its own has beauty but the spice of unexpected rhyme as seasoning adds flavor to the dish. You have a most charming way of doing it.
( Someone who
gets you.
Who stands by
you through
and through.0
( Someone who I
s with you
on your happiest of days. One who
can understand that at times it won’t
always be this
way. )
In the use of always and way the near rhyme works almost as a subliminal.
(Someone who will join you on hobbies you may find boring.
One who won’t mind whether it’s the beach or the mountains. They’ll join you in exploring. )
Here the rhyme comes at an unexpected time that throws a bit of surprise in and a sense of relief.
(Someone who will truly love you for worse or for better.
Every storm and trial is best overcome together.)
A lovely poem for all of this. Much more complex than it appears at first glance
May 26th, 2025 13:59
sorenbarrett said:
Beyond being a most beautiful message well sent this poem reflects your unique poetic ability to place rhyme in what would otherwise be a free form piece. The piece on its own has beauty but the spice of unexpected rhyme as seasoning adds flavor to the dish. You have a most charming way of doing it.
( Someone who
gets you.
Who stands by
you through
and through.0
( Someone who I
s with you
on your happiest of days. One who
can understand that at times it won’t
always be this
way. )
In the use of always and way the near rhyme works almost as a subliminal.
(Someone who will join you on hobbies you may find boring.
One who won’t mind whether it’s the beach or the mountains. They’ll join you in exploring. )
Here the rhyme comes at an unexpected time that throws a bit of surprise in and a sense of relief.
(Someone who will truly love you for worse or for better.
Every storm and trial is best overcome together.)
A lovely poem for all of this. Much more complex than it appears at first glance
May 26th, 2025 13:59
That’s Beautiful!
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
But - aghh - is it beautiful that KP hangs around me for ever? lol.
May 26th, 2025 10:56
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
But - aghh - is it beautiful that KP hangs around me for ever? lol.
May 26th, 2025 10:56
That’s Beautiful!
Poetic Licence said:
Absolutely the best thing in the world you can ask for, enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 09:58
Poetic Licence said:
Absolutely the best thing in the world you can ask for, enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 09:58
In Loving Memory of Veteran
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful tribute to an outstanding human being. Wonderful job, my dear friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 09:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful tribute to an outstanding human being. Wonderful job, my dear friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 09:07
That’s Beautiful!
BlessedbyGod said:
Very beautiful piece my dear ,
I can relate to ever word
May 26th, 2025 07:40
BlessedbyGod said:
Very beautiful piece my dear ,
I can relate to ever word
May 26th, 2025 07:40
In Loving Memory of Veteran
Teddy.15 said:
Such a wonderful tribute, sorry for your loss dearest Gen, he obviously had an enormous amount to give and he gave. ❤️
May 26th, 2025 02:30
Teddy.15 said:
Such a wonderful tribute, sorry for your loss dearest Gen, he obviously had an enormous amount to give and he gave. ❤️
May 26th, 2025 02:30
In Loving Memory of Veteran
sorenbarrett said:
A timely and good tribute to one who served his country and others. Nicely presented
May 25th, 2025 20:07
sorenbarrett said:
A timely and good tribute to one who served his country and others. Nicely presented
May 25th, 2025 20:07
To Be Still
Poetic Licence said:
A calling for forgiveness and peace, nicely expressed and written
May 22nd, 2025 08:35
Poetic Licence said:
A calling for forgiveness and peace, nicely expressed and written
May 22nd, 2025 08:35
To Be Still
orchidee said:
I\'m never still with KP. I get out of the house every second I can, when she\'s home! LOL.
May 22nd, 2025 08:02
orchidee said:
I\'m never still with KP. I get out of the house every second I can, when she\'s home! LOL.
May 22nd, 2025 08:02
To Be Still
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message of peace, forgiveness and love. Although most people see it as a he I feel such an entity to be more motherly. A lovely poem
May 22nd, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message of peace, forgiveness and love. Although most people see it as a he I feel such an entity to be more motherly. A lovely poem
May 22nd, 2025 05:05
Life Is A Puzzle
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
I wish KP was the missing piece that I DIDN\'T need! lol.
May 19th, 2025 01:53
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
I wish KP was the missing piece that I DIDN\'T need! lol.
May 19th, 2025 01:53
Life Is A Puzzle
sorenbarrett said:
Having faith in something is very important and it is heard in this poem. Lovely
May 18th, 2025 19:38
sorenbarrett said:
Having faith in something is very important and it is heard in this poem. Lovely
May 18th, 2025 19:38
What Happens?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Trust and prayer are the keys that gets us and others to hope from the hopeless. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Trust and prayer are the keys that gets us and others to hope from the hopeless. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:00
What Happens?
orchidee said:
It\'s so. Some people won\'t be helped, or don\'t want to be helped. I never help KP of course - well, only with her botox help! 😁
May 14th, 2025 01:59
orchidee said:
It\'s so. Some people won\'t be helped, or don\'t want to be helped. I never help KP of course - well, only with her botox help! 😁
May 14th, 2025 01:59
What Happens?
sorenbarrett said:
Knowing one\'s limits is critical all through life and this poem speaks of one type. Very nice
May 13th, 2025 15:29
sorenbarrett said:
Knowing one\'s limits is critical all through life and this poem speaks of one type. Very nice
May 13th, 2025 15:29
Dreaded Chores
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This made me laugh, my friend! That, Orchi, I tell you. 🤣 Thank you for sharing. Humor is the best kind of medicine! 🌹👏
May 8th, 2025 16:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This made me laugh, my friend! That, Orchi, I tell you. 🤣 Thank you for sharing. Humor is the best kind of medicine! 🌹👏
May 8th, 2025 16:11
Dreaded Chores
Poetic Licence said:
If they are voluntary and not compulsory they can be a pleasure, enjoyed the read
May 8th, 2025 10:46
Poetic Licence said:
If they are voluntary and not compulsory they can be a pleasure, enjoyed the read
May 8th, 2025 10:46
Dreaded Chores
sorenbarrett said:
There is a good deal of pleasure that goes into cleaning and tasks of a domestic nature, after all you live there. A fun read
May 8th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
There is a good deal of pleasure that goes into cleaning and tasks of a domestic nature, after all you live there. A fun read
May 8th, 2025 08:59
Dreaded Chores
orchidee said:
Give \'em all to KP as a slave - unpaid of course! LOL.
May 8th, 2025 07:38
orchidee said:
Give \'em all to KP as a slave - unpaid of course! LOL.
May 8th, 2025 07:38
Spring Cleaning!
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
For me it\'s - KPs my slave, not even my servant. I give her all the cleaning to do - spring, summer, whatever season. Me? I just lounge around the place while she works, and tip bags of rubbish on the floor to make extra work for her! heehee. Woof! This must stop, says Fido. LOL.
May 8th, 2025 02:48
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
For me it\'s - KPs my slave, not even my servant. I give her all the cleaning to do - spring, summer, whatever season. Me? I just lounge around the place while she works, and tip bags of rubbish on the floor to make extra work for her! heehee. Woof! This must stop, says Fido. LOL.
May 8th, 2025 02:48
Spring Cleaning!
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message often neglected we fall into complacency and let the dirt and cobwebs grow. I still like your hidden rhyme it gives spice to the read. Lovley
May 7th, 2025 14:35
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message often neglected we fall into complacency and let the dirt and cobwebs grow. I still like your hidden rhyme it gives spice to the read. Lovley
May 7th, 2025 14:35
Spring Cleaning!
Poetic Licence said:
Very true and wise as always this authors words, though sometimes it needs a demolition and rebuild more than a spring clean!!!, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 14:06
Poetic Licence said:
Very true and wise as always this authors words, though sometimes it needs a demolition and rebuild more than a spring clean!!!, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 14:06
Spring Cleaning!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very true. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹👏
May 7th, 2025 14:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very true. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹👏
May 7th, 2025 14:02
The other Side of Pain
Poetic Licence said:
This is a very positive write with wonderful advice, which i wish was as easy as it sounds, nicely expressed and written
May 7th, 2025 06:03
Poetic Licence said:
This is a very positive write with wonderful advice, which i wish was as easy as it sounds, nicely expressed and written
May 7th, 2025 06:03
The other Side of Pain
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Meanwhile - I\'m in pain now, and that\'s a fact, being married to KP! heehee.
May 6th, 2025 02:17
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Meanwhile - I\'m in pain now, and that\'s a fact, being married to KP! heehee.
May 6th, 2025 02:17
The other Side of Pain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. May it be. Beautiful, my friend. Landing right where it needs to be at the right time. Thank you. 🙏🌹👏✝️
May 5th, 2025 18:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. May it be. Beautiful, my friend. Landing right where it needs to be at the right time. Thank you. 🙏🌹👏✝️
May 5th, 2025 18:34
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