Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
How We Are Remembered
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write with a great message, it is so true humans are to quick to judge and tend to remember bad over good, enjoyed the read
June 3rd, 2025 10:59
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write with a great message, it is so true humans are to quick to judge and tend to remember bad over good, enjoyed the read
June 3rd, 2025 10:59
It Doesn’t Matter
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely written with hidden near rhymes and so normally worded as to hardly notice. It leaves the hidden feeling of smoothness. Very nicely done.
June 3rd, 2025 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely written with hidden near rhymes and so normally worded as to hardly notice. It leaves the hidden feeling of smoothness. Very nicely done.
June 3rd, 2025 08:53
As I Am
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderfully written poem in your style. Loved it.
May 31st, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderfully written poem in your style. Loved it.
May 31st, 2025 09:41
The Heart of a Caregiver
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
I can\'t say I care for KP. My daily words to her are: \'I don\'t care, my dear!\' Ohh, I\'m horrible to her. lol.
May 30th, 2025 01:42
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
I can\'t say I care for KP. My daily words to her are: \'I don\'t care, my dear!\' Ohh, I\'m horrible to her. lol.
May 30th, 2025 01:42
The Heart of a Caregiver
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love it, my friend. You really do get to the heart of who a caregiver is. Wonderful job! 🌹👏
May 29th, 2025 20:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love it, my friend. You really do get to the heart of who a caregiver is. Wonderful job! 🌹👏
May 29th, 2025 20:55
The Heart of a Caregiver
Poetic Licence said:
One of the hardest professions, takes a special person to undertake the job, a lovely write
May 29th, 2025 13:55
Poetic Licence said:
One of the hardest professions, takes a special person to undertake the job, a lovely write
May 29th, 2025 13:55
The Heart of a Caregiver
sorenbarrett said:
Again a most well written poem. I have to say I am a fan of your poetic style that blends free style with rhyme.
May 29th, 2025 13:17
sorenbarrett said:
Again a most well written poem. I have to say I am a fan of your poetic style that blends free style with rhyme.
May 29th, 2025 13:17
To Be Still
NafisaSB said:
yes - one must learn to forgive - both ourselves, and those who wronged us, for the wheel will definitely turn , and our struggles will end
Lovely message
May 28th, 2025 02:01
NafisaSB said:
yes - one must learn to forgive - both ourselves, and those who wronged us, for the wheel will definitely turn , and our struggles will end
Lovely message
May 28th, 2025 02:01
That’s Beautiful!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Being understood. Wow. That would be absolutely beautiful. Well done on this, my friend. Well done! Absolutely beautiful! 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 18:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Being understood. Wow. That would be absolutely beautiful. Well done on this, my friend. Well done! Absolutely beautiful! 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 18:37
That’s Beautiful!
sorenbarrett said:
Beyond being a most beautiful message well sent this poem reflects your unique poetic ability to place rhyme in what would otherwise be a free form piece. The piece on its own has beauty but the spice of unexpected rhyme as seasoning adds flavor to the dish. You have a most charming way of doing it.
( Someone who
gets you.
Who stands by
you through
and through.0
( Someone who I
s with you
on your happiest of days. One who
can understand that at times it won’t
always be this
way. )
In the use of always and way the near rhyme works almost as a subliminal.
(Someone who will join you on hobbies you may find boring.
One who won’t mind whether it’s the beach or the mountains. They’ll join you in exploring. )
Here the rhyme comes at an unexpected time that throws a bit of surprise in and a sense of relief.
(Someone who will truly love you for worse or for better.
Every storm and trial is best overcome together.)
A lovely poem for all of this. Much more complex than it appears at first glance
May 26th, 2025 13:59
sorenbarrett said:
Beyond being a most beautiful message well sent this poem reflects your unique poetic ability to place rhyme in what would otherwise be a free form piece. The piece on its own has beauty but the spice of unexpected rhyme as seasoning adds flavor to the dish. You have a most charming way of doing it.
( Someone who
gets you.
Who stands by
you through
and through.0
( Someone who I
s with you
on your happiest of days. One who
can understand that at times it won’t
always be this
way. )
In the use of always and way the near rhyme works almost as a subliminal.
(Someone who will join you on hobbies you may find boring.
One who won’t mind whether it’s the beach or the mountains. They’ll join you in exploring. )
Here the rhyme comes at an unexpected time that throws a bit of surprise in and a sense of relief.
(Someone who will truly love you for worse or for better.
Every storm and trial is best overcome together.)
A lovely poem for all of this. Much more complex than it appears at first glance
May 26th, 2025 13:59
That’s Beautiful!
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
But - aghh - is it beautiful that KP hangs around me for ever? lol.
May 26th, 2025 10:56
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
But - aghh - is it beautiful that KP hangs around me for ever? lol.
May 26th, 2025 10:56
That’s Beautiful!
Poetic Licence said:
Absolutely the best thing in the world you can ask for, enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 09:58
Poetic Licence said:
Absolutely the best thing in the world you can ask for, enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 09:58
In Loving Memory of Veteran
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful tribute to an outstanding human being. Wonderful job, my dear friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 09:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful tribute to an outstanding human being. Wonderful job, my dear friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 09:07
That’s Beautiful!
BlessedbyGod said:
Very beautiful piece my dear ,
I can relate to ever word
May 26th, 2025 07:40
BlessedbyGod said:
Very beautiful piece my dear ,
I can relate to ever word
May 26th, 2025 07:40
In Loving Memory of Veteran
Teddy.15 said:
Such a wonderful tribute, sorry for your loss dearest Gen, he obviously had an enormous amount to give and he gave. ❤️
May 26th, 2025 02:30
Teddy.15 said:
Such a wonderful tribute, sorry for your loss dearest Gen, he obviously had an enormous amount to give and he gave. ❤️
May 26th, 2025 02:30
In Loving Memory of Veteran
sorenbarrett said:
A timely and good tribute to one who served his country and others. Nicely presented
May 25th, 2025 20:07
sorenbarrett said:
A timely and good tribute to one who served his country and others. Nicely presented
May 25th, 2025 20:07
To Be Still
Poetic Licence said:
A calling for forgiveness and peace, nicely expressed and written
May 22nd, 2025 08:35
Poetic Licence said:
A calling for forgiveness and peace, nicely expressed and written
May 22nd, 2025 08:35
To Be Still
orchidee said:
I\'m never still with KP. I get out of the house every second I can, when she\'s home! LOL.
May 22nd, 2025 08:02
orchidee said:
I\'m never still with KP. I get out of the house every second I can, when she\'s home! LOL.
May 22nd, 2025 08:02
To Be Still
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message of peace, forgiveness and love. Although most people see it as a he I feel such an entity to be more motherly. A lovely poem
May 22nd, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message of peace, forgiveness and love. Although most people see it as a he I feel such an entity to be more motherly. A lovely poem
May 22nd, 2025 05:05
Life Is A Puzzle
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
I wish KP was the missing piece that I DIDN\'T need! lol.
May 19th, 2025 01:53
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
I wish KP was the missing piece that I DIDN\'T need! lol.
May 19th, 2025 01:53
Life Is A Puzzle
sorenbarrett said:
Having faith in something is very important and it is heard in this poem. Lovely
May 18th, 2025 19:38
sorenbarrett said:
Having faith in something is very important and it is heard in this poem. Lovely
May 18th, 2025 19:38
What Happens?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Trust and prayer are the keys that gets us and others to hope from the hopeless. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Trust and prayer are the keys that gets us and others to hope from the hopeless. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:00
What Happens?
orchidee said:
It\'s so. Some people won\'t be helped, or don\'t want to be helped. I never help KP of course - well, only with her botox help! 😁
May 14th, 2025 01:59
orchidee said:
It\'s so. Some people won\'t be helped, or don\'t want to be helped. I never help KP of course - well, only with her botox help! 😁
May 14th, 2025 01:59
What Happens?
sorenbarrett said:
Knowing one\'s limits is critical all through life and this poem speaks of one type. Very nice
May 13th, 2025 15:29
sorenbarrett said:
Knowing one\'s limits is critical all through life and this poem speaks of one type. Very nice
May 13th, 2025 15:29
Dreaded Chores
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This made me laugh, my friend! That, Orchi, I tell you. 🤣 Thank you for sharing. Humor is the best kind of medicine! 🌹👏
May 8th, 2025 16:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This made me laugh, my friend! That, Orchi, I tell you. 🤣 Thank you for sharing. Humor is the best kind of medicine! 🌹👏
May 8th, 2025 16:11
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