Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
The Plan Coming To Action
sorenbarrett said:
The story seems to have found its tracks and is running smoothly on a strait away. Nicely done
February 9th, 2025 19:07
sorenbarrett said:
The story seems to have found its tracks and is running smoothly on a strait away. Nicely done
February 9th, 2025 19:07
Riosin and Riordan
Cassie58 said:
So common ground has been reached for the day! I wonder how this is going to develop? Enjoyed today’s installment. Will check in again.
February 7th, 2025 16:54
Cassie58 said:
So common ground has been reached for the day! I wonder how this is going to develop? Enjoyed today’s installment. Will check in again.
February 7th, 2025 16:54
Riosin and Riordan
Poetic Licence said:
There maybe piece for today, i sense a trouble a brewing, enjoyed todays instalment.
February 7th, 2025 16:27
Poetic Licence said:
There maybe piece for today, i sense a trouble a brewing, enjoyed todays instalment.
February 7th, 2025 16:27
Riosin and Riordan
sorenbarrett said:
In this piece the story takes precedence over the wording and one is carried onward with a desire to hear the outcome. Although there remains some internal fhyme it and imagery or metaphor take second seat. Very nice
February 7th, 2025 16:13
sorenbarrett said:
In this piece the story takes precedence over the wording and one is carried onward with a desire to hear the outcome. Although there remains some internal fhyme it and imagery or metaphor take second seat. Very nice
February 7th, 2025 16:13
Riordan and Riosin
Simurgh said:
Beautiful poem. I like the way you wrote this poem. Looking forward to more of it...
Lovely!
February 6th, 2025 22:03
Simurgh said:
Beautiful poem. I like the way you wrote this poem. Looking forward to more of it...
Lovely!
February 6th, 2025 22:03
Riordan and Riosin
Poetic Licence said:
I didn`t think the name change would go down well and i am sure there will more twists, enjoyed todays update.
February 6th, 2025 17:10
Poetic Licence said:
I didn`t think the name change would go down well and i am sure there will more twists, enjoyed todays update.
February 6th, 2025 17:10
Riordan and Riosin
Cassie58 said:
I knew the name change might not go down well. Looking forward to more:)
Enjoyed.
February 6th, 2025 15:31
Cassie58 said:
I knew the name change might not go down well. Looking forward to more:)
Enjoyed.
February 6th, 2025 15:31
Riordan and Riosin
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter done both for the reader and the characters. This story seems to be headed to an end with more twists and bends but with a little time it may well resolve in a satisfactory way. Lovely
February 6th, 2025 14:43
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter done both for the reader and the characters. This story seems to be headed to an end with more twists and bends but with a little time it may well resolve in a satisfactory way. Lovely
February 6th, 2025 14:43
Coming Up With A Plan
sorenbarrett said:
You have a knack at transitioning forward to the next episode. Serial poetry seems your specialty and I love the concept
February 5th, 2025 17:18
sorenbarrett said:
You have a knack at transitioning forward to the next episode. Serial poetry seems your specialty and I love the concept
February 5th, 2025 17:18
Coming Up With A Plan
Poetic Licence said:
i am not sure she will take to kindly to that, until tomorrow, enjoyed the read
February 5th, 2025 15:59
Poetic Licence said:
i am not sure she will take to kindly to that, until tomorrow, enjoyed the read
February 5th, 2025 15:59
Coming Up With A Plan
Cassie58 said:
Interesting. He wants to change the name of her business? I am intrigued as to what she will think about this proposal. I’ll be checking in to find out :)
February 5th, 2025 14:50
Cassie58 said:
Interesting. He wants to change the name of her business? I am intrigued as to what she will think about this proposal. I’ll be checking in to find out :)
February 5th, 2025 14:50
Back Story on Linens and Things
sorenbarrett said:
A hopeful sense to this piece of the story. Nicely laid out in your style
February 4th, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
A hopeful sense to this piece of the story. Nicely laid out in your style
February 4th, 2025 08:21
Back Story on Linens and Things
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed your story with a cup
of tea this morning. Thank you. Happy Tuesday.
February 4th, 2025 06:35
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed your story with a cup
of tea this morning. Thank you. Happy Tuesday.
February 4th, 2025 06:35
Back Story on Linens and Things
Poetic Licence said:
thank you for todays update, enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 06:32
Poetic Licence said:
thank you for todays update, enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 06:32
Riordan’s First Day 2
Poetic Licence said:
Than k you for todays instalment, enjoyed
February 3rd, 2025 12:26
Poetic Licence said:
Than k you for todays instalment, enjoyed
February 3rd, 2025 12:26
Riordan’s First Day 2
sorenbarrett said:
Upon reading your story poems in the beginning in my blindness I did not see the creativity you displayed. Now that I have awoken form my rigid views I see a wonderful work of art in this style. This one continues to pull the reader along with its internal rhyme and continued segments that draw the reader back to your next one. Very nicely done you have incoporated the art of poetry with the genious of a mini series.
February 3rd, 2025 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
Upon reading your story poems in the beginning in my blindness I did not see the creativity you displayed. Now that I have awoken form my rigid views I see a wonderful work of art in this style. This one continues to pull the reader along with its internal rhyme and continued segments that draw the reader back to your next one. Very nicely done you have incoporated the art of poetry with the genious of a mini series.
February 3rd, 2025 09:29
Riordan’s First Day!
sorenbarrett said:
Real life as it is. Raw and pulling no punches. A good write with continued internal rhyme from time to time greasing the flow.
February 2nd, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Real life as it is. Raw and pulling no punches. A good write with continued internal rhyme from time to time greasing the flow.
February 2nd, 2025 04:54
Linens And Things!
Cassie58 said:
Is this the perfect set up? Will have to read more in the future to find out.
January 29th, 2025 17:32
Cassie58 said:
Is this the perfect set up? Will have to read more in the future to find out.
January 29th, 2025 17:32
Linens And Things!
sorenbarrett said:
Every story and piece of music needs a bridge and this is it. Nicely done
January 29th, 2025 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
Every story and piece of music needs a bridge and this is it. Nicely done
January 29th, 2025 15:42
Linens And Things!
Poetic Licence said:
It can go either way, till the next one, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 13:34
Poetic Licence said:
It can go either way, till the next one, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 13:34
Riordan
sorenbarrett said:
Again so nicely written in your personal style full of adventure and mystery as well as packed with hidden rhyme. Lovely
January 28th, 2025 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Again so nicely written in your personal style full of adventure and mystery as well as packed with hidden rhyme. Lovely
January 28th, 2025 06:50
Riordan
Poetic Licence said:
At the moment things are looking up, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 05:26
Poetic Licence said:
At the moment things are looking up, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 05:26
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