Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
Sterling and Saoirse part 2
Poetic Licence said:
Another wonderful write to continue their journey, feel like a child again waiting for jackonary to come on and read us a story, till the next one, very enjoyable read
April 4th, 2025 06:27
Poetic Licence said:
Another wonderful write to continue their journey, feel like a child again waiting for jackonary to come on and read us a story, till the next one, very enjoyable read
April 4th, 2025 06:27
Sterling and Saoirse part 2
sorenbarrett said:
Again you show poetry in your writing throwing in rhyme to the story that carries the reader along, much like a bard of old. The story grows complex with pity entering in as a motherly nurturing factor that may complicate romance. Inequality in a relationship when one feels sorry for the other makes one superior and the relationship grows unbalanced. Wonder where this will go. Very nicely written
April 4th, 2025 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
Again you show poetry in your writing throwing in rhyme to the story that carries the reader along, much like a bard of old. The story grows complex with pity entering in as a motherly nurturing factor that may complicate romance. Inequality in a relationship when one feels sorry for the other makes one superior and the relationship grows unbalanced. Wonder where this will go. Very nicely written
April 4th, 2025 05:50
Sterling and Saoirse
Poetic Licence said:
Neither are we, but it is enjoyable to be on the journey, lovely write
April 3rd, 2025 12:36
Poetic Licence said:
Neither are we, but it is enjoyable to be on the journey, lovely write
April 3rd, 2025 12:36
Sterling and Saoirse
sorenbarrett said:
I can tell that your heart and talent lies in story telling. When I first started reading your works I was not ready for this approach that is atypical amongst the poets here but I think it is very creative and a refreshing change very nice
April 3rd, 2025 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
I can tell that your heart and talent lies in story telling. When I first started reading your works I was not ready for this approach that is atypical amongst the poets here but I think it is very creative and a refreshing change very nice
April 3rd, 2025 12:12
One Busy Day!!
Poetic Licence said:
Down one path and then another!!!, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 09:38
Poetic Licence said:
Down one path and then another!!!, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 09:38
Saoirse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I enjoyed both versions actually, though I admittedly read your rework of this first. Well done, my friend, on both pieces. 🌹👏
April 2nd, 2025 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I enjoyed both versions actually, though I admittedly read your rework of this first. Well done, my friend, on both pieces. 🌹👏
April 2nd, 2025 08:41
One Busy Day!!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This captured me and I really enjoyed it. You have a gift, my friend. Well done! 🌹
April 2nd, 2025 08:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This captured me and I really enjoyed it. You have a gift, my friend. Well done! 🌹
April 2nd, 2025 08:38
One Busy Day!!
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes we all would like to rewrite yesterdays story but I believe in following you would find it all works out for the best. And the saga continues. Nicely written.
April 2nd, 2025 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes we all would like to rewrite yesterdays story but I believe in following you would find it all works out for the best. And the saga continues. Nicely written.
April 2nd, 2025 06:59
Saoirse
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s good to recharge every now and then but we will see, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:29
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s good to recharge every now and then but we will see, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:29
Saoirse
sorenbarrett said:
It is intriguing how you leave the reader with a question and then follow up in the next piece. Your poems are stories in which you weave morals. Nicely done
March 31st, 2025 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
It is intriguing how you leave the reader with a question and then follow up in the next piece. Your poems are stories in which you weave morals. Nicely done
March 31st, 2025 07:47
Sterling
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for the introduction to a new character, enjoyed the read
March 28th, 2025 03:08
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for the introduction to a new character, enjoyed the read
March 28th, 2025 03:08
Sterling
sorenbarrett said:
The beginning of a new story and a new character. Nice introduction.
March 27th, 2025 16:40
sorenbarrett said:
The beginning of a new story and a new character. Nice introduction.
March 27th, 2025 16:40
That’s What it Looks Like
NafisaSB said:
the first step is always the most difficult, but once taken, the impetus does come many a time..
March 26th, 2025 23:41
NafisaSB said:
the first step is always the most difficult, but once taken, the impetus does come many a time..
March 26th, 2025 23:41
You Matter
orchidee said:
A fine write GS. It can be self-talk only, if sadly we have no faith, and no reference or belief in Him. Yet it is self-talk AND having faith, surely.
March 25th, 2025 14:47
orchidee said:
A fine write GS. It can be self-talk only, if sadly we have no faith, and no reference or belief in Him. Yet it is self-talk AND having faith, surely.
March 25th, 2025 14:47
You Matter
sorenbarrett said:
A motivational write that speaks of believing in yourself and relying on a higher power. Nicely written
March 25th, 2025 13:16
sorenbarrett said:
A motivational write that speaks of believing in yourself and relying on a higher power. Nicely written
March 25th, 2025 13:16
This is Home
Poetic Licence said:
The essence of true love, through good and bad, enjoyed the read
March 25th, 2025 03:07
Poetic Licence said:
The essence of true love, through good and bad, enjoyed the read
March 25th, 2025 03:07
This is Home
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful poem of union and trust. So well composed and written it speaks with rhyme that is dear to the ear and resonates with emotion that is close to the heart. Well done
March 24th, 2025 15:15
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful poem of union and trust. So well composed and written it speaks with rhyme that is dear to the ear and resonates with emotion that is close to the heart. Well done
March 24th, 2025 15:15
When it Hurts
sorenbarrett said:
Another good write Shamrocker. It reads well with internal rhyme and yet the flow of pros. You have come a long way and your poems are a pleasure to read.
March 21st, 2025 14:01
sorenbarrett said:
Another good write Shamrocker. It reads well with internal rhyme and yet the flow of pros. You have come a long way and your poems are a pleasure to read.
March 21st, 2025 14:01
Dear Fathers,
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. Truth, my friend! Thank you for this message! 🙏
March 20th, 2025 21:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. Truth, my friend! Thank you for this message! 🙏
March 20th, 2025 21:33
Dear Fathers,
Poetic Licence said:
Well this hits the nail right on the head, so many men are guilty as charged, great write
March 20th, 2025 13:26
Poetic Licence said:
Well this hits the nail right on the head, so many men are guilty as charged, great write
March 20th, 2025 13:26
Dear Fathers,
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! such great advice to fathers. Being a father I can see the need for such relationships and I know that there is a different but just as special relationship with daughters as there is with sons. Wonderfully written and in such nice verse that is not showy but remains in the background as support to the message. Loved it a touching and wonderful write with such classy form a fave
March 20th, 2025 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! such great advice to fathers. Being a father I can see the need for such relationships and I know that there is a different but just as special relationship with daughters as there is with sons. Wonderfully written and in such nice verse that is not showy but remains in the background as support to the message. Loved it a touching and wonderful write with such classy form a fave
March 20th, 2025 12:07
Dear Fathers,
Poetic Dan said:
I\'ve done it before and I\'m doing it again this poem was magical to those that understand.
Thank you for sharing
Truly appreciated
Much peace and respect
March 20th, 2025 11:50
Poetic Dan said:
I\'ve done it before and I\'m doing it again this poem was magical to those that understand.
Thank you for sharing
Truly appreciated
Much peace and respect
March 20th, 2025 11:50
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