Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
Riordan’s First Day 2
Poetic Licence said:
Than k you for todays instalment, enjoyed
February 3rd, 2025 12:26
Poetic Licence said:
Than k you for todays instalment, enjoyed
February 3rd, 2025 12:26
Riordan’s First Day 2
sorenbarrett said:
Upon reading your story poems in the beginning in my blindness I did not see the creativity you displayed. Now that I have awoken form my rigid views I see a wonderful work of art in this style. This one continues to pull the reader along with its internal rhyme and continued segments that draw the reader back to your next one. Very nicely done you have incoporated the art of poetry with the genious of a mini series.
February 3rd, 2025 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
Upon reading your story poems in the beginning in my blindness I did not see the creativity you displayed. Now that I have awoken form my rigid views I see a wonderful work of art in this style. This one continues to pull the reader along with its internal rhyme and continued segments that draw the reader back to your next one. Very nicely done you have incoporated the art of poetry with the genious of a mini series.
February 3rd, 2025 09:29
Riordan’s First Day!
sorenbarrett said:
Real life as it is. Raw and pulling no punches. A good write with continued internal rhyme from time to time greasing the flow.
February 2nd, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Real life as it is. Raw and pulling no punches. A good write with continued internal rhyme from time to time greasing the flow.
February 2nd, 2025 04:54
Linens And Things!
Cassie58 said:
Is this the perfect set up? Will have to read more in the future to find out.
January 29th, 2025 17:32
Cassie58 said:
Is this the perfect set up? Will have to read more in the future to find out.
January 29th, 2025 17:32
Linens And Things!
sorenbarrett said:
Every story and piece of music needs a bridge and this is it. Nicely done
January 29th, 2025 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
Every story and piece of music needs a bridge and this is it. Nicely done
January 29th, 2025 15:42
Linens And Things!
Poetic Licence said:
It can go either way, till the next one, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 13:34
Poetic Licence said:
It can go either way, till the next one, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 13:34
Riordan
sorenbarrett said:
Again so nicely written in your personal style full of adventure and mystery as well as packed with hidden rhyme. Lovely
January 28th, 2025 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Again so nicely written in your personal style full of adventure and mystery as well as packed with hidden rhyme. Lovely
January 28th, 2025 06:50
Riordan
Poetic Licence said:
At the moment things are looking up, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 05:26
Poetic Licence said:
At the moment things are looking up, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 05:26
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Teddy.15 said:
Full of wisdom, judgement and haste are two things I myself dislike, if the world was more empathetic and kind I guess positivity would come easier. 🌹
January 27th, 2025 13:41
Teddy.15 said:
Full of wisdom, judgement and haste are two things I myself dislike, if the world was more empathetic and kind I guess positivity would come easier. 🌹
January 27th, 2025 13:41
Riosin
sorenbarrett said:
I have gotten used to your style and the more I read it the more I like it. The subtlety of rhyme and near rhyme in the flowing text gives it its appeal. Don\'t ever let that go it is your strong suit a growing masters hand hidden in the shadows. Very nicely done.
January 27th, 2025 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
I have gotten used to your style and the more I read it the more I like it. The subtlety of rhyme and near rhyme in the flowing text gives it its appeal. Don\'t ever let that go it is your strong suit a growing masters hand hidden in the shadows. Very nicely done.
January 27th, 2025 12:13
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Poetic Licence said:
Never judge a book by its cover, read some of the story first, lovely write with positive message
January 27th, 2025 02:49
Poetic Licence said:
Never judge a book by its cover, read some of the story first, lovely write with positive message
January 27th, 2025 02:49
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orchidee said:
Yes, 99% of the time I blunder in with KP. \'I\'m always right,\' I say! lol.
January 26th, 2025 14:53
orchidee said:
Yes, 99% of the time I blunder in with KP. \'I\'m always right,\' I say! lol.
January 26th, 2025 14:53
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sorenbarrett said:
Agreed it is often better to pause. Good advice in more poetic form
January 26th, 2025 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
Agreed it is often better to pause. Good advice in more poetic form
January 26th, 2025 12:27
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Demar Desu said:
That’s fair… but what if you automatically don’t vibe with that person will you eventually?
January 26th, 2025 12:14
Demar Desu said:
That’s fair… but what if you automatically don’t vibe with that person will you eventually?
January 26th, 2025 12:14
In The End
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message in this poem written with a flow that carried the reader down stream and with occasional rhyme to give attraction along the way.
January 25th, 2025 07:58
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message in this poem written with a flow that carried the reader down stream and with occasional rhyme to give attraction along the way.
January 25th, 2025 07:58
Everything Changes
Poetic Licence said:
Change needs to be for the better and not just for the sake of change, enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 07:15
Poetic Licence said:
Change needs to be for the better and not just for the sake of change, enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 07:15
Everything Changes
sorenbarrett said:
Change within limits is good so true preventing boredom but there is always too much of a good thing too. A nicely written message of value
January 24th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Change within limits is good so true preventing boredom but there is always too much of a good thing too. A nicely written message of value
January 24th, 2025 04:45
Keep Your Head Up
Cassie58 said:
An inspirational write. So true, all things eventually pass. Enjoyed my visit here. Thank you.
January 22nd, 2025 12:06
Cassie58 said:
An inspirational write. So true, all things eventually pass. Enjoyed my visit here. Thank you.
January 22nd, 2025 12:06
Keep Your Head Up
Poetic Licence said:
A positive and uplifting message for doom and gloom mongers like me !!!, enjoyed the read.
January 22nd, 2025 07:45
Poetic Licence said:
A positive and uplifting message for doom and gloom mongers like me !!!, enjoyed the read.
January 22nd, 2025 07:45
Keep Your Head Up
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reassurance and hope. Nicely stated
January 22nd, 2025 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reassurance and hope. Nicely stated
January 22nd, 2025 07:29
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