Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
Hard To Love?
sorenbarrett said:
For your wordsmithing in this poem it deserves a fave. Lovely work with rhyme and near rhyme internal rhyme in a poem that flows naturally as a paragraph of written work. Loved it
March 3rd, 2025 10:00
sorenbarrett said:
For your wordsmithing in this poem it deserves a fave. Lovely work with rhyme and near rhyme internal rhyme in a poem that flows naturally as a paragraph of written work. Loved it
March 3rd, 2025 10:00
Hard To Love?
Poetic Licence said:
A strong write around their belief and strength in faith,yet there are some of us mere mortals that are very hard to love, an interesting and well written write
March 3rd, 2025 09:56
Poetic Licence said:
A strong write around their belief and strength in faith,yet there are some of us mere mortals that are very hard to love, an interesting and well written write
March 3rd, 2025 09:56
Sometimes
Poetic Licence said:
Having trusting support is half the battle,a lovely positive write
February 28th, 2025 15:53
Poetic Licence said:
Having trusting support is half the battle,a lovely positive write
February 28th, 2025 15:53
A List of Do’s and Don’t’s
Poetic Licence said:
Don\'t disregard the positive messages in this write, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2025 03:17
Poetic Licence said:
Don\'t disregard the positive messages in this write, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2025 03:17
A List of Do’s and Don’t’s
sorenbarrett said:
A most important message that all need to hear. Well stated loving your internal rhyme so humbly used in a powerful piece
February 26th, 2025 16:11
sorenbarrett said:
A most important message that all need to hear. Well stated loving your internal rhyme so humbly used in a powerful piece
February 26th, 2025 16:11
Failures
sorenbarrett said:
Persistence is the key to this poem. A great attitude and good message. Very nice
February 25th, 2025 10:30
sorenbarrett said:
Persistence is the key to this poem. A great attitude and good message. Very nice
February 25th, 2025 10:30
Failures
Poetic Licence said:
You never learn anything if you don\'t make any mistakes, enjoyed read with very positive message
February 25th, 2025 09:58
Poetic Licence said:
You never learn anything if you don\'t make any mistakes, enjoyed read with very positive message
February 25th, 2025 09:58
Failures
orchidee said:
I\'m being horribly negative: \'Ohh, if at first ya don\'t succeed - give up!\' lol. No, no, says Fido - he knows.
February 25th, 2025 09:55
orchidee said:
I\'m being horribly negative: \'Ohh, if at first ya don\'t succeed - give up!\' lol. No, no, says Fido - he knows.
February 25th, 2025 09:55
The Battle
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reliance and belief. Very nicely written
February 24th, 2025 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reliance and belief. Very nicely written
February 24th, 2025 11:41
I Said A Prayer For You
NafisaSB said:
so beautiful and so generous
here\'s a prayer for you too reciprocated from my side
February 24th, 2025 00:11
NafisaSB said:
so beautiful and so generous
here\'s a prayer for you too reciprocated from my side
February 24th, 2025 00:11
I Said A Prayer For You
whats write for me said:
A very moving prayer. Feels like a prayer from mother for child. Kind, comforting and genuine.
February 23rd, 2025 17:48
whats write for me said:
A very moving prayer. Feels like a prayer from mother for child. Kind, comforting and genuine.
February 23rd, 2025 17:48
I Said A Prayer For You
sorenbarrett said:
A kind gesture in a poem. Nicely stated compassion for another stated. Although not religious I would have no objection to anyone that wanted to say a prayer for me. Lovely
February 23rd, 2025 16:43
sorenbarrett said:
A kind gesture in a poem. Nicely stated compassion for another stated. Although not religious I would have no objection to anyone that wanted to say a prayer for me. Lovely
February 23rd, 2025 16:43
I Said A Prayer For You
Poetic Licence said:
Such a giving and caring write, thank you
February 23rd, 2025 15:53
Poetic Licence said:
Such a giving and caring write, thank you
February 23rd, 2025 15:53
I Said A Prayer For You
orchidee said:
It will do fine, thank you GS, and not just casually in the sense of \'Oh, that\'ll do, that\'ll keep \'em quiet!\'
February 23rd, 2025 15:38
orchidee said:
It will do fine, thank you GS, and not just casually in the sense of \'Oh, that\'ll do, that\'ll keep \'em quiet!\'
February 23rd, 2025 15:38
This Is Love
Poetic Licence said:
Seeing from both sides is one thing, understanding and respecting on both sides is another, enjoyed the read
February 21st, 2025 09:47
Poetic Licence said:
Seeing from both sides is one thing, understanding and respecting on both sides is another, enjoyed the read
February 21st, 2025 09:47
This Is Love
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! Good advice in poetry can never go wrong. Seeing from both sides is rare and a lovely touch. Well worded and spoken as if you have a lot of experience. For the message and also the presentation (sharp psychological work in the last line to not put people on the defensive) it deserves a fave.
February 21st, 2025 08:47
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! Good advice in poetry can never go wrong. Seeing from both sides is rare and a lovely touch. Well worded and spoken as if you have a lot of experience. For the message and also the presentation (sharp psychological work in the last line to not put people on the defensive) it deserves a fave.
February 21st, 2025 08:47
Coming Up With A Plan
sorenbarrett said:
Short and desperate this poem evokes feeling of panic. What is more immediate than the need for air? The feeling of reaching out and not able to get there. A powerful poem.
February 21st, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
Short and desperate this poem evokes feeling of panic. What is more immediate than the need for air? The feeling of reaching out and not able to get there. A powerful poem.
February 21st, 2025 05:28
Unending Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful prose poem, my friend! 🌹👏
February 20th, 2025 21:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful prose poem, my friend! 🌹👏
February 20th, 2025 21:26
Unending Love
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of parenthood and what it entails. Nicely done
February 20th, 2025 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of parenthood and what it entails. Nicely done
February 20th, 2025 14:04
In The End
Cassie58 said:
In the end, it is the love you leave behind that will be remembered. Enjoyed your words. Have a good Wednesday.
February 19th, 2025 08:02
Cassie58 said:
In the end, it is the love you leave behind that will be remembered. Enjoyed your words. Have a good Wednesday.
February 19th, 2025 08:02
In The End
TommyDingo said:
Thats such a deep and introspective poem well done great work
February 19th, 2025 07:47
TommyDingo said:
Thats such a deep and introspective poem well done great work
February 19th, 2025 07:47
In The End
sorenbarrett said:
Very meaningful. Tis poem reaches deep into what one should strive for and what priorities should be. A philosophically moral poem. Nicely done.
February 19th, 2025 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
Very meaningful. Tis poem reaches deep into what one should strive for and what priorities should be. A philosophically moral poem. Nicely done.
February 19th, 2025 05:24
Listen With Your Heart
orchidee said:
Good write GS. KP hasn\'t got one. Well, she\'s hardly human! lol.
February 19th, 2025 03:23
orchidee said:
Good write GS. KP hasn\'t got one. Well, she\'s hardly human! lol.
February 19th, 2025 03:23
Listen With Your Heart
sorenbarrett said:
More lies beneath the surface and there is a history to consider as well. Walking in another\'s shoes is the issue. Very good message.
February 18th, 2025 14:19
sorenbarrett said:
More lies beneath the surface and there is a history to consider as well. Walking in another\'s shoes is the issue. Very good message.
February 18th, 2025 14:19
Nobody Knows
Poetic Licence said:
A truly uplifting write, enjoyed the read
February 17th, 2025 09:58
Poetic Licence said:
A truly uplifting write, enjoyed the read
February 17th, 2025 09:58
Nobody Knows
sorenbarrett said:
A great message to send to people that stay unknown to others. Very nice
February 17th, 2025 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
A great message to send to people that stay unknown to others. Very nice
February 17th, 2025 09:09
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