Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
Waiting
RSM0812 said:
I really like it. It let\'s you know that fear has a purpose and one needs to exploit fear and turn it to one\'s own benifit in life
December 26th, 2023 15:11
RSM0812 said:
I really like it. It let\'s you know that fear has a purpose and one needs to exploit fear and turn it to one\'s own benifit in life
December 26th, 2023 15:11
Waiting
orchidee said:
Me. I\'m waiting for the No.7 bus. Doh! It don\'t run on Sundays! I been at this bus stop 2 hours! lol.
December 26th, 2023 11:39
orchidee said:
Me. I\'m waiting for the No.7 bus. Doh! It don\'t run on Sundays! I been at this bus stop 2 hours! lol.
December 26th, 2023 11:39
Waiting
Dev Parth said:
In the quiet of anticipation, I stand,
Time\'s gentle touch, like shifting sand.
Eager heart, a patient serenade,
In the art of waiting, dreams are made.
Nice one Brother.
Thank you for sharing with us.
December 26th, 2023 08:43
Dev Parth said:
In the quiet of anticipation, I stand,
Time\'s gentle touch, like shifting sand.
Eager heart, a patient serenade,
In the art of waiting, dreams are made.
Nice one Brother.
Thank you for sharing with us.
December 26th, 2023 08:43
The Journey
orchidee said:
Good write G.
I just fell off the roundabout/merry-go-round in the park. It was going too fast. lol.
December 17th, 2023 10:45
orchidee said:
Good write G.
I just fell off the roundabout/merry-go-round in the park. It was going too fast. lol.
December 17th, 2023 10:45
Safe Place
orchidee said:
Do I always believe His love to me - to us? Whether I/we feel, remember, consider, are consciously aware of it, etc, or not?
There\'s simplicity in profundity (or in some profundities at least), and vice versa - profundity in simplicity.
Here\'s one example in this poem, at surely the highest level - or greatest depth, we may say.
I\'m \'gushing\' a bit here maybe! lol. But it\'s a vital theme surely.
December 15th, 2023 15:20
orchidee said:
Do I always believe His love to me - to us? Whether I/we feel, remember, consider, are consciously aware of it, etc, or not?
There\'s simplicity in profundity (or in some profundities at least), and vice versa - profundity in simplicity.
Here\'s one example in this poem, at surely the highest level - or greatest depth, we may say.
I\'m \'gushing\' a bit here maybe! lol. But it\'s a vital theme surely.
December 15th, 2023 15:20
In Dark Times
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
In dark times - switch on a light bulb. Do shut up Orchi, says Fido. lol.
December 14th, 2023 02:48
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
In dark times - switch on a light bulb. Do shut up Orchi, says Fido. lol.
December 14th, 2023 02:48
A Long Day
orchidee said:
That\'ll be that day the clocks went back - a 25 hour long day! heehee.
December 8th, 2023 06:05
orchidee said:
That\'ll be that day the clocks went back - a 25 hour long day! heehee.
December 8th, 2023 06:05
Grateful
2781 said:
People come and People go but the word of the Lord endures forever.
November 23rd, 2023 08:01
2781 said:
People come and People go but the word of the Lord endures forever.
November 23rd, 2023 08:01
All Things Work Out In The End
orchidee said:
Good write, whoever wrote it! Amethyst, Arthur, Agnes,......?
November 22nd, 2023 12:54
orchidee said:
Good write, whoever wrote it! Amethyst, Arthur, Agnes,......?
November 22nd, 2023 12:54
Dinner
orchidee said:
Good write Amethyst, erm, GS. I dunno who\'s writing these poems! lol.
November 20th, 2023 08:57
orchidee said:
Good write Amethyst, erm, GS. I dunno who\'s writing these poems! lol.
November 20th, 2023 08:57
Reunited
Bobby O said:
It makes sense and wraps up w satisfaction. Is there any symbolism to all names starting w “A”?
November 17th, 2023 02:48
Bobby O said:
It makes sense and wraps up w satisfaction. Is there any symbolism to all names starting w “A”?
November 17th, 2023 02:48
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