Comments received on poems by GenXer Sharon ๐๐
It Doesnโt Work
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Yes, I told KP about her botox: \'It doesn\'t work!\' heehee.
January 9th, 2026 09:59
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
Yes, I told KP about her botox: \'It doesn\'t work!\' heehee.
January 9th, 2026 09:59
It Doesnโt Work
sorenbarrett said:
Another good poem of faith and belief. Relying on a God to carry one through. Nicely composed
January 9th, 2026 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
Another good poem of faith and belief. Relying on a God to carry one through. Nicely composed
January 9th, 2026 07:22
It will be Ok
orchidee said:
A fine Ok write GS.
Meanwhile though - boo hoo, it will never be OK with KP! heehee. Do shut up Orchi, Fids says to me. lol.
January 7th, 2026 11:35
orchidee said:
A fine Ok write GS.
Meanwhile though - boo hoo, it will never be OK with KP! heehee. Do shut up Orchi, Fids says to me. lol.
January 7th, 2026 11:35
Thereโs Purpose in Everything
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Iโve had seasons where being still was harder than doing anything else, and this meets that tension honestly. The reminder to release what canโt be controlled feels grounded and real. Fantastic write, my friend.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 7th, 2026 09:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Iโve had seasons where being still was harder than doing anything else, and this meets that tension honestly. The reminder to release what canโt be controlled feels grounded and real. Fantastic write, my friend.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 7th, 2026 09:20
It will be Ok
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a steady hand on the shoulder. It speaks calm into the middle of the storm and refuses panic. Thereโs reassurance here without pressure, and that matters. Thank you for offering that kind of presence. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 7th, 2026 09:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a steady hand on the shoulder. It speaks calm into the middle of the storm and refuses panic. Thereโs reassurance here without pressure, and that matters. Thank you for offering that kind of presence. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 7th, 2026 09:13
It will be Ok
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful and reassuring thought to carry with one. A lovely write
January 7th, 2026 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful and reassuring thought to carry with one. A lovely write
January 7th, 2026 08:24
Thereโs Purpose in Everything
orchidee said:
Good write GS. What IS the purpose of me being married to KP? I\'ve not got the foggiest idea! lol.
January 6th, 2026 09:45
orchidee said:
Good write GS. What IS the purpose of me being married to KP? I\'ve not got the foggiest idea! lol.
January 6th, 2026 09:45
Thereโs Purpose in Everything
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with good rhyme and near rhyme in a message that is worth listening too. A lovely work my friend
January 6th, 2026 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with good rhyme and near rhyme in a message that is worth listening too. A lovely work my friend
January 6th, 2026 07:35
The Treasure of Grace
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a devotional reflection grounded in encouragement. You frame grace as relationship rather than reward (amen to that), and by the end it feels personal and steady. Thank you for sharing this light. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ
January 4th, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a devotional reflection grounded in encouragement. You frame grace as relationship rather than reward (amen to that), and by the end it feels personal and steady. Thank you for sharing this light. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ
January 4th, 2026 09:19
The Treasure of Grace
orchidee said:
Good write GS. I have no earthly treasure - cos I married KP. She\'s nicked it all to pay for botox! lol.
January 3rd, 2026 12:05
orchidee said:
Good write GS. I have no earthly treasure - cos I married KP. She\'s nicked it all to pay for botox! lol.
January 3rd, 2026 12:05
The Treasure of Grace
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of faith and looking to a higher power for guidance and acceptance. Nicely written in such an upbeat manner
January 3rd, 2026 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of faith and looking to a higher power for guidance and acceptance. Nicely written in such an upbeat manner
January 3rd, 2026 08:45
A Beautiful Ending!
sorenbarrett said:
And the story continues. As for small coffee shops and diners they are my favorite unfortunately they are going away and I refuse to eat at a franchise. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
And the story continues. As for small coffee shops and diners they are my favorite unfortunately they are going away and I refuse to eat at a franchise. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 11:46
A Beautiful Ending!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! First comment! My friend, this is a gentle and satisfying conclusion. You let relationships unfold naturally and end on hope without tying everything in a bow. The coffee shop remains a living place, not just a setting, and that feels right. Excellent job! Happy New Year to you as well. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 1st, 2026 10:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! First comment! My friend, this is a gentle and satisfying conclusion. You let relationships unfold naturally and end on hope without tying everything in a bow. The coffee shop remains a living place, not just a setting, and that feels right. Excellent job! Happy New Year to you as well. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 1st, 2026 10:44
Finishing Touches and the Secrets Out!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this chapter holds community, continuity, and earned trust. The shop becomes a living thing again through shared work and unspoken history, and that final question invites us to stay a little longer. Itโs gentle storytelling with heart. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 28th, 2025 08:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this chapter holds community, continuity, and earned trust. The shop becomes a living thing again through shared work and unspoken history, and that final question invites us to stay a little longer. Itโs gentle storytelling with heart. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 28th, 2025 08:09
Finishing Touches and the Secrets Out!
sorenbarrett said:
Piece by piece the story is revealed and the puzzle comes together. Nicely done
December 28th, 2025 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
Piece by piece the story is revealed and the puzzle comes together. Nicely done
December 28th, 2025 07:13
Finishing Touches and the Secrets Out!
Friendship said:
A charming story of a coffee shop where patrons\' nostalgia leads to a remarkable bond between two people.
December 28th, 2025 07:13
Friendship said:
A charming story of a coffee shop where patrons\' nostalgia leads to a remarkable bond between two people.
December 28th, 2025 07:13
Tucker Comes Through
sorenbarrett said:
A good continuation of your story well written and now let\'s see what\'s next.
December 21st, 2025 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
A good continuation of your story well written and now let\'s see what\'s next.
December 21st, 2025 12:53
Tucker Comes Through
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this chapter feels warm and steady. Grief, friendship, and quiet care move through it naturally, without being rushed or dramatized. It reads with a calm heart. Lovely, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 21st, 2025 12:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this chapter feels warm and steady. Grief, friendship, and quiet care move through it naturally, without being rushed or dramatized. It reads with a calm heart. Lovely, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 21st, 2025 12:51
Tucker Comes Through
orchidee said:
Good write GS. Does Tucker know KP? Fido says to me - Do shut up Orchi. lol.
December 21st, 2025 11:07
orchidee said:
Good write GS. Does Tucker know KP? Fido says to me - Do shut up Orchi. lol.
December 21st, 2025 11:07
An Unexpected but Pleasant Twist
sorenbarrett said:
I like how you as the author break the forth wall in this write it makes it so enjoyable. Nicely done
December 15th, 2025 11:09
sorenbarrett said:
I like how you as the author break the forth wall in this write it makes it so enjoyable. Nicely done
December 15th, 2025 11:09
Getting Along Well
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this chapter balances story and reflection well. The practical details, the quiet faith, and the shared anticipation all work together, making the close feel inviting rather than abrupt. Looking forward to what comes next. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 15th, 2025 08:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, this chapter balances story and reflection well. The practical details, the quiet faith, and the shared anticipation all work together, making the close feel inviting rather than abrupt. Looking forward to what comes next. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 15th, 2025 08:23
Getting Along Well
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter and the story moves along. Well done Shamrocker
December 14th, 2025 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter and the story moves along. Well done Shamrocker
December 14th, 2025 12:58
Getting Along Well
orchidee said:
Boohoo! I\'m not getting along well with KP! lol.
December 14th, 2025 11:12
orchidee said:
Boohoo! I\'m not getting along well with KP! lol.
December 14th, 2025 11:12
First day on the Job
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, the pacing, the quiet transformation, the way Uriah works through each task with intentionโฆit all gives this chapter a warm pulse. Youโre building something tender here, layer by layer. Really enjoyed this, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 8th, 2025 21:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, the pacing, the quiet transformation, the way Uriah works through each task with intentionโฆit all gives this chapter a warm pulse. Youโre building something tender here, layer by layer. Really enjoyed this, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 8th, 2025 21:08
First day on the Job
sorenbarrett said:
And so the story proceeds. Well written it speaks for itself. Nicely done Shamrocker
December 8th, 2025 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
And so the story proceeds. Well written it speaks for itself. Nicely done Shamrocker
December 8th, 2025 09:17
Making the Cut?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, the pacing, the intrigue, the quiet emotional beatsโฆall of it sets the stage for a story that feels like itโs just beginning to open up. Youโve planted the hook well, dear friend. Very well done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 6th, 2025 11:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
GenXer, the pacing, the intrigue, the quiet emotional beatsโฆall of it sets the stage for a story that feels like itโs just beginning to open up. Youโve planted the hook well, dear friend. Very well done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
December 6th, 2025 11:03
Making the Cut?
sorenbarrett said:
Shamrocker you are a definite one for writing stories. Well worked and planned this is a great set up for the rest of the story
December 6th, 2025 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
Shamrocker you are a definite one for writing stories. Well worked and planned this is a great set up for the rest of the story
December 6th, 2025 08:57
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