Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
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Teddy.15 said:
Full of wisdom, judgement and haste are two things I myself dislike, if the world was more empathetic and kind I guess positivity would come easier. 🌹
January 27th, 2025 13:41
Teddy.15 said:
Full of wisdom, judgement and haste are two things I myself dislike, if the world was more empathetic and kind I guess positivity would come easier. 🌹
January 27th, 2025 13:41
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sorenbarrett said:
I have gotten used to your style and the more I read it the more I like it. The subtlety of rhyme and near rhyme in the flowing text gives it its appeal. Don\'t ever let that go it is your strong suit a growing masters hand hidden in the shadows. Very nicely done.
January 27th, 2025 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
I have gotten used to your style and the more I read it the more I like it. The subtlety of rhyme and near rhyme in the flowing text gives it its appeal. Don\'t ever let that go it is your strong suit a growing masters hand hidden in the shadows. Very nicely done.
January 27th, 2025 12:13
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Poetic Licence said:
Never judge a book by its cover, read some of the story first, lovely write with positive message
January 27th, 2025 02:49
Poetic Licence said:
Never judge a book by its cover, read some of the story first, lovely write with positive message
January 27th, 2025 02:49
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orchidee said:
Yes, 99% of the time I blunder in with KP. \'I\'m always right,\' I say! lol.
January 26th, 2025 14:53
orchidee said:
Yes, 99% of the time I blunder in with KP. \'I\'m always right,\' I say! lol.
January 26th, 2025 14:53
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sorenbarrett said:
Agreed it is often better to pause. Good advice in more poetic form
January 26th, 2025 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
Agreed it is often better to pause. Good advice in more poetic form
January 26th, 2025 12:27
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Demar Desu said:
That’s fair… but what if you automatically don’t vibe with that person will you eventually?
January 26th, 2025 12:14
Demar Desu said:
That’s fair… but what if you automatically don’t vibe with that person will you eventually?
January 26th, 2025 12:14
In The End
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message in this poem written with a flow that carried the reader down stream and with occasional rhyme to give attraction along the way.
January 25th, 2025 07:58
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message in this poem written with a flow that carried the reader down stream and with occasional rhyme to give attraction along the way.
January 25th, 2025 07:58
Everything Changes
Poetic Licence said:
Change needs to be for the better and not just for the sake of change, enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 07:15
Poetic Licence said:
Change needs to be for the better and not just for the sake of change, enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 07:15
Everything Changes
sorenbarrett said:
Change within limits is good so true preventing boredom but there is always too much of a good thing too. A nicely written message of value
January 24th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Change within limits is good so true preventing boredom but there is always too much of a good thing too. A nicely written message of value
January 24th, 2025 04:45
Keep Your Head Up
Cassie58 said:
An inspirational write. So true, all things eventually pass. Enjoyed my visit here. Thank you.
January 22nd, 2025 12:06
Cassie58 said:
An inspirational write. So true, all things eventually pass. Enjoyed my visit here. Thank you.
January 22nd, 2025 12:06
Keep Your Head Up
Poetic Licence said:
A positive and uplifting message for doom and gloom mongers like me !!!, enjoyed the read.
January 22nd, 2025 07:45
Poetic Licence said:
A positive and uplifting message for doom and gloom mongers like me !!!, enjoyed the read.
January 22nd, 2025 07:45
Keep Your Head Up
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reassurance and hope. Nicely stated
January 22nd, 2025 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reassurance and hope. Nicely stated
January 22nd, 2025 07:29
Grief
sorenbarrett said:
I loved this piece it echos with rhyme and near rhyme in a pros style that is yours and yours alone. I have seldom seen this format used before and it works well for you. Lovely
January 21st, 2025 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
I loved this piece it echos with rhyme and near rhyme in a pros style that is yours and yours alone. I have seldom seen this format used before and it works well for you. Lovely
January 21st, 2025 08:37
Grief
Cassie58 said:
It is the anniversary of my Dad’s death. Thirty four years ago. Reading your poem about grief reminds me that it is a journey. The rawness has gone, there is the softness of acceptance and the bond of love remains as strong. Thank you for posting.
January 21st, 2025 06:10
Cassie58 said:
It is the anniversary of my Dad’s death. Thirty four years ago. Reading your poem about grief reminds me that it is a journey. The rawness has gone, there is the softness of acceptance and the bond of love remains as strong. Thank you for posting.
January 21st, 2025 06:10
Bitter Sweet
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this final chapter that was realistic and poetic. Your rhyme and near rhyme inside the poem pulls the reader along and gives a sense of completion to the words. Very nicely done
January 15th, 2025 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this final chapter that was realistic and poetic. Your rhyme and near rhyme inside the poem pulls the reader along and gives a sense of completion to the words. Very nicely done
January 15th, 2025 10:45
Right On Time
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter complete and I guess I\'ll have to come back for the end. You have captured an interesting psychological element in your poems and that is the serial strength to bring the reader back
January 15th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter complete and I guess I\'ll have to come back for the end. You have captured an interesting psychological element in your poems and that is the serial strength to bring the reader back
January 15th, 2025 04:15
Arrival Day
Poetic Licence said:
Patience is a virtue, and i await the next one, enjoyed the read
January 12th, 2025 15:57
Poetic Licence said:
Patience is a virtue, and i await the next one, enjoyed the read
January 12th, 2025 15:57
Arrival Day
sorenbarrett said:
This is a nice bridge between the last chapter and what is still pending. Waiting for the next one
January 12th, 2025 15:18
sorenbarrett said:
This is a nice bridge between the last chapter and what is still pending. Waiting for the next one
January 12th, 2025 15:18
Odelia’s Deeper Purpose
sorenbarrett said:
Life is full of questions and as soon as one is answered another takes its place. I guess we will see
January 6th, 2025 20:21
sorenbarrett said:
Life is full of questions and as soon as one is answered another takes its place. I guess we will see
January 6th, 2025 20:21
Odelia’s Deeper Purpose
Poetic Licence said:
We will wait till tomorrow to see, enjoyed the read
January 6th, 2025 16:42
Poetic Licence said:
We will wait till tomorrow to see, enjoyed the read
January 6th, 2025 16:42
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