Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
It’s Found In Stillness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful and true write, my friend! That makes it a fave for me. 🌹👏
June 18th, 2025 17:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful and true write, my friend! That makes it a fave for me. 🌹👏
June 18th, 2025 17:32
It’s Found In Stillness
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
I stay still for KP; don\'t move a muscle all day; leave her to do everything; wait on me hand and foot. LOL.
June 18th, 2025 11:07
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
I stay still for KP; don\'t move a muscle all day; leave her to do everything; wait on me hand and foot. LOL.
June 18th, 2025 11:07
It’s Found In Stillness
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful concept and poem a lovely write
June 18th, 2025 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful concept and poem a lovely write
June 18th, 2025 06:12
I Didn’t Always Get it Right
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
I\'m \'orrible, a monster. I enjoy ignoring KP\'s existence every day. When she talks, I say \'Did someone speak just then?!\' LOL.
June 13th, 2025 12:49
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
I\'m \'orrible, a monster. I enjoy ignoring KP\'s existence every day. When she talks, I say \'Did someone speak just then?!\' LOL.
June 13th, 2025 12:49
I Didn’t Always Get it Right
sorenbarrett said:
Shamrocker another wonderful write from the heart it speaks of love that most can understand and is put in good internal and periodic rhyme and flow. Nicely done
June 13th, 2025 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
Shamrocker another wonderful write from the heart it speaks of love that most can understand and is put in good internal and periodic rhyme and flow. Nicely done
June 13th, 2025 07:59
Remember These Two?
orchidee said:
The only two I remember, one of whom I wish I could forget, is KP and Fido. lol.
June 11th, 2025 12:05
orchidee said:
The only two I remember, one of whom I wish I could forget, is KP and Fido. lol.
June 11th, 2025 12:05
Remember These Two?
Poetic Licence said:
Thats good to have a happy ending, end of one story start of another, enjoyed the read
June 11th, 2025 07:05
Poetic Licence said:
Thats good to have a happy ending, end of one story start of another, enjoyed the read
June 11th, 2025 07:05
Remember These Two?
sorenbarrett said:
The end to one story is the beginning to the next. Well written with only one superfluous other in the lines. Well done
June 11th, 2025 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
The end to one story is the beginning to the next. Well written with only one superfluous other in the lines. Well done
June 11th, 2025 06:33
Beyond Repair?
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
I can\'t say I\'m having the same \'success\'. A gadget said \'If it ain\'t broke, dont fix it\'. I tried to fix it - now it\'s broke! Doh! lol.
I\'m telling porkies again.
June 11th, 2025 02:16
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
I can\'t say I\'m having the same \'success\'. A gadget said \'If it ain\'t broke, dont fix it\'. I tried to fix it - now it\'s broke! Doh! lol.
I\'m telling porkies again.
June 11th, 2025 02:16
Beyond Repair?
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful of poem well worded and written. Nicely done Shamrocker
June 10th, 2025 12:46
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful of poem well worded and written. Nicely done Shamrocker
June 10th, 2025 12:46
It Doesn’t Matter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent! And amen! I am have personally experienced that to be true! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
June 3rd, 2025 14:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent! And amen! I am have personally experienced that to be true! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
June 3rd, 2025 14:57
The Power of Our Words
Poetic Licence said:
Very important message that alot do not understand, words are so powerful, they can so much good or cause so much harm, we should always choose carefully how we deliver them, enjoyed the read
June 3rd, 2025 11:02
Poetic Licence said:
Very important message that alot do not understand, words are so powerful, they can so much good or cause so much harm, we should always choose carefully how we deliver them, enjoyed the read
June 3rd, 2025 11:02
How We Are Remembered
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write with a great message, it is so true humans are to quick to judge and tend to remember bad over good, enjoyed the read
June 3rd, 2025 10:59
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write with a great message, it is so true humans are to quick to judge and tend to remember bad over good, enjoyed the read
June 3rd, 2025 10:59
It Doesn’t Matter
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely written with hidden near rhymes and so normally worded as to hardly notice. It leaves the hidden feeling of smoothness. Very nicely done.
June 3rd, 2025 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely written with hidden near rhymes and so normally worded as to hardly notice. It leaves the hidden feeling of smoothness. Very nicely done.
June 3rd, 2025 08:53
As I Am
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderfully written poem in your style. Loved it.
May 31st, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderfully written poem in your style. Loved it.
May 31st, 2025 09:41
The Heart of a Caregiver
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
I can\'t say I care for KP. My daily words to her are: \'I don\'t care, my dear!\' Ohh, I\'m horrible to her. lol.
May 30th, 2025 01:42
orchidee said:
A fine write GS.
I can\'t say I care for KP. My daily words to her are: \'I don\'t care, my dear!\' Ohh, I\'m horrible to her. lol.
May 30th, 2025 01:42
The Heart of a Caregiver
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love it, my friend. You really do get to the heart of who a caregiver is. Wonderful job! 🌹👏
May 29th, 2025 20:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love it, my friend. You really do get to the heart of who a caregiver is. Wonderful job! 🌹👏
May 29th, 2025 20:55
The Heart of a Caregiver
Poetic Licence said:
One of the hardest professions, takes a special person to undertake the job, a lovely write
May 29th, 2025 13:55
Poetic Licence said:
One of the hardest professions, takes a special person to undertake the job, a lovely write
May 29th, 2025 13:55
The Heart of a Caregiver
sorenbarrett said:
Again a most well written poem. I have to say I am a fan of your poetic style that blends free style with rhyme.
May 29th, 2025 13:17
sorenbarrett said:
Again a most well written poem. I have to say I am a fan of your poetic style that blends free style with rhyme.
May 29th, 2025 13:17
To Be Still
NafisaSB said:
yes - one must learn to forgive - both ourselves, and those who wronged us, for the wheel will definitely turn , and our struggles will end
Lovely message
May 28th, 2025 02:01
NafisaSB said:
yes - one must learn to forgive - both ourselves, and those who wronged us, for the wheel will definitely turn , and our struggles will end
Lovely message
May 28th, 2025 02:01
That’s Beautiful!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Being understood. Wow. That would be absolutely beautiful. Well done on this, my friend. Well done! Absolutely beautiful! 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 18:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Being understood. Wow. That would be absolutely beautiful. Well done on this, my friend. Well done! Absolutely beautiful! 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 18:37
That’s Beautiful!
sorenbarrett said:
Beyond being a most beautiful message well sent this poem reflects your unique poetic ability to place rhyme in what would otherwise be a free form piece. The piece on its own has beauty but the spice of unexpected rhyme as seasoning adds flavor to the dish. You have a most charming way of doing it.
( Someone who
gets you.
Who stands by
you through
and through.0
( Someone who I
s with you
on your happiest of days. One who
can understand that at times it won’t
always be this
way. )
In the use of always and way the near rhyme works almost as a subliminal.
(Someone who will join you on hobbies you may find boring.
One who won’t mind whether it’s the beach or the mountains. They’ll join you in exploring. )
Here the rhyme comes at an unexpected time that throws a bit of surprise in and a sense of relief.
(Someone who will truly love you for worse or for better.
Every storm and trial is best overcome together.)
A lovely poem for all of this. Much more complex than it appears at first glance
May 26th, 2025 13:59
sorenbarrett said:
Beyond being a most beautiful message well sent this poem reflects your unique poetic ability to place rhyme in what would otherwise be a free form piece. The piece on its own has beauty but the spice of unexpected rhyme as seasoning adds flavor to the dish. You have a most charming way of doing it.
( Someone who
gets you.
Who stands by
you through
and through.0
( Someone who I
s with you
on your happiest of days. One who
can understand that at times it won’t
always be this
way. )
In the use of always and way the near rhyme works almost as a subliminal.
(Someone who will join you on hobbies you may find boring.
One who won’t mind whether it’s the beach or the mountains. They’ll join you in exploring. )
Here the rhyme comes at an unexpected time that throws a bit of surprise in and a sense of relief.
(Someone who will truly love you for worse or for better.
Every storm and trial is best overcome together.)
A lovely poem for all of this. Much more complex than it appears at first glance
May 26th, 2025 13:59
That’s Beautiful!
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
But - aghh - is it beautiful that KP hangs around me for ever? lol.
May 26th, 2025 10:56
orchidee said:
Good write GS.
But - aghh - is it beautiful that KP hangs around me for ever? lol.
May 26th, 2025 10:56
That’s Beautiful!
Poetic Licence said:
Absolutely the best thing in the world you can ask for, enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 09:58
Poetic Licence said:
Absolutely the best thing in the world you can ask for, enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 09:58
In Loving Memory of Veteran
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful tribute to an outstanding human being. Wonderful job, my dear friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 09:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful tribute to an outstanding human being. Wonderful job, my dear friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 09:07
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