Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
Grief
sorenbarrett said:
I loved this piece it echos with rhyme and near rhyme in a pros style that is yours and yours alone. I have seldom seen this format used before and it works well for you. Lovely
January 21st, 2025 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
I loved this piece it echos with rhyme and near rhyme in a pros style that is yours and yours alone. I have seldom seen this format used before and it works well for you. Lovely
January 21st, 2025 08:37
Grief
Cassie58 said:
It is the anniversary of my Dad’s death. Thirty four years ago. Reading your poem about grief reminds me that it is a journey. The rawness has gone, there is the softness of acceptance and the bond of love remains as strong. Thank you for posting.
January 21st, 2025 06:10
Cassie58 said:
It is the anniversary of my Dad’s death. Thirty four years ago. Reading your poem about grief reminds me that it is a journey. The rawness has gone, there is the softness of acceptance and the bond of love remains as strong. Thank you for posting.
January 21st, 2025 06:10
Bitter Sweet
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this final chapter that was realistic and poetic. Your rhyme and near rhyme inside the poem pulls the reader along and gives a sense of completion to the words. Very nicely done
January 15th, 2025 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this final chapter that was realistic and poetic. Your rhyme and near rhyme inside the poem pulls the reader along and gives a sense of completion to the words. Very nicely done
January 15th, 2025 10:45
Right On Time
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter complete and I guess I\'ll have to come back for the end. You have captured an interesting psychological element in your poems and that is the serial strength to bring the reader back
January 15th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Another chapter complete and I guess I\'ll have to come back for the end. You have captured an interesting psychological element in your poems and that is the serial strength to bring the reader back
January 15th, 2025 04:15
Arrival Day
Poetic Licence said:
Patience is a virtue, and i await the next one, enjoyed the read
January 12th, 2025 15:57
Poetic Licence said:
Patience is a virtue, and i await the next one, enjoyed the read
January 12th, 2025 15:57
Arrival Day
sorenbarrett said:
This is a nice bridge between the last chapter and what is still pending. Waiting for the next one
January 12th, 2025 15:18
sorenbarrett said:
This is a nice bridge between the last chapter and what is still pending. Waiting for the next one
January 12th, 2025 15:18
Odelia’s Deeper Purpose
sorenbarrett said:
Life is full of questions and as soon as one is answered another takes its place. I guess we will see
January 6th, 2025 20:21
sorenbarrett said:
Life is full of questions and as soon as one is answered another takes its place. I guess we will see
January 6th, 2025 20:21
Odelia’s Deeper Purpose
Poetic Licence said:
We will wait till tomorrow to see, enjoyed the read
January 6th, 2025 16:42
Poetic Licence said:
We will wait till tomorrow to see, enjoyed the read
January 6th, 2025 16:42
The Power of Forgiveness
Poetic Licence said:
Another enjoyable instalment, well written piece
January 5th, 2025 10:15
Poetic Licence said:
Another enjoyable instalment, well written piece
January 5th, 2025 10:15
The Power of Forgiveness
sorenbarrett said:
A story based on hope and faith with the belief that faith will make you whole
January 5th, 2025 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
A story based on hope and faith with the belief that faith will make you whole
January 5th, 2025 09:43
Obadiah Makes It to Mom
sorenbarrett said:
It is often good to end on an upbeat in a poem or story not so in music. Nice write
January 3rd, 2025 17:26
sorenbarrett said:
It is often good to end on an upbeat in a poem or story not so in music. Nice write
January 3rd, 2025 17:26
Obadiah Makes It to Mom
Poetic Licence said:
Confirming that a true mothers love is always strong and lasts forever, very enjoyable read.
January 3rd, 2025 13:54
Poetic Licence said:
Confirming that a true mothers love is always strong and lasts forever, very enjoyable read.
January 3rd, 2025 13:54
Obadiah’s Back Story
sorenbarrett said:
Happy endings seem to be in your nature so I\'m leaning that way. Another fun read with organized theme and message.
January 2nd, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Happy endings seem to be in your nature so I\'m leaning that way. Another fun read with organized theme and message.
January 2nd, 2025 04:38
Obadiah’s Back Story
Poetic Licence said:
Here is hoping it does, nicely written piece.
January 1st, 2025 17:04
Poetic Licence said:
Here is hoping it does, nicely written piece.
January 1st, 2025 17:04
Why Not Try?
Teddy.15 said:
Compassion and empathy can truly go a very long way dear Gen, we have nothing to lose only gain that we touched the heart of another. 🌹
January 1st, 2025 16:04
Teddy.15 said:
Compassion and empathy can truly go a very long way dear Gen, we have nothing to lose only gain that we touched the heart of another. 🌹
January 1st, 2025 16:04
Obadiah
Poetic Licence said:
A struggle to rectify the wrongs of the past, nicely written
December 31st, 2024 11:06
Poetic Licence said:
A struggle to rectify the wrongs of the past, nicely written
December 31st, 2024 11:06
Obadiah
sorenbarrett said:
Returning what one is given has been lost by many as it comes to parents as they grow old. A great message in this write. Happy New Year
December 31st, 2024 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
Returning what one is given has been lost by many as it comes to parents as they grow old. A great message in this write. Happy New Year
December 31st, 2024 07:09
Odelia
Poetic Licence said:
A touching tribute to a Mother and Daughters relationship but also to all those unsung heroes, who care for people every day. Really enjoyed the read
December 29th, 2024 08:48
Poetic Licence said:
A touching tribute to a Mother and Daughters relationship but also to all those unsung heroes, who care for people every day. Really enjoyed the read
December 29th, 2024 08:48
Odelia
sorenbarrett said:
Your stories contain internal rhyme and near rhyme that make them flow giving more interest and appeal. Lovely
December 29th, 2024 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
Your stories contain internal rhyme and near rhyme that make them flow giving more interest and appeal. Lovely
December 29th, 2024 08:12
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