Comments received on poems by GenXer Shamrocker ☘️



Everything Changes
Poetic Licence said:

Change needs to be for the better and not just for the sake of change, enjoyed the read

January 24th, 2025 07:15

Everything Changes
sorenbarrett said:

Change within limits is good so true preventing boredom but there is always too much of a good thing too. A nicely written message of value

January 24th, 2025 04:45

Keep Your Head Up
Cassie58 said:

An inspirational write. So true, all things eventually pass. Enjoyed my visit here. Thank you.

January 22nd, 2025 12:06

Keep Your Head Up
orchidee said:

Good write GS.

January 22nd, 2025 09:46

Keep Your Head Up
Poetic Licence said:

A positive and uplifting message for doom and gloom mongers like me !!!, enjoyed the read.

January 22nd, 2025 07:45

Keep Your Head Up
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of reassurance and hope. Nicely stated

January 22nd, 2025 07:29

Grief
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 21st, 2025 12:55

Grief
orchidee said:

Good write GS.

January 21st, 2025 11:23

Grief
sorenbarrett said:

I loved this piece it echos with rhyme and near rhyme in a pros style that is yours and yours alone. I have seldom seen this format used before and it works well for you. Lovely

January 21st, 2025 08:37

Grief
Cassie58 said:

It is the anniversary of my Dad’s death. Thirty four years ago. Reading your poem about grief reminds me that it is a journey. The rawness has gone, there is the softness of acceptance and the bond of love remains as strong. Thank you for posting.

January 21st, 2025 06:10

Bitter Sweet
sorenbarrett said:

I liked this final chapter that was realistic and poetic. Your rhyme and near rhyme inside the poem pulls the reader along and gives a sense of completion to the words. Very nicely done

January 15th, 2025 10:45

Bitter Sweet
orchidee said:

Good write GS.

January 15th, 2025 09:53

Right On Time
sorenbarrett said:

Another chapter complete and I guess I\'ll have to come back for the end. You have captured an interesting psychological element in your poems and that is the serial strength to bring the reader back

January 15th, 2025 04:15

Arrival Day
Poetic Licence said:

Patience is a virtue, and i await the next one, enjoyed the read

January 12th, 2025 15:57

Arrival Day
sorenbarrett said:

This is a nice bridge between the last chapter and what is still pending. Waiting for the next one

January 12th, 2025 15:18

Odelia’s Decision
Poetic Licence said:

Enjoyed the read, until tomorrow

January 8th, 2025 17:14

Odelia’s Decision
sorenbarrett said:

Another happy ending. Well done.

January 8th, 2025 13:58

Odelia’s Deeper Purpose
sorenbarrett said:

Life is full of questions and as soon as one is answered another takes its place. I guess we will see

January 6th, 2025 20:21

Odelia’s Deeper Purpose
Poetic Licence said:

We will wait till tomorrow to see, enjoyed the read

January 6th, 2025 16:42

The Power of Forgiveness
orchidee said:

Good write GS.

January 5th, 2025 12:51

The Power of Forgiveness
Poetic Licence said:

Another enjoyable instalment, well written piece

January 5th, 2025 10:15

The Power of Forgiveness
sorenbarrett said:

A story based on hope and faith with the belief that faith will make you whole

January 5th, 2025 09:43

Obadiah Makes It to Mom
sorenbarrett said:

It is often good to end on an upbeat in a poem or story not so in music. Nice write

January 3rd, 2025 17:26

Obadiah Makes It to Mom
orchidee said:

Good write GS.

January 3rd, 2025 13:55

Obadiah Makes It to Mom
Poetic Licence said:

Confirming that a true mothers love is always strong and lasts forever, very enjoyable read.

January 3rd, 2025 13:54

Obadiah Makes It to Mom
ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ said:

Great job!

January 3rd, 2025 13:43

Obadiah’s Back Story
sorenbarrett said:

Happy endings seem to be in your nature so I\'m leaning that way. Another fun read with organized theme and message.

January 2nd, 2025 04:38

Obadiah’s Back Story
Poetic Licence said:

Here is hoping it does, nicely written piece.

January 1st, 2025 17:04

Why Not Try?
Teddy.15 said:

Compassion and empathy can truly go a very long way dear Gen, we have nothing to lose only gain that we touched the heart of another. 🌹

January 1st, 2025 16:04

Obadiah
Poetic Licence said:

A struggle to rectify the wrongs of the past, nicely written

December 31st, 2024 11:06



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