Comments received on poems by uglykavi
Difference in Desire
sorenbarrett said:
This soliloquy reads well as a questioning of oneself. I find it difficult to translate poetry even one\'s own poems for there are words in one language that carry a different feel that their translation in another. Well done
September 20th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
This soliloquy reads well as a questioning of oneself. I find it difficult to translate poetry even one\'s own poems for there are words in one language that carry a different feel that their translation in another. Well done
September 20th, 2026 04:00
फ़र्क फ़िराक़ का
sorenbarrett said:
Fate or destiny\'s only purpose is to provide a scenic ride though life. Where all is set it is on a tour bus we ride destination known. Well done
September 14th, 2026 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
Fate or destiny\'s only purpose is to provide a scenic ride though life. Where all is set it is on a tour bus we ride destination known. Well done
September 14th, 2026 04:42
फ़र्क फ़िराक़ का
uglykavi said:
An early attempt at Translation:
(Please accept with Apology
for if a rather poor attempt?!)
Difference in Desire
-----------------------
If abuse is your fate -
what difference it makes?
Whether someone calls Gen Z
Or Frenzy -
What difference it makes?
Success Sufferage Showcase
- What\'s the difference?
I say no difference for the selfish!
For the selfish will do
anything and everything
knowing no difference!
What selfish goals make one
blind to differences?
No! We know not those goals.
But there are ugly ways -
to reach those unknown goals!
O Travelers on these
foul smelling faulty paths -
This World sees
Your Lust,
Your Strut,
Your Jingle!
Says Poet L Gorakhi -
What selfish goals
Made you lose
Your Today, Tomorrow and Day after?
Years have gone by!
You never did any Good.
This style, this character -
What Good came of it?
September 14th, 2026 03:10
uglykavi said:
An early attempt at Translation:
(Please accept with Apology
for if a rather poor attempt?!)
Difference in Desire
-----------------------
If abuse is your fate -
what difference it makes?
Whether someone calls Gen Z
Or Frenzy -
What difference it makes?
Success Sufferage Showcase
- What\'s the difference?
I say no difference for the selfish!
For the selfish will do
anything and everything
knowing no difference!
What selfish goals make one
blind to differences?
No! We know not those goals.
But there are ugly ways -
to reach those unknown goals!
O Travelers on these
foul smelling faulty paths -
This World sees
Your Lust,
Your Strut,
Your Jingle!
Says Poet L Gorakhi -
What selfish goals
Made you lose
Your Today, Tomorrow and Day after?
Years have gone by!
You never did any Good.
This style, this character -
What Good came of it?
September 14th, 2026 03:10
सपने अपने अपने
sorenbarrett said:
It is not the translation that is the problem for me but my ignorance of some of the figures and the ongoing crisis in India. Nicely written it flows well and speaks in sincere terms. Well done
August 30th, 2026 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
It is not the translation that is the problem for me but my ignorance of some of the figures and the ongoing crisis in India. Nicely written it flows well and speaks in sincere terms. Well done
August 30th, 2026 03:46
Trumpety Trump
sorenbarrett said:
A party poem that preaches the truth of how a party can cost so much and end with nothing to show. A poem of satire that sends its message well
April 1st, 2026 17:53
sorenbarrett said:
A party poem that preaches the truth of how a party can cost so much and end with nothing to show. A poem of satire that sends its message well
April 1st, 2026 17:53
No Rest. No Peace.
sorenbarrett said:
Many are afraid to be burned so build no fires content to live in cold houses. Loved the message and metaphor in this poem. Nicely done
May 12th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Many are afraid to be burned so build no fires content to live in cold houses. Loved the message and metaphor in this poem. Nicely done
May 12th, 2025 04:21
No Rest. No Peace.
Poetic Licence said:
More often than not we are existing and not living, nicely expressed and written write, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 02:21
Poetic Licence said:
More often than not we are existing and not living, nicely expressed and written write, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 02:21
मौत का सुख
Norman Flagtea said:
I would like to comment too, but I don\'t speak your language. Could you provide a translation, please...
January 27th, 2024 16:55
Norman Flagtea said:
I would like to comment too, but I don\'t speak your language. Could you provide a translation, please...
January 27th, 2024 16:55
चुनावी खेल
Doggerel Dave said:
If you are capable of delivering your commentary in English, why not the poem? the script , I concede is pretty, but totally meaningless to, I\'d suggest, the majority of the contributors/readers on this site...
You put your trust in Google translate?
January 13th, 2024 19:45
Doggerel Dave said:
If you are capable of delivering your commentary in English, why not the poem? the script , I concede is pretty, but totally meaningless to, I\'d suggest, the majority of the contributors/readers on this site...
You put your trust in Google translate?
January 13th, 2024 19:45
Welcome to a Fair and Just Year 2024
Trix said:
Happy new year and great poem.
January 1st, 2024 13:31
Trix said:
Happy new year and great poem.
January 1st, 2024 13:31
Welcome to a Fair and Just Year 2024
Cassie58 said:
Sadly I do not think we have a fair and just world, but I live in hope. Happy new year.
January 1st, 2024 08:41
Cassie58 said:
Sadly I do not think we have a fair and just world, but I live in hope. Happy new year.
January 1st, 2024 08:41
Welcome to a Fair and Just Year 2024
Rocky Lagou said:
What an interesting perspective. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2024 03:28
Rocky Lagou said:
What an interesting perspective. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2024 03:28
लोकतंत्र की पराजय
dusk arising said:
почему бы тебе не
напишите на английском
так что все
может наслаждаться вашим письмом
или не
May 27th, 2022 00:06
dusk arising said:
почему бы тебе не
напишите на английском
так что все
может наслаждаться вашим письмом
или не
May 27th, 2022 00:06
