Comments received on poems by Daniel McDonagh



Evening – (The Cancer Ballads IV)
sorenbarrett said:

Such beautiful images set off against a sad and horrific ending. The contrast gives the poem power beyond the expected.

October 22nd, 2024 13:24

Rain – (The Cancer Ballads III)
Tony36 said:

Love it

October 21st, 2024 17:13

Beatson (The Cancer Ballads I)
NafisaSB said:

love the lines about the weeds absorbing the tears of the rain - what a lovely description...a bit sad, but liked the message

October 20th, 2024 23:11

Beatson (The Cancer Ballads I)
jim56 said:

love this well written nice flow
well expressed keep writing

October 20th, 2024 07:07

Beatson (The Cancer Ballads I)
Cheeky Missy said:

The subtly haunting reality lurking at the edges of this poignant piece beg whither, answered by the birds\' chirping replies, as the children from ages past mull returning to the land of their forefathers. Lovely and beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.

October 19th, 2024 15:40

Who Will Wear the Poet’s Crown for Ireland?
Cheeky Missy said:

Mayhap you? This was a lovely lesson chockfull, seemingly to the brim, with invocations fit to make me swoon. Grandly rendered with marvelously excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you so very much for sharing.

October 19th, 2024 15:36

Beatson (The Cancer Ballads I)
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Beautiful poem!

October 16th, 2024 13:46

Beatson (The Cancer Ballads I)
peet said:

I have been to Scotland many times before and can feel the freshness of the mornings expressed so well in these lovely lines. Amazing stuff.

October 15th, 2024 13:18

Who Will Wear the Poet’s Crown for Ireland?
Cassie58 said:

Ireland has a fine tradition of producing memorable poets. I am familiar with Yeats, Heaney, Auden and MacNeice. You have mentioned others. I feel an urge to explore further. Pleased I stopped by to read you today Danniel.

April 16th, 2024 03:12

While A Dog Sits On A Pebbled Beach
M. Evermore said:

The mood is utterly peaceful and soothing. Thanks:)

May 18th, 2022 09:20

Your Mother’s Door
Rozina said:

Beautiful lines of love here.

May 6th, 2022 22:09

The Birdhouse
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah Daniel - Such an appeal in this gentle lament - - - this tale of a specially treasured bird house will stay in reader\'s minds long after the read.

May 5th, 2022 07:54

I Cannot See Your Glasgow
Christina8 said:

This is a really nice piece, very much enjoyed!! Awesome imagery!

April 25th, 2022 07:41

A Mother’s Burden
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow quite poignant. It\'s pretty sad but I hope reconciliation is on the horizon.

March 18th, 2022 09:21

The Eternal Rain
L. B. Mek said:

what a wonderfully
detail orientated poem
in the tradition of Frank O\'Hara..
a lovely read, thanks for sharing

March 11th, 2022 04:59

The Colour of Rain
Fay Slimm. said:

Hello Daniel - - with a late but friendly welcome to M.P.S. How interesting to learn words that roll off the tongue - - Freyr the rain god has been busy here too of late - - Cailleach Bheur has sent us milder weather this winter so we have early Spring flowering in gardens - - I love all that\'s strongly Gaelic - - thanks for sharing the meanings of festivals that I hope are still being celebrated

March 10th, 2022 16:39

Rainclouds
Thekkinkkattil said:

Enjoyed your poem . Beautifully penned

March 3rd, 2022 00:17

Rainclouds
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow! I love the imagery you implemented and it really led the story through a fun journey. All life just existing and doing and not doing and everything that is under one unescapable part of nature, rainclouds. Great job! 💖

March 2nd, 2022 11:11

Kyiv
orchidee said:

Good write D.

March 1st, 2022 14:52

Kyiv
Rocky Lagou said:

Praying for all the families in Ukraine! I love your poem and I hope that we can get out of this tough time together! 💖

March 1st, 2022 12:04