Comments received on poems by Niki Oz
The fight within yourself you do not know if you can win.
peto said:
I\'m glad you posted notes Niki
Your writing is so believable the reader would think you were in the moment
But then again
The write itself speaks of your lying to everyone even yourself
You speak of the breaking up and making up despite knowing better
A harrowing write
Learning how to tilt your neck a certain way was the wow factor for me
Although as a whole I was captivated from the start
Thankfully now
Your truth is your truth
This as you hope will help many and I hope it gets the reads it deserves
Brilliant writing
October 15th, 2023 23:56
peto said:
I\'m glad you posted notes Niki
Your writing is so believable the reader would think you were in the moment
But then again
The write itself speaks of your lying to everyone even yourself
You speak of the breaking up and making up despite knowing better
A harrowing write
Learning how to tilt your neck a certain way was the wow factor for me
Although as a whole I was captivated from the start
Thankfully now
Your truth is your truth
This as you hope will help many and I hope it gets the reads it deserves
Brilliant writing
October 15th, 2023 23:56
Make it stop
peto said:
Such a painful read niki
If you ever figure that out
Please let me know
Keep writing it out
October 12th, 2023 18:01
peto said:
Such a painful read niki
If you ever figure that out
Please let me know
Keep writing it out
October 12th, 2023 18:01
All I ever wanted was for you to love me
peto said:
NIK
Seems to have been written a while back
Glad you now value yourself
A great read
Full of passion and emotion
September 25th, 2023 11:17
peto said:
NIK
Seems to have been written a while back
Glad you now value yourself
A great read
Full of passion and emotion
September 25th, 2023 11:17
All I ever wanted was for you to love me
L. B. Mek said:
More power to you!
(those who steal mere minutes
of our lives
will never realise, the lifetime of love
they\'re missing out on
.. so Fck em\'
Onwards, to those that deserve us!)
thanks for sharing..
wishing you all the best
of luck
your braver deserves
September 25th, 2023 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
More power to you!
(those who steal mere minutes
of our lives
will never realise, the lifetime of love
they\'re missing out on
.. so Fck em\'
Onwards, to those that deserve us!)
thanks for sharing..
wishing you all the best
of luck
your braver deserves
September 25th, 2023 04:53
Fragments of a shattered mind
Bobby O said:
I really like this. Anticipation builds energy but open a tiny space for the lies lists tell. It sucks. I felt this piece and admired the honesty.
September 15th, 2023 22:58
Bobby O said:
I really like this. Anticipation builds energy but open a tiny space for the lies lists tell. It sucks. I felt this piece and admired the honesty.
September 15th, 2023 22:58
Look deeper
peto said:
Oh NIK
This is dynamite
The dying stars line is sensational
Read and re read trying to look deeper
Surrounded by the ignorant
Their actions fatal
Superb writing
September 14th, 2023 13:38
peto said:
Oh NIK
This is dynamite
The dying stars line is sensational
Read and re read trying to look deeper
Surrounded by the ignorant
Their actions fatal
Superb writing
September 14th, 2023 13:38
Excerpts from her heart
L. B. Mek said:
so impassioned, hope the person heeds your words
September 11th, 2023 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
so impassioned, hope the person heeds your words
September 11th, 2023 04:46
Hold my hand
Beth K said:
So beautiful, NIK, thank you! I envy the lucky soul who gets to hold your hand ❤️
-Beth
August 17th, 2023 19:03
Beth K said:
So beautiful, NIK, thank you! I envy the lucky soul who gets to hold your hand ❤️
-Beth
August 17th, 2023 19:03
If I wanted to kill myself
Ok Waleed said:
To bad I’ll give you a A.I parachute
June 29th, 2023 16:07
Ok Waleed said:
To bad I’ll give you a A.I parachute
June 29th, 2023 16:07
What I want
peto said:
Need you to be you
Raw and emotional read
That was very enjoyable
June 25th, 2023 10:44
peto said:
Need you to be you
Raw and emotional read
That was very enjoyable
June 25th, 2023 10:44
Thoughts in the night
L. B. Mek said:
relatable words, that ache
feels like it will never end..
thanks for sharing
stay strong
April 14th, 2023 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
relatable words, that ache
feels like it will never end..
thanks for sharing
stay strong
April 14th, 2023 04:12
The grass isn\'t greener, it\'s dead
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woahh expressed in powerful hardhitting metaphor. So admirable esp the part where you say he didn\'t tend the grass and forgot to replant. Kudos!!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wish u a happy new yr.
December 29th, 2022 13:38
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woahh expressed in powerful hardhitting metaphor. So admirable esp the part where you say he didn\'t tend the grass and forgot to replant. Kudos!!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wish u a happy new yr.
December 29th, 2022 13:38
You
L. B. Mek said:
wish you all the best, sounds like a special relationship
thanks for sharing
December 9th, 2022 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
wish you all the best, sounds like a special relationship
thanks for sharing
December 9th, 2022 05:03
I saw you
striving said:
Deep. Did you feel lighter after posting? I just posted my first poem and I did🙌🏽
November 19th, 2022 13:44
striving said:
Deep. Did you feel lighter after posting? I just posted my first poem and I did🙌🏽
November 19th, 2022 13:44
My bubble
L. B. Mek said:
the image of a \'bubble\'
is one I\'ve used many times before
when advising, those around me
it\'s a metaphor most people
can easily relate to
so yeah, let us all protect
our life\'s, \'bubble\'
by insuring, only
what can help us, enters
and fighting
to remove any toxic elements
as soon, as we sense them..
and if we grow
strong enough, to protect others
within our own bubble, well
even better!
(thanks for sharing
I\'m glad you have someone
or a faith system, like that
to depend on
but please, never stop
strengthening
your own bubble, as well)
April 8th, 2022 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
the image of a \'bubble\'
is one I\'ve used many times before
when advising, those around me
it\'s a metaphor most people
can easily relate to
so yeah, let us all protect
our life\'s, \'bubble\'
by insuring, only
what can help us, enters
and fighting
to remove any toxic elements
as soon, as we sense them..
and if we grow
strong enough, to protect others
within our own bubble, well
even better!
(thanks for sharing
I\'m glad you have someone
or a faith system, like that
to depend on
but please, never stop
strengthening
your own bubble, as well)
April 8th, 2022 04:38
My bubble
theneophiles_words said:
When the lightning met rose, all its sharpness withered away.
A harmless, uncomplicated, and sweet affection. Thank you for this tender read.
April 7th, 2022 22:16
theneophiles_words said:
When the lightning met rose, all its sharpness withered away.
A harmless, uncomplicated, and sweet affection. Thank you for this tender read.
April 7th, 2022 22:16
Dream dust
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing concept
is selflessness, purely
one sided
or can we invest in it, enough
for it to reward us, in return...
thanks for sharing
these line is just beautiful:
\'As the wind blows, so shall my ashes; carrying off into oblivion sprinkling hope on everything they touch.\'
April 4th, 2022 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing concept
is selflessness, purely
one sided
or can we invest in it, enough
for it to reward us, in return...
thanks for sharing
these line is just beautiful:
\'As the wind blows, so shall my ashes; carrying off into oblivion sprinkling hope on everything they touch.\'
April 4th, 2022 04:39
Out of the Darkness
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Another poet on here ? I think o have read his poems
I like your words .. good poem .. strange isn’t it how we can walk through so much darkness only to then meet a light to make our lives so much better . We all need those stars
March 28th, 2022 09:41
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Another poet on here ? I think o have read his poems
I like your words .. good poem .. strange isn’t it how we can walk through so much darkness only to then meet a light to make our lives so much better . We all need those stars
March 28th, 2022 09:41
The Narcissist
Dahlia said:
amazing piece of work, alot of the times
a narcissist has an underlying disorder, but it takes the right psychiatrist & counselor, especially now with the changes to the DSM, Happy Sunday!
Dahlia
March 27th, 2022 11:43
Dahlia said:
amazing piece of work, alot of the times
a narcissist has an underlying disorder, but it takes the right psychiatrist & counselor, especially now with the changes to the DSM, Happy Sunday!
Dahlia
March 27th, 2022 11:43
The Narcissist
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
They like to shift the blame onto others and not take responsibility .. so true
March 27th, 2022 01:33
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
They like to shift the blame onto others and not take responsibility .. so true
March 27th, 2022 01:33
The Narcissist
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Narcissists feel they are entitled but nobody deserves ti be treated as less than . I guess they need help .
March 27th, 2022 01:20
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Narcissists feel they are entitled but nobody deserves ti be treated as less than . I guess they need help .
March 27th, 2022 01:20
Pieces
Niki Oz said:
I\'m so happy to hear you were both able to find your true love and mend each others souls.
March 16th, 2022 18:59
Niki Oz said:
I\'m so happy to hear you were both able to find your true love and mend each others souls.
March 16th, 2022 18:59
Pieces
Crowns4Christ said:
This is so sweet and true, when you love someone so deeply you become one, you feel each other\'s pleasure and, whether you\'re near or far
March 14th, 2022 00:55
Crowns4Christ said:
This is so sweet and true, when you love someone so deeply you become one, you feel each other\'s pleasure and, whether you\'re near or far
March 14th, 2022 00:55
