Comments received on poems by Kinsey Peterson
Religion: Verse II
Doggerel Dave said:
Once upon a time I thought that all my parents passed to me were their genes. Apart from their behaviours and attitudes I modelled from and subsequently modified or rejected, there’s something more … old patterns…. Insightful write about (for me) unresolved issues.
April 24th, 2024 08:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Once upon a time I thought that all my parents passed to me were their genes. Apart from their behaviours and attitudes I modelled from and subsequently modified or rejected, there’s something more … old patterns…. Insightful write about (for me) unresolved issues.
April 24th, 2024 08:37
glass
David Wakeling said:
Now this is what I\'m talkin\' bout.Real poetry.Thoughtful and well written.Excellent.Literally one in a hundred
February 29th, 2024 15:00
David Wakeling said:
Now this is what I\'m talkin\' bout.Real poetry.Thoughtful and well written.Excellent.Literally one in a hundred
February 29th, 2024 15:00
closings xvii
Neville said:
in view of the fact this page leaves me both in awe and feeling sad .. although I am not religious, maybe a religious theme or flavour wouldn\'t go amiss miss .. Neville
February 27th, 2024 15:33
Neville said:
in view of the fact this page leaves me both in awe and feeling sad .. although I am not religious, maybe a religious theme or flavour wouldn\'t go amiss miss .. Neville
February 27th, 2024 15:33
closings xvi
Neville said:
this is more than tinged with sadness and an ache nigh on impossible to adequately describe ..... but which you more than adequately convey .. I am indeed sadly impressed by your ink .. write on Kinsey ... Neville 🤍👍
February 23rd, 2024 03:37
Neville said:
this is more than tinged with sadness and an ache nigh on impossible to adequately describe ..... but which you more than adequately convey .. I am indeed sadly impressed by your ink .. write on Kinsey ... Neville 🤍👍
February 23rd, 2024 03:37
closings xvi
nephilim56 said:
I understand this poem very much, a good piece of work, thanks for the opportunity to read it
February 22nd, 2024 14:24
nephilim56 said:
I understand this poem very much, a good piece of work, thanks for the opportunity to read it
February 22nd, 2024 14:24
closings xv
orchidee said:
Ooh I dunno! Bit dangerous? A bad hair day there?!
Has that taken the (knife) edge of the force of the poem? lol.
February 22nd, 2024 14:12
orchidee said:
Ooh I dunno! Bit dangerous? A bad hair day there?!
Has that taken the (knife) edge of the force of the poem? lol.
February 22nd, 2024 14:12
Puppeteer
Neville said:
It has been far too long .. I am sure that I\'m not the only one who missed you and is glad to see you back .. and on top of all that ..
I enjoyed your poetic offering today even though it was delightfully noir ... All Good Things, Neville
November 9th, 2023 14:58
Neville said:
It has been far too long .. I am sure that I\'m not the only one who missed you and is glad to see you back .. and on top of all that ..
I enjoyed your poetic offering today even though it was delightfully noir ... All Good Things, Neville
November 9th, 2023 14:58
closings xiv
Neville said:
Bravo Kinsey .. your words are more than what they might appear to be .. and you, .... are inspirational .. Neville
August 21st, 2023 00:07
Neville said:
Bravo Kinsey .. your words are more than what they might appear to be .. and you, .... are inspirational .. Neville
August 21st, 2023 00:07
Dust Jackets
Neville said:
I am sure many will identify with the thoughts and feelings that served to inspire this somewhat compelling social documentary .. enjoyed from end to end ... write on K ...N
August 20th, 2023 00:26
Neville said:
I am sure many will identify with the thoughts and feelings that served to inspire this somewhat compelling social documentary .. enjoyed from end to end ... write on K ...N
August 20th, 2023 00:26
Dust Jackets
Doggerel Dave said:
You certainly have the human condition covered!!
Worth more than a moment\'s consideration.
Thank you.
August 19th, 2023 19:41
Doggerel Dave said:
You certainly have the human condition covered!!
Worth more than a moment\'s consideration.
Thank you.
August 19th, 2023 19:41
Dust Jackets
MendedFences27 said:
Recover your books with a paper that is amenable to you. Your books will be double protected. As for people, oh, if only we could.
A lovely poem about social interplay. Enjoyed it. - Phil A.
August 19th, 2023 15:59
MendedFences27 said:
Recover your books with a paper that is amenable to you. Your books will be double protected. As for people, oh, if only we could.
A lovely poem about social interplay. Enjoyed it. - Phil A.
August 19th, 2023 15:59
Fragile
Neville said:
Bravo .. I rarely use the A word these days but I shall use it here write now .. this is seriously Amazing ink Kinsey .. Neville
August 14th, 2023 01:25
Neville said:
Bravo .. I rarely use the A word these days but I shall use it here write now .. this is seriously Amazing ink Kinsey .. Neville
August 14th, 2023 01:25
I\'ve Been Lying
L. B. Mek said:
\'I feel its letters clawing under my skin\'
like a poetic onion staining my fate
I pull back my chosen veil and bravely
reveal that \'Kinsey\' anchor
in a name
that spine to the \'who\' I strive
to become...
(we shall wait, support
and rejoice in each evolution
of your Poetry\'s journey
dear cherished Poet, fly high
our poetic butterfly)
June 30th, 2023 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
\'I feel its letters clawing under my skin\'
like a poetic onion staining my fate
I pull back my chosen veil and bravely
reveal that \'Kinsey\' anchor
in a name
that spine to the \'who\' I strive
to become...
(we shall wait, support
and rejoice in each evolution
of your Poetry\'s journey
dear cherished Poet, fly high
our poetic butterfly)
June 30th, 2023 03:45
closings xiii
L. B. Mek said:
fantaboulous flow
I slide from syllable to line
like a waterfall, free
of pebbles or jagged rock
driven, by waves of poetic rhyme
indeed
we must free our wings of creativity
to reach heights we never knew
we could dream, let alone achieve
just a joy to watch you soar
oh most dexterous Poet
(I bow to your superior talent)
June 30th, 2023 03:40
L. B. Mek said:
fantaboulous flow
I slide from syllable to line
like a waterfall, free
of pebbles or jagged rock
driven, by waves of poetic rhyme
indeed
we must free our wings of creativity
to reach heights we never knew
we could dream, let alone achieve
just a joy to watch you soar
oh most dexterous Poet
(I bow to your superior talent)
June 30th, 2023 03:40
I\'ve Been Lying
Garth Rakumakoe said:
We all need someone on whose shoulders we can stand, at times. Grateful you met someone like her and that she gave the inspiration and necessary motivation... You can only fly from here on! - Well written piece.
June 29th, 2023 08:14
Garth Rakumakoe said:
We all need someone on whose shoulders we can stand, at times. Grateful you met someone like her and that she gave the inspiration and necessary motivation... You can only fly from here on! - Well written piece.
June 29th, 2023 08:14
I\'ve Been Lying
Star hunter said:
This is so beautifully written. I really enjoyed it
June 27th, 2023 14:17
Star hunter said:
This is so beautifully written. I really enjoyed it
June 27th, 2023 14:17
I\'ve Been Lying
Neville said:
bless the both of ya .. I\'m sure Kinsey will keep up the good work that Joan introduced us all to ... Good luck K .. N
June 27th, 2023 13:41
Neville said:
bless the both of ya .. I\'m sure Kinsey will keep up the good work that Joan introduced us all to ... Good luck K .. N
June 27th, 2023 13:41
closings xiii
Neville said:
I rarely write in rhyme myself .. but that doesn\'t mean I favour prose, in fact I admire those who can and do .. closings Xlll is a well crafted poem that reads well and sounds good in my head .. it additionally looks good on the page and flows perfectly .. all in all I would suggest you give yourself a pat on the back .. Neville
June 26th, 2023 14:42
Neville said:
I rarely write in rhyme myself .. but that doesn\'t mean I favour prose, in fact I admire those who can and do .. closings Xlll is a well crafted poem that reads well and sounds good in my head .. it additionally looks good on the page and flows perfectly .. all in all I would suggest you give yourself a pat on the back .. Neville
June 26th, 2023 14:42
closings xiii
Caring dove said:
Hello ) I think you have done well with the rhyming it’s a good poem which flows nicely .. tho there’s sadness in it .
I never use rhyming much in mine either .. it’s not something I often think of trying to do
June 26th, 2023 11:35
Caring dove said:
Hello ) I think you have done well with the rhyming it’s a good poem which flows nicely .. tho there’s sadness in it .
I never use rhyming much in mine either .. it’s not something I often think of trying to do
June 26th, 2023 11:35
I Am Not A Woman
Caring dove said:
Really sad writing .. sorry for your sadness
June 26th, 2023 01:59
Caring dove said:
Really sad writing .. sorry for your sadness
June 26th, 2023 01:59
Shakespeare
L. B. Mek said:
lol
delivers exactly what it promises
a fun read, thank you
even Shakespeare would be proud
June 26th, 2023 01:56
L. B. Mek said:
lol
delivers exactly what it promises
a fun read, thank you
even Shakespeare would be proud
June 26th, 2023 01:56
closings xii
L. B. Mek said:
strange how misery and woe
inspire our most potent poetry
embolden us to share
those flows we would usually
be, too self-aware to reveal..
I laud your bravery
stay strong, dear Poet
June 26th, 2023 01:54
L. B. Mek said:
strange how misery and woe
inspire our most potent poetry
embolden us to share
those flows we would usually
be, too self-aware to reveal..
I laud your bravery
stay strong, dear Poet
June 26th, 2023 01:54
Composure
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful similes and imagery
I love poems that take a word or a subject
and dig, dig, dig
unfurling, excavating everything
it represents to that person,
such reads are always
an enlightening experience
I feel,
thank you! dear gifted Poet
really well executed
(forgive my tardiness)
June 26th, 2023 01:50
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful similes and imagery
I love poems that take a word or a subject
and dig, dig, dig
unfurling, excavating everything
it represents to that person,
such reads are always
an enlightening experience
I feel,
thank you! dear gifted Poet
really well executed
(forgive my tardiness)
June 26th, 2023 01:50
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Neville said:
I can only imagine the pain you felt and maybe still feel that served to inspire these finely lacquered words .. they are indeed raw, ragged and real .. the way fine and dark poetry must always be ..
Neville 🖤
June 25th, 2023 00:34
Neville said:
I can only imagine the pain you felt and maybe still feel that served to inspire these finely lacquered words .. they are indeed raw, ragged and real .. the way fine and dark poetry must always be ..
Neville 🖤
June 25th, 2023 00:34
Shakespeare
Neville said:
brevitas succinctus superbus ma\'am .. this not only ticks all the relevant boxes, but it is an education and history lesson all rolled into one .. I neva even knew the great Bard held a riving licence :) Neville
June 25th, 2023 00:25
Neville said:
brevitas succinctus superbus ma\'am .. this not only ticks all the relevant boxes, but it is an education and history lesson all rolled into one .. I neva even knew the great Bard held a riving licence :) Neville
June 25th, 2023 00:25
Composure
Neville said:
If I had written these words, then I would be a very proud and happy man indeed .. and no kiddin ... Neville
June 25th, 2023 00:17
Neville said:
If I had written these words, then I would be a very proud and happy man indeed .. and no kiddin ... Neville
June 25th, 2023 00:17
closings xii
Neville said:
these words had a most profound effect upon this old soul of mine ..
I have now read and re-read them over and over and there is a haunting familiarity that I am almost too frightened to put my finger on .. nevertheless, I liked and very much the ink you shared today Joan ..
Neville
June 25th, 2023 00:10
Neville said:
these words had a most profound effect upon this old soul of mine ..
I have now read and re-read them over and over and there is a haunting familiarity that I am almost too frightened to put my finger on .. nevertheless, I liked and very much the ink you shared today Joan ..
Neville
June 25th, 2023 00:10
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