Comments received on poems by Kinsey Peterson
closings xii
peto said:
Captivating write
That ain\'t no friend you have visiting
Your pen is
Raw and emotional
Great read
June 24th, 2023 15:56
peto said:
Captivating write
That ain\'t no friend you have visiting
Your pen is
Raw and emotional
Great read
June 24th, 2023 15:56
Composure
Rocky Lagou said:
I love this, and I would love to be your teacher receiving these jaw-dropping poems all the time. Lol. Never stop!
June 2nd, 2023 09:49
Rocky Lagou said:
I love this, and I would love to be your teacher receiving these jaw-dropping poems all the time. Lol. Never stop!
June 2nd, 2023 09:49
Shakespeare
Rocky Lagou said:
Thanks for introducing me to such a lighthearted form. Your works are wonderful as always.
May 8th, 2023 14:50
Rocky Lagou said:
Thanks for introducing me to such a lighthearted form. Your works are wonderful as always.
May 8th, 2023 14:50
Eighteen
L. B. Mek said:
\'Somehow those pretty things filled a part of me that was empty.
They gave colour to my world.
Now, at eighteen- everything looks gray.
My poems aren\'t about kittens and bunnies anymore.
I\'m terrified of my future.\'
such relatable and sincere wording
of pilfering Time\'s, incessant plague
affecting us, at our now
of life..
(Tomorrow\'s, conceptualised
as our avenues to better
before we place our head on pillows
blank - dreamless or nightmare stained
we arrive hours later, to a fate
as yet, unforgiving
instead of that promised better
we\'re forced
to face yesterday\'s problems, now
even more pressure intensified
since all that\'s happened is we\'ve lost
Time, to deal with them
and
we look out, to a new days sunrays
and realise
tainted by all our accumulating anxiety
our world is lacking vibrancy in both colour
and ease of breath, serenity..
Then
just one thumb flicked post, that matches our vibe
or song, that serenades our woe
is all it takes, to revive our fight
to insure, we survive
till that promised, better in life
arrives!)
stay strong, kind Poet
you have a most talented poetic gift
for expression without exaggeration
May 1st, 2023 03:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'Somehow those pretty things filled a part of me that was empty.
They gave colour to my world.
Now, at eighteen- everything looks gray.
My poems aren\'t about kittens and bunnies anymore.
I\'m terrified of my future.\'
such relatable and sincere wording
of pilfering Time\'s, incessant plague
affecting us, at our now
of life..
(Tomorrow\'s, conceptualised
as our avenues to better
before we place our head on pillows
blank - dreamless or nightmare stained
we arrive hours later, to a fate
as yet, unforgiving
instead of that promised better
we\'re forced
to face yesterday\'s problems, now
even more pressure intensified
since all that\'s happened is we\'ve lost
Time, to deal with them
and
we look out, to a new days sunrays
and realise
tainted by all our accumulating anxiety
our world is lacking vibrancy in both colour
and ease of breath, serenity..
Then
just one thumb flicked post, that matches our vibe
or song, that serenades our woe
is all it takes, to revive our fight
to insure, we survive
till that promised, better in life
arrives!)
stay strong, kind Poet
you have a most talented poetic gift
for expression without exaggeration
May 1st, 2023 03:05
Eighteen
Neville said:
Many belated birthday blessings .. (see, I\'ve just done it again .. told ya it\'s a habit didn\'t I ) .. Anyway, welcome to the growed up world .. Now we both know it aint all smiley faces and fluffy bunnies but hey .. if we all do our bloomin best to be honest, kind and good .. (there I go again) .. we can make it just a bit brighter maybe .. Luved the poem by the way .. 🌹🌹🎶🎵🐧x
April 29th, 2023 14:25
Neville said:
Many belated birthday blessings .. (see, I\'ve just done it again .. told ya it\'s a habit didn\'t I ) .. Anyway, welcome to the growed up world .. Now we both know it aint all smiley faces and fluffy bunnies but hey .. if we all do our bloomin best to be honest, kind and good .. (there I go again) .. we can make it just a bit brighter maybe .. Luved the poem by the way .. 🌹🌹🎶🎵🐧x
April 29th, 2023 14:25
Eighteen
Bobby O said:
Two sides to all events. It’s a privilege to join as the parts entered that collect and direct the pain and circumstance you describe are the same entrances to the great list of potential delivered joy. Somebody way smarter than me talked about the greatness of humans and water and use of fire as most valued and beneficial that we as a race have at our disposal but yet Fire and Water are tied to much destruction. The double edged and irony falls in our life with no rancor but yet as sentient beings we can steer and therefore cheer for desired best results.
April 28th, 2023 16:58
Bobby O said:
Two sides to all events. It’s a privilege to join as the parts entered that collect and direct the pain and circumstance you describe are the same entrances to the great list of potential delivered joy. Somebody way smarter than me talked about the greatness of humans and water and use of fire as most valued and beneficial that we as a race have at our disposal but yet Fire and Water are tied to much destruction. The double edged and irony falls in our life with no rancor but yet as sentient beings we can steer and therefore cheer for desired best results.
April 28th, 2023 16:58
Eighteen
sophin said:
Happy birthday, fellow poet. It pains me to watch the vivid color fade from your world through the lenses of your beautiful words. However, I will offer you the solace that it will get better. Eighteen is a transitional stage where the colors of youth are wiped away, but soon will be replaced by a different palate of adulthood. Although the future may look bleak, have hope. I have faith that you will see color again.
April 28th, 2023 16:18
sophin said:
Happy birthday, fellow poet. It pains me to watch the vivid color fade from your world through the lenses of your beautiful words. However, I will offer you the solace that it will get better. Eighteen is a transitional stage where the colors of youth are wiped away, but soon will be replaced by a different palate of adulthood. Although the future may look bleak, have hope. I have faith that you will see color again.
April 28th, 2023 16:18
16
Rocky Lagou said:
This is such a sobering poem, I feel like I\'ve just been disemboweled. Your words hit aggressively, like a distorted mixture of emotions: envy, melancholy, confusion. I also agree with the person who responded before me, my favorite and most impactful line is \"The poems are always about me.\" There\'s something about not being able to deviate from writing about the Poet in our heads that\'s haunting; and I feel like you\'ve perfectly illustrated that with the apparition of the \"ghost.\" I hope things lighten up, you are such a bright light in my storms
April 11th, 2023 09:41
Rocky Lagou said:
This is such a sobering poem, I feel like I\'ve just been disemboweled. Your words hit aggressively, like a distorted mixture of emotions: envy, melancholy, confusion. I also agree with the person who responded before me, my favorite and most impactful line is \"The poems are always about me.\" There\'s something about not being able to deviate from writing about the Poet in our heads that\'s haunting; and I feel like you\'ve perfectly illustrated that with the apparition of the \"ghost.\" I hope things lighten up, you are such a bright light in my storms
April 11th, 2023 09:41
16
jarcher54 said:
The poems are always about me... what a beautiful painful statement. This little piece is far more moving and less predictable than I expected!
April 10th, 2023 23:10
jarcher54 said:
The poems are always about me... what a beautiful painful statement. This little piece is far more moving and less predictable than I expected!
April 10th, 2023 23:10
The Poet\'s Body
Rocky Lagou said:
HOLY SHITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
NOBEL PRIZE-WORTHY
February 15th, 2023 10:10
Rocky Lagou said:
HOLY SHITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
NOBEL PRIZE-WORTHY
February 15th, 2023 10:10
Saturday
Neville said:
this must be absolutely devastating for you & all those involved however peripherally they might be ..
February 13th, 2023 11:05
Neville said:
this must be absolutely devastating for you & all those involved however peripherally they might be ..
February 13th, 2023 11:05
Saturday
Christina8 said:
I\'m so sorry for your loss. Beautiful write.---Christina
February 13th, 2023 10:53
Christina8 said:
I\'m so sorry for your loss. Beautiful write.---Christina
February 13th, 2023 10:53
Remiss
Doggerel Dave said:
Neat piece of poetry I liked, even as my literal mind could not quite make a connection between that and an abusive relationship.
Now I don\'t want to psychologise - there is, after all, someone already on this page far more qualified than me to do this; however, the repeat similar patterns in an individual\'s relationships has to be something to do with the similar choices made at the start......
February 9th, 2023 18:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Neat piece of poetry I liked, even as my literal mind could not quite make a connection between that and an abusive relationship.
Now I don\'t want to psychologise - there is, after all, someone already on this page far more qualified than me to do this; however, the repeat similar patterns in an individual\'s relationships has to be something to do with the similar choices made at the start......
February 9th, 2023 18:37
Remiss
Neville said:
what a poignant message perfectly threaded throughout the main body of todays post .. perfectly poemed and appropriately pitched for all those of us who have a thing about proper poetry .. I also seriously hope you get what you are so obviously looking for from a relationship .. no one should be abused by any other and if you need a decent hit man, then I know two very good ones ... ❤️
February 9th, 2023 12:37
Neville said:
what a poignant message perfectly threaded throughout the main body of todays post .. perfectly poemed and appropriately pitched for all those of us who have a thing about proper poetry .. I also seriously hope you get what you are so obviously looking for from a relationship .. no one should be abused by any other and if you need a decent hit man, then I know two very good ones ... ❤️
February 9th, 2023 12:37
Graveyard to Graveyard
Neville said:
I am kicking my self for not having looked at those heavenly beauties like that before .. tonight\'s gonna be different though .. 🌹
February 8th, 2023 10:35
Neville said:
I am kicking my self for not having looked at those heavenly beauties like that before .. tonight\'s gonna be different though .. 🌹
February 8th, 2023 10:35
The Poet\'s Body
L. B. Mek said:
I do so agree
oft
I find myself typing away
and only realise what i\'ve written
after i read it back
which is in line with your insightful
wording
\'poets aren\'t made to write poetry...
rather poems are made to write them.\'
how acute, dear Poet
\'our words, ink us alive\'
thanks for sharing, forgive my tardiness
February 6th, 2023 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
I do so agree
oft
I find myself typing away
and only realise what i\'ve written
after i read it back
which is in line with your insightful
wording
\'poets aren\'t made to write poetry...
rather poems are made to write them.\'
how acute, dear Poet
\'our words, ink us alive\'
thanks for sharing, forgive my tardiness
February 6th, 2023 04:41
Religion: Verse I
Neville said:
I am write by your side .. a memorable post and a sentiment with which I wholly concur ......... that is why I follow a Buddhist path .................. Neville
February 3rd, 2023 12:00
Neville said:
I am write by your side .. a memorable post and a sentiment with which I wholly concur ......... that is why I follow a Buddhist path .................. Neville
February 3rd, 2023 12:00
The Poet\'s Body
Myth said:
It is a wonderful piece , I have a hunch you are a medical student overwhelmed by words..
February 2nd, 2023 04:30
Myth said:
It is a wonderful piece , I have a hunch you are a medical student overwhelmed by words..
February 2nd, 2023 04:30
The Poet\'s Body
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Joan, words are always within us.
Andy
January 31st, 2023 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Joan, words are always within us.
Andy
January 31st, 2023 02:50
The Poet\'s Body
jennie said:
Spontaneous overflow of powerful emotions that leave your mind so cold that no fire can ever warm it ........I read that\'s what poetry is.
Now after reading your poem i can say that it happens to the poets too.
January 30th, 2023 12:31
jennie said:
Spontaneous overflow of powerful emotions that leave your mind so cold that no fire can ever warm it ........I read that\'s what poetry is.
Now after reading your poem i can say that it happens to the poets too.
January 30th, 2023 12:31
The Poet\'s Body
Debake said:
You captured what it is to write so perfectly I couldn\'t have said it better!
January 30th, 2023 11:38
Debake said:
You captured what it is to write so perfectly I couldn\'t have said it better!
January 30th, 2023 11:38
closings iii
jarcher54 said:
Joan, you are really incredibly talented at hitting us where we live. Your poems are a welcome slap in the face to wake the reader up! I hope you find strength and purpose in passing these along. I adore them. I am an older person who is enchanted by the intensity of your art.
January 28th, 2023 02:08
jarcher54 said:
Joan, you are really incredibly talented at hitting us where we live. Your poems are a welcome slap in the face to wake the reader up! I hope you find strength and purpose in passing these along. I adore them. I am an older person who is enchanted by the intensity of your art.
January 28th, 2023 02:08
Fragile
jarcher54 said:
I won\'t forget this little piece. Dangerously fragile. Very witty and observant.
January 28th, 2023 02:03
jarcher54 said:
I won\'t forget this little piece. Dangerously fragile. Very witty and observant.
January 28th, 2023 02:03
I Love You
L. B. Mek said:
\'how to say I love you, wordlessly\'
this is a wonderful idea
so cleverly executed
a lovely read, sorry for my tardiness
there\'s so much good poetry I miss
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 23rd, 2023 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'how to say I love you, wordlessly\'
this is a wonderful idea
so cleverly executed
a lovely read, sorry for my tardiness
there\'s so much good poetry I miss
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 23rd, 2023 04:00
I Love You
Neville said:
I\'m just guessing, but could this be a love song .... maybe ..
go girl .. go pamper yourself .... :)
January 20th, 2023 11:21
Neville said:
I\'m just guessing, but could this be a love song .... maybe ..
go girl .. go pamper yourself .... :)
January 20th, 2023 11:21
my darling
Rocky Lagou said:
I feel like the end of this poem, with \"the camera is ready\" line, can be referring to the saying \" a picture is worth a thousand words,\" perhaps.
All in all, this is an intense display of emotion that I can feel is causing goodness and detriment.
\"You\'re twisted and stunning
a creature of the loveliest dark\"
January 17th, 2023 14:35
Rocky Lagou said:
I feel like the end of this poem, with \"the camera is ready\" line, can be referring to the saying \" a picture is worth a thousand words,\" perhaps.
All in all, this is an intense display of emotion that I can feel is causing goodness and detriment.
\"You\'re twisted and stunning
a creature of the loveliest dark\"
January 17th, 2023 14:35
my darling
Neville said:
we all feel like that sometimes .. whether because things are so very good and we don\'t want them to change or risk them becoming tainted .. or conversely, because they seem so bad and we dont want the moment prolonged ..
I am seriously impressed with your poetry today my friend .. be proud of it ................ Neville
January 13th, 2023 13:40
Neville said:
we all feel like that sometimes .. whether because things are so very good and we don\'t want them to change or risk them becoming tainted .. or conversely, because they seem so bad and we dont want the moment prolonged ..
I am seriously impressed with your poetry today my friend .. be proud of it ................ Neville
January 13th, 2023 13:40
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