Comments received on poems by Milind Gautam
You Are (Not) Alone
JudyStella said:
It\'s like she doesn\'t wanna live and doesn\'t wanna die,
This is a nice line that can come out as relatable to many.
July 9th, 2022 04:37
JudyStella said:
It\'s like she doesn\'t wanna live and doesn\'t wanna die,
This is a nice line that can come out as relatable to many.
July 9th, 2022 04:37
Monophobia
spilleronsheet said:
Being alone
You learn to know within
It’s worth to venture out
And even more to venture within
In the abyss of despair, writing by the sheer
One finds the queerest thing amidst themselves
Maybe a talent of penning
Airing emotions
In few lines
Honest to the sheet
That wipes the tears
And understands the sufferings of others too
Sooner or later, the suffering shall pass too
The grief shall hurt less
And furthermore fade with passing time
May 7th, 2022 06:18
spilleronsheet said:
Being alone
You learn to know within
It’s worth to venture out
And even more to venture within
In the abyss of despair, writing by the sheer
One finds the queerest thing amidst themselves
Maybe a talent of penning
Airing emotions
In few lines
Honest to the sheet
That wipes the tears
And understands the sufferings of others too
Sooner or later, the suffering shall pass too
The grief shall hurt less
And furthermore fade with passing time
May 7th, 2022 06:18
Black and White
Paul Bell said:
That is the fate of life.
What do others see that we can\'t?
May 7th, 2022 05:29
Paul Bell said:
That is the fate of life.
What do others see that we can\'t?
May 7th, 2022 05:29
Black and White
Dahlia said:
great work poet
opposites attract!!
enjoyed
Dahlia
April 15th, 2022 18:22
Dahlia said:
great work poet
opposites attract!!
enjoyed
Dahlia
April 15th, 2022 18:22
Lovesick
L. B. Mek said:
(sorry for the lengthy comment, dear poet
these write and your theme
is something I can relate with
on many levels, thanks for sharing)
lol
that animation, perfectly
captured
the warped, extreme mindsets
of individuals, at cross purposes
standing at that doorway
of a failed relationship..
we invest so much, in trying to fight
for a relationship
we took for granted, only a few days ago..
sometimes, it is indeed for fear
of losing that significant other
we love, \'with all our heart\'..
but mostly
it\'s because we simply don\'t want to accept
that we\'re accountable for this failing
and we fear, the death
of a presence in our lives
we once cherished, so dearly..
(but ultimately
its only our ego\'s, that are convinced
there\'s only one person in the world for us
or that we\'re what\'s best for our significant other...)
April 12th, 2022 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
(sorry for the lengthy comment, dear poet
these write and your theme
is something I can relate with
on many levels, thanks for sharing)
lol
that animation, perfectly
captured
the warped, extreme mindsets
of individuals, at cross purposes
standing at that doorway
of a failed relationship..
we invest so much, in trying to fight
for a relationship
we took for granted, only a few days ago..
sometimes, it is indeed for fear
of losing that significant other
we love, \'with all our heart\'..
but mostly
it\'s because we simply don\'t want to accept
that we\'re accountable for this failing
and we fear, the death
of a presence in our lives
we once cherished, so dearly..
(but ultimately
its only our ego\'s, that are convinced
there\'s only one person in the world for us
or that we\'re what\'s best for our significant other...)
April 12th, 2022 04:14
Monophobia
Rocky Lagou said:
I can surely relate to this. Being alone and feeling like you have nobody can really be a consuming sensation. I hope you\'ll feel cherished knowing that your poetry is beautiful, and you have so much to give. Continue fighting the good fight!
April 11th, 2022 08:45
Rocky Lagou said:
I can surely relate to this. Being alone and feeling like you have nobody can really be a consuming sensation. I hope you\'ll feel cherished knowing that your poetry is beautiful, and you have so much to give. Continue fighting the good fight!
April 11th, 2022 08:45
Monophobia
L. B. Mek said:
\'I need someone who will cherish
my existence.\'
How about, allowing yourself
to be your own, Hero
by Cherishing your own existence..
try thinking of something, anything
you like about yourself
look carefully, you may find
there\'s a lot: to choose from
and then, try asking
what\'s preventing people from seeing
your beautiful traits..
step by step, day by day
anchor a sense of self-worth
so impregnable
you\'ll soon find, it will be you
reaching out
and making that Timely, call
for those in need...!
(liked your bravery in wording
your exasperated state
so transparent
thanks for sharing, dear poet
stay strong)
April 11th, 2022 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'I need someone who will cherish
my existence.\'
How about, allowing yourself
to be your own, Hero
by Cherishing your own existence..
try thinking of something, anything
you like about yourself
look carefully, you may find
there\'s a lot: to choose from
and then, try asking
what\'s preventing people from seeing
your beautiful traits..
step by step, day by day
anchor a sense of self-worth
so impregnable
you\'ll soon find, it will be you
reaching out
and making that Timely, call
for those in need...!
(liked your bravery in wording
your exasperated state
so transparent
thanks for sharing, dear poet
stay strong)
April 11th, 2022 04:09
Monophobia
Thekkinkkattil said:
Beautiful word nicely written .Poetry is the best way to ward off your happiness
April 10th, 2022 23:54
Thekkinkkattil said:
Beautiful word nicely written .Poetry is the best way to ward off your happiness
April 10th, 2022 23:54
Monophobia
sonnie said:
Beautiful poem. As someone who battles depression I can relate. I try to remind myself that “we are never alone, lest we abandon ourselves.” Thanks for sharing these words.
April 10th, 2022 23:27
sonnie said:
Beautiful poem. As someone who battles depression I can relate. I try to remind myself that “we are never alone, lest we abandon ourselves.” Thanks for sharing these words.
April 10th, 2022 23:27
She
Empathic.writings said:
“That someone’s sheer audacity would harm her petals and whorls” such beautifully penned words.. pure.
April 10th, 2022 00:27
Empathic.writings said:
“That someone’s sheer audacity would harm her petals and whorls” such beautifully penned words.. pure.
April 10th, 2022 00:27
Solitude
aburmeister said:
Beautiful! The ocean 🌊 is such a healing place. I loved your poem! The ocean definitely touches my soul, too. Take care!
April 9th, 2022 19:12
aburmeister said:
Beautiful! The ocean 🌊 is such a healing place. I loved your poem! The ocean definitely touches my soul, too. Take care!
April 9th, 2022 19:12
Bloody Valentine
L. B. Mek said:
pinpricks of romantic ambition
worded, so acutely relatable..
thanks for sharing
April 7th, 2022 06:18
L. B. Mek said:
pinpricks of romantic ambition
worded, so acutely relatable..
thanks for sharing
April 7th, 2022 06:18
Insomniac
Christina8 said:
Great job on this write, I feel your pain with the insomnia but the answer to your question is never \'yes\' EVER. There\'s much to live for, you just gotta give it time.--Christina
April 6th, 2022 13:50
Christina8 said:
Great job on this write, I feel your pain with the insomnia but the answer to your question is never \'yes\' EVER. There\'s much to live for, you just gotta give it time.--Christina
April 6th, 2022 13:50
Insomniac
Dahlia said:
well penned poet, despite the melancholy, its a beautiful reflection
on the different stages we undergo in our human evolution...enjoyed
Dahlia
April 6th, 2022 13:03
Dahlia said:
well penned poet, despite the melancholy, its a beautiful reflection
on the different stages we undergo in our human evolution...enjoyed
Dahlia
April 6th, 2022 13:03
Solitude
Dahlia said:
nicely penned poet
I love everything about the sea as a matter of fact I live surrounded by it
enjoyed...Dahlia
April 5th, 2022 11:50
Dahlia said:
nicely penned poet
I love everything about the sea as a matter of fact I live surrounded by it
enjoyed...Dahlia
April 5th, 2022 11:50
Solitude
L. B. Mek said:
\'yeah I too - love, those waves
of lulling serenity
we can only find on a placid
seashore, in sync
with our heart\'s weary pulse
revitalising, as it
soothes our aches and worries..\'
thanks for sharing
a wonderful read
April 5th, 2022 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'yeah I too - love, those waves
of lulling serenity
we can only find on a placid
seashore, in sync
with our heart\'s weary pulse
revitalising, as it
soothes our aches and worries..\'
thanks for sharing
a wonderful read
April 5th, 2022 05:30
