Comments received on poems by arqios



( TSA ) that focal moment
orchidee said:

Good write CB.
I was gonna change a light bulb that fizzled out, but it was night. I fell down the stairs in the dark, before I got the light bulb from the cupboard downstairs. Doh!
Did I? lol.

July 3rd, 2022 01:51

at the table, with you
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

July 1st, 2022 09:37

at the table, with you
L. B. Mek said:

\'Alongside me your visage bright\'
a great read, thank you
that divisive, Great and \'O Rare\'
Ben Jonson would be proud
(
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/50672/inviting-a-friend-to-supper
)

July 1st, 2022 03:59

let\'s dare to hope again
ela said:

It\'s interesting how you begin with feelings of hope and then lets nature be the calming piece.

June 30th, 2022 10:00

let\'s dare to hope again
orchidee said:

Good write CB.
We had an extra one-second in a year, a few years back. Did you spend it all at once?! lol.

June 30th, 2022 08:27

harmonisation
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well penned, Crypticbard.
Pegs in time- music, and words pegs in time.

June 29th, 2022 09:31

harmonisation
sorenbarrett said:

So well said in such few words. Lovely

June 29th, 2022 08:40

harmonisation
Goldfinch60 said:

So true.

Andy

June 29th, 2022 01:10

desire
hzugman said:

Nice beat to it.

June 27th, 2022 16:12

desire
orchidee said:

Teef OK? lol.
A completely random comment - it\'s \'sad\' I know. Ain\'t I got better things to do?! lol.

June 27th, 2022 14:00

desire
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

June 27th, 2022 12:06

twilight promise
Goldfinch60 said:

That thrill of a new day is there every time I get up in the morning.

Andy

June 27th, 2022 01:52

harvest
Goldfinch60 said:

May those blossoms shine forever in your words cb.

Andy

June 26th, 2022 00:53

harvest
Noah Malice said:

love to see your fruits bard :)

June 25th, 2022 08:15

harvest
Blueledge said:

I can feel the arrow of time.
Nice poem CB.

June 25th, 2022 06:28

harvest
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

June 25th, 2022 06:11

harvest
arqios said:

Thank you kindly

June 25th, 2022 06:00

harvest
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow fab muse expressed in awesome rhyme scheme . Love the word chice, all so poetic, Kudos!


Plz also read and comment on my newest poem

June 25th, 2022 05:50

windswept smiles
Goldfinch60 said:

So good to be within your words and remember those days cb.

Andy

June 25th, 2022 00:27

windswept smiles
Michael Edwards said:

I\'ve just read this several times and it\'s left me with touch of the feel goods - great stuff CB

June 24th, 2022 13:54

windswept smiles
orchidee said:

A fine write CB.

June 24th, 2022 07:59

Are you my butterfly?
Goldfinch60 said:

Things do come and go but that love will be with you forever.

Andy

June 24th, 2022 00:50

Are you my butterfly?
Saxon Crow said:

Beautifully written piece Bard.

June 23rd, 2022 10:53

Are you my butterfly?
orchidee said:

I\'m still working out the first law of thermo-wotsits, but good write CB. lol.

June 23rd, 2022 07:09

Are you my butterfly?
L. B. Mek said:

3 days is too short a window
that\'s more a fling;
I night fish
for longer lived, opportunities
erm
like, maybe - fireflies...?
lol
(forgive me, in a funny mood)
thanks for sharing, dear poet

June 23rd, 2022 06:23

Are you my butterfly?
Blueledge said:

I\'m constantly reminded, nothing lasts forever. And that really means nothing at all.
Second law of thermodynamics.

June 23rd, 2022 03:52

i lurv u
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words, it just shows how much drink can affect our lives.

Andy

June 22nd, 2022 00:28

i lurv u
orchidee said:

Someone on the gin?! lol.

June 21st, 2022 09:45

i lurv u
hzugman said:

Your poem draws a vivid picture. I like it.

June 21st, 2022 09:02

wash
Jerry Reynolds said:

Expertly written, C.B.

June 20th, 2022 15:11



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