Comments received on poems by arqios
poetically breathe
Nicholas Browning said:
Elsewhere? You cheatin\' on MPS? O. O
lol, don\'t mind me
December 15th, 2023 05:17
Nicholas Browning said:
Elsewhere? You cheatin\' on MPS? O. O
lol, don\'t mind me
December 15th, 2023 05:17
poetically breathe
orchidee said:
Good write A.
A cue for my corny joke: I tried not breathing for 24 hours, to save air for one day. I did it, but didn\'t feel well afterwards. Doh! lol.
December 15th, 2023 04:30
orchidee said:
Good write A.
A cue for my corny joke: I tried not breathing for 24 hours, to save air for one day. I did it, but didn\'t feel well afterwards. Doh! lol.
December 15th, 2023 04:30
Branches of a tree
Nicholas Browning said:
This is actually pretty well done. I like the finish, and the (seemingly) scattered symbols add a sense of depth not often seen in poetry. Very nice.
December 14th, 2023 06:37
Nicholas Browning said:
This is actually pretty well done. I like the finish, and the (seemingly) scattered symbols add a sense of depth not often seen in poetry. Very nice.
December 14th, 2023 06:37
wishful thinking
orchidee said:
Now, yes, why they bash us with the Bible in some places?! Ouch, that hurt! lol. There\'s preaching though, which we expect from sermons.
December 11th, 2023 08:12
orchidee said:
Now, yes, why they bash us with the Bible in some places?! Ouch, that hurt! lol. There\'s preaching though, which we expect from sermons.
December 11th, 2023 08:12
pareidolia
Doggerel Dave said:
Happens all the time (sounds too). Didn\'t know it has been named. Thanks for that....now all I\'ve got to do is find out how to pronounce.......
December 8th, 2023 07:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Happens all the time (sounds too). Didn\'t know it has been named. Thanks for that....now all I\'ve got to do is find out how to pronounce.......
December 8th, 2023 07:19
pareidolia
orchidee said:
Ahhh, I percieve an old trout when I look at KP! heehee.
Well, I saw a cloud formation like Africa on the way to church once. Then the service, unbeknown to me, included two missionaries just setting out to Africa!
December 8th, 2023 03:12
orchidee said:
Ahhh, I percieve an old trout when I look at KP! heehee.
Well, I saw a cloud formation like Africa on the way to church once. Then the service, unbeknown to me, included two missionaries just setting out to Africa!
December 8th, 2023 03:12
Atacama symphony
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in a symphony - well, I know now! lol.
December 7th, 2023 08:18
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in a symphony - well, I know now! lol.
December 7th, 2023 08:18
To Persephoné
orchidee said:
A fine write CB - and Advent them?
I\'m gonna do some lugubrious melodic sounds - do ya hear me singing. Or do I sound taciturn or melancholic?! lol.
December 4th, 2023 02:52
orchidee said:
A fine write CB - and Advent them?
I\'m gonna do some lugubrious melodic sounds - do ya hear me singing. Or do I sound taciturn or melancholic?! lol.
December 4th, 2023 02:52
until that day comes
2781 said:
Reminded me of searching for revelation which has very little to do with Christmas.
Forgive me, I am off the planet!
November 26th, 2023 10:13
2781 said:
Reminded me of searching for revelation which has very little to do with Christmas.
Forgive me, I am off the planet!
November 26th, 2023 10:13
until that day comes
orchidee said:
An Advent theme?
I\'m a week early in my poem today. lol. Better early than never?! lol.
November 26th, 2023 04:56
orchidee said:
An Advent theme?
I\'m a week early in my poem today. lol. Better early than never?! lol.
November 26th, 2023 04:56
pitcher plant
Doggerel Dave said:
Never thought of it quite like that...... Deserved its presentation.
November 25th, 2023 18:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Never thought of it quite like that...... Deserved its presentation.
November 25th, 2023 18:57
N-tropy
sorenbarrett said:
English a funny non phonetic language. N-joyed it
November 25th, 2023 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
English a funny non phonetic language. N-joyed it
November 25th, 2023 08:54
pitcher plant
sorenbarrett said:
Wise and it seems almost Taoist and a little Zen
November 25th, 2023 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
Wise and it seems almost Taoist and a little Zen
November 25th, 2023 08:53
gingko tree
orchidee said:
watashi wotsit - what N said. I dunno wot I\'m talking about! Bit of French there?!
No change there then from me, 99% of the time. lol.
November 22nd, 2023 12:55
orchidee said:
watashi wotsit - what N said. I dunno wot I\'m talking about! Bit of French there?!
No change there then from me, 99% of the time. lol.
November 22nd, 2023 12:55
gingko tree
Neville said:
watashi wa secoia no you nani otoko desu ga 、 watashi ga hanare te iru ma ni kai te kudasai .. Nevosan
November 22nd, 2023 06:58
Neville said:
watashi wa secoia no you nani otoko desu ga 、 watashi ga hanare te iru ma ni kai te kudasai .. Nevosan
November 22nd, 2023 06:58
Chatterton’s Redress
orchidee said:
A troubled soul.
Fido said to me - \'Nooo, it\'s not a poem about Lady ChatterLEY. You would only swoon if it was!\' lol.
November 20th, 2023 08:59
orchidee said:
A troubled soul.
Fido said to me - \'Nooo, it\'s not a poem about Lady ChatterLEY. You would only swoon if it was!\' lol.
November 20th, 2023 08:59
Chatterton’s Redress
2781 said:
I am always right of track!
Somehow I read into it God\'s harvest for the unrighteous.
Woe is me.
November 20th, 2023 07:49
2781 said:
I am always right of track!
Somehow I read into it God\'s harvest for the unrighteous.
Woe is me.
November 20th, 2023 07:49
Chatterton’s Redress
Doggerel Dave said:
As a refutation of suicide as a solution to ones problems I couldn\'t agree more. Life, with or including all its difficulties as well as its pleasures is after all still life for most, at least in the affluent parts where we live, and better by far than its alternative... which will come soon enough anyway.
November 20th, 2023 07:36
Doggerel Dave said:
As a refutation of suicide as a solution to ones problems I couldn\'t agree more. Life, with or including all its difficulties as well as its pleasures is after all still life for most, at least in the affluent parts where we live, and better by far than its alternative... which will come soon enough anyway.
November 20th, 2023 07:36
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