Comments received on poems by arqios
poetically breathe
Nicholas Browning said:
Elsewhere? You cheatin\' on MPS? O. O
lol, don\'t mind me
December 15th, 2023 05:17
Nicholas Browning said:
Elsewhere? You cheatin\' on MPS? O. O
lol, don\'t mind me
December 15th, 2023 05:17
poetically breathe
orchidee said:
Good write A.
A cue for my corny joke: I tried not breathing for 24 hours, to save air for one day. I did it, but didn\'t feel well afterwards. Doh! lol.
December 15th, 2023 04:30
orchidee said:
Good write A.
A cue for my corny joke: I tried not breathing for 24 hours, to save air for one day. I did it, but didn\'t feel well afterwards. Doh! lol.
December 15th, 2023 04:30
Branches of a tree
Nicholas Browning said:
This is actually pretty well done. I like the finish, and the (seemingly) scattered symbols add a sense of depth not often seen in poetry. Very nice.
December 14th, 2023 06:37
Nicholas Browning said:
This is actually pretty well done. I like the finish, and the (seemingly) scattered symbols add a sense of depth not often seen in poetry. Very nice.
December 14th, 2023 06:37
wishful thinking
orchidee said:
Now, yes, why they bash us with the Bible in some places?! Ouch, that hurt! lol. There\'s preaching though, which we expect from sermons.
December 11th, 2023 08:12
orchidee said:
Now, yes, why they bash us with the Bible in some places?! Ouch, that hurt! lol. There\'s preaching though, which we expect from sermons.
December 11th, 2023 08:12
pareidolia
Doggerel Dave said:
Happens all the time (sounds too). Didn\'t know it has been named. Thanks for that....now all I\'ve got to do is find out how to pronounce.......
December 8th, 2023 07:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Happens all the time (sounds too). Didn\'t know it has been named. Thanks for that....now all I\'ve got to do is find out how to pronounce.......
December 8th, 2023 07:19
pareidolia
orchidee said:
Ahhh, I percieve an old trout when I look at KP! heehee.
Well, I saw a cloud formation like Africa on the way to church once. Then the service, unbeknown to me, included two missionaries just setting out to Africa!
December 8th, 2023 03:12
orchidee said:
Ahhh, I percieve an old trout when I look at KP! heehee.
Well, I saw a cloud formation like Africa on the way to church once. Then the service, unbeknown to me, included two missionaries just setting out to Africa!
December 8th, 2023 03:12
Atacama symphony
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in a symphony - well, I know now! lol.
December 7th, 2023 08:18
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in a symphony - well, I know now! lol.
December 7th, 2023 08:18
To Persephoné
orchidee said:
A fine write CB - and Advent them?
I\'m gonna do some lugubrious melodic sounds - do ya hear me singing. Or do I sound taciturn or melancholic?! lol.
December 4th, 2023 02:52
orchidee said:
A fine write CB - and Advent them?
I\'m gonna do some lugubrious melodic sounds - do ya hear me singing. Or do I sound taciturn or melancholic?! lol.
December 4th, 2023 02:52
until that day comes
2781 said:
Reminded me of searching for revelation which has very little to do with Christmas.
Forgive me, I am off the planet!
November 26th, 2023 10:13
2781 said:
Reminded me of searching for revelation which has very little to do with Christmas.
Forgive me, I am off the planet!
November 26th, 2023 10:13
until that day comes
orchidee said:
An Advent theme?
I\'m a week early in my poem today. lol. Better early than never?! lol.
November 26th, 2023 04:56
orchidee said:
An Advent theme?
I\'m a week early in my poem today. lol. Better early than never?! lol.
November 26th, 2023 04:56
pitcher plant
Doggerel Dave said:
Never thought of it quite like that...... Deserved its presentation.
November 25th, 2023 18:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Never thought of it quite like that...... Deserved its presentation.
November 25th, 2023 18:57
N-tropy
sorenbarrett said:
English a funny non phonetic language. N-joyed it
November 25th, 2023 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
English a funny non phonetic language. N-joyed it
November 25th, 2023 08:54
pitcher plant
sorenbarrett said:
Wise and it seems almost Taoist and a little Zen
November 25th, 2023 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
Wise and it seems almost Taoist and a little Zen
November 25th, 2023 08:53
gingko tree
orchidee said:
watashi wotsit - what N said. I dunno wot I\'m talking about! Bit of French there?!
No change there then from me, 99% of the time. lol.
November 22nd, 2023 12:55
orchidee said:
watashi wotsit - what N said. I dunno wot I\'m talking about! Bit of French there?!
No change there then from me, 99% of the time. lol.
November 22nd, 2023 12:55
gingko tree
Neville said:
watashi wa secoia no you nani otoko desu ga 、 watashi ga hanare te iru ma ni kai te kudasai .. Nevosan
November 22nd, 2023 06:58
Neville said:
watashi wa secoia no you nani otoko desu ga 、 watashi ga hanare te iru ma ni kai te kudasai .. Nevosan
November 22nd, 2023 06:58
Chatterton’s Redress
orchidee said:
A troubled soul.
Fido said to me - \'Nooo, it\'s not a poem about Lady ChatterLEY. You would only swoon if it was!\' lol.
November 20th, 2023 08:59
orchidee said:
A troubled soul.
Fido said to me - \'Nooo, it\'s not a poem about Lady ChatterLEY. You would only swoon if it was!\' lol.
November 20th, 2023 08:59
Chatterton’s Redress
2781 said:
I am always right of track!
Somehow I read into it God\'s harvest for the unrighteous.
Woe is me.
November 20th, 2023 07:49
2781 said:
I am always right of track!
Somehow I read into it God\'s harvest for the unrighteous.
Woe is me.
November 20th, 2023 07:49
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