Comments received on poems by arqios



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Poetic Licence said:

Cosmic Ballet in Motion, lovely line, i wonder how they would describe us looking down, enjoyed the read.

December 24th, 2024 02:48

catch of the day
Neville said:



Excellent .. but best not mention those that got away .. it\'s the way it has always been and should be .. I am totally against any form of fish farming & also against those huge vessels that just mop up everything in their path so indiscriminately ... Tight lines squire until next time .. Neville

December 23rd, 2024 13:25

catch of the day
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 23rd, 2024 13:20

catch of the day
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant.

December 23rd, 2024 12:27

catch of the day
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Beautifully rendered and profoundly true! I hope it’s not the last, but I am selfish in that as I enjoy reading you! LOL! If it is, read you next year my friend. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you and yours! πŸŒΉπŸ‘πŸŽ„

December 23rd, 2024 10:05

catch of the day
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poem of images that goes deeper in meaning and metaphor. I love this net you have cast and feel caught in it. Beautiful and happy holidays to you and yours

December 23rd, 2024 04:15

catch of the day
Poetic Licence said:

I feel a glowing homage to one of the hardest professions in the world, a very enjoyable read.

December 23rd, 2024 03:14

drunken suspension bridge
Goldfinch60 said:

Love can be so binding at times arqios if the person in your life does not care but I am so fortunate with the loves in my life that have always been true.

Love Astrid Gilberto.

Andy

December 23rd, 2024 03:07

drunken suspension bridge
Teddy.15 said:

A resurrection indeed, very very similar to my own life, many wasted years. 🌹

December 22nd, 2024 22:52

drunken suspension bridge
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome poem
really hits home.
I was in a relationship
like that and finally
Left it. Alcohol is a bad
disease, has ruined
many a couple. 😒
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad

December 22nd, 2024 19:14

drunken suspension bridge
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

December 22nd, 2024 15:28

drunken suspension bridge
Cassie58 said:

Your lines resonated with me and not in a metaphorical way, but from experience of earlier years. Alcoholism is an illness and I experienced that with a partner. Sober, he was a completely different person. He certainly loved his drink though. Much to think about here and reflect on. Up to your usual high standard arqios.

December 22nd, 2024 14:21

drunken suspension bridge
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I can certainly relate to this, my friend, both in how I have seen substances destroy the lives of those I love...and the way it started to destroy my own. Thankfully...I am a semicolon in this way and in others. A brilliant poem that sees the humanity in someone struggling as opposed to merely the problem. Well done, my friend, well done! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 22nd, 2024 07:28

drunken suspension bridge
2781 said:

Have you met my mate?

December 22nd, 2024 05:57

drunken suspension bridge
Poetic Licence said:

A powerful piece layered with anger and pain, they can see without the alcohol there is love to be had. A worthwhile read.

December 22nd, 2024 04:05

drunken suspension bridge
sorenbarrett said:

If taken literal it is so difficult to deal with substances in a relationship on the metaphoric side drunken on fantasies one can not create a deep and meaningful relationship. In its simplicity it says so much.

December 22nd, 2024 03:50

21-12-24
Goldfinch60 said:

Those memories of our youth are still there arqios.

Andy

December 22nd, 2024 02:15

21-12-24
Kevin Hulme said:

I know what you mean. Somethings just stay with you.
My Mother loved the Frank Sinatra Christmas Album. So that’s special for me .
Have a good one.

December 21st, 2024 20:04

love unspoken
Kevin Hulme said:

Once again, Strange. I just Published β€˜I hate to see you Cry’ and your Poem is of similar theme.
Yes to stand back and see someone you Love suffer is unbearable. Good Poem.

December 21st, 2024 19:47

21-12-24
David Wakeling said:

The truth about growing up.It can be a lot different.Thoughtful poem

December 21st, 2024 14:49

21-12-24
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Yes, despite my poetry’s focus as of late, I too, do have that inner child within me, longing for Christmas Eve/Day. Thank you for bringing that less cynical kiddo out with this wonderful gem, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 21st, 2024 13:45

21-12-24
Cassie58 said:

Lovely and upbeat and brings out my inner child. Great imagery. I still get excited about Christmas with family. Enjoyed my visit and your posted music arqios.

December 21st, 2024 13:25

21-12-24
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

December 21st, 2024 13:22

21-12-24
Thad Wilk said:

A beautiful Christmas
poem and thoughts penned! β›„πŸ§‘β€πŸŽ„
I still feel the same about
it, as I did then!! πŸ‘
Love it!!😍 Great read my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

December 21st, 2024 11:01

21-12-24
sorenbarrett said:

Caught the feeling in this poem so well expressed with memories of childhood and the anticipation of Christmas morning. Yes it is a feeling that can\'t be shaken. A most lovely write.

December 21st, 2024 08:46

21-12-24
2781 said:

Yep, I get caught up in the mania.
It\'s the one time of year I allow myself to get ripped off.
Wait a minute, today I bought oysters from the farmer for $15 a dozen, and 5kg of frozen wild caught king pawns for $27.50, and got given a watermelon by the Syrian grocer. Great time of year,
Cheers

December 21st, 2024 07:14

21-12-24
Neville said:


If its your BIG DAY then many congratulations .. if it\'s not, then here, have even more .. congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, congratulations, πŸ§‘β€πŸŽ„πŸ‘

December 21st, 2024 06:57

21-12-24
Poetic Licence said:

We all retain some part of being a child inside us, a happy enjoyable read to brighten up what here is a horrible cold wet day, Thank you

December 21st, 2024 06:35

21-12-24
cellinic said:

A very nice, deep and multifaceted piece of work. Best wishes and warm regards,

December 21st, 2024 05:57

love unspoken
Goldfinch60 said:

True friendship is such a blessing arqios.

Andy

December 21st, 2024 02:45



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