Comments received on poems by arqios
Goodbye, Dad
Rocky Lagou said:
My sincere condolences. I lost my mother at 13, and I know the heartache that is caused from a parent\'s loss. It\'s something unbearable, I hope you\'ll see better days, there\'s always hope.
May 13th, 2022 08:24
Rocky Lagou said:
My sincere condolences. I lost my mother at 13, and I know the heartache that is caused from a parent\'s loss. It\'s something unbearable, I hope you\'ll see better days, there\'s always hope.
May 13th, 2022 08:24
Goodbye, Dad
L. B. Mek said:
\'my eyelids scroll to see
and feel you waiting, free
through this jungle and
its concrete mountains
no longer away from thee\'..
may he rest in peace
4 makes it, a season of years
lets makes this, winter\'s season
for your loss
awaiting are the Spring and Summer
of acceptance and growth..
stay strong, dear Poet..
I hope
these words, would make him proud..
thanks for sharing
May 13th, 2022 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'my eyelids scroll to see
and feel you waiting, free
through this jungle and
its concrete mountains
no longer away from thee\'..
may he rest in peace
4 makes it, a season of years
lets makes this, winter\'s season
for your loss
awaiting are the Spring and Summer
of acceptance and growth..
stay strong, dear Poet..
I hope
these words, would make him proud..
thanks for sharing
May 13th, 2022 04:28
is it not your day?
Rocky Lagou said:
Yikes. Sounds quite somber, the \"real life\" is a bummer though; bills, responsibilities, you name it. Just hope you can make it out alive and thrive! Your poems are amazing!
May 10th, 2022 08:42
Rocky Lagou said:
Yikes. Sounds quite somber, the \"real life\" is a bummer though; bills, responsibilities, you name it. Just hope you can make it out alive and thrive! Your poems are amazing!
May 10th, 2022 08:42
is it not your day?
L. B. Mek said:
\'guttural screaming to a downbeat of debt
spewing silently from a tattered billfold.
What a present: timely to an empty fridge,
in the hallway, a growing pile of washing\'..
crisp clear imagery
a downbeat theme, but still
an intriguing read..
thanks for sharing
May 10th, 2022 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'guttural screaming to a downbeat of debt
spewing silently from a tattered billfold.
What a present: timely to an empty fridge,
in the hallway, a growing pile of washing\'..
crisp clear imagery
a downbeat theme, but still
an intriguing read..
thanks for sharing
May 10th, 2022 06:16
5-7-5 a.1
Paul Bell said:
That\'s quite strange. I remember, as a child, hundreds of sparrows on the wires. I don\'t see that now. Have they done something to the wires to prevent it, I wonder.
May 10th, 2022 04:47
Paul Bell said:
That\'s quite strange. I remember, as a child, hundreds of sparrows on the wires. I don\'t see that now. Have they done something to the wires to prevent it, I wonder.
May 10th, 2022 04:47
5-7-5 a.1
orchidee said:
Good write C.
Great title! Bit difficult to click on it, to select it. How about \"..........\" next time\"?!
May 7th, 2022 02:19
orchidee said:
Good write C.
Great title! Bit difficult to click on it, to select it. How about \"..........\" next time\"?!
May 7th, 2022 02:19
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