Comments received on poems by arqios



Bleak House: The Fog
Goldfinch60 said:

But through that fog we will come into the light of our wonderful lives arqios.

Andy

February 25th, 2025 02:10

Bleak House: The Fog
RSM0812 said:

Ive been in 3 court cases for three of 4 years. I can relate to this more then ulyou know. If i had money my court battles would have been over and won years ago. Unfortunately the emotionally saturated judicial system only responds to the dollar like everything else either wise I\'d be a much more fulfilled person I think. Lol

February 24th, 2025 23:59

Bleak House: The Fog
Kevin Hulme said:

Jarndyce and Jarndyce is what came to mind. Nice One.

February 24th, 2025 21:18

Bleak House: The Fog
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous imagery.

February 24th, 2025 12:06

Bleak House: The Fog
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Actually, the same song and scene came to mind. Good ol\' burth. Indeed, what\'s the difference? Powerful poem, my friend! 🌹👏

February 24th, 2025 10:46

Bleak House: The Fog
MarcWalk said:

Love this.

February 24th, 2025 09:18

Bleak House: The Fog
Poetic Licence said:

The fog within the justice system is greed, to many people dragging the blatantly obvious out as long as possible on a hefty hourly rate , enjoyed the read, making valid points

February 24th, 2025 05:56

Bleak House: The Fog
orchidee said:

Good write A.

February 24th, 2025 03:12

Bleak House: The Fog
sorenbarrett said:

What a wonderful metaphor you have painted in this metropolis. Yes like the fog the law is never swift, always murky, hides justice and truth, creates confusion, and the key word is uncertainty. Very nicely written.

February 24th, 2025 02:29

Melbourne mosaic
Kevin Hulme said:

Wonderful descriptive Poem.
Love to go there or anywhere in OZ.

February 23rd, 2025 20:26

… how to get to there
Neville said:



How wonderful is that .. You just took me back yonks .. such wonderful times and associated memories came flooding back at the mere thought of Snuffalopagus .. My first ever dog was also named after the old fella \'Snuff\' ...... Neville

February 23rd, 2025 14:00

Three dots dancing
Joseph M Marion said:

This is beautiful I love the way you write I\'ll be a follower and hoping your friend me

February 23rd, 2025 11:07

… how to get to there
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Man, I am still wishing I could find and never leave Sesame Place! Loved this my friend! 🌹👏

February 23rd, 2025 08:36

Melbourne mosaic
John Prophet said:

Nice piece of work👍🏼

February 23rd, 2025 06:57

… how to get to there
arqios said:

It seems that this is beginning to reveal itself as a niche composition.

February 23rd, 2025 06:49

… how to get to there
Poetic Licence said:

I have enjoyed the read but i have to be honest this has beaten me.

February 23rd, 2025 06:34

… how to get to there
sorenbarrett said:

Ah the trap was set and I fell right in. A most joyful trap, that of childhood where lucidity is blind yet sees with great acuity, where there are no metaphors they are all reality. Ah to have that innocence again. A fave

February 23rd, 2025 05:08

… how to get to there
orchidee said:

Good write Bird, erm, A. lol.

February 23rd, 2025 02:53

Melbourne mosaic
Doggerel Dave said:

Demolition of large parts of what was a pristine Victorian city during and around the sixties was a tragedy. Should have been preserved in aspic. Still, seems there may be enough left to please.......

February 22nd, 2025 21:04

Melbourne mosaic
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Would love to visit Melbourne and Australia as a whole. Thanks for the mental trip! 🌹👏 Well done, my friend! Cool to see you on Insta too! Yay!

February 22nd, 2025 09:44

Melbourne mosaic
Mutley Ravishes said:

Hi Melbourne!
Its your old enemy, Sydney
Shut your cakehole
And listen to me
Your coffee\'s crap
And an Opera House
You lack
Anymore of this nonsense
And I\'ll give you a slap!





February 22nd, 2025 05:58

Melbourne mosaic
arqios said:

Thankful for the marvellous reception today. I will now attempt to comment on your equally wonderful poems. 🙏🏻🕊

February 22nd, 2025 05:38

Melbourne mosaic
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice One Arqios
Nice Vibrant Rhythms

February 22nd, 2025 05:03

Melbourne mosaic
David Wakeling said:

Everyone I have spoken to from Melbourne really like the place.From this poem I can see why.Nice tribute

February 22nd, 2025 04:44

Melbourne mosaic
Poetic Licence said:

From the imagery in this piece it\'s clearly a wonderful place to visit, enjoyed the read

February 22nd, 2025 04:21

Melbourne mosaic
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful view of that city arqios.

Andy

February 22nd, 2025 03:07

Melbourne mosaic
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful write of wonderful images woven into a description of a place I have never been but now feel I have and stitched so nicely with the silver thread of river and words holding not only nature and man\'s accomplishments together but transcending space pulling me to a place far away. Loved it.

February 22nd, 2025 03:03

beneath the nightingale’s call
Goldfinch60 said:

May that Nightingale forever bring songs to our lives arqios.

Andy

February 22nd, 2025 02:48

Melbourne mosaic
orchidee said:

A fine write A.

February 22nd, 2025 02:47

beneath the nightingale’s call
David Wakeling said:

Wonderful extension of the ancient Greek story. I enjoyed reading very much

February 21st, 2025 16:07



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