Comments received on poems by arqios
autumn chofu
Teddy.15 said:
Outstanding imagery I felt I was literally inside your words, beautiful I love this. 🌹 🍁
December 18th, 2024 02:29
Teddy.15 said:
Outstanding imagery I felt I was literally inside your words, beautiful I love this. 🌹 🍁
December 18th, 2024 02:29
autumn chofu
Neville said:
Wow, you wield words so wonderfully well & then whisk them into something splendid .. Enjoyed mulchly my friend & then some 🍁🍂🍂🍃🍁🍀🍂🍂🍁🍃🍃👍👍
December 18th, 2024 01:41
Neville said:
Wow, you wield words so wonderfully well & then whisk them into something splendid .. Enjoyed mulchly my friend & then some 🍁🍂🍂🍃🍁🍀🍂🍂🍁🍃🍃👍👍
December 18th, 2024 01:41
autumn chofu
Dan Williams said:
Circle of life. Brings some remorse, some hope. Nice work here.
December 18th, 2024 01:06
Dan Williams said:
Circle of life. Brings some remorse, some hope. Nice work here.
December 18th, 2024 01:06
autumn chofu
Thad Wilk said:
Ahhh Autumn 🍁 🍂🍁🍂
my favorite time
of the year really!! 😊
Wonderful brevity,
stunning imagery!! 👍😍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
December 17th, 2024 21:33
Thad Wilk said:
Ahhh Autumn 🍁 🍂🍁🍂
my favorite time
of the year really!! 😊
Wonderful brevity,
stunning imagery!! 👍😍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
December 17th, 2024 21:33
autumn chofu
Doggerel Dave said:
Cherry blossoms are in Spring, aren\'t they? A shame..... next time?
December 17th, 2024 17:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Cherry blossoms are in Spring, aren\'t they? A shame..... next time?
December 17th, 2024 17:35
autumn chofu
David Wakeling said:
Poetry in motion.Very powerful . The autumn leaves falling like a ballet dancer.Wonderful
December 17th, 2024 14:42
David Wakeling said:
Poetry in motion.Very powerful . The autumn leaves falling like a ballet dancer.Wonderful
December 17th, 2024 14:42
autumn chofu
Poetic Licence said:
Completing the cycle of nature, very enjoyable
December 17th, 2024 10:57
Poetic Licence said:
Completing the cycle of nature, very enjoyable
December 17th, 2024 10:57
autumn chofu
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a dance of words painting a lullaby of decent from heights to its destination. Very nice
December 17th, 2024 07:48
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a dance of words painting a lullaby of decent from heights to its destination. Very nice
December 17th, 2024 07:48
season\'s jailbreak
Goldfinch60 said:
May those turkeys keep on going arqios.
Andy
December 17th, 2024 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
May those turkeys keep on going arqios.
Andy
December 17th, 2024 02:46
a moment in between
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes , Now is so important .
We can look at old photos when young and long for ‘that’ now. Or Pictures with our Parents now gone. But in this Now there are new Loves.
December 16th, 2024 19:37
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes , Now is so important .
We can look at old photos when young and long for ‘that’ now. Or Pictures with our Parents now gone. But in this Now there are new Loves.
December 16th, 2024 19:37
season\'s jailbreak
Doggerel Dave said:
Go turkeys - who do you think clipped the wire mesh?
December 16th, 2024 17:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Go turkeys - who do you think clipped the wire mesh?
December 16th, 2024 17:05
season\'s jailbreak
Cassie58 said:
So visual, those poor turkeys on their way to satisfy the hunger of so many sitting round the table for Christmas dinner. I have to say, turkey is off the menu in our home, we prefer beef. This poem however was quite a feast. Much enjoyed arqios.
December 16th, 2024 12:59
Cassie58 said:
So visual, those poor turkeys on their way to satisfy the hunger of so many sitting round the table for Christmas dinner. I have to say, turkey is off the menu in our home, we prefer beef. This poem however was quite a feast. Much enjoyed arqios.
December 16th, 2024 12:59
season\'s jailbreak
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah the cost of freedom...🦃...there\'s always a catch Mr. Tom the Turkey says. 😂 A profoundly true write, both literally for the turkeys...and metaphorically. Truly bravo, Mr. Cryptic...you inner bard shines again! 🌹👏 Easily faved...and thank you to Teddy for the inspiration! 🤘😎
December 16th, 2024 09:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah the cost of freedom...🦃...there\'s always a catch Mr. Tom the Turkey says. 😂 A profoundly true write, both literally for the turkeys...and metaphorically. Truly bravo, Mr. Cryptic...you inner bard shines again! 🌹👏 Easily faved...and thank you to Teddy for the inspiration! 🤘😎
December 16th, 2024 09:24
season\'s jailbreak
Neville said:
This is extraordinarily graphic .. my mouth went dry and it felt like spitting feathers .. I shall skip the main course & dive straight into the pudding if you don\'t mind .. 🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃 🍮🍮🍮👍
December 16th, 2024 09:01
Neville said:
This is extraordinarily graphic .. my mouth went dry and it felt like spitting feathers .. I shall skip the main course & dive straight into the pudding if you don\'t mind .. 🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃 🍮🍮🍮👍
December 16th, 2024 09:01
season\'s jailbreak
sorenbarrett said:
A race to the holidays or is it from the holidays. A most fun read Cryptic
December 16th, 2024 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
A race to the holidays or is it from the holidays. A most fun read Cryptic
December 16th, 2024 05:26
season\'s jailbreak
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d like to say hilarious but your imagery is incredibly visual 🤣😂 oh Mr Bard 10/10 for a grand and very humble challenge. I may never eat turkey again LOL kudos!
December 16th, 2024 05:13
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d like to say hilarious but your imagery is incredibly visual 🤣😂 oh Mr Bard 10/10 for a grand and very humble challenge. I may never eat turkey again LOL kudos!
December 16th, 2024 05:13
season\'s jailbreak
Poetic Licence said:
It would great if one year they did a break for freedom, enjoyable read , Thank you
December 16th, 2024 03:49
Poetic Licence said:
It would great if one year they did a break for freedom, enjoyable read , Thank you
December 16th, 2024 03:49
a moment in between
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment in our lives is now arqios.
Andy
December 16th, 2024 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment in our lives is now arqios.
Andy
December 16th, 2024 02:58
a moment in between
Neville said:
there is absolutely nothing wrong with this work of art at all, indeed .. everything is perfectly all write & that, is an understatement if ever there was in my personal opinion .. from the opening stanza which was a brilliant way to kick off and introduce the whole thing, write through to its polar opposite conclusion .. everything fits with such exact precision .. I suggest this is more than just a little gem .. indeed much more .. 👍😎👍
December 16th, 2024 02:12
Neville said:
there is absolutely nothing wrong with this work of art at all, indeed .. everything is perfectly all write & that, is an understatement if ever there was in my personal opinion .. from the opening stanza which was a brilliant way to kick off and introduce the whole thing, write through to its polar opposite conclusion .. everything fits with such exact precision .. I suggest this is more than just a little gem .. indeed much more .. 👍😎👍
December 16th, 2024 02:12
a moment in between
Dan Williams said:
Clear and smooth, annunciated well, very nice.
December 16th, 2024 01:04
Dan Williams said:
Clear and smooth, annunciated well, very nice.
December 16th, 2024 01:04
a moment in between
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem
and thought provoking indeed! 🤔
That moment in-between is
all that counts sounds like,, \"now\"! 😲
Thanks for sharing
my pleasure to read!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 15th, 2024 20:53
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem
and thought provoking indeed! 🤔
That moment in-between is
all that counts sounds like,, \"now\"! 😲
Thanks for sharing
my pleasure to read!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 15th, 2024 20:53
a moment in between
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The questions of \"why\" and \"where\"
dissolve in the distant horizons
leaving only the hushed tones of \"now.\"
The end stanza says it all. For all of the questions we have...the whys...the hows...we never seem to \"know\" the answers...and, perhaps...maybe, just maybe...that is okay. Maybe we have all we need to discover in the current moment...in the now. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderfully wise, my friend! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 19:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The questions of \"why\" and \"where\"
dissolve in the distant horizons
leaving only the hushed tones of \"now.\"
The end stanza says it all. For all of the questions we have...the whys...the hows...we never seem to \"know\" the answers...and, perhaps...maybe, just maybe...that is okay. Maybe we have all we need to discover in the current moment...in the now. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderfully wise, my friend! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 19:00
a moment in between
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful description of that time between. When nothing is measured, planned or noticed. Time not lived, another dimension where everything is decided and fate turns the page. Well written my friend
December 15th, 2024 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful description of that time between. When nothing is measured, planned or noticed. Time not lived, another dimension where everything is decided and fate turns the page. Well written my friend
December 15th, 2024 11:43
a moment in between
Poetic Licence said:
I will be honest i am still working this one out, but i have still enjoyed the read
December 15th, 2024 11:36
Poetic Licence said:
I will be honest i am still working this one out, but i have still enjoyed the read
December 15th, 2024 11:36
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