Comments received on poems by arqios



autumn chofu
Teddy.15 said:

Outstanding imagery I felt I was literally inside your words, beautiful I love this. ๐ŸŒน ๐Ÿ

December 18th, 2024 02:29

autumn chofu
Neville said:



Wow, you wield words so wonderfully well & then whisk them into something splendid .. Enjoyed mulchly my friend & then some ๐Ÿ๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿƒ๐Ÿ๐Ÿ€๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ๐Ÿƒ๐Ÿƒ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

December 18th, 2024 01:41

autumn chofu
Dan Williams said:

Circle of life. Brings some remorse, some hope. Nice work here.

December 18th, 2024 01:06

autumn chofu
cellinic said:

Very nice and poetic. Liked and faved! )

December 18th, 2024 00:26

autumn chofu
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful imagery.

December 17th, 2024 22:53

autumn chofu
Thad Wilk said:

Ahhh Autumn ๐Ÿ ๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ๐Ÿ‚
my favorite time
of the year really!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Wonderful brevity,
stunning imagery!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ peace. Thad

December 17th, 2024 21:33

autumn chofu
Doggerel Dave said:

Cherry blossoms are in Spring, aren\'t they? A shame..... next time?

December 17th, 2024 17:35

autumn chofu
David Wakeling said:

Poetry in motion.Very powerful . The autumn leaves falling like a ballet dancer.Wonderful

December 17th, 2024 14:42

winterโ€™s embrace
vicecream said:

โ„๏ธ lovee

December 17th, 2024 13:03

autumn chofu
Poetic Licence said:

Completing the cycle of nature, very enjoyable

December 17th, 2024 10:57

autumn chofu
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful a dance of words painting a lullaby of decent from heights to its destination. Very nice

December 17th, 2024 07:48

season\'s jailbreak
Goldfinch60 said:

May those turkeys keep on going arqios.

Andy

December 17th, 2024 02:46

a moment in between
Kevin Hulme said:

Yes , Now is so important .
We can look at old photos when young and long for โ€˜thatโ€™ now. Or Pictures with our Parents now gone. But in this Now there are new Loves.

December 16th, 2024 19:37

season\'s jailbreak
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic.

December 16th, 2024 17:11

season\'s jailbreak
Doggerel Dave said:

Go turkeys - who do you think clipped the wire mesh?

December 16th, 2024 17:05

season\'s jailbreak
Cassie58 said:

So visual, those poor turkeys on their way to satisfy the hunger of so many sitting round the table for Christmas dinner. I have to say, turkey is off the menu in our home, we prefer beef. This poem however was quite a feast. Much enjoyed arqios.

December 16th, 2024 12:59

season\'s jailbreak
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 16th, 2024 10:49

season\'s jailbreak
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Ah the cost of freedom...๐Ÿฆƒ...there\'s always a catch Mr. Tom the Turkey says. ๐Ÿ˜‚ A profoundly true write, both literally for the turkeys...and metaphorically. Truly bravo, Mr. Cryptic...you inner bard shines again! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘ Easily faved...and thank you to Teddy for the inspiration! ๐Ÿค˜๐Ÿ˜Ž

December 16th, 2024 09:24

season\'s jailbreak
Neville said:



This is extraordinarily graphic .. my mouth went dry and it felt like spitting feathers .. I shall skip the main course & dive straight into the pudding if you don\'t mind .. ๐Ÿฆƒ๐Ÿฆƒ๐Ÿฆƒ๐Ÿฆƒ๐Ÿฆƒ๐Ÿฆƒ ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿ‘

December 16th, 2024 09:01

season\'s jailbreak
sorenbarrett said:

A race to the holidays or is it from the holidays. A most fun read Cryptic

December 16th, 2024 05:26

season\'s jailbreak
Teddy.15 said:

I\'d like to say hilarious but your imagery is incredibly visual ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚ oh Mr Bard 10/10 for a grand and very humble challenge. I may never eat turkey again LOL kudos!

December 16th, 2024 05:13

season\'s jailbreak
Poetic Licence said:

It would great if one year they did a break for freedom, enjoyable read , Thank you

December 16th, 2024 03:49

season\'s jailbreak
orchidee said:

Good write A.

December 16th, 2024 03:15

a moment in between
Goldfinch60 said:

Each moment in our lives is now arqios.

Andy

December 16th, 2024 02:58

a moment in between
Neville said:


there is absolutely nothing wrong with this work of art at all, indeed .. everything is perfectly all write & that, is an understatement if ever there was in my personal opinion .. from the opening stanza which was a brilliant way to kick off and introduce the whole thing, write through to its polar opposite conclusion .. everything fits with such exact precision .. I suggest this is more than just a little gem .. indeed much more .. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘

December 16th, 2024 02:12

a moment in between
Dan Williams said:

Clear and smooth, annunciated well, very nice.

December 16th, 2024 01:04

a moment in between
Thad Wilk said:

A wonderful poem
and thought provoking indeed! ๐Ÿค”
That moment in-between is
all that counts sounds like,, \"now\"! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Thanks for sharing
my pleasure to read!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

December 15th, 2024 20:53

a moment in between
Tristan Robert Lange said:

The questions of \"why\" and \"where\"

dissolve in the distant horizons

leaving only the hushed tones of \"now.\"

The end stanza says it all. For all of the questions we have...the whys...the hows...we never seem to \"know\" the answers...and, perhaps...maybe, just maybe...that is okay. Maybe we have all we need to discover in the current moment...in the now. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderfully wise, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

December 15th, 2024 19:00

a moment in between
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful description of that time between. When nothing is measured, planned or noticed. Time not lived, another dimension where everything is decided and fate turns the page. Well written my friend

December 15th, 2024 11:43

a moment in between
Poetic Licence said:

I will be honest i am still working this one out, but i have still enjoyed the read

December 15th, 2024 11:36



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