Comments received on poems by arqios
the next day
L. B. Mek said:
the beat from the music you were listening to
while writing these lines, comes through
even without an easy rhyme to cling to
your effortless flow is enough..
such a great reading experience
thank you, cherished Poet
October 6th, 2023 08:46
L. B. Mek said:
the beat from the music you were listening to
while writing these lines, comes through
even without an easy rhyme to cling to
your effortless flow is enough..
such a great reading experience
thank you, cherished Poet
October 6th, 2023 08:46
Oktoberfest
Bella Shepard said:
Love your description of a feeling all too familiar. So good to see your words my friend. Rejuvinated I hope!
October 5th, 2023 15:25
Bella Shepard said:
Love your description of a feeling all too familiar. So good to see your words my friend. Rejuvinated I hope!
October 5th, 2023 15:25
Oktoberfest
Neville said:
keep your chin mate .. I always find I can manage to knock another couple back that way .. nastrave ..
October 5th, 2023 09:06
Neville said:
keep your chin mate .. I always find I can manage to knock another couple back that way .. nastrave ..
October 5th, 2023 09:06
Oktoberfest
Teddy.15 said:
Such beauty in your lines. If you are at Oktoberfest have a beer for me. ❤️
October 5th, 2023 04:04
Teddy.15 said:
Such beauty in your lines. If you are at Oktoberfest have a beer for me. ❤️
October 5th, 2023 04:04
Oktoberfest
2781 said:
Always good to hear you.
I can emphasise.
What was that thought I just had?
October 5th, 2023 02:22
2781 said:
Always good to hear you.
I can emphasise.
What was that thought I just had?
October 5th, 2023 02:22
summer fête
L. B. Mek said:
a great read, dear Poet
another of your deeply insightful poems,
that touch of wistful melancholy
in your poetic voice
adding to the impact of your words
really well executed, thank you!
July 24th, 2023 02:36
L. B. Mek said:
a great read, dear Poet
another of your deeply insightful poems,
that touch of wistful melancholy
in your poetic voice
adding to the impact of your words
really well executed, thank you!
July 24th, 2023 02:36
summer fête
Bella Shepard said:
The delights of summer are ever with us, perhaps as shadows of our summer\'s past. Beautifully versed dear poet.
July 21st, 2023 13:21
Bella Shepard said:
The delights of summer are ever with us, perhaps as shadows of our summer\'s past. Beautifully versed dear poet.
July 21st, 2023 13:21
summer fête
orchidee said:
Good wrire CB.
Now me poem:
\'Under dark rain clouds of summer
And blowing a howling gale.....\'
That\'s put a dampener on it! Doh! lol.
July 21st, 2023 10:11
orchidee said:
Good wrire CB.
Now me poem:
\'Under dark rain clouds of summer
And blowing a howling gale.....\'
That\'s put a dampener on it! Doh! lol.
July 21st, 2023 10:11
truest frame
Bobby O said:
PRINT decay. Great visual. Nice touch all the way through. Did you know you could be dainty and still
Declare ?
July 20th, 2023 16:39
Bobby O said:
PRINT decay. Great visual. Nice touch all the way through. Did you know you could be dainty and still
Declare ?
July 20th, 2023 16:39
truest frame
orchidee said:
Yep, those dawns do usually turn in to days. Like we said about nights being dark too!
Gosh, it\'s really educational on \'ere, innit?
July 20th, 2023 11:46
orchidee said:
Yep, those dawns do usually turn in to days. Like we said about nights being dark too!
Gosh, it\'s really educational on \'ere, innit?
July 20th, 2023 11:46
break of dawn
Goldfinch60 said:
Around that corner there is often the beginning of a wonderful life CB.
Andy
July 20th, 2023 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Around that corner there is often the beginning of a wonderful life CB.
Andy
July 20th, 2023 00:38
break of dawn
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Sharply expressive writing. A lot said in a few. I love the style. A definite fave... ❤
July 19th, 2023 14:10
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Sharply expressive writing. A lot said in a few. I love the style. A definite fave... ❤
July 19th, 2023 14:10
break of dawn
Bella Shepard said:
We wait, we watch, we never know until it\'s here. We hope for the best, never knowing what life will give us the next day. How can we? You say it so well dear poet.
July 19th, 2023 12:32
Bella Shepard said:
We wait, we watch, we never know until it\'s here. We hope for the best, never knowing what life will give us the next day. How can we? You say it so well dear poet.
July 19th, 2023 12:32
break of dawn
orchidee said:
Yep, the nights usually do turn into days.
In a comedy film, it said \'The night was dark - they usually are!\' lol.
July 19th, 2023 09:54
orchidee said:
Yep, the nights usually do turn into days.
In a comedy film, it said \'The night was dark - they usually are!\' lol.
July 19th, 2023 09:54
break of dawn
Neville said:
.. it can happen .. quick as the blink of an eye ..
July 19th, 2023 08:09
Neville said:
.. it can happen .. quick as the blink of an eye ..
July 19th, 2023 08:09
new bloom
Neville said:
its rarely as plain sailing as it says in the manual .. muchly enjoyed regardless .................... Neville
July 18th, 2023 13:30
Neville said:
its rarely as plain sailing as it says in the manual .. muchly enjoyed regardless .................... Neville
July 18th, 2023 13:30
new bloom
sorenbarrett said:
The swells are but waves that crest and fall. in this world, like a mobius strip, a half twist brings us back to where we began on a one sided journey. Lovely
July 18th, 2023 07:49
sorenbarrett said:
The swells are but waves that crest and fall. in this world, like a mobius strip, a half twist brings us back to where we began on a one sided journey. Lovely
July 18th, 2023 07:49
winter furnace
Bella Shepard said:
A lovely analogy dear friend, to forgive and possibly forget, that wounds may heal, but scars may remain.
July 17th, 2023 15:32
Bella Shepard said:
A lovely analogy dear friend, to forgive and possibly forget, that wounds may heal, but scars may remain.
July 17th, 2023 15:32
weedkillers
L. B. Mek said:
nature recognises no weeds
Gaia loves her children equal
its our toxic environments
that depict life as being deprived
of worth
red sands, stained by the crimson
of tears, from those who survived
rest
are well n truly deep into their
hard earned rest
this be the mercy imbued
in the promise between
death and destiny...
(love reading and engaging
with your poems, dear Poet
they never fail to push my limits
thank you!)
July 14th, 2023 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
nature recognises no weeds
Gaia loves her children equal
its our toxic environments
that depict life as being deprived
of worth
red sands, stained by the crimson
of tears, from those who survived
rest
are well n truly deep into their
hard earned rest
this be the mercy imbued
in the promise between
death and destiny...
(love reading and engaging
with your poems, dear Poet
they never fail to push my limits
thank you!)
July 14th, 2023 03:35
minutiae
L. B. Mek said:
windswept, from but a blink
squinting through life, hoping
choices come with marks
for intent..
and we roll our dice, to find
our place upon nature\'s sands..
(I so relate, dear Poet
loving the complexity
in your wordplay layers)
July 14th, 2023 03:30
L. B. Mek said:
windswept, from but a blink
squinting through life, hoping
choices come with marks
for intent..
and we roll our dice, to find
our place upon nature\'s sands..
(I so relate, dear Poet
loving the complexity
in your wordplay layers)
July 14th, 2023 03:30
Faraday\'s lack
Bella Shepard said:
I love reading about science, so this poem really intrigued me. I Wikipedia-ed Faraday and learned about Faraday efficiency and Faradaic loss. Very interesting. But for the mind of man, what would we be. Thank you for always stimulating the little gray cells dear poet, well done!
July 12th, 2023 11:09
Bella Shepard said:
I love reading about science, so this poem really intrigued me. I Wikipedia-ed Faraday and learned about Faraday efficiency and Faradaic loss. Very interesting. But for the mind of man, what would we be. Thank you for always stimulating the little gray cells dear poet, well done!
July 12th, 2023 11:09
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