Comments received on poems by arqios
sheen of young love
sorenbarrett said:
Privacy a word of the past. Whether lovers of others or freedom lovers we are observed, poked and prodded and there is no right to privacy in the constitution. A mere afterthought in the ninth amendment now felt outdated and up for interpretation. Who you slept with, what positions were used, how you spent your money, how you voted, and the color of your stool all public knowledge.
February 18th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Privacy a word of the past. Whether lovers of others or freedom lovers we are observed, poked and prodded and there is no right to privacy in the constitution. A mere afterthought in the ninth amendment now felt outdated and up for interpretation. Who you slept with, what positions were used, how you spent your money, how you voted, and the color of your stool all public knowledge.
February 18th, 2025 04:56
forever we shall be
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One arqios
Soothing And Resplendent
February 18th, 2025 04:43
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One arqios
Soothing And Resplendent
February 18th, 2025 04:43
sheen of young love
Poetic Licence said:
The eyes window to the soul, by looking in there the real person you get to know, enjoyed today\'s read
February 18th, 2025 04:21
Poetic Licence said:
The eyes window to the soul, by looking in there the real person you get to know, enjoyed today\'s read
February 18th, 2025 04:21
sheen of young love
Goldfinch60 said:
But within those eyes the heart can be seen arqios and love will be found.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
But within those eyes the heart can be seen arqios and love will be found.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 03:01
‘til all my breath is You
Goldfinch60 said:
May that poison bring that love to you forever arqios.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
May that poison bring that love to you forever arqios.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:50
‘til all my breath is You
Cassie58 said:
I thought of the perfume called Poison. It is intoxicating. These words are too. That final line says it all. Good poison. In a strange way it reminded me of chemo. It can be a life saver.
February 17th, 2025 23:45
Cassie58 said:
I thought of the perfume called Poison. It is intoxicating. These words are too. That final line says it all. Good poison. In a strange way it reminded me of chemo. It can be a life saver.
February 17th, 2025 23:45
once upon a long ago
Doggerel Dave said:
\"...gazed upon the creation..\" and then came the revision.... After \'process\' and \'struggle\' so perfectly summed up the whole effort, there seemed little else to add....
February 17th, 2025 23:24
Doggerel Dave said:
\"...gazed upon the creation..\" and then came the revision.... After \'process\' and \'struggle\' so perfectly summed up the whole effort, there seemed little else to add....
February 17th, 2025 23:24
once upon a long ago
John Prophet said:
Absolutely wonderful, exactly how I feel about the creation process. Well said.
John
February 17th, 2025 18:53
John Prophet said:
Absolutely wonderful, exactly how I feel about the creation process. Well said.
John
February 17th, 2025 18:53
‘til all my breath is You
Cassie58 said:
A fine write arqios. Great use of language. The barbs kicked in with vigor. This dame certainly made her mark deeper than those that went before her. Your final line was unexpected and is a classic. Poison, so many variants of it. Hard to resist.
February 17th, 2025 17:45
Cassie58 said:
A fine write arqios. Great use of language. The barbs kicked in with vigor. This dame certainly made her mark deeper than those that went before her. Your final line was unexpected and is a classic. Poison, so many variants of it. Hard to resist.
February 17th, 2025 17:45
“my bloody valentine”
RSM0812 said:
Great history lesson in verse. One of my favorites.
February 17th, 2025 14:11
RSM0812 said:
Great history lesson in verse. One of my favorites.
February 17th, 2025 14:11
‘til all my breath is You
RSM0812 said:
Great write. To me the poison is a women. Like a poisonous medication that works barley better then a bandage. Just saying.
February 17th, 2025 14:09
RSM0812 said:
Great write. To me the poison is a women. Like a poisonous medication that works barley better then a bandage. Just saying.
February 17th, 2025 14:09
‘til all my breath is You
Neville said:
that summative line is a bloomin killer and to die for & furthermore, creased me up .. Neville
February 17th, 2025 13:00
Neville said:
that summative line is a bloomin killer and to die for & furthermore, creased me up .. Neville
February 17th, 2025 13:00
‘til all my breath is You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, my friend! Who doesn\'t like a li\'l good poison, now and again! Loved this! 🌹👏
February 17th, 2025 08:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, my friend! Who doesn\'t like a li\'l good poison, now and again! Loved this! 🌹👏
February 17th, 2025 08:24
‘til all my breath is You
Poetic Licence said:
How some people and things get right under and into your skin, either good or bad and once resident very difficult to eject, enjoyed the read
February 17th, 2025 07:26
Poetic Licence said:
How some people and things get right under and into your skin, either good or bad and once resident very difficult to eject, enjoyed the read
February 17th, 2025 07:26
‘til all my breath is You
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is a snake bite with plenty of venom. I\'m not sure who is upset with whom but the message is palpable. Wonderful
February 17th, 2025 05:35
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is a snake bite with plenty of venom. I\'m not sure who is upset with whom but the message is palpable. Wonderful
February 17th, 2025 05:35
‘til all my breath is You
Mutley Ravishes said:
Good poison! For a moment there I thought you were going into self-pity! Like so many on this.....no wait, I\'ll keep my mouth shut.
February 17th, 2025 04:50
Mutley Ravishes said:
Good poison! For a moment there I thought you were going into self-pity! Like so many on this.....no wait, I\'ll keep my mouth shut.
February 17th, 2025 04:50
‘til all my breath is You
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how we like our poisons. Be it drugs, cholesterol, sugar, inactivity, toxic relationships they are the things we live for. A write that seems too real to feel good about but its appeal like the drug brings one back. Lovely Cryptic
February 17th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how we like our poisons. Be it drugs, cholesterol, sugar, inactivity, toxic relationships they are the things we live for. A write that seems too real to feel good about but its appeal like the drug brings one back. Lovely Cryptic
February 17th, 2025 04:41
once upon a long ago
Goldfinch60 said:
So true arqios, the muse often takes time to wake up.
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
So true arqios, the muse often takes time to wake up.
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:13
once upon a long ago
David Wakeling said:
This is wonderful. I was transported to the poet\'s study. Both the joy and the struggle. Both are here wrestling. Inspirational
February 16th, 2025 16:27
David Wakeling said:
This is wonderful. I was transported to the poet\'s study. Both the joy and the struggle. Both are here wrestling. Inspirational
February 16th, 2025 16:27
poetspeak
Ma5on said:
arqios
Your poem is rich in metaphor, evoking the interplay between poetry, memory, & transcendence. The language is both elegant & haunting, lending itself to deep reflection.
Absolutely loved the opening line \"a poem is the funeral pyre of pulsations\" - stunning!!!
Your poem is perfectly refined & deeply expressive.
I could go on but, actually, this is best left as it is...I just want to read it again & not evaluate anymore.
regards
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 14:25
Ma5on said:
arqios
Your poem is rich in metaphor, evoking the interplay between poetry, memory, & transcendence. The language is both elegant & haunting, lending itself to deep reflection.
Absolutely loved the opening line \"a poem is the funeral pyre of pulsations\" - stunning!!!
Your poem is perfectly refined & deeply expressive.
I could go on but, actually, this is best left as it is...I just want to read it again & not evaluate anymore.
regards
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 14:25
once upon a long ago
Cassie58 said:
The struggle at times to find the inspiration to turn a thought into a poem. To develop it through all the stages and then to deliver it. You describe this so well. I like that word fickle. That sums up my own muse. Nicely composed arqios.
February 16th, 2025 12:40
Cassie58 said:
The struggle at times to find the inspiration to turn a thought into a poem. To develop it through all the stages and then to deliver it. You describe this so well. I like that word fickle. That sums up my own muse. Nicely composed arqios.
February 16th, 2025 12:40
not your day, either?
Cassie58 said:
Some great metaphors here arqios, but I would be lying if I told you I felt no pain. I did.
wrenched dreams
Another fine write from your prolific pen. Have a word with my muse will you. She’s slacking.
February 16th, 2025 12:18
Cassie58 said:
Some great metaphors here arqios, but I would be lying if I told you I felt no pain. I did.
wrenched dreams
Another fine write from your prolific pen. Have a word with my muse will you. She’s slacking.
February 16th, 2025 12:18
once upon a long ago
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Clunky means more room to play. This \"work in progress\" is quite good as is, my friend.
\"Lines emerged, each a reminder of the struggle, a / record of the battle waged on paper.\" These words really hit home. I know that battle! ❤️🙏
February 16th, 2025 11:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Clunky means more room to play. This \"work in progress\" is quite good as is, my friend.
\"Lines emerged, each a reminder of the struggle, a / record of the battle waged on paper.\" These words really hit home. I know that battle! ❤️🙏
February 16th, 2025 11:00
once upon a long ago
orchidee said:
Good write A. Is that an olive tree/branch there? (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
February 16th, 2025 10:42
orchidee said:
Good write A. Is that an olive tree/branch there? (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
February 16th, 2025 10:42
reflection by the sea
whats write for me said:
Enthralling verse, thank you.
February 16th, 2025 09:39
whats write for me said:
Enthralling verse, thank you.
February 16th, 2025 09:39
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