Comments received on poems by arqios
unlikely treasures
sorenbarrett said:
A poet\'s work here. Miners of jems that come rough and uncut from the ground, They require polishing and cutting. Very nicely mined and cut in this poem
December 10th, 2024 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poet\'s work here. Miners of jems that come rough and uncut from the ground, They require polishing and cutting. Very nicely mined and cut in this poem
December 10th, 2024 06:14
where is home?
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Short and succinct
awesomazing brevity!
Great use of metaphor,
yup kindness is the key! 🗝️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 00:07
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Short and succinct
awesomazing brevity!
Great use of metaphor,
yup kindness is the key! 🗝️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 00:07
where is home?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is another example of great word economy! A lot said in such few words! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 9th, 2024 16:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is another example of great word economy! A lot said in such few words! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 9th, 2024 16:19
where is home?
Teddy.15 said:
Could be stuck in the middle of nowhere, beautiful dear arqios, much to reflect on in so little words elegant and I couldn\'t agree more about words. I believe Kindness is underrated my friend it really can go a long way. 🌹
December 9th, 2024 06:15
Teddy.15 said:
Could be stuck in the middle of nowhere, beautiful dear arqios, much to reflect on in so little words elegant and I couldn\'t agree more about words. I believe Kindness is underrated my friend it really can go a long way. 🌹
December 9th, 2024 06:15
where is home?
sorenbarrett said:
Been there my friend and it is not where one wants to be. So nicely put in so few words
December 9th, 2024 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Been there my friend and it is not where one wants to be. So nicely put in so few words
December 9th, 2024 06:14
where is home?
David Wakeling said:
This is intriguing.powerful metaphors here.
December 9th, 2024 05:54
David Wakeling said:
This is intriguing.powerful metaphors here.
December 9th, 2024 05:54
where is home?
Caring dove said:
Interesting well written poem
Makes me think of those things that are missing .. then it doesn’t always feel like ‘ home ‘ does it
I get that feeling sometimes here , where I live doesn’t always feel like ‘ home
But I guess ‘ home ‘ can be when around certain people aswell
December 9th, 2024 05:36
Caring dove said:
Interesting well written poem
Makes me think of those things that are missing .. then it doesn’t always feel like ‘ home ‘ does it
I get that feeling sometimes here , where I live doesn’t always feel like ‘ home
But I guess ‘ home ‘ can be when around certain people aswell
December 9th, 2024 05:36
life\'s no faerie tale
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words arqios.
Andy
December 9th, 2024 03:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words arqios.
Andy
December 9th, 2024 03:12
life\'s no faerie tale
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, my friend! A true delight to read. ❤️🙏
December 8th, 2024 17:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, my friend! A true delight to read. ❤️🙏
December 8th, 2024 17:18
life\'s no faerie tale
Cassie58 said:
Shades of Byron. Beautiful poetry. Reads so very nicely.
December 8th, 2024 13:08
Cassie58 said:
Shades of Byron. Beautiful poetry. Reads so very nicely.
December 8th, 2024 13:08
life\'s no faerie tale
David Wakeling said:
this is so amazing.I love the cadence and rhyme. I,m not sure who she is but it can stand for all of us.Its all a fairy tale.
December 8th, 2024 06:01
David Wakeling said:
this is so amazing.I love the cadence and rhyme. I,m not sure who she is but it can stand for all of us.Its all a fairy tale.
December 8th, 2024 06:01
life\'s no faerie tale
sorenbarrett said:
I love the archaic language Used in this poem. It adds a sense of age and with it credibility. The Rhymin of this poem was wonderful and add so much to the meaning itself. It has a very classical field to it.
December 8th, 2024 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
I love the archaic language Used in this poem. It adds a sense of age and with it credibility. The Rhymin of this poem was wonderful and add so much to the meaning itself. It has a very classical field to it.
December 8th, 2024 05:50
life\'s no faerie tale
Lorenz said:
Very nicely expressed ! good job chat gpt !
December 8th, 2024 05:17
Lorenz said:
Very nicely expressed ! good job chat gpt !
December 8th, 2024 05:17
life\'s no faerie tale
Caring dove said:
Change even tho things may feel difficult .
This is lovely . ))
It can be hard to change things when we are struggling .. sometimes
There’s a soft feel to this poem
Very nicely expressed
December 8th, 2024 05:13
Caring dove said:
Change even tho things may feel difficult .
This is lovely . ))
It can be hard to change things when we are struggling .. sometimes
There’s a soft feel to this poem
Very nicely expressed
December 8th, 2024 05:13
life\'s no faerie tale
Poetic Licence said:
Very tender and sweet poem, a lovely read on a wet and cold Sunday, Thank you
December 8th, 2024 05:04
Poetic Licence said:
Very tender and sweet poem, a lovely read on a wet and cold Sunday, Thank you
December 8th, 2024 05:04
a makar’s legacy
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words makar, may they never cease.
Andy
December 8th, 2024 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words makar, may they never cease.
Andy
December 8th, 2024 02:27
a makar’s legacy
Neville said:
whilst the border is unimpressive, what lies beyond will blow the mind .. you just took me back several road trips & for that priceless gift I thank you alone .. Neville
December 8th, 2024 02:01
Neville said:
whilst the border is unimpressive, what lies beyond will blow the mind .. you just took me back several road trips & for that priceless gift I thank you alone .. Neville
December 8th, 2024 02:01
a makar’s legacy
Dan Williams said:
Unsure of a Makar but consider this an education. Well done.
December 8th, 2024 01:33
Dan Williams said:
Unsure of a Makar but consider this an education. Well done.
December 8th, 2024 01:33
a makar’s legacy
Thad Wilk said:
A most splendid poem,
and poetic pictorial,
eye pleasing imagery,!!🙏
Just resonates with greatness,
penned superbly!! 👏
My pleasure to read indeed!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 7th, 2024 20:57
Thad Wilk said:
A most splendid poem,
and poetic pictorial,
eye pleasing imagery,!!🙏
Just resonates with greatness,
penned superbly!! 👏
My pleasure to read indeed!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 7th, 2024 20:57
a makar’s legacy
Doggerel Dave said:
Och aye - your makar does what good poets aspire to do - navigate through a complex reality in as rich but concise way as possible,
Enjoyed the read, mate.
December 7th, 2024 16:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Och aye - your makar does what good poets aspire to do - navigate through a complex reality in as rich but concise way as possible,
Enjoyed the read, mate.
December 7th, 2024 16:23
tango of us
Caring dove said:
A lovely interesting and engaging writing .. very nice to read
December 7th, 2024 15:16
Caring dove said:
A lovely interesting and engaging writing .. very nice to read
December 7th, 2024 15:16
a makar’s legacy
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a bard. It speaks of his role and importance in the telling of stories, the evoking of emotions and imparting of wisdom. Cast in Scotland it gives a particular flavor to this poem of the mystical, historical, and for many the exotic. Very nicely done, my friend With lines of beauty and poetic artistry.
December 7th, 2024 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a bard. It speaks of his role and importance in the telling of stories, the evoking of emotions and imparting of wisdom. Cast in Scotland it gives a particular flavor to this poem of the mystical, historical, and for many the exotic. Very nicely done, my friend With lines of beauty and poetic artistry.
December 7th, 2024 14:04
a makar’s legacy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My wife and I spent our honeymoon in Inverness and Edinburgh, Scotland. Visited Drumnadrochit, on Loch Ness. We also spent good tine in London, Bath, Stonehenge. Wonderful trip…all of that to say, the spirit of the Highlands is in this and this speaks eloquently of the makar! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 7th, 2024 13:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My wife and I spent our honeymoon in Inverness and Edinburgh, Scotland. Visited Drumnadrochit, on Loch Ness. We also spent good tine in London, Bath, Stonehenge. Wonderful trip…all of that to say, the spirit of the Highlands is in this and this speaks eloquently of the makar! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 7th, 2024 13:23
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