Comments received on poems by arqios



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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Well done, my friend! This conveys a journey from a lively, chaotic party scene to a moment of intimate connection, It\'s the power of personal connection in finding clarity amidst life’s distractions. Thoroughly enjoyed this! See you on the other side of my vacation...and to answer your question...I went to a warmer location. 70s F here. :)

February 5th, 2025 09:58

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Thomas W Case said:

Superb work. Full of brilliant imagery.

February 4th, 2025 13:27

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Cassie58 said:

Beautiful bird song, uplifting with thoughts of spring. Very nicely composed arqios.

February 4th, 2025 07:45

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Poetic Licence said:

Beautifully worded and a beautiful picture, feels like spring now after that read, enjoyed

February 4th, 2025 06:04

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David Wakeling said:

This was delightful. It took me to a pleasant place. Wonderful Well done.

February 4th, 2025 05:28

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Neville said:



each of these is splendid .. and of course, strictly speaking no title required .. Neville

February 4th, 2025 04:00

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sorenbarrett said:

Don\'t know if its the feathers, song or spring weather but this one was soft, light and bright. A most uplifting poem sorry for the pun I was winging it.

February 4th, 2025 03:59

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orchidee said:

Good writes A. Possible title: \'A Spring Chorus\' - if you\'re thinking of Spring!

February 4th, 2025 03:15

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Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words arqios bringing Natures artwork to us.

Andy

February 4th, 2025 02:59

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Caring dove said:

A nice and interesting way with words .. liked the read ))

February 4th, 2025 02:04

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Teddy.15 said:

Even though senryu doesn\'t need a title this one could be called electric feathers. Nicely done! 🌹

February 4th, 2025 01:59

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Kevin Hulme said:

A very enjoyable Poem. Perfectly described these old Lychgates . There is one near me, and the Church goes back to the 13c. Sometimes I stand under it and think of all the ‘Souls’ that have passed under.
Nice One.

February 3rd, 2025 19:45

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Thomas W Case said:

Wow. Tremendous painting of this scene. It has such immediancy.

February 3rd, 2025 10:47

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Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 3rd, 2025 10:41

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Swarovski20 said:

Nice poem.

February 3rd, 2025 06:46

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David Wakeling said:

This ia well written.I heard Greig\'s Morning Mood being played in the background.Wonderful imagery

February 3rd, 2025 05:51

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sorenbarrett said:

Everything felt on hold in this poem, frozen in time on the brink of but never entering. A great feeling of stillness.

February 3rd, 2025 04:03

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orchidee said:

A fine write A. Any, erm, olive trees in that picture? (Do shut up Orchi, says Fido. lol).

February 3rd, 2025 03:17

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Poetic Licence said:

A really lovely piece about the best time of the day, watching nature and the world wake up, enjoyed the read

February 3rd, 2025 03:11

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Goldfinch60 said:

The symphony of the day is well worth waiting for arqios, wonderful wordfs.

Andy

February 3rd, 2025 02:47

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Michael Edwards said:

A superb write that captured me as I read it. Still early and dark here as I write this but can\'t wait to get outside and take my little dachshund for a walk in the countryside. My village and its surrounds are currently coming alive with snowdrops and aconites - the world is waking up.

February 3rd, 2025 02:16

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Cheeky Missy said:

Intriguing with rather exquisite poignancy haunting its essence and such lovely imagery, my mind pitifully keeps trying to alter \"lych--\" to lynch-, which dear Soren Barrett appears to have done. Having never heard of such edifices until now via your art, I\'m charmed as wont with the none too subtle romance of these benched arches inviting contemplation. Thank you very much both for sharing and for likewise lending a visible illustration of the same.

February 2nd, 2025 13:25

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Cassie58 said:

I like the ambience in church yards and graveyards. Peaceful, reflective and sometimes haunting. A throw back in time. History and the architecture can be amazing. This is a superb piece of writing. You took me there. Well done arqios.

February 2nd, 2025 12:44

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Anything to stand under while it is raining is a welcome addition to me. We have them in different parts of the USA ...but certainly not widespread. 🤣 Aside from that, this makes for a wonderful metaphor too. Well done, my friend! ❤️🙏

February 2nd, 2025 07:14

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sorenbarrett said:

Beautifully written it holds a bit of respect with its aged nature. I can\'t help but to hear a metaphor here as well. There are those social decorums and even individuals that stand as lynchgates as well. This one deserves more thought.

February 2nd, 2025 05:32

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David Wakeling said:

This is an extraordinarily beautiful tribute to a man made gate. But more than the object is the feelings attached to it by the author. Enjoyed reading

February 2nd, 2025 04:53

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orchidee said:

Good write A. Looks like a couple of places I know. A sort of Chapel of Rest in olden days, I read.

February 2nd, 2025 03:21

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Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous.

February 1st, 2025 21:21

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Tony36 said:

BRAVO

February 1st, 2025 17:18

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Neville said:



This reads so well it needs to be recited .. keep em coming thick n fast & you may end up being knighted .. very much enjoyed mate .. Neville

February 1st, 2025 12:18



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