Comments received on poems by arqios
baggage claim delay
sorenbarrett said:
Not ever having been to Ohio I have to let my mind carry me there, which is much safer since dressed in pajamas I don\'t feel dressed for the occasion. It does evoke a playful and wistful feeling as well as type of nostalgia for a time long gone. Loved it.
November 28th, 2022 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
Not ever having been to Ohio I have to let my mind carry me there, which is much safer since dressed in pajamas I don\'t feel dressed for the occasion. It does evoke a playful and wistful feeling as well as type of nostalgia for a time long gone. Loved it.
November 28th, 2022 05:43
baggage claim delay
orchidee said:
I don\'t quite remember that time in Ohio, being in the UK! lol.
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido!
November 28th, 2022 03:55
orchidee said:
I don\'t quite remember that time in Ohio, being in the UK! lol.
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido!
November 28th, 2022 03:55
never led astray
orchidee said:
A convivial good day to you Sir, and a spiffing good write! Notice the UK/English upper class there? lol.
November 27th, 2022 04:37
orchidee said:
A convivial good day to you Sir, and a spiffing good write! Notice the UK/English upper class there? lol.
November 27th, 2022 04:37
granny\'s steinway
Fay Slimm. said:
That special piano could if it talked tell some awful tales Rik - your Gran must have gone through some terrible times watching it and the manor so grossly abused - - - - this telling lament is now in my favourites.
November 27th, 2022 03:54
Fay Slimm. said:
That special piano could if it talked tell some awful tales Rik - your Gran must have gone through some terrible times watching it and the manor so grossly abused - - - - this telling lament is now in my favourites.
November 27th, 2022 03:54
granny\'s steinway
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s a history there and I wouldn\'t mind if more detail.....
November 26th, 2022 22:03
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s a history there and I wouldn\'t mind if more detail.....
November 26th, 2022 22:03
ice fishing anyone?
Mr. Not said:
people want what they dont have, id like going south to not have to feel the chilly morning air every day on my way to the bus, but at the same time when you\'re packed in warm blankets in front of the fireplace, i gotta admit its quite cozy
November 26th, 2022 17:02
Mr. Not said:
people want what they dont have, id like going south to not have to feel the chilly morning air every day on my way to the bus, but at the same time when you\'re packed in warm blankets in front of the fireplace, i gotta admit its quite cozy
November 26th, 2022 17:02
granny\'s steinway
Neville said:
You can beat an egg, a drum and a xylophone .. but you just can\'t beat a good old Steinway .. especially if it\'s grannies ................... Neville :)
November 26th, 2022 10:12
Neville said:
You can beat an egg, a drum and a xylophone .. but you just can\'t beat a good old Steinway .. especially if it\'s grannies ................... Neville :)
November 26th, 2022 10:12
ice fishing anyone?
sorenbarrett said:
Personally I prefer going south, whether to warmer weather or the other side of the equator. Fishing in the winter is not for me. I feel frozen in time and body. Great poem
November 25th, 2022 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
Personally I prefer going south, whether to warmer weather or the other side of the equator. Fishing in the winter is not for me. I feel frozen in time and body. Great poem
November 25th, 2022 07:11
ice fishing anyone?
L. B. Mek said:
(distinction, helps us prevail
when conviction, retreats
from Winter\'s, tall tales
soon, a Spring
we can hope to glimpse, and
maybe even a Summer, highlight
or two, to add to our memento
collection
before, our final Autumn beckons
us
to that unknown, ever-after
next)
enjoy the ride, as our months pass-by
far, far - too quick, dear Poet
(really enjoyed the instrumental
chill easy-going flow, anchored
upon a defiant beat of vitality)
November 25th, 2022 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
(distinction, helps us prevail
when conviction, retreats
from Winter\'s, tall tales
soon, a Spring
we can hope to glimpse, and
maybe even a Summer, highlight
or two, to add to our memento
collection
before, our final Autumn beckons
us
to that unknown, ever-after
next)
enjoy the ride, as our months pass-by
far, far - too quick, dear Poet
(really enjoyed the instrumental
chill easy-going flow, anchored
upon a defiant beat of vitality)
November 25th, 2022 04:50
ice fishing anyone?
orchidee said:
Good write CB. Where ya going in the South? lol.
November 25th, 2022 03:15
orchidee said:
Good write CB. Where ya going in the South? lol.
November 25th, 2022 03:15
benefit of drought
Neville said:
For the benefit of drought, I guess fewer folk drown in their own sorrows, or anywhere for that matter ..
Your words today sir had a distinctly nice feel n flow to em ..
Neville
November 24th, 2022 09:23
Neville said:
For the benefit of drought, I guess fewer folk drown in their own sorrows, or anywhere for that matter ..
Your words today sir had a distinctly nice feel n flow to em ..
Neville
November 24th, 2022 09:23
new car
Neville said:
I just got me a brand-new Mercedes Benz auto ..
What prompted me to do so, was the fact, since my cruciate ligament in my left knee went,
I couldn\'t use the clutch on my beloved Alfa Romeo .. not even in front of a bloomin tall mirror ...
Neville :)
November 24th, 2022 04:09
Neville said:
I just got me a brand-new Mercedes Benz auto ..
What prompted me to do so, was the fact, since my cruciate ligament in my left knee went,
I couldn\'t use the clutch on my beloved Alfa Romeo .. not even in front of a bloomin tall mirror ...
Neville :)
November 24th, 2022 04:09
new car
Bella Shepard said:
Need to set this one to music, would make a great song. Stuck at home, maybe an old flick? A little \"Jane Eyre\"? Love your choice of movie clip and music. Surely hope you get that new car! Stay dry my friend.
November 23rd, 2022 11:42
Bella Shepard said:
Need to set this one to music, would make a great song. Stuck at home, maybe an old flick? A little \"Jane Eyre\"? Love your choice of movie clip and music. Surely hope you get that new car! Stay dry my friend.
November 23rd, 2022 11:42
germinant style birthed
sorenbarrett said:
Crypticbard this one hit home. I have had several poems like that. A couple of times they have even been blocked from the cite and once I had an irate reader hound me for days with remarks that are unrepeatable.
November 23rd, 2022 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
Crypticbard this one hit home. I have had several poems like that. A couple of times they have even been blocked from the cite and once I had an irate reader hound me for days with remarks that are unrepeatable.
November 23rd, 2022 09:07
new car
Doggerel Dave said:
A plea from the heart and wet feet.
Can be a bit of a lottery when it comes to where you live and public transport...
Got home in the end, Rik?
November 23rd, 2022 03:30
Doggerel Dave said:
A plea from the heart and wet feet.
Can be a bit of a lottery when it comes to where you live and public transport...
Got home in the end, Rik?
November 23rd, 2022 03:30
new car
orchidee said:
Good write CB. You home now after this poem?!
I can\'t write too cryptically, though we each have our own style.
November 23rd, 2022 03:27
orchidee said:
Good write CB. You home now after this poem?!
I can\'t write too cryptically, though we each have our own style.
November 23rd, 2022 03:27
germinant style birthed
orchidee said:
I get fussy - oohh, it must rhyme, I say sometimes. It does not have to rhyme though.
And lest an extra syllable creep in, Fido reads all me poems before I post them. lol.
November 22nd, 2022 07:28
orchidee said:
I get fussy - oohh, it must rhyme, I say sometimes. It does not have to rhyme though.
And lest an extra syllable creep in, Fido reads all me poems before I post them. lol.
November 22nd, 2022 07:28
germinant style birthed
Neville said:
I like the cut of your jib sir, ink well spent in my humble opinion .. N
November 22nd, 2022 03:55
Neville said:
I like the cut of your jib sir, ink well spent in my humble opinion .. N
November 22nd, 2022 03:55
negotiable leave
Neville said:
the ending came too quick .. and took my breath away :)
November 21st, 2022 14:02
Neville said:
the ending came too quick .. and took my breath away :)
November 21st, 2022 14:02
negotiable leave
Fay Slimm. said:
The chosen music leads into the lament so well Rik - the superb imagery underscores how weary a battered heart can feel. Love that final line and having this penning of tearful endings in my list of favourites
November 21st, 2022 11:44
Fay Slimm. said:
The chosen music leads into the lament so well Rik - the superb imagery underscores how weary a battered heart can feel. Love that final line and having this penning of tearful endings in my list of favourites
November 21st, 2022 11:44
negotiable leave
sorenbarrett said:
A great pick for music to accompany this image crammed piece. This speaks to me of deception and falseness in the words \"get off your knee\" and the reference to continued \"lucid hate\". Also the reference to rainbow tears. That false promise that there would be no further floods. Tired of continued pleas not even the mirror can give a true reflection of this person and you are forced to face a new birth or start. But maybe this is just my take. Wonderful imagery regardless..
November 21st, 2022 10:28
sorenbarrett said:
A great pick for music to accompany this image crammed piece. This speaks to me of deception and falseness in the words \"get off your knee\" and the reference to continued \"lucid hate\". Also the reference to rainbow tears. That false promise that there would be no further floods. Tired of continued pleas not even the mirror can give a true reflection of this person and you are forced to face a new birth or start. But maybe this is just my take. Wonderful imagery regardless..
November 21st, 2022 10:28
negotiable leave
orchidee said:
Ohh, don\'t bother about daft ole Orchi, they say! He dunno what year it is, let alone what day of the orchilenge it is! lol.
If you don\'t complete the orchilenge he will set his imaginary dog on you. He is a sandwich short of a picnic, and his dog\'s short of a bone!
November 21st, 2022 08:32
orchidee said:
Ohh, don\'t bother about daft ole Orchi, they say! He dunno what year it is, let alone what day of the orchilenge it is! lol.
If you don\'t complete the orchilenge he will set his imaginary dog on you. He is a sandwich short of a picnic, and his dog\'s short of a bone!
November 21st, 2022 08:32
fastidious malignment
Neville said:
as soon as I arrived here, a certain feeling of deja vu came over me ..
November 20th, 2022 13:02
Neville said:
as soon as I arrived here, a certain feeling of deja vu came over me ..
November 20th, 2022 13:02
fastidious malignment
orchidee said:
The only haranguing of mine is if I start singing to others. arrghhh! lol.
November 19th, 2022 13:02
orchidee said:
The only haranguing of mine is if I start singing to others. arrghhh! lol.
November 19th, 2022 13:02
fastidious malignment
sorenbarrett said:
Such use of verbiage. Who has been slandering you? I loved the feel of the poem as it rolled off the tongue. I did get the feel that laundry day was yesterday but maybe that is just because mine was. But then disparagement and vilification does leave a stench in the air. Nicely written.
November 19th, 2022 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
Such use of verbiage. Who has been slandering you? I loved the feel of the poem as it rolled off the tongue. I did get the feel that laundry day was yesterday but maybe that is just because mine was. But then disparagement and vilification does leave a stench in the air. Nicely written.
November 19th, 2022 07:09
substacking
Neville said:
nope, neva heard of it .. hope nowt like it pops up around my neck o the woods .. sounds more than merely a pain in the pocket to me ........ :)
November 19th, 2022 04:03
Neville said:
nope, neva heard of it .. hope nowt like it pops up around my neck o the woods .. sounds more than merely a pain in the pocket to me ........ :)
November 19th, 2022 04:03
capricious recollections
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that poetry will kee us together Rik.
Andy
November 19th, 2022 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that poetry will kee us together Rik.
Andy
November 19th, 2022 02:58
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