Comments received on poems by arqios
mateship’s duty of care
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, a blessing to be thankful for! Well done friend! And since you are at least observing poetically, a Happy Thanksgiving to you my friend! Your poem captures the true essence! 🌹👏
November 28th, 2024 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, a blessing to be thankful for! Well done friend! And since you are at least observing poetically, a Happy Thanksgiving to you my friend! Your poem captures the true essence! 🌹👏
November 28th, 2024 09:16
mateship’s duty of care
Cassie58 said:
The true meaning of thanksgiving. The sincerity here was marvelous. A special bond and you are truly thankful. Wonderful.
November 28th, 2024 08:43
Cassie58 said:
The true meaning of thanksgiving. The sincerity here was marvelous. A special bond and you are truly thankful. Wonderful.
November 28th, 2024 08:43
mateship’s duty of care
Neville said:
This is absolutely lovely .. I just knew it was about the bond between brothers from the off .. your authors note confirmed that & reminded me of the relationship I have with my own younger brother .. Neville
November 28th, 2024 08:00
Neville said:
This is absolutely lovely .. I just knew it was about the bond between brothers from the off .. your authors note confirmed that & reminded me of the relationship I have with my own younger brother .. Neville
November 28th, 2024 08:00
mateship’s duty of care
Doggerel Dave said:
Kinship, mateship, brother doesn\'t necessarily have to imply a connection by blood, does it? Where it occurs it can anchor and stabilize one\'s existence. Good call.
November 28th, 2024 07:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Kinship, mateship, brother doesn\'t necessarily have to imply a connection by blood, does it? Where it occurs it can anchor and stabilize one\'s existence. Good call.
November 28th, 2024 07:30
mateship’s duty of care
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of kinship and closeness very nicely worded, convey the feeling of family weather of blood or just spirit
November 28th, 2024 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of kinship and closeness very nicely worded, convey the feeling of family weather of blood or just spirit
November 28th, 2024 06:54
when the downpour ends
Goldfinch60 said:
The silence after the rainfall is so encompassing arqios, fine words.
Andy
November 28th, 2024 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
The silence after the rainfall is so encompassing arqios, fine words.
Andy
November 28th, 2024 01:41
when the downpour ends
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching and
emotional poem so
eloquently expressed!! 👍
Strong feelings and
message,, just resonates
with greatness!! Love it! 🤩
Thanks for sharing, much enjoyed!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 27th, 2024 21:28
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching and
emotional poem so
eloquently expressed!! 👍
Strong feelings and
message,, just resonates
with greatness!! Love it! 🤩
Thanks for sharing, much enjoyed!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 27th, 2024 21:28
when the downpour ends
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Knowing this was written in April 2020, during beginning pandemic, adds a ton this already impactful poem. A wonderful write my friend that shows hope in the midst of sadness and seeming hopelessness. Brilliant and beautiful! 🌹👏
November 27th, 2024 11:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Knowing this was written in April 2020, during beginning pandemic, adds a ton this already impactful poem. A wonderful write my friend that shows hope in the midst of sadness and seeming hopelessness. Brilliant and beautiful! 🌹👏
November 27th, 2024 11:16
when the downpour ends
rin said:
People have paths they have lived and will live, and there is no hope for them unless the dots are connected, but it is very nice that a route is shown to fill in the problems there.
November 27th, 2024 09:13
rin said:
People have paths they have lived and will live, and there is no hope for them unless the dots are connected, but it is very nice that a route is shown to fill in the problems there.
November 27th, 2024 09:13
when the downpour ends
2781 said:
Timely again! We\' could be in for a soaking after the heat.
November 27th, 2024 08:25
2781 said:
Timely again! We\' could be in for a soaking after the heat.
November 27th, 2024 08:25
when the downpour ends
Neville said:
............................... Beautiful .. Neville 👍👍
November 27th, 2024 07:04
Neville said:
............................... Beautiful .. Neville 👍👍
November 27th, 2024 07:04
when the downpour ends
sorenbarrett said:
Soft, tender, a rebirth. A poem of growth from sadness. Solace from the storm. All of this and much more in this poem. Very carefully crafted and written, it reads smoothly and well.
November 27th, 2024 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
Soft, tender, a rebirth. A poem of growth from sadness. Solace from the storm. All of this and much more in this poem. Very carefully crafted and written, it reads smoothly and well.
November 27th, 2024 06:17
ode to the broken dream
rin said:
\'Corn stalks stand\' \'bream lie belly-up\'
These words are interesting. They are original and show the potential of poetry.
November 27th, 2024 02:34
rin said:
\'Corn stalks stand\' \'bream lie belly-up\'
These words are interesting. They are original and show the potential of poetry.
November 27th, 2024 02:34
ode to the broken dream
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, may our dreams be filled with joy and love.
Andy
November 27th, 2024 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, may our dreams be filled with joy and love.
Andy
November 27th, 2024 02:11
ode to the broken dream
Dan Williams said:
Be thankful you have relatively sedate dream awakenings. Mine can be reactive, often accompanied by screams and cursing. Nice write.
November 27th, 2024 00:50
Dan Williams said:
Be thankful you have relatively sedate dream awakenings. Mine can be reactive, often accompanied by screams and cursing. Nice write.
November 27th, 2024 00:50
near or far of love
Dan Williams said:
I can\'t help but see you said true love \"should\" always pull through. Not convinced?
November 27th, 2024 00:43
Dan Williams said:
I can\'t help but see you said true love \"should\" always pull through. Not convinced?
November 27th, 2024 00:43
ode to the broken dream
Bobby O said:
Pointy ears and lingering bc and hope and dreams all in a concise piece where every word drives home. I liked it
November 26th, 2024 22:09
Bobby O said:
Pointy ears and lingering bc and hope and dreams all in a concise piece where every word drives home. I liked it
November 26th, 2024 22:09
ode to the broken dream
Doggerel Dave said:
The rich quality of the dream I remember seems to fade gently, but the underlying mood or feeling lingers longer.
A sonnet I found quite personal to me and felt satisfied after.
November 26th, 2024 19:12
Doggerel Dave said:
The rich quality of the dream I remember seems to fade gently, but the underlying mood or feeling lingers longer.
A sonnet I found quite personal to me and felt satisfied after.
November 26th, 2024 19:12
The Beauty of a Kiss
Cassie58 said:
Really lovely expression in this Triolet. The rhyme is so subtle it is barely noticed.
Well done.
November 26th, 2024 18:28
Cassie58 said:
Really lovely expression in this Triolet. The rhyme is so subtle it is barely noticed.
Well done.
November 26th, 2024 18:28
The Beauty of a Kiss
Caring dove said:
Gentle and lovely writing . I liked this )
November 26th, 2024 17:20
Caring dove said:
Gentle and lovely writing . I liked this )
November 26th, 2024 17:20
ode to the broken dream
Neville said:
methinks, if this is a sonnet, then it is a very good sonnet .. methinks
November 26th, 2024 10:49
Neville said:
methinks, if this is a sonnet, then it is a very good sonnet .. methinks
November 26th, 2024 10:49
ode to the broken dream
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful sonnet on dreams, my friend. We still don\'t know a whole lot about the mind and dreams are both a known, universal phenomenon and a mystery all at the same time! Loved this poem and its an easy fave. Well done, friend! 🌹👏
November 26th, 2024 10:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful sonnet on dreams, my friend. We still don\'t know a whole lot about the mind and dreams are both a known, universal phenomenon and a mystery all at the same time! Loved this poem and its an easy fave. Well done, friend! 🌹👏
November 26th, 2024 10:46
ode to the broken dream
sorenbarrett said:
Buried in this beautiful complex rhyme scheme lies the metaphor of life itself under the covers of dreams and this life is a dream itself at least so said Poe In his poem, a dream within a dream. The flow of this poem is quite classic, and it is polished with internal rhyme. Most beautiful poem.
November 26th, 2024 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
Buried in this beautiful complex rhyme scheme lies the metaphor of life itself under the covers of dreams and this life is a dream itself at least so said Poe In his poem, a dream within a dream. The flow of this poem is quite classic, and it is polished with internal rhyme. Most beautiful poem.
November 26th, 2024 06:35
near or far of love
Goldfinch60 said:
True love does always pull you through arqios as it has for me in all my long life.
Andy
November 26th, 2024 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
True love does always pull you through arqios as it has for me in all my long life.
Andy
November 26th, 2024 02:47
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