Comments received on poems by arqios



fare thee well
L. B. Mek said:

\'fare ye well\'
is one of my most cherished sayings of old
a great write, dear Poet
thank you!

May 29th, 2023 01:57

fare thee well
Bella Shepard said:

It is the poet who finds hidden treasures and brings them to life, or takes simple things and makes them extraordinary with magical words. Their work lives on to delight and inspire us. Beautifuly worded dear poet.

May 27th, 2023 13:28

fare thee well
Neville said:



I am inclined to agree CB and may they each rest in peace now the long shift is over .................. Neville


May 27th, 2023 13:24

fare thee well
orchidee said:

Good write CB.
Can\'t understand Dylan Thomas. Some of his stuff is daft, I think: \'I am not there; I did not die.....\' Is he a zombie then?

May 27th, 2023 10:25

a small night music disarray
2781 said:

That piece has a place in my heart.

May 26th, 2023 16:59

a small night music disarray
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

May 26th, 2023 14:42

leading you home
🐀s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A fine write expressed swell, poetic impressions wow! Thumbs up.

Plz also read and comment on my newest poem

May 26th, 2023 05:44

leading you home
Neville said:


indeed, tis very much like that same old same old winding road ..

The long and winding road
That leads to your door
Will never disappear
I\'ve seen that road before ... blah de blah de blah ... 🎡🎢🎡🎢


May 26th, 2023 01:12

leading you home
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

May 25th, 2023 09:58

blessing
Goldfinch60 said:

Those sparks of life are always there CB,

Andy

May 22nd, 2023 02:27

blessing
Neville said:



............. how luverly is that eh\' .. :)

May 22nd, 2023 00:49

blessing
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

May 21st, 2023 10:36

blessing
2781 said:

Amen.

May 21st, 2023 07:54

scare
Bella Shepard said:

I cannot imagine any worse feeling in the world than seeing someone you love in pain, and suffering. God bless dear poet, your brother and your family as you struggle through this difficult time.

May 20th, 2023 15:45

scare
Neville said:


I hit the heart shaped button because I feel for you CB and appreciate where you are coming from .. my own baby brother recently had his right lung removed and I know how I thought it really should have been me ....... Neville

May 19th, 2023 12:45

scare
Dr. Soma said:

Heart touching. May God bless your brother! πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

May 19th, 2023 11:38

scare
orchidee said:

A sensitive write CB.

May 19th, 2023 11:32

scare
2781 said:

X

May 19th, 2023 10:39

scare
Elahe poems said:

I\'m sorry for your pain. you created something beautiful out of it. Brotherhood is love and you wrote it well

May 19th, 2023 10:08

fair go
L. B. Mek said:

\'parading flotilla on digital sea\'
lovely imagery
a wonderful read, dear Poet


May 19th, 2023 02:38

fair go
Neville said:

My mind ran riot with this one CB ..
I imagine you looking at the screen in front of you as you are typing into the keyboard with one hand and while your free elbow is resting unbeknownst to you on the delete button .. But then, I note you blame someone or something for unwriting or deleting you so I guess I must be wrong ... maybe ... Neville

May 18th, 2023 22:16

fair go
orchidee said:

This ain\'t unwritten, as you\'ve written it! Me spouting verbal garbage. lol.

May 18th, 2023 14:57

muse assistants
Goldfinch60 said:

Those muses can appear in many disguises CB.

Andy

May 18th, 2023 01:13

muse assistants
orchidee said:

A rat in the pantry/larder?! Red eyes...

May 17th, 2023 08:30

first snow blues
Caring dove said:

Lovely writing πŸ™‚

May 17th, 2023 04:03

first snow blues
Bella Shepard said:

This stunning metaphor for love captured in water, its properties, its incredible power and moods, fit so aptly bodies that are in and of themselves 97% water, for without love and water we simply would not exist. Beautiful write!

May 16th, 2023 14:03

first snow blues
Neville said:


remind me never again to put all my eggs in the same basket with the weather being as fickle as it is around these here parts .. 🐧

May 16th, 2023 11:49

first snow blues
Rocky Lagou said:

I love how you intertwined the passage of love with the water cycle. Such an apt metaphor. Precipitation. Evaporation. Splendid.

May 16th, 2023 08:17

first snow blues
orchidee said:

Agghh, please no, not snow in May!!! lol.

May 16th, 2023 07:39

prehensile pledge
Neville said:



I\'m with Mek .. otherwise I\'m just Mordred ................... πŸ§βš”οΈ

May 15th, 2023 14:13



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