Comments received on poems by arqios
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Parisab said:
This poem was more interesting and authentic than watching the (real) event- Thank you for sharing-
‘blush of youth
contour of future scope
mourning sleeve still on’
I’m dreaming of a mire youthful future scope
May 7th, 2023 09:51
Parisab said:
This poem was more interesting and authentic than watching the (real) event- Thank you for sharing-
‘blush of youth
contour of future scope
mourning sleeve still on’
I’m dreaming of a mire youthful future scope
May 7th, 2023 09:51
we\'re living in a meridian world
Neville said:
Bet that cat lands on its feet again tho\'
Hey, you should maybe listen in on my clinic one day ..
that\'s a polite invitation, not an order by the way ..
But then, we\'re all just living in a meridian world ...🐧..
May 6th, 2023 23:14
Neville said:
Bet that cat lands on its feet again tho\'
Hey, you should maybe listen in on my clinic one day ..
that\'s a polite invitation, not an order by the way ..
But then, we\'re all just living in a meridian world ...🐧..
May 6th, 2023 23:14
young love\'s shimmer
Neville said:
I like nothing more than to slow down and drag out fleeting possibilities :)
May 6th, 2023 05:46
Neville said:
I like nothing more than to slow down and drag out fleeting possibilities :)
May 6th, 2023 05:46
young love\'s shimmer
Rocky Lagou said:
I have yet to engage in romance, but this poem was like the perfect simulation.
May 5th, 2023 07:56
Rocky Lagou said:
I have yet to engage in romance, but this poem was like the perfect simulation.
May 5th, 2023 07:56
Johnnie Walker
Neville said:
after but a few tentative sips and a largish slug .. I feel like my Americano has been laced with acid .. Cheers N
May 5th, 2023 05:14
Neville said:
after but a few tentative sips and a largish slug .. I feel like my Americano has been laced with acid .. Cheers N
May 5th, 2023 05:14
Johnnie Walker
L. B. Mek said:
\'betwixt verdant cascading foliage\'
why do I feel like Hemingway
would Earnestly, enjoy this poem
😎
salut! dear Poet
yet another memorable sip
of your potent poetry, thank you!
May 5th, 2023 02:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'betwixt verdant cascading foliage\'
why do I feel like Hemingway
would Earnestly, enjoy this poem
😎
salut! dear Poet
yet another memorable sip
of your potent poetry, thank you!
May 5th, 2023 02:56
manstrocity
L. B. Mek said:
a deep contemplative wording
of life\'s inescapable dissonance
a great write, dear Poet
\'so quickly slips\'
(that\'s that tinge of regret, imbued
in our experience of the now
we know, we\'ll be cherishing - long
after these moments, become
an aggregation of a past, we never
can claw back, try as we might
all we have is that snowballing, finality
we welcome, with dreaded anxiety)
May 5th, 2023 02:48
L. B. Mek said:
a deep contemplative wording
of life\'s inescapable dissonance
a great write, dear Poet
\'so quickly slips\'
(that\'s that tinge of regret, imbued
in our experience of the now
we know, we\'ll be cherishing - long
after these moments, become
an aggregation of a past, we never
can claw back, try as we might
all we have is that snowballing, finality
we welcome, with dreaded anxiety)
May 5th, 2023 02:48
summer breeze
L. B. Mek said:
(such a lovey poem
thank you! dear Poet)
\'a season\'s capricious ephemerality
only adds
to it\'s nature of precious essentiality\'
May 5th, 2023 02:42
L. B. Mek said:
(such a lovey poem
thank you! dear Poet)
\'a season\'s capricious ephemerality
only adds
to it\'s nature of precious essentiality\'
May 5th, 2023 02:42
manstrocity
Neville said:
my first impression, was that this little peach of a poem is very good .. subsequent impressions reinforce the outlined initial perspective .. a life\'s journey depicted clearly in the blinding light of a new never day ... Neville :)
May 2nd, 2023 23:10
Neville said:
my first impression, was that this little peach of a poem is very good .. subsequent impressions reinforce the outlined initial perspective .. a life\'s journey depicted clearly in the blinding light of a new never day ... Neville :)
May 2nd, 2023 23:10
air quotes
L. B. Mek said:
fumes to ghosts of smoke\'s reprieve
quotation marks, accenting
our memory\'s portrayals..
clouds as our avenues
rainfalls as markings of paths
and that cherished pull
of cancerous death, as our respite
from life\'s, incessant strife
(still, our curtains help
one pull and reality, is delayed
till we can affirm, choice
and wait for that monster, to
move on..)
May 1st, 2023 03:10
L. B. Mek said:
fumes to ghosts of smoke\'s reprieve
quotation marks, accenting
our memory\'s portrayals..
clouds as our avenues
rainfalls as markings of paths
and that cherished pull
of cancerous death, as our respite
from life\'s, incessant strife
(still, our curtains help
one pull and reality, is delayed
till we can affirm, choice
and wait for that monster, to
move on..)
May 1st, 2023 03:10
air quotes
Bella Shepard said:
I love to stand under the roof of my porch in a thunder storm and hear, feel the power of mother nature. The air quotes are definitely there, it is exilerating. Thank you dear poet for this reminder.
April 30th, 2023 09:47
Bella Shepard said:
I love to stand under the roof of my porch in a thunder storm and hear, feel the power of mother nature. The air quotes are definitely there, it is exilerating. Thank you dear poet for this reminder.
April 30th, 2023 09:47
summer breeze
Bella Shepard said:
Heavenly, those breezes! To feel something you can only see in the rustling of leaves, and yet soothes the soul. Beautifully penned dear poet.
April 30th, 2023 09:43
Bella Shepard said:
Heavenly, those breezes! To feel something you can only see in the rustling of leaves, and yet soothes the soul. Beautifully penned dear poet.
April 30th, 2023 09:43
air quotes
Neville said:
and they used to say \'its the tobacco that counts\' ............... 🐧
April 29th, 2023 14:07
Neville said:
and they used to say \'its the tobacco that counts\' ............... 🐧
April 29th, 2023 14:07
summer breeze
Rocky Lagou said:
The ephemerality of life is truly what drives us to make the most of it. Thanks for the reminder.
April 25th, 2023 09:24
Rocky Lagou said:
The ephemerality of life is truly what drives us to make the most of it. Thanks for the reminder.
April 25th, 2023 09:24
summer breeze
Doggerel Dave said:
I actually felt that one - many thanks, Rik.
April 25th, 2023 07:32
Doggerel Dave said:
I actually felt that one - many thanks, Rik.
April 25th, 2023 07:32
summer breeze
sorenbarrett said:
And so is life my dear friend. So poetically said. We like the wind are all part of nature. I loved the calm wistfulness of the poem and the sense of peace that it gives.
April 25th, 2023 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
And so is life my dear friend. So poetically said. We like the wind are all part of nature. I loved the calm wistfulness of the poem and the sense of peace that it gives.
April 25th, 2023 07:19
lift
Bella Shepard said:
How wonderful to see self-worth reflected in the eyes of another, and to embrace that self-worth as part of the whole which makes both stronger. Beautiful three line say it all!
April 21st, 2023 13:10
Bella Shepard said:
How wonderful to see self-worth reflected in the eyes of another, and to embrace that self-worth as part of the whole which makes both stronger. Beautiful three line say it all!
April 21st, 2023 13:10
lift
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic, another great Haiku that brought my memories to the song SOS d\'un terrien en detresse where a person that feels detached from this world wonders what it would be to fly that the world might look more beautiful upside down.
April 21st, 2023 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic, another great Haiku that brought my memories to the song SOS d\'un terrien en detresse where a person that feels detached from this world wonders what it would be to fly that the world might look more beautiful upside down.
April 21st, 2023 08:10
lift
L. B. Mek said:
another great shorty, dear Poet
(reciprocation
as our access, to soaring
self-worth
a half smile, enough
to empower our dreams
for a week...
how thirsty for all-things
sickly, mirage sweet
we all are my friend, still
....onwards, then
to that next breathless
bite, sip or kiss
in existence\'s, peerless
wondrousness)
April 21st, 2023 07:22
L. B. Mek said:
another great shorty, dear Poet
(reciprocation
as our access, to soaring
self-worth
a half smile, enough
to empower our dreams
for a week...
how thirsty for all-things
sickly, mirage sweet
we all are my friend, still
....onwards, then
to that next breathless
bite, sip or kiss
in existence\'s, peerless
wondrousness)
April 21st, 2023 07:22
hearticulate
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear Poet
(we learn to grasp, for
that we can\'t comprehend
before we\'ve learnt to crawl or fall
then, act all depressed as adults
for a loss, we can\'t quantify
while beside us
our treasures, are ignored
devalued
by their very presence, proximity\'s
accessibility
as a new wording of cheap
in our warped
decrepit notion of true, worth...)
April 21st, 2023 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear Poet
(we learn to grasp, for
that we can\'t comprehend
before we\'ve learnt to crawl or fall
then, act all depressed as adults
for a loss, we can\'t quantify
while beside us
our treasures, are ignored
devalued
by their very presence, proximity\'s
accessibility
as a new wording of cheap
in our warped
decrepit notion of true, worth...)
April 21st, 2023 04:42
luminaries
L. B. Mek said:
that choice wording of \'sliver\'
anchors it all, I think
a wonderfully technical, triumph
poem, worth meditating
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
April 21st, 2023 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
that choice wording of \'sliver\'
anchors it all, I think
a wonderfully technical, triumph
poem, worth meditating
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
April 21st, 2023 04:36
hearticulate
orchidee said:
Dang it! Spell-checker\'s gone again!
I have to harticulate that it\'s a fine write!
April 19th, 2023 11:37
orchidee said:
Dang it! Spell-checker\'s gone again!
I have to harticulate that it\'s a fine write!
April 19th, 2023 11:37
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