Comments received on poems by arqios
into the arms of night
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This works beautifully, both literally and as a metaphor. A wonderfully beautiful poem, my friend! 🌹👏
January 28th, 2025 08:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This works beautifully, both literally and as a metaphor. A wonderfully beautiful poem, my friend! 🌹👏
January 28th, 2025 08:31
into the arms of night
2781 said:
I might be able to relax, now the storms have passed!
January 28th, 2025 07:28
2781 said:
I might be able to relax, now the storms have passed!
January 28th, 2025 07:28
into the arms of night
sorenbarrett said:
Whether metaphor or not this poem holds its beauty and sings on to sleep. Should the metaphor be true so will death come too.
January 28th, 2025 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
Whether metaphor or not this poem holds its beauty and sings on to sleep. Should the metaphor be true so will death come too.
January 28th, 2025 06:38
into the arms of night
David Wakeling said:
Got to love the night. Well done. A very positive poem.
January 28th, 2025 05:39
David Wakeling said:
Got to love the night. Well done. A very positive poem.
January 28th, 2025 05:39
into the arms of night
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written piece encapsulating all the things i wish i could do as the night approaches, reading this i can picture how it is meant to be, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 05:30
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written piece encapsulating all the things i wish i could do as the night approaches, reading this i can picture how it is meant to be, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 05:30
fleet-footed good
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words arqios, we need to walk around to see life around us.
Andy
January 28th, 2025 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words arqios, we need to walk around to see life around us.
Andy
January 28th, 2025 02:09
fleet-footed good
Poetic Licence said:
We need more walking and less running, life dictates that we are always rushing, then as you get older and nearer the end, you start valuing things you should of noticed and valued years ago, Very enjoyable read
January 27th, 2025 11:54
Poetic Licence said:
We need more walking and less running, life dictates that we are always rushing, then as you get older and nearer the end, you start valuing things you should of noticed and valued years ago, Very enjoyable read
January 27th, 2025 11:54
fleet-footed good
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, your note speaks worlds of you, my poetic friend. Worlds I already knew existed by reading and engaging with you. Indeed, words are limited and sometimes to capture a concept/feeling we have to use words that might leave others out. By putting that note in you avoided leaving anyone out and, imho, invited them right back in! Well done, just on that alone. That aside, your poem is profoundly powerful. Endings are, indeed, a part of the journey and, truthfully, the journey is more our home (at least for now) than the destination. When we get there, that will change...but in the meantime, I find peace in that. Bravo, friend! 🌹👏
January 27th, 2025 08:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, your note speaks worlds of you, my poetic friend. Worlds I already knew existed by reading and engaging with you. Indeed, words are limited and sometimes to capture a concept/feeling we have to use words that might leave others out. By putting that note in you avoided leaving anyone out and, imho, invited them right back in! Well done, just on that alone. That aside, your poem is profoundly powerful. Endings are, indeed, a part of the journey and, truthfully, the journey is more our home (at least for now) than the destination. When we get there, that will change...but in the meantime, I find peace in that. Bravo, friend! 🌹👏
January 27th, 2025 08:37
fleet-footed good
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful journey.I was transported because I do prefer to walk.Well written
January 27th, 2025 05:47
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful journey.I was transported because I do prefer to walk.Well written
January 27th, 2025 05:47
fleet-footed good
sorenbarrett said:
In metaphor we all walk through this life. As I grow older I notice more details previously overlooked. Time becomes more precious as there is less of it. Knowing that each breath may be the last they are savored knoing that it may be the last. The familiar becomes the novel knowing I may never come this way again. Lovely
January 27th, 2025 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
In metaphor we all walk through this life. As I grow older I notice more details previously overlooked. Time becomes more precious as there is less of it. Knowing that each breath may be the last they are savored knoing that it may be the last. The familiar becomes the novel knowing I may never come this way again. Lovely
January 27th, 2025 05:01
an evolving presence
Neville said:
filled with universal truths that certainly exist but that not everyone may be aware of .. until its too late .. 👍
January 27th, 2025 03:24
Neville said:
filled with universal truths that certainly exist but that not everyone may be aware of .. until its too late .. 👍
January 27th, 2025 03:24
fleet-footed good
orchidee said:
Good write A. I translate \'walk\' in some of my poems, as \'live, behave, conduct, etc\' though of course we have to walk in life, unless disabled, etc. For me it speaks of a steady pace, not too fast, not too slow.
January 27th, 2025 03:16
orchidee said:
Good write A. I translate \'walk\' in some of my poems, as \'live, behave, conduct, etc\' though of course we have to walk in life, unless disabled, etc. For me it speaks of a steady pace, not too fast, not too slow.
January 27th, 2025 03:16
an evolving presence
Dan Williams said:
mIDDLE OF THE NIGHT TYPING SKILLS FOUND WANTING FOR ME, EXCUSE THE ERRORS.
January 27th, 2025 00:56
Dan Williams said:
mIDDLE OF THE NIGHT TYPING SKILLS FOUND WANTING FOR ME, EXCUSE THE ERRORS.
January 27th, 2025 00:56
an evolving presence
Dan Williams said:
\"truth ignites not a fire, but a gentle dawn, an explanation for phenomena I hWONDERED ABOUT OFTEN.
January 27th, 2025 00:55
Dan Williams said:
\"truth ignites not a fire, but a gentle dawn, an explanation for phenomena I hWONDERED ABOUT OFTEN.
January 27th, 2025 00:55
star signed
Dan Williams said:
A lot said in few words, a poet\'s aspiration. Nice.
January 27th, 2025 00:47
Dan Williams said:
A lot said in few words, a poet\'s aspiration. Nice.
January 27th, 2025 00:47
an evolving presence
Thad Wilk said:
BRAVO!! 👏
Terrific poem,
awesomazing presentation!! 👍
Last stanza says it all,
deserving a standing ovation!! 🤩
Thank you for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 26th, 2025 20:33
Thad Wilk said:
BRAVO!! 👏
Terrific poem,
awesomazing presentation!! 👍
Last stanza says it all,
deserving a standing ovation!! 🤩
Thank you for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 26th, 2025 20:33
an evolving presence
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful, and I\'m a huge fan of Cher and that particular song. 🌹
January 26th, 2025 07:23
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful, and I\'m a huge fan of Cher and that particular song. 🌹
January 26th, 2025 07:23
an evolving presence
sorenbarrett said:
The appeal of this poem to me is in its presentation and construction. Each frist line of a stanza presents the central thought that is expounded on in the following lines of the stanza just as would be in any standard paragraph but in condensed form and with a strong presenting idea. It is as if each line is a breath. It is powerful and breaths life.
January 26th, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
The appeal of this poem to me is in its presentation and construction. Each frist line of a stanza presents the central thought that is expounded on in the following lines of the stanza just as would be in any standard paragraph but in condensed form and with a strong presenting idea. It is as if each line is a breath. It is powerful and breaths life.
January 26th, 2025 05:17
an evolving presence
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all move forward along that River of Time arqios.
Andy
January 26th, 2025 03:03
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all move forward along that River of Time arqios.
Andy
January 26th, 2025 03:03
star signed
Goldfinch60 said:
May those stars always shine on you arqios.
Andy
January 26th, 2025 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
May those stars always shine on you arqios.
Andy
January 26th, 2025 02:56
star signed
Thad Wilk said:
Short and succinct
a powerful and
refreshing write!! 🤩
You get three stars ⭐⭐⭐
my friend!
To read a delight!!
I gaze at the bear
too, most every night! 🌃
Thanks for sharing! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 25th, 2025 20:26
Thad Wilk said:
Short and succinct
a powerful and
refreshing write!! 🤩
You get three stars ⭐⭐⭐
my friend!
To read a delight!!
I gaze at the bear
too, most every night! 🌃
Thanks for sharing! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 25th, 2025 20:26
star signed
Cassie58 said:
The stars in the night sky can offer hope when life in the real world can at times be hard for some, as they journey through. That’s where your lines took me arqios. Lovely brevity.
January 25th, 2025 11:17
Cassie58 said:
The stars in the night sky can offer hope when life in the real world can at times be hard for some, as they journey through. That’s where your lines took me arqios. Lovely brevity.
January 25th, 2025 11:17
star signed
Teddy.15 said:
I have always found the richest education possible is that of travel. This is stunning. 🌹
January 25th, 2025 08:27
Teddy.15 said:
I have always found the richest education possible is that of travel. This is stunning. 🌹
January 25th, 2025 08:27
star signed
sorenbarrett said:
Ursa minor guidance or direction by Polaris the tip of the bear\'s tail. Callisto turned iby Artemis nto a bear for breaking her chatity vow. A great poem of a wander.
January 25th, 2025 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
Ursa minor guidance or direction by Polaris the tip of the bear\'s tail. Callisto turned iby Artemis nto a bear for breaking her chatity vow. A great poem of a wander.
January 25th, 2025 07:37
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