Comments received on poems by Raven333
Personal Journey
JudyStella said:
A very emotional poem. It shows how experiences change you , in a way it strengthens you as well as breaks you. The important thing is that you survive through it all!
June 23rd, 2022 12:49
JudyStella said:
A very emotional poem. It shows how experiences change you , in a way it strengthens you as well as breaks you. The important thing is that you survive through it all!
June 23rd, 2022 12:49
Personal Journey
Blueledge said:
My daughter died aged 23 in 2008.
It changes you.
June 23rd, 2022 10:34
Blueledge said:
My daughter died aged 23 in 2008.
It changes you.
June 23rd, 2022 10:34
Personal Journey
Paul Bell said:
You only live twice comes to mind, that and resilience. I suppose in a way we take life for granted, till that day it all changes. Hope every day is getting better for you and your family. Keep writing, it\'s cathartic.
June 23rd, 2022 04:29
Paul Bell said:
You only live twice comes to mind, that and resilience. I suppose in a way we take life for granted, till that day it all changes. Hope every day is getting better for you and your family. Keep writing, it\'s cathartic.
June 23rd, 2022 04:29
Personal Journey
evenwheniLie said:
Glade you made it through with your lives, and now you can start the journey to recovery. After a life, especially one with enormous tragedy, one would think there’s something worthwhile on the other side of death, if it isn’t heavenly or something more pleasant then life as we know it, let’s hope it’s complete unconsciousness and that life actually ceases. Peace be still.
June 23rd, 2022 03:38
evenwheniLie said:
Glade you made it through with your lives, and now you can start the journey to recovery. After a life, especially one with enormous tragedy, one would think there’s something worthwhile on the other side of death, if it isn’t heavenly or something more pleasant then life as we know it, let’s hope it’s complete unconsciousness and that life actually ceases. Peace be still.
June 23rd, 2022 03:38
Personal Journey
dusk arising said:
The phrase \"what doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger\" although true seems just too glib sometimes. It doesn\'t tell of the suffering and despair we endure. But on the plus side it speaks a truth for the future. Yes our suffering do make us stronger and more learned, wiser.
June 23rd, 2022 03:37
dusk arising said:
The phrase \"what doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger\" although true seems just too glib sometimes. It doesn\'t tell of the suffering and despair we endure. But on the plus side it speaks a truth for the future. Yes our suffering do make us stronger and more learned, wiser.
June 23rd, 2022 03:37
Mystic Night
Raven333 said:
yes I agree, somebody has to be shining down on me. thank you for reading.
June 23rd, 2022 01:01
Raven333 said:
yes I agree, somebody has to be shining down on me. thank you for reading.
June 23rd, 2022 01:01
Mystic Night
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tammy, those stars show that loved ones that went be fore us and shine down on us with love.
Andy
June 23rd, 2022 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tammy, those stars show that loved ones that went be fore us and shine down on us with love.
Andy
June 23rd, 2022 00:46
Mystic Night
Blueledge said:
Very nice write. Looking at the stars stirs the emotions.
June 22nd, 2022 16:52
Blueledge said:
Very nice write. Looking at the stars stirs the emotions.
June 22nd, 2022 16:52
Mystic Night
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A beautiful stellar poem on the mystic nature of night with the heavenly bodies. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
June 22nd, 2022 14:37
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A beautiful stellar poem on the mystic nature of night with the heavenly bodies. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
June 22nd, 2022 14:37
Mystic Night
JudyStella said:
I love the imagery used! The moon and and God, plus I love the title! I love a poem with a good lesson!
June 22nd, 2022 13:51
JudyStella said:
I love the imagery used! The moon and and God, plus I love the title! I love a poem with a good lesson!
June 22nd, 2022 13:51
After 3 am
tallisman said:
I’m with Judy on this, love the rhythm and the rhyming, superb!
June 21st, 2022 16:20
tallisman said:
I’m with Judy on this, love the rhythm and the rhyming, superb!
June 21st, 2022 16:20
After 3 am
JudyStella said:
Very engaging and symbolic! It shows both the darkness and light and that light prevails over dark just as God prevails over evil! Great structure and style!
June 21st, 2022 15:10
JudyStella said:
Very engaging and symbolic! It shows both the darkness and light and that light prevails over dark just as God prevails over evil! Great structure and style!
June 21st, 2022 15:10
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