Comments received on poems by Raven333
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Justa_Geezer said:
Well writen, and a very emotional time for you there Raven ! That sounds to me like a realtionship from hell, and you did well to get out of it, and even better to stay away from it. Now you need to build some really nice memories for yourself, and your future !
July 13th, 2022 03:58
Justa_Geezer said:
Well writen, and a very emotional time for you there Raven ! That sounds to me like a realtionship from hell, and you did well to get out of it, and even better to stay away from it. Now you need to build some really nice memories for yourself, and your future !
July 13th, 2022 03:58
THE END
tallisman said:
Really good. You write so passionately about your feelings, and they come through so clearly. Well done on making a stand! It’s always good to read your poems ! Take care of yourself and say hi to your daughter! T
July 13th, 2022 00:38
tallisman said:
Really good. You write so passionately about your feelings, and they come through so clearly. Well done on making a stand! It’s always good to read your poems ! Take care of yourself and say hi to your daughter! T
July 13th, 2022 00:38
THE END
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong emotive words Tammy. I do hope that he stays out of your life and that of your daughter, to threaten children is a disgusting thing to do.
Keep strong and all will be well in your life.
Andy
July 13th, 2022 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong emotive words Tammy. I do hope that he stays out of your life and that of your daughter, to threaten children is a disgusting thing to do.
Keep strong and all will be well in your life.
Andy
July 13th, 2022 00:32
LOOKING AT MYSELF
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words but life is good, you are still here and have the wonderful ability to write your words. We all have tomes of hurt but we do have within ourselves to pull ourselves further into our lives where all is wonderful.
Andy
July 12th, 2022 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words but life is good, you are still here and have the wonderful ability to write your words. We all have tomes of hurt but we do have within ourselves to pull ourselves further into our lives where all is wonderful.
Andy
July 12th, 2022 00:31
CAN I FIND MY TRUE HOME
Justa_Geezer said:
Well, if you didn\'t know who you were then, you certainly do Now !
July 11th, 2022 19:21
Justa_Geezer said:
Well, if you didn\'t know who you were then, you certainly do Now !
July 11th, 2022 19:21
LOOKING AT MYSELF
Justa_Geezer said:
Beautifully written Raven, But to never be hurt again would mean never to love again. A wicked waste !
July 11th, 2022 17:46
Justa_Geezer said:
Beautifully written Raven, But to never be hurt again would mean never to love again. A wicked waste !
July 11th, 2022 17:46
LOVE IN BETWEEN
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
thanks for sharing
\'may the universe, answer your wishes\'
July 11th, 2022 02:09
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
thanks for sharing
\'may the universe, answer your wishes\'
July 11th, 2022 02:09
LOVE IN BETWEEN
Justa_Geezer said:
Nice forward looking write there Raven. A great insight into a grandmothers hopes and love for her grandchildren !
July 10th, 2022 17:21
Justa_Geezer said:
Nice forward looking write there Raven. A great insight into a grandmothers hopes and love for her grandchildren !
July 10th, 2022 17:21
LOVE IN BETWEEN
Blueledge said:
That\'s nice Tammy.
I\'m sure they must benefit from you\'re influence.
July 10th, 2022 15:46
Blueledge said:
That\'s nice Tammy.
I\'m sure they must benefit from you\'re influence.
July 10th, 2022 15:46
SCARED
Justa_Geezer said:
That was a brilliant poem Raven, Letting out all your nightly fears is the best way to face up to them ! Probably your best work so far. Keep it up !
July 8th, 2022 03:51
Justa_Geezer said:
That was a brilliant poem Raven, Letting out all your nightly fears is the best way to face up to them ! Probably your best work so far. Keep it up !
July 8th, 2022 03:51
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Nandawula Regine Kabali-Kagwa said:
The way I find the darkness of the night so creepy. It\'s crazy because the stars so beautiful but yet the background and energies of the night is so heavy. Beautiful piece ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
July 7th, 2022 06:28
Nandawula Regine Kabali-Kagwa said:
The way I find the darkness of the night so creepy. It\'s crazy because the stars so beautiful but yet the background and energies of the night is so heavy. Beautiful piece ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
July 7th, 2022 06:28
SCARED
tallisman said:
Hi Raven, this was good, gave me goosebumps! Good job I didn’t read it before I went to bed!
July 7th, 2022 00:52
tallisman said:
Hi Raven, this was good, gave me goosebumps! Good job I didn’t read it before I went to bed!
July 7th, 2022 00:52
MY INSPIRATION
MendedFences27 said:
You are very fortunate to have such a wonderful Mom. Your poem about her
I hope she has read, and I am sure she will treasure it.
It seems she has raised you well. A wonderful Mom, a wonderful daughter. Nice poem. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2022 17:55
MendedFences27 said:
You are very fortunate to have such a wonderful Mom. Your poem about her
I hope she has read, and I am sure she will treasure it.
It seems she has raised you well. A wonderful Mom, a wonderful daughter. Nice poem. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2022 17:55
MY INSPIRATION
Justa_Geezer said:
Great rhythm and flow in this poem, together with lovely inspired words about you Mum ! Also, it\'s so good to read something more upbeat from you, keep it up girl !
July 6th, 2022 16:32
Justa_Geezer said:
Great rhythm and flow in this poem, together with lovely inspired words about you Mum ! Also, it\'s so good to read something more upbeat from you, keep it up girl !
July 6th, 2022 16:32
MY INSPIRATION
tallisman said:
Raven beautiful words, well put together! I enjoyed this!
July 6th, 2022 00:51
tallisman said:
Raven beautiful words, well put together! I enjoyed this!
July 6th, 2022 00:51
MY INSPIRATION
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words about your mother and so many other mothers in the world.
Andy
July 6th, 2022 00:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words about your mother and so many other mothers in the world.
Andy
July 6th, 2022 00:06
CAN I FIND MY TRUE HOME
tallisman said:
Hi Raven, you have always got friends here! A strong expressive write, I hope you find what your heart seeks, stay strong and stay well!
July 5th, 2022 00:51
tallisman said:
Hi Raven, you have always got friends here! A strong expressive write, I hope you find what your heart seeks, stay strong and stay well!
July 5th, 2022 00:51
CAN I FIND MY TRUE HOME
Blueledge said:
It\'s hard to read you express these feelings.
It\'s a reminder of how shit life can be at times. Don\'t e wait for heaven. I hope you can find contentment here on earth soon.
July 4th, 2022 16:36
Blueledge said:
It\'s hard to read you express these feelings.
It\'s a reminder of how shit life can be at times. Don\'t e wait for heaven. I hope you can find contentment here on earth soon.
July 4th, 2022 16:36
MAKE A DEAL
Goldfinch60 said:
Passionate words Tammy, I am sure all will be fine soon.
Andy
July 4th, 2022 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Passionate words Tammy, I am sure all will be fine soon.
Andy
July 4th, 2022 00:24
MAKE A DEAL
tallisman said:
As always Raven, such a powerful emotive write. I admire you.
July 3rd, 2022 15:44
tallisman said:
As always Raven, such a powerful emotive write. I admire you.
July 3rd, 2022 15:44
MAKE A DEAL
evenwheniLie said:
Beautiful poem about wanting the touch of another, but there was also a instance of heart break that gives love it’s thorns, I like reading your poems because they show a life lived without completion.. there is more life to be gotten. You do right to hesitate, because like I said; love has thorns, so I wouldn’t go chasing it, just take your time… such passion in your words.
July 3rd, 2022 15:17
evenwheniLie said:
Beautiful poem about wanting the touch of another, but there was also a instance of heart break that gives love it’s thorns, I like reading your poems because they show a life lived without completion.. there is more life to be gotten. You do right to hesitate, because like I said; love has thorns, so I wouldn’t go chasing it, just take your time… such passion in your words.
July 3rd, 2022 15:17
MAKE A DEAL
Justa_Geezer said:
Love the warmth and hope for the future in this 10th poem, also the passion that\'s always in your writings. There will be plenty out there who will truly appreciate what you have to offer Raven ! Have a great 4th July !
July 3rd, 2022 14:08
Justa_Geezer said:
Love the warmth and hope for the future in this 10th poem, also the passion that\'s always in your writings. There will be plenty out there who will truly appreciate what you have to offer Raven ! Have a great 4th July !
July 3rd, 2022 14:08
F###ED UP GAME...
Justa_Geezer said:
You sure can pick them ! Nice emotive write , but threw away, not through away.
July 2nd, 2022 11:59
Justa_Geezer said:
You sure can pick them ! Nice emotive write , but threw away, not through away.
July 2nd, 2022 11:59
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