Comments received on poems by Raven333
THE RHYMER
Doggerel Dave said:
Of course I\'ll vote for that
I\'m always first to bat...
July 15th, 2022 00:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Of course I\'ll vote for that
I\'m always first to bat...
July 15th, 2022 00:14
THE RHYMER
evenwheniLie said:
Yes you are a rhymer and you have meaning too, don’t let anybody discourage you.
July 14th, 2022 21:01
evenwheniLie said:
Yes you are a rhymer and you have meaning too, don’t let anybody discourage you.
July 14th, 2022 21:01
THE RHYMER
Blueledge said:
That\'s somewhat of a coincidence. I was unpacking from a move last night and came across my Edgar Allan Poe compilation.
July 14th, 2022 11:57
Blueledge said:
That\'s somewhat of a coincidence. I was unpacking from a move last night and came across my Edgar Allan Poe compilation.
July 14th, 2022 11:57
THE RHYMER
Justa_Geezer said:
Raven comes flying out of her nest, To show this world how she writes best,
Both her heart and soul doth she invest, To prove her words wll stand the test !
July 14th, 2022 09:08
Justa_Geezer said:
Raven comes flying out of her nest, To show this world how she writes best,
Both her heart and soul doth she invest, To prove her words wll stand the test !
July 14th, 2022 09:08
THE END
Justa_Geezer said:
Well writen, and a very emotional time for you there Raven ! That sounds to me like a realtionship from hell, and you did well to get out of it, and even better to stay away from it. Now you need to build some really nice memories for yourself, and your future !
July 13th, 2022 03:58
Justa_Geezer said:
Well writen, and a very emotional time for you there Raven ! That sounds to me like a realtionship from hell, and you did well to get out of it, and even better to stay away from it. Now you need to build some really nice memories for yourself, and your future !
July 13th, 2022 03:58
THE END
tallisman said:
Really good. You write so passionately about your feelings, and they come through so clearly. Well done on making a stand! It’s always good to read your poems ! Take care of yourself and say hi to your daughter! T
July 13th, 2022 00:38
tallisman said:
Really good. You write so passionately about your feelings, and they come through so clearly. Well done on making a stand! It’s always good to read your poems ! Take care of yourself and say hi to your daughter! T
July 13th, 2022 00:38
THE END
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong emotive words Tammy. I do hope that he stays out of your life and that of your daughter, to threaten children is a disgusting thing to do.
Keep strong and all will be well in your life.
Andy
July 13th, 2022 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong emotive words Tammy. I do hope that he stays out of your life and that of your daughter, to threaten children is a disgusting thing to do.
Keep strong and all will be well in your life.
Andy
July 13th, 2022 00:32
LOOKING AT MYSELF
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words but life is good, you are still here and have the wonderful ability to write your words. We all have tomes of hurt but we do have within ourselves to pull ourselves further into our lives where all is wonderful.
Andy
July 12th, 2022 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words but life is good, you are still here and have the wonderful ability to write your words. We all have tomes of hurt but we do have within ourselves to pull ourselves further into our lives where all is wonderful.
Andy
July 12th, 2022 00:31
CAN I FIND MY TRUE HOME
Justa_Geezer said:
Well, if you didn\'t know who you were then, you certainly do Now !
July 11th, 2022 19:21
Justa_Geezer said:
Well, if you didn\'t know who you were then, you certainly do Now !
July 11th, 2022 19:21
LOOKING AT MYSELF
Justa_Geezer said:
Beautifully written Raven, But to never be hurt again would mean never to love again. A wicked waste !
July 11th, 2022 17:46
Justa_Geezer said:
Beautifully written Raven, But to never be hurt again would mean never to love again. A wicked waste !
July 11th, 2022 17:46
LOVE IN BETWEEN
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
thanks for sharing
\'may the universe, answer your wishes\'
July 11th, 2022 02:09
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
thanks for sharing
\'may the universe, answer your wishes\'
July 11th, 2022 02:09
LOVE IN BETWEEN
Justa_Geezer said:
Nice forward looking write there Raven. A great insight into a grandmothers hopes and love for her grandchildren !
July 10th, 2022 17:21
Justa_Geezer said:
Nice forward looking write there Raven. A great insight into a grandmothers hopes and love for her grandchildren !
July 10th, 2022 17:21
LOVE IN BETWEEN
Blueledge said:
That\'s nice Tammy.
I\'m sure they must benefit from you\'re influence.
July 10th, 2022 15:46
Blueledge said:
That\'s nice Tammy.
I\'m sure they must benefit from you\'re influence.
July 10th, 2022 15:46
SCARED
Justa_Geezer said:
That was a brilliant poem Raven, Letting out all your nightly fears is the best way to face up to them ! Probably your best work so far. Keep it up !
July 8th, 2022 03:51
Justa_Geezer said:
That was a brilliant poem Raven, Letting out all your nightly fears is the best way to face up to them ! Probably your best work so far. Keep it up !
July 8th, 2022 03:51
SCARED
Nandawula Regine Kabali-Kagwa said:
The way I find the darkness of the night so creepy. It\'s crazy because the stars so beautiful but yet the background and energies of the night is so heavy. Beautiful piece ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
July 7th, 2022 06:28
Nandawula Regine Kabali-Kagwa said:
The way I find the darkness of the night so creepy. It\'s crazy because the stars so beautiful but yet the background and energies of the night is so heavy. Beautiful piece ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
July 7th, 2022 06:28
SCARED
tallisman said:
Hi Raven, this was good, gave me goosebumps! Good job I didn’t read it before I went to bed!
July 7th, 2022 00:52
tallisman said:
Hi Raven, this was good, gave me goosebumps! Good job I didn’t read it before I went to bed!
July 7th, 2022 00:52
MY INSPIRATION
MendedFences27 said:
You are very fortunate to have such a wonderful Mom. Your poem about her
I hope she has read, and I am sure she will treasure it.
It seems she has raised you well. A wonderful Mom, a wonderful daughter. Nice poem. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2022 17:55
MendedFences27 said:
You are very fortunate to have such a wonderful Mom. Your poem about her
I hope she has read, and I am sure she will treasure it.
It seems she has raised you well. A wonderful Mom, a wonderful daughter. Nice poem. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2022 17:55
MY INSPIRATION
Justa_Geezer said:
Great rhythm and flow in this poem, together with lovely inspired words about you Mum ! Also, it\'s so good to read something more upbeat from you, keep it up girl !
July 6th, 2022 16:32
Justa_Geezer said:
Great rhythm and flow in this poem, together with lovely inspired words about you Mum ! Also, it\'s so good to read something more upbeat from you, keep it up girl !
July 6th, 2022 16:32
MY INSPIRATION
tallisman said:
Raven beautiful words, well put together! I enjoyed this!
July 6th, 2022 00:51
tallisman said:
Raven beautiful words, well put together! I enjoyed this!
July 6th, 2022 00:51
MY INSPIRATION
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words about your mother and so many other mothers in the world.
Andy
July 6th, 2022 00:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words about your mother and so many other mothers in the world.
Andy
July 6th, 2022 00:06
CAN I FIND MY TRUE HOME
tallisman said:
Hi Raven, you have always got friends here! A strong expressive write, I hope you find what your heart seeks, stay strong and stay well!
July 5th, 2022 00:51
tallisman said:
Hi Raven, you have always got friends here! A strong expressive write, I hope you find what your heart seeks, stay strong and stay well!
July 5th, 2022 00:51
CAN I FIND MY TRUE HOME
Blueledge said:
It\'s hard to read you express these feelings.
It\'s a reminder of how shit life can be at times. Don\'t e wait for heaven. I hope you can find contentment here on earth soon.
July 4th, 2022 16:36
Blueledge said:
It\'s hard to read you express these feelings.
It\'s a reminder of how shit life can be at times. Don\'t e wait for heaven. I hope you can find contentment here on earth soon.
July 4th, 2022 16:36
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