Comments received on poems by Raven333
MAKE A DEAL
Goldfinch60 said:
Passionate words Tammy, I am sure all will be fine soon.
Andy
July 4th, 2022 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Passionate words Tammy, I am sure all will be fine soon.
Andy
July 4th, 2022 00:24
MAKE A DEAL
tallisman said:
As always Raven, such a powerful emotive write. I admire you.
July 3rd, 2022 15:44
tallisman said:
As always Raven, such a powerful emotive write. I admire you.
July 3rd, 2022 15:44
MAKE A DEAL
evenwheniLie said:
Beautiful poem about wanting the touch of another, but there was also a instance of heart break that gives love it’s thorns, I like reading your poems because they show a life lived without completion.. there is more life to be gotten. You do right to hesitate, because like I said; love has thorns, so I wouldn’t go chasing it, just take your time… such passion in your words.
July 3rd, 2022 15:17
evenwheniLie said:
Beautiful poem about wanting the touch of another, but there was also a instance of heart break that gives love it’s thorns, I like reading your poems because they show a life lived without completion.. there is more life to be gotten. You do right to hesitate, because like I said; love has thorns, so I wouldn’t go chasing it, just take your time… such passion in your words.
July 3rd, 2022 15:17
MAKE A DEAL
Justa_Geezer said:
Love the warmth and hope for the future in this 10th poem, also the passion that\'s always in your writings. There will be plenty out there who will truly appreciate what you have to offer Raven ! Have a great 4th July !
July 3rd, 2022 14:08
Justa_Geezer said:
Love the warmth and hope for the future in this 10th poem, also the passion that\'s always in your writings. There will be plenty out there who will truly appreciate what you have to offer Raven ! Have a great 4th July !
July 3rd, 2022 14:08
F###ED UP GAME...
Justa_Geezer said:
You sure can pick them ! Nice emotive write , but threw away, not through away.
July 2nd, 2022 11:59
Justa_Geezer said:
You sure can pick them ! Nice emotive write , but threw away, not through away.
July 2nd, 2022 11:59
SO LONELY...
Justa_Geezer said:
With a heart and mind like yours Raven, you will find that love !
Never ever feel forsaken,
Because some fool just can\'t accept,
Your love , no reservation,
Because they were so inept.
Though your heart may feel well be broken,
Please don\'t let no player hurt you
Just wait for that new love token,
As loves spirit comes shining through.
A deeply heartfelt blow is felt,
A thoughtless hurtful thing to do,
No ghost of love have you been dealt,
So pity him my friend, not you !
July 2nd, 2022 09:49
Justa_Geezer said:
With a heart and mind like yours Raven, you will find that love !
Never ever feel forsaken,
Because some fool just can\'t accept,
Your love , no reservation,
Because they were so inept.
Though your heart may feel well be broken,
Please don\'t let no player hurt you
Just wait for that new love token,
As loves spirit comes shining through.
A deeply heartfelt blow is felt,
A thoughtless hurtful thing to do,
No ghost of love have you been dealt,
So pity him my friend, not you !
July 2nd, 2022 09:49
DO NOT LET ME GO
tallisman said:
You know I once read that poetry is about emotion, if so this is a great poem!
July 1st, 2022 01:04
tallisman said:
You know I once read that poetry is about emotion, if so this is a great poem!
July 1st, 2022 01:04
DO NOT LET ME GO
tallisman said:
Hi Tammie, strong and punchy, emotive, it’s not “just another sad poem”…i
July 1st, 2022 00:35
tallisman said:
Hi Tammie, strong and punchy, emotive, it’s not “just another sad poem”…i
July 1st, 2022 00:35
DO NOT LET ME GO
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Tammy but there will be strength within you to overcome and win your battles.
Andy
July 1st, 2022 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Tammy but there will be strength within you to overcome and win your battles.
Andy
July 1st, 2022 00:11
SO LONELY...
Goldfinch60 said:
That love within you shines through your words Tammy and will bring good to you.
Andy
June 30th, 2022 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
That love within you shines through your words Tammy and will bring good to you.
Andy
June 30th, 2022 00:52
SO LONELY...
tallisman said:
Hi Raven, there was a lot of soul in this poem. I truly loved the last thee lines, the imagery…it’s given me some ideas! Thankyou, T
June 30th, 2022 00:30
tallisman said:
Hi Raven, there was a lot of soul in this poem. I truly loved the last thee lines, the imagery…it’s given me some ideas! Thankyou, T
June 30th, 2022 00:30
SO LONELY...
Nandawula Regine Kabali-Kagwa said:
I love the strong message this piece carries. Having a heart with so much love in abundance waiting to be captured. Truly beautiful ♥️.
June 29th, 2022 20:29
Nandawula Regine Kabali-Kagwa said:
I love the strong message this piece carries. Having a heart with so much love in abundance waiting to be captured. Truly beautiful ♥️.
June 29th, 2022 20:29
MIRANDA
JudyStella said:
A mother’s love is the greatest love on earth❤️ A very beautiful portrayal of the love of a mother for her daughter!
June 29th, 2022 03:13
JudyStella said:
A mother’s love is the greatest love on earth❤️ A very beautiful portrayal of the love of a mother for her daughter!
June 29th, 2022 03:13
MIRANDA
Justa_Geezer said:
Really like the sentiments in \"Miranda\" who I assume is your daughter !
June 28th, 2022 17:25
Justa_Geezer said:
Really like the sentiments in \"Miranda\" who I assume is your daughter !
June 28th, 2022 17:25
TIRED OF THE PAIN
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can be a struggle but that sunlight will always be there waiting for you Tammy.
Andy
June 27th, 2022 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can be a struggle but that sunlight will always be there waiting for you Tammy.
Andy
June 27th, 2022 01:54
MIRANDA
Goldfinch60 said:
That love for your daughter will never fail Tammy.
Andy
June 27th, 2022 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
That love for your daughter will never fail Tammy.
Andy
June 27th, 2022 01:42
MIRANDA
orchidee said:
Good write R. Great title there! heehee. It just says \'.....\' on the list.
June 27th, 2022 01:33
orchidee said:
Good write R. Great title there! heehee. It just says \'.....\' on the list.
June 27th, 2022 01:33
MIRANDA
dusk arising said:
Well I don\'t think i have ever seen a better expression of love for a daughter than yours today. I truly hope she is appreciative and treats you as someone loved and special.
June 27th, 2022 01:10
dusk arising said:
Well I don\'t think i have ever seen a better expression of love for a daughter than yours today. I truly hope she is appreciative and treats you as someone loved and special.
June 27th, 2022 01:10
TIRED OF THE PAIN
tallisman said:
They can buy anything….except honesty. Good poem!
June 26th, 2022 05:45
tallisman said:
They can buy anything….except honesty. Good poem!
June 26th, 2022 05:45
TIRED OF THE PAIN
Blueledge said:
Life is a struggle for the majority.
But there is a minority for whom life is one big party. 1% of the world\'s population are just so rich they can buy anything or anyone.
June 26th, 2022 05:32
Blueledge said:
Life is a struggle for the majority.
But there is a minority for whom life is one big party. 1% of the world\'s population are just so rich they can buy anything or anyone.
June 26th, 2022 05:32
Seeing Clearly
Goldfinch60 said:
This can really happen in life Raven unless you find the right people to be with, I have been fortunate in my life to have those right people around me.
Good words.
Andy
June 26th, 2022 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
This can really happen in life Raven unless you find the right people to be with, I have been fortunate in my life to have those right people around me.
Good words.
Andy
June 26th, 2022 00:52
Seeing Clearly
evenwheniLie said:
Poems that depict actual life and actual human tendencies are welcomed the most by my estimation, because it takes a cultured life to write them.. this poem gets 100 stars by me. Although the pitfalls are accurate, overtime a strong soul will triumph over the hate that disrespectful, self delusional, psychopathic, egotistical, unworthy narcissists, toxic individuals around us can cause.. even the strong fall down to dark powers sometimes, but it is said we are strong because we get back up…, we all did and said something in response to the evil around us we shouldn’t have said or done, at time we may feel totally possessed.. but get back up. Take care sister.
June 25th, 2022 15:51
evenwheniLie said:
Poems that depict actual life and actual human tendencies are welcomed the most by my estimation, because it takes a cultured life to write them.. this poem gets 100 stars by me. Although the pitfalls are accurate, overtime a strong soul will triumph over the hate that disrespectful, self delusional, psychopathic, egotistical, unworthy narcissists, toxic individuals around us can cause.. even the strong fall down to dark powers sometimes, but it is said we are strong because we get back up…, we all did and said something in response to the evil around us we shouldn’t have said or done, at time we may feel totally possessed.. but get back up. Take care sister.
June 25th, 2022 15:51
Seeing Clearly
Blueledge said:
This is very true.
I\'ve tried to lower my expectations to avoid disappointment.
June 25th, 2022 06:30
Blueledge said:
This is very true.
I\'ve tried to lower my expectations to avoid disappointment.
June 25th, 2022 06:30
Seeing Clearly
dusk arising said:
I was really drawn in to is piece.
Nobodies circumstance will be the same. Nobodies wisdom will provide an answer and to seek love\'s cushion elsewhere would be untimely.
Your own wisdom will provide the only meaningful words. That wisdom is forming in you right now and will become your guiding light if you are brave enough to follow it.
June 25th, 2022 05:35
dusk arising said:
I was really drawn in to is piece.
Nobodies circumstance will be the same. Nobodies wisdom will provide an answer and to seek love\'s cushion elsewhere would be untimely.
Your own wisdom will provide the only meaningful words. That wisdom is forming in you right now and will become your guiding light if you are brave enough to follow it.
June 25th, 2022 05:35
Seeing Clearly
Saxon Crow said:
Without sounding completely egotistical may I refer you to my poem today as it\'s relevant to your excellent and very relatable poem.
June 25th, 2022 03:51
Saxon Crow said:
Without sounding completely egotistical may I refer you to my poem today as it\'s relevant to your excellent and very relatable poem.
June 25th, 2022 03:51
Seeing Clearly
tallisman said:
There’s a certain rhythm in the flow of this, I enjoyed reading it…
June 25th, 2022 03:07
tallisman said:
There’s a certain rhythm in the flow of this, I enjoyed reading it…
June 25th, 2022 03:07
After 3 am
sadkw33n said:
A very meaningful and well written poem. In that battle between darkness and light, light will always prevail. Because darkness isn\'t the opposite of light, it\'s merely its absence.
June 25th, 2022 00:41
sadkw33n said:
A very meaningful and well written poem. In that battle between darkness and light, light will always prevail. Because darkness isn\'t the opposite of light, it\'s merely its absence.
June 25th, 2022 00:41
Personal Journey
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Tammy, you have come through it though and will be stronger in your mind through that experience.
Andy
June 24th, 2022 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Tammy, you have come through it though and will be stronger in your mind through that experience.
Andy
June 24th, 2022 00:47
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