Comments received on poems by Raven333
OVERWHELMING
orchidee said:
Ohhh, invite me over. I\'ll break the silence. I\'ll sing to ya!
Fat lot of use that will be. It will make things worse!! heehee.
September 4th, 2022 01:52
orchidee said:
Ohhh, invite me over. I\'ll break the silence. I\'ll sing to ya!
Fat lot of use that will be. It will make things worse!! heehee.
September 4th, 2022 01:52
OVERWHELMING
Justa_Geezer said:
It\'s so nice to see your return here Raven, and with another great write. I think a lot of us on are either on our own, or feel lonely, probably one good reason why we resort to writing poetry, not only does it fill our time, but we can let go of our emotions in our words. I have certainly missed your presence here, as I\'m sure have others. Another heartfelt outburst from you, and nicely written too, keep it up friend !
September 3rd, 2022 11:43
Justa_Geezer said:
It\'s so nice to see your return here Raven, and with another great write. I think a lot of us on are either on our own, or feel lonely, probably one good reason why we resort to writing poetry, not only does it fill our time, but we can let go of our emotions in our words. I have certainly missed your presence here, as I\'m sure have others. Another heartfelt outburst from you, and nicely written too, keep it up friend !
September 3rd, 2022 11:43
OVERWHELMING
shaa said:
Isn\'t it astonishing how loneliness can be Peaceful and yet hurt soo bad. I feel truly overwhelmed, your words just bring out all of this emotion... sadness, despair and longing. I must say you\'ve done a lovely piece
September 3rd, 2022 06:58
shaa said:
Isn\'t it astonishing how loneliness can be Peaceful and yet hurt soo bad. I feel truly overwhelmed, your words just bring out all of this emotion... sadness, despair and longing. I must say you\'ve done a lovely piece
September 3rd, 2022 06:58
FORGIVE
tallisman said:
Well written Raven, you roll with the blows and come back with a smile! Your daughter knows you’ve done that extra mile!
August 21st, 2022 13:00
tallisman said:
Well written Raven, you roll with the blows and come back with a smile! Your daughter knows you’ve done that extra mile!
August 21st, 2022 13:00
FORGIVE
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that she is fine Tammy and will be there for you at any time you need her.
Andy
August 19th, 2022 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that she is fine Tammy and will be there for you at any time you need her.
Andy
August 19th, 2022 01:47
FORGIVE
Kinsey Peterson said:
As someone who\'s parents were both in the picture, it\'s always better to have someone who cares and does their best for you rather than have two figures to feel abandoned by.
August 18th, 2022 14:04
Kinsey Peterson said:
As someone who\'s parents were both in the picture, it\'s always better to have someone who cares and does their best for you rather than have two figures to feel abandoned by.
August 18th, 2022 14:04
FORGIVE
Justa_Geezer said:
I bet she tells you that there\'s nothing to forgive Raven. You did your best, thats all you could, so don\'t blame yourself !
August 18th, 2022 13:59
Justa_Geezer said:
I bet she tells you that there\'s nothing to forgive Raven. You did your best, thats all you could, so don\'t blame yourself !
August 18th, 2022 13:59
CAREFULLY LISTEN
L. B. Mek said:
Awesome!
more Power to you
sing Loud and Proud
dear Poet
and don\'t let anyone
get in the way
of your passions in life!
August 15th, 2022 03:22
L. B. Mek said:
Awesome!
more Power to you
sing Loud and Proud
dear Poet
and don\'t let anyone
get in the way
of your passions in life!
August 15th, 2022 03:22
CAREFULLY LISTEN
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Tammy but hopefully one day all will become god in your life - it can happen.
Andy
August 15th, 2022 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Tammy but hopefully one day all will become god in your life - it can happen.
Andy
August 15th, 2022 01:46
CAREFULLY LISTEN
tallisman said:
Hi Raven, really brill poem, well put together. Some good truths laid out there, I think this is good, for you because you are expressing so well, for the community who get to enjoy these poems. We arebehind you! Go Girl!
August 15th, 2022 00:44
tallisman said:
Hi Raven, really brill poem, well put together. Some good truths laid out there, I think this is good, for you because you are expressing so well, for the community who get to enjoy these poems. We arebehind you! Go Girl!
August 15th, 2022 00:44
CAREFULLY LISTEN
Justa_Geezer said:
Another great write here Raven, of course you can\'t write about what you\'ve not felt, but I think folk are trying to encourage you to move forward from the darkness of your past into a brighter future !
August 14th, 2022 17:19
Justa_Geezer said:
Another great write here Raven, of course you can\'t write about what you\'ve not felt, but I think folk are trying to encourage you to move forward from the darkness of your past into a brighter future !
August 14th, 2022 17:19
WANTING TO LOVE
tallisman said:
Well done Raven, it’s good to write from your heart! I hope you can bite that bullet and give it a go! Tell him if he’s not good to you the MPS will write about him!
August 10th, 2022 12:04
tallisman said:
Well done Raven, it’s good to write from your heart! I hope you can bite that bullet and give it a go! Tell him if he’s not good to you the MPS will write about him!
August 10th, 2022 12:04
WANTING TO LOVE
orchidee said:
Oohhh, love\'s for us - you and I. Was it that long, 16 years? You mean me?! lol. But my (imaginary) dog, Fido, never lets me have any \'excitement\' and nothing \'hot\'! lol.
August 10th, 2022 01:43
orchidee said:
Oohhh, love\'s for us - you and I. Was it that long, 16 years? You mean me?! lol. But my (imaginary) dog, Fido, never lets me have any \'excitement\' and nothing \'hot\'! lol.
August 10th, 2022 01:43
WANTING TO LOVE
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that the right person is out there for you Tammy, I hope that person is there for you soon.
Andy
August 10th, 2022 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that the right person is out there for you Tammy, I hope that person is there for you soon.
Andy
August 10th, 2022 00:05
WANTING TO LOVE
Accidental Poet said:
Have to agree with Justa_Geezer. Learning to trust someone else is just as hard to trust your own heart. Take a step back and just let friendships take root. Then someday when you\'ll feel it\'s time, then start to think about love again. Don\'t pressure yourself to feel you have to find love. If it\'s right, you\'ll know it.
August 9th, 2022 20:29
Accidental Poet said:
Have to agree with Justa_Geezer. Learning to trust someone else is just as hard to trust your own heart. Take a step back and just let friendships take root. Then someday when you\'ll feel it\'s time, then start to think about love again. Don\'t pressure yourself to feel you have to find love. If it\'s right, you\'ll know it.
August 9th, 2022 20:29
WANTING TO LOVE
Justa_Geezer said:
Very nicely written. It\'s going to be hard for you to let someone into your heart again Raven, but maybe do it slowly, by becoming good friends first, and later let them get closer, when you know you can trust both them and your feelings !
August 9th, 2022 19:57
Justa_Geezer said:
Very nicely written. It\'s going to be hard for you to let someone into your heart again Raven, but maybe do it slowly, by becoming good friends first, and later let them get closer, when you know you can trust both them and your feelings !
August 9th, 2022 19:57
AM SORRY
Accidental Poet said:
They say, \"As one door closes, another opens\". May the right door open for you Raven.
August 8th, 2022 09:10
Accidental Poet said:
They say, \"As one door closes, another opens\". May the right door open for you Raven.
August 8th, 2022 09:10
AM SORRY
Justa_Geezer said:
His misfortune to be missing out on you Raven, Nicely written though !
August 8th, 2022 04:43
Justa_Geezer said:
His misfortune to be missing out on you Raven, Nicely written though !
August 8th, 2022 04:43
AM SORRY
tallisman said:
It’s sad how some things don’t work out. However there is always the next thing! Good write Raven!
August 8th, 2022 03:12
tallisman said:
It’s sad how some things don’t work out. However there is always the next thing! Good write Raven!
August 8th, 2022 03:12
WORTH A SHOT
tallisman said:
Wonderful, Raven, insightful,, very positive poetry. When I read it it’s quite rhythmic as well. Great job!
August 5th, 2022 00:42
tallisman said:
Wonderful, Raven, insightful,, very positive poetry. When I read it it’s quite rhythmic as well. Great job!
August 5th, 2022 00:42
WORTH A SHOT
Justa_Geezer said:
Well done Raven, you now have that focal point, and you are well on that road to recovery, keep going as you have been and you\'ll get there !
August 3rd, 2022 04:08
Justa_Geezer said:
Well done Raven, you now have that focal point, and you are well on that road to recovery, keep going as you have been and you\'ll get there !
August 3rd, 2022 04:08
WORTH A SHOT
Goldfinch60 said:
You must keep going the good times are there for you Tammy.
Andy
August 3rd, 2022 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
You must keep going the good times are there for you Tammy.
Andy
August 3rd, 2022 01:50
WORTH A SHOT
orchidee said:
Good write Raven. Oohh, don\'t go round any corners then. Go straight on! heehee. Maybe something literal in that.
August 3rd, 2022 01:45
orchidee said:
Good write Raven. Oohh, don\'t go round any corners then. Go straight on! heehee. Maybe something literal in that.
August 3rd, 2022 01:45
GRASPING TIGHTLY
tallisman said:
Really good Raven,, you are really getting into the swing now! Brilliant!
August 1st, 2022 14:43
tallisman said:
Really good Raven,, you are really getting into the swing now! Brilliant!
August 1st, 2022 14:43
GRASPING TIGHTLY
Justa_Geezer said:
A beautiful write of passion and verve Raven, go get what you want and enjoy it while you can !
August 1st, 2022 07:10
Justa_Geezer said:
A beautiful write of passion and verve Raven, go get what you want and enjoy it while you can !
August 1st, 2022 07:10
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