Comments received on poems by Raven333
GETTING BURNED
Justa_Geezer said:
Another great poem, with a lovely flow, and a subject matter that\'s so relevant in todays society. Well done Raven !
July 24th, 2022 01:53
Justa_Geezer said:
Another great poem, with a lovely flow, and a subject matter that\'s so relevant in todays society. Well done Raven !
July 24th, 2022 01:53
GETTING BURNED
orchidee said:
Ohh, I know. I kept getting burned. Then one said to me \'Well, stop walking into ovens then\'. Doh! heehee.
July 24th, 2022 01:24
orchidee said:
Ohh, I know. I kept getting burned. Then one said to me \'Well, stop walking into ovens then\'. Doh! heehee.
July 24th, 2022 01:24
WATCH YOUR MOUTH PLEASE
Goldfinch60 said:
Respect seems to have been taken from many people in the current world Tammy.
Andy
July 23rd, 2022 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Respect seems to have been taken from many people in the current world Tammy.
Andy
July 23rd, 2022 00:17
NO LONGER
Goldfinch60 said:
Such powerful words Tammy, I just cannot understand why there is such aggression in marriage of relationships.
So glad you have found a new life.
Andy
July 23rd, 2022 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Such powerful words Tammy, I just cannot understand why there is such aggression in marriage of relationships.
So glad you have found a new life.
Andy
July 23rd, 2022 00:11
NO LONGER
Blueledge said:
Some men seem to think exercising power and control over a woman is normal behaviour.
To earn a woman\'s respect and trust is much more rewarding.
July 22nd, 2022 16:14
Blueledge said:
Some men seem to think exercising power and control over a woman is normal behaviour.
To earn a woman\'s respect and trust is much more rewarding.
July 22nd, 2022 16:14
NO LONGER
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m sorry for your pain and struggles, dear poet
(it never ceases to amaze me
how many, weak-willed
partners, choose
for their fists, to speak
instead of expressing themselves
in words
when time\'s get tough, as-if
violence
is supposed to strangle, all
life
from witnessing the pathetic excuse
of a human, they
so evidently are...!)
stay strong! sing loud and proud
July 22nd, 2022 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m sorry for your pain and struggles, dear poet
(it never ceases to amaze me
how many, weak-willed
partners, choose
for their fists, to speak
instead of expressing themselves
in words
when time\'s get tough, as-if
violence
is supposed to strangle, all
life
from witnessing the pathetic excuse
of a human, they
so evidently are...!)
stay strong! sing loud and proud
July 22nd, 2022 04:47
NO LONGER
Justa_Geezer said:
A brilliant poem Raven ! But hard to read, knowing that it \'s what happened to you. Continue writing like this and get all your painful memories out !
July 22nd, 2022 01:46
Justa_Geezer said:
A brilliant poem Raven ! But hard to read, knowing that it \'s what happened to you. Continue writing like this and get all your painful memories out !
July 22nd, 2022 01:46
NO LONGER
tallisman said:
Brave stuff, well done,. There is a certain clarity about your writing I find enviable. Well written! Xx
July 22nd, 2022 00:51
tallisman said:
Brave stuff, well done,. There is a certain clarity about your writing I find enviable. Well written! Xx
July 22nd, 2022 00:51
WATCH YOUR MOUTH PLEASE
tallisman said:
Hi Raven, I’ll be careful of what I say, honest!
Love the attitude, really good xxx
July 22nd, 2022 00:35
tallisman said:
Hi Raven, I’ll be careful of what I say, honest!
Love the attitude, really good xxx
July 22nd, 2022 00:35
WATCH YOUR MOUTH PLEASE
evenwheniLie said:
Words do have power, but tone is everything..
July 21st, 2022 06:41
evenwheniLie said:
Words do have power, but tone is everything..
July 21st, 2022 06:41
WATCH YOUR MOUTH PLEASE
Justa_Geezer said:
Another great poem here Raven, maybe you could use the ( \' ) to shorten lines to fit better. like i\'ll and you\'ll or we\'\'ll. just a thought !
July 21st, 2022 04:43
Justa_Geezer said:
Another great poem here Raven, maybe you could use the ( \' ) to shorten lines to fit better. like i\'ll and you\'ll or we\'\'ll. just a thought !
July 21st, 2022 04:43
EVIL LURKING
Justa_Geezer said:
No, you can change it at any time, Go to MY POEMS, then your poem, then EDIT IMAGE under the title on the right !
July 21st, 2022 04:27
Justa_Geezer said:
No, you can change it at any time, Go to MY POEMS, then your poem, then EDIT IMAGE under the title on the right !
July 21st, 2022 04:27
WATCH YOUR MOUTH PLEASE
orchidee said:
Aww, I never knew I spoke to you in that way! Was it me? heehee.
July 21st, 2022 02:20
orchidee said:
Aww, I never knew I spoke to you in that way! Was it me? heehee.
July 21st, 2022 02:20
WATCH YOUR MOUTH PLEASE
Blueledge said:
I remember something Fran Lebowitz once said.
\"Think before you talk. Read before you think.\"
July 21st, 2022 02:18
Blueledge said:
I remember something Fran Lebowitz once said.
\"Think before you talk. Read before you think.\"
July 21st, 2022 02:18
EVIL LURKING
tallisman said:
Destruction he will bring?
Actually thought thi s was really good, Raven!
July 20th, 2022 12:22
tallisman said:
Destruction he will bring?
Actually thought thi s was really good, Raven!
July 20th, 2022 12:22
EVIL LURKING
Justa_Geezer said:
How about \" He\'s primed and ready to spring \"
July 20th, 2022 12:04
Justa_Geezer said:
How about \" He\'s primed and ready to spring \"
July 20th, 2022 12:04
EVIL LURKING
Justa_Geezer said:
You\'ve confused me now Raven, I thought he was always lurking around, trying to catch someone out !
July 20th, 2022 04:57
Justa_Geezer said:
You\'ve confused me now Raven, I thought he was always lurking around, trying to catch someone out !
July 20th, 2022 04:57
EVIL LURKING
Paul Bell said:
The fine balance between good and evil. I always find it strange why the evil go down in history to be remembered. Maybe the good don\'t need recognition.
July 20th, 2022 04:55
Paul Bell said:
The fine balance between good and evil. I always find it strange why the evil go down in history to be remembered. Maybe the good don\'t need recognition.
July 20th, 2022 04:55
EVIL LURKING
Goldfinch60 said:
That evil may be there Tammy but goodness and love will always overcome evil in our lives.
Andy
July 20th, 2022 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
That evil may be there Tammy but goodness and love will always overcome evil in our lives.
Andy
July 20th, 2022 01:08
NO ONE REALLY CARES
tallisman said:
Lovely Raven, as always. Paul’s assessment was spot on! Wonderful words!
July 18th, 2022 01:07
tallisman said:
Lovely Raven, as always. Paul’s assessment was spot on! Wonderful words!
July 18th, 2022 01:07
NO ONE REALLY CARES
Justa_Geezer said:
Beautifully written, as always Raven , Paul got it bang on, just don\'t give up, there are still good people out there !
July 17th, 2022 22:35
Justa_Geezer said:
Beautifully written, as always Raven , Paul got it bang on, just don\'t give up, there are still good people out there !
July 17th, 2022 22:35
NO ONE REALLY CARES
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes when the forcefield goes up, it just never comes down again. Putting it into prospective, one or two people let us down, and we then just ringfence the rest. Still a lot of good out there around the corner.
July 17th, 2022 08:26
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes when the forcefield goes up, it just never comes down again. Putting it into prospective, one or two people let us down, and we then just ringfence the rest. Still a lot of good out there around the corner.
July 17th, 2022 08:26
BEAUTIFUL CRAZY
Goldfinch60 said:
You will always be there for her Tammy and will pull her through her struggles into the wonderful life she will come to lead.
Andy
July 16th, 2022 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
You will always be there for her Tammy and will pull her through her struggles into the wonderful life she will come to lead.
Andy
July 16th, 2022 00:46
BEAUTIFUL CRAZY
Blueledge said:
Teaching your granddaughter to stay positive will not just help her now but will remain a strategy throughout her life.
I always thought a hobby like learning music /drawing ect was a good distraction. Sounds like you\'re on the right track.
July 15th, 2022 15:41
Blueledge said:
Teaching your granddaughter to stay positive will not just help her now but will remain a strategy throughout her life.
I always thought a hobby like learning music /drawing ect was a good distraction. Sounds like you\'re on the right track.
July 15th, 2022 15:41
BEAUTIFUL CRAZY
Justa_Geezer said:
Raven, Mistress of rhyme and reasoning, beautiful write !
July 15th, 2022 14:06
Justa_Geezer said:
Raven, Mistress of rhyme and reasoning, beautiful write !
July 15th, 2022 14:06
BEAUTIFUL CRAZY
evenwheniLie said:
As always you have the signs of a true poet, the rhyme is always there, but more then anything there is meaning and the struggles in life are apparent, something that gives depth to your work. Keep up the excellent work.
July 15th, 2022 12:51
evenwheniLie said:
As always you have the signs of a true poet, the rhyme is always there, but more then anything there is meaning and the struggles in life are apparent, something that gives depth to your work. Keep up the excellent work.
July 15th, 2022 12:51
THE RHYMER
tallisman said:
Strangely I have tried free verse and I can’t do it, so nothing but respect to those who can. I have a compulsion to rhyme…
July 15th, 2022 00:40
tallisman said:
Strangely I have tried free verse and I can’t do it, so nothing but respect to those who can. I have a compulsion to rhyme…
July 15th, 2022 00:40
THE RHYMER
tallisman said:
Rhymes forever! We need T shirts people! We will have to form a band of wandering poets called “Ravens Rhymers” , doomed to wander the earth quoting EAP to free versers. We will worship at the feet of Raven and Doggerel Dave will be our general!
July 15th, 2022 00:38
tallisman said:
Rhymes forever! We need T shirts people! We will have to form a band of wandering poets called “Ravens Rhymers” , doomed to wander the earth quoting EAP to free versers. We will worship at the feet of Raven and Doggerel Dave will be our general!
July 15th, 2022 00:38
THE RHYMER
Goldfinch60 said:
We all write in our own styles Tammy and it does not matter, it is the way that we want to put our words on paper. Good write.
Andy
July 15th, 2022 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
We all write in our own styles Tammy and it does not matter, it is the way that we want to put our words on paper. Good write.
Andy
July 15th, 2022 00:33
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