Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Questioning Him (Rakim)
L. B. Mek said:
not sure about his commitment levels
but his rap skills are legit
one of the best to pick up a mic
and that\'s a fact, just ask
that Egyptian deity:
\'But me and the microphone is still magnetic
Straight off the top, I knew I\'d be forced to rock
Dance floors just stop, the spot\'s scorchin\' hot
Hopin\' I\'ll open Rakim Allah seminars
Massage at the bar, smokin\' ten-dollar cigars
While I admire MIDI, with more vision than TVs
I find it easy catchin\' diabetes from fly sweeties
Sit back and wait to hear a slammin\' track
Rockin\' jams, by popular demand, I\'m back
I control the crowd, you know Ra hold it down\'
May 15th, 2023 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
not sure about his commitment levels
but his rap skills are legit
one of the best to pick up a mic
and that\'s a fact, just ask
that Egyptian deity:
\'But me and the microphone is still magnetic
Straight off the top, I knew I\'d be forced to rock
Dance floors just stop, the spot\'s scorchin\' hot
Hopin\' I\'ll open Rakim Allah seminars
Massage at the bar, smokin\' ten-dollar cigars
While I admire MIDI, with more vision than TVs
I find it easy catchin\' diabetes from fly sweeties
Sit back and wait to hear a slammin\' track
Rockin\' jams, by popular demand, I\'m back
I control the crowd, you know Ra hold it down\'
May 15th, 2023 05:47
Questioning Him (Rakim)
2781 said:
Reminds me of that saying: we take all the glory but none of the responsibility! Concerts tickets down here are outrageously expensive, you pay in advance, when they cancel you get your money refunded. Gee thanks. Eyes opened.
May 15th, 2023 02:14
2781 said:
Reminds me of that saying: we take all the glory but none of the responsibility! Concerts tickets down here are outrageously expensive, you pay in advance, when they cancel you get your money refunded. Gee thanks. Eyes opened.
May 15th, 2023 02:14
Right My Wrongs And Practice What I Preach
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Coolcuk, we must learn to do right and then follow that right path.
Andy
May 15th, 2023 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Coolcuk, we must learn to do right and then follow that right path.
Andy
May 15th, 2023 01:15
Right My Wrongs And Practice What I Preach
orchidee said:
Now look, I said to one, \'No longer singing the same song: The reply was \'Nope, we\'re not all singing from the same song-sheet\' as the saying goes! lol.
And we\'re a sandwich sort of a picnic too. Shame about that, I was fancying a nice picnic. lol.
May 14th, 2023 01:55
orchidee said:
Now look, I said to one, \'No longer singing the same song: The reply was \'Nope, we\'re not all singing from the same song-sheet\' as the saying goes! lol.
And we\'re a sandwich sort of a picnic too. Shame about that, I was fancying a nice picnic. lol.
May 14th, 2023 01:55
Free Magic Spells In The Paper
2781 said:
That was then, this is now.
Not there on display but probably kiss the bum of that sacred cow?
May 13th, 2023 02:55
2781 said:
That was then, this is now.
Not there on display but probably kiss the bum of that sacred cow?
May 13th, 2023 02:55
300
Parisab said:
I also invite you to search for the images of Palace of Xerxes in Persepolis which shows his relief which is nothing like the comic book half naked monster version of this fascist minded depiction
May 10th, 2023 03:14
Parisab said:
I also invite you to search for the images of Palace of Xerxes in Persepolis which shows his relief which is nothing like the comic book half naked monster version of this fascist minded depiction
May 10th, 2023 03:14
300
Parisab said:
Well written poem about a movie poet friend, but
Speaking of Hollywood, 300 was a cartoonish and ignorant movie about biased historic events-Even the screen writer admitted that he wrote this in the style of a comic book.
Xerxes was the ruler of one of the greatest ancient civilizations, but all accounts were written by Greek historians after invaders like Alexander “the Great” looted and burned Persian libraries-
May 10th, 2023 02:55
Parisab said:
Well written poem about a movie poet friend, but
Speaking of Hollywood, 300 was a cartoonish and ignorant movie about biased historic events-Even the screen writer admitted that he wrote this in the style of a comic book.
Xerxes was the ruler of one of the greatest ancient civilizations, but all accounts were written by Greek historians after invaders like Alexander “the Great” looted and burned Persian libraries-
May 10th, 2023 02:55
Pyramid Down
2781 said:
I sometimes wonder if humans are conscious of their actions?
May 9th, 2023 01:34
2781 said:
I sometimes wonder if humans are conscious of their actions?
May 9th, 2023 01:34
300
L. B. Mek said:
I\'d admire that Spartan lore, more
if it wasn\'t for that whole
murdering your kid
cos it ain\'t aesthetically perfect, thing
kinda like, selective breeding to me
but
yeah, that whole never say quit
warrior element is great
but, then again that horse trick
depicts Spartan\'s as a little, dim
...
(still, Virgil constructed
an entire Roman empire\'s identity
from that Troy legacy, so
who am I to marginalise or ridicule)
lol
May 8th, 2023 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
I\'d admire that Spartan lore, more
if it wasn\'t for that whole
murdering your kid
cos it ain\'t aesthetically perfect, thing
kinda like, selective breeding to me
but
yeah, that whole never say quit
warrior element is great
but, then again that horse trick
depicts Spartan\'s as a little, dim
...
(still, Virgil constructed
an entire Roman empire\'s identity
from that Troy legacy, so
who am I to marginalise or ridicule)
lol
May 8th, 2023 06:14
Met Gala Mason Muppets
Parisab said:
The Fashion designed a Theatre of Fools-even the talented ones are made to look like puppets-great observation poet friend
May 7th, 2023 09:54
Parisab said:
The Fashion designed a Theatre of Fools-even the talented ones are made to look like puppets-great observation poet friend
May 7th, 2023 09:54
Met Gala Mason Muppets
D-P-W said:
Hypocrisy by hypocrites .
Mingle some black and white and everything will be alright ?
May 7th, 2023 08:41
D-P-W said:
Hypocrisy by hypocrites .
Mingle some black and white and everything will be alright ?
May 7th, 2023 08:41
What If Aliens Are Really Demons?
Bobby O said:
The physics seems to forbid any arrivals that aren’t drones or A,I. The whole lifespan light years away thing conflict unless of course worm holes are real but it just doesn’t compute and probably I’m a victim of limited knowledge science wise that had made me and most prisoners of the now.
May 6th, 2023 03:55
Bobby O said:
The physics seems to forbid any arrivals that aren’t drones or A,I. The whole lifespan light years away thing conflict unless of course worm holes are real but it just doesn’t compute and probably I’m a victim of limited knowledge science wise that had made me and most prisoners of the now.
May 6th, 2023 03:55
I Now Pro-nonce You (Not My King)
Bobby O said:
I looked it up and by using that exactly correct wording like Picard ye shall make it so!
May 6th, 2023 03:31
Bobby O said:
I looked it up and by using that exactly correct wording like Picard ye shall make it so!
May 6th, 2023 03:31
I Now Pro-nonce You (Not My King)
orchidee said:
Ahh, so you won\'t be in the crowds waving and cheering today then?! Oops!
May 6th, 2023 02:00
orchidee said:
Ahh, so you won\'t be in the crowds waving and cheering today then?! Oops!
May 6th, 2023 02:00
Kremlin Attacked, Fact?
L. B. Mek said:
I switched it all off, long ago
only way
to filter that sample of truth
(rename all news, in your head
as \'fish bait\', cos that\'s what we are
apparently
fish who merely evolved to walk
but, still fall
for those sensationalised, treats
\'fish bait\' feeds... makes sense)
lol
May 5th, 2023 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
I switched it all off, long ago
only way
to filter that sample of truth
(rename all news, in your head
as \'fish bait\', cos that\'s what we are
apparently
fish who merely evolved to walk
but, still fall
for those sensationalised, treats
\'fish bait\' feeds... makes sense)
lol
May 5th, 2023 04:52
Kremlin Attacked, Fact?
Bobby O said:
Nice way to advise to look and not jump and buy the white elephant
Good piece. Timely. And I hope , helpful.
May 5th, 2023 04:37
Bobby O said:
Nice way to advise to look and not jump and buy the white elephant
Good piece. Timely. And I hope , helpful.
May 5th, 2023 04:37
England Is Lying In Ruins
orchidee said:
That Sam Smith pic has put me off my food for a month now.
If he strips - just don\'t let us see it - it\'s too ghastly! lol.
May 3rd, 2023 01:47
orchidee said:
That Sam Smith pic has put me off my food for a month now.
If he strips - just don\'t let us see it - it\'s too ghastly! lol.
May 3rd, 2023 01:47
Audrey II (Little Shop Of Horrors)
orchidee said:
It\'s Audrey from Corrie. She is age about 150! lol.
May 2nd, 2023 02:04
orchidee said:
It\'s Audrey from Corrie. She is age about 150! lol.
May 2nd, 2023 02:04
I Pledge No Allegiance
orchidee said:
I thought it was Saturday? Tomorrow\'s Tuesday. lol.
May 1st, 2023 07:48
orchidee said:
I thought it was Saturday? Tomorrow\'s Tuesday. lol.
May 1st, 2023 07:48
I Pledge No Allegiance
L. B. Mek said:
what\'s a royal
but a wording of privilege
and yet, so many
are born to a privileged state
so what to do
hate them all, in defiance of fate
pouting for not being born
in a similarly advantageous circumstance..?
if it works for you, as it does for most
that\'s perfectly fine and commendable
while I, have learnt
to value any individual, as just that
an individual
even if part of a greater, evil
till that person does something
to justify, my dislike
I shall not hate, for the sake of hate
Royalty
modernity, distilled
as that easy target of harnessed, hate
from politicians to clerics
striving to convey it, as that symbol
of our collective hate
but
this same, royalty lineage
gifted us, that brave Elizabeth the 1st
that steadfast, Elizabeth the 2nd
and that exemplar sublime
of empathy and motherly love
now remembered as that legacy
of a most beloved, Queen mother
and that first, herald of liberty for all
signed by King John
a conduit to that democracy, we all
still aspire to realise, till this date...
so yes
the king to be, has a horrid taste
in choosing a partner, (poor Diana)
and his brother, is filth incarnate
who should be rotting in jail
and his youngest son, has been brainwashed
by a failed actress
but, Charles
is till afforded my ounce of trust
by his legacy of progressive
and life affecting, endeavours
so, no
dear cherished Poet
I do not resent him, his day
after 60 odd years of waiting
and yet
I too, will not be watching that farce
I love my blighty
so i\'ll toast to the new king, hope
it\'s a good omen for our country
a conduit to a Time of peace
and prosperity for us, All
then go-non about my survival fight
as life...
\'The Queen is dead
Long live the King\'
cheers, n all that malarkey
🍻
(thanks for the extra bank holidays)
😉
May 1st, 2023 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
what\'s a royal
but a wording of privilege
and yet, so many
are born to a privileged state
so what to do
hate them all, in defiance of fate
pouting for not being born
in a similarly advantageous circumstance..?
if it works for you, as it does for most
that\'s perfectly fine and commendable
while I, have learnt
to value any individual, as just that
an individual
even if part of a greater, evil
till that person does something
to justify, my dislike
I shall not hate, for the sake of hate
Royalty
modernity, distilled
as that easy target of harnessed, hate
from politicians to clerics
striving to convey it, as that symbol
of our collective hate
but
this same, royalty lineage
gifted us, that brave Elizabeth the 1st
that steadfast, Elizabeth the 2nd
and that exemplar sublime
of empathy and motherly love
now remembered as that legacy
of a most beloved, Queen mother
and that first, herald of liberty for all
signed by King John
a conduit to that democracy, we all
still aspire to realise, till this date...
so yes
the king to be, has a horrid taste
in choosing a partner, (poor Diana)
and his brother, is filth incarnate
who should be rotting in jail
and his youngest son, has been brainwashed
by a failed actress
but, Charles
is till afforded my ounce of trust
by his legacy of progressive
and life affecting, endeavours
so, no
dear cherished Poet
I do not resent him, his day
after 60 odd years of waiting
and yet
I too, will not be watching that farce
I love my blighty
so i\'ll toast to the new king, hope
it\'s a good omen for our country
a conduit to a Time of peace
and prosperity for us, All
then go-non about my survival fight
as life...
\'The Queen is dead
Long live the King\'
cheers, n all that malarkey
🍻
(thanks for the extra bank holidays)
😉
May 1st, 2023 05:35
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orchidee said:
You know Jackie, Leilani, etc?! lol. Where are they now?
April 29th, 2023 09:16
orchidee said:
You know Jackie, Leilani, etc?! lol. Where are they now?
April 29th, 2023 09:16
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