Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry



Back To The 80s
Doggerel Dave said:

Certainly felt like a time just before the world began to go down the gurgler.... maybe... who knows? But please remember that the 80\'s was only possible, and owes much to the 60\'s and 70\'s....

January 20th, 2023 16:24

Back To The 80s
L. B. Mek said:

80\'s delivered so many classics
enjoyed your gallery
so many images that invite recalling
of cherished memories..
thank you!

January 20th, 2023 06:39

Back To The 80s
arqios said:

...no time in contemporary history as the 80s!

January 20th, 2023 03:26

Castrated And Hated For Speaking Out (Andrew Brigden)
Kinsey Peterson said:

Even in a poem riddled with anger and blame, it was lovely to see compassion within it. \"For my niece.\" May those familial bonds withstand the test of political disarray.

January 13th, 2023 11:47

Castrated And Hated For Speaking Out (Andrew Brigden)
L. B. Mek said:

\'They wanted war
Between vaccinated and unvaccinated
Stoking division and hatred\'
(tried and tested methods:
divide to concur
segregate, to rule over)
imagine a world
where 60% of its industries
ceased to operate
for months at a time
for multiple years
caused by a plague, we know
was manmade
and yet here we are, back to normal
billions of lives effected
and not a single person held, accountable
and beneath it all, is that cesspool
where profiteering vultures
made trillions for themselves and their friends
but all is well, now
world has been conditioned to grab masks
at every sneeze
I wonder what they have in store for us next
we decimated Iraq for its phantom WMD\'s
while we watch-on
as WMD\'s are utilised to condemn our realities
8 billion people, subjugated
by the strategic fear, wielded
by the 1% in power...
no one can write, dystopian fantasy
as fantastical
as the reality we endure, every day of our lives

January 13th, 2023 06:25

Evil Won\'t Have A Sequel
Goldfinch60 said:

True words Coolcuk.

Andy

January 12th, 2023 02:53

Earth (The Prison Planet)
L. B. Mek said:

(add the Bilderberg group and keep on going...
still, at least I came to be
in a time when, if I choose it
\'they\'
can\'t fuck with how I butter my toast
or sugar my tea and coffee
grateful, am I
for this mirage of freedom, afforded to me
by sheer evolutionary, timeline lottery
a \'Tomorrow\' is coming
when chips entwined with our warped mindsets
will insure
even this, will be a long forgotten
dream
someday soon...)
Happy New Year, dear Poet
question it all, including
yourself
(\'know thy self\'
to emancipate, ourselves
free of those clutches, beyond
our very capacity to glean
those societal mirages and lies)

January 6th, 2023 07:20

Life As The Economy Drones
mvvenkataraman said:

First I studied the meaning friend,
Only then I noticed the rhyming,
Nice poem and all the best
To write more such poems!

January 4th, 2023 21:20

Andrew Tate (What\'s Your Birthdate?)
orchidee said:

I don\'t know the guy nor the story.

January 2nd, 2023 09:09

Sun Energy (God\'s Eye)
orchidee said:

It\'s good you felt spiritual and not \'religious\'. That\'s the cause of a lot of problems, I think.

December 27th, 2022 02:47

Sun Energy (God\'s Eye)
Goldfinch60 said:

May that veil never come over your life again Coolcuk.

Andy

December 27th, 2022 02:26

Dreaming of People from My Past
rhmn_7 said:

Maybe it\'s not just you but people from the past want to see you? Good read.

December 26th, 2022 16:28

Gifts Vs Good Deeds (Christmas Time)
orchidee said:

Yes - we don\'t actually know if He was born on Dec 25th or not.

December 25th, 2022 03:09

Black Squares
L. B. Mek said:

yup, if you have time
check out an old piece of mine titled
\'veracity\'s assassins\'..
and that BLM fraud couple
with their Hollywood property purchases
has been well documented
but what\'s really shameful
is how these entitled, pseudo activist\'s
turn into spineless scamming, dictators
at a mere taste of money, power or control..
and they do it, get away with it
because apparently, the entire worlds is scared
to call a black activist a thief
because now the page has been flipped
where racism, activism
is a tool for confidence fraud
apparently, every white human
is a relative of a slaver
so if they dare to point out
the very fact
that two female black woman (as the leaders)
blatantly, stole millions of donated
\'charity\' money
then Blatantly, purchased
Hollywood homes
without even bothering to hide their name
while magazines across the word
lauded them
for being iconic feminists...?
then what happens
when the truth comes out
that obstinance of silence
as a wall of indifference
just like that Amber Heard, ignorance
so prevalent in the media world
because
people, are now indoctrinated in that
PC theology..
where apparently to champion feminism
and the need for minority\'s (not just black people)
to be given an equal opportunity to succeed
equates, to crimes
being committed by this identity groups
must be forgiven, without accusation
because, they\'re all
victims that need to protected
and removed from humanity\'s
\'need to be accountable for our actions\'
collective responsibility
and where will this take us
to that inevitable
retaliatory political mindset
where everyone gets fed up
with this PC bul sht
and its back
to socialism\'s, divisive tactics
natzi\'s concurring germany
first
with that fad narrative of antisemitism
based on a groundless poisonous heritage
of \'hatred\', germinating
from christian doctrines
against the very people, that
gave the world \'theology\'
let alone that whole
\'give the other cheek\' lesson
pointedly, chosen to be ignored
collectively
...
so now kanye, is allowed to spew hatred
because that\'s what his christianity
has emboldened him to inherit
as a mantra
as a go-to, pointing fingers blame
but
its ok, to call him mad
he\'s crazy
because he is male
if a black woman was saying
what kanye is
would there be widespread coverage?
will she be labelled crazy
or will we be talking about what caused her to \'change\'
how \'she\' must be a victim
...
fck
so deflating,
humanity, barely makes
one step of progress
from the 60\'s to 2020\'s
barely hundred years since
woman got to vote
and the conceited self-serving
sharks are waiting
to take advantage and warp all that progress
how many millions of master\'s and doctorates
do woman hold, yet
our screens are filled
with female militant newsreaders
who can\'t formulate an objective opinion
now, its ideological gang warfare
\'I\'m a female so I support All Females\'
\'I\'m a human being with coloured skin so I support all coloured people\'
\'I\'m a man so I\'m to blame, for my ancestors
my role is to shut up
feel guilty and wait it out\'
...
fck!
Black Panther, \'Wakanda\'
supported by the whole world
a huge success,
Black Panther two comes out
now the narrative is
if you don\'t watch it or rate it, you\'re a racist
really?
so PC culture is a tool for stripping us
of individual thought or opinion?
so i\'m a racist black man
...
fck!
and yet
woman in rural india
are literally
being murdered, at birth
because
of that horrific mindset
where they\'re deemed
a waste of expense, an extra mouth to feed
then we have a situation manifesting
where there are no young woman in rural india
so gangs of men, patrol
to abuse and rape any woman
who dares
to stay out late...?
and here we are
in our \'first world feminism\'
being hijacked
for equally par rights
for the one percentile
making their celebrity millions
..
fck
and now
\'I am left feeling like a dinosaur
misogynistic and racist
archaic pig\'
because, this very truths
go-on
to embolden the KKk\'s and hate groups
waiting for societies far-left, tide
to change
look at the extremist right\'s progress
in politics, all over the world
italy, france etc
....
fck!
FUCK!!!
so demoralizingly shitty
this cyclical need for self-destruction
humanity
is so addicted to...
Fck
I\'m sorry, it all just came out
but what the hell do I know
I\'m just another overopinionated fool

December 23rd, 2022 09:18

What If Aliens Are Really Demons?
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:

Who knows aye.

December 20th, 2022 07:30

What If Aliens Are Really Demons?
Saxon Crow said:

What if they\'re angels?!

December 20th, 2022 07:25

Underground Hip Hop Special
L. B. Mek said:

hope you have a great time!
stay safe


December 19th, 2022 07:13

Tories Steal From Purses Of Nurses
Doggerel Dave said:

This is one of your best, mate - instead of a focus on the misdemeanors perpetrated by so called celebrities, you have approached the core of the problem. With focus you could crack it......

December 18th, 2022 03:17

Tories Steal From Purses Of Nurses
Goldfinch60 said:

Such very true words, the politicians will never listen.

Andy

December 18th, 2022 01:34

Pitted Against One Another
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:

Thank you 😁. Means a lot.

December 16th, 2022 06:47

Pitted Against One Another
L. B. Mek said:

I do like it when you let your talent show in your work
these wording is so relatable and arrives
upon my eyes, like a favoured voice
in my ears
grace does not exist within eloquence
and poetic merit, alone
there is artistry, in inking veracity
transparent and free..
may you never change, dear Poet
thank you!

December 16th, 2022 06:33

Thick As Pig Shit (Jennifer Lawrence)
L. B. Mek said:

go easy on this celeb ladies, dear poet
they exist in such a toxic bubble of ignorance
most of this Hollywood \'feminist\'s\'
can\'t even spell the word
let alone
comprehend its true meaning
they\'re just fighting for their pay rises and future job opportunities
and you know how tabloids warp narrative
exploiting with their leading questions
and curating sensationalised content
to turn us all into reactionary bullies
they won\'t stop, so we have to rise about it
else we\'ll just waste our energy
confronted by the stupendously moronic
at every click...

December 12th, 2022 01:37

The Freezing Air
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Coolcuk, they just do not care.

Andy

December 11th, 2022 03:06

The Freezing Air
arqios said:

Frozen here, in and out and around.... brrr or is it grrr....

December 10th, 2022 19:42

Feel The Music (Half A Penny)
Goldfinch60 said:

I am on Amazon Prime for my music streaming.

Andy

December 10th, 2022 02:47

Feel The Music (Half A Penny)
arqios said:

It appears to have started with profit margins in the so-called \"Dark Ages,\" \'one a penny two a penny hot cross buns!\'

December 9th, 2022 06:59

Hollyweird (Kirstie Alley)
L. B. Mek said:

may she rest in peace
I so loved her in cheers
and those \'look who\'s talking\' films
a strong female image she portrayed
till the end
she left her mark, I laud her for that

December 9th, 2022 06:02

Hollyweird (Kirstie Alley)
arqios said:

The story behind the story is almost always unlikely to the common perception. The word for that is deception, and we swim in this delusion which is a concoction brewed by the faceless but ever present ones. Thanks for sharing.

December 8th, 2022 03:27

The Woke Stick
Doggerel Dave said:

Don\'t understand this woke thing (I don\'t) Is it the next move after \'Political Correctness\'?

December 6th, 2022 20:30

Thinking Out Of The Triangle
orchidee said:

Dunno about triangles, but I\'m trying to think outside the box. Someone taped it down when I was inside it. Lemme out!! lol.

December 5th, 2022 07:45



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