Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Professional Opinion
orchidee said:
But there\'s one more deception of Satan (or satan as some say, not even counting him worth a capital letter to his name), i.e. seeing him as a monster. The snake which \'hissed\' in Eden may have been a beautiful creature. If it was ugly, Adam and Eve may have ran away from it.
Now I don\'t know if E.T. was in Eden? lol.
October 11th, 2026 09:59
orchidee said:
But there\'s one more deception of Satan (or satan as some say, not even counting him worth a capital letter to his name), i.e. seeing him as a monster. The snake which \'hissed\' in Eden may have been a beautiful creature. If it was ugly, Adam and Eve may have ran away from it.
Now I don\'t know if E.T. was in Eden? lol.
October 11th, 2026 09:59
Professional Opinion
sorenbarrett said:
It is that tree of knowledge that we partake from to be cast into a cold world where labor is the key to survival and the tree of life forbidden. Here in this write I see the control and power symbolizing God as corporations and governments as well as authorities dictating the fate of the masses where individual life and choice is discounted for the gain of those in power. Nicely done powerful.
October 11th, 2026 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
It is that tree of knowledge that we partake from to be cast into a cold world where labor is the key to survival and the tree of life forbidden. Here in this write I see the control and power symbolizing God as corporations and governments as well as authorities dictating the fate of the masses where individual life and choice is discounted for the gain of those in power. Nicely done powerful.
October 11th, 2026 06:18
Lessons Learned
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Really enjoyed the rhyme in this, Shaun...but let me say personally, I don\'t see you as a hateful person at all. A questioning one? Yes. And praise God for it. Anyone showing you hate ought to look in the mirror. As Soren said above, we all have our lakes of fire to avoid. Who can judge? BTW, I go hard on myself too, so I\'m saying this to both of us...God is grace. Show yourself some love and grace too, my friend. God wants that for us. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 10th, 2026 18:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Really enjoyed the rhyme in this, Shaun...but let me say personally, I don\'t see you as a hateful person at all. A questioning one? Yes. And praise God for it. Anyone showing you hate ought to look in the mirror. As Soren said above, we all have our lakes of fire to avoid. Who can judge? BTW, I go hard on myself too, so I\'m saying this to both of us...God is grace. Show yourself some love and grace too, my friend. God wants that for us. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 10th, 2026 18:39
A World On Fire
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Shaun...I\'m tired of watching people die and then seeing strangers online cheer about it. What the hell are we doing? Excellent write, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 10th, 2026 18:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Shaun...I\'m tired of watching people die and then seeing strangers online cheer about it. What the hell are we doing? Excellent write, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 10th, 2026 18:08
Lessons Learned
orchidee said:
Ohh, see E.T. film. That\'ll cheer ya up! lol.
October 10th, 2026 10:42
orchidee said:
Ohh, see E.T. film. That\'ll cheer ya up! lol.
October 10th, 2026 10:42
Lessons Learned
sorenbarrett said:
We all have our lakes of fire we avoid. Nicely said Shaun
October 10th, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
We all have our lakes of fire we avoid. Nicely said Shaun
October 10th, 2026 03:58
A World On Fire
Kevin Hulme said:
# Imagine all the People...# If we all came together and helped one another, the World would be alot better. I know that\'s an Old Statement but True. Some People are so Pig Headed.
Good Write.
October 9th, 2026 16:46
Kevin Hulme said:
# Imagine all the People...# If we all came together and helped one another, the World would be alot better. I know that\'s an Old Statement but True. Some People are so Pig Headed.
Good Write.
October 9th, 2026 16:46
A World On Fire
sorenbarrett said:
A dystopian write of an apocalyptic proportion. Nicely done my friend
October 9th, 2026 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
A dystopian write of an apocalyptic proportion. Nicely done my friend
October 9th, 2026 13:05
Real Wordplay Is Endangered
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Shaun! You\'ve certainly got some fire in you today, my friend ! I appreciate artists who aren\'t afraid to challenge the business that\'s supposed to support them. There\'s far too much money involved for us not to ask some uncomfortable questions. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 8th, 2026 21:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Shaun! You\'ve certainly got some fire in you today, my friend ! I appreciate artists who aren\'t afraid to challenge the business that\'s supposed to support them. There\'s far too much money involved for us not to ask some uncomfortable questions. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 8th, 2026 21:11
Real Wordplay Is Endangered
Doggerel Dave said:
Not like you to get so heated for so long.
I don\'t pretend to understand the stuff you write about here, I only know that years ago I saw a vid of an exponent doing a rap. Life is a learning experience, and those experiences are lessons. I absorbed that lesson well and haven\'t been back since.
October 8th, 2026 04:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Not like you to get so heated for so long.
I don\'t pretend to understand the stuff you write about here, I only know that years ago I saw a vid of an exponent doing a rap. Life is a learning experience, and those experiences are lessons. I absorbed that lesson well and haven\'t been back since.
October 8th, 2026 04:22
Real Wordplay Is Endangered
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this rap it felt earthy. Well done
October 8th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this rap it felt earthy. Well done
October 8th, 2026 04:00
Thankful
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I\'ve had to make some pretty significant changes in my own life, and I know firsthand that they don\'t happen overnight. I\'m glad you\'re finding your footing, my friend. Keep going! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 7th, 2026 22:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I\'ve had to make some pretty significant changes in my own life, and I know firsthand that they don\'t happen overnight. I\'m glad you\'re finding your footing, my friend. Keep going! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 7th, 2026 22:06
Thankful
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Only one that could become idolatrous to me - a guy named Edward Thompson - that\'s his alias! lol.
October 7th, 2026 02:46
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Only one that could become idolatrous to me - a guy named Edward Thompson - that\'s his alias! lol.
October 7th, 2026 02:46
Celebrities (Celebrate Deities)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That title hooked me immediately, Shaun. There really is something strange about how readily we build pedestals for people simply because they’re famous. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2026 22:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That title hooked me immediately, Shaun. There really is something strange about how readily we build pedestals for people simply because they’re famous. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2026 22:57
Celebrities (Celebrate Deities)
orchidee said:
What a bore they are! lol. Whose got time for their antics? lol.
October 6th, 2026 12:14
orchidee said:
What a bore they are! lol. Whose got time for their antics? lol.
October 6th, 2026 12:14
Celebrities (Celebrate Deities)
sorenbarrett said:
Fame a seductive game that leads the holder into deeper and deeper water. The same that Narcissus fell in and drown and so do they in arrogance. There are few that know how to swim in those waters. Well written Shaun
October 6th, 2026 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
Fame a seductive game that leads the holder into deeper and deeper water. The same that Narcissus fell in and drown and so do they in arrogance. There are few that know how to swim in those waters. Well written Shaun
October 6th, 2026 03:53
The Antichrist Spirit
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed hope for a better tomorrow should always be there. A lovely write my friend
October 5th, 2026 13:17
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed hope for a better tomorrow should always be there. A lovely write my friend
October 5th, 2026 13:17
The Antichrist Spirit
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Ahh, The Walking Dead - Eastenders! Worse than many horror films. lol.
October 5th, 2026 13:04
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Ahh, The Walking Dead - Eastenders! Worse than many horror films. lol.
October 5th, 2026 13:04
The Antichrist Spirit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, you had me at TWD. 😂 That\'s part of what keeps me watching...strip away everything holding civilization together and suddenly you get a pretty uncomfortable look at humanity. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2026 12:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, you had me at TWD. 😂 That\'s part of what keeps me watching...strip away everything holding civilization together and suddenly you get a pretty uncomfortable look at humanity. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2026 12:58
I Don\'t Have To See Him
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Absolutely, Shaun. 🙏 I\'ve never needed every question answered before taking the next step in faith. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 4th, 2026 23:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Absolutely, Shaun. 🙏 I\'ve never needed every question answered before taking the next step in faith. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 4th, 2026 23:55
I Don\'t Have To See Him
orchidee said:
Good write SM.
Meanwhile - it\'s an obsession, fanatical - I must SEE..... you-know-who, alias Eric Turner. lol.
October 4th, 2026 08:44
orchidee said:
Good write SM.
Meanwhile - it\'s an obsession, fanatical - I must SEE..... you-know-who, alias Eric Turner. lol.
October 4th, 2026 08:44
I Don\'t Have To See Him
sorenbarrett said:
A poem based on faith, so hard to have faith in anything now days and even what one sees one can not always believe with AI, CGI, Photo Editing and fake news. Nicely done
October 4th, 2026 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem based on faith, so hard to have faith in anything now days and even what one sees one can not always believe with AI, CGI, Photo Editing and fake news. Nicely done
October 4th, 2026 03:34
Intrinsically Plotted
orchidee said:
Good write SM. They\'re going to look for E.T. lol.
October 3rd, 2026 10:56
orchidee said:
Good write SM. They\'re going to look for E.T. lol.
October 3rd, 2026 10:56
Intrinsically Plotted
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this one comes in swinging...I always love how tight your poetry is, bro! For me...Q is just an unnecessarily giant letter on a NyQuil bottle causing trouble in the medicine cabinet. And now that I don\'t drink, I avoid NyQuil. Keeps me alert and sober. 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 3rd, 2026 06:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this one comes in swinging...I always love how tight your poetry is, bro! For me...Q is just an unnecessarily giant letter on a NyQuil bottle causing trouble in the medicine cabinet. And now that I don\'t drink, I avoid NyQuil. Keeps me alert and sober. 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 3rd, 2026 06:44
Intrinsically Plotted
sorenbarrett said:
The modern world sometimes makes one feel as if they are in a sci-fi movie or a different dimension things move too fast and are technologically removed. Well done Shaun
October 3rd, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
The modern world sometimes makes one feel as if they are in a sci-fi movie or a different dimension things move too fast and are technologically removed. Well done Shaun
October 3rd, 2026 04:00
Awakenings Worldwide
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I dig that awakening here isn’t presented as some peaceful little moment of enlightenment. It’s disruptive. Once you start questioning what you’ve absorbed and how you’ve been shaped, there’s no particularly comfortable way back to sleep. Fantastic write, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 2nd, 2026 11:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I dig that awakening here isn’t presented as some peaceful little moment of enlightenment. It’s disruptive. Once you start questioning what you’ve absorbed and how you’ve been shaped, there’s no particularly comfortable way back to sleep. Fantastic write, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 2nd, 2026 11:17
Awakenings Worldwide
sorenbarrett said:
\"Float like a butterfly sting like a bee\" a fun read that has rap qualities. Nicely done Shaun
October 2nd, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
\"Float like a butterfly sting like a bee\" a fun read that has rap qualities. Nicely done Shaun
October 2nd, 2026 04:21
Awakenings Worldwide
orchidee said:
Good write Eddie (Thompson), erm, Shaun. lol.
October 2nd, 2026 02:26
orchidee said:
Good write Eddie (Thompson), erm, Shaun. lol.
October 2nd, 2026 02:26
Energy Vampires (Part.2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, no argument from me on this one. Call it psychic vampires, energy vampires, whatever...some people absolutely leave you more depleted than they found you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 09:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, no argument from me on this one. Call it psychic vampires, energy vampires, whatever...some people absolutely leave you more depleted than they found you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 09:48
Energy Vampires (Part.2)
orchidee said:
That pic may be a relative of....... Eric Thompson, for example. lol.
October 1st, 2026 09:21
orchidee said:
That pic may be a relative of....... Eric Thompson, for example. lol.
October 1st, 2026 09:21
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