Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Mavericks Awaken
sorenbarrett said:
Some are sound sleepers and a trumpet call will not awaken them. Nicely written
May 5th, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Some are sound sleepers and a trumpet call will not awaken them. Nicely written
May 5th, 2026 03:45
Mavericks Awaken
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I suspect the demons on the left look more like the angels on the right. They do disguise themselves, the demons. It says \'The devil and his angels\' too - they were (may still be) beautiful angels in appearance. Ohh, ask E.T., he knows these things, cos he\'s gone home. lol.
May 5th, 2026 02:25
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I suspect the demons on the left look more like the angels on the right. They do disguise themselves, the demons. It says \'The devil and his angels\' too - they were (may still be) beautiful angels in appearance. Ohh, ask E.T., he knows these things, cos he\'s gone home. lol.
May 5th, 2026 02:25
Random Rhyming (Part.8)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, you got me with this one…just rolling from one lane to the next and somehow it all holds together 😄 fun ride, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, you got me with this one…just rolling from one lane to the next and somehow it all holds together 😄 fun ride, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:39
Random Rhyming (Part.8)
orchidee said:
Doh! I phoned 666 in an emergency. I had the phone upside down. lol.
May 4th, 2026 10:41
orchidee said:
Doh! I phoned 666 in an emergency. I had the phone upside down. lol.
May 4th, 2026 10:41
Random Rhyming (Part.8)
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that bounces from subject to subject in a random pattern.
May 4th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that bounces from subject to subject in a random pattern.
May 4th, 2026 03:59
Random Rhyming (Part.7)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries a strong current… that mix of questioning, randomness, and sharp turns gives it a restless energy that works. It keeps you off balance in a good way. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 3rd, 2026 16:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries a strong current… that mix of questioning, randomness, and sharp turns gives it a restless energy that works. It keeps you off balance in a good way. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 3rd, 2026 16:09
Random Rhyming (Part.7)
sorenbarrett said:
The free association of thought is a revealing thing that bounces from one thing to another triggered by the last like balls on a pool table. Nicely done
May 3rd, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
The free association of thought is a revealing thing that bounces from one thing to another triggered by the last like balls on a pool table. Nicely done
May 3rd, 2026 04:19
Random Rhyming (Part.7)
orchidee said:
Whose are these people? I\'m not knowing them! lol.
May 3rd, 2026 02:14
orchidee said:
Whose are these people? I\'m not knowing them! lol.
May 3rd, 2026 02:14
Random Rhyming (Part.7)
Poetic Dan said:
Nothing better than a random rhyme
All help clear the mind.
Asleep or awake it all gets lost in time.
Thank you for sharing your mind
Keep up the shine.
May 3rd, 2026 01:04
Poetic Dan said:
Nothing better than a random rhyme
All help clear the mind.
Asleep or awake it all gets lost in time.
Thank you for sharing your mind
Keep up the shine.
May 3rd, 2026 01:04
Boom, Boom, Bap (Part.2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, that “boom, boom, bap” line really anchors the whole thing…you can feel the rhythm shift right there. It pulls the reader into that older sound and sets the tone for everything that follows. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, that “boom, boom, bap” line really anchors the whole thing…you can feel the rhythm shift right there. It pulls the reader into that older sound and sets the tone for everything that follows. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:11
Boom, Boom, Bap (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how change always becomes the same just a different wrapper (rapper)
May 2nd, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how change always becomes the same just a different wrapper (rapper)
May 2nd, 2026 05:01
God, Save Me From Hellfire
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Save me too, dear Lord…but if you show up looking like that dude in the picture, I might jump back in! 🤣 All kidding aside, Shaun, this hit me hard…there’s a raw, unfiltered honesty running straight through this. It feels like you’re just laying it all out…no polish, no pretending…just truth as you’re walking it. That kind of directness carries weight. I will say this…not everyone is smoking to get high. Where I live, it’s prescribed medically, and I’m one of those patients…it helps me manage PTSD, anxiety, and depression. Of course, that’s not everyone’s reason 😏💨…but there’s some nuance there. All the same, strong piece, my friend. I really enjoy reading your work. Always thought-provoking. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 05:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Save me too, dear Lord…but if you show up looking like that dude in the picture, I might jump back in! 🤣 All kidding aside, Shaun, this hit me hard…there’s a raw, unfiltered honesty running straight through this. It feels like you’re just laying it all out…no polish, no pretending…just truth as you’re walking it. That kind of directness carries weight. I will say this…not everyone is smoking to get high. Where I live, it’s prescribed medically, and I’m one of those patients…it helps me manage PTSD, anxiety, and depression. Of course, that’s not everyone’s reason 😏💨…but there’s some nuance there. All the same, strong piece, my friend. I really enjoy reading your work. Always thought-provoking. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 05:55
God, Save Me From Hellfire
sorenbarrett said:
The rapping thoughts rambling through the poetic mind of one thinking of a common day. Well done
May 1st, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
The rapping thoughts rambling through the poetic mind of one thinking of a common day. Well done
May 1st, 2026 03:54
God, Save Me From Hellfire
orchidee said:
Good write SM. And saved from horror shows - Eastenders, Neighbours, etc. Who can bear them?! lol. That hideous jangle of that naff Neighbours song - another episode about to start. lol.
May 1st, 2026 02:43
orchidee said:
Good write SM. And saved from horror shows - Eastenders, Neighbours, etc. Who can bear them?! lol. That hideous jangle of that naff Neighbours song - another episode about to start. lol.
May 1st, 2026 02:43
Writing Is So Much Fun
orchidee said:
Here\'s a short poem from me - The End.
Erm, that\'s it! lol.
April 30th, 2026 09:28
orchidee said:
Here\'s a short poem from me - The End.
Erm, that\'s it! lol.
April 30th, 2026 09:28
Writing Is So Much Fun
sorenbarrett said:
Well said! To each their own but as for me written expression is my style
April 30th, 2026 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Well said! To each their own but as for me written expression is my style
April 30th, 2026 04:57
The Mystical Flute
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this one grabbed me right away…there’s a playful setup that turns on you fast. That shift from curiosity to consequence hits clean and keeps the tension moving. It’s a fun concept with a dark edge. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 29th, 2026 23:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this one grabbed me right away…there’s a playful setup that turns on you fast. That shift from curiosity to consequence hits clean and keeps the tension moving. It’s a fun concept with a dark edge. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 29th, 2026 23:37
The Mystical Flute
sorenbarrett said:
Here we have a variation on the violin of gold story and the devil. Nicely done Shaun
April 29th, 2026 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Here we have a variation on the violin of gold story and the devil. Nicely done Shaun
April 29th, 2026 04:55
This Arrangement
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a real urgency in this…like you’re trying to wake someone up mid-thought. The question about who benefits from distraction is what really stays with me…it opens the piece beyond itself. I’ve sat in that same tension before, between questioning and being told what’s true. You brought that to the surface here. Strong piece, Shaun. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 28th, 2026 06:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a real urgency in this…like you’re trying to wake someone up mid-thought. The question about who benefits from distraction is what really stays with me…it opens the piece beyond itself. I’ve sat in that same tension before, between questioning and being told what’s true. You brought that to the surface here. Strong piece, Shaun. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 28th, 2026 06:07
This Arrangement
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic questions well asked. Motive is behind all behavior. Nicely written
April 28th, 2026 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic questions well asked. Motive is behind all behavior. Nicely written
April 28th, 2026 04:50
Nuka-Cola (A Fallout Poem)
NafisaSB said:
different from your usual verse - enjoyed it..
April 27th, 2026 07:08
NafisaSB said:
different from your usual verse - enjoyed it..
April 27th, 2026 07:08
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