Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Chasing Money In The Rat Race
orchidee said:
Ahh, some relatives of E.T. there?! lol.
August 15th, 2026 11:18
orchidee said:
Ahh, some relatives of E.T. there?! lol.
August 15th, 2026 11:18
Chasing Money In The Rat Race
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what struck me most is the sense of exhaustion underneath the rebellion. The money, the hierarchy, the pressure...it all builds toward that refusal to keep accepting the arrangement as normal. Powerful work, Shaun. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what struck me most is the sense of exhaustion underneath the rebellion. The money, the hierarchy, the pressure...it all builds toward that refusal to keep accepting the arrangement as normal. Powerful work, Shaun. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 08:14
Chasing Money In The Rat Race
sorenbarrett said:
I feel you Shaun. I have been there at all levels grunt, middle management, top management they all suck always slave to someone. Even at the top slave to the share holder or government laws and regulations the voter. Capitalism sucks unfortunately so does every other system.
August 15th, 2026 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
I feel you Shaun. I have been there at all levels grunt, middle management, top management they all suck always slave to someone. Even at the top slave to the share holder or government laws and regulations the voter. Capitalism sucks unfortunately so does every other system.
August 15th, 2026 06:08
Conspiracies Now Come True
Tristan Robert Lange said:
haun, this one comes in swinging. There’s a real sense of distrust and anger running through it...like the speaker sees deception everywhere and is done pretending otherwise. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2026 09:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
haun, this one comes in swinging. There’s a real sense of distrust and anger running through it...like the speaker sees deception everywhere and is done pretending otherwise. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2026 09:41
Conspiracies Now Come True
sorenbarrett said:
Shaun I swore I just read this and responded to it but I must be hallucinating my friend. One never knows what to believe these days. What ever that was a great special effect to the poem itself
August 14th, 2026 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Shaun I swore I just read this and responded to it but I must be hallucinating my friend. One never knows what to believe these days. What ever that was a great special effect to the poem itself
August 14th, 2026 04:58
Butterflies And Breadsticks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Shaun…this is a loaded one. You take a swing at ego, manufactured ambition, hidden loyalties, temptation, and the search for something genuinely true underneath all of it. It reads like a warning not to surrender your mind or soul too cheaply. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Shaun…this is a loaded one. You take a swing at ego, manufactured ambition, hidden loyalties, temptation, and the search for something genuinely true underneath all of it. It reads like a warning not to surrender your mind or soul too cheaply. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:45
Butterflies And Breadsticks
orchidee said:
Not tonight Jezebel, erm, Josephine! lol.
August 13th, 2026 08:50
orchidee said:
Not tonight Jezebel, erm, Josephine! lol.
August 13th, 2026 08:50
Butterflies And Breadsticks
sorenbarrett said:
This one works off dualities and takes a twist at the end. Nicely done.
August 13th, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
This one works off dualities and takes a twist at the end. Nicely done.
August 13th, 2026 04:34
A Graphics Card Meltdown
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this cracked me up! 🤣 Nothing like spending money on an upgrade and then immediately launching into an existential crisis over whether it was actually an upgrade. Been there, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this cracked me up! 🤣 Nothing like spending money on an upgrade and then immediately launching into an existential crisis over whether it was actually an upgrade. Been there, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:22
A Graphics Card Meltdown
sorenbarrett said:
Nice asking advice about a gaming vice. A fun read in rhyme.
August 12th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Nice asking advice about a gaming vice. A fun read in rhyme.
August 12th, 2026 03:56
Wake Up
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is an energetic portrait of a mind attempting to sort genuine concerns from speculation. The humor gives it personality, while the more provocative assertions reveal why skepticism must also be directed toward our own conclusions. Challenging work, my friend! 🖤🙏
August 4th, 2026 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is an energetic portrait of a mind attempting to sort genuine concerns from speculation. The humor gives it personality, while the more provocative assertions reveal why skepticism must also be directed toward our own conclusions. Challenging work, my friend! 🖤🙏
August 4th, 2026 08:04
Wake Up
Doggerel Dave said:
I \'got\' about every third line, which only means that my experiences are different, but having read your stuff for some time, I know where you are coming from.
Hope you keep going.
August 4th, 2026 06:33
Doggerel Dave said:
I \'got\' about every third line, which only means that my experiences are different, but having read your stuff for some time, I know where you are coming from.
Hope you keep going.
August 4th, 2026 06:33
Wake Up
sorenbarrett said:
Changing times whether just the hour or the decade. Well written in good rhyme and meter.
August 4th, 2026 03:07
sorenbarrett said:
Changing times whether just the hour or the decade. Well written in good rhyme and meter.
August 4th, 2026 03:07
Wake Up
orchidee said:
Near the end of your poem - one question must be answered. Where is Eddie Taylor, or some guy of the same initials? We knows him! lol.
August 4th, 2026 01:46
orchidee said:
Near the end of your poem - one question must be answered. Where is Eddie Taylor, or some guy of the same initials? We knows him! lol.
August 4th, 2026 01:46
Take No Oaths And Bow Down To No False Gods
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a thoughtful piece. I appreciate the reminder to stay rooted in faith and spiritual discipline, especially in a world that so often feels chaotic. That call to keep our eyes on what truly matters really came through. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 17:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a thoughtful piece. I appreciate the reminder to stay rooted in faith and spiritual discipline, especially in a world that so often feels chaotic. That call to keep our eyes on what truly matters really came through. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 17:38
Take No Oaths And Bow Down To No False Gods
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of biblical advice well written Shaun
August 3rd, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of biblical advice well written Shaun
August 3rd, 2026 03:48
Take No Oaths And Bow Down To No False Gods
orchidee said:
Good write Ephesian, erm, Shaun. lol.
August 3rd, 2026 01:48
orchidee said:
Good write Ephesian, erm, Shaun. lol.
August 3rd, 2026 01:48
A Lust Demon (Part.3)
orchidee said:
I wouldn\'t say the google Play logo is demonic. But some people won\'t use \'.daemon\' domain (or whatever it\'s called)!
August 2nd, 2026 13:21
orchidee said:
I wouldn\'t say the google Play logo is demonic. But some people won\'t use \'.daemon\' domain (or whatever it\'s called)!
August 2nd, 2026 13:21
A Lust Demon (Part.3)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Gripping work, Shaun. The speaker’s determination to take his experiences seriously gives this real conviction...while the unexpected cultural observations keep its questioning energy alive. Fascinating write, my friend! 🖤🙏
August 2nd, 2026 07:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Gripping work, Shaun. The speaker’s determination to take his experiences seriously gives this real conviction...while the unexpected cultural observations keep its questioning energy alive. Fascinating write, my friend! 🖤🙏
August 2nd, 2026 07:02
I Don\'t Smoke Or Drink
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a confident declaration of personal renewal. The lighter cultural reference works beautifully against the heavier concerns...and the sense of finally becoming more fully yourself really comes through. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a confident declaration of personal renewal. The lighter cultural reference works beautifully against the heavier concerns...and the sense of finally becoming more fully yourself really comes through. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:43
A Lust Demon (Part.3)
sorenbarrett said:
Good question and I don\'t have the answer. A fun read Shaun. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Good question and I don\'t have the answer. A fun read Shaun. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2026 04:06
Warrington Car Boot Sale
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this made me smile. There’s something wonderfully down-to-earth about it…just the simple excitement of getting there before the best bargains disappear. Fun little write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this made me smile. There’s something wonderfully down-to-earth about it…just the simple excitement of getting there before the best bargains disappear. Fun little write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:25
I Don\'t Smoke Or Drink
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that set forth a healthy attitude. Nicely written with good meter and flow it makes sense. Maybe if society had any sobriety it would reset the age limit for smoking and drinking to sixty five where if still alive one could smoke and drink dying early to save on social security or maybe not taking about twenty years to acquire cancer one would then pass at a golden eighty five.
August 1st, 2026 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that set forth a healthy attitude. Nicely written with good meter and flow it makes sense. Maybe if society had any sobriety it would reset the age limit for smoking and drinking to sixty five where if still alive one could smoke and drink dying early to save on social security or maybe not taking about twenty years to acquire cancer one would then pass at a golden eighty five.
August 1st, 2026 09:46
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