Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Retro
orchidee said:
Oh yes, and, e.g. Blue Peter presenters had to be squeaky clean and \'nice\' - some of them were shifty and shady in real life though!
November 5th, 2025 05:10
orchidee said:
Oh yes, and, e.g. Blue Peter presenters had to be squeaky clean and \'nice\' - some of them were shifty and shady in real life though!
November 5th, 2025 05:10
Retro
sorenbarrett said:
A very good name for this poem. Good images as well. Nicely done it took me back a few years.
November 5th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
A very good name for this poem. Good images as well. Nicely done it took me back a few years.
November 5th, 2025 04:02
Chaotic Classics
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The flows well and would make an excellent spoken word or slam poem! I really do love the rhythm you throw in my friend! Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 4th, 2025 15:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The flows well and would make an excellent spoken word or slam poem! I really do love the rhythm you throw in my friend! Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 4th, 2025 15:16
Chaotic Classics
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds sever allusions to other works and I may have missed some. the 616 and 1610, red kite as well. An enigmatic poem clearly cryptic but equally transparent. Well done
November 4th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds sever allusions to other works and I may have missed some. the 616 and 1610, red kite as well. An enigmatic poem clearly cryptic but equally transparent. Well done
November 4th, 2025 04:07
Let Me Write
NafisaSB said:
well, - keep on writing, and sharing - that\'s all i can say...
November 4th, 2025 03:13
NafisaSB said:
well, - keep on writing, and sharing - that\'s all i can say...
November 4th, 2025 03:13
Chaotic Classics
orchidee said:
Now - what universe is a certain chappie in? ET. lol.
November 4th, 2025 03:04
orchidee said:
Now - what universe is a certain chappie in? ET. lol.
November 4th, 2025 03:04
The Death Of Inspiration
sorenbarrett said:
A good write about a hot topic. I wonder is it ever good to become dependent. It seems that, that is where we are heading. Nicely done
November 3rd, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
A good write about a hot topic. I wonder is it ever good to become dependent. It seems that, that is where we are heading. Nicely done
November 3rd, 2025 04:01
The Death Of Inspiration
orchidee said:
Yet often AI comes up with useful summary things, e.g. on Google.
November 3rd, 2025 03:20
orchidee said:
Yet often AI comes up with useful summary things, e.g. on Google.
November 3rd, 2025 03:20
The Unseen
orchidee said:
Did you see someone - an alien, we knows him, a certain guy - or was he unseen?! lol.
November 2nd, 2025 12:28
orchidee said:
Did you see someone - an alien, we knows him, a certain guy - or was he unseen?! lol.
November 2nd, 2025 12:28
The Unseen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And there are MANY OF THEM out there! Well done, Shawn! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 2nd, 2025 08:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And there are MANY OF THEM out there! Well done, Shawn! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 2nd, 2025 08:15
The Unseen
sorenbarrett said:
A series of rhymes and near rhymes of the same ending grace this poem building to its end. Nicely done
November 2nd, 2025 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
A series of rhymes and near rhymes of the same ending grace this poem building to its end. Nicely done
November 2nd, 2025 03:40
A Walk Into Town
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Is that the pic? I want to walk there! LOL! Loved the poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2025 06:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Is that the pic? I want to walk there! LOL! Loved the poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2025 06:01
A Walk Into Town
sorenbarrett said:
Quite descriptive in its imagery it seems a literal poetic painting yet something nags at my mind asking about the possible metaphor involved in this picture. Fallen tree, narrow passage, society on the other side, could there be?
November 1st, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Quite descriptive in its imagery it seems a literal poetic painting yet something nags at my mind asking about the possible metaphor involved in this picture. Fallen tree, narrow passage, society on the other side, could there be?
November 1st, 2025 04:21
A Walk Into Town
orchidee said:
I\'ve had to turn back on walks sometimes - trees that have fallen, and I cannot get over nor under them.
November 1st, 2025 02:52
orchidee said:
I\'ve had to turn back on walks sometimes - trees that have fallen, and I cannot get over nor under them.
November 1st, 2025 02:52
Let Me Write
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LET ME WRITE. A-friggin\'-men! Man, I cannot tell you how much I needed to read this tonight. Thank you, my friend. A fave for sure! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2025 20:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LET ME WRITE. A-friggin\'-men! Man, I cannot tell you how much I needed to read this tonight. Thank you, my friend. A fave for sure! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2025 20:11
Let Me Write
sorenbarrett said:
I feel like that some times and like the way you blend the languages to keep the rhyme
October 31st, 2025 16:18
sorenbarrett said:
I feel like that some times and like the way you blend the languages to keep the rhyme
October 31st, 2025 16:18
In My Crosshairs
NafisaSB said:
So explicitly detailed I can almost visualize it
October 29th, 2025 12:13
NafisaSB said:
So explicitly detailed I can almost visualize it
October 29th, 2025 12:13
80s Action (Part.2)
NafisaSB said:
my son was a huge fan, so can understand where this comes from...
October 29th, 2025 07:31
NafisaSB said:
my son was a huge fan, so can understand where this comes from...
October 29th, 2025 07:31
Epiphany
orchidee said:
This could be titled \'January 6th\' - the festival of the Epiphany. lol. Rhyming with relevance - yes what rhymes with \'vunce\'? lol. You seen many vunces around?
A puzzle is: What rhymes with \'orange\'? Something \'inge\' (sounds like part of hinge). lol
Do shut up now, you\'re rambling, says my talking dog Fido to me!
October 27th, 2025 09:19
orchidee said:
This could be titled \'January 6th\' - the festival of the Epiphany. lol. Rhyming with relevance - yes what rhymes with \'vunce\'? lol. You seen many vunces around?
A puzzle is: What rhymes with \'orange\'? Something \'inge\' (sounds like part of hinge). lol
Do shut up now, you\'re rambling, says my talking dog Fido to me!
October 27th, 2025 09:19
Epiphany
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Read and read and still need to read. Amen to that! Wonderful write, Shawn. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2025 09:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Read and read and still need to read. Amen to that! Wonderful write, Shawn. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2025 09:14
Epiphany
sorenbarrett said:
For the first time ever I\'m giving a fave for a just two lines of wordplay and difficult word rhyme
(Artificial intelligence will rule with an iron fist but no real relevance,
While the elites pack their trunks up and move away like elephants.)
The double meaning on trunk and its application to the previous line in elephant and to the present line elite packing makes this charming but this is added to by the difficulty in rhyming the word elephant. For that feat along a fave my friend
October 27th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
For the first time ever I\'m giving a fave for a just two lines of wordplay and difficult word rhyme
(Artificial intelligence will rule with an iron fist but no real relevance,
While the elites pack their trunks up and move away like elephants.)
The double meaning on trunk and its application to the previous line in elephant and to the present line elite packing makes this charming but this is added to by the difficulty in rhyming the word elephant. For that feat along a fave my friend
October 27th, 2025 04:50
80s Action (Part.2)
rhmn_7 said:
80s movies were a different breed weren\'t they! Nice poem Shaun, waiting for No.3
October 26th, 2025 15:44
rhmn_7 said:
80s movies were a different breed weren\'t they! Nice poem Shaun, waiting for No.3
October 26th, 2025 15:44
It\'s Time For Payback
orchidee said:
Someone\'s nice surely, not a monster - you knows the outer-space guy, got two initials, dunno what his real name is. Might be Ed Ted! lol.
October 26th, 2025 10:55
orchidee said:
Someone\'s nice surely, not a monster - you knows the outer-space guy, got two initials, dunno what his real name is. Might be Ed Ted! lol.
October 26th, 2025 10:55
It\'s Time For Payback
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soical commentary with a prophetic edge. My cup of tea! Love this Shawn! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 26th, 2025 08:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soical commentary with a prophetic edge. My cup of tea! Love this Shawn! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 26th, 2025 08:03
It\'s Time For Payback
sorenbarrett said:
I take this as a sociopolitical statement in poetic form with rhyme. Well done
October 26th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
I take this as a sociopolitical statement in poetic form with rhyme. Well done
October 26th, 2025 04:18
The Heaviness Of Halloween
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well written Shawn. Philosophically/Theologically, what would the light be without the darkness? Horror has always been some of the more moralistic tales, the Bible is loaded with it, and Halloween happens to be this Christian’s favorite holiday. Truth is, apart from the sun we all sit in night eternal...and the same could be said spiritually too. So I say embrace it…Jesus did...and let your light shine all the more. Big Ol\' Jack-O\'-Lantern certainly helps with the light shining too. 🎃 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 24th, 2025 07:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well written Shawn. Philosophically/Theologically, what would the light be without the darkness? Horror has always been some of the more moralistic tales, the Bible is loaded with it, and Halloween happens to be this Christian’s favorite holiday. Truth is, apart from the sun we all sit in night eternal...and the same could be said spiritually too. So I say embrace it…Jesus did...and let your light shine all the more. Big Ol\' Jack-O\'-Lantern certainly helps with the light shining too. 🎃 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 24th, 2025 07:53
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