Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Puppet Faces
sorenbarrett said:
A harsh attack at suspected abuse in the selection process. Nicely worded in rhyme. Well done Shaun
August 25th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A harsh attack at suspected abuse in the selection process. Nicely worded in rhyme. Well done Shaun
August 25th, 2026 04:40
Antipsychotics For 18 Months
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a raw and honest piece, my friend. You capture the brutal contradiction of receiving treatment only to feel increasingly disconnected from your own body and humanity. Having experienced that relentless leg agitation myself, this landed personally too. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2026 08:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a raw and honest piece, my friend. You capture the brutal contradiction of receiving treatment only to feel increasingly disconnected from your own body and humanity. Having experienced that relentless leg agitation myself, this landed personally too. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2026 08:06
Antipsychotics For 18 Months
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks to the side effects of medication and how sometimes the side effects can be more dangerous and worse than what they are treating. the marketing and greed of pharmacology. Well written
August 24th, 2026 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks to the side effects of medication and how sometimes the side effects can be more dangerous and worse than what they are treating. the marketing and greed of pharmacology. Well written
August 24th, 2026 04:42
Antipsychotics For 18 Months
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I only take tablets if I really need them. All have some side effects, I suppose, though they can have positive uses.
Does E.T. take any medications? Doh! I just had to say that. lol.
August 24th, 2026 02:25
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I only take tablets if I really need them. All have some side effects, I suppose, though they can have positive uses.
Does E.T. take any medications? Doh! I just had to say that. lol.
August 24th, 2026 02:25
Through The Eyes Of God
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this captures the anxiety many people carry when imagining how God regards them. For me, grace means that divine sight reaches beyond every failure and recognizes the whole person with mercy rather than disgust. Thought-provoking work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this captures the anxiety many people carry when imagining how God regards them. For me, grace means that divine sight reaches beyond every failure and recognizes the whole person with mercy rather than disgust. Thought-provoking work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:46
Through The Eyes Of God
Cheeky Missy said:
Psalm 139:1-4, \"O LORD, Thou hast searched me, and known me. Thou knowest my downsitting and mine uprising, Thou understandest my thought afar off. Thou compassest my path and my lying down, and art acquainted with all my ways. For there is not a word in my tongue, but, lo, O LORD, Thou knowest it altogether.\"
August 23rd, 2026 07:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Psalm 139:1-4, \"O LORD, Thou hast searched me, and known me. Thou knowest my downsitting and mine uprising, Thou understandest my thought afar off. Thou compassest my path and my lying down, and art acquainted with all my ways. For there is not a word in my tongue, but, lo, O LORD, Thou knowest it altogether.\"
August 23rd, 2026 07:32
Through The Eyes Of God
sorenbarrett said:
Behind this poem is an interesting philosophical point, if he does know all then my actions are predetermined and therefore I can not be held responsible for them since I have no choice. There fore a just God can not punish me for them. Otherwise he does not know what I will do and there for does not know all and is not God. A mind provoking read.
August 23rd, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Behind this poem is an interesting philosophical point, if he does know all then my actions are predetermined and therefore I can not be held responsible for them since I have no choice. There fore a just God can not punish me for them. Otherwise he does not know what I will do and there for does not know all and is not God. A mind provoking read.
August 23rd, 2026 04:19
Through The Eyes Of God
orchidee said:
E.T. knows just about everything! lol.
August 23rd, 2026 02:02
orchidee said:
E.T. knows just about everything! lol.
August 23rd, 2026 02:02
Hayden Panettiere
orchidee said:
It\'s sad in a way, yet often - who\'s got time for their antics? The ones that are alive, that is! Doh!
August 22nd, 2026 12:45
orchidee said:
It\'s sad in a way, yet often - who\'s got time for their antics? The ones that are alive, that is! Doh!
August 22nd, 2026 12:45
Hayden Panettiere
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayden deserved far better from an industry that placed her before cameras as a child, Shaun. That deserves serious examination. I’m not following the murder or ritual sacrifice angle; I simply don’t see evidence for that. Besides...tragedy, sin, and evil don’t need all of that to affect people in real time. Still, I’m glad you wrote about it, my friend, as her death has been weighing heavily on my heart...and I am certainly keeping her family and loved ones in my prayers. An awful tragedy. 😢🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 11:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayden deserved far better from an industry that placed her before cameras as a child, Shaun. That deserves serious examination. I’m not following the murder or ritual sacrifice angle; I simply don’t see evidence for that. Besides...tragedy, sin, and evil don’t need all of that to affect people in real time. Still, I’m glad you wrote about it, my friend, as her death has been weighing heavily on my heart...and I am certainly keeping her family and loved ones in my prayers. An awful tragedy. 😢🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 11:13
Hayden Panettiere
Cheeky Missy said:
Why, oh why on earth does Marilyn Monoe seem to haunt, as if in the shadows, lurking?
August 22nd, 2026 10:29
Cheeky Missy said:
Why, oh why on earth does Marilyn Monoe seem to haunt, as if in the shadows, lurking?
August 22nd, 2026 10:29
Hayden Panettiere
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of a dead star. Well done Shaun
August 22nd, 2026 08:11
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of a dead star. Well done Shaun
August 22nd, 2026 08:11
Chasing Money In The Rat Race
RSM0812 said:
This is a good write. Thanks for posting this.
August 22nd, 2026 00:56
RSM0812 said:
This is a good write. Thanks for posting this.
August 22nd, 2026 00:56
You\'ve Always Got What It Takes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful and candid poem, Shaun! Owning mistakes, accepting help, protecting one’s mental health, and refusing to be drawn back into destructive patterns all require real strength. As someone who also no longer drinks, I especially honor your eleven months without alcohol. Keep going, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful and candid poem, Shaun! Owning mistakes, accepting help, protecting one’s mental health, and refusing to be drawn back into destructive patterns all require real strength. As someone who also no longer drinks, I especially honor your eleven months without alcohol. Keep going, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:41
You\'ve Always Got What It Takes
orchidee said:
Now I don\'t think that\'s E.T. hidden in that red mist there! lol.
August 21st, 2026 07:36
orchidee said:
Now I don\'t think that\'s E.T. hidden in that red mist there! lol.
August 21st, 2026 07:36
You\'ve Always Got What It Takes
sorenbarrett said:
Belief and faith remains within this poem with rhyme and timing well done Shaun
August 21st, 2026 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Belief and faith remains within this poem with rhyme and timing well done Shaun
August 21st, 2026 06:03
Chasing Money In The Rat Race
NafisaSB said:
even if you confront the bully managers, some are so thick skinned it will be a slanging match...may the righteous win...
August 21st, 2026 01:59
NafisaSB said:
even if you confront the bully managers, some are so thick skinned it will be a slanging match...may the righteous win...
August 21st, 2026 01:59
Strange Starers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You got me with this one, Shaun! What once felt intrusive becomes genuinely ridiculous once you stop granting it power. If someone has enough time to study you but cannot manage a greeting, boredom may indeed be the diagnosis. 🤣 Great write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You got me with this one, Shaun! What once felt intrusive becomes genuinely ridiculous once you stop granting it power. If someone has enough time to study you but cannot manage a greeting, boredom may indeed be the diagnosis. 🤣 Great write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:44
Strange Starers
Doggerel Dave said:
Just that first line will do me. Precicely.
August 20th, 2026 17:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Just that first line will do me. Precicely.
August 20th, 2026 17:23
Strange Starers
orchidee said:
Some people don\'t seem to blink! Meanwhile, you seen E.T.? Don\'t blink, or you\'ll miss him! lol.
August 20th, 2026 09:50
orchidee said:
Some people don\'t seem to blink! Meanwhile, you seen E.T.? Don\'t blink, or you\'ll miss him! lol.
August 20th, 2026 09:50
Strange Starers
sorenbarrett said:
There are those that do stare and now days if one reacts they may go off and shoot you. I like better the response the write gives of being ignored them looking away. Nice rhyme and flow it tells the state of society today.
August 20th, 2026 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
There are those that do stare and now days if one reacts they may go off and shoot you. I like better the response the write gives of being ignored them looking away. Nice rhyme and flow it tells the state of society today.
August 20th, 2026 03:38
Why Bother
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, the exhaustion and hurt here are palpable. This feels like the moment generosity finally collides with repeated disappointment...raw, angry, and painfully honest. Powerful expression, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 18th, 2026 21:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, the exhaustion and hurt here are palpable. This feels like the moment generosity finally collides with repeated disappointment...raw, angry, and painfully honest. Powerful expression, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 18th, 2026 21:40
Why Bother
sorenbarrett said:
A sad reflection of aging and those things that go with it. Nicely written in good rhyme and even meter. Well done
August 18th, 2026 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
A sad reflection of aging and those things that go with it. Nicely written in good rhyme and even meter. Well done
August 18th, 2026 04:49
Why Bother
orchidee said:
Erm, I don\'t fancy a tattoo of that word! Oops!
But I went for a tattoo (did I?) and the tattooist did \'Eddie Taylor\' and said, \'Well, you wanted a tattoo of E.T., so you said! Doh!
August 18th, 2026 04:48
orchidee said:
Erm, I don\'t fancy a tattoo of that word! Oops!
But I went for a tattoo (did I?) and the tattooist did \'Eddie Taylor\' and said, \'Well, you wanted a tattoo of E.T., so you said! Doh!
August 18th, 2026 04:48
Luciana
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is a lively celebration of an artist whose music clearly knows how to move a room. The humor and rhythm keep it bouncing throughout. Great fun, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 18:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is a lively celebration of an artist whose music clearly knows how to move a room. The humor and rhythm keep it bouncing throughout. Great fun, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 18:55
Luciana
sorenbarrett said:
A lifting of the awareness field in this poem. Was not aware of her. Well done
August 17th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
A lifting of the awareness field in this poem. Was not aware of her. Well done
August 17th, 2026 04:09
It Costs Nothing To Be Kind
arqios said:
And yet most require begging to be the least bit kind.
August 16th, 2026 07:04
arqios said:
And yet most require begging to be the least bit kind.
August 16th, 2026 07:04
It Costs Nothing To Be Kind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this comes from a place of real frustration with how casually people can treat one another. There’s anger here, but underneath it is a pretty simple demand...don’t lose your humanity. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2026 06:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this comes from a place of real frustration with how casually people can treat one another. There’s anger here, but underneath it is a pretty simple demand...don’t lose your humanity. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2026 06:32
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