Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Preach Forgiveness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries real urgency. The rhyme drives it forward like you’re pushing through something heavy. “Spiritual warfare, armour got a dent” lands with grit…it feels lived, not just said. There’s tension here that doesn’t pretend to be polished. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries real urgency. The rhyme drives it forward like you’re pushing through something heavy. “Spiritual warfare, armour got a dent” lands with grit…it feels lived, not just said. There’s tension here that doesn’t pretend to be polished. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:54
Preach Forgiveness
sorenbarrett said:
Such an interesting concept in the first lines where it is emphasized that any errors or even procrastination can be forgiven. The concept that repentance redeems all errors makes it so easy to say to hell with today I\'ll do it tomorrow. Is that the dent in spiritual armor? A most interesting write
February 22nd, 2026 09:47
sorenbarrett said:
Such an interesting concept in the first lines where it is emphasized that any errors or even procrastination can be forgiven. The concept that repentance redeems all errors makes it so easy to say to hell with today I\'ll do it tomorrow. Is that the dent in spiritual armor? A most interesting write
February 22nd, 2026 09:47
James Van Der Beek
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes! RIP, James. So sad to hear. Wonderful tribute, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes! RIP, James. So sad to hear. Wonderful tribute, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:54
James Van Der Beek
sorenbarrett said:
A nice tribute to an actor that I am not familiar with or at least don\'t remember. Well done
February 21st, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
A nice tribute to an actor that I am not familiar with or at least don\'t remember. Well done
February 21st, 2026 04:13
James Van Der Beek
orchidee said:
A sensitive write SM.
Meanwhile - you seen ET lately? lol.
February 21st, 2026 03:20
orchidee said:
A sensitive write SM.
Meanwhile - you seen ET lately? lol.
February 21st, 2026 03:20
Burning Effigy\'s Of Baal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is direct and unfiltered…apocalyptic imagery meeting present tension with no attempt to soften the edges. The rhythm feels chant-like, almost rallying in tone. It’s bold, charged, and meant to spark reaction. Strong energy throughout. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is direct and unfiltered…apocalyptic imagery meeting present tension with no attempt to soften the edges. The rhythm feels chant-like, almost rallying in tone. It’s bold, charged, and meant to spark reaction. Strong energy throughout. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:22
Burning Effigy\'s Of Baal
orchidee said:
I was reading this standing on me head - some sort of yoga pose (was I? lol.) I thought you meant the 999 games. lol.
February 20th, 2026 10:00
orchidee said:
I was reading this standing on me head - some sort of yoga pose (was I? lol.) I thought you meant the 999 games. lol.
February 20th, 2026 10:00
Burning Effigy\'s Of Baal
sorenbarrett said:
An image cast and thoughts follow. Well written
February 20th, 2026 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
An image cast and thoughts follow. Well written
February 20th, 2026 07:26
Stand On What\'s Sacred
NafisaSB said:
i stand beside you on this issue - and hope it turns true one day
February 17th, 2026 23:47
NafisaSB said:
i stand beside you on this issue - and hope it turns true one day
February 17th, 2026 23:47
James Bond 007egacy
NafisaSB said:
have seen some of 007 films, and do agree with most of your views.
February 17th, 2026 01:07
NafisaSB said:
have seen some of 007 films, and do agree with most of your views.
February 17th, 2026 01:07
I Can\'t Stand Liars
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
Such a perfect time for this poem
February 15th, 2026 04:35
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
Such a perfect time for this poem
February 15th, 2026 04:35
God
NafisaSB said:
agree wholeheartedly with this wonderful message - thanks for sharing
February 15th, 2026 00:42
NafisaSB said:
agree wholeheartedly with this wonderful message - thanks for sharing
February 15th, 2026 00:42
Stand On What\'s Sacred
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I’ve felt that frustration with systems and distractions pulling focus from what matters. Your poem channels that intensity without softening it. There’s a desire here to cut through noise and stand on something sacred. That conviction comes through clearly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I’ve felt that frustration with systems and distractions pulling focus from what matters. Your poem channels that intensity without softening it. There’s a desire here to cut through noise and stand on something sacred. That conviction comes through clearly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:39
Stand On What\'s Sacred
orchidee said:
ET wants to come back but he can\'t find the key to that prison door. Doh!
February 14th, 2026 10:11
orchidee said:
ET wants to come back but he can\'t find the key to that prison door. Doh!
February 14th, 2026 10:11
Stand On What\'s Sacred
sorenbarrett said:
Cynical this poem sends its message that is dark. Well written
February 14th, 2026 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Cynical this poem sends its message that is dark. Well written
February 14th, 2026 04:58
God
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I appreciate how unapologetic this is. The repetition gives it that chant-like strength, and the crown image at the end adds warmth and dignity. It feels like faith spoken plainly, without layers or disguise. There’s power in that kind of clarity. Well said. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 12:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I appreciate how unapologetic this is. The repetition gives it that chant-like strength, and the crown image at the end adds warmth and dignity. It feels like faith spoken plainly, without layers or disguise. There’s power in that kind of clarity. Well said. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 12:05
God
sorenbarrett said:
There is a rapid succession of rhymes in this poem that seem as lightning strikes nicely written
February 13th, 2026 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
There is a rapid succession of rhymes in this poem that seem as lightning strikes nicely written
February 13th, 2026 09:31
James Bond 007egacy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this fires off like a rapid montage. Gadgets, explosions, franchise politics…it’s punchy and unapologetic. You don’t ease into it, you drop straight into critique and speculation. It reads like a Bond monologue between action scenes. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 17:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this fires off like a rapid montage. Gadgets, explosions, franchise politics…it’s punchy and unapologetic. You don’t ease into it, you drop straight into critique and speculation. It reads like a Bond monologue between action scenes. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 17:29
James Bond 007egacy
orchidee said:
I only seem to know mostly the Sean Connery and Roger Moore films. Well, plus some other, but not very recent ones.
Some daftness - is ET in any of the Bond films? lol.
February 12th, 2026 11:08
orchidee said:
I only seem to know mostly the Sean Connery and Roger Moore films. Well, plus some other, but not very recent ones.
Some daftness - is ET in any of the Bond films? lol.
February 12th, 2026 11:08
James Bond 007egacy
sorenbarrett said:
A great tribute to the films, I read the books as a youth and I can tell you, like every other film, the book is so much better.
February 12th, 2026 10:28
sorenbarrett said:
A great tribute to the films, I read the books as a youth and I can tell you, like every other film, the book is so much better.
February 12th, 2026 10:28
Management, Drones And Energy Vampires In The Office
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries real heat. The prison-like office imagery grounds the anger, and the “energy vampires” read as a metaphor for burnout culture rather than fantasy. That final line slams hard…obedience without backbone. Fierce and unapologetic. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 11th, 2026 13:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries real heat. The prison-like office imagery grounds the anger, and the “energy vampires” read as a metaphor for burnout culture rather than fantasy. That final line slams hard…obedience without backbone. Fierce and unapologetic. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 11th, 2026 13:00
Management, Drones And Energy Vampires In The Office
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that felt so dystopic yet it is so true that people have a natural tendency toward compliance and with a need to be seen as normal no one disagrees in front of anyone else even twisting obviously wrong perceptions into what is right just to comply. Good write
February 11th, 2026 08:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that felt so dystopic yet it is so true that people have a natural tendency toward compliance and with a need to be seen as normal no one disagrees in front of anyone else even twisting obviously wrong perceptions into what is right just to comply. Good write
February 11th, 2026 08:39
Sore Throat
Mutley Ravishes said:
Maybe you heard Shaun that a certain organization ran a simulation-exercise in Dec.2025 for a coming \"illness\" that they seem sure will happen.
February 10th, 2026 17:37
Mutley Ravishes said:
Maybe you heard Shaun that a certain organization ran a simulation-exercise in Dec.2025 for a coming \"illness\" that they seem sure will happen.
February 10th, 2026 17:37
Sore Throat
Doggerel Dave said:
I completely recognise that, so well stated. I can only say that sore throats do come and do go without major incident (antibodies in my system worked overtime and did a double shift).
February 10th, 2026 17:13
Doggerel Dave said:
I completely recognise that, so well stated. I can only say that sore throats do come and do go without major incident (antibodies in my system worked overtime and did a double shift).
February 10th, 2026 17:13
Sore Throat
sorenbarrett said:
A good read from someone that doesn\'t get sick. Told my kids that some days I don\'t feel well but I don\'t get sick the day I get sick is the day I die. Well written
February 10th, 2026 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
A good read from someone that doesn\'t get sick. Told my kids that some days I don\'t feel well but I don\'t get sick the day I get sick is the day I die. Well written
February 10th, 2026 13:29
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