Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
A Man Out Of Time? (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
The pendulum swings and today the idea of male is unpopular as heard in this poem. It speaks of femininity being emphasized and the desire to return to the masculine. Nicely written it makes its point well.
April 1st, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
The pendulum swings and today the idea of male is unpopular as heard in this poem. It speaks of femininity being emphasized and the desire to return to the masculine. Nicely written it makes its point well.
April 1st, 2026 04:09
Sorry God
NafisaSB said:
begging for forgiveness from the Lord/s in poetic style - way to go....
April 1st, 2026 00:23
NafisaSB said:
begging for forgiveness from the Lord/s in poetic style - way to go....
April 1st, 2026 00:23
Tell Us The Truth
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t think your media is the only prevaricating bunch of ratbags, mate.
March 31st, 2026 15:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t think your media is the only prevaricating bunch of ratbags, mate.
March 31st, 2026 15:51
Tell Us The Truth
orchidee said:
Will they tell us the truth about a certain one who has gone home?! lol.
March 31st, 2026 09:58
orchidee said:
Will they tell us the truth about a certain one who has gone home?! lol.
March 31st, 2026 09:58
Tell Us The Truth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, that “Pick and Mix” line really stands out. It flips something familiar into something unsettling…like truth being packaged and chosen at will. It’s simple, but it lands with weight. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 31st, 2026 09:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, that “Pick and Mix” line really stands out. It flips something familiar into something unsettling…like truth being packaged and chosen at will. It’s simple, but it lands with weight. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 31st, 2026 09:31
Tell Us The Truth
sorenbarrett said:
Lies on top of lies each for its own motive leaves the viewer and reader unsure of even themself. Then there are the stupid that believe to a rabid ferocity and are willing to kill to prove their veracity. This poem opens up many areas of the modern media and its effect on us all
March 31st, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Lies on top of lies each for its own motive leaves the viewer and reader unsure of even themself. Then there are the stupid that believe to a rabid ferocity and are willing to kill to prove their veracity. This poem opens up many areas of the modern media and its effect on us all
March 31st, 2026 04:19
Who I Am (Holy Spirit Bomb)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, there’s a clear throughline of transformation here…moving from one way of living into something more grounded in who you feel you are now. That sense of being set apart, even when it costs something socially, gives it weight. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 10:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, there’s a clear throughline of transformation here…moving from one way of living into something more grounded in who you feel you are now. That sense of being set apart, even when it costs something socially, gives it weight. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 10:02
Who I Am (Holy Spirit Bomb)
Doggerel Dave said:
The discovery of faith? Never happened to me, but if it has done something for you, stay with it.
March 30th, 2026 07:13
Doggerel Dave said:
The discovery of faith? Never happened to me, but if it has done something for you, stay with it.
March 30th, 2026 07:13
Who I Am (Holy Spirit Bomb)
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives new meaning to spirit. It reports an awakening from manipulative and controlling powers. Nicely written
March 30th, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives new meaning to spirit. It reports an awakening from manipulative and controlling powers. Nicely written
March 30th, 2026 03:57
Hidden Boss
orchidee said:
That may slightly look like a guy we know, who\'s gone home! lol.
March 29th, 2026 11:27
orchidee said:
That may slightly look like a guy we know, who\'s gone home! lol.
March 29th, 2026 11:27
Hidden Boss
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, there’s a strong tension running through this…rooted, disrupted, and waiting on something to break through. That center of gravity moment holds it all together. It feels like it brushes up against Hegel without settling there…which makes me grin, because you know I’ll always tip my hat to Søren Kierkegaard in that conversation, 😂. Love it! Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, there’s a strong tension running through this…rooted, disrupted, and waiting on something to break through. That center of gravity moment holds it all together. It feels like it brushes up against Hegel without settling there…which makes me grin, because you know I’ll always tip my hat to Søren Kierkegaard in that conversation, 😂. Love it! Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:42
Hidden Boss
sorenbarrett said:
I see metaphor here in myth to reality and creation out of chaos. Well done
March 29th, 2026 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
I see metaphor here in myth to reality and creation out of chaos. Well done
March 29th, 2026 05:34
Jay-Z: Damage Control
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this feels like those moments where trust in public figures just snaps…where everything starts to feel staged or controlled, and the frustration boils over. That kind of energy is hard to contain, and you let it out fully here. I felt that intensity. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this feels like those moments where trust in public figures just snaps…where everything starts to feel staged or controlled, and the frustration boils over. That kind of energy is hard to contain, and you let it out fully here. I felt that intensity. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:33
Jay-Z: Damage Control
2781 said:
I don\'t know what you were going on about, but I liked it!
March 28th, 2026 08:33
2781 said:
I don\'t know what you were going on about, but I liked it!
March 28th, 2026 08:33
A Pyramid Prison
Katie B. said:
Deep and heavy. Pain reaches through. Tough realities. Well written. Wishing you the best.
March 28th, 2026 07:05
Katie B. said:
Deep and heavy. Pain reaches through. Tough realities. Well written. Wishing you the best.
March 28th, 2026 07:05
Jay-Z: Damage Control
sorenbarrett said:
Wrapped in rap this piece critiques the establishment with rhyme of rath. Well done
March 28th, 2026 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
Wrapped in rap this piece critiques the establishment with rhyme of rath. Well done
March 28th, 2026 05:39
Sorry God
Mutley Ravishes said:
Is \"God\" really disappointed with this world? Maybe he`s just taking his time? What does he want? Does he even want anything? \"His ways are past finding out.\"
Great write, Shaun, you pulled this response out of me.
March 27th, 2026 09:30
Mutley Ravishes said:
Is \"God\" really disappointed with this world? Maybe he`s just taking his time? What does he want? Does he even want anything? \"His ways are past finding out.\"
Great write, Shaun, you pulled this response out of me.
March 27th, 2026 09:30
Sorry God
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Cheers, yeah nothing simple I guess. The mortal life lol.
March 27th, 2026 09:30
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Cheers, yeah nothing simple I guess. The mortal life lol.
March 27th, 2026 09:30
Sorry God
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this speaks to that place where you know forgiveness is there… but you still feel the weight of your own choices. That internal struggle comes through clearly. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this speaks to that place where you know forgiveness is there… but you still feel the weight of your own choices. That internal struggle comes through clearly. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:21
Sorry God
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic petition for forgiveness for being human. Nicely written
March 27th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic petition for forgiveness for being human. Nicely written
March 27th, 2026 04:25
Hollywood Curses (Part.2)
orchidee said:
That\'s that metal toothed guy from Jaws! lol.
March 26th, 2026 04:26
orchidee said:
That\'s that metal toothed guy from Jaws! lol.
March 26th, 2026 04:26
Hollywood Curses (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
Since I watch no TV any more much of this gos beyond me but I get the gist of vanity and avarice, arrogance and competition all battling. Nicely done
March 26th, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Since I watch no TV any more much of this gos beyond me but I get the gist of vanity and avarice, arrogance and competition all battling. Nicely done
March 26th, 2026 03:49
Jojo\'s Bizarre Adventure
DeadRose said:
Its got a good plot! but is quite bizarre... Been waiting 3 years for sbr to animate, forgot about it entirely, then found out they just made it.
March 25th, 2026 18:13
DeadRose said:
Its got a good plot! but is quite bizarre... Been waiting 3 years for sbr to animate, forgot about it entirely, then found out they just made it.
March 25th, 2026 18:13
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