Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Got Instrumentals
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this feels like a declaration…there’s that steady rhythm of pulling away from what drags you down while leaning into something higher and more intentional. It’s grounded but reaching at the same time, and that balance works. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this feels like a declaration…there’s that steady rhythm of pulling away from what drags you down while leaning into something higher and more intentional. It’s grounded but reaching at the same time, and that balance works. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:05
Got Instrumentals
sorenbarrett said:
Here the author breaks out the atmosphere and it is more party than not. Nicely written
April 21st, 2026 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Here the author breaks out the atmosphere and it is more party than not. Nicely written
April 21st, 2026 04:46
On Edge (Never Good Enough)
NafisaSB said:
Agree with you. Some folks / bosses (maybe parents and teachers too) are hard to please
April 21st, 2026 03:55
NafisaSB said:
Agree with you. Some folks / bosses (maybe parents and teachers too) are hard to please
April 21st, 2026 03:55
Nick Cannon Questions Stories In The Bible
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this has a sharp, provocative edge to it…you’re clearly not holding back here. It comes through direct and unfiltered, which gives it a certain punch. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this has a sharp, provocative edge to it…you’re clearly not holding back here. It comes through direct and unfiltered, which gives it a certain punch. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:29
Nick Cannon Questions Stories In The Bible
orchidee said:
Urgh! Not celebrities and their antics. lol.
April 20th, 2026 02:34
orchidee said:
Urgh! Not celebrities and their antics. lol.
April 20th, 2026 02:34
On Edge (Never Good Enough)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I’ve been in that space where effort just keeps getting overlooked. It wears on you over time…makes you question things you shouldn’t have to. This feels honest and real. Strong piece and extremely relatable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 09:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I’ve been in that space where effort just keeps getting overlooked. It wears on you over time…makes you question things you shouldn’t have to. This feels honest and real. Strong piece and extremely relatable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 09:15
On Edge (Never Good Enough)
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem expresses the struggles of workers who, despite their efforts and dedication, feel undervalued and overburdened by the expectations placed upon them.
April 19th, 2026 06:42
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem expresses the struggles of workers who, despite their efforts and dedication, feel undervalued and overburdened by the expectations placed upon them.
April 19th, 2026 06:42
On Edge (Never Good Enough)
Mutley Ravishes said:
How I`ve struggled with \"not good enough!\" Where and when on earth did this assumption take root? I can only think it`s a symptom of separation. Which says something about me, and the so called \"elite.\"
April 19th, 2026 06:09
Mutley Ravishes said:
How I`ve struggled with \"not good enough!\" Where and when on earth did this assumption take root? I can only think it`s a symptom of separation. Which says something about me, and the so called \"elite.\"
April 19th, 2026 06:09
On Edge (Never Good Enough)
Katie B. said:
Heavy and hard hitting, like nothing is ever good enough. Well penned.
April 19th, 2026 05:21
Katie B. said:
Heavy and hard hitting, like nothing is ever good enough. Well penned.
April 19th, 2026 05:21
On Edge (Never Good Enough)
sorenbarrett said:
There are moments that feel like this that one is only as good as the last thing they did. It seems a harsh reality and well expressed here
April 19th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
There are moments that feel like this that one is only as good as the last thing they did. It seems a harsh reality and well expressed here
April 19th, 2026 04:16
Cause And Reaction
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries a real sense of pressure…like the world is talking over itself and you’re trying to cut through it. The John Luther line adds that sharp awareness, like you’re watching it all unfold in real time. It’s tense, searching, and honest. Strong piece , my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 14:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries a real sense of pressure…like the world is talking over itself and you’re trying to cut through it. The John Luther line adds that sharp awareness, like you’re watching it all unfold in real time. It’s tense, searching, and honest. Strong piece , my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 14:06
Cause And Reaction
sorenbarrett said:
Here the meets the morrow, reality meets fantasy and questions form without an answer
April 18th, 2026 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
Here the meets the morrow, reality meets fantasy and questions form without an answer
April 18th, 2026 05:18
Cause And Reaction
orchidee said:
Yep, we seen an Avenger - it\'s probably E.T. lol.
April 18th, 2026 01:57
orchidee said:
Yep, we seen an Avenger - it\'s probably E.T. lol.
April 18th, 2026 01:57
Deepest Fears
arqios said:
Eyes to see and ears to hear and hearts that respond 🙏🏻🕊️
April 17th, 2026 17:58
arqios said:
Eyes to see and ears to hear and hearts that respond 🙏🏻🕊️
April 17th, 2026 17:58
Deepest Fears
Doggerel Dave said:
Hear hear – Where (above) ‘New Age’ has been utilised to describe your particular focus, I feel that the term New Age, when in the sixties was coined, it encompassed many more equally wanky ideas than these. However your line \"Open your mind, use those eyes and ears\" covers them all..
April 17th, 2026 16:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Hear hear – Where (above) ‘New Age’ has been utilised to describe your particular focus, I feel that the term New Age, when in the sixties was coined, it encompassed many more equally wanky ideas than these. However your line \"Open your mind, use those eyes and ears\" covers them all..
April 17th, 2026 16:13
Deepest Fears
Friendship said:
Well said, my friend. Your poem revolves around the duality of human existence, showcasing a contrast between light and dark, good and evil. It addresses themes of manipulation, control, spirituality, and the battle between knowledge and ignorance.
April 17th, 2026 09:30
Friendship said:
Well said, my friend. Your poem revolves around the duality of human existence, showcasing a contrast between light and dark, good and evil. It addresses themes of manipulation, control, spirituality, and the battle between knowledge and ignorance.
April 17th, 2026 09:30
Deepest Fears
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yikes, God, Satan, and sacrificial chickens, oh my! Where can I go to sign up, aside from here or hell? 🤣 I feel like I missed the orientation meeting for all this…did they hand out pamphlets or just the chickens?
All joking aside…there’s definitely an intensity to this that keeps it moving. You commit to the ride, and that carries the reader through. I love the inherent rhythm in your work, man. You have a keen sense of it. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 09:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yikes, God, Satan, and sacrificial chickens, oh my! Where can I go to sign up, aside from here or hell? 🤣 I feel like I missed the orientation meeting for all this…did they hand out pamphlets or just the chickens?
All joking aside…there’s definitely an intensity to this that keeps it moving. You commit to the ride, and that carries the reader through. I love the inherent rhythm in your work, man. You have a keen sense of it. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 09:05
Deepest Fears
Katie B. said:
Excellent and most thought provoking. Calls many things into question. Well done.
April 17th, 2026 04:33
Katie B. said:
Excellent and most thought provoking. Calls many things into question. Well done.
April 17th, 2026 04:33
Deepest Fears
sorenbarrett said:
This poem evokes feelings of dark magic and spells of evilness nicely woven with rhyme to make it more hypnotic. Nicely done
April 17th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem evokes feelings of dark magic and spells of evilness nicely woven with rhyme to make it more hypnotic. Nicely done
April 17th, 2026 04:01
Deepest Fears
orchidee said:
There is genuine spiritual healing, I believe, but a lot of cranky stuff too. Someone said \'New Age\' stuff is \'Old Age\' by now! lol.
April 17th, 2026 02:08
orchidee said:
There is genuine spiritual healing, I believe, but a lot of cranky stuff too. Someone said \'New Age\' stuff is \'Old Age\' by now! lol.
April 17th, 2026 02:08
Flawed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shawn, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and it knocked me flat for a bit. That shift from calling things out to turning inward…that’s what sticks. It moves from critique into something more reflective without losing its bite. Powerful turn, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shawn, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and it knocked me flat for a bit. That shift from calling things out to turning inward…that’s what sticks. It moves from critique into something more reflective without losing its bite. Powerful turn, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:09
Flawed
sorenbarrett said:
Everything has its price and its consequences. Well written
April 16th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Everything has its price and its consequences. Well written
April 16th, 2026 04:16
Flawed
orchidee said:
Those gold things look like idols. Though idols are not only made of gold, wood, stone, etc, but we know they can be things in our lives - money, riches, fashion, etc.
Cooeee - you gone home yet, fella? We know who. lol.
April 16th, 2026 02:11
orchidee said:
Those gold things look like idols. Though idols are not only made of gold, wood, stone, etc, but we know they can be things in our lives - money, riches, fashion, etc.
Cooeee - you gone home yet, fella? We know who. lol.
April 16th, 2026 02:11
Applause For The Wars
Mutley Ravishes said:
You keep at it, Shaun! I guess you know by now many folks remain willfully ignorant.
April 15th, 2026 18:49
Mutley Ravishes said:
You keep at it, Shaun! I guess you know by now many folks remain willfully ignorant.
April 15th, 2026 18:49
Applause For The Wars
Poetic Licence said:
Many truths lay within these manipulated words, as always in war, innocent people die and suffer while the rich get richer, enjoyed the write.
April 15th, 2026 13:54
Poetic Licence said:
Many truths lay within these manipulated words, as always in war, innocent people die and suffer while the rich get richer, enjoyed the write.
April 15th, 2026 13:54
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