Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Sorry God
Mutley Ravishes said:
Is \"God\" really disappointed with this world? Maybe he`s just taking his time? What does he want? Does he even want anything? \"His ways are past finding out.\"
Great write, Shaun, you pulled this response out of me.
March 27th, 2026 09:30
Mutley Ravishes said:
Is \"God\" really disappointed with this world? Maybe he`s just taking his time? What does he want? Does he even want anything? \"His ways are past finding out.\"
Great write, Shaun, you pulled this response out of me.
March 27th, 2026 09:30
Sorry God
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Cheers, yeah nothing simple I guess. The mortal life lol.
March 27th, 2026 09:30
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Cheers, yeah nothing simple I guess. The mortal life lol.
March 27th, 2026 09:30
Sorry God
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this speaks to that place where you know forgiveness is there… but you still feel the weight of your own choices. That internal struggle comes through clearly. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this speaks to that place where you know forgiveness is there… but you still feel the weight of your own choices. That internal struggle comes through clearly. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:21
Sorry God
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic petition for forgiveness for being human. Nicely written
March 27th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic petition for forgiveness for being human. Nicely written
March 27th, 2026 04:25
Hollywood Curses (Part.2)
orchidee said:
That\'s that metal toothed guy from Jaws! lol.
March 26th, 2026 04:26
orchidee said:
That\'s that metal toothed guy from Jaws! lol.
March 26th, 2026 04:26
Hollywood Curses (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
Since I watch no TV any more much of this gos beyond me but I get the gist of vanity and avarice, arrogance and competition all battling. Nicely done
March 26th, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Since I watch no TV any more much of this gos beyond me but I get the gist of vanity and avarice, arrogance and competition all battling. Nicely done
March 26th, 2026 03:49
Jojo\'s Bizarre Adventure
DeadRose said:
Its got a good plot! but is quite bizarre... Been waiting 3 years for sbr to animate, forgot about it entirely, then found out they just made it.
March 25th, 2026 18:13
DeadRose said:
Its got a good plot! but is quite bizarre... Been waiting 3 years for sbr to animate, forgot about it entirely, then found out they just made it.
March 25th, 2026 18:13
Go, Go Gadget, Flow!
orchidee said:
You know Inspector Gadget, a cartoon character?! lol.
March 25th, 2026 11:43
orchidee said:
You know Inspector Gadget, a cartoon character?! lol.
March 25th, 2026 11:43
Go, Go Gadget, Flow!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Go Gadget, flow! Shaun, this balances humor and everyday life really well…listing it all out could feel cluttered, but you keep it flowing with that steady cadence and playful tone. Then you ground it at the end with that note of caution about AI…nice shift without losing the vibe. Solid piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Go Gadget, flow! Shaun, this balances humor and everyday life really well…listing it all out could feel cluttered, but you keep it flowing with that steady cadence and playful tone. Then you ground it at the end with that note of caution about AI…nice shift without losing the vibe. Solid piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:48
Go, Go Gadget, Flow!
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that emphasizes the advance in technology and its seductive power to enslave us. The last line made me think of Ted Kaczynski and his warning that technology would be the downfall of man and civilization.
March 25th, 2026 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that emphasizes the advance in technology and its seductive power to enslave us. The last line made me think of Ted Kaczynski and his warning that technology would be the downfall of man and civilization.
March 25th, 2026 05:24
Jojo\'s Bizarre Adventure
orchidee said:
Me keyboard\'s gone funny JuSt NoW like yours has - GoOd WrItE sM.
Erm, but it still spells - we know the guy - ET. lol.
March 24th, 2026 12:02
orchidee said:
Me keyboard\'s gone funny JuSt NoW like yours has - GoOd WrItE sM.
Erm, but it still spells - we know the guy - ET. lol.
March 24th, 2026 12:02
Jojo\'s Bizarre Adventure
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is fun…right away it feels energetic and a bit chaotic in a good way. It leans into that over-the-top vibe and just runs with it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is fun…right away it feels energetic and a bit chaotic in a good way. It leans into that over-the-top vibe and just runs with it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:54
Jojo\'s Bizarre Adventure
sorenbarrett said:
I never realized how one becomes accustomed to text in a certain pattern and that the simple alteration of capitalization can disrupt and slow its comprehension. Well done
March 24th, 2026 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
I never realized how one becomes accustomed to text in a certain pattern and that the simple alteration of capitalization can disrupt and slow its comprehension. Well done
March 24th, 2026 08:12
Peaky Blinders: The Immortal Man
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Thanks pal, yeah could have been better.
March 23rd, 2026 10:20
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Thanks pal, yeah could have been better.
March 23rd, 2026 10:20
Peaky Blinders: The Immortal Man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this got me…there’s a real bite here, and it’s honest. That frustration with something you once enjoyed comes through clearly. It’s sharp, but still fun. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this got me…there’s a real bite here, and it’s honest. That frustration with something you once enjoyed comes through clearly. It’s sharp, but still fun. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:23
Who Would Listen? (Psychosis)
Vanna said:
The last two lines are my favorite. Such a beautiful poem.
March 23rd, 2026 07:00
Vanna said:
The last two lines are my favorite. Such a beautiful poem.
March 23rd, 2026 07:00
Peaky Blinders: The Immortal Man
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that gains most of my support. It is why that sequels generally suck with a few exceptions that had new ideas. Well said
March 23rd, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that gains most of my support. It is why that sequels generally suck with a few exceptions that had new ideas. Well said
March 23rd, 2026 03:55
Who Would Listen? (Psychosis)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this hit me…there’s a raw honesty here that doesn’t try to soften itself. It feels lived-in, not performed. That tension between what you’ve seen and how you carry it now really lands. Well done, my friend. Happy Lord\'s Day to you, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2026 09:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this hit me…there’s a raw honesty here that doesn’t try to soften itself. It feels lived-in, not performed. That tension between what you’ve seen and how you carry it now really lands. Well done, my friend. Happy Lord\'s Day to you, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2026 09:37
Who Would Listen? (Psychosis)
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that to me says what one believes is the truth. Well done
March 22nd, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that to me says what one believes is the truth. Well done
March 22nd, 2026 03:57
A Beautiful Day In The Cold-hearted Matrix
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this has a real restless energy to it…like you’re taking in a beautiful moment but can’t fully settle into it. That tension carries all the way through. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 10:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this has a real restless energy to it…like you’re taking in a beautiful moment but can’t fully settle into it. That tension carries all the way through. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 10:04
A Beautiful Day In The Cold-hearted Matrix
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes us to the matrix. It is surreal and speaks with animation. Well done.
March 20th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes us to the matrix. It is surreal and speaks with animation. Well done.
March 20th, 2026 03:50
A Beautiful Day In The Cold-hearted Matrix
orchidee said:
They don\'t look much like E.T. to me! heehee.
March 20th, 2026 03:37
orchidee said:
They don\'t look much like E.T. to me! heehee.
March 20th, 2026 03:37
Egregious Expectations (The Routine)
Doggerel Dave said:
“Always look on the bright side of life” – Being unemployed gives you plenty of time to write poetry and contribute to the vibrant community which exists here……
And before you start to get the shits with me, let me tell you I know all about unemployment in the UK. I was unemployed in the land of my birth for two years (one year, three months’ work and then another year).
So this response is not a piece of poetic bollocks - just a couple of suggestions you may already be aware of and have implemented. If not:
Get out there and change volunteering jobs to agencies you are interested in, Plus: Go study (always – as the world gets more complicated..)
Good luck Shaun.
PS: Part of me did enjoy the freedom, and it was a good apprenticeship for the retirement I now appreciate to the max.
March 19th, 2026 16:04
Doggerel Dave said:
“Always look on the bright side of life” – Being unemployed gives you plenty of time to write poetry and contribute to the vibrant community which exists here……
And before you start to get the shits with me, let me tell you I know all about unemployment in the UK. I was unemployed in the land of my birth for two years (one year, three months’ work and then another year).
So this response is not a piece of poetic bollocks - just a couple of suggestions you may already be aware of and have implemented. If not:
Get out there and change volunteering jobs to agencies you are interested in, Plus: Go study (always – as the world gets more complicated..)
Good luck Shaun.
PS: Part of me did enjoy the freedom, and it was a good apprenticeship for the retirement I now appreciate to the max.
March 19th, 2026 16:04
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