Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Management, Drones And Energy Vampires In The Office
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries real heat. The prison-like office imagery grounds the anger, and the “energy vampires” read as a metaphor for burnout culture rather than fantasy. That final line slams hard…obedience without backbone. Fierce and unapologetic. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 11th, 2026 13:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries real heat. The prison-like office imagery grounds the anger, and the “energy vampires” read as a metaphor for burnout culture rather than fantasy. That final line slams hard…obedience without backbone. Fierce and unapologetic. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 11th, 2026 13:00
Management, Drones And Energy Vampires In The Office
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that felt so dystopic yet it is so true that people have a natural tendency toward compliance and with a need to be seen as normal no one disagrees in front of anyone else even twisting obviously wrong perceptions into what is right just to comply. Good write
February 11th, 2026 08:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that felt so dystopic yet it is so true that people have a natural tendency toward compliance and with a need to be seen as normal no one disagrees in front of anyone else even twisting obviously wrong perceptions into what is right just to comply. Good write
February 11th, 2026 08:39
Sore Throat
Mutley Ravishes said:
Maybe you heard Shaun that a certain organization ran a simulation-exercise in Dec.2025 for a coming \"illness\" that they seem sure will happen.
February 10th, 2026 17:37
Mutley Ravishes said:
Maybe you heard Shaun that a certain organization ran a simulation-exercise in Dec.2025 for a coming \"illness\" that they seem sure will happen.
February 10th, 2026 17:37
Sore Throat
Doggerel Dave said:
I completely recognise that, so well stated. I can only say that sore throats do come and do go without major incident (antibodies in my system worked overtime and did a double shift).
February 10th, 2026 17:13
Doggerel Dave said:
I completely recognise that, so well stated. I can only say that sore throats do come and do go without major incident (antibodies in my system worked overtime and did a double shift).
February 10th, 2026 17:13
Sore Throat
sorenbarrett said:
A good read from someone that doesn\'t get sick. Told my kids that some days I don\'t feel well but I don\'t get sick the day I get sick is the day I die. Well written
February 10th, 2026 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
A good read from someone that doesn\'t get sick. Told my kids that some days I don\'t feel well but I don\'t get sick the day I get sick is the day I die. Well written
February 10th, 2026 13:29
Sore Throat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this made me smile…there’s an easy, grounded honesty here. It feels like a thought caught mid-walk, half worry, half self-check, and that casual openness works. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 10th, 2026 13:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this made me smile…there’s an easy, grounded honesty here. It feels like a thought caught mid-walk, half worry, half self-check, and that casual openness works. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 10th, 2026 13:07
It\'s Too Much For Most
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That phrase “kill the spirit” anchors everything here, Shaun. It frames the poem as psychological and emotional as much as anything else, and it sets the stakes high from the start. Strong choice. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 9th, 2026 20:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That phrase “kill the spirit” anchors everything here, Shaun. It frames the poem as psychological and emotional as much as anything else, and it sets the stakes high from the start. Strong choice. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 9th, 2026 20:42
It\'s Too Much For Most
orchidee said:
Is it too much for most? Or too much for you? My hobby-horse of ET, that is! lol.
February 9th, 2026 06:48
orchidee said:
Is it too much for most? Or too much for you? My hobby-horse of ET, that is! lol.
February 9th, 2026 06:48
It\'s Too Much For Most
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll vote for social circumstances, uncertainty. disadvantage to be responsible for many, or most disturbances of the mind.
Your writes really dig into it all , Shaun.
February 9th, 2026 04:49
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll vote for social circumstances, uncertainty. disadvantage to be responsible for many, or most disturbances of the mind.
Your writes really dig into it all , Shaun.
February 9th, 2026 04:49
It\'s Too Much For Most
sorenbarrett said:
Here this poem presents a world of evil that comes from the demonic. Well done
February 9th, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Here this poem presents a world of evil that comes from the demonic. Well done
February 9th, 2026 04:34
Alien Nation
Doggerel Dave said:
Your pins get stronger and more pointed all the time, Shaun. I\'m for the commitment.
Now it might come as no surprise that I haven\'t got a favourite rapper, (oh please!) but I still think your last line is a beauty!
February 8th, 2026 17:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Your pins get stronger and more pointed all the time, Shaun. I\'m for the commitment.
Now it might come as no surprise that I haven\'t got a favourite rapper, (oh please!) but I still think your last line is a beauty!
February 8th, 2026 17:31
Alien Nation
orchidee said:
And - good write Joan (of Arc), erm, SM. Just call me Napoleon - gone bit nutty! lol.
February 8th, 2026 12:56
orchidee said:
And - good write Joan (of Arc), erm, SM. Just call me Napoleon - gone bit nutty! lol.
February 8th, 2026 12:56
Alien Nation
orchidee said:
Yep, the one on the right looks a tad like.... we know who! lol.
With demons, I don\'t deny their existence, but tend to think some folk may be oppressed, even possessed by then, only as a last line of thought type of thing.
February 8th, 2026 12:54
orchidee said:
Yep, the one on the right looks a tad like.... we know who! lol.
With demons, I don\'t deny their existence, but tend to think some folk may be oppressed, even possessed by then, only as a last line of thought type of thing.
February 8th, 2026 12:54
Alien Nation
sorenbarrett said:
It is hard to know what to believe these days. A poignant poem well done
February 8th, 2026 10:42
sorenbarrett said:
It is hard to know what to believe these days. A poignant poem well done
February 8th, 2026 10:42
Alien Nation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wait, Mick Jagger was on Alien Nation? LOL! Just kidding, of course. (He does kinda draw that vibe in the pic, no?) A raw snapshot, Shaun. The poem reads as a collision of media, fear, belief, and burnout, and the lack of resolution feels intentional. It reflects how disorienting it can be to live inside constant noise. Strong, unfiltered work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 8th, 2026 09:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wait, Mick Jagger was on Alien Nation? LOL! Just kidding, of course. (He does kinda draw that vibe in the pic, no?) A raw snapshot, Shaun. The poem reads as a collision of media, fear, belief, and burnout, and the lack of resolution feels intentional. It reflects how disorienting it can be to live inside constant noise. Strong, unfiltered work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 8th, 2026 09:52
I Sold All My Jay-Z Albums (Part.2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A tense piece, Shaun. It reads as a snapshot of cultural anxiety more than accusation…how rumor, revelation, and silence collide and leave people grasping for footing. You captured that instability clearly, my friend. As for me, I\'ve never owned a Jay-Z album...so win/win! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 7th, 2026 10:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A tense piece, Shaun. It reads as a snapshot of cultural anxiety more than accusation…how rumor, revelation, and silence collide and leave people grasping for footing. You captured that instability clearly, my friend. As for me, I\'ve never owned a Jay-Z album...so win/win! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 7th, 2026 10:12
I Sold All My Jay-Z Albums (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and with a bouncy beat this poem rocks and is on top with a bit of humor as well as current social media referrals. Well done
February 7th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and with a bouncy beat this poem rocks and is on top with a bit of humor as well as current social media referrals. Well done
February 7th, 2026 03:59
Monitoring Spirits
orchidee said:
I\'m overdoing it now! lol. I sense.... a spirit? Well, not exactly. It\'s only E.T. lol.
February 7th, 2026 03:43
orchidee said:
I\'m overdoing it now! lol. I sense.... a spirit? Well, not exactly. It\'s only E.T. lol.
February 7th, 2026 03:43
I Sold All My Jay-Z Albums (Part.2)
orchidee said:
I never had any of his albums to start with! lol.
Now an obvious question - did a certain alien make any albums before he went home? lol.
February 7th, 2026 03:37
orchidee said:
I never had any of his albums to start with! lol.
Now an obvious question - did a certain alien make any albums before he went home? lol.
February 7th, 2026 03:37
Monitoring Spirits
marissa said:
I have a lot of these people,any idea how to get rid of them when they are family?Such a sad but true poem!
February 6th, 2026 15:55
marissa said:
I have a lot of these people,any idea how to get rid of them when they are family?Such a sad but true poem!
February 6th, 2026 15:55
Monitoring Spirits
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reminded me how paranoia and perception can blur when trust erodes. That feeling of unseen judgment hovering just out of reach is something many people recognize. You capture that atmosphere clearly. Well done, mate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 6th, 2026 15:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reminded me how paranoia and perception can blur when trust erodes. That feeling of unseen judgment hovering just out of reach is something many people recognize. You capture that atmosphere clearly. Well done, mate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 6th, 2026 15:08
Monitoring Spirits
sorenbarrett said:
So uncomfortable being watched one becomes self conscious. Well written
February 6th, 2026 14:21
sorenbarrett said:
So uncomfortable being watched one becomes self conscious. Well written
February 6th, 2026 14:21
Moving Forward
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is about movement that isn’t triumphant, just necessary. Small steps, hidden damage, changed perspective, and a quiet sense of presence underneath it all. It’s restrained, reflective, and grounded. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 3rd, 2026 10:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is about movement that isn’t triumphant, just necessary. Small steps, hidden damage, changed perspective, and a quiet sense of presence underneath it all. It’s restrained, reflective, and grounded. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 3rd, 2026 10:23
Moving Forward
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents to me the starting point for most a block to push off of. Nicely worded
February 3rd, 2026 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents to me the starting point for most a block to push off of. Nicely worded
February 3rd, 2026 04:37
Moving Forward
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Should we also have faith in........., though he\'s \'gone home\' - does he exist?! Yes!! lol.
February 3rd, 2026 03:31
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Should we also have faith in........., though he\'s \'gone home\' - does he exist?! Yes!! lol.
February 3rd, 2026 03:31
Poetry For The Unemployed
Doggerel Dave said:
Exploitation raw and hard - you have nailed it.
February 2nd, 2026 17:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Exploitation raw and hard - you have nailed it.
February 2nd, 2026 17:24
Poetry For The Unemployed
orchidee said:
Good write SM. You seen a certain chap lately?! lol.
February 2nd, 2026 14:02
orchidee said:
Good write SM. You seen a certain chap lately?! lol.
February 2nd, 2026 14:02
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