Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
A Lust Demon (Part.3)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Gripping work, Shaun. The speaker’s determination to take his experiences seriously gives this real conviction...while the unexpected cultural observations keep its questioning energy alive. Fascinating write, my friend! 🖤🙏
August 2nd, 2026 07:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Gripping work, Shaun. The speaker’s determination to take his experiences seriously gives this real conviction...while the unexpected cultural observations keep its questioning energy alive. Fascinating write, my friend! 🖤🙏
August 2nd, 2026 07:02
I Don\'t Smoke Or Drink
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a confident declaration of personal renewal. The lighter cultural reference works beautifully against the heavier concerns...and the sense of finally becoming more fully yourself really comes through. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a confident declaration of personal renewal. The lighter cultural reference works beautifully against the heavier concerns...and the sense of finally becoming more fully yourself really comes through. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:43
A Lust Demon (Part.3)
sorenbarrett said:
Good question and I don\'t have the answer. A fun read Shaun. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Good question and I don\'t have the answer. A fun read Shaun. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2026 04:06
Warrington Car Boot Sale
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this made me smile. There’s something wonderfully down-to-earth about it…just the simple excitement of getting there before the best bargains disappear. Fun little write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this made me smile. There’s something wonderfully down-to-earth about it…just the simple excitement of getting there before the best bargains disappear. Fun little write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:25
I Don\'t Smoke Or Drink
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that set forth a healthy attitude. Nicely written with good meter and flow it makes sense. Maybe if society had any sobriety it would reset the age limit for smoking and drinking to sixty five where if still alive one could smoke and drink dying early to save on social security or maybe not taking about twenty years to acquire cancer one would then pass at a golden eighty five.
August 1st, 2026 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that set forth a healthy attitude. Nicely written with good meter and flow it makes sense. Maybe if society had any sobriety it would reset the age limit for smoking and drinking to sixty five where if still alive one could smoke and drink dying early to save on social security or maybe not taking about twenty years to acquire cancer one would then pass at a golden eighty five.
August 1st, 2026 09:46
Warrington Car Boot Sale
sorenbarrett said:
Different and like an advertisement sent poetically
July 31st, 2026 14:12
sorenbarrett said:
Different and like an advertisement sent poetically
July 31st, 2026 14:12
42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is such a fun and refreshingly honest self-portrait! You present yourself exactly as you are...no grand claims, no unnecessary polish, and plenty of humor. Thoroughly enjoyed this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is such a fun and refreshingly honest self-portrait! You present yourself exactly as you are...no grand claims, no unnecessary polish, and plenty of humor. Thoroughly enjoyed this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:01
No Drama (God\'s Karma)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rock on, I’m with you on the impulse to protect someone from abuse. 💯 Personally, I’d avoid violence unless genuine self-defense or the defense of someone else left no reasonable alternative. That said, if I witnessed someone being abused, I couldn’t simply stand by. I would physically intervene if necessary to stop it...because otherwise, what good am I, right? This definitely packs a punch, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Oh...and I love the title!
July 30th, 2026 09:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rock on, I’m with you on the impulse to protect someone from abuse. 💯 Personally, I’d avoid violence unless genuine self-defense or the defense of someone else left no reasonable alternative. That said, if I witnessed someone being abused, I couldn’t simply stand by. I would physically intervene if necessary to stop it...because otherwise, what good am I, right? This definitely packs a punch, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Oh...and I love the title!
July 30th, 2026 09:42
42
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic post, an add for attraction, a document for display. Revealing and sufficiently complete. Well done
July 30th, 2026 03:20
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic post, an add for attraction, a document for display. Revealing and sufficiently complete. Well done
July 30th, 2026 03:20
42
orchidee said:
Yes, \'The Hitch-hikers guide to the Galaxy\' - \'The answer to everything is 42\', whatever that means. Not that I\'ve read that rubbish. lol.
You knows it - for me, the answer to everything (probably) is, erm, Eddie Thompson, or some initialled guy. lol.
July 30th, 2026 02:37
orchidee said:
Yes, \'The Hitch-hikers guide to the Galaxy\' - \'The answer to everything is 42\', whatever that means. Not that I\'ve read that rubbish. lol.
You knows it - for me, the answer to everything (probably) is, erm, Eddie Thompson, or some initialled guy. lol.
July 30th, 2026 02:37
42
Cheeky Missy said:
I thought you meant the number itself, but this is excellent. Thank you for sharing.
July 30th, 2026 01:54
Cheeky Missy said:
I thought you meant the number itself, but this is excellent. Thank you for sharing.
July 30th, 2026 01:54
No Drama (God\'s Karma)
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem that picks up in the middle of an infraction and takes us back for an explanation. There is a warning in it and compassion against those that have no self restraint. Nicely written my friend.
July 29th, 2026 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem that picks up in the middle of an infraction and takes us back for an explanation. There is a warning in it and compassion against those that have no self restraint. Nicely written my friend.
July 29th, 2026 09:03
Mental Breakdown To Spiritual Awakening (Part.3)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this hit me hard. The collision of spiritual awakening and mental crisis is presented with such raw honesty...without forcing either experience into an easy explanation. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this hit me hard. The collision of spiritual awakening and mental crisis is presented with such raw honesty...without forcing either experience into an easy explanation. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:48
Wait Until The Angels Sing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what an unsettling poem! The dread keeps intensifying until ordinary life feels only moments away from complete collapse. One heck of a dark write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 09:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what an unsettling poem! The dread keeps intensifying until ordinary life feels only moments away from complete collapse. One heck of a dark write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 09:06
Wait Until The Angels Sing
sorenbarrett said:
Shaun this poem recounts the state of present affairs which sadly are not what we would wish for. And those angels are up right after the fat lady sings.
July 27th, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Shaun this poem recounts the state of present affairs which sadly are not what we would wish for. And those angels are up right after the fat lady sings.
July 27th, 2026 04:32
My Honda Civic Dreams Are Dashed
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
awww i love my lil miata the same way bro
July 26th, 2026 19:19
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
awww i love my lil miata the same way bro
July 26th, 2026 19:19
Endgame (Another Virus)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what one heck of a ride! This reads like modern technological nightmare hijacked a blockbuster marathon, loaded the weapons, and started rhyming. Wild, clever, menacing, and unmistakably you, my friend! Thoroughly enjoyed from beginnging to end. Also, agree with Soren on the use of virus. Quite clever..🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 18:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what one heck of a ride! This reads like modern technological nightmare hijacked a blockbuster marathon, loaded the weapons, and started rhyming. Wild, clever, menacing, and unmistakably you, my friend! Thoroughly enjoyed from beginnging to end. Also, agree with Soren on the use of virus. Quite clever..🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 18:10
Endgame (Another Virus)
orchidee said:
Is that, oh, I dunno, Edward Turner in that pic - the initials. heehee.
July 26th, 2026 11:55
orchidee said:
Is that, oh, I dunno, Edward Turner in that pic - the initials. heehee.
July 26th, 2026 11:55
Endgame (Another Virus)
sorenbarrett said:
The key question on this one is the word virus. Is it a computer virus or human virus? Well done Shaun
July 26th, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
The key question on this one is the word virus. Is it a computer virus or human virus? Well done Shaun
July 26th, 2026 03:48
Fragments
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a strong piece! The humor draws me in, but beneath it sits a fractured spirit wrestling with guilt, confinement, and a God who already knows everything we are afraid to admit. Excellent write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a strong piece! The humor draws me in, but beneath it sits a fractured spirit wrestling with guilt, confinement, and a God who already knows everything we are afraid to admit. Excellent write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:14
Fragments
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of captivity in this poem be it of a mundane day or routine or life itself. Well done with rhyme
July 25th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of captivity in this poem be it of a mundane day or routine or life itself. Well done with rhyme
July 25th, 2026 04:19
Fragments
orchidee said:
That you there, breaking that mirror? Or is it someone else in disguise, e.g. Edward Taylor? heehee. (see the initials).
July 25th, 2026 01:53
orchidee said:
That you there, breaking that mirror? Or is it someone else in disguise, e.g. Edward Taylor? heehee. (see the initials).
July 25th, 2026 01:53
What Is Reality? (Some Think)
Mutley Ravishes said:
If it is a simulation then surely that begs the question, why?! And if the \"top dogs\" know this (see London Olympic Opening & Closing Ceremonies breakdown by Jason B.) as they appear to, then what part are they playing on this \"stage\"? So many mysteries. Great write, Shaun.
July 24th, 2026 22:11
Mutley Ravishes said:
If it is a simulation then surely that begs the question, why?! And if the \"top dogs\" know this (see London Olympic Opening & Closing Ceremonies breakdown by Jason B.) as they appear to, then what part are they playing on this \"stage\"? So many mysteries. Great write, Shaun.
July 24th, 2026 22:11
What Is Reality? (Some Think)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is one wildly entertaining trip through the collective human imagination! Funny, frantic, and just unsettling enough to leave me wondering whether someone is presently airbrushing me out of existence. 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is one wildly entertaining trip through the collective human imagination! Funny, frantic, and just unsettling enough to leave me wondering whether someone is presently airbrushing me out of existence. 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:29
What Is Reality? (Some Think)
sorenbarrett said:
Is it not strange that the more we are connected by internet the wider the span of opinions on reality. A good poem Shaun
July 24th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Is it not strange that the more we are connected by internet the wider the span of opinions on reality. A good poem Shaun
July 24th, 2026 04:17
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