Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
A Heartbeat Lost
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this really moved me. There\'s a deep sadness running through it, not just from loss, but from the feeling of watching an entire era slip away. The weight of a long life lived and carried alone comes through powerfully. Wonderful write, my friend...and congrats on submitting this to a contest! Regardless of competition, this one already succeeds on its own merits. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this really moved me. There\'s a deep sadness running through it, not just from loss, but from the feeling of watching an entire era slip away. The weight of a long life lived and carried alone comes through powerfully. Wonderful write, my friend...and congrats on submitting this to a contest! Regardless of competition, this one already succeeds on its own merits. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 07:49
Showdown In Little Tokyo
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a nostalgic and entertaining piece. Love Brandon Lee! I mean...rock on! Your enthusiasm for the film comes through clearly, and the fast-moving energy matches the kind of movie you\'re celebrating. It feels like a quick trip back to the video-store days when hidden gems were waiting on the shelf. Really enjoyed this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a nostalgic and entertaining piece. Love Brandon Lee! I mean...rock on! Your enthusiasm for the film comes through clearly, and the fast-moving energy matches the kind of movie you\'re celebrating. It feels like a quick trip back to the video-store days when hidden gems were waiting on the shelf. Really enjoyed this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 07:49
7:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a charming piece. It captures the simple rhythm of a day well lived...gratitude, a little humor, looking after yourself, and enjoying life\'s small comforts. The whole thing feels honest and unpretentious, which is exactly why it works so well. Great job on this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 07:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a charming piece. It captures the simple rhythm of a day well lived...gratitude, a little humor, looking after yourself, and enjoying life\'s small comforts. The whole thing feels honest and unpretentious, which is exactly why it works so well. Great job on this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 07:46
A Heartbeat Lost
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of tribute to a man past of a time past where adjustment to change becomes a difficult thing and virtues of the past are soon forgotten. Well done.
June 10th, 2026 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of tribute to a man past of a time past where adjustment to change becomes a difficult thing and virtues of the past are soon forgotten. Well done.
June 10th, 2026 05:15
Showdown In Little Tokyo
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I don\'t remember it. I never saw it! lol. About the only fil I saw was .......... we knows it! lol
June 9th, 2026 09:35
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I don\'t remember it. I never saw it! lol. About the only fil I saw was .......... we knows it! lol
June 9th, 2026 09:35
Showdown In Little Tokyo
sorenbarrett said:
A movie review of a movie I can not remember if I have seen or not. Nicely done
June 9th, 2026 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
A movie review of a movie I can not remember if I have seen or not. Nicely done
June 9th, 2026 06:14
A Day Inside
NafisaSB said:
so do I - good to relax sometimes - or now and then...
June 9th, 2026 00:07
NafisaSB said:
so do I - good to relax sometimes - or now and then...
June 9th, 2026 00:07
7:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of no regret love that damn fit the rhyme. Well done you made me smile
June 8th, 2026 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of no regret love that damn fit the rhyme. Well done you made me smile
June 8th, 2026 14:17
7:10
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Another day for ET too? Did he go home or not?! lol.
June 8th, 2026 12:26
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Another day for ET too? Did he go home or not?! lol.
June 8th, 2026 12:26
A Day Inside
RSM0812 said:
The firm grip of a contemplative solidarity. Good read.
June 8th, 2026 05:49
RSM0812 said:
The firm grip of a contemplative solidarity. Good read.
June 8th, 2026 05:49
A Day Inside
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this speaks to me. We spend so much time being productive, social, busy, or available that an unplanned quiet day can feel almost rebellious. I completely understand the appeal of simply staying in and listening to the rain. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this speaks to me. We spend so much time being productive, social, busy, or available that an unplanned quiet day can feel almost rebellious. I completely understand the appeal of simply staying in and listening to the rain. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:15
A Day Inside
sorenbarrett said:
A write of taking a break and mental or physical it is a pause wanted and needed. Well felt in this poem
June 7th, 2026 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
A write of taking a break and mental or physical it is a pause wanted and needed. Well felt in this poem
June 7th, 2026 07:57
Timeline Trauma
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what struck me most is the idea of \"timeline trauma.\" Whether taken literally or metaphorically, it’s a fascinating phrase because it captures the experience of feeling disconnected from what once seemed certain. That concept carries a lot of weight throughout the poem. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 07:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what struck me most is the idea of \"timeline trauma.\" Whether taken literally or metaphorically, it’s a fascinating phrase because it captures the experience of feeling disconnected from what once seemed certain. That concept carries a lot of weight throughout the poem. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 07:30
Timeline Trauma
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of desperate fights. Well written
June 6th, 2026 14:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of desperate fights. Well written
June 6th, 2026 14:00
Timeline Trauma
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Aww, why they say E.T. is among \'seeing things that didn\'t happen\'? He did happen, but he\'s gone home. lol.
June 6th, 2026 13:31
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Aww, why they say E.T. is among \'seeing things that didn\'t happen\'? He did happen, but he\'s gone home. lol.
June 6th, 2026 13:31
The Next Page
orchidee said:
Ahh, page 2, the next page after page 1. If I had turned over the first page in my book I would have found that out! lol.
And now my own book: \'All About ET\'. It\'s over a thousand pages long. lol.
June 3rd, 2026 11:42
orchidee said:
Ahh, page 2, the next page after page 1. If I had turned over the first page in my book I would have found that out! lol.
And now my own book: \'All About ET\'. It\'s over a thousand pages long. lol.
June 3rd, 2026 11:42
The Next Page
sorenbarrett said:
Age is impatience in this sphere but as the poem says what is age. Lovely write Shaun
June 3rd, 2026 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
Age is impatience in this sphere but as the poem says what is age. Lovely write Shaun
June 3rd, 2026 06:29
Mortal Kombat II
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This really brought a smile, my friend. I like how you balance your personal connection to the franchise with a quick rundown of the action. The fights, the familiar faces, the quest for the amulet, and those shocking fatalities all make it feel like a fan\'s honest reaction rather than a review. And the ending leaves that same feeling the film apparently did...now we wait and see what part three brings. Fun write. You\'re basically saying \"Get over here!\" to part 3 rather than \"Fatality!\" to part 2. 😂 I totes now want to see it. Thanks for the poetic review! 🐉🥷
June 2nd, 2026 20:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This really brought a smile, my friend. I like how you balance your personal connection to the franchise with a quick rundown of the action. The fights, the familiar faces, the quest for the amulet, and those shocking fatalities all make it feel like a fan\'s honest reaction rather than a review. And the ending leaves that same feeling the film apparently did...now we wait and see what part three brings. Fun write. You\'re basically saying \"Get over here!\" to part 3 rather than \"Fatality!\" to part 2. 😂 I totes now want to see it. Thanks for the poetic review! 🐉🥷
June 2nd, 2026 20:30
Mortal Kombat II
sorenbarrett said:
Gamming taken to the next level in this poem. Nicely done
June 2nd, 2026 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Gamming taken to the next level in this poem. Nicely done
June 2nd, 2026 05:02
Turn Off The Screen, Turn On Your Mind
arqios said:
Leave it on just enough for poetry, then turn it off until next time 🤣🤩
June 1st, 2026 19:48
arqios said:
Leave it on just enough for poetry, then turn it off until next time 🤣🤩
June 1st, 2026 19:48
Turn Off The Screen, Turn On Your Mind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I can\'t help it...the moment I saw Liverpool my brain immediately went to the Beatles. 😄 That aside, there is a real tension in this piece between technological progress and human connection. The contrast between the Cyberpunk character and real-life choices especially landed for me. Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I can\'t help it...the moment I saw Liverpool my brain immediately went to the Beatles. 😄 That aside, there is a real tension in this piece between technological progress and human connection. The contrast between the Cyberpunk character and real-life choices especially landed for me. Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:52
Turn Off The Screen, Turn On Your Mind
sorenbarrett said:
Technology has taken us down a dangerous road and this poem speaks that. Well written
June 1st, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
Technology has taken us down a dangerous road and this poem speaks that. Well written
June 1st, 2026 04:23
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