Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Make A Cross
sorenbarrett said:
Clever a modern take on Ecclesiastes and there is noting new under the sun. I have wondered that too about there is nothing that I can write that has not already been written. This put in a rap like beat make this write a modern and identifiable one. Loved it
July 20th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Clever a modern take on Ecclesiastes and there is noting new under the sun. I have wondered that too about there is nothing that I can write that has not already been written. This put in a rap like beat make this write a modern and identifiable one. Loved it
July 20th, 2026 04:05
The World Cup 2026 Is So Rigged
peto said:
Spain just saved the game
Nicely written
July 19th, 2026 17:11
peto said:
Spain just saved the game
Nicely written
July 19th, 2026 17:11
My Honda Civic Dreams Are Dashed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha, Shaun, this gave me a good laugh! A beautiful bargain means nothing when parking it requires divine revelation. Fun write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 19th, 2026 06:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha, Shaun, this gave me a good laugh! A beautiful bargain means nothing when parking it requires divine revelation. Fun write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 19th, 2026 06:58
My Honda Civic Dreams Are Dashed
sorenbarrett said:
Shaun this poem literally is sad in its lack of fulfilment but all to real in the price of a vehicle now days. Soon no one will be able to buy only lease or pay uber maybe. For those of us that remember a car is now the price of what a house used to go for when we were young. They have technology that makes impossible to work on them or maintain them yourself and are status symbols not just transportation. This may be a bit of a stretch but it works as a metaphor as well for relationships. Good read my friend
July 19th, 2026 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
Shaun this poem literally is sad in its lack of fulfilment but all to real in the price of a vehicle now days. Soon no one will be able to buy only lease or pay uber maybe. For those of us that remember a car is now the price of what a house used to go for when we were young. They have technology that makes impossible to work on them or maintain them yourself and are status symbols not just transportation. This may be a bit of a stretch but it works as a metaphor as well for relationships. Good read my friend
July 19th, 2026 06:17
My Honda Civic Dreams Are Dashed
arqios said:
Praying you get a suitable alternative.
July 19th, 2026 06:14
arqios said:
Praying you get a suitable alternative.
July 19th, 2026 06:14
The World Cup 2026 Is So Rigged
Mutley Ravishes said:
That photo, Shaun! I was wondering why Lamine Yamal is being hyped so much in this tournament. Not anymore.
July 19th, 2026 04:35
Mutley Ravishes said:
That photo, Shaun! I was wondering why Lamine Yamal is being hyped so much in this tournament. Not anymore.
July 19th, 2026 04:35
The World Cup 2026 Is So Rigged
Kevin Hulme said:
I wish People would stop calling it: \'The Beautiful Game\'. It\'s all about Money. They used to call it the \'The Working Man\'s Game\'.
Now you have to be Elon Musk to get a ticket.
A biting Poem.
July 18th, 2026 19:29
Kevin Hulme said:
I wish People would stop calling it: \'The Beautiful Game\'. It\'s all about Money. They used to call it the \'The Working Man\'s Game\'.
Now you have to be Elon Musk to get a ticket.
A biting Poem.
July 18th, 2026 19:29
The World Cup 2026 Is So Rigged
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I mean, yeah, Shaun...look at the one taking credit for bringing it here, then look at FIFA. I\'ll stop short of declaring everyone an actor, and I do believe the players put their hearts into it, but the entire machine runs on money, power, image, and mass distraction. Your skepticism is hardly emerging from nowhere! Biting piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I mean, yeah, Shaun...look at the one taking credit for bringing it here, then look at FIFA. I\'ll stop short of declaring everyone an actor, and I do believe the players put their hearts into it, but the entire machine runs on money, power, image, and mass distraction. Your skepticism is hardly emerging from nowhere! Biting piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:25
The World Cup 2026 Is So Rigged
sorenbarrett said:
All sports, politics, media and religion are fixed one might say. A fun read have watched most all the games and can see why one would think so. Shaving points in basketball, in boxing taking a fall, someone is making money that\'s all.
July 18th, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
All sports, politics, media and religion are fixed one might say. A fun read have watched most all the games and can see why one would think so. Shaving points in basketball, in boxing taking a fall, someone is making money that\'s all.
July 18th, 2026 03:57
The World Cup 2026 Is So Rigged
orchidee said:
Ohh, he\'s not got so much time for footie now. He gotta bath the baby, and everything else in family life! lol.
July 18th, 2026 01:34
orchidee said:
Ohh, he\'s not got so much time for footie now. He gotta bath the baby, and everything else in family life! lol.
July 18th, 2026 01:34
10 And A Half Months
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, as someone who also no longer drinks, I know exactly where you are. The heart and mind remember while society carries on drinking around us...but ten and a half months is one hell of a feat! Be proud, my friend. I certainly am proud of you. DM me if you ever feel the need to commiserate. We’re in this together! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, as someone who also no longer drinks, I know exactly where you are. The heart and mind remember while society carries on drinking around us...but ten and a half months is one hell of a feat! Be proud, my friend. I certainly am proud of you. DM me if you ever feel the need to commiserate. We’re in this together! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:27
10 And A Half Months
sorenbarrett said:
A celebration of sobriety nicely written in this piece with rhyme. Well done
July 17th, 2026 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
A celebration of sobriety nicely written in this piece with rhyme. Well done
July 17th, 2026 03:36
The Light That Emerged From Darkness
orchidee said:
We\'ve not seen a certain one who\'s gone home, but we saw him the film. lol.
July 16th, 2026 09:34
orchidee said:
We\'ve not seen a certain one who\'s gone home, but we saw him the film. lol.
July 16th, 2026 09:34
The Light That Emerged From Darkness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what an uplifting collaboration. The thread of perseverance runs throughout, and I especially appreciated the reminder that faith keeps us moving forward when fear wants us to stop. The closing reflection ties everything together beautifully. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 16th, 2026 08:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what an uplifting collaboration. The thread of perseverance runs throughout, and I especially appreciated the reminder that faith keeps us moving forward when fear wants us to stop. The closing reflection ties everything together beautifully. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 16th, 2026 08:18
The Light That Emerged From Darkness
sorenbarrett said:
The joining of two poems into one. Each nicely done. Good write
July 16th, 2026 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
The joining of two poems into one. Each nicely done. Good write
July 16th, 2026 03:34
Once God
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this has a lot of conviction behind it. I appreciate the way you describe faith as something that changes your whole perspective rather than just one part of your life. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this has a lot of conviction behind it. I appreciate the way you describe faith as something that changes your whole perspective rather than just one part of your life. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:35
Once God
Doggerel Dave said:
Not particularly interested in where the initial idea comes from, the effort is yours, so pat yourself on the back.
July 15th, 2026 18:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Not particularly interested in where the initial idea comes from, the effort is yours, so pat yourself on the back.
July 15th, 2026 18:22
Once God
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of God taking care of you. Nicely written with rhyme. Well done
July 15th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of God taking care of you. Nicely written with rhyme. Well done
July 15th, 2026 03:59
Fight The Power
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a poem that lays done the glove to those that rule us,BRAVO
July 15th, 2026 02:50
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a poem that lays done the glove to those that rule us,BRAVO
July 15th, 2026 02:50
80s Baby (Masculinity Is Not Toxic)
Kevin Hulme said:
John Wayne, Robert Mitchum. Clint Eastwood.
Not many like them around today. Good Write.
July 14th, 2026 20:24
Kevin Hulme said:
John Wayne, Robert Mitchum. Clint Eastwood.
Not many like them around today. Good Write.
July 14th, 2026 20:24
Fight The Power
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is one heck of a poem. It\'s angry, observant, and unapologetic from beginning to end. What I appreciate most is that it doesn\'t just complain...it questions the assumptions underneath the whole machine. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 14th, 2026 19:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is one heck of a poem. It\'s angry, observant, and unapologetic from beginning to end. What I appreciate most is that it doesn\'t just complain...it questions the assumptions underneath the whole machine. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 14th, 2026 19:09
Fight The Power
sorenbarrett said:
I was brought up in public schools and was brainwashed only now at seventy five has some of it fallen away but private schools seem even more of a brainwashing (maybe in a different way) and theirs seems more of a tattoo than a washing it is permanent. Those that do not defer to conformity are crushed in either system, what we consider the free world is an illusion little different than that of communism or any fascist regimen or religion dominated state. Well written
July 14th, 2026 03:22
sorenbarrett said:
I was brought up in public schools and was brainwashed only now at seventy five has some of it fallen away but private schools seem even more of a brainwashing (maybe in a different way) and theirs seems more of a tattoo than a washing it is permanent. Those that do not defer to conformity are crushed in either system, what we consider the free world is an illusion little different than that of communism or any fascist regimen or religion dominated state. Well written
July 14th, 2026 03:22
Fight The Power
orchidee said:
Let\'s not fight ALL aliens - not the friendly two-initialled guy. lol.
July 14th, 2026 02:03
orchidee said:
Let\'s not fight ALL aliens - not the friendly two-initialled guy. lol.
July 14th, 2026 02:03
Super-Natural and Para-Normal
orchidee said:
Certainly a bad hair day there! lol.
July 13th, 2026 08:51
orchidee said:
Certainly a bad hair day there! lol.
July 13th, 2026 08:51
Super-Natural and Para-Normal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is unapologetic from the first line to the last. I especially enjoyed how the poem keeps its focus on challenging assumptions while expressing your own experience without hesitation. It leaves the reader with something to wrestle with, and I always appreciate poetry that sparks reflection. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is unapologetic from the first line to the last. I especially enjoyed how the poem keeps its focus on challenging assumptions while expressing your own experience without hesitation. It leaves the reader with something to wrestle with, and I always appreciate poetry that sparks reflection. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 08:43
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