Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
The Pain Prolonger
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh I\'m a bit with orchi here - NPCs? Slightly lost with this one.
BTW that geezer who heads your work here - needs an urgent dental appointment: he\'ll never pass muster in today\'s society without a set of pearly whites.....
October 17th, 2025 16:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh I\'m a bit with orchi here - NPCs? Slightly lost with this one.
BTW that geezer who heads your work here - needs an urgent dental appointment: he\'ll never pass muster in today\'s society without a set of pearly whites.....
October 17th, 2025 16:50
The Pain Prolonger
sorenbarrett said:
Non playable characters fill the stands. This poem has a dark and dystopian feel. Well written
October 17th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Non playable characters fill the stands. This poem has a dark and dystopian feel. Well written
October 17th, 2025 04:25
Some Things I Need To Do
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks to a place in time and a feeling in that space. Well done
October 16th, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks to a place in time and a feeling in that space. Well done
October 16th, 2025 04:59
Much Faster
sorenbarrett said:
I remember that story as a child when I had the book and my mother used to read it to us. Yes time is going faster. Flash from the past.
October 15th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
I remember that story as a child when I had the book and my mother used to read it to us. Yes time is going faster. Flash from the past.
October 15th, 2025 03:58
Much Faster
orchidee said:
Oohh,I dunno! There still seem to be 24 hours in a day. Are they passing by more quickly? Ohh, and time goes quickly when one is enjoying oneself, as the saying goes? You been enjoying things?! lol.
October 15th, 2025 01:54
orchidee said:
Oohh,I dunno! There still seem to be 24 hours in a day. Are they passing by more quickly? Ohh, and time goes quickly when one is enjoying oneself, as the saying goes? You been enjoying things?! lol.
October 15th, 2025 01:54
Biodigital Jazz
RSM0812 said:
These are peopke i have never heard of but i get your piint. Nicely done my friend.
October 14th, 2025 05:15
RSM0812 said:
These are peopke i have never heard of but i get your piint. Nicely done my friend.
October 14th, 2025 05:15
Two Teeth
RSM0812 said:
I can relete to this. Dentists are like professional torturers sometimes. Lol
October 14th, 2025 05:12
RSM0812 said:
I can relete to this. Dentists are like professional torturers sometimes. Lol
October 14th, 2025 05:12
Racism
jjudaharts said:
this is a very inspiring poem. Humanity should stand above racism.
October 13th, 2025 13:36
jjudaharts said:
this is a very inspiring poem. Humanity should stand above racism.
October 13th, 2025 13:36
Two Teeth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Everyone\'s fave trip...the Dentist! LOL! Well done, mate!
October 13th, 2025 09:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Everyone\'s fave trip...the Dentist! LOL! Well done, mate!
October 13th, 2025 09:40
Two Teeth
sorenbarrett said:
Dental procedures are nothing to look forward to. A read I could empathize with. Well done
October 13th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Dental procedures are nothing to look forward to. A read I could empathize with. Well done
October 13th, 2025 04:06
Biodigital Jazz
sorenbarrett said:
Remember Tron as a movie when it first came out but have buried it years ago and it slips by me now. Good write my friend
October 12th, 2025 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Remember Tron as a movie when it first came out but have buried it years ago and it slips by me now. Good write my friend
October 12th, 2025 06:30
Earth\'s Twisted Game
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shawn, this reads like an anthem for the tired mind...defiance, apathy, awakening all colliding. You’ve written what it means to be alive and half-numb in these twisted times. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2025 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shawn, this reads like an anthem for the tired mind...defiance, apathy, awakening all colliding. You’ve written what it means to be alive and half-numb in these twisted times. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2025 08:28
Earth\'s Twisted Game
Poetic Licence said:
Lets hope the circle we appear to be stuck in gets broken, well expressed anger and frustration
October 11th, 2025 07:50
Poetic Licence said:
Lets hope the circle we appear to be stuck in gets broken, well expressed anger and frustration
October 11th, 2025 07:50
Earth\'s Twisted Game
Paul Bell said:
Panic when the earth stops revolving, and we\'re all thrown to the wolves.
Good soul song for your epitaph.
October 11th, 2025 06:07
Paul Bell said:
Panic when the earth stops revolving, and we\'re all thrown to the wolves.
Good soul song for your epitaph.
October 11th, 2025 06:07
Earth\'s Twisted Game
sorenbarrett said:
DNA in a spiral, Music on a record player gos in circles, Bat man puts on and takes off his disguise, mental illnesses too have cycles, the earth revolves. We are all going in circles nicely done
October 11th, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
DNA in a spiral, Music on a record player gos in circles, Bat man puts on and takes off his disguise, mental illnesses too have cycles, the earth revolves. We are all going in circles nicely done
October 11th, 2025 03:43
Things Will Get Worse (Profiled)
Poetic Licence said:
We are fast heading that way, hopefully someone can put the brakes on, enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 15:39
Poetic Licence said:
We are fast heading that way, hopefully someone can put the brakes on, enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 15:39
Things Will Get Worse (Profiled)
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a proclamation of doom and reports a sense that the end is near. Well done
October 10th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a proclamation of doom and reports a sense that the end is near. Well done
October 10th, 2025 04:11
A Cosmic Gateway
sorenbarrett said:
Questions that all those that believe in intelligent life on other planets ask. Of course we define intelligent by our own standard in comparison to ourselves. A fun read
October 9th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Questions that all those that believe in intelligent life on other planets ask. Of course we define intelligent by our own standard in comparison to ourselves. A fun read
October 9th, 2025 04:11
A Cosmic Gateway
orchidee said:
You would meet E....... Oh, you knows the guy by now without me spelling it out - only has two initials! lol.
October 9th, 2025 02:12
orchidee said:
You would meet E....... Oh, you knows the guy by now without me spelling it out - only has two initials! lol.
October 9th, 2025 02:12
Order Out Of Chaos (Part.2)
orchidee said:
You got that thick coat out yet, for the winter months?! lol.
October 8th, 2025 09:17
orchidee said:
You got that thick coat out yet, for the winter months?! lol.
October 8th, 2025 09:17
Order Out Of Chaos (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
Cynical and practical this poem speaks of a world where might makes right and the powerful rule. Looking for a better day. Nicely worded
October 8th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Cynical and practical this poem speaks of a world where might makes right and the powerful rule. Looking for a better day. Nicely worded
October 8th, 2025 04:44
Dystopian Rap
NafisaSB said:
i agree with most of your views- and am troubled by the lack of freedom these days..Who\'s pulling the strings, indeed?
October 8th, 2025 00:49
NafisaSB said:
i agree with most of your views- and am troubled by the lack of freedom these days..Who\'s pulling the strings, indeed?
October 8th, 2025 00:49
God\'s Connections
sorenbarrett said:
Beliefs do drive lives and this is a nice expression of one. Well worded
October 7th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Beliefs do drive lives and this is a nice expression of one. Well worded
October 7th, 2025 04:07
God\'s Connections
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Hope you have - or find - peace of mind (apart from ET. lol).
October 7th, 2025 02:08
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Hope you have - or find - peace of mind (apart from ET. lol).
October 7th, 2025 02:08
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