Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Hope
Durdica Porobija said:
Hope is the principle of life. Pictured vividly in the poem - well written.
June 29th, 2026 13:04
Durdica Porobija said:
Hope is the principle of life. Pictured vividly in the poem - well written.
June 29th, 2026 13:04
Bluetooth Headphones
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a fun, relatable write. You took a minor inconvenience that just about everyone has experienced and turned it into an entertaining read with a lighthearted finish. Sometimes everyday moments make for the best poems. Wonderful write, my friend! ππΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 28th, 2026 20:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a fun, relatable write. You took a minor inconvenience that just about everyone has experienced and turned it into an entertaining read with a lighthearted finish. Sometimes everyday moments make for the best poems. Wonderful write, my friend! ππΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 28th, 2026 20:10
Bluetooth Headphones
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and poignant with our increased dependance on technology we only miss when it is missing. Well done
June 28th, 2026 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and poignant with our increased dependance on technology we only miss when it is missing. Well done
June 28th, 2026 07:43
Bluetooth Headphones
orchidee said:
Good write SM. You could rock your head from side to side while wearing the headphones, and folk wouldn\'t know you\'ve gone silent. lol.
June 28th, 2026 03:11
orchidee said:
Good write SM. You could rock your head from side to side while wearing the headphones, and folk wouldn\'t know you\'ve gone silent. lol.
June 28th, 2026 03:11
Game Of Thrones : Spoiler Alert
sorenbarrett said:
A great poetic synopsis of the show. Well done
June 27th, 2026 11:45
sorenbarrett said:
A great poetic synopsis of the show. Well done
June 27th, 2026 11:45
Game Of Thrones : Spoiler Alert
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this gave me a good laugh. You managed to squeeze an entire epic fantasy series into a handful of witty rhymes, and somehow even the ending controversy made me smile. Nicely done, my friend! ππΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 27th, 2026 10:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this gave me a good laugh. You managed to squeeze an entire epic fantasy series into a handful of witty rhymes, and somehow even the ending controversy made me smile. Nicely done, my friend! ππΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 27th, 2026 10:53
Rest
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what struck me most here is the quiet simplicity of it all...the comfort of a satisfying meal, the pull of an afternoon nap, and the bittersweet way dreams vanish with waking. It\'s an everyday moment we all know, and you brought it to life with warmth and honesty. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 25th, 2026 10:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what struck me most here is the quiet simplicity of it all...the comfort of a satisfying meal, the pull of an afternoon nap, and the bittersweet way dreams vanish with waking. It\'s an everyday moment we all know, and you brought it to life with warmth and honesty. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 25th, 2026 10:48
Rest
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point food requires energy to digest leaving us tired in need of rest. Love the cycle presented
June 25th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point food requires energy to digest leaving us tired in need of rest. Love the cycle presented
June 25th, 2026 04:30
Random Rhyming (Part.9)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this has the feel of somebody letting thoughts fly without worrying too much about where they\'ll land. Music, memories, cultural references, and skepticism all collide in a rapid-fire stream. Enjoyed this piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 24th, 2026 13:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this has the feel of somebody letting thoughts fly without worrying too much about where they\'ll land. Music, memories, cultural references, and skepticism all collide in a rapid-fire stream. Enjoyed this piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 24th, 2026 13:03
Random Rhyming (Part.9)
sorenbarrett said:
The playbook is open and the shuffle is on. Well written Shaun
June 24th, 2026 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
The playbook is open and the shuffle is on. Well written Shaun
June 24th, 2026 04:36
The Industry (Part.3)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this certainly doesnβt pull any punches. The whole piece comes at the reader with a barrage of questions and suspicions, creating a feeling of unease that builds as it goes. One intense ride, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 23rd, 2026 22:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this certainly doesnβt pull any punches. The whole piece comes at the reader with a barrage of questions and suspicions, creating a feeling of unease that builds as it goes. One intense ride, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 23rd, 2026 22:22
Hope
RSM0812 said:
Nicely done. Short and sweer. Great message. Enjoyed the read.
June 23rd, 2026 07:05
RSM0812 said:
Nicely done. Short and sweer. Great message. Enjoyed the read.
June 23rd, 2026 07:05
The Industry (Part.3)
sorenbarrett said:
It is the clever linking of the distant past with the present that gets the fave in this poem of rhyme that seems almost rap. Its style lends it to its subject matter. So nicely done
June 23rd, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
It is the clever linking of the distant past with the present that gets the fave in this poem of rhyme that seems almost rap. Its style lends it to its subject matter. So nicely done
June 23rd, 2026 03:55
The Industry (Part.3)
orchidee said:
Dunno, can\'t tell if some celebrities are human or robots - or wooden acting. lol.
June 23rd, 2026 02:25
orchidee said:
Dunno, can\'t tell if some celebrities are human or robots - or wooden acting. lol.
June 23rd, 2026 02:25
Semen Retention
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this hit me hard. There is a real sense of determination running through it...the feeling of somebody fighting a difficult battle one day at a time and refusing to surrender ground. Powerful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 22nd, 2026 10:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this hit me hard. There is a real sense of determination running through it...the feeling of somebody fighting a difficult battle one day at a time and refusing to surrender ground. Powerful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 22nd, 2026 10:15
Hope
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this hit me at just the right moment. Thereβs something refreshing about choosing optimism without pretending life is perfect. A short piece, but it carries a lot of encouragement, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
June 22nd, 2026 09:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this hit me at just the right moment. Thereβs something refreshing about choosing optimism without pretending life is perfect. A short piece, but it carries a lot of encouragement, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
June 22nd, 2026 09:55
Semen Retention
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is a different topic. Such interesting allegories presented here with good rhyme. A thought provoking read the seems to need a sequel of the benefits.
June 22nd, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is a different topic. Such interesting allegories presented here with good rhyme. A thought provoking read the seems to need a sequel of the benefits.
June 22nd, 2026 03:52
Semen Retention
orchidee said:
E.T.\'s not human, so he doesn\'t experience this - ooh!
June 22nd, 2026 02:06
orchidee said:
E.T.\'s not human, so he doesn\'t experience this - ooh!
June 22nd, 2026 02:06
Hope
sorenbarrett said:
A most encouraging and motivating poem well written Shaun
June 21st, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
A most encouraging and motivating poem well written Shaun
June 21st, 2026 04:29
The Book Of Eli
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what I like here is the balance between the physical journey and the spiritual one. The action and confrontation are there, but beneath them is the sense of purpose and direction that keeps everything moving forward. Thought-provoking write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 20th, 2026 09:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what I like here is the balance between the physical journey and the spiritual one. The action and confrontation are there, but beneath them is the sense of purpose and direction that keeps everything moving forward. Thought-provoking write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 20th, 2026 09:29
The Book Of Eli
sorenbarrett said:
A synopsis here in memoriam of a film but a film that seems to point out the violence of god over his creation man. Well done
June 20th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
A synopsis here in memoriam of a film but a film that seems to point out the violence of god over his creation man. Well done
June 20th, 2026 03:56
Offline
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, Iβve caught myself wondering before whether weβd be better off or worse off if all the screens suddenly went dark. This brought some of those thoughts back for me. Interesting piece, Shaun. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 19th, 2026 22:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, Iβve caught myself wondering before whether weβd be better off or worse off if all the screens suddenly went dark. This brought some of those thoughts back for me. Interesting piece, Shaun. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 19th, 2026 22:16
Offline
orchidee said:
Yes, I remember the time E.T. was here, before he went home! lol.
June 19th, 2026 12:24
orchidee said:
Yes, I remember the time E.T. was here, before he went home! lol.
June 19th, 2026 12:24
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