Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Alien Nation
Doggerel Dave said:
Your pins get stronger and more pointed all the time, Shaun. I\'m for the commitment.
Now it might come as no surprise that I haven\'t got a favourite rapper, (oh please!) but I still think your last line is a beauty!
February 8th, 2026 17:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Your pins get stronger and more pointed all the time, Shaun. I\'m for the commitment.
Now it might come as no surprise that I haven\'t got a favourite rapper, (oh please!) but I still think your last line is a beauty!
February 8th, 2026 17:31
Alien Nation
orchidee said:
And - good write Joan (of Arc), erm, SM. Just call me Napoleon - gone bit nutty! lol.
February 8th, 2026 12:56
orchidee said:
And - good write Joan (of Arc), erm, SM. Just call me Napoleon - gone bit nutty! lol.
February 8th, 2026 12:56
Alien Nation
orchidee said:
Yep, the one on the right looks a tad like.... we know who! lol.
With demons, I don\'t deny their existence, but tend to think some folk may be oppressed, even possessed by then, only as a last line of thought type of thing.
February 8th, 2026 12:54
orchidee said:
Yep, the one on the right looks a tad like.... we know who! lol.
With demons, I don\'t deny their existence, but tend to think some folk may be oppressed, even possessed by then, only as a last line of thought type of thing.
February 8th, 2026 12:54
Alien Nation
sorenbarrett said:
It is hard to know what to believe these days. A poignant poem well done
February 8th, 2026 10:42
sorenbarrett said:
It is hard to know what to believe these days. A poignant poem well done
February 8th, 2026 10:42
Alien Nation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wait, Mick Jagger was on Alien Nation? LOL! Just kidding, of course. (He does kinda draw that vibe in the pic, no?) A raw snapshot, Shaun. The poem reads as a collision of media, fear, belief, and burnout, and the lack of resolution feels intentional. It reflects how disorienting it can be to live inside constant noise. Strong, unfiltered work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 8th, 2026 09:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wait, Mick Jagger was on Alien Nation? LOL! Just kidding, of course. (He does kinda draw that vibe in the pic, no?) A raw snapshot, Shaun. The poem reads as a collision of media, fear, belief, and burnout, and the lack of resolution feels intentional. It reflects how disorienting it can be to live inside constant noise. Strong, unfiltered work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 8th, 2026 09:52
I Sold All My Jay-Z Albums (Part.2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A tense piece, Shaun. It reads as a snapshot of cultural anxiety more than accusation…how rumor, revelation, and silence collide and leave people grasping for footing. You captured that instability clearly, my friend. As for me, I\'ve never owned a Jay-Z album...so win/win! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 7th, 2026 10:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A tense piece, Shaun. It reads as a snapshot of cultural anxiety more than accusation…how rumor, revelation, and silence collide and leave people grasping for footing. You captured that instability clearly, my friend. As for me, I\'ve never owned a Jay-Z album...so win/win! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 7th, 2026 10:12
I Sold All My Jay-Z Albums (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and with a bouncy beat this poem rocks and is on top with a bit of humor as well as current social media referrals. Well done
February 7th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and with a bouncy beat this poem rocks and is on top with a bit of humor as well as current social media referrals. Well done
February 7th, 2026 03:59
Monitoring Spirits
orchidee said:
I\'m overdoing it now! lol. I sense.... a spirit? Well, not exactly. It\'s only E.T. lol.
February 7th, 2026 03:43
orchidee said:
I\'m overdoing it now! lol. I sense.... a spirit? Well, not exactly. It\'s only E.T. lol.
February 7th, 2026 03:43
I Sold All My Jay-Z Albums (Part.2)
orchidee said:
I never had any of his albums to start with! lol.
Now an obvious question - did a certain alien make any albums before he went home? lol.
February 7th, 2026 03:37
orchidee said:
I never had any of his albums to start with! lol.
Now an obvious question - did a certain alien make any albums before he went home? lol.
February 7th, 2026 03:37
Monitoring Spirits
marissa said:
I have a lot of these people,any idea how to get rid of them when they are family?Such a sad but true poem!
February 6th, 2026 15:55
marissa said:
I have a lot of these people,any idea how to get rid of them when they are family?Such a sad but true poem!
February 6th, 2026 15:55
Monitoring Spirits
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reminded me how paranoia and perception can blur when trust erodes. That feeling of unseen judgment hovering just out of reach is something many people recognize. You capture that atmosphere clearly. Well done, mate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 6th, 2026 15:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reminded me how paranoia and perception can blur when trust erodes. That feeling of unseen judgment hovering just out of reach is something many people recognize. You capture that atmosphere clearly. Well done, mate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 6th, 2026 15:08
Monitoring Spirits
sorenbarrett said:
So uncomfortable being watched one becomes self conscious. Well written
February 6th, 2026 14:21
sorenbarrett said:
So uncomfortable being watched one becomes self conscious. Well written
February 6th, 2026 14:21
Moving Forward
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is about movement that isn’t triumphant, just necessary. Small steps, hidden damage, changed perspective, and a quiet sense of presence underneath it all. It’s restrained, reflective, and grounded. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 3rd, 2026 10:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is about movement that isn’t triumphant, just necessary. Small steps, hidden damage, changed perspective, and a quiet sense of presence underneath it all. It’s restrained, reflective, and grounded. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 3rd, 2026 10:23
Moving Forward
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents to me the starting point for most a block to push off of. Nicely worded
February 3rd, 2026 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents to me the starting point for most a block to push off of. Nicely worded
February 3rd, 2026 04:37
Moving Forward
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Should we also have faith in........., though he\'s \'gone home\' - does he exist?! Yes!! lol.
February 3rd, 2026 03:31
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Should we also have faith in........., though he\'s \'gone home\' - does he exist?! Yes!! lol.
February 3rd, 2026 03:31
Poetry For The Unemployed
Doggerel Dave said:
Exploitation raw and hard - you have nailed it.
February 2nd, 2026 17:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Exploitation raw and hard - you have nailed it.
February 2nd, 2026 17:24
Poetry For The Unemployed
orchidee said:
Good write SM. You seen a certain chap lately?! lol.
February 2nd, 2026 14:02
orchidee said:
Good write SM. You seen a certain chap lately?! lol.
February 2nd, 2026 14:02
Poetry For The Unemployed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this resonates as a voice from inside the grind rather than commentary from above it. The refusal to romanticize unemployment while still naming dignity feels important and necessary. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 2nd, 2026 13:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this resonates as a voice from inside the grind rather than commentary from above it. The refusal to romanticize unemployment while still naming dignity feels important and necessary. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 2nd, 2026 13:24
Poetry For The Unemployed
sorenbarrett said:
A sad picture is painted in this poem of those disenfranchised and without hope in a world that has become mechanized and they are no longer needed. Well written
February 2nd, 2026 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A sad picture is painted in this poem of those disenfranchised and without hope in a world that has become mechanized and they are no longer needed. Well written
February 2nd, 2026 05:06
No Medication
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this resonates as a cry from the space between help and harm. The sense of being offered solutions that feel worse than the illness itself is something many recognize, even if answers remain elusive. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 1st, 2026 23:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this resonates as a cry from the space between help and harm. The sense of being offered solutions that feel worse than the illness itself is something many recognize, even if answers remain elusive. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 1st, 2026 23:28
No Medication
Doggerel Dave said:
Antipsychotics are at such a primitive stage in terms of a goal which would be a cure or control of symptoms without massive side effects. Solutions to come from Big Pharma which is driven to make profits.....The whole damn thing.
February 1st, 2026 16:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Antipsychotics are at such a primitive stage in terms of a goal which would be a cure or control of symptoms without massive side effects. Solutions to come from Big Pharma which is driven to make profits.....The whole damn thing.
February 1st, 2026 16:28
No Medication
sorenbarrett said:
A poem after my own heart where some medications are necessary for certain individuals money has gotten in the way and blown everything far out of proportion. Bottom line preempts common sense and caution as to side effects and they rely on ignorance in the public and doctors to push profits higher. Where doctors that hold stock or at least their family members do serve on the FDA making decisions as to which drug is approved or not and when they fall out of patent discontinue production leaving those dependent upon them up the proverbial creek. A sad write.
February 1st, 2026 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem after my own heart where some medications are necessary for certain individuals money has gotten in the way and blown everything far out of proportion. Bottom line preempts common sense and caution as to side effects and they rely on ignorance in the public and doctors to push profits higher. Where doctors that hold stock or at least their family members do serve on the FDA making decisions as to which drug is approved or not and when they fall out of patent discontinue production leaving those dependent upon them up the proverbial creek. A sad write.
February 1st, 2026 13:39
PC Upgrades
RSM0812 said:
Aint that the truth. Technology is now impossible to outsmart and keep up with. Ai and fast machines will now always beat us to the punch. Nice rig in the pic too. One of my faves.
January 31st, 2026 19:44
RSM0812 said:
Aint that the truth. Technology is now impossible to outsmart and keep up with. Ai and fast machines will now always beat us to the punch. Nice rig in the pic too. One of my faves.
January 31st, 2026 19:44
Praying Before Sleep
RSM0812 said:
A good write about time, life, death and the fulfilment of joy and leisure. Interesting and imaginative. Nice ✍️
January 31st, 2026 07:54
RSM0812 said:
A good write about time, life, death and the fulfilment of joy and leisure. Interesting and imaginative. Nice ✍️
January 31st, 2026 07:54
What Happened to England?
RSM0812 said:
An interesting write with a great moral point. Enjoyed the read immensely.
January 31st, 2026 07:52
RSM0812 said:
An interesting write with a great moral point. Enjoyed the read immensely.
January 31st, 2026 07:52
What Happened to England?
Doggerel Dave said:
My memories of the sixties, seventies and part eighties there was a little different. I\'d be a fool to claim it was perfect, but by all accounts (yours and others) it has gone down the gurgler since.
January 30th, 2026 04:49
Doggerel Dave said:
My memories of the sixties, seventies and part eighties there was a little different. I\'d be a fool to claim it was perfect, but by all accounts (yours and others) it has gone down the gurgler since.
January 30th, 2026 04:49
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