Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry



Wait Until The Angels Sing
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Shaun, what an unsettling poem! The dread keeps intensifying until ordinary life feels only moments away from complete collapse. One heck of a dark write, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 27th, 2026 09:06

Wait Until The Angels Sing
sorenbarrett said:

Shaun this poem recounts the state of present affairs which sadly are not what we would wish for. And those angels are up right after the fat lady sings.

July 27th, 2026 04:32

My Honda Civic Dreams Are Dashed
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:

awww i love my lil miata the same way bro

July 26th, 2026 19:19

Endgame (Another Virus)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Shaun, what one heck of a ride! This reads like modern technological nightmare hijacked a blockbuster marathon, loaded the weapons, and started rhyming. Wild, clever, menacing, and unmistakably you, my friend! Thoroughly enjoyed from beginnging to end. Also, agree with Soren on the use of virus. Quite clever..πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 26th, 2026 18:10

Endgame (Another Virus)
orchidee said:

Is that, oh, I dunno, Edward Turner in that pic - the initials. heehee.

July 26th, 2026 11:55

Endgame (Another Virus)
sorenbarrett said:

The key question on this one is the word virus. Is it a computer virus or human virus? Well done Shaun

July 26th, 2026 03:48

Endgame (Another Virus)
2781 said:

God knows.

July 26th, 2026 03:29

Fragments
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Shaun, what a strong piece! The humor draws me in, but beneath it sits a fractured spirit wrestling with guilt, confinement, and a God who already knows everything we are afraid to admit. Excellent write, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 25th, 2026 09:14

Fragments
sorenbarrett said:

There is a sense of captivity in this poem be it of a mundane day or routine or life itself. Well done with rhyme

July 25th, 2026 04:19

Fragments
orchidee said:

That you there, breaking that mirror? Or is it someone else in disguise, e.g. Edward Taylor? heehee. (see the initials).

July 25th, 2026 01:53

What Is Reality? (Some Think)
Mutley Ravishes said:

If it is a simulation then surely that begs the question, why?! And if the \"top dogs\" know this (see London Olympic Opening & Closing Ceremonies breakdown by Jason B.) as they appear to, then what part are they playing on this \"stage\"? So many mysteries. Great write, Shaun.

July 24th, 2026 22:11

What Is Reality? (Some Think)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Shaun, this is one wildly entertaining trip through the collective human imagination! Funny, frantic, and just unsettling enough to leave me wondering whether someone is presently airbrushing me out of existence. πŸ€£πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 24th, 2026 09:29

What Is Reality? (Some Think)
sorenbarrett said:

Is it not strange that the more we are connected by internet the wider the span of opinions on reality. A good poem Shaun

July 24th, 2026 04:17

What Is Reality? (Some Think)
orchidee said:

Ohhh, we know a certain one is real - Eric Turner is it?! (the initials) Not that old joke again! lol.

July 24th, 2026 01:57

Hollywood Curses (Part.4)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Shaun, this gave me a laugh while making a legitimate point about corporate storytelling. I am considerably less alarmed by Tom Holland’s stomach than you are πŸ˜‚...but the juicy pants are a superhero fashion crime! 🀣 Jokes aside, I absolutely share your frustration when market calculations replace meaningful character development. Give me a compelling story and an earned transformation...the wardrobe can fend for itself! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 23rd, 2026 08:23

Hollywood Curses (Part.4)
RSM0812 said:

Wait till u see supergirl.

July 23rd, 2026 05:43

Hollywood Curses (Part.4)
sorenbarrett said:

Shaun you are growing old, I felt these things many years ago and the noticing of such is a sign of age. Grew up on radio, then black and white TV, this went to color, from drive in movies to cinema, to streaming now adds fill all even if placement adds, from punch cards to touch screen, I hear what you mean in this poem my friend and feel it too. Well done

July 23rd, 2026 04:28

Hollywood Curses (Part.4)
orchidee said:

Ohh, we not got time for their antics! lol.

July 23rd, 2026 02:06

Physical Disks
Kevin Hulme said:

Yes. I never bother with \'Streaming\' or anything on the Internet. Only CDs and DVDs. Though they are hard to get now. But I won\'t play their game and Stream. It\'s all money.
Well Said. πŸ‘

July 22nd, 2026 07:39

In Brightest Day And Blackest Night
mvvenkataraman said:

The poem in the green box is extraordinary !

All the best !

July 22nd, 2026 05:35

In Brightest Day And Blackest Night
mvvenkataraman said:

The poem in the green box is extraordinary !

All the best !

July 22nd, 2026 05:35

In Brightest Day And Blackest Night
sorenbarrett said:

A write of a most interesting observation. I am sure there are many answers for this question but then there are many interpretations of this poem as well. Nicely done with a bit of fun.

July 22nd, 2026 04:32

In Brightest Day And Blackest Night
orchidee said:

That you in disguise there?! lol. Well, it\'s not.... Oh, give it a rest, says Eddie Thompson to me. lol.

July 22nd, 2026 02:09

Physical Disks
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Shaun, this is one heck of a poem. Funny, sharp, and absolutely infuriating because every bit of it is true. We pay for access, call it ownership, and then watch it disappear whenever a corporation changes its mind. Powerful work, my friend! πŸ’ΏπŸ“€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 21st, 2026 20:16

Physical Disks
orchidee said:

Good write SM. I don\'t see a film about.......... in that pile. We knows him! lol

July 21st, 2026 11:06

My Honda Civic Dreams Are Dashed
NafisaSB said:

That’s sad. Hope you get a better one ultimately

July 21st, 2026 06:52

Physical Disks
sorenbarrett said:

This write represents the capitalistic and need for pay per view and the governmental control over information inherent in cloud usage all susceptible to a downed internet or power outage. What happened to good old fashioned books that do not rely on electricity or censors. Well done and a fave

July 21st, 2026 04:45

Make A Cross
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Shaun, this carries real frustration with imitation, conformity, and people consuming symbols without questioning what they represent. Strong and provocative write, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 20th, 2026 08:44

10 And A Half Months
RSM0812 said:

Good message. Alcoholism can be a huge problem for people. Not just on the budget.

July 20th, 2026 06:55

Make A Cross
orchidee said:

Good write SM. Erm, you could write about Eddie Thompson. I think that\'s his name (see initials. lol).

July 20th, 2026 06:52

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