Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Order Out Of Chaos (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
Cynical and practical this poem speaks of a world where might makes right and the powerful rule. Looking for a better day. Nicely worded
October 8th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Cynical and practical this poem speaks of a world where might makes right and the powerful rule. Looking for a better day. Nicely worded
October 8th, 2025 04:44
Dystopian Rap
NafisaSB said:
i agree with most of your views- and am troubled by the lack of freedom these days..Who\'s pulling the strings, indeed?
October 8th, 2025 00:49
NafisaSB said:
i agree with most of your views- and am troubled by the lack of freedom these days..Who\'s pulling the strings, indeed?
October 8th, 2025 00:49
God\'s Connections
sorenbarrett said:
Beliefs do drive lives and this is a nice expression of one. Well worded
October 7th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Beliefs do drive lives and this is a nice expression of one. Well worded
October 7th, 2025 04:07
God\'s Connections
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Hope you have - or find - peace of mind (apart from ET. lol).
October 7th, 2025 02:08
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Hope you have - or find - peace of mind (apart from ET. lol).
October 7th, 2025 02:08
I\'m So Sorry
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Got the feeling you are going to get there - you certainly have the insight to do it.
October 6th, 2025 18:59
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Got the feeling you are going to get there - you certainly have the insight to do it.
October 6th, 2025 18:59
I\'m So Sorry
Paul Bell said:
Good to see the path is clear.
Makes the journey ahead that little bit easier.
October 6th, 2025 14:01
Paul Bell said:
Good to see the path is clear.
Makes the journey ahead that little bit easier.
October 6th, 2025 14:01
I\'m So Sorry
orchidee said:
A fine write SM. hoping you have (or continue to have) peace of mind. Meanwhile - I\'m the author of confusion, it\'s me, with all my E.T. distractions! heehee. Has he really gone home, or did we see him at the Co-op the other day? lol.
October 6th, 2025 11:14
orchidee said:
A fine write SM. hoping you have (or continue to have) peace of mind. Meanwhile - I\'m the author of confusion, it\'s me, with all my E.T. distractions! heehee. Has he really gone home, or did we see him at the Co-op the other day? lol.
October 6th, 2025 11:14
I\'m So Sorry
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of recovery. Nicely written in poetic style
October 6th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of recovery. Nicely written in poetic style
October 6th, 2025 04:12
Storm Amy
Doggerel Dave said:
Happening now? Didn\'t know. Thanks for the update.
We all in our different places are going to have to get used to increased frequency of unwelcome weather events, mate.
October 5th, 2025 17:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Happening now? Didn\'t know. Thanks for the update.
We all in our different places are going to have to get used to increased frequency of unwelcome weather events, mate.
October 5th, 2025 17:26
Storm Amy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I so get this! Storms...ugh! LOL! Well done, my friend! 🌀
October 5th, 2025 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I so get this! Storms...ugh! LOL! Well done, my friend! 🌀
October 5th, 2025 07:55
Storm Amy
orchidee said:
Ohh, a literal bad hair day. Is that my only matter of major importance when there\'s a storm? lol.
October 5th, 2025 04:21
orchidee said:
Ohh, a literal bad hair day. Is that my only matter of major importance when there\'s a storm? lol.
October 5th, 2025 04:21
Storm Amy
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds so familiar I am sure that Deja vu exists. Good read
October 5th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds so familiar I am sure that Deja vu exists. Good read
October 5th, 2025 04:19
Indoctrinated
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indoctrination is the name of the human game. Whether it is religion (and I am a person of faith, so no slight there), politics, education, etc. We are indoctrinated at every turn from breath one. Fantastic write...and great album drop too! Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 4th, 2025 08:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indoctrination is the name of the human game. Whether it is religion (and I am a person of faith, so no slight there), politics, education, etc. We are indoctrinated at every turn from breath one. Fantastic write...and great album drop too! Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 4th, 2025 08:37
Indoctrinated
sorenbarrett said:
We think that the present is a time of indoctrination but it has always been with us. The history I was never taught, the prejudice they tried to teach, the belief that only your god existed so many beliefs of false news from the past. Good write made me think
October 4th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
We think that the present is a time of indoctrination but it has always been with us. The history I was never taught, the prejudice they tried to teach, the belief that only your god existed so many beliefs of false news from the past. Good write made me think
October 4th, 2025 04:29
Twisted Metal Season 2
sorenbarrett said:
I can smell the fumes in the air. This poem brims with excitement and energy. Nicely done
October 3rd, 2025 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
I can smell the fumes in the air. This poem brims with excitement and energy. Nicely done
October 3rd, 2025 06:20
An Aura (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem\'s presentation of a point of view that I thought had died out. People do have that type of glow that is identifiable and one calls an aura. Nicely written
October 2nd, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem\'s presentation of a point of view that I thought had died out. People do have that type of glow that is identifiable and one calls an aura. Nicely written
October 2nd, 2025 04:11
Dystopian Rap
Doggerel Dave said:
Nobody can say they weren\'t warned.... well warned, Sir!
Neatly put, Shaun.
October 1st, 2025 21:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Nobody can say they weren\'t warned.... well warned, Sir!
Neatly put, Shaun.
October 1st, 2025 21:22
Dystopian Rap
sorenbarrett said:
I remember reading Brave New World, 1984 and they at the time seemed so foreign now a dark prophesy that is unfolding. A good write.
October 1st, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
I remember reading Brave New World, 1984 and they at the time seemed so foreign now a dark prophesy that is unfolding. A good write.
October 1st, 2025 04:13
Dystopian Rap
Paul Bell said:
Who would have thought in Britain you could get arrested for free speech.
The world sure is on edge and the worse is still to come.
October 1st, 2025 03:36
Paul Bell said:
Who would have thought in Britain you could get arrested for free speech.
The world sure is on edge and the worse is still to come.
October 1st, 2025 03:36
Dystopian Rap
orchidee said:
Well, some said the end of the world was gonna be 1914 - but we\'re still \'ere! lol.
October 1st, 2025 02:20
orchidee said:
Well, some said the end of the world was gonna be 1914 - but we\'re still \'ere! lol.
October 1st, 2025 02:20
Sober Rhymes
Doggerel Dave said:
A marker describing precisely where you are at now?
Interesting to see where you go after that.
So well written.
September 30th, 2025 18:03
Doggerel Dave said:
A marker describing precisely where you are at now?
Interesting to see where you go after that.
So well written.
September 30th, 2025 18:03
Sober Rhymes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shawn, this is a strong piece...sober honesty, candid lines, and a prayer woven in. The struggle, the humor, the growth all walk together here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 30th, 2025 17:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shawn, this is a strong piece...sober honesty, candid lines, and a prayer woven in. The struggle, the humor, the growth all walk together here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 30th, 2025 17:42
Sober Rhymes
sorenbarrett said:
In transition from one stage of development to another I get these feelings a type of metamorphosis. Nicely put to poetic verse and rhyme
September 30th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
In transition from one stage of development to another I get these feelings a type of metamorphosis. Nicely put to poetic verse and rhyme
September 30th, 2025 04:10
Sober Rhymes
orchidee said:
Ooh, it\'s educational on \'ere, ya know, not any ole rubbish. lol. Had to check that aspartame, wot it is. It\'s got phenylalanine in it, which is in some diluted drinks.
September 30th, 2025 02:16
orchidee said:
Ooh, it\'s educational on \'ere, ya know, not any ole rubbish. lol. Had to check that aspartame, wot it is. It\'s got phenylalanine in it, which is in some diluted drinks.
September 30th, 2025 02:16
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