Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Behind Closed Doors (Part.2) - Jordan\'s Sacrifice
orchidee said:
Ohh, I\'ve not time for celebrities \'antics\'! lol.
July 17th, 2025 11:24
orchidee said:
Ohh, I\'ve not time for celebrities \'antics\'! lol.
July 17th, 2025 11:24
Behind Closed Doors (Part.2) - Jordan\'s Sacrifice
sorenbarrett said:
Values shown in actions taken. A questioning poem around what people find important to themselves. Poignant.
July 17th, 2025 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
Values shown in actions taken. A questioning poem around what people find important to themselves. Poignant.
July 17th, 2025 03:38
A Broken Brain / Insane / God\'s Game
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is raw and real here, Shawn...and I know you\'ve lived through the storm. I don\'t see science as an enemy or a friend...it\'s really neutral. What gets me worked up is when agendas hide behind \"the science.\" In my own journey with mental health, some treatments and meds have helped...others, not so much. For me, the danger comes when corporate or political motives override the actual science. Too much of that goes on and we all know it. 🌹👏 As for demons, you and I both know they\'re real...and there ain\'t no magic pill to get rid of them. There is the grace of Lord and Savior though! Praise God for that! This piece certainly got the thought-juices flowing, my friend, and for that I am always thankful!
July 16th, 2025 08:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is raw and real here, Shawn...and I know you\'ve lived through the storm. I don\'t see science as an enemy or a friend...it\'s really neutral. What gets me worked up is when agendas hide behind \"the science.\" In my own journey with mental health, some treatments and meds have helped...others, not so much. For me, the danger comes when corporate or political motives override the actual science. Too much of that goes on and we all know it. 🌹👏 As for demons, you and I both know they\'re real...and there ain\'t no magic pill to get rid of them. There is the grace of Lord and Savior though! Praise God for that! This piece certainly got the thought-juices flowing, my friend, and for that I am always thankful!
July 16th, 2025 08:31
A Broken Brain / Insane / God\'s Game
sorenbarrett said:
A good deal of truth here. A thought provoking poem science vs I deamonds very nicely written
July 16th, 2025 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
A good deal of truth here. A thought provoking poem science vs I deamonds very nicely written
July 16th, 2025 07:00
A Broken Brain / Insane / God\'s Game
Doggerel Dave said:
If you feel strong where your are now, man - stay with it.
July 16th, 2025 06:54
Doggerel Dave said:
If you feel strong where your are now, man - stay with it.
July 16th, 2025 06:54
Nothing Will Ever Change
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful stuff, explosive material. Pent up anger at a system that does not deal with these issues in an equitable manner. Nicely written
July 15th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful stuff, explosive material. Pent up anger at a system that does not deal with these issues in an equitable manner. Nicely written
July 15th, 2025 04:54
Nothing Will Ever Change
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - I changed. I had coffee instead of tea for brekkie. lol.
July 15th, 2025 02:12
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - I changed. I had coffee instead of tea for brekkie. lol.
July 15th, 2025 02:12
Pure Poison
Doggerel Dave said:
As a long term vegetarian, what can I tell ya?
Keep going. I enjoy your stuff.
July 14th, 2025 08:31
Doggerel Dave said:
As a long term vegetarian, what can I tell ya?
Keep going. I enjoy your stuff.
July 14th, 2025 08:31
Pure Poison
sorenbarrett said:
Each alternative worse than the last. Natural food so much better, not to instant taste but to feeling healthier. A wonderful write that unfortunately most people will not pay much attention too. But then you have to consider the crowd. I try to eat all natural foods and haven\'t been sick in years.
July 14th, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Each alternative worse than the last. Natural food so much better, not to instant taste but to feeling healthier. A wonderful write that unfortunately most people will not pay much attention too. But then you have to consider the crowd. I try to eat all natural foods and haven\'t been sick in years.
July 14th, 2025 04:59
None Left
orchidee said:
An unfortunate surname there. I wanted Joe Bloggs to win. Did he play tennis?! lol.
But some are fussy, and won\'t use internet sites which include \'daemon\'. Arghhh!!
July 13th, 2025 11:15
orchidee said:
An unfortunate surname there. I wanted Joe Bloggs to win. Did he play tennis?! lol.
But some are fussy, and won\'t use internet sites which include \'daemon\'. Arghhh!!
July 13th, 2025 11:15
None Left
Tristan Robert Lange said:
OOh. What a Sinner, indeed. Like literally, it\'s his name! LOL! My friend, this one hits with a heavy, unsettled energy. The symbolism in that first line is sharp—definitely made me pause. There\'s a lot of tension here between cultural frustration, spiritual disillusionment, and personal grief. It reads like both a reckoning and a lament. Well done! 🌹👏
July 13th, 2025 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
OOh. What a Sinner, indeed. Like literally, it\'s his name! LOL! My friend, this one hits with a heavy, unsettled energy. The symbolism in that first line is sharp—definitely made me pause. There\'s a lot of tension here between cultural frustration, spiritual disillusionment, and personal grief. It reads like both a reckoning and a lament. Well done! 🌹👏
July 13th, 2025 08:14
None Left
sorenbarrett said:
Poem in commentary worked well in this case. Nicely spoken
July 13th, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
Poem in commentary worked well in this case. Nicely spoken
July 13th, 2025 05:06
Trying To Be Honest In A Land Full Of Liars
Doggerel Dave said:
Lies produced when they don\'t know they\'re lying:
Go for it man, go on the attack.
July 12th, 2025 07:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Lies produced when they don\'t know they\'re lying:
Go for it man, go on the attack.
July 12th, 2025 07:24
Trying To Be Honest In A Land Full Of Liars
Caring dove said:
Some people have a problem with it and maybe need some help with their lying problem
Some people even lie about serious things ( it’s not right at all
July 12th, 2025 05:08
Caring dove said:
Some people have a problem with it and maybe need some help with their lying problem
Some people even lie about serious things ( it’s not right at all
July 12th, 2025 05:08
Trying To Be Honest In A Land Full Of Liars
Caring dove said:
Some people do lie .. but cannot tell the truth .. and it can affect the other person ( when they are lying to you
July 12th, 2025 05:01
Caring dove said:
Some people do lie .. but cannot tell the truth .. and it can affect the other person ( when they are lying to you
July 12th, 2025 05:01
Trying To Be Honest In A Land Full Of Liars
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of words in this poem the metaphor of pulling a tooth and being long in the tooth come full circle from beginning to end of this poem. Well written
July 12th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of words in this poem the metaphor of pulling a tooth and being long in the tooth come full circle from beginning to end of this poem. Well written
July 12th, 2025 04:50
There Was No Epstein List?
RSM0812 said:
Nice write. Trump is a bit of a two faced politician unfortunately. Prob bc he was in buisness so long. Sometimes hes an good leader though. But i really enjoyed the truth and irony of your poem.
July 11th, 2025 12:28
RSM0812 said:
Nice write. Trump is a bit of a two faced politician unfortunately. Prob bc he was in buisness so long. Sometimes hes an good leader though. But i really enjoyed the truth and irony of your poem.
July 11th, 2025 12:28
Mum\'s Replacement Knee
RSM0812 said:
I can relate bc of a recent car accident. Lol. Nice write.
July 11th, 2025 12:21
RSM0812 said:
I can relate bc of a recent car accident. Lol. Nice write.
July 11th, 2025 12:21
Behind Closed Doors
orchidee said:
Urgh1 Who wants to know? Who has the TIME for all that rubbish?! LOL.
July 11th, 2025 10:54
orchidee said:
Urgh1 Who wants to know? Who has the TIME for all that rubbish?! LOL.
July 11th, 2025 10:54
Behind Closed Doors
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that reminds us that what many covet and lust after is not what it seems. All that glitters is not gold. Good write
July 11th, 2025 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that reminds us that what many covet and lust after is not what it seems. All that glitters is not gold. Good write
July 11th, 2025 07:27
Behind Closed Doors
Cheeky Missy said:
Just check into the true story behind Goethe\'s and earlier, Christopher Marlowe\'s Faustus if you want to begin unraveling what\'s in kinda ancient history, I suspect. Albeit the Scriptures will suffice if you\'re serious. Excellently rendered with great imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 11th, 2025 06:56
Cheeky Missy said:
Just check into the true story behind Goethe\'s and earlier, Christopher Marlowe\'s Faustus if you want to begin unraveling what\'s in kinda ancient history, I suspect. Albeit the Scriptures will suffice if you\'re serious. Excellently rendered with great imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 11th, 2025 06:56
There Was No Epstein List?
orchidee said:
Is there an E.T. list? There was that Rosewall alien thing in 1947. I find the programmes about it very boring. lol.
July 11th, 2025 02:15
orchidee said:
Is there an E.T. list? There was that Rosewall alien thing in 1947. I find the programmes about it very boring. lol.
July 11th, 2025 02:15
There Was No Epstein List?
Poetic Licence said:
When you have money and power it appears you can write your own rules and rewrite history, enjoyed the read
July 11th, 2025 00:04
Poetic Licence said:
When you have money and power it appears you can write your own rules and rewrite history, enjoyed the read
July 11th, 2025 00:04
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