Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Wake Up
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is an energetic portrait of a mind attempting to sort genuine concerns from speculation. The humor gives it personality, while the more provocative assertions reveal why skepticism must also be directed toward our own conclusions. Challenging work, my friend! 🖤🙏
August 4th, 2026 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is an energetic portrait of a mind attempting to sort genuine concerns from speculation. The humor gives it personality, while the more provocative assertions reveal why skepticism must also be directed toward our own conclusions. Challenging work, my friend! 🖤🙏
August 4th, 2026 08:04
Wake Up
Doggerel Dave said:
I \'got\' about every third line, which only means that my experiences are different, but having read your stuff for some time, I know where you are coming from.
Hope you keep going.
August 4th, 2026 06:33
Doggerel Dave said:
I \'got\' about every third line, which only means that my experiences are different, but having read your stuff for some time, I know where you are coming from.
Hope you keep going.
August 4th, 2026 06:33
Wake Up
sorenbarrett said:
Changing times whether just the hour or the decade. Well written in good rhyme and meter.
August 4th, 2026 03:07
sorenbarrett said:
Changing times whether just the hour or the decade. Well written in good rhyme and meter.
August 4th, 2026 03:07
Wake Up
orchidee said:
Near the end of your poem - one question must be answered. Where is Eddie Taylor, or some guy of the same initials? We knows him! lol.
August 4th, 2026 01:46
orchidee said:
Near the end of your poem - one question must be answered. Where is Eddie Taylor, or some guy of the same initials? We knows him! lol.
August 4th, 2026 01:46
Take No Oaths And Bow Down To No False Gods
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a thoughtful piece. I appreciate the reminder to stay rooted in faith and spiritual discipline, especially in a world that so often feels chaotic. That call to keep our eyes on what truly matters really came through. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 17:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a thoughtful piece. I appreciate the reminder to stay rooted in faith and spiritual discipline, especially in a world that so often feels chaotic. That call to keep our eyes on what truly matters really came through. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 17:38
Take No Oaths And Bow Down To No False Gods
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of biblical advice well written Shaun
August 3rd, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of biblical advice well written Shaun
August 3rd, 2026 03:48
Take No Oaths And Bow Down To No False Gods
orchidee said:
Good write Ephesian, erm, Shaun. lol.
August 3rd, 2026 01:48
orchidee said:
Good write Ephesian, erm, Shaun. lol.
August 3rd, 2026 01:48
A Lust Demon (Part.3)
orchidee said:
I wouldn\'t say the google Play logo is demonic. But some people won\'t use \'.daemon\' domain (or whatever it\'s called)!
August 2nd, 2026 13:21
orchidee said:
I wouldn\'t say the google Play logo is demonic. But some people won\'t use \'.daemon\' domain (or whatever it\'s called)!
August 2nd, 2026 13:21
A Lust Demon (Part.3)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Gripping work, Shaun. The speaker’s determination to take his experiences seriously gives this real conviction...while the unexpected cultural observations keep its questioning energy alive. Fascinating write, my friend! 🖤🙏
August 2nd, 2026 07:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Gripping work, Shaun. The speaker’s determination to take his experiences seriously gives this real conviction...while the unexpected cultural observations keep its questioning energy alive. Fascinating write, my friend! 🖤🙏
August 2nd, 2026 07:02
I Don\'t Smoke Or Drink
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a confident declaration of personal renewal. The lighter cultural reference works beautifully against the heavier concerns...and the sense of finally becoming more fully yourself really comes through. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a confident declaration of personal renewal. The lighter cultural reference works beautifully against the heavier concerns...and the sense of finally becoming more fully yourself really comes through. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:43
A Lust Demon (Part.3)
sorenbarrett said:
Good question and I don\'t have the answer. A fun read Shaun. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Good question and I don\'t have the answer. A fun read Shaun. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2026 04:06
Warrington Car Boot Sale
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this made me smile. There’s something wonderfully down-to-earth about it…just the simple excitement of getting there before the best bargains disappear. Fun little write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this made me smile. There’s something wonderfully down-to-earth about it…just the simple excitement of getting there before the best bargains disappear. Fun little write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:25
I Don\'t Smoke Or Drink
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that set forth a healthy attitude. Nicely written with good meter and flow it makes sense. Maybe if society had any sobriety it would reset the age limit for smoking and drinking to sixty five where if still alive one could smoke and drink dying early to save on social security or maybe not taking about twenty years to acquire cancer one would then pass at a golden eighty five.
August 1st, 2026 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that set forth a healthy attitude. Nicely written with good meter and flow it makes sense. Maybe if society had any sobriety it would reset the age limit for smoking and drinking to sixty five where if still alive one could smoke and drink dying early to save on social security or maybe not taking about twenty years to acquire cancer one would then pass at a golden eighty five.
August 1st, 2026 09:46
Warrington Car Boot Sale
sorenbarrett said:
Different and like an advertisement sent poetically
July 31st, 2026 14:12
sorenbarrett said:
Different and like an advertisement sent poetically
July 31st, 2026 14:12
42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is such a fun and refreshingly honest self-portrait! You present yourself exactly as you are...no grand claims, no unnecessary polish, and plenty of humor. Thoroughly enjoyed this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is such a fun and refreshingly honest self-portrait! You present yourself exactly as you are...no grand claims, no unnecessary polish, and plenty of humor. Thoroughly enjoyed this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:01
No Drama (God\'s Karma)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rock on, I’m with you on the impulse to protect someone from abuse. 💯 Personally, I’d avoid violence unless genuine self-defense or the defense of someone else left no reasonable alternative. That said, if I witnessed someone being abused, I couldn’t simply stand by. I would physically intervene if necessary to stop it...because otherwise, what good am I, right? This definitely packs a punch, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Oh...and I love the title!
July 30th, 2026 09:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rock on, I’m with you on the impulse to protect someone from abuse. 💯 Personally, I’d avoid violence unless genuine self-defense or the defense of someone else left no reasonable alternative. That said, if I witnessed someone being abused, I couldn’t simply stand by. I would physically intervene if necessary to stop it...because otherwise, what good am I, right? This definitely packs a punch, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Oh...and I love the title!
July 30th, 2026 09:42
42
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic post, an add for attraction, a document for display. Revealing and sufficiently complete. Well done
July 30th, 2026 03:20
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic post, an add for attraction, a document for display. Revealing and sufficiently complete. Well done
July 30th, 2026 03:20
42
orchidee said:
Yes, \'The Hitch-hikers guide to the Galaxy\' - \'The answer to everything is 42\', whatever that means. Not that I\'ve read that rubbish. lol.
You knows it - for me, the answer to everything (probably) is, erm, Eddie Thompson, or some initialled guy. lol.
July 30th, 2026 02:37
orchidee said:
Yes, \'The Hitch-hikers guide to the Galaxy\' - \'The answer to everything is 42\', whatever that means. Not that I\'ve read that rubbish. lol.
You knows it - for me, the answer to everything (probably) is, erm, Eddie Thompson, or some initialled guy. lol.
July 30th, 2026 02:37
42
Cheeky Missy said:
I thought you meant the number itself, but this is excellent. Thank you for sharing.
July 30th, 2026 01:54
Cheeky Missy said:
I thought you meant the number itself, but this is excellent. Thank you for sharing.
July 30th, 2026 01:54
No Drama (God\'s Karma)
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem that picks up in the middle of an infraction and takes us back for an explanation. There is a warning in it and compassion against those that have no self restraint. Nicely written my friend.
July 29th, 2026 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem that picks up in the middle of an infraction and takes us back for an explanation. There is a warning in it and compassion against those that have no self restraint. Nicely written my friend.
July 29th, 2026 09:03
Mental Breakdown To Spiritual Awakening (Part.3)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this hit me hard. The collision of spiritual awakening and mental crisis is presented with such raw honesty...without forcing either experience into an easy explanation. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this hit me hard. The collision of spiritual awakening and mental crisis is presented with such raw honesty...without forcing either experience into an easy explanation. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:48
Wait Until The Angels Sing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what an unsettling poem! The dread keeps intensifying until ordinary life feels only moments away from complete collapse. One heck of a dark write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 09:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what an unsettling poem! The dread keeps intensifying until ordinary life feels only moments away from complete collapse. One heck of a dark write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 09:06
Wait Until The Angels Sing
sorenbarrett said:
Shaun this poem recounts the state of present affairs which sadly are not what we would wish for. And those angels are up right after the fat lady sings.
July 27th, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Shaun this poem recounts the state of present affairs which sadly are not what we would wish for. And those angels are up right after the fat lady sings.
July 27th, 2026 04:32
My Honda Civic Dreams Are Dashed
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
awww i love my lil miata the same way bro
July 26th, 2026 19:19
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
awww i love my lil miata the same way bro
July 26th, 2026 19:19
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