Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Why Bother
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, the exhaustion and hurt here are palpable. This feels like the moment generosity finally collides with repeated disappointment...raw, angry, and painfully honest. Powerful expression, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 18th, 2026 21:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, the exhaustion and hurt here are palpable. This feels like the moment generosity finally collides with repeated disappointment...raw, angry, and painfully honest. Powerful expression, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 18th, 2026 21:40
Why Bother
sorenbarrett said:
A sad reflection of aging and those things that go with it. Nicely written in good rhyme and even meter. Well done
August 18th, 2026 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
A sad reflection of aging and those things that go with it. Nicely written in good rhyme and even meter. Well done
August 18th, 2026 04:49
Why Bother
orchidee said:
Erm, I don\'t fancy a tattoo of that word! Oops!
But I went for a tattoo (did I?) and the tattooist did \'Eddie Taylor\' and said, \'Well, you wanted a tattoo of E.T., so you said! Doh!
August 18th, 2026 04:48
orchidee said:
Erm, I don\'t fancy a tattoo of that word! Oops!
But I went for a tattoo (did I?) and the tattooist did \'Eddie Taylor\' and said, \'Well, you wanted a tattoo of E.T., so you said! Doh!
August 18th, 2026 04:48
Luciana
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is a lively celebration of an artist whose music clearly knows how to move a room. The humor and rhythm keep it bouncing throughout. Great fun, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 18:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is a lively celebration of an artist whose music clearly knows how to move a room. The humor and rhythm keep it bouncing throughout. Great fun, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 18:55
Luciana
sorenbarrett said:
A lifting of the awareness field in this poem. Was not aware of her. Well done
August 17th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
A lifting of the awareness field in this poem. Was not aware of her. Well done
August 17th, 2026 04:09
It Costs Nothing To Be Kind
arqios said:
And yet most require begging to be the least bit kind.
August 16th, 2026 07:04
arqios said:
And yet most require begging to be the least bit kind.
August 16th, 2026 07:04
It Costs Nothing To Be Kind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this comes from a place of real frustration with how casually people can treat one another. There’s anger here, but underneath it is a pretty simple demand...don’t lose your humanity. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2026 06:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this comes from a place of real frustration with how casually people can treat one another. There’s anger here, but underneath it is a pretty simple demand...don’t lose your humanity. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2026 06:32
It Costs Nothing To Be Kind
sorenbarrett said:
A great message in poetic form where maybe someone might hear. If only more would it would be a much better world. Nicely done Shaun
August 16th, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
A great message in poetic form where maybe someone might hear. If only more would it would be a much better world. Nicely done Shaun
August 16th, 2026 04:13
It Costs Nothing To Be Kind
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Is someone kind? His name is Eddie Taylor, I think (initials. heehee).
August 16th, 2026 03:14
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Is someone kind? His name is Eddie Taylor, I think (initials. heehee).
August 16th, 2026 03:14
Chasing Money In The Rat Race
orchidee said:
Ahh, some relatives of E.T. there?! lol.
August 15th, 2026 11:18
orchidee said:
Ahh, some relatives of E.T. there?! lol.
August 15th, 2026 11:18
Chasing Money In The Rat Race
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what struck me most is the sense of exhaustion underneath the rebellion. The money, the hierarchy, the pressure...it all builds toward that refusal to keep accepting the arrangement as normal. Powerful work, Shaun. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what struck me most is the sense of exhaustion underneath the rebellion. The money, the hierarchy, the pressure...it all builds toward that refusal to keep accepting the arrangement as normal. Powerful work, Shaun. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 08:14
Chasing Money In The Rat Race
sorenbarrett said:
I feel you Shaun. I have been there at all levels grunt, middle management, top management they all suck always slave to someone. Even at the top slave to the share holder or government laws and regulations the voter. Capitalism sucks unfortunately so does every other system.
August 15th, 2026 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
I feel you Shaun. I have been there at all levels grunt, middle management, top management they all suck always slave to someone. Even at the top slave to the share holder or government laws and regulations the voter. Capitalism sucks unfortunately so does every other system.
August 15th, 2026 06:08
Conspiracies Now Come True
Tristan Robert Lange said:
haun, this one comes in swinging. There’s a real sense of distrust and anger running through it...like the speaker sees deception everywhere and is done pretending otherwise. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2026 09:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
haun, this one comes in swinging. There’s a real sense of distrust and anger running through it...like the speaker sees deception everywhere and is done pretending otherwise. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2026 09:41
Conspiracies Now Come True
sorenbarrett said:
Shaun I swore I just read this and responded to it but I must be hallucinating my friend. One never knows what to believe these days. What ever that was a great special effect to the poem itself
August 14th, 2026 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Shaun I swore I just read this and responded to it but I must be hallucinating my friend. One never knows what to believe these days. What ever that was a great special effect to the poem itself
August 14th, 2026 04:58
Butterflies And Breadsticks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Shaun…this is a loaded one. You take a swing at ego, manufactured ambition, hidden loyalties, temptation, and the search for something genuinely true underneath all of it. It reads like a warning not to surrender your mind or soul too cheaply. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Shaun…this is a loaded one. You take a swing at ego, manufactured ambition, hidden loyalties, temptation, and the search for something genuinely true underneath all of it. It reads like a warning not to surrender your mind or soul too cheaply. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:45
Butterflies And Breadsticks
orchidee said:
Not tonight Jezebel, erm, Josephine! lol.
August 13th, 2026 08:50
orchidee said:
Not tonight Jezebel, erm, Josephine! lol.
August 13th, 2026 08:50
Butterflies And Breadsticks
sorenbarrett said:
This one works off dualities and takes a twist at the end. Nicely done.
August 13th, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
This one works off dualities and takes a twist at the end. Nicely done.
August 13th, 2026 04:34
A Graphics Card Meltdown
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this cracked me up! 🤣 Nothing like spending money on an upgrade and then immediately launching into an existential crisis over whether it was actually an upgrade. Been there, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this cracked me up! 🤣 Nothing like spending money on an upgrade and then immediately launching into an existential crisis over whether it was actually an upgrade. Been there, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:22
A Graphics Card Meltdown
sorenbarrett said:
Nice asking advice about a gaming vice. A fun read in rhyme.
August 12th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Nice asking advice about a gaming vice. A fun read in rhyme.
August 12th, 2026 03:56
Wake Up
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is an energetic portrait of a mind attempting to sort genuine concerns from speculation. The humor gives it personality, while the more provocative assertions reveal why skepticism must also be directed toward our own conclusions. Challenging work, my friend! 🖤🙏
August 4th, 2026 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is an energetic portrait of a mind attempting to sort genuine concerns from speculation. The humor gives it personality, while the more provocative assertions reveal why skepticism must also be directed toward our own conclusions. Challenging work, my friend! 🖤🙏
August 4th, 2026 08:04
Wake Up
Doggerel Dave said:
I \'got\' about every third line, which only means that my experiences are different, but having read your stuff for some time, I know where you are coming from.
Hope you keep going.
August 4th, 2026 06:33
Doggerel Dave said:
I \'got\' about every third line, which only means that my experiences are different, but having read your stuff for some time, I know where you are coming from.
Hope you keep going.
August 4th, 2026 06:33
Wake Up
sorenbarrett said:
Changing times whether just the hour or the decade. Well written in good rhyme and meter.
August 4th, 2026 03:07
sorenbarrett said:
Changing times whether just the hour or the decade. Well written in good rhyme and meter.
August 4th, 2026 03:07
Wake Up
orchidee said:
Near the end of your poem - one question must be answered. Where is Eddie Taylor, or some guy of the same initials? We knows him! lol.
August 4th, 2026 01:46
orchidee said:
Near the end of your poem - one question must be answered. Where is Eddie Taylor, or some guy of the same initials? We knows him! lol.
August 4th, 2026 01:46
Take No Oaths And Bow Down To No False Gods
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a thoughtful piece. I appreciate the reminder to stay rooted in faith and spiritual discipline, especially in a world that so often feels chaotic. That call to keep our eyes on what truly matters really came through. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 17:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, what a thoughtful piece. I appreciate the reminder to stay rooted in faith and spiritual discipline, especially in a world that so often feels chaotic. That call to keep our eyes on what truly matters really came through. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 17:38
Take No Oaths And Bow Down To No False Gods
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of biblical advice well written Shaun
August 3rd, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of biblical advice well written Shaun
August 3rd, 2026 03:48
« Return to the profile of Shaunmatthewcpoetry
