Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
What Happened? (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
A sad situation where the world has to walk on egg shells and where people are backstabbing and ignoring. Well written my friend
December 7th, 2025 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
A sad situation where the world has to walk on egg shells and where people are backstabbing and ignoring. Well written my friend
December 7th, 2025 09:30
What Happened? (Part.2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Good question in the opening line. Fun fact, we all know what happened after 2016. 🍊😱 Forgive the indulgence! 🤣 Couldn\'t resist. 🤷♂️ But yeah, the shite is going down the toilet it seems, anymore! And the pandemic DID NOT help...though it was not the start of it. Great write with great questions, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 7th, 2025 09:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Good question in the opening line. Fun fact, we all know what happened after 2016. 🍊😱 Forgive the indulgence! 🤣 Couldn\'t resist. 🤷♂️ But yeah, the shite is going down the toilet it seems, anymore! And the pandemic DID NOT help...though it was not the start of it. Great write with great questions, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 7th, 2025 09:13
What Happened? (Part.2)
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, I knew a hostile guy (did I? lol). I said Hello to him. he replied \'What do you mean hello? I\'ll punch you on the nose for that!\' (lol).
December 7th, 2025 08:01
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, I knew a hostile guy (did I? lol). I said Hello to him. he replied \'What do you mean hello? I\'ll punch you on the nose for that!\' (lol).
December 7th, 2025 08:01
What Happened? (Part.2)
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the freedom of speech now has permissions attached to it, this is called, Starmers law.
One must be careful saying hello now in case it causes offence, and definitely shouldn\'t make comments on FB which can get you jailed.
However, you can pretend to be selling cryptocurrency and get away with it.
December 7th, 2025 07:27
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the freedom of speech now has permissions attached to it, this is called, Starmers law.
One must be careful saying hello now in case it causes offence, and definitely shouldn\'t make comments on FB which can get you jailed.
However, you can pretend to be selling cryptocurrency and get away with it.
December 7th, 2025 07:27
An Open Letter To Jay-Z
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I wish these creeps would just leave poor Baphomet alone. It\'s bad enough his existence was created to burn opponents of the Pope to the stake, but now he\'s got to be hangng in creep cribs too? He just wants to friggin\' retire and find his creator, like the creature in Mary Shelley\'s Frankenstein, or a Modern Prometheus🤣. All jokes aside, the whole Diddy thing is so messed up, baby oil and all, that yikes...I wouldn\'t want to be anyone within a 50 million miles of his orbit, let alone how close Jay-Z was. Anyway, well written, my friend. I am not sure who did or didn\'t do what, but let justice roll on anyone doing evil.
December 5th, 2025 10:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I wish these creeps would just leave poor Baphomet alone. It\'s bad enough his existence was created to burn opponents of the Pope to the stake, but now he\'s got to be hangng in creep cribs too? He just wants to friggin\' retire and find his creator, like the creature in Mary Shelley\'s Frankenstein, or a Modern Prometheus🤣. All jokes aside, the whole Diddy thing is so messed up, baby oil and all, that yikes...I wouldn\'t want to be anyone within a 50 million miles of his orbit, let alone how close Jay-Z was. Anyway, well written, my friend. I am not sure who did or didn\'t do what, but let justice roll on anyone doing evil.
December 5th, 2025 10:56
An Open Letter To Jay-Z
sorenbarrett said:
A call out poem and very well worded and laid out. A good read
December 5th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
A call out poem and very well worded and laid out. A good read
December 5th, 2025 04:21
An Open Letter To Jay-Z
orchidee said:
Oh, I don\'t know the guy much. Should I get to know him more? Or is he shifty and dodgy? lol.
December 5th, 2025 04:05
orchidee said:
Oh, I don\'t know the guy much. Should I get to know him more? Or is he shifty and dodgy? lol.
December 5th, 2025 04:05
Random Rhyming (Part.6)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love Tron...but would not want to be stuck in its world! LOL! Well done on this, my friend!
December 4th, 2025 17:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love Tron...but would not want to be stuck in its world! LOL! Well done on this, my friend!
December 4th, 2025 17:19
Random Rhyming (Part.6)
sorenbarrett said:
They already have us in that matrix not knowing what to believe is it fake is it real what is real anyway. Do I believe them do I believe me, do I believe nothing. What is fake, real or CGI. Falsified pictures, invented stories I can\'t even believe what I see with my own eyes. There they got us confused and uncertain. Well written.
December 4th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
They already have us in that matrix not knowing what to believe is it fake is it real what is real anyway. Do I believe them do I believe me, do I believe nothing. What is fake, real or CGI. Falsified pictures, invented stories I can\'t even believe what I see with my own eyes. There they got us confused and uncertain. Well written.
December 4th, 2025 04:29
Random Rhyming (Part.6)
orchidee said:
Is ALL wrestling fixed?! heehee. Good write SM.
December 4th, 2025 03:21
orchidee said:
Is ALL wrestling fixed?! heehee. Good write SM.
December 4th, 2025 03:21
Eye Contact
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Who is that guy staring at me. No, I\'m not seeing things I tell you! He\'s there...above! No, I am not making it up! See...look 👆 🤣
Sorry, I saw Orchi was the first commenter and I felt pressure to be silly! It\'s all his fault! LOL! Seriously, though, loved this poem and, as a TWD fan, loved the Negan/Lucille reference!
December 3rd, 2025 18:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Who is that guy staring at me. No, I\'m not seeing things I tell you! He\'s there...above! No, I am not making it up! See...look 👆 🤣
Sorry, I saw Orchi was the first commenter and I felt pressure to be silly! It\'s all his fault! LOL! Seriously, though, loved this poem and, as a TWD fan, loved the Negan/Lucille reference!
December 3rd, 2025 18:47
Eye Contact
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains several statements that like the beginning seems strange, but given enough thought become evident. A wonderful combination in poetic form.
December 3rd, 2025 12:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains several statements that like the beginning seems strange, but given enough thought become evident. A wonderful combination in poetic form.
December 3rd, 2025 12:19
Our Fates
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reads and rhymes like rap, my friend., Absolutely love the flow of this one! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 2nd, 2025 10:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reads and rhymes like rap, my friend., Absolutely love the flow of this one! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 2nd, 2025 10:40
Our Fates
orchidee said:
An aside, or a distraction from me! In reading of stages of team-building I wrote this. I\'m gonna rap! lol:
\'Ohh there are stages of team-forming
There\'s a-forming and a-storming (storming can include arguments - ooh!)
Then a-norming and a-performing (norming is becoming \'normal\', whatever that is!)
Then when all\'s done, there\'s an-adjourning\'.
December 2nd, 2025 10:03
orchidee said:
An aside, or a distraction from me! In reading of stages of team-building I wrote this. I\'m gonna rap! lol:
\'Ohh there are stages of team-forming
There\'s a-forming and a-storming (storming can include arguments - ooh!)
Then a-norming and a-performing (norming is becoming \'normal\', whatever that is!)
Then when all\'s done, there\'s an-adjourning\'.
December 2nd, 2025 10:03
Our Fates
sorenbarrett said:
A rap indeed this poem spins and spits its message from beginning to end. Well done
December 2nd, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A rap indeed this poem spins and spits its message from beginning to end. Well done
December 2nd, 2025 04:42
Industry Plants
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this lands clean and honest…the Babel line, the shrinking candle, the emptiness behind the posing. You cut through the illusion of celebrity with sharp precision. Obviously, not all stars are the same...but man that seems to be much of what one sees coming out of Hollywood. Cheers, Shaun! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 1st, 2025 17:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this lands clean and honest…the Babel line, the shrinking candle, the emptiness behind the posing. You cut through the illusion of celebrity with sharp precision. Obviously, not all stars are the same...but man that seems to be much of what one sees coming out of Hollywood. Cheers, Shaun! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 1st, 2025 17:54
Impenetrable Sky
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, an impenetrable sky indeed. There\'s so much that seems impenetrable about it! Great title, great poem. Well done. my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 1st, 2025 17:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, an impenetrable sky indeed. There\'s so much that seems impenetrable about it! Great title, great poem. Well done. my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 1st, 2025 17:34
Industry Plants
sorenbarrett said:
The road to fame not all it\'s cracked up to be. A poem that calls for reflection upon one\'s goals and the costs involved. Nicely done
December 1st, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
The road to fame not all it\'s cracked up to be. A poem that calls for reflection upon one\'s goals and the costs involved. Nicely done
December 1st, 2025 04:46
Industry Plants
orchidee said:
Good write SM. If the Tower of Babel did reach to heaven, it would need an awfully wide base, then all those storeys. How many miles was it (or: is it) to Heaven? Could they have taken the no.7 bus there instead?! lol.
December 1st, 2025 02:58
orchidee said:
Good write SM. If the Tower of Babel did reach to heaven, it would need an awfully wide base, then all those storeys. How many miles was it (or: is it) to Heaven? Could they have taken the no.7 bus there instead?! lol.
December 1st, 2025 02:58
Impenetrable Sky
orchidee said:
Did I spot a certain alien in that pic there? We knows him! lol.
November 30th, 2025 15:00
orchidee said:
Did I spot a certain alien in that pic there? We knows him! lol.
November 30th, 2025 15:00
Impenetrable Sky
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed no longer able to be off the grid we all are under an impenetrable sky imprisoned by society and a violent one at that. Good write
November 30th, 2025 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed no longer able to be off the grid we all are under an impenetrable sky imprisoned by society and a violent one at that. Good write
November 30th, 2025 12:40
Immortalised Life
orchidee said:
Yes, Maccabees \'relegated\' to the Apocrypha - where some unsure, spurious, maybe \'dodgy\' etc verses and texts are - though a good read.
I can\'t remember. I have a separate copy of the Apocrypha - is E.T. in it? heehee.
November 28th, 2025 12:47
orchidee said:
Yes, Maccabees \'relegated\' to the Apocrypha - where some unsure, spurious, maybe \'dodgy\' etc verses and texts are - though a good read.
I can\'t remember. I have a separate copy of the Apocrypha - is E.T. in it? heehee.
November 28th, 2025 12:47
Immortalised Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hits with conviction…the Apocrypha reference nails a truth people overlook, and I’ve felt that same pull toward what was erased. Martin Luther did some pretty important things, but separating and demoting the Apocrypha was a total “oopsie” on his part! LOL! Anywho, bold, sharp, and spiritually unfiltered. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 28th, 2025 10:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hits with conviction…the Apocrypha reference nails a truth people overlook, and I’ve felt that same pull toward what was erased. Martin Luther did some pretty important things, but separating and demoting the Apocrypha was a total “oopsie” on his part! LOL! Anywho, bold, sharp, and spiritually unfiltered. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 28th, 2025 10:33
Immortalised Life
Doggerel Dave said:
Mate, you are getting very heavy lately. I like it, but feel I\'m being left way behind....
November 28th, 2025 05:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Mate, you are getting very heavy lately. I like it, but feel I\'m being left way behind....
November 28th, 2025 05:01
Immortalised Life
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting blend of the religious and the metaphysical and apocryphal. Nicely worded
November 28th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting blend of the religious and the metaphysical and apocryphal. Nicely worded
November 28th, 2025 03:56
Immortalised Life
orchidee said:
Nope, not magic or hocus-pocus, but a spot of slap and tickle? Yes?! lol.
November 28th, 2025 03:37
orchidee said:
Nope, not magic or hocus-pocus, but a spot of slap and tickle? Yes?! lol.
November 28th, 2025 03:37
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