Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Black Screens
sorenbarrett said:
Ominous is the feel of this piece. Well written
April 11th, 2026 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
Ominous is the feel of this piece. Well written
April 11th, 2026 05:39
They Live Freestyle
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed this reflection of the eras. Nicely written
April 10th, 2026 15:38
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed this reflection of the eras. Nicely written
April 10th, 2026 15:38
They Live Freestyle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels like those moments where you start questioning everything around you…what’s real, what’s constructed, what’s being pushed in front of you. That kind of restless awareness comes through clearly here. It’s not comfortable, but it’s engaging. That really lands, Shaun. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 09:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels like those moments where you start questioning everything around you…what’s real, what’s constructed, what’s being pushed in front of you. That kind of restless awareness comes through clearly here. It’s not comfortable, but it’s engaging. That really lands, Shaun. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 09:24
They Live Freestyle
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Is a certain one a sort of shapeshifting reptilian? I\'m becoming too boring, spelling him out by name every time. lol.
April 10th, 2026 09:14
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Is a certain one a sort of shapeshifting reptilian? I\'m becoming too boring, spelling him out by name every time. lol.
April 10th, 2026 09:14
Verging On The Edge Of Sanity
Tristan Robert Lange said:
FATALITY!
Sorry I couldn\'t resist, given the picture! 🤣 Shaun, this comes through raw and direct…there’s no filter on it, just you laying it out as it is. That honesty carries weight. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 7th, 2026 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
FATALITY!
Sorry I couldn\'t resist, given the picture! 🤣 Shaun, this comes through raw and direct…there’s no filter on it, just you laying it out as it is. That honesty carries weight. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 7th, 2026 08:41
Verging On The Edge Of Sanity
Doggerel Dave said:
Glad it worked out for you, mate - just don\'t send it over to me...
Insiders view of psychosis you give in some of your work. Valuable just for that alone.
April 7th, 2026 05:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Glad it worked out for you, mate - just don\'t send it over to me...
Insiders view of psychosis you give in some of your work. Valuable just for that alone.
April 7th, 2026 05:34
Verging On The Edge Of Sanity
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic religious conversion. Nicely said.
April 7th, 2026 02:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic religious conversion. Nicely said.
April 7th, 2026 02:39
Verging On The Edge Of Sanity
orchidee said:
E.T. might invade us, come and visit us, but nothing malevolent. lol.
April 7th, 2026 02:25
orchidee said:
E.T. might invade us, come and visit us, but nothing malevolent. lol.
April 7th, 2026 02:25
Easter Or Ēostre?
lunarchloedip said:
because eggs are meant to symbolise new life, and Jesus rising from death was also new life? either way it\'s become far more focused on chocolate than anything else
April 6th, 2026 17:29
lunarchloedip said:
because eggs are meant to symbolise new life, and Jesus rising from death was also new life? either way it\'s become far more focused on chocolate than anything else
April 6th, 2026 17:29
NPCs In The Car Boot Sale Queue
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, there’s a clear frustration running through this…cutting through surface talk and calling it out directly. It doesn’t try to soften the edge, and that’s what gives it its force. It’s blunt, but intentional. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 6th, 2026 09:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, there’s a clear frustration running through this…cutting through surface talk and calling it out directly. It doesn’t try to soften the edge, and that’s what gives it its force. It’s blunt, but intentional. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 6th, 2026 09:37
NPCs In The Car Boot Sale Queue
orchidee said:
There\'s that long queue to see a certain film - we knows the little guy! lol.
April 6th, 2026 02:39
orchidee said:
There\'s that long queue to see a certain film - we knows the little guy! lol.
April 6th, 2026 02:39
Easter Or Ēostre?
NafisaSB said:
a question that needs pondering about and responding to - even i would like to know the relationship between the two, if there is one or many
April 6th, 2026 01:02
NafisaSB said:
a question that needs pondering about and responding to - even i would like to know the relationship between the two, if there is one or many
April 6th, 2026 01:02
Easter Or Ēostre?
Abdullah123 said:
Am not Christian, and have always wondered the reason for the chocolate on Easter myself. Glad to see some Christians thinking likewise.
April 5th, 2026 13:09
Abdullah123 said:
Am not Christian, and have always wondered the reason for the chocolate on Easter myself. Glad to see some Christians thinking likewise.
April 5th, 2026 13:09
Anger Towards Believers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, there’s a clear, unapologetic conviction running through this…from that idea of being a receiver to the way you frame everything through that lens. It doesn’t hedge, it just declares, and that’s what gives it its edge. Well done, my friend. And Happy Easter. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, there’s a clear, unapologetic conviction running through this…from that idea of being a receiver to the way you frame everything through that lens. It doesn’t hedge, it just declares, and that’s what gives it its edge. Well done, my friend. And Happy Easter. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:38
Anger Towards Believers
orchidee said:
I know Agent E.T. but I can\'t say he looks like that guy in the pic! lol.
April 5th, 2026 09:44
orchidee said:
I know Agent E.T. but I can\'t say he looks like that guy in the pic! lol.
April 5th, 2026 09:44
Anger Towards Believers
sorenbarrett said:
Analogy works well in this poem where we all sit in a matrix governed by religion be it formal or government made. Well done
April 5th, 2026 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Analogy works well in this poem where we all sit in a matrix governed by religion be it formal or government made. Well done
April 5th, 2026 05:13
Easter Or Ēostre?
never be said:
The eggs an the easter bunny are from when christainity absorbed Pagenism.
April 4th, 2026 12:49
never be said:
The eggs an the easter bunny are from when christainity absorbed Pagenism.
April 4th, 2026 12:49
Easter Or Ēostre?
orchidee said:
I suppose we\'ve adopted the dates of some pagan festivals. And really the Sabbath is Friday dusk to Saturday dusk.
And that ole Saturnalia for Sundays is it? Is a certain one pagan - we knows him, gone home he has?! lol.
April 4th, 2026 09:51
orchidee said:
I suppose we\'ve adopted the dates of some pagan festivals. And really the Sabbath is Friday dusk to Saturday dusk.
And that ole Saturnalia for Sundays is it? Is a certain one pagan - we knows him, gone home he has?! lol.
April 4th, 2026 09:51
Easter Or Ēostre?
sorenbarrett said:
Evolution or devolution of fertility rites brought into Christianity to gain a few more converts fills the gap here. Nicely written
April 4th, 2026 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Evolution or devolution of fertility rites brought into Christianity to gain a few more converts fills the gap here. Nicely written
April 4th, 2026 09:45
Levitate
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, “Souls trying to levitate but don’t have the key”…that line sticks. It sums up the whole tension in one image. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, “Souls trying to levitate but don’t have the key”…that line sticks. It sums up the whole tension in one image. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:03
Levitate
sorenbarrett said:
Clever write. Deception a mental magic trick to fool the fool and take advantage is not cool
April 3rd, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
Clever write. Deception a mental magic trick to fool the fool and take advantage is not cool
April 3rd, 2026 05:03
English Weather Is Always Awful
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh your can\'t say that.... I remember in Blackpool, summer of \'48...Sunday I think it was....
April 2nd, 2026 15:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh your can\'t say that.... I remember in Blackpool, summer of \'48...Sunday I think it was....
April 2nd, 2026 15:45
English Weather Is Always Awful
orchidee said:
Wonder what the weather is like where a certain one has gone home?! lol.
April 2nd, 2026 10:46
orchidee said:
Wonder what the weather is like where a certain one has gone home?! lol.
April 2nd, 2026 10:46
English Weather Is Always Awful
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I’ve had days like this where the weather just won’t let up… and yeah, that’s exactly the mood. Short, sharp, and relatable. Sometimes that’s all you need to say it right. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2026 08:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I’ve had days like this where the weather just won’t let up… and yeah, that’s exactly the mood. Short, sharp, and relatable. Sometimes that’s all you need to say it right. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 2nd, 2026 08:57
English Weather Is Always Awful
sorenbarrett said:
A short that says it well. Lived in the ice wasn\'t nice, Lived where it was dry in the sun did fry, lived in the rain it was a pain, lived in the snow just wanted to go it\'s hard to please everyone.
April 2nd, 2026 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
A short that says it well. Lived in the ice wasn\'t nice, Lived where it was dry in the sun did fry, lived in the rain it was a pain, lived in the snow just wanted to go it\'s hard to please everyone.
April 2nd, 2026 07:43
English Weather Is Always Awful
2781 said:
It must have been a good gust of wind!
I hope that wasn\'t your car?
April 2nd, 2026 07:24
2781 said:
It must have been a good gust of wind!
I hope that wasn\'t your car?
April 2nd, 2026 07:24
A Man Out Of Time? (Part.2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries a lot of direct energy…a pushback against feeling sidelined or redefined. The lines about identity, control, and staying whole all tie into that central tension. It doesn’t try to resolve it…it just puts it out there as it is. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries a lot of direct energy…a pushback against feeling sidelined or redefined. The lines about identity, control, and staying whole all tie into that central tension. It doesn’t try to resolve it…it just puts it out there as it is. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:16
A Man Out Of Time? (Part.2)
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Erm, one who has gone home looks skinny. heehee.
April 1st, 2026 10:03
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Erm, one who has gone home looks skinny. heehee.
April 1st, 2026 10:03
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