Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
They Made Masculinity Toxic, Those Fucking Fools!
sorenbarrett said:
Political correctness under the ploy of kindness can be taken too far as a power move. Honesty is the mark of love and that is in short supply now days. Well written.
September 3rd, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Political correctness under the ploy of kindness can be taken too far as a power move. Honesty is the mark of love and that is in short supply now days. Well written.
September 3rd, 2026 04:03
Beyond The Blue Sky
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries such a restless, searching energy. It begins inside an ordinary day, then suddenly looks outward toward something immeasurably largerβ¦a thought-provoking write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 2nd, 2026 21:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries such a restless, searching energy. It begins inside an ordinary day, then suddenly looks outward toward something immeasurably largerβ¦a thought-provoking write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 2nd, 2026 21:41
Beyond The Blue Sky
orchidee said:
Ohhh, we know of course, what\'s up there - a two-initialled guy! (not that joke again! lol).
September 2nd, 2026 10:36
orchidee said:
Ohhh, we know of course, what\'s up there - a two-initialled guy! (not that joke again! lol).
September 2nd, 2026 10:36
Beyond The Blue Sky
sorenbarrett said:
What lies ahead be it the future or space or even the day. Nicely written
September 2nd, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
What lies ahead be it the future or space or even the day. Nicely written
September 2nd, 2026 04:23
GTA 6 Looks Dogshit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I get the skepticism. When a franchise has been around that long, it is hard not to compare every new entry to what originally made you love it. This has that disappointed-fan energy all over it, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 1st, 2026 12:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I get the skepticism. When a franchise has been around that long, it is hard not to compare every new entry to what originally made you love it. This has that disappointed-fan energy all over it, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
September 1st, 2026 12:39
GTA 6 Looks Dogshit
sorenbarrett said:
Dissatisfaction expressed in a poem with good rhyme and flow better than the game. Nicely done
September 1st, 2026 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Dissatisfaction expressed in a poem with good rhyme and flow better than the game. Nicely done
September 1st, 2026 06:21
Fitness Freak
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a fun and determined piece, Shaun. There is discipline here, but also humor and realism...keep training, adapt when needed, and stay strong for as long as life lets you. Excellent write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
August 31st, 2026 08:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a fun and determined piece, Shaun. There is discipline here, but also humor and realism...keep training, adapt when needed, and stay strong for as long as life lets you. Excellent write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
August 31st, 2026 08:33
Fitness Freak
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this Shaun,
It reminds me of when I used to go to the gym. I only ever do cardio these days as I\'m still recovering from surgery.
Nicely written - Syd π
August 31st, 2026 05:31
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this Shaun,
It reminds me of when I used to go to the gym. I only ever do cardio these days as I\'m still recovering from surgery.
Nicely written - Syd π
August 31st, 2026 05:31
Fitness Freak
sorenbarrett said:
Brings memories of the old days. This poem pumped with energy has meter that runs. Nicely put together in rhyme it has power. Well done Shaun
August 31st, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Brings memories of the old days. This poem pumped with energy has meter that runs. Nicely put together in rhyme it has power. Well done Shaun
August 31st, 2026 04:29
Fitness Freak
orchidee said:
Ahh, we can become too fit and overdo things. Good write SM.
August 31st, 2026 03:39
orchidee said:
Ahh, we can become too fit and overdo things. Good write SM.
August 31st, 2026 03:39
Be Aware
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this one has that unmistakable sense of spiritual and cultural alarm running through it. It feels like a warning siren aimed at complacencyβ¦especially around accountability and discernment. Strong piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
August 30th, 2026 21:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this one has that unmistakable sense of spiritual and cultural alarm running through it. It feels like a warning siren aimed at complacencyβ¦especially around accountability and discernment. Strong piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
August 30th, 2026 21:31
Be Aware
orchidee said:
In a soap serial: \'Who dies in the accident?\' Dunno! But if there\'s a fire, they\'ll all turn to ashes, cos they\'re made of wood - in their acting. Now they\'ve revived old episodes of \'Neighbours\' too This is too much for us, too horrific! lol.
August 30th, 2026 07:54
orchidee said:
In a soap serial: \'Who dies in the accident?\' Dunno! But if there\'s a fire, they\'ll all turn to ashes, cos they\'re made of wood - in their acting. Now they\'ve revived old episodes of \'Neighbours\' too This is too much for us, too horrific! lol.
August 30th, 2026 07:54
Be Aware
sorenbarrett said:
Cast in metaphoric symbols this poem speaks of chaos and the modern world. Those angel trumpets might be taken two ways. Well done Shaun
August 30th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Cast in metaphoric symbols this poem speaks of chaos and the modern world. Those angel trumpets might be taken two ways. Well done Shaun
August 30th, 2026 04:00
Disorientating Dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vivid dreams can leave such a strange emotional hangover, Shaun...almost as though we have returned from somewhere rather than merely awakened. And yes, the Nolan jab landed! π€£ Great write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
August 29th, 2026 07:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vivid dreams can leave such a strange emotional hangover, Shaun...almost as though we have returned from somewhere rather than merely awakened. And yes, the Nolan jab landed! π€£ Great write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
August 29th, 2026 07:52
Disorientating Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a haunting quality and feels a bit sinister itself. Inception had several good points that I could identify with and have experienced in dreams just enough to make the rest believable. Lovely
August 29th, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a haunting quality and feels a bit sinister itself. Inception had several good points that I could identify with and have experienced in dreams just enough to make the rest believable. Lovely
August 29th, 2026 03:45
Disorientating Dreams
orchidee said:
I dream of a certain one - we knows him, he\'s gone home! lol.
August 29th, 2026 02:28
orchidee said:
I dream of a certain one - we knows him, he\'s gone home! lol.
August 29th, 2026 02:28
Take No Oaths And Bow Down To No False Gods
NafisaSB said:
Agree with your assessment
August 29th, 2026 00:19
NafisaSB said:
Agree with your assessment
August 29th, 2026 00:19
Random Rhyming (Part.10)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I certainly share the feeling that something has gone deeply wrong with modern society, even when we may interpret the details differently. The anger and revulsion driving this are unmistakable. Strong work, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
August 28th, 2026 17:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I certainly share the feeling that something has gone deeply wrong with modern society, even when we may interpret the details differently. The anger and revulsion driving this are unmistakable. Strong work, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
August 28th, 2026 17:30
Random Rhyming (Part.10)
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a diversity there my friend. Well done
August 28th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a diversity there my friend. Well done
August 28th, 2026 04:19
Random Rhyming (Part.10)
orchidee said:
Yes, they should be like nice E.T.! lol.
August 28th, 2026 02:03
orchidee said:
Yes, they should be like nice E.T.! lol.
August 28th, 2026 02:03
Dolly\'s Dead
sorenbarrett said:
A woman dedicated to giving to others that never forgot her humble start and could not go on without her husband neglecting her own health in the end. Musician, singer, song writer, business woman an icon a country singer inducted into the rock and roll hall of fame declining saying give the votes to someone that sings rock and roll not me but finally convinced to accept. Well written
August 27th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
A woman dedicated to giving to others that never forgot her humble start and could not go on without her husband neglecting her own health in the end. Musician, singer, song writer, business woman an icon a country singer inducted into the rock and roll hall of fame declining saying give the votes to someone that sings rock and roll not me but finally convinced to accept. Well written
August 27th, 2026 04:00
Dolly\'s Dead
orchidee said:
I don\'t know that much about her. But I know a lot about..... oh, we knows him! lol.
August 27th, 2026 02:23
orchidee said:
I don\'t know that much about her. But I know a lot about..... oh, we knows him! lol.
August 27th, 2026 02:23
A Black Cloud
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries a lot of grit. Thereβs weariness, suspicion, and determination all moving together, and that gives the piece real bite. One heck of a write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
August 26th, 2026 14:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries a lot of grit. Thereβs weariness, suspicion, and determination all moving together, and that gives the piece real bite. One heck of a write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
August 26th, 2026 14:54
A Black Cloud
sorenbarrett said:
Where does caution end and paranoia begin is the question and in a world where everyone is out to get you the line becomes a difficult one to see. Well written Shaun
August 26th, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Where does caution end and paranoia begin is the question and in a world where everyone is out to get you the line becomes a difficult one to see. Well written Shaun
August 26th, 2026 04:11
A Black Cloud
orchidee said:
Good write Robert, erm, Shaun. lol. I\'m not Robert Langdon. I\'m, e.g. Eddie Taylor, that initialled guy in disguise (geddit? lol).
August 26th, 2026 02:19
orchidee said:
Good write Robert, erm, Shaun. lol. I\'m not Robert Langdon. I\'m, e.g. Eddie Taylor, that initialled guy in disguise (geddit? lol).
August 26th, 2026 02:19
Puppet Faces
sorenbarrett said:
A harsh attack at suspected abuse in the selection process. Nicely worded in rhyme. Well done Shaun
August 25th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A harsh attack at suspected abuse in the selection process. Nicely worded in rhyme. Well done Shaun
August 25th, 2026 04:40
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