Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Astro-naughts
orchidee said:
Now everyone knows it was you and I that first landed on the Moon, way before 1969! lol.
December 28th, 2025 10:38
orchidee said:
Now everyone knows it was you and I that first landed on the Moon, way before 1969! lol.
December 28th, 2025 10:38
Astro-naughts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is confrontational and deliberately unsettled. The wordplay, the pop culture jabs, the cosmic suspicion all stack toward that final threat of detonation. You’re not arguing a case so much as daring the reader to sit with the paranoia. It’s raw, restless, and committed to its stance. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 28th, 2025 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is confrontational and deliberately unsettled. The wordplay, the pop culture jabs, the cosmic suspicion all stack toward that final threat of detonation. You’re not arguing a case so much as daring the reader to sit with the paranoia. It’s raw, restless, and committed to its stance. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 28th, 2025 08:08
Astro-naughts
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that has many levels where we know the world to be flat and that man can never fly. All those so call flights from Miami to Brazil mere illusions hypnotized by 3-D imagery. A fun read
December 28th, 2025 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that has many levels where we know the world to be flat and that man can never fly. All those so call flights from Miami to Brazil mere illusions hypnotized by 3-D imagery. A fun read
December 28th, 2025 07:09
Have I Grown Too Complacent?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job Shaun! What really lands is the tension between plotting change and staying still. That question of complacency doesn’t feel rhetorical…it feels like something you’re genuinely turning over, again and again. That repetition gives the piece its weight. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 27th, 2025 10:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job Shaun! What really lands is the tension between plotting change and staying still. That question of complacency doesn’t feel rhetorical…it feels like something you’re genuinely turning over, again and again. That repetition gives the piece its weight. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 27th, 2025 10:11
God\'s No Fairy-tale
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done on this, my friend! I concur wholeheartedly! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 27th, 2025 09:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done on this, my friend! I concur wholeheartedly! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 27th, 2025 09:54
Have I Grown Too Complacent?
sorenbarrett said:
The questioning in this poem leave a lingering feeling of unrest and the raising the issue of other dimensions takes it to another level. Well done
December 27th, 2025 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
The questioning in this poem leave a lingering feeling of unrest and the raising the issue of other dimensions takes it to another level. Well done
December 27th, 2025 08:18
Have I Grown Too Complacent?
Friendship said:
The poet. seems to reflect on their current state of being, grappling with feelings of complacency and uncertainty about their direction in life.well done
December 27th, 2025 06:34
Friendship said:
The poet. seems to reflect on their current state of being, grappling with feelings of complacency and uncertainty about their direction in life.well done
December 27th, 2025 06:34
Have I Grown Too Complacent?
orchidee said:
Someone is from another dimension - we knows him, who it is, though he\'s gone home! heehee. Good write SM.
December 27th, 2025 06:16
orchidee said:
Someone is from another dimension - we knows him, who it is, though he\'s gone home! heehee. Good write SM.
December 27th, 2025 06:16
God\'s No Fairy-tale
sorenbarrett said:
I would have to agree that innocence is indeed ripped away far too early. Nicely said
December 26th, 2025 17:07
sorenbarrett said:
I would have to agree that innocence is indeed ripped away far too early. Nicely said
December 26th, 2025 17:07
The Running Man (2025)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this comes across as relaxed, playful, and self-aware. You acknowledge the cultural noise around the film without letting it dictate your response. That balance between fandom and independence makes the poem land cleanly. Enjoyed this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 24th, 2025 11:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this comes across as relaxed, playful, and self-aware. You acknowledge the cultural noise around the film without letting it dictate your response. That balance between fandom and independence makes the poem land cleanly. Enjoyed this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 24th, 2025 11:02
The Running Man (2025)
orchidee said:
I saw the first one, I think - with Arnie Schwarz-something was it?! Round about 1900 I think it was. well, I\'m very old. lol.
December 24th, 2025 03:02
orchidee said:
I saw the first one, I think - with Arnie Schwarz-something was it?! Round about 1900 I think it was. well, I\'m very old. lol.
December 24th, 2025 03:02
The Running Man (2025)
sorenbarrett said:
A good read of nostalgia. Remember the first and haven\'t seen the second so no judgement there. The old Arnold films full of action and one liners. Well done
December 23rd, 2025 10:35
sorenbarrett said:
A good read of nostalgia. Remember the first and haven\'t seen the second so no judgement there. The old Arnold films full of action and one liners. Well done
December 23rd, 2025 10:35
Black Hearted Narcissists
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Pic reminds me of a young Maleficent! This, Shaun, is is sharp and unafraid. The rage is controlled, the imagery cuts clean, and the final turn exposes what’s been hiding in plain sight all along. It’s direct…and that honesty is its power. Love it, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 22nd, 2025 15:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Pic reminds me of a young Maleficent! This, Shaun, is is sharp and unafraid. The rage is controlled, the imagery cuts clean, and the final turn exposes what’s been hiding in plain sight all along. It’s direct…and that honesty is its power. Love it, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 22nd, 2025 15:14
Born Anew
rhmn_7 said:
\"God, why have I felt different since I was born?\", a questions most of us ask but none can answer. Inspiring words Shaun!
December 22nd, 2025 05:51
rhmn_7 said:
\"God, why have I felt different since I was born?\", a questions most of us ask but none can answer. Inspiring words Shaun!
December 22nd, 2025 05:51
Black Hearted Narcissists
sorenbarrett said:
Such an interesting combination black hearted and narcissism that recipe seem to be antisocial or what we used to call a psychopath. A good read
December 22nd, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Such an interesting combination black hearted and narcissism that recipe seem to be antisocial or what we used to call a psychopath. A good read
December 22nd, 2025 04:19
Born Anew
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this reads like a confession in motion. Anger, doubt, resolve, and longing all coexist, circling the idea of being “born anew” not as a finish line but as a slow, unfinished process. That honesty is its strength. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 21st, 2025 12:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this reads like a confession in motion. Anger, doubt, resolve, and longing all coexist, circling the idea of being “born anew” not as a finish line but as a slow, unfinished process. That honesty is its strength. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 21st, 2025 12:40
Born Anew
orchidee said:
Yet we are born anew - or \'born from above\' or \'born again\' - once we receive the Holy Spirit. This can come at the same time as accepting salvation or may come at a separate time. This is how I see it. I suppose one knows they are born, that they are alive - even a certain character who has gone home could know this. We knows him. lol.
December 21st, 2025 11:13
orchidee said:
Yet we are born anew - or \'born from above\' or \'born again\' - once we receive the Holy Spirit. This can come at the same time as accepting salvation or may come at a separate time. This is how I see it. I suppose one knows they are born, that they are alive - even a certain character who has gone home could know this. We knows him. lol.
December 21st, 2025 11:13
Born Anew
sorenbarrett said:
This poem uses the term born in a religious manner that then would make sense in the terms of feeling different since born. Nicely written
December 21st, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem uses the term born in a religious manner that then would make sense in the terms of feeling different since born. Nicely written
December 21st, 2025 04:37
God, Please
orchidee said:
I fell by the wayside, then fell over the clllliiiifffffffffffff - do ya hear me falling?! lol. I was The Birdman.
December 20th, 2025 10:37
orchidee said:
I fell by the wayside, then fell over the clllliiiifffffffffffff - do ya hear me falling?! lol. I was The Birdman.
December 20th, 2025 10:37
God, Please
Tristan Robert Lange said:
God please, indeed. Well written and relatable, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 20th, 2025 09:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
God please, indeed. Well written and relatable, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 20th, 2025 09:20
God, Please
sorenbarrett said:
This poem deals with temptations that like sugar rot the teeth. Heath resides in the strength to resist the urge. Well written
December 20th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
This poem deals with temptations that like sugar rot the teeth. Heath resides in the strength to resist the urge. Well written
December 20th, 2025 05:04
I Feel For Those Suffering
NinjaGirl said:
How angry do we have to be before we do something about it? How many of us have to be mad before change happens? The comfortable never fight back. Fantastic message in a poem, well written!
December 15th, 2025 22:53
NinjaGirl said:
How angry do we have to be before we do something about it? How many of us have to be mad before change happens? The comfortable never fight back. Fantastic message in a poem, well written!
December 15th, 2025 22:53
I Feel For Those Suffering
orchidee said:
Is that why a certain alien went home? heehee.
December 15th, 2025 15:41
orchidee said:
Is that why a certain alien went home? heehee.
December 15th, 2025 15:41
I Feel For Those Suffering
Paul Bell said:
Complacency, indifference, we\'re all guilty.
The world is changing at a rate of knots we can\'t keep up with, so we end up in limbo.
December 15th, 2025 11:31
Paul Bell said:
Complacency, indifference, we\'re all guilty.
The world is changing at a rate of knots we can\'t keep up with, so we end up in limbo.
December 15th, 2025 11:31
I Feel For Those Suffering
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that gives chills. Complacency is the great villain and the turning of the head not wanting to see or get involved. There is not enough support for the good Samaritan instead they are drug into a nightmare of red tape and publicity that ruins their day if not life. A sad poem
December 15th, 2025 11:12
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that gives chills. Complacency is the great villain and the turning of the head not wanting to see or get involved. There is not enough support for the good Samaritan instead they are drug into a nightmare of red tape and publicity that ruins their day if not life. A sad poem
December 15th, 2025 11:12
Noisy Neighbours
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL! Fight fire with fire! Great Metallica song! Not sure it\'s wise advice, but a killer song off a killer album! LOL! Love this, my friend! Very relatable, indeed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 14th, 2025 09:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL! Fight fire with fire! Great Metallica song! Not sure it\'s wise advice, but a killer song off a killer album! LOL! Love this, my friend! Very relatable, indeed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 14th, 2025 09:09
Noisy Neighbours
sorenbarrett said:
Identifiable yes in a world of crowed people where each lives their life in disregard. Well worded it makes its noise
December 14th, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
Identifiable yes in a world of crowed people where each lives their life in disregard. Well worded it makes its noise
December 14th, 2025 05:19
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