Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Jay-Z: Damage Control
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this feels like those moments where trust in public figures just snaps…where everything starts to feel staged or controlled, and the frustration boils over. That kind of energy is hard to contain, and you let it out fully here. I felt that intensity. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this feels like those moments where trust in public figures just snaps…where everything starts to feel staged or controlled, and the frustration boils over. That kind of energy is hard to contain, and you let it out fully here. I felt that intensity. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:33
Jay-Z: Damage Control
2781 said:
I don\'t know what you were going on about, but I liked it!
March 28th, 2026 08:33
2781 said:
I don\'t know what you were going on about, but I liked it!
March 28th, 2026 08:33
A Pyramid Prison
Katie B. said:
Deep and heavy. Pain reaches through. Tough realities. Well written. Wishing you the best.
March 28th, 2026 07:05
Katie B. said:
Deep and heavy. Pain reaches through. Tough realities. Well written. Wishing you the best.
March 28th, 2026 07:05
Jay-Z: Damage Control
sorenbarrett said:
Wrapped in rap this piece critiques the establishment with rhyme of rath. Well done
March 28th, 2026 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
Wrapped in rap this piece critiques the establishment with rhyme of rath. Well done
March 28th, 2026 05:39
Sorry God
Mutley Ravishes said:
Is \"God\" really disappointed with this world? Maybe he`s just taking his time? What does he want? Does he even want anything? \"His ways are past finding out.\"
Great write, Shaun, you pulled this response out of me.
March 27th, 2026 09:30
Mutley Ravishes said:
Is \"God\" really disappointed with this world? Maybe he`s just taking his time? What does he want? Does he even want anything? \"His ways are past finding out.\"
Great write, Shaun, you pulled this response out of me.
March 27th, 2026 09:30
Sorry God
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Cheers, yeah nothing simple I guess. The mortal life lol.
March 27th, 2026 09:30
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Cheers, yeah nothing simple I guess. The mortal life lol.
March 27th, 2026 09:30
Sorry God
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this speaks to that place where you know forgiveness is there… but you still feel the weight of your own choices. That internal struggle comes through clearly. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this speaks to that place where you know forgiveness is there… but you still feel the weight of your own choices. That internal struggle comes through clearly. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:21
Sorry God
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic petition for forgiveness for being human. Nicely written
March 27th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic petition for forgiveness for being human. Nicely written
March 27th, 2026 04:25
Hollywood Curses (Part.2)
orchidee said:
That\'s that metal toothed guy from Jaws! lol.
March 26th, 2026 04:26
orchidee said:
That\'s that metal toothed guy from Jaws! lol.
March 26th, 2026 04:26
Hollywood Curses (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
Since I watch no TV any more much of this gos beyond me but I get the gist of vanity and avarice, arrogance and competition all battling. Nicely done
March 26th, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Since I watch no TV any more much of this gos beyond me but I get the gist of vanity and avarice, arrogance and competition all battling. Nicely done
March 26th, 2026 03:49
Jojo\'s Bizarre Adventure
DeadRose said:
Its got a good plot! but is quite bizarre... Been waiting 3 years for sbr to animate, forgot about it entirely, then found out they just made it.
March 25th, 2026 18:13
DeadRose said:
Its got a good plot! but is quite bizarre... Been waiting 3 years for sbr to animate, forgot about it entirely, then found out they just made it.
March 25th, 2026 18:13
Go, Go Gadget, Flow!
orchidee said:
You know Inspector Gadget, a cartoon character?! lol.
March 25th, 2026 11:43
orchidee said:
You know Inspector Gadget, a cartoon character?! lol.
March 25th, 2026 11:43
Go, Go Gadget, Flow!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Go Gadget, flow! Shaun, this balances humor and everyday life really well…listing it all out could feel cluttered, but you keep it flowing with that steady cadence and playful tone. Then you ground it at the end with that note of caution about AI…nice shift without losing the vibe. Solid piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Go Gadget, flow! Shaun, this balances humor and everyday life really well…listing it all out could feel cluttered, but you keep it flowing with that steady cadence and playful tone. Then you ground it at the end with that note of caution about AI…nice shift without losing the vibe. Solid piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:48
Go, Go Gadget, Flow!
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that emphasizes the advance in technology and its seductive power to enslave us. The last line made me think of Ted Kaczynski and his warning that technology would be the downfall of man and civilization.
March 25th, 2026 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that emphasizes the advance in technology and its seductive power to enslave us. The last line made me think of Ted Kaczynski and his warning that technology would be the downfall of man and civilization.
March 25th, 2026 05:24
Jojo\'s Bizarre Adventure
orchidee said:
Me keyboard\'s gone funny JuSt NoW like yours has - GoOd WrItE sM.
Erm, but it still spells - we know the guy - ET. lol.
March 24th, 2026 12:02
orchidee said:
Me keyboard\'s gone funny JuSt NoW like yours has - GoOd WrItE sM.
Erm, but it still spells - we know the guy - ET. lol.
March 24th, 2026 12:02
Jojo\'s Bizarre Adventure
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is fun…right away it feels energetic and a bit chaotic in a good way. It leans into that over-the-top vibe and just runs with it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is fun…right away it feels energetic and a bit chaotic in a good way. It leans into that over-the-top vibe and just runs with it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 24th, 2026 08:54
Jojo\'s Bizarre Adventure
sorenbarrett said:
I never realized how one becomes accustomed to text in a certain pattern and that the simple alteration of capitalization can disrupt and slow its comprehension. Well done
March 24th, 2026 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
I never realized how one becomes accustomed to text in a certain pattern and that the simple alteration of capitalization can disrupt and slow its comprehension. Well done
March 24th, 2026 08:12
Peaky Blinders: The Immortal Man
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Thanks pal, yeah could have been better.
March 23rd, 2026 10:20
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Thanks pal, yeah could have been better.
March 23rd, 2026 10:20
Peaky Blinders: The Immortal Man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this got me…there’s a real bite here, and it’s honest. That frustration with something you once enjoyed comes through clearly. It’s sharp, but still fun. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this got me…there’s a real bite here, and it’s honest. That frustration with something you once enjoyed comes through clearly. It’s sharp, but still fun. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:23
Who Would Listen? (Psychosis)
Vanna said:
The last two lines are my favorite. Such a beautiful poem.
March 23rd, 2026 07:00
Vanna said:
The last two lines are my favorite. Such a beautiful poem.
March 23rd, 2026 07:00
Peaky Blinders: The Immortal Man
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that gains most of my support. It is why that sequels generally suck with a few exceptions that had new ideas. Well said
March 23rd, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that gains most of my support. It is why that sequels generally suck with a few exceptions that had new ideas. Well said
March 23rd, 2026 03:55
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