Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Debt Slavery (Part.2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is raw and angry in the right way. It doesn’t posture or soften the blow…it just tells the truth straight through clenched teeth. That frustration is palpable. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
January 6th, 2026 13:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is raw and angry in the right way. It doesn’t posture or soften the blow…it just tells the truth straight through clenched teeth. That frustration is palpable. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
January 6th, 2026 13:13
Debt Slavery (Part.2)
Katie B. said:
Much truth in this. Thoughtful read. Well done.
January 6th, 2026 09:33
Katie B. said:
Much truth in this. Thoughtful read. Well done.
January 6th, 2026 09:33
Debt Slavery (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
There is no productivity in idleness and the system can not grow and function without consumption so work, work and when you can no longer then please die soon so as not to be a drain on the economy is what I hear here. Well done
January 6th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
There is no productivity in idleness and the system can not grow and function without consumption so work, work and when you can no longer then please die soon so as not to be a drain on the economy is what I hear here. Well done
January 6th, 2026 04:21
Wolf Moon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this piece balances dread and defiance well. You look up at the wolf moon, name the weight of the moment, then snap back with voice and confidence. That sonic finish gives it lift and personality. Thoroughly enjoyed this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 5th, 2026 16:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this piece balances dread and defiance well. You look up at the wolf moon, name the weight of the moment, then snap back with voice and confidence. That sonic finish gives it lift and personality. Thoroughly enjoyed this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 5th, 2026 16:02
Wolf Moon
orchidee said:
Yes, I\'m still waiting for the bus to take me to that far away land, to you-know-who. Or he might be closer than we think! lol.
I waited at this bus stop every day for 40 years. Then someone passed by and said \'Ah, they discontinued this route\' Doh!
January 5th, 2026 14:17
orchidee said:
Yes, I\'m still waiting for the bus to take me to that far away land, to you-know-who. Or he might be closer than we think! lol.
I waited at this bus stop every day for 40 years. Then someone passed by and said \'Ah, they discontinued this route\' Doh!
January 5th, 2026 14:17
Wolf Moon
sorenbarrett said:
Words of doom in this poem of rhyme and gloom that is put off for another day. Nicely written
January 5th, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Words of doom in this poem of rhyme and gloom that is put off for another day. Nicely written
January 5th, 2026 04:02
Wolf Moon
orchidee said:
Good write SM. It seems a long wait. If we take the verse \'To the Lord a 1,000 years is as 1 day, and 1 day as a 1,000 years\', we\'ve only been waiting 2 days (2,000 years). But the verse (2 Peter 3 v.9) really means that God is outside of human time, I think.
Meanwhile I been waiting 1,000 years for a bus, and I don\'t mean 1 day! lol.
January 5th, 2026 03:09
orchidee said:
Good write SM. It seems a long wait. If we take the verse \'To the Lord a 1,000 years is as 1 day, and 1 day as a 1,000 years\', we\'ve only been waiting 2 days (2,000 years). But the verse (2 Peter 3 v.9) really means that God is outside of human time, I think.
Meanwhile I been waiting 1,000 years for a bus, and I don\'t mean 1 day! lol.
January 5th, 2026 03:09
Men In Black Going Down To Hell?
orchidee said:
Ugh! It\'s boring and tiresome, these celebrity \'antics\'! lol. Who\'s got time for all their rubbish? heehee.
January 4th, 2026 09:51
orchidee said:
Ugh! It\'s boring and tiresome, these celebrity \'antics\'! lol. Who\'s got time for all their rubbish? heehee.
January 4th, 2026 09:51
Men In Black Going Down To Hell?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this reads like a snapshot of cultural whiplash...headlines, rumors, fear, and distrust all colliding at once. There’s a real sense of unease here, of trying to orient yourself in a world where information feels unstable and motives are suspect. I appreciate you putting that tension into words without pretending it’s comfortable or resolved. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 4th, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this reads like a snapshot of cultural whiplash...headlines, rumors, fear, and distrust all colliding at once. There’s a real sense of unease here, of trying to orient yourself in a world where information feels unstable and motives are suspect. I appreciate you putting that tension into words without pretending it’s comfortable or resolved. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 4th, 2026 09:34
Men In Black Going Down To Hell?
sorenbarrett said:
Paranoia races now days not knowing what to believe and a cutthroat society where he that dies with the most toys wins. A good read and every man for himself.
January 4th, 2026 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
Paranoia races now days not knowing what to believe and a cutthroat society where he that dies with the most toys wins. A good read and every man for himself.
January 4th, 2026 07:34
The Expansion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this comes through as restless and searching. There’s urgency here, but also fatigue…the sense of carrying questions that never quite shut off. Powerful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 3rd, 2026 13:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this comes through as restless and searching. There’s urgency here, but also fatigue…the sense of carrying questions that never quite shut off. Powerful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 3rd, 2026 13:36
The Expansion
orchidee said:
Now we won\'t grow any more brain cells by attending to that three quarters of stuff on Earth! I know how to improve on the other quarter - just watch Eastenders, a huge mine of information and wisdom! lol.
January 3rd, 2026 12:07
orchidee said:
Now we won\'t grow any more brain cells by attending to that three quarters of stuff on Earth! I know how to improve on the other quarter - just watch Eastenders, a huge mine of information and wisdom! lol.
January 3rd, 2026 12:07
The Expansion
sorenbarrett said:
A poem searching for meaning in a world that is already programed to deceive and with others that believe what it is telling them. Scary and all too real.
January 3rd, 2026 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poem searching for meaning in a world that is already programed to deceive and with others that believe what it is telling them. Scary and all too real.
January 3rd, 2026 06:29
The Rebel Within You
orchidee said:
You know those gals there?! They related to someone we knows? They look a bit alien. heehee.
I read that AI, though very useful, as I use it online too, can be helpful. But robots, etc, have no consciousness or conscience, and can\'t compare with human brains. Well, pity some humans seem to only have 3 brain cells. Doh!
January 2nd, 2026 10:22
orchidee said:
You know those gals there?! They related to someone we knows? They look a bit alien. heehee.
I read that AI, though very useful, as I use it online too, can be helpful. But robots, etc, have no consciousness or conscience, and can\'t compare with human brains. Well, pity some humans seem to only have 3 brain cells. Doh!
January 2nd, 2026 10:22
The Rebel Within You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
😂 This one sent my brain sideways. As long as the hologram isn’t in the toilet stall, we’re all good…no need for a peeping Siri. The imagination here runs wild, and that’s half the fun. Good write, mate. Happy New Year to you…it’s only getting weirder. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 2nd, 2026 09:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
😂 This one sent my brain sideways. As long as the hologram isn’t in the toilet stall, we’re all good…no need for a peeping Siri. The imagination here runs wild, and that’s half the fun. Good write, mate. Happy New Year to you…it’s only getting weirder. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 2nd, 2026 09:07
The Rebel Within You
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m old school and believe that with every accepted change there is other changes and for every advantage a disadvantage. Leave me be who I am. Well written
January 2nd, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m old school and believe that with every accepted change there is other changes and for every advantage a disadvantage. Leave me be who I am. Well written
January 2nd, 2026 05:01
New Year (2026)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written and a powerful poem! In terms of New Years and drinking...right their with you, mate. Good to not be alone in that as the rest the world carries on, right? Again, powerful and a fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 1st, 2026 09:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written and a powerful poem! In terms of New Years and drinking...right their with you, mate. Good to not be alone in that as the rest the world carries on, right? Again, powerful and a fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 1st, 2026 09:38
New Year (2026)
orchidee said:
Oohh, Happy Easter to ya then, if it\'s April 1st today! lol.
January 1st, 2026 08:30
orchidee said:
Oohh, Happy Easter to ya then, if it\'s April 1st today! lol.
January 1st, 2026 08:30
New Year (2026)
sorenbarrett said:
I love your tercets and rhyme in this poem. A different type of new year greeting. A fave
January 1st, 2026 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
I love your tercets and rhyme in this poem. A different type of new year greeting. A fave
January 1st, 2026 06:33
Judas Bond
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is a confession wrapped in warning. You move between discipline, belief, paranoia, and prayer without smoothing the edges, and that rawness feels intentional. It reads like someone standing mid-reckoning, refusing to look away. Strong, unsettled work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 31st, 2025 09:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is a confession wrapped in warning. You move between discipline, belief, paranoia, and prayer without smoothing the edges, and that rawness feels intentional. It reads like someone standing mid-reckoning, refusing to look away. Strong, unsettled work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 31st, 2025 09:06
Where\'s That Christmas Feeling?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful job...and yes, Krampus. Quite the cuddly guy. As for your picture...yummy? We\'re can you by such beastly snacks? 🤣
December 30th, 2025 10:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful job...and yes, Krampus. Quite the cuddly guy. As for your picture...yummy? We\'re can you by such beastly snacks? 🤣
December 30th, 2025 10:45
Where\'s That Christmas Feeling?
sorenbarrett said:
A blend of Greek mythology with Christian makes this a fun read and justified paranoia falls right into line. Well done
December 30th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A blend of Greek mythology with Christian makes this a fun read and justified paranoia falls right into line. Well done
December 30th, 2025 04:40
Where\'s That Christmas Feeling?
orchidee said:
You know Kris? Mr Kringle?! heehee.
December 30th, 2025 02:48
orchidee said:
You know Kris? Mr Kringle?! heehee.
December 30th, 2025 02:48
There\'s A Conspiracy For Everything
sorenbarrett said:
What is worse the paranoia of thinking that everyone is out to get you or the disbelief that any one would want to hurt you when we know they are. We live in a paranoid world where there is no trust and for good reason. When you can no longer believe anything you see or hear the enemy has won and we fall vanquished in disbelief. A sad state of affairs Sun Tzu was right the best war is the one you don\'t need to fight. Good write
December 29th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
What is worse the paranoia of thinking that everyone is out to get you or the disbelief that any one would want to hurt you when we know they are. We live in a paranoid world where there is no trust and for good reason. When you can no longer believe anything you see or hear the enemy has won and we fall vanquished in disbelief. A sad state of affairs Sun Tzu was right the best war is the one you don\'t need to fight. Good write
December 29th, 2025 04:18
There\'s A Conspiracy For Everything
orchidee said:
I read a bit that there can\'t really be conspiracies everywhere, as it would be too complicated and too difficult to think them all up, to plan them all out, etc.
What I want to know is - is it (or was it) a conspiracy concerning the one who has now \'gone home\'? Did he even exist in the first place?! lol.
December 29th, 2025 03:12
orchidee said:
I read a bit that there can\'t really be conspiracies everywhere, as it would be too complicated and too difficult to think them all up, to plan them all out, etc.
What I want to know is - is it (or was it) a conspiracy concerning the one who has now \'gone home\'? Did he even exist in the first place?! lol.
December 29th, 2025 03:12
Astro-naughts
orchidee said:
Now everyone knows it was you and I that first landed on the Moon, way before 1969! lol.
December 28th, 2025 10:38
orchidee said:
Now everyone knows it was you and I that first landed on the Moon, way before 1969! lol.
December 28th, 2025 10:38
Astro-naughts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is confrontational and deliberately unsettled. The wordplay, the pop culture jabs, the cosmic suspicion all stack toward that final threat of detonation. You’re not arguing a case so much as daring the reader to sit with the paranoia. It’s raw, restless, and committed to its stance. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 28th, 2025 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is confrontational and deliberately unsettled. The wordplay, the pop culture jabs, the cosmic suspicion all stack toward that final threat of detonation. You’re not arguing a case so much as daring the reader to sit with the paranoia. It’s raw, restless, and committed to its stance. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 28th, 2025 08:08
Astro-naughts
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that has many levels where we know the world to be flat and that man can never fly. All those so call flights from Miami to Brazil mere illusions hypnotized by 3-D imagery. A fun read
December 28th, 2025 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that has many levels where we know the world to be flat and that man can never fly. All those so call flights from Miami to Brazil mere illusions hypnotized by 3-D imagery. A fun read
December 28th, 2025 07:09
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