Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry



The Backwards Man (Part.2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

One heck of a follow-up, Shaun. The absurdity keeps it fun, but underneath it there’s a real refusal to surrender judgment to politicians, crowds, or received wisdom. Heel to toe indeed. 😂 Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 6th, 2026 13:05

I\'ve Got Rhymes
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

September 6th, 2026 08:01

The Backwards Man (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:

There is definite discontentment in this write and a challenge to others to think about the present situation. Well said

September 6th, 2026 05:01

The Backwards Man (Part.2)
orchidee said:

Good write SM. You know sensei Sam? Is he related to - oh, we knows him, a certain guy! lol.

September 6th, 2026 03:11

I\'ve Got Rhymes
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Shaun, this comes charging out of the gate. There’s defiance, humor, recovery, and a whole lot of attitude packed into a relatively short space…definitely one with some teeth. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 5th, 2026 20:13

Just Let It Go Over Your Head
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Strong piece, Shaun. There’s a blunt wisdom in this that works really well…keeping your peace instead of handing someone else control of your mood is easier said than done, but worth learning. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 5th, 2026 19:47

I\'ve Got Rhymes
orchidee said:

Good write SM. I thought this was gonna be about the re-showing of Neighbours on telly: Return of the living dead.... lol. Is Bouncer the dog in it still? The only non-wooden actor in it. lol.

September 5th, 2026 04:43

I\'ve Got Rhymes
sorenbarrett said:

I really like the bars in this poem Shaun the fit well and have good flow it gets a fave my friend

September 5th, 2026 04:19

Just Let It Go Over Your Head
Friendship said:

Nicely said

September 4th, 2026 12:54

Just Let It Go Over Your Head
orchidee said:

That E.T. surfing over your head there?! lol.

September 4th, 2026 07:52

Just Let It Go Over Your Head
sorenbarrett said:

Good words of advice in this poem that sends it message of take it easy and don\'t let other upset us. Nicely said Shaun

September 4th, 2026 03:41

They Made Masculinity Toxic, Those Fucking Fools!
Doggerel Dave said:

Propaganda from both sides of the gender divide...

September 3rd, 2026 18:27

They Made Masculinity Toxic, Those Fucking Fools!
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Shaun, the anger is unmistakable, but I think its target remains too vague. Nobody should shame a man for embracing traditional masculinity...yet allowing other men to live differently does not make masculinity endangered. I\'ve always wondered why some men feel so threatened by other expressions of manhood. That has always seemed rather insecure. For me, the real problem is coercion in either direction. Regardless, thanks for raising it up for discussion, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 3rd, 2026 10:29

They Made Masculinity Toxic, Those Fucking Fools!
Kevin Hulme said:

If a War kicks Off , they\'ll be wanting Real Men to fight for the Country.
And as for Sexual Harassment: The Woman are just as Bad. Remember when Prince William met some Ladies and one Pinched his Bum.
If a Man did that to Kate : They would have been arrested. Good Write.

September 3rd, 2026 10:08

They Made Masculinity Toxic, Those Fucking Fools!
Paul Bell said:

It\'s a minefield out there now, ask a girl her preference, you get, I\'m Bi-sexual, A sexual, pan-sexual, god knows what sexual.
Don\'t get me started on the bars. A pint of lager comes with twenty different names now.

September 3rd, 2026 07:34

They Made Masculinity Toxic, Those Fucking Fools!
sorenbarrett said:

Political correctness under the ploy of kindness can be taken too far as a power move. Honesty is the mark of love and that is in short supply now days. Well written.

September 3rd, 2026 04:03

Beyond The Blue Sky
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Shaun, this carries such a restless, searching energy. It begins inside an ordinary day, then suddenly looks outward toward something immeasurably larger…a thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 2nd, 2026 21:41

Beyond The Blue Sky
orchidee said:

Ohhh, we know of course, what\'s up there - a two-initialled guy! (not that joke again! lol).

September 2nd, 2026 10:36

Beyond The Blue Sky
sorenbarrett said:

What lies ahead be it the future or space or even the day. Nicely written

September 2nd, 2026 04:23

GTA 6 Looks Dogshit
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Shaun, I get the skepticism. When a franchise has been around that long, it is hard not to compare every new entry to what originally made you love it. This has that disappointed-fan energy all over it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 1st, 2026 12:39

GTA 6 Looks Dogshit
sorenbarrett said:

Dissatisfaction expressed in a poem with good rhyme and flow better than the game. Nicely done

September 1st, 2026 06:21

Fitness Freak
Tristan Robert Lange said:

What a fun and determined piece, Shaun. There is discipline here, but also humor and realism...keep training, adapt when needed, and stay strong for as long as life lets you. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

August 31st, 2026 08:33

Fitness Freak
Friendship said:

Nicely written

August 31st, 2026 08:30

Fitness Freak
Syd said:

I really enjoyed this Shaun,

It reminds me of when I used to go to the gym. I only ever do cardio these days as I\'m still recovering from surgery.

Nicely written - Syd 🍄

August 31st, 2026 05:31

Fitness Freak
sorenbarrett said:

Brings memories of the old days. This poem pumped with energy has meter that runs. Nicely put together in rhyme it has power. Well done Shaun

August 31st, 2026 04:29

Fitness Freak
orchidee said:

Ahh, we can become too fit and overdo things. Good write SM.

August 31st, 2026 03:39

Be Aware
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Shaun, this one has that unmistakable sense of spiritual and cultural alarm running through it. It feels like a warning siren aimed at complacency…especially around accountability and discernment. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

August 30th, 2026 21:31

Random Rhyming (Part.10)
2781 said:

Good punch lines!

August 30th, 2026 08:52

Be Aware
orchidee said:

In a soap serial: \'Who dies in the accident?\' Dunno! But if there\'s a fire, they\'ll all turn to ashes, cos they\'re made of wood - in their acting. Now they\'ve revived old episodes of \'Neighbours\' too This is too much for us, too horrific! lol.

August 30th, 2026 07:54

Be Aware
sorenbarrett said:

Cast in metaphoric symbols this poem speaks of chaos and the modern world. Those angel trumpets might be taken two ways. Well done Shaun

August 30th, 2026 04:00

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