Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
I See Dark Demons Inside Of A Human Meat Suit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is powerful because I know the experience behind it. I have absorbed fear, hatred, discrimination, and anger that once felt like evil standing before me in human form. I truly pray for those attacking you and hope you find healing, because it is an awful thing to endure. Yet time and my own failures have taught me that woundedness and sin can become terribly destructive in any of us. That leaves me asking how we discern spiritual evil without condemning wounded human beings who remain, like us, in need of grace. A fave friend, for how real/raw/honest this is...as well as craft. Thanks for sharing!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2026 09:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is powerful because I know the experience behind it. I have absorbed fear, hatred, discrimination, and anger that once felt like evil standing before me in human form. I truly pray for those attacking you and hope you find healing, because it is an awful thing to endure. Yet time and my own failures have taught me that woundedness and sin can become terribly destructive in any of us. That leaves me asking how we discern spiritual evil without condemning wounded human beings who remain, like us, in need of grace. A fave friend, for how real/raw/honest this is...as well as craft. Thanks for sharing!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2026 09:53
I See Dark Demons Inside Of A Human Meat Suit
sorenbarrett said:
Clever ending that ties things all together nicely done Shaun. Loved it.
September 15th, 2026 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Clever ending that ties things all together nicely done Shaun. Loved it.
September 15th, 2026 04:49
A Slice Of Poetry
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a clever piece, Shaun. Language becomes something delicious and sustaining, while the alphabet joins the table right alongside the reader. Creative, lighthearted, and satisfying work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 14th, 2026 11:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a clever piece, Shaun. Language becomes something delicious and sustaining, while the alphabet joins the table right alongside the reader. Creative, lighthearted, and satisfying work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 14th, 2026 11:10
A Slice Of Poetry
orchidee said:
Yep, I can make a two-initialled guy out of those letters. Dunno if I can do his whole name though. We knows him - Eddie Taylore or summat. lol.
September 14th, 2026 09:17
orchidee said:
Yep, I can make a two-initialled guy out of those letters. Dunno if I can do his whole name though. We knows him - Eddie Taylore or summat. lol.
September 14th, 2026 09:17
Strange Starers
Durdica Porobija said:
Interesting topic: the body and the human being. From there, you can go anywhere.
September 14th, 2026 05:04
Durdica Porobija said:
Interesting topic: the body and the human being. From there, you can go anywhere.
September 14th, 2026 05:04
A Slice Of Poetry
sorenbarrett said:
A great image set in metaphor for an idiom whose main ingredient is metaphor. Well painted and iced.
September 14th, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
A great image set in metaphor for an idiom whose main ingredient is metaphor. Well painted and iced.
September 14th, 2026 04:34
Self-entitled
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know this particular struggle...trying to remain civilized while someone’s behavior is begging for the director’s cut of your vocabulary. You captured it brilliantly! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 13th, 2026 18:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know this particular struggle...trying to remain civilized while someone’s behavior is begging for the director’s cut of your vocabulary. You captured it brilliantly! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 13th, 2026 18:55
Self-entitled
Kevin Hulme said:
Know what you mean here. Jerks all of them.
Well said and Restrained.
September 13th, 2026 18:41
Kevin Hulme said:
Know what you mean here. Jerks all of them.
Well said and Restrained.
September 13th, 2026 18:41
Self-entitled
orchidee said:
I not seen any flying books! heehee. A Carry On film has a naughty line:\' A couple are annoyed with their cat who has taken up a chair. They say they call the cat \'Cooking Fat\'. Oops! (geddit?).
September 13th, 2026 09:17
orchidee said:
I not seen any flying books! heehee. A Carry On film has a naughty line:\' A couple are annoyed with their cat who has taken up a chair. They say they call the cat \'Cooking Fat\'. Oops! (geddit?).
September 13th, 2026 09:17
Self-entitled
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and most respectful but totally recognizable. A fun read it speaks to me and a fave
September 13th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and most respectful but totally recognizable. A fun read it speaks to me and a fave
September 13th, 2026 04:00
Life Is A Learning Curve
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is one hell of a ride! 😂 Health problems, delayed deliveries, divine agency, and questionable carbohydrates all collide in six gloriously unpredictable lines. Thoroughly entertaining, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 12th, 2026 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is one hell of a ride! 😂 Health problems, delayed deliveries, divine agency, and questionable carbohydrates all collide in six gloriously unpredictable lines. Thoroughly entertaining, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 12th, 2026 09:17
Life Is A Learning Curve
sorenbarrett said:
You are so right some things are not meant to go together. Nicely written
September 12th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
You are so right some things are not meant to go together. Nicely written
September 12th, 2026 04:04
A Spiritual Cost
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A strong, necessary piece, my friend. Character is revealed in how we treat people from whom we have nothing to gain. Cruelty always diminishes the person delivering it...whether consequences arrive visibly or not. Excellent write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2026 09:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A strong, necessary piece, my friend. Character is revealed in how we treat people from whom we have nothing to gain. Cruelty always diminishes the person delivering it...whether consequences arrive visibly or not. Excellent write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2026 09:09
A Spiritual Cost
sorenbarrett said:
Disdain has always bothered me and I thought should be included in one of the seven deadly sins as it requires judging others and a sense of arrogance. Well written my friend
September 11th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Disdain has always bothered me and I thought should be included in one of the seven deadly sins as it requires judging others and a sense of arrogance. Well written my friend
September 11th, 2026 04:20
A Spiritual Cost
orchidee said:
I can\'t say either of those two look like....... we knows him! e.g. Eddie Taylor. lol.
September 11th, 2026 01:33
orchidee said:
I can\'t say either of those two look like....... we knows him! e.g. Eddie Taylor. lol.
September 11th, 2026 01:33
Don\'t Catch Feelings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this captures the battle between remaining openhearted and surviving repeated betrayal. The anger sounds resolute, but the pain underneath gives the poem its real power...those defenses were earned. Excellent write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2026 21:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this captures the battle between remaining openhearted and surviving repeated betrayal. The anger sounds resolute, but the pain underneath gives the poem its real power...those defenses were earned. Excellent write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2026 21:31
Don\'t Catch Feelings
sorenbarrett said:
A nice write of what we give up and what we sell or trade for pleasure. Well written Shaun
September 10th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
A nice write of what we give up and what we sell or trade for pleasure. Well written Shaun
September 10th, 2026 04:04
Writing Is My Therapy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is raw as hell. The struggle is real, the faith is hard-won, and writing becomes the place where you reclaim your own voice. I felt the fight throughout this, bro...and I relate, writing has helped me reclaim my voice too. Powerful work! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2026 08:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is raw as hell. The struggle is real, the faith is hard-won, and writing becomes the place where you reclaim your own voice. I felt the fight throughout this, bro...and I relate, writing has helped me reclaim my voice too. Powerful work! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2026 08:17
Writing Is My Therapy
sorenbarrett said:
Some things don\'t change like cement once set. Nicely written
September 9th, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Some things don\'t change like cement once set. Nicely written
September 9th, 2026 04:39
Obsession (Contains Spoilers)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dark and unsettling, my friend! You capture the point where longing becomes control and another person’s humanity gets erased. That violation of agency is far more frightening than the supernatural device itself. Nicely done, Shaunmatthewcpoetry! My oldest daughter has seen this and said it is really good. Will be checking it out myself. Looks scary af. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2026 08:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dark and unsettling, my friend! You capture the point where longing becomes control and another person’s humanity gets erased. That violation of agency is far more frightening than the supernatural device itself. Nicely done, Shaunmatthewcpoetry! My oldest daughter has seen this and said it is really good. Will be checking it out myself. Looks scary af. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2026 08:49
Obsession (Contains Spoilers)
orchidee said:
I don\'t know the movie. Won\'t have to watch it now, seeing as you\'ve \'spoilt\' it for us! lol.
September 8th, 2026 08:46
orchidee said:
I don\'t know the movie. Won\'t have to watch it now, seeing as you\'ve \'spoilt\' it for us! lol.
September 8th, 2026 08:46
Obsession (Contains Spoilers)
sorenbarrett said:
A good movie review in poetic form. Loved it
September 8th, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
A good movie review in poetic form. Loved it
September 8th, 2026 04:02
The Fruit Of The Spirit (Self Control)
orchidee said:
Good write SM, but I don\'t think demons look like that. Neither does..... oh, we know him! lol.
September 7th, 2026 09:08
orchidee said:
Good write SM, but I don\'t think demons look like that. Neither does..... oh, we know him! lol.
September 7th, 2026 09:08
The Fruit Of The Spirit (Self Control)
sorenbarrett said:
Looking for a little outside help this poem speaks of angels and demons as outside forces. Nicely written with rhyme.
September 7th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Looking for a little outside help this poem speaks of angels and demons as outside forces. Nicely written with rhyme.
September 7th, 2026 04:19
The Backwards Man (Part.2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One heck of a follow-up, Shaun. The absurdity keeps it fun, but underneath it there’s a real refusal to surrender judgment to politicians, crowds, or received wisdom. Heel to toe indeed. 😂 Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One heck of a follow-up, Shaun. The absurdity keeps it fun, but underneath it there’s a real refusal to surrender judgment to politicians, crowds, or received wisdom. Heel to toe indeed. 😂 Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:05
The Backwards Man (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
There is definite discontentment in this write and a challenge to others to think about the present situation. Well said
September 6th, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
There is definite discontentment in this write and a challenge to others to think about the present situation. Well said
September 6th, 2026 05:01
« Return to the profile of Shaunmatthewcpoetry
