Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Moving Forward
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is about movement that isn’t triumphant, just necessary. Small steps, hidden damage, changed perspective, and a quiet sense of presence underneath it all. It’s restrained, reflective, and grounded. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 3rd, 2026 10:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is about movement that isn’t triumphant, just necessary. Small steps, hidden damage, changed perspective, and a quiet sense of presence underneath it all. It’s restrained, reflective, and grounded. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 3rd, 2026 10:23
Moving Forward
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents to me the starting point for most a block to push off of. Nicely worded
February 3rd, 2026 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents to me the starting point for most a block to push off of. Nicely worded
February 3rd, 2026 04:37
Moving Forward
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Should we also have faith in........., though he\'s \'gone home\' - does he exist?! Yes!! lol.
February 3rd, 2026 03:31
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Should we also have faith in........., though he\'s \'gone home\' - does he exist?! Yes!! lol.
February 3rd, 2026 03:31
Poetry For The Unemployed
Doggerel Dave said:
Exploitation raw and hard - you have nailed it.
February 2nd, 2026 17:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Exploitation raw and hard - you have nailed it.
February 2nd, 2026 17:24
Poetry For The Unemployed
orchidee said:
Good write SM. You seen a certain chap lately?! lol.
February 2nd, 2026 14:02
orchidee said:
Good write SM. You seen a certain chap lately?! lol.
February 2nd, 2026 14:02
Poetry For The Unemployed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this resonates as a voice from inside the grind rather than commentary from above it. The refusal to romanticize unemployment while still naming dignity feels important and necessary. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 2nd, 2026 13:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this resonates as a voice from inside the grind rather than commentary from above it. The refusal to romanticize unemployment while still naming dignity feels important and necessary. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 2nd, 2026 13:24
Poetry For The Unemployed
sorenbarrett said:
A sad picture is painted in this poem of those disenfranchised and without hope in a world that has become mechanized and they are no longer needed. Well written
February 2nd, 2026 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A sad picture is painted in this poem of those disenfranchised and without hope in a world that has become mechanized and they are no longer needed. Well written
February 2nd, 2026 05:06
No Medication
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this resonates as a cry from the space between help and harm. The sense of being offered solutions that feel worse than the illness itself is something many recognize, even if answers remain elusive. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 1st, 2026 23:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this resonates as a cry from the space between help and harm. The sense of being offered solutions that feel worse than the illness itself is something many recognize, even if answers remain elusive. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 1st, 2026 23:28
No Medication
Doggerel Dave said:
Antipsychotics are at such a primitive stage in terms of a goal which would be a cure or control of symptoms without massive side effects. Solutions to come from Big Pharma which is driven to make profits.....The whole damn thing.
February 1st, 2026 16:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Antipsychotics are at such a primitive stage in terms of a goal which would be a cure or control of symptoms without massive side effects. Solutions to come from Big Pharma which is driven to make profits.....The whole damn thing.
February 1st, 2026 16:28
No Medication
sorenbarrett said:
A poem after my own heart where some medications are necessary for certain individuals money has gotten in the way and blown everything far out of proportion. Bottom line preempts common sense and caution as to side effects and they rely on ignorance in the public and doctors to push profits higher. Where doctors that hold stock or at least their family members do serve on the FDA making decisions as to which drug is approved or not and when they fall out of patent discontinue production leaving those dependent upon them up the proverbial creek. A sad write.
February 1st, 2026 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem after my own heart where some medications are necessary for certain individuals money has gotten in the way and blown everything far out of proportion. Bottom line preempts common sense and caution as to side effects and they rely on ignorance in the public and doctors to push profits higher. Where doctors that hold stock or at least their family members do serve on the FDA making decisions as to which drug is approved or not and when they fall out of patent discontinue production leaving those dependent upon them up the proverbial creek. A sad write.
February 1st, 2026 13:39
PC Upgrades
RSM0812 said:
Aint that the truth. Technology is now impossible to outsmart and keep up with. Ai and fast machines will now always beat us to the punch. Nice rig in the pic too. One of my faves.
January 31st, 2026 19:44
RSM0812 said:
Aint that the truth. Technology is now impossible to outsmart and keep up with. Ai and fast machines will now always beat us to the punch. Nice rig in the pic too. One of my faves.
January 31st, 2026 19:44
Praying Before Sleep
RSM0812 said:
A good write about time, life, death and the fulfilment of joy and leisure. Interesting and imaginative. Nice ✍️
January 31st, 2026 07:54
RSM0812 said:
A good write about time, life, death and the fulfilment of joy and leisure. Interesting and imaginative. Nice ✍️
January 31st, 2026 07:54
What Happened to England?
RSM0812 said:
An interesting write with a great moral point. Enjoyed the read immensely.
January 31st, 2026 07:52
RSM0812 said:
An interesting write with a great moral point. Enjoyed the read immensely.
January 31st, 2026 07:52
What Happened to England?
Doggerel Dave said:
My memories of the sixties, seventies and part eighties there was a little different. I\'d be a fool to claim it was perfect, but by all accounts (yours and others) it has gone down the gurgler since.
January 30th, 2026 04:49
Doggerel Dave said:
My memories of the sixties, seventies and part eighties there was a little different. I\'d be a fool to claim it was perfect, but by all accounts (yours and others) it has gone down the gurgler since.
January 30th, 2026 04:49
What Happened to England?
Paul Bell said:
Those politicians that tarnished our country are on the way out. One party is imploding, the other one is led by a human rights lawyer who fails his own people every day, and would be gone if an election was tomorrow.
January 30th, 2026 04:07
Paul Bell said:
Those politicians that tarnished our country are on the way out. One party is imploding, the other one is led by a human rights lawyer who fails his own people every day, and would be gone if an election was tomorrow.
January 30th, 2026 04:07
What Happened to England?
sorenbarrett said:
They say that the acorn does not fall far from the tree and so goes the illusion of liberty, nothing more than a shadow that disappears on a cloudy day and lines written in invisible ink on a crumbling constitution. A good write my friend
January 30th, 2026 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
They say that the acorn does not fall far from the tree and so goes the illusion of liberty, nothing more than a shadow that disappears on a cloudy day and lines written in invisible ink on a crumbling constitution. A good write my friend
January 30th, 2026 03:46
Praying Before Sleep
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is quietly powerful. The move from sheep to prayer sets the tone, and the closing question about time carries a calm but unsettling weight. It feels reflective without forcing answers…just letting the unease speak. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 29th, 2026 10:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is quietly powerful. The move from sheep to prayer sets the tone, and the closing question about time carries a calm but unsettling weight. It feels reflective without forcing answers…just letting the unease speak. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 29th, 2026 10:54
Praying Before Sleep
sorenbarrett said:
The sixth sheik\'s sixth sheep\'s sick I say or at least try to say it works as a prayer the puts me to sleep out of frustration and weariness. Good read
January 29th, 2026 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
The sixth sheik\'s sixth sheep\'s sick I say or at least try to say it works as a prayer the puts me to sleep out of frustration and weariness. Good read
January 29th, 2026 03:38
Praying Before Sleep
orchidee said:
Good write SM. How many sheep would ya have counted?! lol.
January 29th, 2026 03:32
orchidee said:
Good write SM. How many sheep would ya have counted?! lol.
January 29th, 2026 03:32
Pick Your Poison (Control)
NafisaSB said:
agree with your message - thanks for sharing
January 28th, 2026 23:36
NafisaSB said:
agree with your message - thanks for sharing
January 28th, 2026 23:36
One AMD Processor For Another
orchidee said:
Yes, it\'s obscure to me, but not to - we knows him - ET! lol.
January 28th, 2026 13:32
orchidee said:
Yes, it\'s obscure to me, but not to - we knows him - ET! lol.
January 28th, 2026 13:32
One AMD Processor For Another
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is a technical poem with meaning to a few and obscure to others. Yes don\'t forget that paste.
January 28th, 2026 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is a technical poem with meaning to a few and obscure to others. Yes don\'t forget that paste.
January 28th, 2026 11:44
God Unplugged Me From Satan\'s Matrix
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this feels raw and exposed. There’s a sense of disorientation running through every line, like the world never quite settled back into place. That honesty is powerful, friend.. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 27th, 2026 09:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this feels raw and exposed. There’s a sense of disorientation running through every line, like the world never quite settled back into place. That honesty is powerful, friend.. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 27th, 2026 09:02
God Unplugged Me From Satan\'s Matrix
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I jumped out of the window - on the ground floor! lol.
January 27th, 2026 03:17
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I jumped out of the window - on the ground floor! lol.
January 27th, 2026 03:17
God Unplugged Me From Satan\'s Matrix
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds like a new birth and realization for commitment. Nicely worded and penned
January 27th, 2026 02:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds like a new birth and realization for commitment. Nicely worded and penned
January 27th, 2026 02:46
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