Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Making My Own Lemonade
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love me some lemonade…and this poem. Well done, Shawn! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2025 15:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love me some lemonade…and this poem. Well done, Shawn! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2025 15:17
Making My Own Lemonade
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a poem I can enjoy on many different levels. Have drank my own fresh squeezed lemonade every day for the last six months good for keeping kidney stones away if you body has the right ph , use sugar not artificial sweetener, shave my head as well no fade, the rest seems to apply as well. The feel is to do things your way and I am a believer in that. A fave
September 16th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a poem I can enjoy on many different levels. Have drank my own fresh squeezed lemonade every day for the last six months good for keeping kidney stones away if you body has the right ph , use sugar not artificial sweetener, shave my head as well no fade, the rest seems to apply as well. The feel is to do things your way and I am a believer in that. A fave
September 16th, 2025 04:44
Hard And Bitter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, mate! A fun read! 🌹🖤🕯️🙏🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, mate! A fun read! 🌹🖤🕯️🙏🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:39
Hard And Bitter
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one, loved its flow, its rhyme, and a good message as well. Nicely done
September 15th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one, loved its flow, its rhyme, and a good message as well. Nicely done
September 15th, 2025 04:50
Hard And Bitter
orchidee said:
You in that pub - bitter - and drinking hard?! Oops! lol.
September 15th, 2025 02:22
orchidee said:
You in that pub - bitter - and drinking hard?! Oops! lol.
September 15th, 2025 02:22
New Age Rage
Keeter C said:
You can’t cast out the devil in the name of beelzebub.
September 14th, 2025 21:18
Keeter C said:
You can’t cast out the devil in the name of beelzebub.
September 14th, 2025 21:18
Overlooked Because Of My Opinions
Doggerel Dave said:
You have the spirit, but you pay too much attention to \"Rappers, Singers, Actors, Influencers\". You ignore politicians whom you should always skewer, but realize they are only puppets of wealth, in the form of big business and other powerful interests.
September 14th, 2025 05:50
Doggerel Dave said:
You have the spirit, but you pay too much attention to \"Rappers, Singers, Actors, Influencers\". You ignore politicians whom you should always skewer, but realize they are only puppets of wealth, in the form of big business and other powerful interests.
September 14th, 2025 05:50
Overlooked Because Of My Opinions
sorenbarrett said:
To all but the lucky there is a price paid for fame and recognition. A price that many would not accept and do not even want to know. A lovely write
September 14th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
To all but the lucky there is a price paid for fame and recognition. A price that many would not accept and do not even want to know. A lovely write
September 14th, 2025 05:00
Break-Fast
Tristan Robert Lange said:
TRUTH..TRUTH. VERITAS. Ja! Sí! Yes! Did I affirm this enough, yet? 🤣💯
September 13th, 2025 14:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
TRUTH..TRUTH. VERITAS. Ja! Sí! Yes! Did I affirm this enough, yet? 🤣💯
September 13th, 2025 14:55
Break-Fast
orchidee said:
I wish celebrities would use their brains. Not much chance of it though! lol.
September 13th, 2025 10:38
orchidee said:
I wish celebrities would use their brains. Not much chance of it though! lol.
September 13th, 2025 10:38
Break-Fast
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that deserves more thought than initial review. Breakfast is best after one has been up for a couple of hours and hunger has built but modern life style does not allow for this. Used to come in from work after two or three hours and have a heavy breakfast of eggs, steak, potatoes and gravy before returning to work, a heavy lunch as well to carry through the rest of a hard day and then just a sandwich for dinner not leaving too much for digestion during sleep.
September 13th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that deserves more thought than initial review. Breakfast is best after one has been up for a couple of hours and hunger has built but modern life style does not allow for this. Used to come in from work after two or three hours and have a heavy breakfast of eggs, steak, potatoes and gravy before returning to work, a heavy lunch as well to carry through the rest of a hard day and then just a sandwich for dinner not leaving too much for digestion during sleep.
September 13th, 2025 04:28
Comershells
RSM0812 said:
This reminds of subliminal messaging like using the color oarange to make you hungry. Capatalism! I guess its the best we got. Advertising obviously plays a huge part. You captured the topic perfectly. Nice write.
September 12th, 2025 23:02
RSM0812 said:
This reminds of subliminal messaging like using the color oarange to make you hungry. Capatalism! I guess its the best we got. Advertising obviously plays a huge part. You captured the topic perfectly. Nice write.
September 12th, 2025 23:02
Comershells
Tristan Robert Lange said:
They\'ll really sell you anything if you\'re buying. Fun read my friend.
September 12th, 2025 08:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
They\'ll really sell you anything if you\'re buying. Fun read my friend.
September 12th, 2025 08:33
Comershells
orchidee said:
You had a gin or three? Comershell / commercial. And who\'s got time for their antics?! LOL.
September 12th, 2025 05:57
orchidee said:
You had a gin or three? Comershell / commercial. And who\'s got time for their antics?! LOL.
September 12th, 2025 05:57
Comershells
sorenbarrett said:
We have been duped, hornswoggled, deluded for years by marketing psychology. A fun read
September 12th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
We have been duped, hornswoggled, deluded for years by marketing psychology. A fun read
September 12th, 2025 04:28
New Age Rage
orchidee said:
Hocus pocus! One said that The New Age is now The Old Age, cos it\'s been around too long now. Doh! lol.
September 11th, 2025 11:00
orchidee said:
Hocus pocus! One said that The New Age is now The Old Age, cos it\'s been around too long now. Doh! lol.
September 11th, 2025 11:00
New Age Rage
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyming and an occult subject combined with devils and guns makes for a most fun read. Very nicely done
September 11th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyming and an occult subject combined with devils and guns makes for a most fun read. Very nicely done
September 11th, 2025 04:06
Valiant Thor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Calling Shawn from Area 51 (not the State for Lovers 🤣), This poem has that eerie, otherworldly edge. Loved the Chris Hemsworth nod too! The rhythm keeps it sharp and the imagery sticks. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Enjoyed this one, my friend.
September 10th, 2025 09:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Calling Shawn from Area 51 (not the State for Lovers 🤣), This poem has that eerie, otherworldly edge. Loved the Chris Hemsworth nod too! The rhythm keeps it sharp and the imagery sticks. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Enjoyed this one, my friend.
September 10th, 2025 09:24
Valiant Thor
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
I knew you would mention E.T. with this one haha!
September 9th, 2025 12:37
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
I knew you would mention E.T. with this one haha!
September 9th, 2025 12:37
Valiant Thor
orchidee said:
When we see E.T. again we can ask him about Chris. lol.
September 9th, 2025 10:52
orchidee said:
When we see E.T. again we can ask him about Chris. lol.
September 9th, 2025 10:52
Valiant Thor
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that prompts questions and then what seems absurd becomes a question of possibility and then a concern. Nicely done
September 9th, 2025 09:21
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that prompts questions and then what seems absurd becomes a question of possibility and then a concern. Nicely done
September 9th, 2025 09:21
Kill Your Demons
Keeter C said:
Spirits can enable spirits.
No pun intended.
September 8th, 2025 23:17
Keeter C said:
Spirits can enable spirits.
No pun intended.
September 8th, 2025 23:17
Kill Your Demons
sorenbarrett said:
No place more real than amongst heathens, no place more comfortable than amongst demons. A fun read
September 8th, 2025 11:03
sorenbarrett said:
No place more real than amongst heathens, no place more comfortable than amongst demons. A fun read
September 8th, 2025 11:03
If Money Didn\'t Exist
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth...though, whether it is paper...or goods (barter/trade)...humans have kind of always been doing this...and we look to others to lead us. Very few step up to lead...but one day that will all be eternally behind us. Great write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 09:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth...though, whether it is paper...or goods (barter/trade)...humans have kind of always been doing this...and we look to others to lead us. Very few step up to lead...but one day that will all be eternally behind us. Great write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 09:42
If Money Didn\'t Exist
orchidee said:
i saw a slow-worm thingy, not exactly a snake. lol.
September 5th, 2025 07:41
orchidee said:
i saw a slow-worm thingy, not exactly a snake. lol.
September 5th, 2025 07:41
If Money Didn\'t Exist
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately there was a time there was no money and barter was the way, still needed something. If everything was given with no money there would be no ambition, oh... kind of like some people today. Fun read
September 5th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately there was a time there was no money and barter was the way, still needed something. If everything was given with no money there would be no ambition, oh... kind of like some people today. Fun read
September 5th, 2025 04:21
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