Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Too Much Alcohol Equals Demonic Possession
sorenbarrett said:
Nice rhyme and meter to this poem on temperance and well worded as well
April 25th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Nice rhyme and meter to this poem on temperance and well worded as well
April 25th, 2026 04:19
Too Much Alcohol Equals Demonic Possession
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I can\'t say that looks like E.T. in that pic! heehee.
April 25th, 2026 02:43
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I can\'t say that looks like E.T. in that pic! heehee.
April 25th, 2026 02:43
Nuka-Cola (A Fallout Poem)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries that chaotic survival vibe with a wink…bartering, grinding, scraping by, all stitched together with those in-world details that make it click. It feels like a snapshot mid-journey, not polished, just real. This clicks. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 24th, 2026 12:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries that chaotic survival vibe with a wink…bartering, grinding, scraping by, all stitched together with those in-world details that make it click. It feels like a snapshot mid-journey, not polished, just real. This clicks. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 24th, 2026 12:26
Nuka-Cola (A Fallout Poem)
sorenbarrett said:
This is pop poetry at its best bright and boisterous with flash imagery and meter beat. Well done
April 24th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
This is pop poetry at its best bright and boisterous with flash imagery and meter beat. Well done
April 24th, 2026 04:43
Working Up A Sweat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Like \"Sweatin\' to the Oldies\". 🤣 RIP Richard. Shaun, this carries that everyday joy of movement and stepping away from the noise…trading traffic for something real and physical. That little humor at the end ties it together nicely. I’ve had those same moments…where the walk becomes the best part of the day. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Like \"Sweatin\' to the Oldies\". 🤣 RIP Richard. Shaun, this carries that everyday joy of movement and stepping away from the noise…trading traffic for something real and physical. That little humor at the end ties it together nicely. I’ve had those same moments…where the walk becomes the best part of the day. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:53
Working Up A Sweat
sorenbarrett said:
Shaun this poem is energized and activates the reader. Well done
April 23rd, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Shaun this poem is energized and activates the reader. Well done
April 23rd, 2026 04:35
Life On Earth Is Such A Bloody Chore
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, Happy Earth (chore?) Day! 🤣😅 This has that raw, walking-through-it-all feeling…just going about your day while everything underneath is turning over. That Tesco scene stayed with me…simple on the surface, but there’s more going on. I’ve felt that kind of tension too. Strong, honest write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, Happy Earth (chore?) Day! 🤣😅 This has that raw, walking-through-it-all feeling…just going about your day while everything underneath is turning over. That Tesco scene stayed with me…simple on the surface, but there’s more going on. I’ve felt that kind of tension too. Strong, honest write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:18
Life On Earth Is Such A Bloody Chore
sorenbarrett said:
Now how did masonry get into this poem. A most interesting combination of an order and boredom. secrecy revealed. Nice
April 22nd, 2026 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
Now how did masonry get into this poem. A most interesting combination of an order and boredom. secrecy revealed. Nice
April 22nd, 2026 05:46
Life On Earth Is Such A Bloody Chore
orchidee said:
What\'s a chore and a bore to me, is the contestants on some shows, and the bit about their backgrounds, etc. They\'ll get their photo albums out next! lol.
April 22nd, 2026 03:09
orchidee said:
What\'s a chore and a bore to me, is the contestants on some shows, and the bit about their backgrounds, etc. They\'ll get their photo albums out next! lol.
April 22nd, 2026 03:09
Got Instrumentals
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this feels like a declaration…there’s that steady rhythm of pulling away from what drags you down while leaning into something higher and more intentional. It’s grounded but reaching at the same time, and that balance works. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this feels like a declaration…there’s that steady rhythm of pulling away from what drags you down while leaning into something higher and more intentional. It’s grounded but reaching at the same time, and that balance works. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:05
Got Instrumentals
sorenbarrett said:
Here the author breaks out the atmosphere and it is more party than not. Nicely written
April 21st, 2026 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Here the author breaks out the atmosphere and it is more party than not. Nicely written
April 21st, 2026 04:46
On Edge (Never Good Enough)
NafisaSB said:
Agree with you. Some folks / bosses (maybe parents and teachers too) are hard to please
April 21st, 2026 03:55
NafisaSB said:
Agree with you. Some folks / bosses (maybe parents and teachers too) are hard to please
April 21st, 2026 03:55
Nick Cannon Questions Stories In The Bible
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this has a sharp, provocative edge to it…you’re clearly not holding back here. It comes through direct and unfiltered, which gives it a certain punch. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this has a sharp, provocative edge to it…you’re clearly not holding back here. It comes through direct and unfiltered, which gives it a certain punch. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:29
Nick Cannon Questions Stories In The Bible
orchidee said:
Urgh! Not celebrities and their antics. lol.
April 20th, 2026 02:34
orchidee said:
Urgh! Not celebrities and their antics. lol.
April 20th, 2026 02:34
On Edge (Never Good Enough)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I’ve been in that space where effort just keeps getting overlooked. It wears on you over time…makes you question things you shouldn’t have to. This feels honest and real. Strong piece and extremely relatable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 09:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I’ve been in that space where effort just keeps getting overlooked. It wears on you over time…makes you question things you shouldn’t have to. This feels honest and real. Strong piece and extremely relatable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 09:15
On Edge (Never Good Enough)
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem expresses the struggles of workers who, despite their efforts and dedication, feel undervalued and overburdened by the expectations placed upon them.
April 19th, 2026 06:42
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem expresses the struggles of workers who, despite their efforts and dedication, feel undervalued and overburdened by the expectations placed upon them.
April 19th, 2026 06:42
On Edge (Never Good Enough)
Mutley Ravishes said:
How I`ve struggled with \"not good enough!\" Where and when on earth did this assumption take root? I can only think it`s a symptom of separation. Which says something about me, and the so called \"elite.\"
April 19th, 2026 06:09
Mutley Ravishes said:
How I`ve struggled with \"not good enough!\" Where and when on earth did this assumption take root? I can only think it`s a symptom of separation. Which says something about me, and the so called \"elite.\"
April 19th, 2026 06:09
On Edge (Never Good Enough)
Katie B. said:
Heavy and hard hitting, like nothing is ever good enough. Well penned.
April 19th, 2026 05:21
Katie B. said:
Heavy and hard hitting, like nothing is ever good enough. Well penned.
April 19th, 2026 05:21
On Edge (Never Good Enough)
sorenbarrett said:
There are moments that feel like this that one is only as good as the last thing they did. It seems a harsh reality and well expressed here
April 19th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
There are moments that feel like this that one is only as good as the last thing they did. It seems a harsh reality and well expressed here
April 19th, 2026 04:16
Cause And Reaction
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries a real sense of pressure…like the world is talking over itself and you’re trying to cut through it. The John Luther line adds that sharp awareness, like you’re watching it all unfold in real time. It’s tense, searching, and honest. Strong piece , my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 14:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries a real sense of pressure…like the world is talking over itself and you’re trying to cut through it. The John Luther line adds that sharp awareness, like you’re watching it all unfold in real time. It’s tense, searching, and honest. Strong piece , my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 14:06
Cause And Reaction
sorenbarrett said:
Here the meets the morrow, reality meets fantasy and questions form without an answer
April 18th, 2026 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
Here the meets the morrow, reality meets fantasy and questions form without an answer
April 18th, 2026 05:18
Cause And Reaction
orchidee said:
Yep, we seen an Avenger - it\'s probably E.T. lol.
April 18th, 2026 01:57
orchidee said:
Yep, we seen an Avenger - it\'s probably E.T. lol.
April 18th, 2026 01:57
Deepest Fears
arqios said:
Eyes to see and ears to hear and hearts that respond 🙏🏻🕊️
April 17th, 2026 17:58
arqios said:
Eyes to see and ears to hear and hearts that respond 🙏🏻🕊️
April 17th, 2026 17:58
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