Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Boom, Boom, Bap (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how change always becomes the same just a different wrapper (rapper)
May 2nd, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how change always becomes the same just a different wrapper (rapper)
May 2nd, 2026 05:01
God, Save Me From Hellfire
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Save me too, dear Lord…but if you show up looking like that dude in the picture, I might jump back in! 🤣 All kidding aside, Shaun, this hit me hard…there’s a raw, unfiltered honesty running straight through this. It feels like you’re just laying it all out…no polish, no pretending…just truth as you’re walking it. That kind of directness carries weight. I will say this…not everyone is smoking to get high. Where I live, it’s prescribed medically, and I’m one of those patients…it helps me manage PTSD, anxiety, and depression. Of course, that’s not everyone’s reason 😏💨…but there’s some nuance there. All the same, strong piece, my friend. I really enjoy reading your work. Always thought-provoking. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 05:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Save me too, dear Lord…but if you show up looking like that dude in the picture, I might jump back in! 🤣 All kidding aside, Shaun, this hit me hard…there’s a raw, unfiltered honesty running straight through this. It feels like you’re just laying it all out…no polish, no pretending…just truth as you’re walking it. That kind of directness carries weight. I will say this…not everyone is smoking to get high. Where I live, it’s prescribed medically, and I’m one of those patients…it helps me manage PTSD, anxiety, and depression. Of course, that’s not everyone’s reason 😏💨…but there’s some nuance there. All the same, strong piece, my friend. I really enjoy reading your work. Always thought-provoking. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 05:55
God, Save Me From Hellfire
sorenbarrett said:
The rapping thoughts rambling through the poetic mind of one thinking of a common day. Well done
May 1st, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
The rapping thoughts rambling through the poetic mind of one thinking of a common day. Well done
May 1st, 2026 03:54
God, Save Me From Hellfire
orchidee said:
Good write SM. And saved from horror shows - Eastenders, Neighbours, etc. Who can bear them?! lol. That hideous jangle of that naff Neighbours song - another episode about to start. lol.
May 1st, 2026 02:43
orchidee said:
Good write SM. And saved from horror shows - Eastenders, Neighbours, etc. Who can bear them?! lol. That hideous jangle of that naff Neighbours song - another episode about to start. lol.
May 1st, 2026 02:43
Writing Is So Much Fun
orchidee said:
Here\'s a short poem from me - The End.
Erm, that\'s it! lol.
April 30th, 2026 09:28
orchidee said:
Here\'s a short poem from me - The End.
Erm, that\'s it! lol.
April 30th, 2026 09:28
Writing Is So Much Fun
sorenbarrett said:
Well said! To each their own but as for me written expression is my style
April 30th, 2026 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Well said! To each their own but as for me written expression is my style
April 30th, 2026 04:57
The Mystical Flute
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this one grabbed me right away…there’s a playful setup that turns on you fast. That shift from curiosity to consequence hits clean and keeps the tension moving. It’s a fun concept with a dark edge. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 29th, 2026 23:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this one grabbed me right away…there’s a playful setup that turns on you fast. That shift from curiosity to consequence hits clean and keeps the tension moving. It’s a fun concept with a dark edge. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 29th, 2026 23:37
The Mystical Flute
sorenbarrett said:
Here we have a variation on the violin of gold story and the devil. Nicely done Shaun
April 29th, 2026 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Here we have a variation on the violin of gold story and the devil. Nicely done Shaun
April 29th, 2026 04:55
This Arrangement
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a real urgency in this…like you’re trying to wake someone up mid-thought. The question about who benefits from distraction is what really stays with me…it opens the piece beyond itself. I’ve sat in that same tension before, between questioning and being told what’s true. You brought that to the surface here. Strong piece, Shaun. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 28th, 2026 06:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a real urgency in this…like you’re trying to wake someone up mid-thought. The question about who benefits from distraction is what really stays with me…it opens the piece beyond itself. I’ve sat in that same tension before, between questioning and being told what’s true. You brought that to the surface here. Strong piece, Shaun. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 28th, 2026 06:07
This Arrangement
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic questions well asked. Motive is behind all behavior. Nicely written
April 28th, 2026 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic questions well asked. Motive is behind all behavior. Nicely written
April 28th, 2026 04:50
Nuka-Cola (A Fallout Poem)
NafisaSB said:
different from your usual verse - enjoyed it..
April 27th, 2026 07:08
NafisaSB said:
different from your usual verse - enjoyed it..
April 27th, 2026 07:08
Tock-Tick
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, that final clock line really sticks…there’s urgency in it, like everything you’re pointing at is speeding toward something unavoidable. That pressure carries. And yeah…ever notice patriarchal governments love large phallic symbols? 🤔 Strong finish. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 27th, 2026 06:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, that final clock line really sticks…there’s urgency in it, like everything you’re pointing at is speeding toward something unavoidable. That pressure carries. And yeah…ever notice patriarchal governments love large phallic symbols? 🤔 Strong finish. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 27th, 2026 06:10
Tock-Tick
sorenbarrett said:
A modern Nostradamus in a write of symbols well done
April 27th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
A modern Nostradamus in a write of symbols well done
April 27th, 2026 04:59
Expedition 33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, that mention of Lumiere falling into something darker really sticks. It sets the tone right away…like the world itself is shifting under their feet. That detail gives everything weight. Beautifully done...both poem and video. Sounds like the game rocked too.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 26th, 2026 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, that mention of Lumiere falling into something darker really sticks. It sets the tone right away…like the world itself is shifting under their feet. That detail gives everything weight. Beautifully done...both poem and video. Sounds like the game rocked too.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 26th, 2026 09:17
Expedition 33
sorenbarrett said:
A gamer\'s poem with some rhyme that ties it together this pome has good flow
April 26th, 2026 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
A gamer\'s poem with some rhyme that ties it together this pome has good flow
April 26th, 2026 06:28
Too Much Alcohol Equals Demonic Possession
sorenbarrett said:
Nice rhyme and meter to this poem on temperance and well worded as well
April 25th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Nice rhyme and meter to this poem on temperance and well worded as well
April 25th, 2026 04:19
Too Much Alcohol Equals Demonic Possession
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I can\'t say that looks like E.T. in that pic! heehee.
April 25th, 2026 02:43
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I can\'t say that looks like E.T. in that pic! heehee.
April 25th, 2026 02:43
Nuka-Cola (A Fallout Poem)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries that chaotic survival vibe with a wink…bartering, grinding, scraping by, all stitched together with those in-world details that make it click. It feels like a snapshot mid-journey, not polished, just real. This clicks. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 24th, 2026 12:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries that chaotic survival vibe with a wink…bartering, grinding, scraping by, all stitched together with those in-world details that make it click. It feels like a snapshot mid-journey, not polished, just real. This clicks. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 24th, 2026 12:26
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