Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Crossed Off The False Idols
orchidee said:
A fine write S, though I don\'t know all those people in your poem.
Punch and Judy puppets are scary, violent even. Punch bashing Judy. Doh!
Something creepy about clowns too.
January 13th, 2024 03:07
orchidee said:
A fine write S, though I don\'t know all those people in your poem.
Punch and Judy puppets are scary, violent even. Punch bashing Judy. Doh!
Something creepy about clowns too.
January 13th, 2024 03:07
House Of Mercy
orchidee said:
Good write S.
And now my somewhat different poem \'Abandon hope all ye that enter here!\' lol.
January 12th, 2024 03:05
orchidee said:
Good write S.
And now my somewhat different poem \'Abandon hope all ye that enter here!\' lol.
January 12th, 2024 03:05
You Don\'t Have To Worry
2781 said:
\"To appoint unto them that mourn in Zion, to give unto them beauty for ashes, the oil of joy for mourning, the garment of praise for the spirit of heaviness; that they might be called trees of righteousness, the planting of the Lord, that he may be glorified.\"
January 11th, 2024 08:43
2781 said:
\"To appoint unto them that mourn in Zion, to give unto them beauty for ashes, the oil of joy for mourning, the garment of praise for the spirit of heaviness; that they might be called trees of righteousness, the planting of the Lord, that he may be glorified.\"
January 11th, 2024 08:43
You Don\'t Have To Worry
orchidee said:
And now my poem: \'I have to worry\' .Doh! heehee.
January 11th, 2024 05:53
orchidee said:
And now my poem: \'I have to worry\' .Doh! heehee.
January 11th, 2024 05:53
Machine Gun Preacher
orchidee said:
There was this preacher who supposedly said \'I\'m a man of peace, and if you don\'t agree with me, I will punch you on the nose!\' Doh!
January 10th, 2024 08:38
orchidee said:
There was this preacher who supposedly said \'I\'m a man of peace, and if you don\'t agree with me, I will punch you on the nose!\' Doh!
January 10th, 2024 08:38
The Satanic Panic: Michelle Smith
2781 said:
A false witness shall not be unpunished, and he that speaks lies shall not escape.
January 9th, 2024 04:29
2781 said:
A false witness shall not be unpunished, and he that speaks lies shall not escape.
January 9th, 2024 04:29
The Satanic Panic: Michelle Smith
orchidee said:
In lying she could open herself up to it for real - bad influences, etc.
My panic is that I\'m a sandwich short of a picnic, as they say. I lost a ham sandwich! lol.
January 9th, 2024 03:20
orchidee said:
In lying she could open herself up to it for real - bad influences, etc.
My panic is that I\'m a sandwich short of a picnic, as they say. I lost a ham sandwich! lol.
January 9th, 2024 03:20
202:4 Horsemen
orchidee said:
I\'m into symbolic numbers a bit, but can\'t, erm, figure out 202:4 horsemen - pun intended?! Doh!
It\'s 666 to beware of. Arggh!
January 8th, 2024 02:55
orchidee said:
I\'m into symbolic numbers a bit, but can\'t, erm, figure out 202:4 horsemen - pun intended?! Doh!
It\'s 666 to beware of. Arggh!
January 8th, 2024 02:55
PlayStation 2 Classics #1
orchidee said:
Should I start playing these games?
A friend does until after midnight some days, then wonders why he is tired for work. Doh!
January 7th, 2024 03:09
orchidee said:
Should I start playing these games?
A friend does until after midnight some days, then wonders why he is tired for work. Doh!
January 7th, 2024 03:09
Visions / Dreams
orchidee said:
Nothing inside my cranium - only 3 brain cells! lol.
January 5th, 2024 15:47
orchidee said:
Nothing inside my cranium - only 3 brain cells! lol.
January 5th, 2024 15:47
Time To Rethink
Dev Parth said:
🔥 Your poetic words cut through like a sharp blade, challenging the status quo with a unique rhythm. 🤯 The play on Link and Wu-Tang adds a layer of pop culture coolness, while the introspective lines pondering on aging and essence resonate deeply. 🧑🎤 The kitchen sink metaphor and the absence of Lahey evoke a sense of loss and reflection. 🤔 The contrast between circle and square beautifully illustrates your desire to stand out and question societal norms. 🔄 Your journey, like a courageous captain, sails through the cranium\'s vast seas, with vibes as unbreakable as vibranium. 🚀 Keep laying those thoughts bare! 👏
Dev
January 4th, 2024 23:47
Dev Parth said:
🔥 Your poetic words cut through like a sharp blade, challenging the status quo with a unique rhythm. 🤯 The play on Link and Wu-Tang adds a layer of pop culture coolness, while the introspective lines pondering on aging and essence resonate deeply. 🧑🎤 The kitchen sink metaphor and the absence of Lahey evoke a sense of loss and reflection. 🤔 The contrast between circle and square beautifully illustrates your desire to stand out and question societal norms. 🔄 Your journey, like a courageous captain, sails through the cranium\'s vast seas, with vibes as unbreakable as vibranium. 🚀 Keep laying those thoughts bare! 👏
Dev
January 4th, 2024 23:47
Time To Rethink
orchidee said:
Oohh, he knows. He\'ll sort everything out! lol.
January 4th, 2024 10:46
orchidee said:
Oohh, he knows. He\'ll sort everything out! lol.
January 4th, 2024 10:46
Premise Of Justice
orchidee said:
And how long will it be before I stop singing? An \'in-joke\' on here is that I\'m the world\'s worst singer! lol. I reply to them \'Doh! You don\'t have to AGREE with it!\' lol.
January 2nd, 2024 03:16
orchidee said:
And how long will it be before I stop singing? An \'in-joke\' on here is that I\'m the world\'s worst singer! lol. I reply to them \'Doh! You don\'t have to AGREE with it!\' lol.
January 2nd, 2024 03:16
Looking Up To The Ceiling
Cassie58 said:
I certainly agree with you. Writing can be very therapeutic. I can’t imagine a life without reading or writing poetry. Happy new year.
January 1st, 2024 08:36
Cassie58 said:
I certainly agree with you. Writing can be very therapeutic. I can’t imagine a life without reading or writing poetry. Happy new year.
January 1st, 2024 08:36
Looking Up To The Ceiling
Bragee said:
Definitely a fun and safe release to many of life tougher times
January 1st, 2024 04:24
Bragee said:
Definitely a fun and safe release to many of life tougher times
January 1st, 2024 04:24
Looking Up To The Ceiling
orchidee said:
They\'ll obliterate any plagiarisers - people that nick other people\'s work and palm it off as their own. One guy even included a pic of himself with a poem he nicked! The cheek of it.
January 1st, 2024 04:04
orchidee said:
They\'ll obliterate any plagiarisers - people that nick other people\'s work and palm it off as their own. One guy even included a pic of himself with a poem he nicked! The cheek of it.
January 1st, 2024 04:04
Small Choices And Limited Voices
orchidee said:
I went to a former old prison, now partly an Arts Centre. A creepy atmosphere. Prisoners in olden days there, about to be hung, were kept on ground floor, so as not to wake the other prisoners early morning. Ghastly. Just nip out the back door and .......
December 31st, 2023 13:36
orchidee said:
I went to a former old prison, now partly an Arts Centre. A creepy atmosphere. Prisoners in olden days there, about to be hung, were kept on ground floor, so as not to wake the other prisoners early morning. Ghastly. Just nip out the back door and .......
December 31st, 2023 13:36
Not Changing My Beliefs For Anyone
Lil said:
A wonderful poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
December 31st, 2023 13:03
Lil said:
A wonderful poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
December 31st, 2023 13:03
Small Choices And Limited Voices
Cassie58 said:
Prison certainly isn’t a place to glorify. It is a place of segregation, which hurts family and friends no end. However people who commit crime have to expect to be punished. It must be soul destroying to be incarcerated. Interesting poem.
December 31st, 2023 08:50
Cassie58 said:
Prison certainly isn’t a place to glorify. It is a place of segregation, which hurts family and friends no end. However people who commit crime have to expect to be punished. It must be soul destroying to be incarcerated. Interesting poem.
December 31st, 2023 08:50
Not Changing My Beliefs For Anyone
orchidee said:
You changed? Nope?! heehee.
December 29th, 2023 05:59
orchidee said:
You changed? Nope?! heehee.
December 29th, 2023 05:59
Prepared For The Worst (Billionaire Bunkers)
sorenbarrett said:
A frightening thought and something to keep our eyes on.
December 28th, 2023 08:51
sorenbarrett said:
A frightening thought and something to keep our eyes on.
December 28th, 2023 08:51
Disintegrate The Devil
orchidee said:
I got lost on the 432Hz line.
Why not, oh I dunno, 874, 732, or 258 Hz? Random numbers there! lol.
December 28th, 2023 03:05
orchidee said:
I got lost on the 432Hz line.
Why not, oh I dunno, 874, 732, or 258 Hz? Random numbers there! lol.
December 28th, 2023 03:05
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