Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry



Consume Until Doom
Doggerel Dave said:

....So now wake up!
A good shortie there Cool.

September 19th, 2022 06:22

The Little Mermaid Controversy
Goldfinch60 said:

It seems that any excuse to accuse somebody of racism is rife in this world we now live in, I too haven\'t a racist bone in my body I try to treat everybody with equal respect no matter their race, creed, sexuality or religious beliefs. If only all the world was the same life would be wonderful.

Andy

September 19th, 2022 01:25

Outlandish Sci-fi Horror
Doggerel Dave said:

Can\'t get my head around this, mate - maybe she\'s leaped out of the page and eaten half of mine.....🙂

September 17th, 2022 02:53

The Baking Tray from Hell
Doggerel Dave said:

Experiential learning - life\'s lessons learnt the hard way.
Wot did yer end up with, a cheese sandwich?

September 15th, 2022 07:30

The Queen is Dead
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes - even in the Antipodes this is wall to wall radio and TV. Who knew so much could be made of one person\'s death

Try to forget Britain\'s colonial history and all that implies.......

However, do remember British Royalty, its concomitant pomp and ceremony, brings in the tourist trade. Doesn\'t the UK need such revenue....?


September 11th, 2022 07:13

Purple R.I.P
screaming goat. (New and Improved) said:

The twist at the end was great.

September 1st, 2022 12:33

Purple R.I.P
Doggerel Dave said:

The fickleness of fashion - fun write.
Thanks for that.

September 1st, 2022 05:36

Blame Russia or the Ukraine?
Osei Zion said:

Hmm seems like someone is supporting the other. Like a child hopes in his father. I think none is supporting anyone. The world is fake. Like u said Ukraine pays with blood. So sad. Good poem. Regards, Osei.


August 29th, 2022 21:12

Blame Russia or the Ukraine?
Goldfinch60 said:

Unfortunately you words are so true Coolcuk.

Andy

August 29th, 2022 01:29

Blame Russia or the Ukraine?
Doggerel Dave said:

Yeh - go for it.

Could be though that politicians are pushed by even larger forces behind them.

August 28th, 2022 06:41

Blame Russia or the Ukraine?
Paul Bell said:

Sadly, I would say you\'re spot on.
Politicians start wars, the working class finish them.

August 28th, 2022 04:36

Free Speech No Longer Exists (Twitter Banned)
Goldfinch60 said:

They are frightened that free speech my tell the truth Coolcuk.

Andy

August 27th, 2022 01:14

Matrix Reloaded
arqios said:

Hark, hear; harbinger heed. There is all of us to be saved. Thanks for sounding the bugle.

August 25th, 2022 03:34

The Uneven and Unfiltered Concrete Floor
Doggerel Dave said:

I once lived on that street, I think (or one very close by). Not sure the memory is welcome, but is worth putting out there anyway.

August 22nd, 2022 19:21

The Uneven and Unfiltered Concrete Floor
L. B. Mek said:

so true dear Poet
(a morally bankrupt modernity
with no sense of community
equates, to a stare-off - war
for every chore
\'not my problem\' proclaimed loud
till the mice are welcomed back, in droves
then its all riots at dawn...
yet again!)

August 22nd, 2022 04:32

The Book of Eli
L. B. Mek said:

yeah, I feel denzel got the seeds for his character in equalizer from this role
a good movie
have you seen him in macbeth role
just wow!

August 19th, 2022 04:22

Fortress of Solitude 
Rocky Lagou said:

This is \"tasty\" and \"filling like porridge.\"
It\'s a fun and interesting take on mental stability.
I like the line \"Attack with your mind.\"


August 18th, 2022 10:19

Ghost Within The Machine
dusk arising said:

Let down by poor spelling. Is your spelling \'illegable\' supposed to be \'illegible\'.

August 14th, 2022 01:57

I want to punch Travis Scott in the face
L. B. Mek said:

not a fan of modenity\'s cancelling
fad
still, I agree with you
he should have had the awareness, empathy and moral
foundations
of basic, humane - decency
to stop
or at least someone in his management team..
still
not enough for me to hate the guy
although, not a fan either
(a refreshingly, bold
yet still
well considered opinion piece
and an informative read
thanks for sharing, dear poet)

August 12th, 2022 03:58

Inspire Me
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

A beautifully written message!

August 11th, 2022 12:41

Inspire Me
L. B. Mek said:

insightful commentary, as-ever
dear Poet, but
I can\'t help feeling
like I\'m missing your poetry..
(a cheeky sod
aren\'t I..
forgive me, if you can)
lol

August 11th, 2022 03:56

Influences
Paul Bell said:

Never quite understood the dress wearing. In saying that, politicians do tend to wear them, and that\'s just the males.

August 10th, 2022 09:11

No More Manners
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Coolcuk, where have manners and respect gone in our world?

Andy

August 9th, 2022 23:51

6th Sense
L. B. Mek said:

no, dear poet it\'s not being \'soft\'
for only
the truly brave and somewhat, sane
can afford to care
everyone else, is lost
in their own mess, usually
of their own making
to give a damn, about anyone else
that doesn\'t benefit them
in some way..
so yes, we
may feel like fools
dishing out recycled, so-called
wisdom
or merely, words of comfort (supposed)
but, at least
in our own, pitiful way
we\'re trying to insure
these gifted life of ours, doesn\'t end
without us even trying to help..
and in that, there\'s reason enough
to have some hope
that our efforts, may
in some way, find value
and impact or better yet
simply, be meaningful
to a complete and utter, stranger...
till then, its all just scribbling
at 2am
🍻😎

August 8th, 2022 04:30

#CostOfGreedCrisis
Doggerel Dave said:

Certainly it is getting worse... things were easier for more people (never everyone) not so long ago.....

August 6th, 2022 20:41

#CostOfGreedCrisis
Saxon Crow said:

Great message. This is where the French are better than us. They know how to revolt.

August 6th, 2022 02:18

Selfless / Selfish
jazzwa30 said:

so true society today is so centered around their image good read

August 5th, 2022 07:56

Selfless / Selfish
L. B. Mek said:

(hopefully
some peaceful rest
a place, devoid of anxiety
or hope
just stillness, devoid of time
a place
we can blink and swim
in fond memories
feeling proximity of our loved ones
aside us in that interconnected
nothingness..
a place where selfishness
is born of selflessness
and that sense of self
exists only, in the images
where our mementos
await to be replayed
time-n-again
a constant loop of curated, daydreams
in a dreamless state)
maybe, wishfully
personally, I will settle
for anything close to that
dear Poet

August 5th, 2022 03:16

Brainwashed Boys
L. B. Mek said:

if we can\'t accept our differences
in harmless, preferences:
we inevitably, kill each other!
be it with sounds, metaphors or bullets
...
so i just, choose to let things be
till it effects me
this affords me
a little longer
before becoming a soldier
like the rest of the conflict
salivating, herd..
\'woosah\'

August 4th, 2022 03:47

Office Slavery Drones
Doggerel Dave said:

Not just the office, but any job can have a culture which could be authoritarian or cooperative or any point between.
Good write which covers one extreme end of that spectrum. Absolutely right to walk away.

August 1st, 2022 17:57



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