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Avoiding Mines (Multiple Timelines)
Introverted Sage said:
\'Do small decisions determine drastically different timelines?\'
Makes me think of the movie The Butterfly Effect.
Life is nothing if but repeated cycles.
Nice write!
July 15th, 2023 16:46
Introverted Sage said:
\'Do small decisions determine drastically different timelines?\'
Makes me think of the movie The Butterfly Effect.
Life is nothing if but repeated cycles.
Nice write!
July 15th, 2023 16:46
Avoiding Mines (Multiple Timelines)
2781 said:
There\'s nothing new under the sun..
July 15th, 2023 07:40
2781 said:
There\'s nothing new under the sun..
July 15th, 2023 07:40
It\'s All Speculation
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, when its a bbc presenter
its a \'sickness\'
with no criminal consequences
had it been a public enemy
like a Trump or Andrew Tate
what would we have been sold
tell-all, interviews daily
confessions from \'reliable\' sources
and probably stabbed in a jail
within a year
with headlines reading, \'good riddance\'
but now, he\'s one of them
just
\'a good guy who messed up\'
yeah
fck your hypocrisy
all these deviants, being enabled
by their \'virtue signalling\' colleagues
and meanwhile, the industry
grows every night
a 33 Billion industry
children kidnapped from war zones
and refugees centres
in their thousands, but yeah
sure
news is for the issues that matter
a Hollywood writers strike
and an actors strike
and those pirate in poltics
of and of course
that 60 year old who looks
gorgeous in her underwear
and that gut who lost
all that weight
yeah.. a society with our priorities
angled right
...
i reject any association with modernity
fck that bul sht, my soul\'s already tainted
by my own fallibility choices
I have no space left for more
collective guilt
July 14th, 2023 05:17
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, when its a bbc presenter
its a \'sickness\'
with no criminal consequences
had it been a public enemy
like a Trump or Andrew Tate
what would we have been sold
tell-all, interviews daily
confessions from \'reliable\' sources
and probably stabbed in a jail
within a year
with headlines reading, \'good riddance\'
but now, he\'s one of them
just
\'a good guy who messed up\'
yeah
fck your hypocrisy
all these deviants, being enabled
by their \'virtue signalling\' colleagues
and meanwhile, the industry
grows every night
a 33 Billion industry
children kidnapped from war zones
and refugees centres
in their thousands, but yeah
sure
news is for the issues that matter
a Hollywood writers strike
and an actors strike
and those pirate in poltics
of and of course
that 60 year old who looks
gorgeous in her underwear
and that gut who lost
all that weight
yeah.. a society with our priorities
angled right
...
i reject any association with modernity
fck that bul sht, my soul\'s already tainted
by my own fallibility choices
I have no space left for more
collective guilt
July 14th, 2023 05:17
Demon In The Bottle (Part.2)
L. B. Mek said:
worst is, cos they
are drunk
they, get to forget
while victims
have to live it with it
replaying in their heads
again n again
(an important write, dear poet)
July 10th, 2023 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
worst is, cos they
are drunk
they, get to forget
while victims
have to live it with it
replaying in their heads
again n again
(an important write, dear poet)
July 10th, 2023 04:54
Young Lads Locked In A Low Vibration
L. B. Mek said:
generational tonality, devoid
of rational representations;
our rich, cultural heritages
skimmed and flipped, so now
all we get are those repetitive
pop/rap stations
devoid of integrity or relatability
barely a million, millionaires
on a planet of 8 billion
maligned majority
and all we get, are lyrics
telling us how rich
people think, they are
when, they\'re selling their souls
for ten percent of the music they make
lol
yeah, ok
do you, fool
I\'ll wait to see
your \'where are they now\' documentary
in a few months...
peace
July 7th, 2023 05:07
L. B. Mek said:
generational tonality, devoid
of rational representations;
our rich, cultural heritages
skimmed and flipped, so now
all we get are those repetitive
pop/rap stations
devoid of integrity or relatability
barely a million, millionaires
on a planet of 8 billion
maligned majority
and all we get, are lyrics
telling us how rich
people think, they are
when, they\'re selling their souls
for ten percent of the music they make
lol
yeah, ok
do you, fool
I\'ll wait to see
your \'where are they now\' documentary
in a few months...
peace
July 7th, 2023 05:07
Demons Of Destiny
orchidee said:
And yet - they are out to lie and deceive, so it would not surprise me if they had beauty about them.
They would want to attract us, to get us in their grip, not scare us off with ugliness.
July 4th, 2023 01:59
orchidee said:
And yet - they are out to lie and deceive, so it would not surprise me if they had beauty about them.
They would want to attract us, to get us in their grip, not scare us off with ugliness.
July 4th, 2023 01:59
Demons Of Destiny
orchidee said:
Oh no, another bad hair day guy in the pic! heehee.
July 4th, 2023 01:58
orchidee said:
Oh no, another bad hair day guy in the pic! heehee.
July 4th, 2023 01:58
The Backwards Man
L. B. Mek said:
progression as our sainted regression
devouring the new, as we implode
cursed for dismissing, what we knew
armies for space missions
while blowing ourselves up, diving
for history\'s titanic wreckages..
as if the summer heat wasn\'t bad enough
Europe burns, because of a fck\'d up
cop
still, a new election
and all will be ok for a few days
right!
yeah, if my words sound hollow
it\'s because I checked out
of hoping for humanity\'s salvation
a long time ago
now I just lament, like adding branches
to a a guy fawkes bonfire in July
and feeling like it\'s a better fit
than those 4th of july fireworks
July 3rd, 2023 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
progression as our sainted regression
devouring the new, as we implode
cursed for dismissing, what we knew
armies for space missions
while blowing ourselves up, diving
for history\'s titanic wreckages..
as if the summer heat wasn\'t bad enough
Europe burns, because of a fck\'d up
cop
still, a new election
and all will be ok for a few days
right!
yeah, if my words sound hollow
it\'s because I checked out
of hoping for humanity\'s salvation
a long time ago
now I just lament, like adding branches
to a a guy fawkes bonfire in July
and feeling like it\'s a better fit
than those 4th of july fireworks
July 3rd, 2023 04:38
The Backwards Man
Bobby O said:
Reverse is the nice way of describing it. I like this piece my friend.
July 3rd, 2023 02:32
Bobby O said:
Reverse is the nice way of describing it. I like this piece my friend.
July 3rd, 2023 02:32
The Backwards Man
orchidee said:
I saw a guy walking backwards with two bags of shopping - true. erm, was he practising for The Annual Walking Backwards marathon? lol.
July 3rd, 2023 01:50
orchidee said:
I saw a guy walking backwards with two bags of shopping - true. erm, was he practising for The Annual Walking Backwards marathon? lol.
July 3rd, 2023 01:50
The Truth Behind The Logos
2781 said:
Kind of brings the word to life: friendship with the world is enmity with God....
July 2nd, 2023 04:26
2781 said:
Kind of brings the word to life: friendship with the world is enmity with God....
July 2nd, 2023 04:26
The Truth Behind The Logos
orchidee said:
We changed logos at one workplace, to the most boring thing - a few coloured vertical stripes.
July 2nd, 2023 04:05
orchidee said:
We changed logos at one workplace, to the most boring thing - a few coloured vertical stripes.
July 2nd, 2023 04:05
The Truth Behind The Logos
orchidee said:
I suspected something when someone gave me a funny handshake. Doh! I wish \'masons\' would stick to the building sort!
July 2nd, 2023 04:04
orchidee said:
I suspected something when someone gave me a funny handshake. Doh! I wish \'masons\' would stick to the building sort!
July 2nd, 2023 04:04
Belligerent Bullies On The School Bus
Parisab said:
I like the reference to the Lost Boys of the Peter Pan-Alas some never grew up
July 1st, 2023 01:07
Parisab said:
I like the reference to the Lost Boys of the Peter Pan-Alas some never grew up
July 1st, 2023 01:07
Belligerent Bullies On The School Bus
L. B. Mek said:
\'trapped
in the world of the wilfully ignorant
where inconsideration is the most
prevalent
and kindness deemed an irrelevant
curse\'
(still we can but hope, dear poet
what a horrid experience
you had to live through
especially so young, crazy)
June 30th, 2023 06:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'trapped
in the world of the wilfully ignorant
where inconsideration is the most
prevalent
and kindness deemed an irrelevant
curse\'
(still we can but hope, dear poet
what a horrid experience
you had to live through
especially so young, crazy)
June 30th, 2023 06:43
Belligerent Bullies On The School Bus
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t serious, that\'s one heck of a bad hair day in that pic! lol.
June 30th, 2023 04:34
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t serious, that\'s one heck of a bad hair day in that pic! lol.
June 30th, 2023 04:34
Belligerent Bullies On The School Bus
Bobby O said:
Some grow out of it and some have set a pattern gif life. I couldn’t guess at the split with any accuracy. 70pct probably stay Jagoffs I think it’s worthwhile to get us all thinking about this. Nice Cool. Real nice
June 30th, 2023 03:34
Bobby O said:
Some grow out of it and some have set a pattern gif life. I couldn’t guess at the split with any accuracy. 70pct probably stay Jagoffs I think it’s worthwhile to get us all thinking about this. Nice Cool. Real nice
June 30th, 2023 03:34
996 BAPHOMET (AS ABOVE, SO BELOW)
orchidee said:
I don\'t know the fella. Does he look like a flying goat?! lol.
Some guy predicted his own death - then it happened. Doh! A dodgy path to travel.
June 29th, 2023 01:42
orchidee said:
I don\'t know the fella. Does he look like a flying goat?! lol.
Some guy predicted his own death - then it happened. Doh! A dodgy path to travel.
June 29th, 2023 01:42
996 BAPHOMET (AS ABOVE, SO BELOW)
Bobby O said:
I loved this even though I’m a little slow with smart and the triangle reference. People should just call you cool!!
June 29th, 2023 01:33
Bobby O said:
I loved this even though I’m a little slow with smart and the triangle reference. People should just call you cool!!
June 29th, 2023 01:33
The Imploding Submarine And Musk Vs Zuckerberg
2781 said:
Monkeys thrown nuts...love it.
Were they millionaires or billionaires?
I here say: \"who cares.\"
June 27th, 2023 06:25
2781 said:
Monkeys thrown nuts...love it.
Were they millionaires or billionaires?
I here say: \"who cares.\"
June 27th, 2023 06:25
Who Do You Believe In? (Stop Daydreamin\')
lostmoon said:
Materialism is so extreme nowadays, what exactly makes someone who has money qualified for respect? Often those are the people who are the most corrupt (though of course, not all rich people). And being grateful for what you have is a virtue, we shouldn\'t forget.
June 26th, 2023 08:14
lostmoon said:
Materialism is so extreme nowadays, what exactly makes someone who has money qualified for respect? Often those are the people who are the most corrupt (though of course, not all rich people). And being grateful for what you have is a virtue, we shouldn\'t forget.
June 26th, 2023 08:14
Who Do You Believe In? (Stop Daydreamin\')
L. B. Mek said:
just sad,
from myth heroes
to greed\'s envoys
lacking so much awareness
because their world is now
luxury and excess
yet, they too once felt
the misery
of the mass unprivileged, forced
to watch-on
as the fortunate, callously
parade their indifference
to the suffering of the world
this isn\'t a culture, things
it\'s just the inhumanity of those
too self-evolved
to check themselves, and
surrounded by too many, pilfering
yes men
to get checked for their bull sht!
June 26th, 2023 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
just sad,
from myth heroes
to greed\'s envoys
lacking so much awareness
because their world is now
luxury and excess
yet, they too once felt
the misery
of the mass unprivileged, forced
to watch-on
as the fortunate, callously
parade their indifference
to the suffering of the world
this isn\'t a culture, things
it\'s just the inhumanity of those
too self-evolved
to check themselves, and
surrounded by too many, pilfering
yes men
to get checked for their bull sht!
June 26th, 2023 04:35
Who Do You Believe In? (Stop Daydreamin\')
2781 said:
I might even get a Louis one day,
If I am a good boy!
June 26th, 2023 02:00
2781 said:
I might even get a Louis one day,
If I am a good boy!
June 26th, 2023 02:00
Who Do You Believe In? (Stop Daydreamin\')
2781 said:
I take hand me downs.
Dressed by the \"House of Dunn\" for the last 5 years.
June 26th, 2023 01:53
2781 said:
I take hand me downs.
Dressed by the \"House of Dunn\" for the last 5 years.
June 26th, 2023 01:53
Who Do You Believe In? (Stop Daydreamin\')
orchidee said:
I bought a bag rom Poundland. It was very expensive, costing me £1. I could have got it cheaper from the 99p Shop! heehee. Call me Scrooge.
June 26th, 2023 01:33
orchidee said:
I bought a bag rom Poundland. It was very expensive, costing me £1. I could have got it cheaper from the 99p Shop! heehee. Call me Scrooge.
June 26th, 2023 01:33
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