Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Clarity Within The Imagery
2781 said:
That\'s why we seek the words, that where the truth is. The imagery is evil, IMHO.
April 26th, 2023 02:01
2781 said:
That\'s why we seek the words, that where the truth is. The imagery is evil, IMHO.
April 26th, 2023 02:01
From The Fallopian To Heaven
2781 said:
We are here for as long as we are needed:)
April 25th, 2023 06:42
2781 said:
We are here for as long as we are needed:)
April 25th, 2023 06:42
From The Fallopian To Heaven
Introverted Sage said:
I like the flow of this.
Relatable and concise.
So much is thrown at us in this short time we have here.
As soon as we think we have it all figured out, something changes our entire perspective.
Nice work
Happy writing!
April 25th, 2023 02:01
Introverted Sage said:
I like the flow of this.
Relatable and concise.
So much is thrown at us in this short time we have here.
As soon as we think we have it all figured out, something changes our entire perspective.
Nice work
Happy writing!
April 25th, 2023 02:01
Pantomime Phases
Doggerel Dave said:
Reminds me of the very old joke - Instruction in the Case of Disaster: \'When the alarm sounds, bend over, put your head between your legs, and kiss your bum good bye\'.
A dose of cynicism well placed, C.
April 24th, 2023 08:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Reminds me of the very old joke - Instruction in the Case of Disaster: \'When the alarm sounds, bend over, put your head between your legs, and kiss your bum good bye\'.
A dose of cynicism well placed, C.
April 24th, 2023 08:26
Pantomime Phases
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear poet
(what use, a warning
when warheads, armed
with our inevitable endings
are half-way to our doorstep
instead of such silly, antics
dear \'concerned\' government
how about, you address
the little things, that wreck
our everyday
like, say - addressing
those endless, sirens
serenading, our bombarded state
of enforced, homestays
we need no more flames of fear
to, fear
we go to sleep, reading lullabies
to our kids
with a white noise, backdrop
of screams
and those ever-belated, sirens
destined for spending cut\'s
too late, arrivals
how about, that
do something about, that
warn us, when it will be our turn
to witness that next mugging
stabbing or senseless murder
on our doorsteps!!!
use all those cameras
for something, other than
chasing down car tax fraudsters
how about, trying
to save a life
for a change???
eh... dear \'concerned\' government
you fck\'n parasites!\'
April 24th, 2023 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear poet
(what use, a warning
when warheads, armed
with our inevitable endings
are half-way to our doorstep
instead of such silly, antics
dear \'concerned\' government
how about, you address
the little things, that wreck
our everyday
like, say - addressing
those endless, sirens
serenading, our bombarded state
of enforced, homestays
we need no more flames of fear
to, fear
we go to sleep, reading lullabies
to our kids
with a white noise, backdrop
of screams
and those ever-belated, sirens
destined for spending cut\'s
too late, arrivals
how about, that
do something about, that
warn us, when it will be our turn
to witness that next mugging
stabbing or senseless murder
on our doorsteps!!!
use all those cameras
for something, other than
chasing down car tax fraudsters
how about, trying
to save a life
for a change???
eh... dear \'concerned\' government
you fck\'n parasites!\'
April 24th, 2023 04:46
Indiana Jones And The Horrible Sidekicks
Bobby O said:
A review wrapped in prose that moves to a conclusion. Love it.
April 23rd, 2023 04:51
Bobby O said:
A review wrapped in prose that moves to a conclusion. Love it.
April 23rd, 2023 04:51
Fast Forward (Dead Ash)
L. B. Mek said:
dear poet
\'hope\'
is my, chosen
gas mask
to survive, while wading
through reality\'s, decaying
manufactured, society
a \'hope\', curated
by my own intent
not shelf bought
paid for, by my sufferings
gleaned wisdom...
and on, and on
no fast-forwarding, our crawl
we strive, to hinder our defeat
for as long
as we, bravely dare to dream
of a better, next bite or sip
of life...
April 21st, 2023 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
dear poet
\'hope\'
is my, chosen
gas mask
to survive, while wading
through reality\'s, decaying
manufactured, society
a \'hope\', curated
by my own intent
not shelf bought
paid for, by my sufferings
gleaned wisdom...
and on, and on
no fast-forwarding, our crawl
we strive, to hinder our defeat
for as long
as we, bravely dare to dream
of a better, next bite or sip
of life...
April 21st, 2023 06:28
Dentist Appointment
2781 said:
I remember having my first bad tooth pulled, what a relief. I\'ve lost a few more since then. Always seemed to more pressing expenses.
April 20th, 2023 02:55
2781 said:
I remember having my first bad tooth pulled, what a relief. I\'ve lost a few more since then. Always seemed to more pressing expenses.
April 20th, 2023 02:55
Dentist Appointment
Doggerel Dave said:
And regular visits might keep decay away.
April 20th, 2023 02:45
Doggerel Dave said:
And regular visits might keep decay away.
April 20th, 2023 02:45
Triple Ice
Parisab said:
Important topic to tackle dear poet-I’m still optimistic about this genre and it’s evolution-There are still amazing hip hop artists with more outlets now-
April 17th, 2023 22:12
Parisab said:
Important topic to tackle dear poet-I’m still optimistic about this genre and it’s evolution-There are still amazing hip hop artists with more outlets now-
April 17th, 2023 22:12
Triple Ice
L. B. Mek said:
just sad,
from MC Lyte, Lisa \'left eye\', Da Brat, Missy, Eve, Nikki
... to this
and just as depressing on male side
Nas, was right
\'Hip Hop is DEAD!
April 17th, 2023 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
just sad,
from MC Lyte, Lisa \'left eye\', Da Brat, Missy, Eve, Nikki
... to this
and just as depressing on male side
Nas, was right
\'Hip Hop is DEAD!
April 17th, 2023 04:01
Time To Rethink
2781 said:
The longer the fruit is on the vine, the sweeter the meat.
April 16th, 2023 02:13
2781 said:
The longer the fruit is on the vine, the sweeter the meat.
April 16th, 2023 02:13
Musk-traction
mvvenkataraman said:
Elon Musk has destroyed Twitter\'s beauty,
He is not a man, but just a machine only,
All he needs is money and nothing else,
He loves Mars and Jupiter, but not humans?
April 14th, 2023 11:18
mvvenkataraman said:
Elon Musk has destroyed Twitter\'s beauty,
He is not a man, but just a machine only,
All he needs is money and nothing else,
He loves Mars and Jupiter, but not humans?
April 14th, 2023 11:18
The Man With The Golden Gun
orchidee said:
Ohh, they\'re not human. Seeing them go to the loo is beyond them. They don\'t do that, these super-humans. They may not even need to breathe to live! lol.
Also, in shops on TV, the shelves are always full, cos no customers hardly call in! lol.
April 13th, 2023 01:37
orchidee said:
Ohh, they\'re not human. Seeing them go to the loo is beyond them. They don\'t do that, these super-humans. They may not even need to breathe to live! lol.
Also, in shops on TV, the shelves are always full, cos no customers hardly call in! lol.
April 13th, 2023 01:37
Relentless Rebels Revolt
orchidee said:
I was gonna write this poem, but me \'R\' won\'t work!
I will call it \'Elentless Ebels Evolt!.
I talk some rubbish! lol.
April 11th, 2023 05:46
orchidee said:
I was gonna write this poem, but me \'R\' won\'t work!
I will call it \'Elentless Ebels Evolt!.
I talk some rubbish! lol.
April 11th, 2023 05:46
An Influencer
L. B. Mek said:
love this! especially that sarcastic undertone
it rhymes in-beat with that cynic pulse, in me
lol
(i find it funny, when people click
watch and comment
\'why are you ding this\' blah blah blah
an i\'m like
well, they\'re doing this cause you\'re paying them to
with every click ...
so then, i\'m left wondering
why
are you, doing \'this\'
lol
people be crazy sometimes
yet
it\'s not very funny, is it...
watching a live stream of society\'s
collective degradation)
April 10th, 2023 05:56
L. B. Mek said:
love this! especially that sarcastic undertone
it rhymes in-beat with that cynic pulse, in me
lol
(i find it funny, when people click
watch and comment
\'why are you ding this\' blah blah blah
an i\'m like
well, they\'re doing this cause you\'re paying them to
with every click ...
so then, i\'m left wondering
why
are you, doing \'this\'
lol
people be crazy sometimes
yet
it\'s not very funny, is it...
watching a live stream of society\'s
collective degradation)
April 10th, 2023 05:56
An Influencer
orchidee said:
I was just looking at You Tube and............ lol
April 8th, 2023 02:34
orchidee said:
I was just looking at You Tube and............ lol
April 8th, 2023 02:34
The Nicola Sturgeon Scandal Goes On
L. B. Mek said:
dear Poet
look back, remember who she apprenticed under
what did people expect
oh yeah, she\'s female
so she must have had no idea
what that other guy was doing
while she worked with him
day n night
then left him to freefall, when the time was right...?!
(what a disgrace! we are
to ourselves
every time, we herded ,majority
refuse to engage our brains
everything we do or think, a reaction
going from one extreme to another
addicted to sensationalism
as our chosen entertainment in life
distracting us
from that very realisation, that we
put these maggots in power
and then
we have the wilful ignorance to act bewildered
when the same fuki\'n thing happens
again
cyclical like clockwork, how fuki\'n
pathetic!)
April 7th, 2023 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
dear Poet
look back, remember who she apprenticed under
what did people expect
oh yeah, she\'s female
so she must have had no idea
what that other guy was doing
while she worked with him
day n night
then left him to freefall, when the time was right...?!
(what a disgrace! we are
to ourselves
every time, we herded ,majority
refuse to engage our brains
everything we do or think, a reaction
going from one extreme to another
addicted to sensationalism
as our chosen entertainment in life
distracting us
from that very realisation, that we
put these maggots in power
and then
we have the wilful ignorance to act bewildered
when the same fuki\'n thing happens
again
cyclical like clockwork, how fuki\'n
pathetic!)
April 7th, 2023 03:24
Scum, Sean Hogg
orchidee said:
I wrote to a prison penfriend. He turned out be vile. They\'re not all extreme though.
April 6th, 2023 07:42
orchidee said:
I wrote to a prison penfriend. He turned out be vile. They\'re not all extreme though.
April 6th, 2023 07:42
The Mark Of The Beast
orchidee said:
It\'s not the mark of the beast, but I\'ve seen at some pedestrian crossings - one can press the button, OR hold one\'s hand under a sensor, to change the traffic lights, from the red man (stop) to the green man (go). But no chip implant required.
April 3rd, 2023 02:08
orchidee said:
It\'s not the mark of the beast, but I\'ve seen at some pedestrian crossings - one can press the button, OR hold one\'s hand under a sensor, to change the traffic lights, from the red man (stop) to the green man (go). But no chip implant required.
April 3rd, 2023 02:08
Bring Back Jack Bauer
L. B. Mek said:
him and MacGyver
just to remind us, that there was a time
when masculinity
wasn\'t representative of toxic barbarity
or emasculated impotence
on our screens...
(great social commentary, dear poet)
March 31st, 2023 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
him and MacGyver
just to remind us, that there was a time
when masculinity
wasn\'t representative of toxic barbarity
or emasculated impotence
on our screens...
(great social commentary, dear poet)
March 31st, 2023 04:27
Spiritual Soldier
2781 said:
:for flesh and blood has not revealed this to you, but my Father which is in heaven.
March 30th, 2023 06:01
2781 said:
:for flesh and blood has not revealed this to you, but my Father which is in heaven.
March 30th, 2023 06:01
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