Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry



I want to punch Travis Scott in the face
L. B. Mek said:

not a fan of modenity\'s cancelling
fad
still, I agree with you
he should have had the awareness, empathy and moral
foundations
of basic, humane - decency
to stop
or at least someone in his management team..
still
not enough for me to hate the guy
although, not a fan either
(a refreshingly, bold
yet still
well considered opinion piece
and an informative read
thanks for sharing, dear poet)

August 12th, 2022 03:58

Inspire Me
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

A beautifully written message!

August 11th, 2022 12:41

Inspire Me
L. B. Mek said:

insightful commentary, as-ever
dear Poet, but
I can\'t help feeling
like I\'m missing your poetry..
(a cheeky sod
aren\'t I..
forgive me, if you can)
lol

August 11th, 2022 03:56

Influences
Paul Bell said:

Never quite understood the dress wearing. In saying that, politicians do tend to wear them, and that\'s just the males.

August 10th, 2022 09:11

No More Manners
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Coolcuk, where have manners and respect gone in our world?

Andy

August 9th, 2022 23:51

6th Sense
L. B. Mek said:

no, dear poet it\'s not being \'soft\'
for only
the truly brave and somewhat, sane
can afford to care
everyone else, is lost
in their own mess, usually
of their own making
to give a damn, about anyone else
that doesn\'t benefit them
in some way..
so yes, we
may feel like fools
dishing out recycled, so-called
wisdom
or merely, words of comfort (supposed)
but, at least
in our own, pitiful way
we\'re trying to insure
these gifted life of ours, doesn\'t end
without us even trying to help..
and in that, there\'s reason enough
to have some hope
that our efforts, may
in some way, find value
and impact or better yet
simply, be meaningful
to a complete and utter, stranger...
till then, its all just scribbling
at 2am
🍻😎

August 8th, 2022 04:30

#CostOfGreedCrisis
Doggerel Dave said:

Certainly it is getting worse... things were easier for more people (never everyone) not so long ago.....

August 6th, 2022 20:41

#CostOfGreedCrisis
Saxon Crow said:

Great message. This is where the French are better than us. They know how to revolt.

August 6th, 2022 02:18

Selfless / Selfish
jazzwa30 said:

so true society today is so centered around their image good read

August 5th, 2022 07:56

Selfless / Selfish
L. B. Mek said:

(hopefully
some peaceful rest
a place, devoid of anxiety
or hope
just stillness, devoid of time
a place
we can blink and swim
in fond memories
feeling proximity of our loved ones
aside us in that interconnected
nothingness..
a place where selfishness
is born of selflessness
and that sense of self
exists only, in the images
where our mementos
await to be replayed
time-n-again
a constant loop of curated, daydreams
in a dreamless state)
maybe, wishfully
personally, I will settle
for anything close to that
dear Poet

August 5th, 2022 03:16

Brainwashed Boys
L. B. Mek said:

if we can\'t accept our differences
in harmless, preferences:
we inevitably, kill each other!
be it with sounds, metaphors or bullets
...
so i just, choose to let things be
till it effects me
this affords me
a little longer
before becoming a soldier
like the rest of the conflict
salivating, herd..
\'woosah\'

August 4th, 2022 03:47

Office Slavery Drones
Doggerel Dave said:

Not just the office, but any job can have a culture which could be authoritarian or cooperative or any point between.
Good write which covers one extreme end of that spectrum. Absolutely right to walk away.

August 1st, 2022 17:57

Walking in the sunshine thinking of corny rappers who can\'t rhyme
Manny Jordan said:

This is an awesome piece
Keep inking

August 1st, 2022 04:35

Walking in the sunshine thinking of corny rappers who can\'t rhyme
L. B. Mek said:

\'Is air really fresh?
I just smell smoke\'..
indeed, they\'ve
even put a premium
on clean, air
soon, aside our fruits
they\'ll be selling us
back, our fresh oxygen
and
some kid
\'will be reading the ingredients
and expiry dates, asking
how they make that...?\'
(insightful commentary
a great read, thanks for sharing
dear poet)

August 1st, 2022 03:32

Office Slavery Drones
Goldfinch60 said:

Strong words Cc, I can understand where you come from but when I was working I always found that treating office staff with respect always made the people so much more efficient.

Andy

August 1st, 2022 01:06

Live Music and Good Times
L. B. Mek said:

awesome!
so many of my fav\'s you\'ve named
might be late in her career, but
if you get a chance to watch Tracy Chapman live
in a small venue
try her out, it\'s one of the most impactful experiences of my life
(my 2 cents, luckily its free)
lol


July 29th, 2022 04:04

Society Says
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!
\'Fight those in Power
by defining, our own
path in Life..!
If you ain\'t harming
anyone
then just, do You!\'
more power to you, dear poet
for sharing such a healing
message

July 28th, 2022 03:42

Peaceful
arqios said:

Anything to block out negativity! Vibranium would do the job, Cap\'s got his work cut out for him!

July 27th, 2022 07:53

A Mental Mess
AlitaOpal said:

Great write! Be all you can be stay inspired and all the great things above L.B Mek said.. 🎈

July 20th, 2022 09:53

The Battle for my Soul
AlitaOpal said:

Sounds like a bad trip, great write 🎈

July 20th, 2022 09:37

A Mental Mess
L. B. Mek said:

we all think we\'re
the different one
and yeah, we all different
but still, we must realise
we humans be 99.99%, alike
so our waters, inevitably
will bleed and taint, each others
colours..
so yes, dear Poet
be You! be Proud! and sing it loud!
but remember
we all just fallible humans
some more aware
other\'s blissfully, unaware
but all of us, alike
drinking and shitting
till our life\'s, bill
is served..
(a great message
empowering our individuality
is a great, trait)
thanks for sharing

July 19th, 2022 06:00

A Mental Mess
evenwheniLie said:

Nice poem, and self examining to, you should do more of that and not look up; also write some more to, that was excellent.

July 19th, 2022 02:17

Fighting my Dreams
L. B. Mek said:

nah some dreams are far too real
I don\'t mess with dreams or nightmares
just try to forget them as soon as I can..
lol
thanks for sharing
(you\'re so creative, dear poet
endlessly diverse in your topics
a great trait, in a poet!)

July 15th, 2022 03:09

Controversial Conundrums and Autotune Mumblers
L. B. Mek said:

\'music is dead, long live music..\'
(a great read, thank you!)

July 14th, 2022 01:03

Spiritual Distancing
Goldfinch60 said:

That confusion will only be there if untrustworthy people are allowed in you lie, trusted people are so few and far between though.

Andy

July 12th, 2022 00:44

Spiritual Distancing
L. B. Mek said:

yeah, distance
is the only wat to survive
this days, idiocy
is a very contagious
plague
of modernity
lol
\'well, at least
that\'s what they shout back at me
as they flee...\'

July 11th, 2022 03:08

Upset The Natural Order
Doggerel Dave said:

Some of your criticism may be right, but let\'s not base your argument on the plot of a fictional TV series.
Let\'s get more reality based.

July 10th, 2022 06:16

BBC - Bastard Bullshitting Corporation
Paul Bell said:

The BBC is admired all around the world. Sadly, in Britain, it\'s become a bit of a joke.

July 9th, 2022 11:06

BBC - Bastard Bullshitting Corporation
orchidee said:

Good old \'Auntie\' Beeb?!
I never knew it was the b****** b****** Corporation!
Eastenders is enough to depress anyone. Is Wellard still in it - the dog?! Was last time I watched it.

July 9th, 2022 06:13

The Veil of Television
orchidee said:

The news tends to emphasise the bad points.
Yet is it true, as in newspapers - the country is being run by Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc?!

July 7th, 2022 02:06



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