Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Yesterday Was Mental Health Day
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. Powerful and poignant.
October 13th, 2023 01:02
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. Powerful and poignant.
October 13th, 2023 01:02
Floating Our Failures Away
L. B. Mek said:
speak your truth, cherished Poet
no Bay \'ass-shots\' or special affect
overdoses, in this tempered write
just an honest ink, revealing
a poet\'s current flow of mood
October 9th, 2023 03:49
L. B. Mek said:
speak your truth, cherished Poet
no Bay \'ass-shots\' or special affect
overdoses, in this tempered write
just an honest ink, revealing
a poet\'s current flow of mood
October 9th, 2023 03:49
Whatever Comes To Mind
Bobby O said:
Getting that Christmas tree ready makes sense cuz then a new path ti deserved joy opens and prompts thought and meaningful action of conscious. Nice write and great read. Props!!
October 6th, 2023 17:38
Bobby O said:
Getting that Christmas tree ready makes sense cuz then a new path ti deserved joy opens and prompts thought and meaningful action of conscious. Nice write and great read. Props!!
October 6th, 2023 17:38
Devil\'s Cake
orchidee said:
I suspect it will be a sweet cake, to lure us into the temptation. If it was a nasty-tasting cake, we wouldn\'t be tempted by it.
Same as thinking the devil is ugly. He probably isn\'t, as again, we wouldn\'t then be allured to him.
October 5th, 2023 02:39
orchidee said:
I suspect it will be a sweet cake, to lure us into the temptation. If it was a nasty-tasting cake, we wouldn\'t be tempted by it.
Same as thinking the devil is ugly. He probably isn\'t, as again, we wouldn\'t then be allured to him.
October 5th, 2023 02:39
They Don\'t Make Them Like They Used To
orchidee said:
Ahh, wondered why films are good lately, and not wooden - actors have gone on strike! lol.
In a serial it said \'Fire - will anyone survive?\' I said, \'Nope, cos they\'re all made of wood\' (the acting. lol).
October 3rd, 2023 10:22
orchidee said:
Ahh, wondered why films are good lately, and not wooden - actors have gone on strike! lol.
In a serial it said \'Fire - will anyone survive?\' I said, \'Nope, cos they\'re all made of wood\' (the acting. lol).
October 3rd, 2023 10:22
Before I Die
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant, I so relate dear Poet
(at that last hurrah of breath
grant me a glimpse
beyond the veil
oh universe;
even for a millisecond
let me know
what my life\'s suffering
was for...)
October 2nd, 2023 06:10
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant, I so relate dear Poet
(at that last hurrah of breath
grant me a glimpse
beyond the veil
oh universe;
even for a millisecond
let me know
what my life\'s suffering
was for...)
October 2nd, 2023 06:10
Before I Die
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t so serious a theme, I might say \'Oohh, demons? Not today, thank you!\' Doh!
But - hope you come to peace of mind.
October 2nd, 2023 02:05
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t so serious a theme, I might say \'Oohh, demons? Not today, thank you!\' Doh!
But - hope you come to peace of mind.
October 2nd, 2023 02:05
Oktoberfest Year 4
L. B. Mek said:
always wanted to go
but it lands in the middle
of busy times I find
glad you\'re having fun
have an extra glass on me my friend
🍻 Prost!
September 29th, 2023 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
always wanted to go
but it lands in the middle
of busy times I find
glad you\'re having fun
have an extra glass on me my friend
🍻 Prost!
September 29th, 2023 06:12
Oktoberfest Year 4
2781 said:
I like a good Belgium, those monks now how to brew.
September 29th, 2023 02:51
2781 said:
I like a good Belgium, those monks now how to brew.
September 29th, 2023 02:51
Hard Boiled
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about a way to cook an egg. Doh! I guessed wrong again. lol.
September 20th, 2023 02:39
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about a way to cook an egg. Doh! I guessed wrong again. lol.
September 20th, 2023 02:39
Russell Brand, It\'s All Planned
Doggerel Dave said:
Not quite sure what you are saying here...What about the totally unproven hypothesis that his activities have been known for years, and the media only started to focus in response to RB\'s criticisms of them in order to close him down?
September 19th, 2023 04:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Not quite sure what you are saying here...What about the totally unproven hypothesis that his activities have been known for years, and the media only started to focus in response to RB\'s criticisms of them in order to close him down?
September 19th, 2023 04:42
Russell Brand, It\'s All Planned
orchidee said:
Can\'t stand him - and he\'s too ugly!
September 19th, 2023 01:51
orchidee said:
Can\'t stand him - and he\'s too ugly!
September 19th, 2023 01:51
Enter Kevin, Son Of Flynn (Tron Legacy)
L. B. Mek said:
who knows, it might save us
turn technologies of decimation
into addiction entertainment
if our mind\'s will be programmed
anyway
let us enjoy a fast ride
with us at the wheel, of something..
(loved the original
one of the rare \'Hollywood\' Sci-Fi\'s
with a meaningful story line)
thanks for nudging loose
some nice memories, dear poet
September 18th, 2023 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
who knows, it might save us
turn technologies of decimation
into addiction entertainment
if our mind\'s will be programmed
anyway
let us enjoy a fast ride
with us at the wheel, of something..
(loved the original
one of the rare \'Hollywood\' Sci-Fi\'s
with a meaningful story line)
thanks for nudging loose
some nice memories, dear poet
September 18th, 2023 05:53
Enter Kevin, Son Of Flynn (Tron Legacy)
orchidee said:
Ahh, so this is about Errol Flynn\'s son? A very old film star. lol.
September 18th, 2023 01:55
orchidee said:
Ahh, so this is about Errol Flynn\'s son? A very old film star. lol.
September 18th, 2023 01:55
Sure I\'m Not The Only One (Ethereal)
orchidee said:
I\'m no exorcist (!) but often the demons can get in if we \'dabble\' with things such as seances, ouija boards, etc. Even if we\'re really \'into\' the zodiac or fortune-telling.
Though \'what the stars say\', Aquarius, Pisces, etc can be bunkum!
Best to stay with things of the \'light\'.
September 17th, 2023 01:51
orchidee said:
I\'m no exorcist (!) but often the demons can get in if we \'dabble\' with things such as seances, ouija boards, etc. Even if we\'re really \'into\' the zodiac or fortune-telling.
Though \'what the stars say\', Aquarius, Pisces, etc can be bunkum!
Best to stay with things of the \'light\'.
September 17th, 2023 01:51
Jacks And Jokers
jarcher54 said:
Tell us what you really think! I know you don\'t mean to be demeaning, but that p-word is a bit of a jar... you can do better! It\'s not even that good of an insult! (-:
September 16th, 2023 01:37
jarcher54 said:
Tell us what you really think! I know you don\'t mean to be demeaning, but that p-word is a bit of a jar... you can do better! It\'s not even that good of an insult! (-:
September 16th, 2023 01:37
Rambo: Last Blood
L. B. Mek said:
is that the plot?
not seen it yet, seen all the others
(might just be my favourite
action series)
like your wording, synopsis as poetry
nice creativity
September 15th, 2023 07:22
L. B. Mek said:
is that the plot?
not seen it yet, seen all the others
(might just be my favourite
action series)
like your wording, synopsis as poetry
nice creativity
September 15th, 2023 07:22
Rambo: Last Blood
Bobby O said:
And he did it w Richard Crenna otherwise assigned.
September 15th, 2023 06:15
Bobby O said:
And he did it w Richard Crenna otherwise assigned.
September 15th, 2023 06:15
Poetic Justice
Parisab said:
One of my favorite films and movie sound tracks! Your poem did them justice-
September 13th, 2023 14:10
Parisab said:
One of my favorite films and movie sound tracks! Your poem did them justice-
September 13th, 2023 14:10
Rambo: First Blood
Bobby O said:
But if you’re gonna send in 100 men after Rambo , yiu better bring a lot of body bags.
September 9th, 2023 06:34
Bobby O said:
But if you’re gonna send in 100 men after Rambo , yiu better bring a lot of body bags.
September 9th, 2023 06:34
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