Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry



Zeitgeist Z
sorenbarrett said:

A dark message and foreboding prediction rolls forth in this poem. Well written and rhymed it calls on the reader to see what is coming and prepare. Well done

August 5th, 2025 08:05

Jaws\'s Girlfriend In Moonraker Had No Braces?
orchidee said:

What\'s worse - yes?! - is Donald Duck with no underclothes. lol. Or even Porky Pig.

August 4th, 2025 10:41

Jaws\'s Girlfriend In Moonraker Had No Braces?
sorenbarrett said:

Clever use of monorhyme in this short piece that offers insight through absurdity. Nicely done

August 4th, 2025 04:50

The Mark Of The Beast (Part 2)
ElizabethMoroz said:

Very good Shaun. Relevant points as usual and clever rhyme.

August 4th, 2025 04:31

The Mark Of The Beast (Part 2)
sorenbarrett said:

Dark and it began long before 1984, before Brave New World its roots go deep. A great read

August 3rd, 2025 04:35

The Mark Of The Beast (Part 2)
orchidee said:

What is that number? I was a bit wary when someone wanted their phone number to be 666 666. heehee.

August 3rd, 2025 02:11

American Ninja
sorenbarrett said:

A poetic movie review a fun read. Nicely done

August 2nd, 2025 04:54

American Ninja
orchidee said:

Has it got wooden acting in it?! lol.

August 2nd, 2025 02:25

Attack Of The Clones
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 1st, 2025 09:39

Attack Of The Clones
sorenbarrett said:

Rap is poetry often on the fly and this poem seems such as well nicely done

August 1st, 2025 04:56

Attack Of The Clones
2781 said:

Interesting observation, I am not sure if your referring to AI clones? (I don\'t if these characters are dead?) But I do believe something is now speaking truth, through dead preachers!

August 1st, 2025 01:53

Attack Of The Clones
orchidee said:

Good write SM.

August 1st, 2025 01:52

The Truth Behind The Logos (Part.8) - Chicago Bulls
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 31st, 2025 09:36

The Truth Behind The Logos (Part.8) - Chicago Bulls
Cheeky Missy said:

I had NO idea. Thank you very much for enlightening me. Excellently rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a frightening poignancy. Thank you so much for sharing.

July 31st, 2025 04:43

The Truth Behind The Logos (Part.8) - Chicago Bulls
sorenbarrett said:

Clever and fun this poem explores versatility and different perspectives of commonly seen images. Nicely done the inventiveness deserves a fave

July 31st, 2025 04:16

The Truth Behind The Logos (Part.8) - Chicago Bulls
HolesInMyJeans said:

I see the robot. Very cute and nicely written

July 31st, 2025 04:00

Not One
orchidee said:

And now me next poem - you\'ve guessed it - Not Two. lol.

July 30th, 2025 13:41

Not One
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 30th, 2025 08:20

Not One
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that many can identify with in the nots and yes we all identify with chiseling away. Nicely said

July 30th, 2025 04:18

Not One
orchidee said:

I chiseled away but an arm - or leg - fell off the sculpture! lol.

July 30th, 2025 01:54

So Naked Gun Is The Only Hope For Comedy?
Tony36 said:

Love it and that movie

July 29th, 2025 18:32

So Naked Gun Is The Only Hope For Comedy?
orchidee said:

What comedy? Where? We yell at the TV screen when it shows a new supposed comedy show. lol.

July 29th, 2025 10:47

So Naked Gun Is The Only Hope For Comedy?
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Cancel culture sucks. I cannot stand it. I would rather be offended (of which I have the power to turn something off) than to have anyone tell me what should or shouldn\'t be said or watched, especially when those \"anyones\" are often teetering, if not crashing, on their own corrupt morality. Well done on this! We need more Mel Brookses and Monty Pythons in the world! 🤣 Just sayin\'. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

July 29th, 2025 06:11

So Naked Gun Is The Only Hope For Comedy?
sorenbarrett said:

This echoes my sentiments where comidy can no longer exist because no one can take a joke. A thin skinned society where offense bleeds like a hemophiliac. A fun poke at established norms

July 29th, 2025 04:49

Flatline
orchidee said:

\'Anyone alive in \'ere?\' we may yell, if going into some dreary Club, etc. lol.

July 28th, 2025 09:45

Flatline
Tristan Robert Lange said:

The truth about the certainty of death. Not much in life is certain...our eventual expiration is VERY certain. Even with the hope of the resurrection...expiration is still a requirement. Great poem. Could not be more bluntly true! 🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

July 28th, 2025 08:50

Flatline
sorenbarrett said:

This poem has a sense of finality about it and it feels a bit satirical in a sense. Short and to the point. Well said

July 28th, 2025 04:49

A Baghead From Bag End
sorenbarrett said:

A sad depiction of a soul or in metaphor of society itself pretending that things were better doped on fantasies and dreams. Hallucinations that cost the life of the individual and society. Inability to face the real. Well done

July 27th, 2025 05:30

Stretching The Spirit
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Well, my friend, this rocked. And yes, we is in them, ain\'t we? Well done, my friend! May the lamps not go out! 🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

July 26th, 2025 08:10

Stretching The Spirit
sorenbarrett said:

Biblical and cryptic it speaks of intentions amidst destiny. A thought provoking read.

July 26th, 2025 05:33



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