Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
The Aether
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Thanks pal, I posted on another poetry site and someone had a problem with it but I think they were reading it all wrong to be honest.
June 27th, 2025 14:00
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Thanks pal, I posted on another poetry site and someone had a problem with it but I think they were reading it all wrong to be honest.
June 27th, 2025 14:00
The Aether
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That last line: humility. Indeed. It\'s all about God\'s grace and knowing we are not God...desperately wanting to share, but recognizing that sharing is on the opposite side of the street from receiving and we cannot force others to receive. All of this packed into this tight poem. All that one can do is exactly what you are doing: witnessing. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏 Love the poem.
June 27th, 2025 10:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That last line: humility. Indeed. It\'s all about God\'s grace and knowing we are not God...desperately wanting to share, but recognizing that sharing is on the opposite side of the street from receiving and we cannot force others to receive. All of this packed into this tight poem. All that one can do is exactly what you are doing: witnessing. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏 Love the poem.
June 27th, 2025 10:54
The Aether
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of impending doom in this poem with no one listening , believing or caring. A sense of urgency is left. Well written
June 27th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of impending doom in this poem with no one listening , believing or caring. A sense of urgency is left. Well written
June 27th, 2025 04:08
Jumping Through The Hoops
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, if and when the proverbial honeymoon ends, hopefully the relationship thus begun endures. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
June 26th, 2025 11:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, if and when the proverbial honeymoon ends, hopefully the relationship thus begun endures. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
June 26th, 2025 11:27
Jumping Through The Hoops
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Wasting time jumping through the hoops, / Ego has fallen down, no longer a noose!\" This is a fave, my friend. 🌹👏
June 26th, 2025 10:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Wasting time jumping through the hoops, / Ego has fallen down, no longer a noose!\" This is a fave, my friend. 🌹👏
June 26th, 2025 10:19
Jumping Through The Hoops
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem with good meaning as well. Some great lines (Ego has fallen down no longer a noose) It promotes that idea of change and how it does not stop here. Well done
June 26th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem with good meaning as well. Some great lines (Ego has fallen down no longer a noose) It promotes that idea of change and how it does not stop here. Well done
June 26th, 2025 04:55
Help Myself
orchidee said:
Good write SM. You helped yourself to a cream cake? Yummy! lol.
June 26th, 2025 02:10
orchidee said:
Good write SM. You helped yourself to a cream cake? Yummy! lol.
June 26th, 2025 02:10
Help Myself
sorenbarrett said:
Extremes to be conquered with mediation take the middle road is what I get from this poem. A fun but informative read.
June 25th, 2025 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
Extremes to be conquered with mediation take the middle road is what I get from this poem. A fun but informative read.
June 25th, 2025 14:36
Different Scares People
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem of molded cliches nicely said
June 24th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem of molded cliches nicely said
June 24th, 2025 04:39
Feeding The Squirrels
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this...and I confess. I love squirrels (outside) and all rodents (outside 🤣). Squirrels, groundhogs, chipmunks, mice, etc. love them all. Conversely, I also love snakes. See the problem with me EVER owning a snake? So, I don\'t! Anywho, this is a great metaphor on top of reminding me of my love for these bushy tailed creatures. I think I first got my love from my great-Grandfather who was an animal lover and, ironically, used to sit out in in his back yard and feed his squirrel neighbors. I remember one he named, \"Shorty\", because he was missing half of his tail. Shorty and the other squirrels would take whole peanuts from his hand, shell them and eat them there! Not joke. Have loved those crazy, squirrely critters ever since! Now, that was a whole lot about squirrels and not your poem. Let me say this, I love your poem and the metaphor too. Powerful stuff, mate. Great job! 🌹👏 And thank you for sparking the memories!
June 23rd, 2025 09:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this...and I confess. I love squirrels (outside) and all rodents (outside 🤣). Squirrels, groundhogs, chipmunks, mice, etc. love them all. Conversely, I also love snakes. See the problem with me EVER owning a snake? So, I don\'t! Anywho, this is a great metaphor on top of reminding me of my love for these bushy tailed creatures. I think I first got my love from my great-Grandfather who was an animal lover and, ironically, used to sit out in in his back yard and feed his squirrel neighbors. I remember one he named, \"Shorty\", because he was missing half of his tail. Shorty and the other squirrels would take whole peanuts from his hand, shell them and eat them there! Not joke. Have loved those crazy, squirrely critters ever since! Now, that was a whole lot about squirrels and not your poem. Let me say this, I love your poem and the metaphor too. Powerful stuff, mate. Great job! 🌹👏 And thank you for sparking the memories!
June 23rd, 2025 09:40
Feeding The Squirrels
Cheeky Missy said:
How sweet. Mine took possession of my deck, played in every single potted planter until most were dead, and believed whatever foodstuffs I stored in a tote on my deck were his, destroying several which barred his entrance, and scolding me when I walked to and from my garage if I took away the foodstuffs. However, when I pleaded with him to be careful in the huge parking lots, telling him I didn\'t want to see him injured or hurt... the next time I drove away, he stood on his hind legs, front paws clasped together, and waited for my car to pass before crossing. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 23rd, 2025 05:19
Cheeky Missy said:
How sweet. Mine took possession of my deck, played in every single potted planter until most were dead, and believed whatever foodstuffs I stored in a tote on my deck were his, destroying several which barred his entrance, and scolding me when I walked to and from my garage if I took away the foodstuffs. However, when I pleaded with him to be careful in the huge parking lots, telling him I didn\'t want to see him injured or hurt... the next time I drove away, he stood on his hind legs, front paws clasped together, and waited for my car to pass before crossing. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 23rd, 2025 05:19
Feeding The Squirrels
sorenbarrett said:
Squirls can be greedy like humans taking more food than what they need they bury it only to forget where they put it. Some people eat them, my kid used to play with them, even bringing them in the house, I just tolerate them and they just tolerate me. Fun read
June 23rd, 2025 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Squirls can be greedy like humans taking more food than what they need they bury it only to forget where they put it. Some people eat them, my kid used to play with them, even bringing them in the house, I just tolerate them and they just tolerate me. Fun read
June 23rd, 2025 05:13
Chopped Trunks
sorenbarrett said:
Disregard for life and how it may all come back on us one day. A painful and sad write Tony
June 22nd, 2025 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
Disregard for life and how it may all come back on us one day. A painful and sad write Tony
June 22nd, 2025 10:01
Angels (Part.2)
orchidee said:
Good write Gabriel, Michael, Raphael (a bit lesser well-know angel), erm, SM. lol.
June 21st, 2025 11:07
orchidee said:
Good write Gabriel, Michael, Raphael (a bit lesser well-know angel), erm, SM. lol.
June 21st, 2025 11:07
Angels (Part.2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ready or not, the tests have come...and I\'m getting more impressed at the results as I go. 20 years ago...not so much! LOL! All of life is a test, or a series of them really, and it would be impossible to imagine life, as it is, differently. Well done, mate! 👏❤️
June 21st, 2025 06:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ready or not, the tests have come...and I\'m getting more impressed at the results as I go. 20 years ago...not so much! LOL! All of life is a test, or a series of them really, and it would be impossible to imagine life, as it is, differently. Well done, mate! 👏❤️
June 21st, 2025 06:49
Angels (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded this poem speaks to one\'s conscience and courage. Well done
June 21st, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded this poem speaks to one\'s conscience and courage. Well done
June 21st, 2025 04:30
Money Sluts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
All I can say to this is: TRUTH. Well said. 🌹👏
June 20th, 2025 13:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
All I can say to this is: TRUTH. Well said. 🌹👏
June 20th, 2025 13:34
Money Sluts
orchidee said:
\'Strange women\' as some versions of the Bible put it!
June 20th, 2025 12:40
orchidee said:
\'Strange women\' as some versions of the Bible put it!
June 20th, 2025 12:40
Money Sluts
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is a fun aa rhyme scheme with a fun message that is true as well. Too close to home? Too bad. I loved it
June 20th, 2025 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is a fun aa rhyme scheme with a fun message that is true as well. Too close to home? Too bad. I loved it
June 20th, 2025 05:11
Moses Hogan
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wait, so you are telling me that the Bible confirmed that Moses and Aaron were a tag team duo against Pharaoh and his high priest? Was the event called the Red Sea Rumble? LOL! A great write, my friend. Can\'t make it up.
June 19th, 2025 08:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wait, so you are telling me that the Bible confirmed that Moses and Aaron were a tag team duo against Pharaoh and his high priest? Was the event called the Red Sea Rumble? LOL! A great write, my friend. Can\'t make it up.
June 19th, 2025 08:35
Moses Hogan
sorenbarrett said:
A humorous read that made me smile and gave me an uplift this morning. Thanks for the humor.
June 19th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
A humorous read that made me smile and gave me an uplift this morning. Thanks for the humor.
June 19th, 2025 04:57
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