Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry



Rhymes For The Times
orchidee said:

Good write Bart, erm, Shaun. lol.

August 31st, 2024 01:24

Random Rhyming (Part.5)
orchidee said:

Oh no, what if we\'ve only 3 brain cells. We can\'t manage on less. heehee.

August 30th, 2024 01:38

Dear God
Mutley Ravishes said:

Here`s something to contemplate, Shaun:
\"The sword of Manjushri is not to kill any sentient beings, but our own greed, anger and folly. It is directed towards ourselves, for when this is done, the outside world, which is a reflection of what is within us, becomes free from greed, anger and folly.\"
I don`t pretend to understand this mystery!

August 29th, 2024 18:38

Dear God
orchidee said:

A fine write S.

August 29th, 2024 12:23

Dear God
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 29th, 2024 06:45

Dear God
2781 said:

I think the first thousand years is up.

August 29th, 2024 05:12

The Dropped Smartwatch
Cheeky Missy said:

It IS a \"smart\" watch, after all. Funny how that is, isn\'t it?

August 28th, 2024 13:57

The Dropped Smartwatch
sorenbarrett said:

Been there done that so it has a familiar feel to it as well as a fun rhyme

August 28th, 2024 06:46

The Dropped Smartwatch
orchidee said:

I fell on the floor and bumped my head. No change there though for me, as me head is made of wood, and nothing in it! lol.

August 28th, 2024 01:37

Family Businesses Are A Miss
orchidee said:

They couldn\'t find my name on the long list. It was \'Smith\' but I had forgotten my first name! lol.

August 27th, 2024 01:54

Secrets In Sniper Sights
sorenbarrett said:

It\'s not over until the King is dead. I agree the sight is not a good one unless you are the sniper. it leaves me with a feeling of despair. Nicely written

August 26th, 2024 08:58

Secrets In Sniper Sights
orchidee said:

I told ya I didn\'t get the hang of Russian Roulette. I thought ya had to load all the chambers except one. Doh! lol.
Erm, it was a shorter game than usual.

August 26th, 2024 01:40

A Tapestry Of Trauma
Tony36 said:

Powerful message

August 25th, 2024 15:53

A Tapestry Of Trauma
sorenbarrett said:

A painting of human savageries always present but now more visible with media coverage. Nicely done in so few words a powerful message

August 25th, 2024 05:54

A Tapestry Of Trauma
orchidee said:

Dang it! I dropped a stitch on me tapestry reading this! heehee.

August 25th, 2024 03:55

Not Being Overcome
sorenbarrett said:

A positive energizing poem that was fun to read.

August 24th, 2024 09:09

Not Being Overcome
orchidee said:

What thought did you ever have? folk ask me of my 3 brain cells?! lol.

August 24th, 2024 06:36

Lost 4 Wordz
sorenbarrett said:

I hear the fear. Nicely written

August 23rd, 2024 12:01

Lost 4 Wordz
orchidee said:

Why have those people jumped in that pot on a hot day!? Or were they forced into it? lol.
Here\'s a sweary poem - ooh!
Ohh, F, F, F, and F
and furthermore F, F, F, and F! lol.

August 23rd, 2024 11:30

Honesty In A World Full Of Lies
orchidee said:

Now my poem: \'Lies in a World Full of Honesty!\' lol.

August 18th, 2024 07:42

Honesty In A World Full Of Lies
sorenbarrett said:

So true modern technology has a trade off convenience for disease, shorter life, more problems. Nicely written

August 18th, 2024 06:28

Honesty In A World Full Of Lies
MR.apocalypse said:

logved it a lot and the line about the fries made me laugh iduring such a beautifully dark poem

August 18th, 2024 01:43

Nobody\'s Perfect (Part.2)
orchidee said:

Now lookie here - only you and I are perfect! heehee.

August 17th, 2024 10:17

Nobody\'s Perfect (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:

Somewhat cryptic and enigmatic making for a deep read. Nice

August 17th, 2024 09:09

When Evil Knocks (Anti-establishment)
orchidee said:

Good write SB. Ahh, a bad-hair-day person knocking at the door in your pic. lol.

August 16th, 2024 08:58

When Evil Knocks (Anti-establishment)
Mutley Ravishes said:

Shaun, what if we were enclosed in bodies of limitation in order to awaken imagination?

August 16th, 2024 08:51

When Evil Knocks (Anti-establishment)
sorenbarrett said:

I hear the anger and resentment in this poem that cries out against the machine. Nicely done

August 16th, 2024 07:57

No Delivery From Amazon
Bobby O said:

It’s a plot

August 15th, 2024 05:15

No Delivery From Amazon
sorenbarrett said:

That\'s the down side of not buying at the store, never know of when it\'s going to get there or if it will be in one piece. Fun read

August 15th, 2024 05:01

No Delivery From Amazon
Cassie58 said:

Didn’t they give a delivery time? Hope your tablets turn up real soon.

August 15th, 2024 02:34

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