Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
My Mind\'s Been Hijacked!
sorenbarrett said:
A hijacking of the mind usually is a high jacking of the mind with some very powerful stuff. This is a fun read with great wording.
September 26th, 2025 10:43
sorenbarrett said:
A hijacking of the mind usually is a high jacking of the mind with some very powerful stuff. This is a fun read with great wording.
September 26th, 2025 10:43
Fresh Breeze
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A walked out on a sunny day
To feel the gentle, fall breeze,
It was sunny out, kind of gay,
When out of nowhere—a sneeze—
So hard, it blew me off the way,
I fell backwards—my ass to pay;
Sat on a hornets nest—OUCH—jeez!
I loved your poem, Shawn...and being plagued with allergies...yes...they be high where I am! LOL! Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 23rd, 2025 07:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A walked out on a sunny day
To feel the gentle, fall breeze,
It was sunny out, kind of gay,
When out of nowhere—a sneeze—
So hard, it blew me off the way,
I fell backwards—my ass to pay;
Sat on a hornets nest—OUCH—jeez!
I loved your poem, Shawn...and being plagued with allergies...yes...they be high where I am! LOL! Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 23rd, 2025 07:39
Fresh Breeze
sorenbarrett said:
A light airy and bright poem of nature and emotion. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A light airy and bright poem of nature and emotion. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2025 04:17
Fresh Breeze
orchidee said:
Dang chilly breeze sometimes! lol. Some bees and wasps still around. Oohh!
September 23rd, 2025 02:36
orchidee said:
Dang chilly breeze sometimes! lol. Some bees and wasps still around. Oohh!
September 23rd, 2025 02:36
Demon In The Bottle (Part.4)
sorenbarrett said:
A good write on the effects of too much drinking. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
A good write on the effects of too much drinking. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 09:51
Reading Some Of Matthew 5, Keeps Me Alive
orchidee said:
Yes, it may start off nice, those \'Beatitudes\', then we may wish they ended before the \'persecution\' bit.
But meanwhile - Ohh, I not got the hang of it - Give us ya cash, cos it says \'Blessed are the poor (in spirit)\'. But then I won\'t be blessed as I\'ll be rich!\' Doh!
September 22nd, 2025 03:09
orchidee said:
Yes, it may start off nice, those \'Beatitudes\', then we may wish they ended before the \'persecution\' bit.
But meanwhile - Ohh, I not got the hang of it - Give us ya cash, cos it says \'Blessed are the poor (in spirit)\'. But then I won\'t be blessed as I\'ll be rich!\' Doh!
September 22nd, 2025 03:09
Reading Some Of Matthew 5, Keeps Me Alive
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You and me both. In fact, all of Matthew 5-7. That Sermon on the Mount is jam packed with life and the umph to stay alive! Love this poem, my friend! Amen! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 21st, 2025 18:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You and me both. In fact, all of Matthew 5-7. That Sermon on the Mount is jam packed with life and the umph to stay alive! Love this poem, my friend! Amen! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 21st, 2025 18:55
Reading Some Of Matthew 5, Keeps Me Alive
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of belief and faith and a declaration for others. Nicely done
September 21st, 2025 14:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of belief and faith and a declaration for others. Nicely done
September 21st, 2025 14:37
The Devil\'s Daughter
Paul Bell said:
Everyone wants a devil in their life at some point.
Though when the woman finds out, Only god can help you.
September 21st, 2025 12:35
Paul Bell said:
Everyone wants a devil in their life at some point.
Though when the woman finds out, Only god can help you.
September 21st, 2025 12:35
The Devil\'s Daughter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oooh...devilish is she? LOL! Fun poem, mate!
September 20th, 2025 19:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oooh...devilish is she? LOL! Fun poem, mate!
September 20th, 2025 19:18
The Devil\'s Daughter
RSM0812 said:
I feel like this entire poem has another metaphorical reality. I cant put my finger on it though. Decisions in life? Never trust loose women? Am i getting close?
September 20th, 2025 08:09
RSM0812 said:
I feel like this entire poem has another metaphorical reality. I cant put my finger on it though. Decisions in life? Never trust loose women? Am i getting close?
September 20th, 2025 08:09
The Devil\'s Daughter
sorenbarrett said:
Jobs are hard to find have to take what you can get. Poetry won\'t pay the bills. A fun read that tickles the fancy. Well done
September 20th, 2025 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Jobs are hard to find have to take what you can get. Poetry won\'t pay the bills. A fun read that tickles the fancy. Well done
September 20th, 2025 06:03
Seeking Truth In A Worldwide Web Full Of Lies
orchidee said:
Not now Crowley, not today, thank you! lol.
September 18th, 2025 11:35
orchidee said:
Not now Crowley, not today, thank you! lol.
September 18th, 2025 11:35
Seeking Truth In A Worldwide Web Full Of Lies
sorenbarrett said:
Good old Alister and his sex majic spelled as he asked to differentiate it from magic that is not real the kind the news teams spiel. A poem of disbelief in wht is out there now. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
Good old Alister and his sex majic spelled as he asked to differentiate it from magic that is not real the kind the news teams spiel. A poem of disbelief in wht is out there now. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 10:56
Making My Own Lemonade
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love me some lemonade…and this poem. Well done, Shawn! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2025 15:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love me some lemonade…and this poem. Well done, Shawn! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2025 15:17
Making My Own Lemonade
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a poem I can enjoy on many different levels. Have drank my own fresh squeezed lemonade every day for the last six months good for keeping kidney stones away if you body has the right ph , use sugar not artificial sweetener, shave my head as well no fade, the rest seems to apply as well. The feel is to do things your way and I am a believer in that. A fave
September 16th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a poem I can enjoy on many different levels. Have drank my own fresh squeezed lemonade every day for the last six months good for keeping kidney stones away if you body has the right ph , use sugar not artificial sweetener, shave my head as well no fade, the rest seems to apply as well. The feel is to do things your way and I am a believer in that. A fave
September 16th, 2025 04:44
Hard And Bitter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, mate! A fun read! 🌹🖤🕯️🙏🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, mate! A fun read! 🌹🖤🕯️🙏🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:39
Hard And Bitter
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one, loved its flow, its rhyme, and a good message as well. Nicely done
September 15th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one, loved its flow, its rhyme, and a good message as well. Nicely done
September 15th, 2025 04:50
Hard And Bitter
orchidee said:
You in that pub - bitter - and drinking hard?! Oops! lol.
September 15th, 2025 02:22
orchidee said:
You in that pub - bitter - and drinking hard?! Oops! lol.
September 15th, 2025 02:22
New Age Rage
Keeter C said:
You can’t cast out the devil in the name of beelzebub.
September 14th, 2025 21:18
Keeter C said:
You can’t cast out the devil in the name of beelzebub.
September 14th, 2025 21:18
Overlooked Because Of My Opinions
Doggerel Dave said:
You have the spirit, but you pay too much attention to \"Rappers, Singers, Actors, Influencers\". You ignore politicians whom you should always skewer, but realize they are only puppets of wealth, in the form of big business and other powerful interests.
September 14th, 2025 05:50
Doggerel Dave said:
You have the spirit, but you pay too much attention to \"Rappers, Singers, Actors, Influencers\". You ignore politicians whom you should always skewer, but realize they are only puppets of wealth, in the form of big business and other powerful interests.
September 14th, 2025 05:50
Overlooked Because Of My Opinions
sorenbarrett said:
To all but the lucky there is a price paid for fame and recognition. A price that many would not accept and do not even want to know. A lovely write
September 14th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
To all but the lucky there is a price paid for fame and recognition. A price that many would not accept and do not even want to know. A lovely write
September 14th, 2025 05:00
Break-Fast
Tristan Robert Lange said:
TRUTH..TRUTH. VERITAS. Ja! Sí! Yes! Did I affirm this enough, yet? 🤣💯
September 13th, 2025 14:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
TRUTH..TRUTH. VERITAS. Ja! Sí! Yes! Did I affirm this enough, yet? 🤣💯
September 13th, 2025 14:55
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