Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Children
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant on a very serious subject, they go missing for several reasons, sacrificed, traded,pedophilia, sex trade, slavery and even just sold to people without children, this happens in nearly every country in the world , some of this happens with the parents knowledge and blessing. It\'s a very difficult thing to stop, but it doesn\'t mean we can\'t do more, nicely expressed and written write
August 16th, 2025 10:59
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant on a very serious subject, they go missing for several reasons, sacrificed, traded,pedophilia, sex trade, slavery and even just sold to people without children, this happens in nearly every country in the world , some of this happens with the parents knowledge and blessing. It\'s a very difficult thing to stop, but it doesn\'t mean we can\'t do more, nicely expressed and written write
August 16th, 2025 10:59
Children
sorenbarrett said:
A strong and powerful message that needs to be heard. Children, the vulnerable taken advantage of and cast aside, sold, marketed for the sake of greed and corruption. Well written
August 16th, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
A strong and powerful message that needs to be heard. Children, the vulnerable taken advantage of and cast aside, sold, marketed for the sake of greed and corruption. Well written
August 16th, 2025 08:42
The Keys Of Christ?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful flow to this, my friend. Jesus sure was not soft. You didn\'t get crucified being soft in the Roman world. Reserved for traitors and the \"worst\" of criminals...meaning Jesus ticked some people in high places off with some not so soft words and actions. Spot on, mate!
August 15th, 2025 09:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful flow to this, my friend. Jesus sure was not soft. You didn\'t get crucified being soft in the Roman world. Reserved for traitors and the \"worst\" of criminals...meaning Jesus ticked some people in high places off with some not so soft words and actions. Spot on, mate!
August 15th, 2025 09:58
The Keys Of Christ?
sorenbarrett said:
A different view of an iconic figure where the metaphor of food is used as well as that of a last supper, Very nice
August 15th, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
A different view of an iconic figure where the metaphor of food is used as well as that of a last supper, Very nice
August 15th, 2025 05:18
The Keys Of Christ?
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Which one is Judas Iscariot the traitor? I counted 11 disciples. Has a bit been cut off the pic on the right - a hand with a white sleeve showing.
August 15th, 2025 02:47
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Which one is Judas Iscariot the traitor? I counted 11 disciples. Has a bit been cut off the pic on the right - a hand with a white sleeve showing.
August 15th, 2025 02:47
The Surveillance State
orchidee said:
If \'celebrities\' take over, there\'s no hope for any of us! lol.
August 14th, 2025 10:46
orchidee said:
If \'celebrities\' take over, there\'s no hope for any of us! lol.
August 14th, 2025 10:46
The Surveillance State
Poetic Licence said:
And not just in our country, double edged sword really, have no idea of who anyone is or what there doing and inevitably pay the price for that, or moniter your population and have some control but restricting people\'s freedom, interesting write, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 05:50
Poetic Licence said:
And not just in our country, double edged sword really, have no idea of who anyone is or what there doing and inevitably pay the price for that, or moniter your population and have some control but restricting people\'s freedom, interesting write, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 05:50
The Surveillance State
sorenbarrett said:
Some may say conspiracy theory, others say exaggeration, but I can feel the tightening the loosing of freedoms and this seems inevitable as we crowd more and more irresponsible people into this world. There is a general move toward controlled, predictable unanimous behavior. Frightening and nicely written
August 14th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Some may say conspiracy theory, others say exaggeration, but I can feel the tightening the loosing of freedoms and this seems inevitable as we crowd more and more irresponsible people into this world. There is a general move toward controlled, predictable unanimous behavior. Frightening and nicely written
August 14th, 2025 04:34
No, Mr. Science Guy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shawn, I’ve never believed science and faith cancel each other out…some of history’s greatest minds held both close. Trouble comes when one tries to trump the other (ugh…can’t stand that word anymore 🙄). God gave us brains that seek knowledge (scientia), and theology’s a science too. Modernity’s loss was narrowing that field to just the natural sciences. Anywho…loved that you took on and contributed to this age-old debate, my friend. Hope all’s well! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2025 11:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shawn, I’ve never believed science and faith cancel each other out…some of history’s greatest minds held both close. Trouble comes when one tries to trump the other (ugh…can’t stand that word anymore 🙄). God gave us brains that seek knowledge (scientia), and theology’s a science too. Modernity’s loss was narrowing that field to just the natural sciences. Anywho…loved that you took on and contributed to this age-old debate, my friend. Hope all’s well! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2025 11:23
No, Mr. Science Guy
Poetic Licence said:
The Everlasting debate that always leaves the sides divided, I like the humour, enjoyed the read
August 13th, 2025 05:55
Poetic Licence said:
The Everlasting debate that always leaves the sides divided, I like the humour, enjoyed the read
August 13th, 2025 05:55
No, Mr. Science Guy
sorenbarrett said:
The old science religion debate in a poem that leaves the two sides pretty much divided. Set with a bit of humor it was a fun read
August 13th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
The old science religion debate in a poem that leaves the two sides pretty much divided. Set with a bit of humor it was a fun read
August 13th, 2025 04:24
In 2020
Poetic Licence said:
A strong and poignant about the hypocrisy, dishonesty and name blaming world we live. If someone had just had the balls to tell the world as soon as they knew and were it was coming from, how many people would still be alive, nicely expressed and written
August 12th, 2025 09:52
Poetic Licence said:
A strong and poignant about the hypocrisy, dishonesty and name blaming world we live. If someone had just had the balls to tell the world as soon as they knew and were it was coming from, how many people would still be alive, nicely expressed and written
August 12th, 2025 09:52
In 2020
sorenbarrett said:
Propaganda known to be a powerful weapon even anciently mentioned by Sun Tzu in the art of war molded through the ages through Joseph Gorbals and the Nazis to present day media manipulated by each nations leaders. No one knows what to believe anymore. A pertinent and poignant write
August 12th, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
Propaganda known to be a powerful weapon even anciently mentioned by Sun Tzu in the art of war molded through the ages through Joseph Gorbals and the Nazis to present day media manipulated by each nations leaders. No one knows what to believe anymore. A pertinent and poignant write
August 12th, 2025 09:41
They Have To Say Jesus And Goddamn It
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of offence at words uttered by modern day particularly the entertainment group. It is difficult for one with fixed values to accommodate the change of others that don\'t hold the same values. Well said in this poem
August 11th, 2025 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of offence at words uttered by modern day particularly the entertainment group. It is difficult for one with fixed values to accommodate the change of others that don\'t hold the same values. Well said in this poem
August 11th, 2025 11:00
I Bought Some New Beats Off Bandcamp
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read but you can come out of the closet no respectable rapper needs to do poetry undercover, they do it on stage. Well done in nice rhyme
August 10th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read but you can come out of the closet no respectable rapper needs to do poetry undercover, they do it on stage. Well done in nice rhyme
August 10th, 2025 04:18
This World
sorenbarrett said:
Of all the things that this world is you have mentioned a few. Nicely said
August 9th, 2025 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
Of all the things that this world is you have mentioned a few. Nicely said
August 9th, 2025 11:57
Should Be Illegal
sorenbarrett said:
Everything artificial, taste enhancing, colored brightly, anything that catches the eye and excites the tongue a marketing magic in a world of profit and greed. Well done
August 8th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Everything artificial, taste enhancing, colored brightly, anything that catches the eye and excites the tongue a marketing magic in a world of profit and greed. Well done
August 8th, 2025 04:58
A Broken Brain / Insane / God\'s Game
Keeter C said:
Unseen influences are real.
August 7th, 2025 08:20
Keeter C said:
Unseen influences are real.
August 7th, 2025 08:20
Bounce Fast
sorenbarrett said:
Ah that early morning run to get the blood flowing and the day going. A fun read well penned
August 7th, 2025 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
Ah that early morning run to get the blood flowing and the day going. A fun read well penned
August 7th, 2025 07:25
Don\'t Let Them Drain Your Energy
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Thank you, yes we are in some strange times.
August 6th, 2025 05:45
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Thank you, yes we are in some strange times.
August 6th, 2025 05:45
Don\'t Let Them Drain Your Energy
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and a common theme from conspiracy theory to AI and governmental control. How much is true is quite debatable and more an individual perspective than anything objective. Nicely written
August 6th, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and a common theme from conspiracy theory to AI and governmental control. How much is true is quite debatable and more an individual perspective than anything objective. Nicely written
August 6th, 2025 04:53
Don\'t Let Them Drain Your Energy
orchidee said:
Good write Bruce, erm Mr Wayne, erm, SM. lol.
August 6th, 2025 02:47
orchidee said:
Good write Bruce, erm Mr Wayne, erm, SM. lol.
August 6th, 2025 02:47
Zeitgeist Z
2781 said:
I don\'t know if this is a movie? It sounds realistic though!
August 5th, 2025 08:41
2781 said:
I don\'t know if this is a movie? It sounds realistic though!
August 5th, 2025 08:41
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