Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Bad Torment (Employment)
Poetic Licence said:
A means to an end to line the pockets of others, enjoyed the read
January 8th, 2025 10:03
Poetic Licence said:
A means to an end to line the pockets of others, enjoyed the read
January 8th, 2025 10:03
Bad Torment (Employment)
orchidee said:
A manager doing a bit of work? What unbelievable thing will we see next?! lol.
January 8th, 2025 03:16
orchidee said:
A manager doing a bit of work? What unbelievable thing will we see next?! lol.
January 8th, 2025 03:16
Their Poison
Poetic Licence said:
The poison silently seeps in to everything , until by the time we have noticed it is to late, enjoyed the read
January 7th, 2025 04:18
Poetic Licence said:
The poison silently seeps in to everything , until by the time we have noticed it is to late, enjoyed the read
January 7th, 2025 04:18
Their Poison
orchidee said:
Is that gin in that bottle? And am I on the gin?! lol.
January 7th, 2025 03:36
orchidee said:
Is that gin in that bottle? And am I on the gin?! lol.
January 7th, 2025 03:36
GOD, WHY?
Poetic Licence said:
Another clever posing of a question that will be something a lot of believers ponder, enjoyed the read
January 6th, 2025 04:48
Poetic Licence said:
Another clever posing of a question that will be something a lot of believers ponder, enjoyed the read
January 6th, 2025 04:48
GOD, WHY?
orchidee said:
I thought you were that guy I met once, who always replied \'Why?\' to whatever we said, even if we didn\'t ask him a question. The men in white coats have taken him away now. lol.
To take up one line of the poem, though it\'s all linked, I believe God knows what\'s deep in our hearts, as He knows everything - and we may add \'anyway\'. To use a mainly charismatic phrase, if \'born again\' of the Spirit, or \'born from above\' of the Spirit, the Spirit is not only with us, but within us, as our spirit is literally \'born again\'. Not to get tangled up with spiritual jargon though.
We shall make it, we shall get there, through Him, calling the Spirit Him, as a person, though the Spirit blows where He will. We - and I included - may not always be going along in His flow.
Sermon over! :)
January 6th, 2025 03:17
orchidee said:
I thought you were that guy I met once, who always replied \'Why?\' to whatever we said, even if we didn\'t ask him a question. The men in white coats have taken him away now. lol.
To take up one line of the poem, though it\'s all linked, I believe God knows what\'s deep in our hearts, as He knows everything - and we may add \'anyway\'. To use a mainly charismatic phrase, if \'born again\' of the Spirit, or \'born from above\' of the Spirit, the Spirit is not only with us, but within us, as our spirit is literally \'born again\'. Not to get tangled up with spiritual jargon though.
We shall make it, we shall get there, through Him, calling the Spirit Him, as a person, though the Spirit blows where He will. We - and I included - may not always be going along in His flow.
Sermon over! :)
January 6th, 2025 03:17
A Dirty Sea Of Misery
Poetic Licence said:
A fair statement of the sad times we live in, controlled by people who have no interest in us at all, very well written
January 5th, 2025 04:35
Poetic Licence said:
A fair statement of the sad times we live in, controlled by people who have no interest in us at all, very well written
January 5th, 2025 04:35
A Dirty Sea Of Misery
Cassie58 said:
You remind me here of the failure of politicians. There is so much corruption, greed and cover ups. Makes me want to weep. We seem to be swimming in filth. You say it as it is. Well penned.
January 5th, 2025 04:29
Cassie58 said:
You remind me here of the failure of politicians. There is so much corruption, greed and cover ups. Makes me want to weep. We seem to be swimming in filth. You say it as it is. Well penned.
January 5th, 2025 04:29
Rereading Some Parts Of The Bible
arqios said:
An apt descriptive poem of our reality’s daily quagmire.
January 2nd, 2025 06:58
arqios said:
An apt descriptive poem of our reality’s daily quagmire.
January 2nd, 2025 06:58
Rereading Some Parts Of The Bible
orchidee said:
I say - It\'s neither the bad old days, nor the good old days, but the same old (past) and new (present) days. A bit of the Bible says, in paraphrase, \'Don\'t say \'The good old days\', implying they were no better than other days.
January 2nd, 2025 03:48
orchidee said:
I say - It\'s neither the bad old days, nor the good old days, but the same old (past) and new (present) days. A bit of the Bible says, in paraphrase, \'Don\'t say \'The good old days\', implying they were no better than other days.
January 2nd, 2025 03:48
I\'ll Never Be Under The Thumb
Poetic Licence said:
A entertaining verse with a very poignant question, enjoyed the read
January 1st, 2025 04:51
Poetic Licence said:
A entertaining verse with a very poignant question, enjoyed the read
January 1st, 2025 04:51
Antichrist Spirit
Poetic Licence said:
An up to date conclusion of toady, enjoyed the read
December 31st, 2024 06:24
Poetic Licence said:
An up to date conclusion of toady, enjoyed the read
December 31st, 2024 06:24
Antichrist Spirit
arqios said:
We are nice for niceness sake and otherwise for reasons that are justifiable by what surrounds us, great observation and contemporary on the current state of affairs.
December 31st, 2024 03:23
arqios said:
We are nice for niceness sake and otherwise for reasons that are justifiable by what surrounds us, great observation and contemporary on the current state of affairs.
December 31st, 2024 03:23
Awesome Awakening
Poetic Licence said:
I am not a religious person, but i thought this was reference to God ( from the eternal world) choosing Jesus to do his work in our world, and the hatred reference is how they hounded and crucified him.. I am more than likely wrong but that is my thought, interesting read
December 30th, 2024 04:34
Poetic Licence said:
I am not a religious person, but i thought this was reference to God ( from the eternal world) choosing Jesus to do his work in our world, and the hatred reference is how they hounded and crucified him.. I am more than likely wrong but that is my thought, interesting read
December 30th, 2024 04:34
Awesome Awakening
orchidee said:
I think it means worldly ways, worldly ideas, which are not God\'s thoughts nor His ways. Of course, we have to live in the world - unless we\'re living on Mars, Jupiter, or wherever!
December 30th, 2024 03:44
orchidee said:
I think it means worldly ways, worldly ideas, which are not God\'s thoughts nor His ways. Of course, we have to live in the world - unless we\'re living on Mars, Jupiter, or wherever!
December 30th, 2024 03:44
What Is The Christmas Spirit?
Cheeky Missy said:
It\'s...thou shalt not hear my lips intone the answer. The holiday unredeemably pagan, by definition it cannot be good. I\'ve been realizing too much of its inherent devilry this season, dunno why.
Excellently rendered with a haunting poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 28th, 2024 17:37
Cheeky Missy said:
It\'s...thou shalt not hear my lips intone the answer. The holiday unredeemably pagan, by definition it cannot be good. I\'ve been realizing too much of its inherent devilry this season, dunno why.
Excellently rendered with a haunting poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 28th, 2024 17:37
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